1. Hard (4.84 stars, 202 notes)
2. Mochi's Normal (3.72 stars, 110 notes)
3. pkhg's Easy (1.37 stars, 70 notes)
4. Taiko Muzukashii (4.37 stars, 250 notes)
5. Taiko Oni (4.82 stars, 322 notes)

Fycho wrote:

kpy快搞四季P啊，明明要好好学习又做新图=.=

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. Combo颜色怎么选的默认的？选一个好点的吧
2. Tags把GDer加进去，再加些声优名？

[hard]

1. Hard还是AR7吧，我换成ar7打了下完全可以读，而且dt也简单了
2. 00:05:329 (7) –建议加个nc，第一本身是变速滑条，第二这个combo到8了和前后比有点长，我第一PC的时候被小坑了下。
3. 00:11:579 (3) –这个我建议，换成一个circle在00:11:579 -，然后00:11:757 –起个1/2滑条，因为00:11:757 –有个音没跟到，而00:10:329 (2) –却跟着。或者00:11:579 (3,4) -00:15:150 (4) –都在蓝线结束跟人声吧，现在滑条结束点没音感觉有点拖拖拉拉。//這個段開flow就斷掉了
4. 00:26:579 (4) –加个whistle感觉更好
5. 00:41:757 (1) –碰到血条了
6. 00:55:328 (5) –头加个finish？
7. 00:58:007 (4) –这忽略了个大白线上的强鼓点打起来十分不舒服，前面几个倒没这感觉。 這邊我是打算跟vocal走的
8. 00:58:543 (1) –保证音效完整性这里00:58:900 -还是别被滑条覆盖吧 ^

NewibornCLivee wrote:

...hi,

all of them are suggestions.

[General]
imo 01:06:757 is the end of kiai, as it starts from a 1/6 stream, then ends with a 1/6 stream sounds more reasonable to me.
//I prefer ending the kiai at calm part.

[Oni]
00:03:721 - add k, there is a drum sound here and should fit the d d k pattern.

00:33:007 (107,108,109) - d k d , as the pitch here is going down and is opposite to the k d k before here. using the pattern of opposite color should fit.

00:53:900 (201) - maybe add finish here? the consecutive D gives a strong feel of beat and sounds nice to me. //not really necessary imo, it sounds redundent for me.

01:19:971 - add k, for the sound here //but clearly the instrument started at 01:20:150 -

01:20:865 (314) - consider make it d for the sudden drop of pitch?

[Muzu]
00:52:471 (152,157,162) - i think add finishes to these note wont be too difficult for muzu and fits the music? //same as oni

01:19:971 - add k, same as oni //same as oni

01:20:864 (245) - d, same as oni

Good Luck

1. 00:06:757 (2) - 这个note的位置建议离滑条近一点（总觉得这个地方有点不对劲 干脆拉长滑条把note去掉好了）
2. 00:07:293 (1,2,3) - 怪怪的 难打 建议取缔 改成三连打好一点 折返滑条的话会让人掌握不好节奏
3. 00:11:579 (3) - 节奏改成这样http://puu.sh/6dNlZ.jpg比较好
4. 00:14:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方听着也是有点不合曲 http://puu.sh/6dP0U.jpg 尝尝这个
5. 00:16:757 (3,4) - ^ 滑条加长到白线 然后后面的滑条改成两个note试试 http://puu.sh/6dPdh.jpg
6. 00:20:864 (4) - 打了几次这个地方总是觉得奇怪 于是把这个滑条和下一个滑条的距离缩短了一点 你看看有没有好一点
7. 00:28:186 (4) - 加长1/4拍

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[ Mochi's Normal]

1. Disable widescreen support okay.
2. 00:07:829 (1) –Drum whistle is much better than soft finish imo it sounds weird for me.. finish with lower volume fit best
3. 00:09:079 (3) –whistle at sliderhead is a little weird. Try to add at00:08:900 –instead. the clash with next 1/2 whistle was pretty awkward imo
4. 00:16:400 (5) -1/4 slider here fits better for vocal. would be too hard for me.
5. 00:40:864 (4,1,2,3) –since you follow at00:40:864 (4) –and 00:42:114 (2) -,so I highly suggest you use this rhythm, http://puu.sh/6bwFb.jpg, Otherwise,remove this00:40:864 (4) directly. invalid link ``b
6. 01:05:686 (4) –remove clap at sliderend and change sampleset to normal, add a clap at 01:06:400 (5) –instead. Sound better for me. Ah yep.. fixed

1. The artist is Aoi Eir, not Eir Aoi (just check here). Also, I think that the word "Ver." in the title (in (TV Size Ver.)) is unneeded, I haven't found any source that includes it in the title.
2. The audio bitrate of the mp3 is too high. Consider decreasing it at 192kbps.
3. 01:06:757 (1) - From here the kiai seems kinda unnecessary, I'd suggest ro remove it.
4. Consider adding "Sound of the Rainbow" in the tags since it's the traduction of the current title.

