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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月24日 at 0:05:29

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Mitsuba no Musubime (TV Size)
Source: Nagi no Asukara
Tags: 凪のあすから ED ending Mukaido Manaka Hiradaira Chisaki Sakishima Hikari Isaki Kaname Kihara Tsumugu Shiodome Miuna Hisanuma Sayu
BPM: 123
Filesize: 15077kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.44 stars, 157 notes)
  2. Insane (4.83 stars, 213 notes)
  3. Normal (2.86 stars, 103 notes)
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anime「凪のあすから」ED2「三つ葉の結びめ」
you may also like other songs of this anime: OP, ED, OP2, Insert Song

请点击一下
最后一首。bg我考虑了很久,最后还是决定放一个看上去不那么悲(gou)壮(xue)的。。估计这首rank的时候这番应该也快完结,希望能有个好点的结局。。

其实刚开始看这番的时候,开头几话,我十分有即视感,感觉在看花名。当然后来我看到这番几乎每一话都在神展开,就知道这番跟花名还是很多不同的,至少花名还是很治愈的,而且ed也挺好。当然并不是说这番不够好,这里的每个角色都没有被刻画出非常定性的东西来,比如性格,比如情感之类,而是它把很多东西都留给观众自己来感受感悟。它并没有把角色们塑造成推动剧情的棋子,让你觉得,哦原来这个人是这样的,原来这件事情是这么回事之类。这番留下了非常庞大的空间来让观众自行发(yi)挥(yin),有点类似一千个哈姆雷特的感觉。当然,不喜欢这番的人可能会觉得这个太文艺,或者太阴森晦涩,就算这样我觉得还是可以尝试来看看,它会让你改观的

除了内涵,还有一些外在的东西,世界观或者剧情,我觉得这些方面,这番只能算还行。。所以喜欢新奇设定,或者激烈剧情的可能不太喜欢这种,当然要是你看打打杀杀觉得累了,哪一天想休息下,我希望你能记起这番来。不管怎么说,我觉得荤素搭配都是好事

顺带一说,这番虽然感情描写非常细腻,但是我觉得应该不会十分感人催泪,更多的应该是揪心,所以要是结尾来升华一下就神番了
爱花不要死啊(误)
Seph
lol

Edit: It's Trefoil Knot (三つ葉の結びめ)
MillhioreF
If it doesn't have an official roman title, you're supposed to use a romanization. Mitsuba no Musubime in this case

Edit: I googled it and I can't find any solid results ?_?
Seph
Its Mitsuba no Musubime/Trefoil Knot/三つ葉の結びめ
RavenSD
:D
thomkin1013
Insane的ar8好像太快,ar7会好一点
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
0.0
10crystalmask01
Hey, M4M request here:
*Not going to make an easy diff?
[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This same pattern repetition is really boring, make something more exciting out of this rhythm if you can.
01:27:950 - Consider adding a note here with a finish, so it puts a more finishing touch for the chorus.

[Hard]
00:04:048 (4) - NC
00:43:072 (5) - ^
01:18:194 (1,3) - Pretty bad overlap here, either move these objects apart or try to stack'em.

[Normal]
00:04:048 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:05:999 (3) - ^
00:08:438 (2,3) - These objects are actually placed closer then how they really should be. I don't know if this was intentional or not, but all objects
should be snapped accordingly in the Easy/Normal diffs.
00:18:438 (2,3) - ^ Same issue
00:31:365 (1,2) - ^
...and so on.
00:09:170 (3) - Add whistle on the tail.
00:21:121 - Rhythm suggestion:

00:26:975 (3) - Add finish on the tail.
01:00:633 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:16:243 (1) - ^
01:24:048 (1) - ^
01:27:950 - Consider adding a note here with a finish, so it puts a more finishing touch for the chorus.

Fix the DS between all the notes that were placed 1/2 beats apart. And this diff has no hitsounds o.o
moonlightleaf
[Normal]

00:00:146 (1) - 返折太多了点。。

00:04:048 (1) - DS

00:09:170 (3) - ^

00:19:170 (3) - ^

DS的好多 距离调一下吧

00:06:975 有音

00:50:145 (2) - 换成00:50:389单点

00:44:536 (1,2,1) - 我觉得都俩白线起步白线结尾好些

00:51:853 (2) - 移到后面白线

[Hard]

DS挺乱的

00:06:487 (1) - ctrl+g

00:09:170 (1,3) - 1折返 3换俩单点

00:12:828和00:15:267和00:16:243和00:16:731 note 空着很怪= = 还有这DS= =

00:30:145 (2) - ctrl+g+h+j 放1尾巴下

00:41:365 (2,3) - 蓝线结尾 好像不行

00:45:511 断滑条红线收

00:47:463 ^

00:46:243 (3) - 拉后面白线 删4

00:50:145 (3) - 换00:50:389单点

01:13:072 (3) - 折返

01:15:755 (5,6) - 换4连串?

01:23:316 note

01:27:463 (4) - 减1折返

[Insane]

00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 不如上下左右对称?俩俩选择 Ctrl+g +j +h 什么

的你看看

00:16:243到00:25:511空了好多 我菜,看不懂诶= =

00:43:072到00:50:389可以参考我上面的hard mod

没啥大问题 (我对俩连捉鸡
P o M u T a
Hi. M4M your queue.



[General]
  1. Remove Widescreen Support all diff.
  2. Audio-Lead in 2500 suggest. not automatic operateworkrun.
  3. Artist: やなぎなぎ Romanised Artist: yanaginagi
  4. This is ending song. try add 'ed' and 'ending' tag.
  5. This Sourse is 'Nagi no Asu Kara' and japanese '凪のあすから' try add.
[Normal]
  1. HP+1. i think bit low Normal diff.
  2. I recommend OD +1 or +2. '2' is Easy diff setting imo. try up.
  3. 00:00:146 (1) - add whistle start and all reverse and end. fit song.
  4. 00:04:048 (1) - add finish slider head.
  5. 00:05:999 (3) - add finish.
  6. 00:07:463 (1) - add finish slider end.
  7. 00:14:048 (1) - this reverse hitsound suggest, try use this all diff. fit imo. http://puu.sh/7kypC.wav
  8. 00:41:121 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm. blue line is confuse player imo. drum sound and vocal sound took suggest. for example.
  9. 00:43:072 (4,1) - switch NC.
  10. 00:43:072 (4) - add finish.
  11. 00:50:877 (1) - add finish slider head.
  12. 00:57:463 (5) - add note? easily rhythm and vocal and drum fit.
  13. 01:00:633 (1) - add finish slider head.
  14. 01:08:438 (1) - add finish slider head.
  15. 01:14:048 (3) - add finish slider head.
  16. 01:16:243 (1) - add finish slider head.
  17. 01:24:048 (1) - add finish slider head.
  18. 01:27:219 (5) - not fit rhythm imo. try add reverse. and slider end add finish. more fit.
    i suggested finish hit sound only. but, try some clap and whistle :D
[Hard]
  1. AR+1? this diff have triplet and bit hardly rhythm. i think fit imo.
  2. 00:07:950 (4,1) - add whistle slider end. try add whistle strong piano part.
  3. 00:09:170 (3) - add whistle slider head.
  4. 00:09:658 (4) - add whistle.
  5. 00:29:170 (4) - this is not bad. but, i suggest (x:158 y:24). more seems beautiful distance imo.
  6. 01:13:560 (4) - add whistle slider head. follow piano.
  7. 01:27:463 (4) - slider end, try add finish instead clap. sound better. also, if you think loud volume, try low volume.
  8. 01:27:463 (4) - try this?
[Insane]
  1. 00:57:463 (4,5) - try Ctrl+G? i think more fun play imo. also, strong vocal jump.
  2. 01:27:828 (8) - same as hard diff.
nice mapset. good luck.
Umi
Yo ! it seems that u can't find a good BG, what about this one ?


well it's a bit particular but i really like it :3
kuroanchan


yanaginagi /o/

[General]
Source : Nagi no Asukara / 凪のあすから

[Normal]
HP +1
00:39:170 (4) - NC
00:59:658 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to re-place this things, because too lower *in my opinion
01:27:219 (5) - after this, try to put spinner?

[Hard]
in begin: try put something in an empty place, if there is any lyric or music in that time
00:29:170 (4) - NC
00:29:414 (1) - remove NC

[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - try to something creative xD maybe make it like flower or anything, not just stay at same place