1. I know that the song and the map is really slow and relaxing in some parts, but AR8 is really low for this difficulty. There are some patterns hard to read due the spacing and the incostand rhythm. Also, there's an unpredictable 1/3 pattern, you should really set the AR as 8!
2. 00:04:257 (4,5,6) - I'd suggest to change the pattern in the one below (just two different positions of the elements) to improve the flow a little bit:
   
   SPOILER

   [/spoilebox]
3. 00:05:329 (1,2) - I'd prefer to see 00:06:757 (2) - this note closer to 00:05:329 (1) - this slider, at this moment the spacing that you've used here looks a little bit excessive. I'd prefer to see that note somewhere like x:256 y:316.
4. 00:15:150 (4) - Consider reducing its lenght by 1/4 (so, let it end on the blue tick) to follow the vocals.
5. 00:25:686 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't really like the shape that you've used for 00:26:043 (3) - this slider, it looks unfitting in the pattern. Try changing it in the one below:
   [spoilerbox]
6. 00:51:757 (4,5) - Try making a blanket with these two elements, it would look a lot better in my opinion:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:23:721 (4) - Consider adding a new combo on this slider to emphasize the vocals at the end and its awesome shape! Also, you should finish it at 01:28:186 (5) - , where the vocals and the instruments ends.

1. You have to fix the unicode artist and the unicode title as in the other difficulties.
2. 00:02:472 (2) - Consider assing a new combo on this element since it starts in the same position of the offset (there are also new instruments to emphasize!). You should do this, even if this is only the second element of the difficulty.
3. 01:15:328 (1) - I'd like to see this slider a little bit more curvy to obtain a blanket with 01:16:757 (3) - this element:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. The greenline at 83721 is unnecessary.
2. 00:49:614 (2) - The finish on the head sounds really unnecessary...

1. 把taiko diff的Widescreen support 移除,我想應該是用不太到
2. Muzu和Oni的音效建議改成相同

woshiguabi wrote:

妈的太久没mod图不会写了 我zz
将就一点看吧 谢谢
[hard]

1. 00:06:757 (2) - 这个note的位置建议离滑条近一点（总觉得这个地方有点不对劲 干脆拉长滑条把note去掉好了）
2. 00:07:293 (1,2,3) - 怪怪的 难打 建议取缔 改成三连打好一点 折返滑条的话会让人掌握不好节奏
3. 00:11:579 (3) - 节奏改成这样http://puu.sh/6dNlZ.jpg比较好
4. 00:14:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方听着也是有点不合曲 http://puu.sh/6dP0U.jpg 尝尝这个 //這個我覺得挺合音樂的
5. 00:16:757 (3,4) - ^ 滑条加长到白线 然后后面的滑条改成两个note试试 http://puu.sh/6dPdh.jpg //^
6. 00:20:864 (4) - 打了几次这个地方总是觉得奇怪 于是把这个滑条和下一个滑条的距离缩短了一点 你看看有没有好一点
7. 00:28:186 (4) - 加长1/4拍 //這邊1/2 比較自然阿...

qoot8123 wrote:

我來mod了

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]

1. 把taiko diff的Widescreen support 移除,我想應該是用不太到
2. Muzu和Oni的音效建議改成相同 //是一樣啊...

[ Muzukashii]

SPOILER

1. 00:05:329 (15) - 我覺得這裡可以改成D,因為00:05:150 (14) - 這裡的音調並沒有比較高,而且也比K還要有power //我倒是覺得這邊big kat跟鼓會比較好
2. 00:13:007 (28,29) - 這裡的kd 是跟著vocal的音調下的,所以我覺得00:12:293 - 改成d會比較好
3. 00:52:471 (152,162) - 試著加個finish,會比較有power
4. 00:58:186 (170) - ^

[ Oni]

SPOILER

1. 建議把HP 和OD改到比Muzu還要高一點,這樣比較能夠分出難易度
2. 00:05:329 (17) - 同muzu,改成D ? //同muzu
3. 00:12:293 (37,38) - 把這兩個note的位置交換,這裡跟vocal聽起來比較好 //不太覺得, 00:13:059 - 這個note明顯比較高音 所以我才放kat的
4. 00:17:471 (54) - 試這裡既沒有明顯的鼓聲,vocal這裡也是拉長音,所以試著把這個note刪掉會比較好 //不對啊...背後還有一點instrument
5. 00:40:864 (142,143) - 這裡的vocal和00:42:114 (149,150) - 有些不同,所以我建議把這兩個note對調比較合vocal //這邊我follow pitch.
6. 00:57:828 (218,220) - 我覺得這裡可以改成k和 D,除了之前說過D比較有power之外,00:58:006 (219) - 這裡vocal的音調才開始下降,所以從這裡開始放d會比較好

做得很好,整首歌的感覺都有做出來!
射個星~

KingsAL2 wrote:

久違的mod form :3

By AL2 modding queue
==General==
///mod太差//不太懂mod現在的map了 t_t

==Hard==
-- Combo Problem --
00:18:007 (5) - NC, for the new sapcing of jumping
01:01:936 (1) - (Suggest) REmove nc 01:02:293 (2) - NC //這個還是保留好了...感覺現在的nc比較fit pattern
-- Sound --
01:05:328 (6-1ST) - Change clap to finish
01:15:328 (2-1ST) - Finish
-- Spacing --
-- Other(S) --
00:38:543 (3,1) - Not perfectly covered...

==OVERALL==
LIKE :// 騙kd的說
UNLIKE : //

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]
- About the song name, it should be small letter for size and ver. as shown below in amazon.jp or Artist Official Website: http://www.aoieir.com/special/niji_release/

SPOILER

1.
2.

- Artist Name should be Aoi Eir. (Reference from ranked maps)
- I have changed the mp3 to 192k for u: http://puu.sh/6fORb.mp3
[Hard]
- 00:48:186 (3,4,5) - CTRL+G 感覺不太好呢
- 00:55:328 (5) - 上下調轉 //^, 但間距稍微調整
- 01:00:864 (3) - 藍線都無音 //vocal阿..

alternatives

1. 放個circle係01:01:043
2.

- 01:03:364 (1,2,3) 同呢段: 01:06:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing 調轉左定專登 lol //特登
- 01:02:650 (1,2) - 純粹提議

SPOILER

- 01:05:328 (6,1) - 呢個spacing我以為第一個circle放係藍線
- 01:09:971 (1,2) - CTRL+G //特登的
- 01:11:668 (3) - no stress no lyrics, DELETE imo //跟鼓鼓
- 01:23:721 (4) - 呢個結尾我覺得有d奇怪,歌詞同音樂都好似係01:28:186呢到完 //故意早半拍~

Done. Nice song XD

Nemis wrote:

[General]

1. The artist is Aoi Eir, not Eir Aoi (just check here). Also, I think that the word "Ver." in the title (in (TV Size Ver.)) is unneeded, I haven't found any source that includes it in the title.
2. The audio bitrate of the mp3 is too high. Consider decreasing it at 192kbps.
3. 01:06:757 (1) - From here the kiai seems kinda unnecessary, I'd suggest ro remove it.
4. Consider adding "Sound of the Rainbow" in the tags since it's the traduction of the current title.

[Hard]

1. I know that the song and the map is really slow and relaxing in some parts, but AR8 is really low for this difficulty. There are some patterns hard to read due the spacing and the incostand rhythm. Also, there's an unpredictable 1/3 pattern, you should really set the AR as 8! //Still, I testplayed and found that AR8 is not that suitable for this diff.
2. 00:04:257 (4,5,6) - I'd suggest to change the pattern in the one below (just two different positions of the elements) to improve the flow a little bit:
   
   SPOILER

   [/spoilebox]
3. 00:05:329 (1,2) - I'd prefer to see 00:06:757 (2) - this note closer to 00:05:329 (1) - this slider, at this moment the spacing that you've used here looks a little bit excessive. I'd prefer to see that note somewhere like x:256 y:316.
4. 00:15:150 (4) - Consider reducing its lenght by 1/4 (so, let it end on the blue tick) to follow the vocals. //I would like to end this on the 'tak' sound
5. 00:25:686 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't really like the shape that you've used for 00:26:043 (3) - this slider, it looks unfitting in the pattern. Try changing it in the one below:
   [spoilerbox]
6. 00:51:757 (4,5) - Try making a blanket with these two elements, it would look a lot better in my opinion:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:23:721 (4) - Consider adding a new combo on this slider to emphasize the vocals at the end and its awesome shape! Also, you should finish it at 01:28:186 (5) - , where the vocals and the instruments ends. //intentionally end that 1/2 earlier.