nice nice mapset!! good song too!
i hope it will ranked xD GL~
sjoy
[Normal]
为什么用 0.8 SV阿 我觉得好慢阿,滑条好短阿
00:44:292 (1) - 感觉有点奇怪 00:44:536这里开始吧
01:22:097 (5) - 我觉得这里01:21:853 1/1比较好
01:22:828 加个 NOTE
01:27:219 (5) - 后面不加一个转盘么?
[Hard]
00:17:950 (3) - 后面2个音加WHIS吧
01:25:755 (1) - 给我感觉节奏是这样的http://puu.sh/7oF9S.jpg
01:27:950 同N
[Insane]
我觉得1/1滑条挺好的
00:42:097 (4) - 我觉得挺奇怪的,http://puu.sh/7oFhD.jpg这样感觉挺好的
00:52:828 (1) - 同上
01:25:755 (1) - 折返去了 01:26:243加个NOTE如何?
01:27:950 同N
祝你身体健康
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. Title: やなぎなぎ
  2. tags suggetion:
    ending
  3. 01:00:633~ Kiai-time!
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:267 (3,4,5) - a little hard to see... I suggest to make DS 1.0x like 01:05:511 (3,4,5,6) -
  2. 00:37:219 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:42:097 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:50:145 (2,1,2) - ^
  5. 00:52:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:438 (1,3) - blanket correctly
  2. 00:53:804 (2) - rotate around 10 degrees anti-clockwise for smoother cursor moving
  3. 00:58:194 (4) - I prefer to ignore DistanceSnap and move to x:256 y:192
  4. 01:09:170 (2) - umm... it isbetter to end at 01:09:414
  5. 01:25:755 (1,2) - I feel not smoothing flow. how about this? (stack 01:26:487 (2) - on 01:25:511 (4) - )
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Intersting~
  2. 00:39:658 (4,5,6) - I recommend to more smooting flow. for example, how about this?
  3. 00:52:828 (1,2) - how about blanket and stack?
    SPOILER

    161,162,52828,6,0,P|169:130|145:58,2,96,6|4|4,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
    102,221,53804,1,8,0:1:0:0:
  4. 01:19:902 (8,1) - too large DS... I recommend to fix...
you are loving "凪のあすから " ?
I hope you can get good BG of this song, too~
yanaginagi<3 ~☆
~Good Luck~
Cancel


M4M / Mod from my queue~

[General]

    1. Needs a BG, don't you think?
    2. Remove capitals from tags.
    3. I don't know if I'm just hearing things, but some hitsounds seem to cut off abruptly.
    4. 01:00:633 - to 01:27:463 - needs to be a kiai time imo.
    [Normal]

      1. Why not make 00:07:463 (1,2) - two straight sliders instead of ones with a curve?
      2. 00:35:267 (3) - NC
      3. 00:37:219 (1) - Remove NC?
      4. 00:39:170 (4) - NC?
      5. 01:27:219 (5) - Maybe add an finish, since I can clearly hear one.
      Good diff, so almost nothing to mod :D

      [Hard]

        1. 00:17:219 (2) - NC?
        2. 00:17:950 (3) - NC?
        3. 00:32:828 (1) -Remove NC and place NC at 00:34:048 (2) - .
        4. 00:57:219 (2) - CTRL+G this slider?
        Again, nice diff.

        [Insane]

        Nothing found here.

        Sorry if my mod sucked, but the map is very well made. So, good luck ^^/
Chloe
I'll delay my mod if I can gained 2 kd after I modded it 0.0
Sonico Makaron
Hi!

[General]
Fine

[Normal]
00:05:999 (3) - How about this rhythm? I think it would be better if you followed for instrumental here00:07:463 (1) - How about add whistle at the repeat slider?
00:08:438 (2) - ^?
00:59:658 (3) - Add NC
00:41:121 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 00:41:365 (2)

[Hard]
00:41:121 (1) - Same opinion as Normal
00:41:853 (x) - Would be great follow if you add a note. Also you can add note here too 00:42:585 (x)
00:59:658 (2) - Add NC
01:27:463 (4) - I think finish at the end slider feel well, you can reduce the volume if you want

[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This pattern сan be improved. How about Citrl+ H 00:00:877 (1,2) and here 00:02:341 (1,2)
00:08:438 (1) - Maybe add whistle at the end slider?
00:09:658 (5) - ^?
00:41:121 (1) - Same opinion as Normal
01:27:828 (8) - Add finish at the end slider

Good map~
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
updated
thanks for modding :3
BeatofIke
Hi wcx. Modding time! :D
[General]
  1. All Clear. No unrankable issues found.
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:146 (1,1,1,1,1) - How about a star pattern? The current pattern is not bad, but I like to throw some suggestions. :)
[Insane]
  1. 00:58:682 (1,2,3) - When I test played this part, I missed this pattern at the around 3 via sightread. I don't suggest changing anything here, but it's worth mentioning lol.
Nothing much to point out. Very good map and relaxing song. Call me back! :D
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
BeatofIke

BeatofIke wrote:

Hi wcx. Modding time! :D
[General]
  1. All Clear. No unrankable issues found.
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:146 (1,1,1,1,1) - How about a star pattern? The current pattern is not bad, but I like to throw some suggestions. :)
    I like to keep this cuz the song here didn't change in every 3/2 beats
[Insane]
  1. 00:58:682 (1,2,3) - When I test played this part, I missed this pattern at the around 3 via sightread. I don't suggest changing anything here, but it's worth mentioning lol.
    the pattern plays fine imo, there's 1/4 time gap to read and click he next note.. this is totally enough imo
Nothing much to point out. Very good map and relaxing song. Call me back! :D
thanks for modding
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