[/list]

1. 大体上看没有什么不对的地方（？）
2. 可以试着提高音量，稍微有点小。

1. 00:08:238 (24) - 加finisher怎样？毕竟是这一段的开头，而且是重音。
2. 00:13:952 (42) - 这边改成k会好一点，无论是从节奏上还是与前一部分的对应上...
3. 00:20:023 (61,62,63) - k d k 会听起来好一点
4. 00:22:881 (71,72,73) - k k k 怎样？正好连着后面的 k k k d 听起来也好点
5. 00:36:631 - 从这里用个三连的ddd 也好吧？也有三连鼓点在这里。
6. 00:43:595 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - 这里用 d d k d d d k 听起来会好点，虽然d d d k d d k 和前面对应比较工整，但是我还是觉得变化多一些好:P
7. 00:48:059 - 和 00:36:631 - 一样加个三连ddd？
8. 01:18:059 (305) - 突然想起来这里改成k怎样？就像你muzu里面用的一样。
9. 似乎没有什么地方还要改了。蛮赞的吖。

1. 00:08:238 (18) - 和 oni 一样建议加个finisher。
2. 00:55:024 (161,162) - 这里 d K 也听起来不错...不过随你
3. 没什么地方能改了;w;果然我太弱ｍ(＿　＿)ｍ

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Kpy 你好，as your request.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.Mochi's Normal combo顏色與其他diff不一致。
2.Widescreen只有pkhg的有勾上其他都沒勾，其他的勾一下。
3.太鼓Oni diff怎麼會有一個同一時間有兩個物件?
[Hard]

00:04:309 (4) - 照這樣紅線whistle聽下去的話，這個4怎麼沒加到呢? 加了挺適合的。6的話我覺得不加不會影響。
00:07:345 (1) - 跟上面的人也認為這裡怪怪的因為這裡沒有節奏，開了HD感覺很坑。如果要小overmap的話看看要不要改成2個note。
00:10:381 (3) - 這左右藍線有節奏可以加note形成連打，建議試試看。 //個人不偏向在安靜的地方放這種打發
00:13:237 (2) - 個人覺得後面大白線可以再放一個短滑條，像這樣子

SPOILER

，大白線壓滑條頭，vocal是在這裡出聲的。 //vocal在這邊是一口氣的 我也不太想分開
00:24:130 (4) - 使用ctrl+g似乎效果不錯，要用的話記得(2)也要動一下。
00:24:845 (6) - 不彎也不直看起來很奇怪，要不要弄直或增加點弧度? //這種slider我覺得挺好的阿 以前也不少mapper有用
00:39:487 (1) - 沒疊好? //故意的
00:42:880 (4) - 開頭+whistle試試? 因為同顏色這段前面紅線都有+到。
00:53:773 (4) - 照前面音樂這樣聽，這邊或許尾端也可加個finish.
01:00:916 (3) - 試試這個節奏看看:

SPOILER

//這邊我跟vocal01:18:059 (3) - (164|164)? 蠻flow也可以形成一個三角。 //可以說這個我是特意安排的01:20:916 (4) - 大白線去掉whistle比較適合音樂。

- Kagami Yuki - wrote:

Hihi~Kpy w Mod from PM request.

[General]

1. 大体上看没有什么不对的地方（？）
2. 可以试着提高音量，稍微有点小。

[Taiko Oni]

1. 00:08:238 (24) - 加finisher怎样？毕竟是这一段的开头，而且是重音。//太重了
2. 00:13:952 (42) - 这边改成k会好一点，无论是从节奏上还是与前一部分的对应上...
3. 00:20:023 (61,62,63) - k d k 会听起来好一点
4. 00:22:881 (71,72,73) - k k k 怎样？正好连着后面的 k k k d 听起来也好点
5. 00:36:631 - 从这里用个三连的ddd 也好吧？也有三连鼓点在这里。
6. 00:43:595 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - 这里用 d d k d d d k 听起来会好点，虽然d d d k d d k 和前面对应比较工整，但是我还是觉得变化多一些好:P
7. 00:48:059 - 和 00:36:631 - 一样加个三连ddd？ //改成dkd了
8. 01:18:059 (305) - 突然想起来这里改成k怎样？就像你muzu里面用的一样。
9. 似乎没有什么地方还要改了。蛮赞的吖。

[Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:08:238 (18) - 和 oni 一样建议加个finisher。 //同oni
2. 00:55:024 (161,162) - 这里 d K 也听起来不错...不过随你 //這個還是保留..
3. 没什么地方能改了;w;果然我太弱ｍ(＿　＿)ｍ

那么就是这些~w
Good luck wwww

1. 00:08:237 (1) - I don't think that this single NC is nesessary
2. 00:13:059 (1,2) - - This part feels kinda weird while playing, try something like this to follow vocals better:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:16:095 - Feels empty and might confule while playing, try to add note here
4. 00:17:523 (4,1,2) - This part feels pretty mismatched to the vocals - 00:17:881 - this part needs to be played which makes next two sliders hard to catch, so try something like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:28:952 (1) - Remove NC? Just don't feel it nesessary
6. 00:31:095 (2) - You have here some strong beats what was covered by this slider, which is not sounds/plays good, so try something like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:38:595 (3,1) - Broken stack or intentional? Imo perfect stack will works here much better
8. 00:40:380 (4) - This 3/4 slider feels kinda weird here, try something like this to mach vocals in a better way:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:58:059 (4,2) - Hmm, how about perfectly stack ends of these sliders? Will looks pretty nice!
10. 01:18:237 (1) - This slider is wrongly snapped, should ends 1/8 later
11. 01:18:237 (1,2) - just personal opinion, but i really don't like these snapes, they just feels scrunched >< Please try regular snape here if possible.
12. 01:23:773 (2) - You can make it even slower via .osu (this is allowed now), just for 2 reasons - it is currently very long so you will be able to make better snape and a bit more slow velocity will better reflect song's tempo.

1. 00:04:666 (5,6) - It will plays much better if you will stack them perfectly

1. 00:16:809 (3,4,5) - A little spacing issue here
2. 01:16:809 (2,3,1) - Same

1. 00:04:666 (13,14,15,16,17) - kdddk instead ? 14 and 15 are both on tom-tom while 13 is on a snare, it sounds weird to have 13 and 14 with the same HS while it should be 14 and 15.
   
2. 00:26:095 (84) - k ? the voice seems to be at an higher pitch than at 83.
3. 00:34:666 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - I would rather do a kkddkkd or a kkddddk hre, because the drummer starts the break with two snare shots before moving to the tom-tom, which are way more low pitched.
   Plus, it will follow more accurately the drummer movements (ie. alternating and switching hitsounds)
   
4. 00:36:631 (123,124,125) - kkd here sounds better. You mapped it to the drums drag, so the first two notes needs to have the same HS, it feels more realistic than dkd.
   
5. 00:38:773 (133) - Delete this note ? For consistency with that part 00:50:202 -
   
6. 00:46:095 (169,170) - Invert those two, 169 is a snare hit and 170 is a bass hit.
   
7. 00:48:059 (177,178,179) - Same than 00:36:631 (123,124,125)
   
8. 00:50:202 - If you didn't apply 00:38:773 (133), then I suggest you to add a note here, for consistency purpose.
   
9. 00:53:952 (204) - Finisher ? If I understood correctly how you managed the big notes, since you added one there 00:52:523 - and there 00:55:380 (209) - , you should also add one here.
   
10. 00:56:630 (212,213,214) - Same than 00:36:631 (123,124,125)
    
11. 01:04:666 (248) - and 01:05:380 (250) - Make them finishers. It fits better the climax of the songs in that part, because you can hear the instrument playing louder every beat to prepare the break, and the singer doing the same by making higher pitch gap than she does normally for the same reasons.
    
12. 01:06:095 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - ddkdddd ?
    
    Good map with a solid structure, so a lot of suggestions are hitsounding issues. I just have one concern, parts where you choose to follow the singer/violin and where you choose to follow the drums are not always easily distinguishable.

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  Even if it's a slow BPM map, OD and LD3 seems really too low, you should consider putting OD4 and eventually LD4 aswell

1. 00:30:381 (79) - delete it ? It sounds well as it is so whatever, but this one doesn't seems necessary.
   
2. 00:35:381 (97) - K instead, for consitency with the Oni diff.
   
3. 00:53:953 (156) - Same than Oni.
   
4. 00:56:631 (163,164,165,166) - dkdd instead. You are following the drums here so 166 should be a d since it's a bass hit.
   
5. 01:04:667 (191) - and 01:05:381 (193) - Same than Oni
   
6. 01:17:167 (229) - Why is it a d ? Oo Definitely should be a kat as you did on the Oni diff.