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Rhythmics & Cat Like Thief - Summer Wars [Taiko]

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Kin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 15 juin 2014 at 14:23:04

Artist: Rhythmics & Cat Like Thief
Title: Summer Wars
Tags: waves dj satomi techno trance
BPM: 170
Filesize: 4803kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,48 stars, 408 notes)
  2. Kantan (1,52 stars, 265 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2,76 stars, 703 notes)
  4. Oni (4,24 stars, 992 notes)
Download: Rhythmics & Cat Like Thief - Summer Wars
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Check XinCrin's standard vers. : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/104621
also timing + mp3 from XinCrin's map \o
Teru21
Hai .w.)/ m4m

[Kantan]
I only.. see big notes here. I wonder why is that lol ;; www
00:23:502 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - the pattern abit confusing.. 00:26:326 (30) - turn this to k and then keep repeating? 00:23:502 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30) -
00:35:326 (46) - here Big note pls. fit the BG music
00:40:973 (54,55,56,57,58) - ^ ~ and do to other part too ;; oh btw 00:45:208 (58) - this one you can add big notes or you can just leave it like that www
00:46:620 (59) - ^
00:46:620 (59) - add d? pattern 00:47:679 (61,62,63,64,65,66) - (x x x)
01:03:208 (94,95) - i prefer k d ; like previous one ( 00:51:914 (70,71) - )
01:09:208 (105,106,107,108,109) - I think this pattern abit random. do something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1224772
01:46:267 (161) - hue. move it to 01:45:561 - ;; fit more
01:52:973 (173) - big notes
01:54:385 (174) - ^
01:58:620 (181,182,183,x,184) - d d k k d ? or not , make it d k k too like the previous one.. I like it better than d d k

[Futsuu]
00:15:385 (9,10) - I personally prefer if you use kd and on the other parts too. kk is just meh ; the feels on the diff just gone ._.
00:18:208 (18,19) - ^ you did kd at the other part .A.
00:45:561 (91) - aaa delete this. unecessary ;w; also, to make this part 00:46:267 (91) - shine more.. so yeah ;; it'll be like "pew" ehm.. nvm that pew
00:46:620 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98) etc ~ - I don't really like this part.. its like too half ass? I prefer you use lke x x xxx x x ;; instead of xx xx
01:14:502 (175,176,177,179,180,181) - kkd or ddk something like that..
01:19:796 (190) - hue change to ddd pls ;A; slider isn't fit here
01:20:502 (191) - I wonder if you can delete this one, and this 01:20:855 (192) - big notes ;; hanging notes
01:38:149 (224,226,228) - big notes

[Muzu]
HP +1
00:04:267 (10,11,12,13) - d d d d ;; I thought the pattern here were like ddddkdkdddddkdkdkdddkdkdkdddkdkd ;; bolded = melody the same :|
00:10:620 (28) - ugu.. d =3=
00:25:796 (88,89,90,91,92) - kddk ;; the (92) move to 00:26:679 -
00:32:149 (117) - ^
00:36:914 (133) - move to 00:36:561 -
01:38:149 (372,374,376) - big notes
02:00:914 (459) - hm.. delete this. unecessary
02:28:620 (570,571,573,574) - hue ;; don't finish this =3= sounds annoying ;; and the other too..

[Oni]
HP +1/2 pls ;A;)a;; its like I get full hp bar already before half of the song
um.. ..... .... why the front same as muzu hue ;; the pattern I'm asking is probably the same on muzu.. the dddd kdkd dddd stuff
00:03:738 - hm.. you can add d here.
00:09:385 - ^
00:06:385 (17,x,19,x,21) - kdddk or kdkkd
02:28:620 (270,271,272,273) - I really like this part. why don't you use this at the other part too.. better to keep the same pattern
02:36:561 (304,305,306) - kdd .A.
others are pretty okay .w.)b

uh.. what I say is.. the Kantan is pretty futsuu and the futsuu is pretty muzu. but well yeah.. .w.)b welldone. Star~
Topic Starter
Kin

Teru21 wrote:

Hai .w.)/ m4m

[Kantan]
I only.. see big notes here. I wonder why is that lol ;; www
00:23:502 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - the pattern abit confusing.. 00:26:326 (30) - turn this to k and then keep repeating? 00:23:502 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - I'm the kind of guy who don't like c/c D;
00:35:326 (46) - here Big note pls. fit the BG music
00:40:973 (54,55,56,57,58) - ^ ~ and do to other part too ;; oh btw 00:45:208 (58) - this one you can add big notes or you can just leave it like that www fix'd both
00:46:620 (59) - ^
00:46:620 (59) - add d? pattern 00:47:679 (61,62,63,64,65,66) - (x x x) I think you failed c/c
01:03:208 (94,95) - i prefer k d ; like previous one ( 00:51:914 (70,71) - ) prefer keep it for melody
01:09:208 (105,106,107,108,109) - I think this pattern abit random. do something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1224772 fix'd
01:46:267 (161) - hue. move it to 01:45:561 - ;; fit more fix'd
01:52:973 (173) - big notes
01:54:385 (174) - ^ fix'd
01:58:620 (181,182,183,x,184) - d d k k d ? or not , make it d k k too like the previous one.. I like it better than d d k atm it's d k d ôwô

[Futsuu]
00:15:385 (9,10) - I personally prefer if you use kd and on the other parts too. kk is just meh ; the feels on the diff just gone ._.
00:18:208 (18,19) - ^ you did kd at the other part .A.
00:45:561 (91) - aaa delete this. unecessary ;w; also, to make this part 00:46:267 (91) - shine more.. so yeah ;; it'll be like "pew" ehm.. nvm that pew delete'd
00:46:620 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98) etc ~ - I don't really like this part.. its like too half ass? I prefer you use lke x x xxx x x ;; instead of xx xx it well still be half done
01:14:502 (175,176,177,179,180,181) - kkd or ddk something like that.. still, prefer keep it for vocal
01:19:796 (190) - hue change to ddd pls ;A; slider isn't fit here fix'd
01:20:502 (191) - I wonder if you can delete this one, and this 01:20:855 (192) - big notes ;; hanging notes I think it would be kinda strange without it
01:38:149 (224,226,228) - big notes fix'd

[Muzu]
HP +1
00:04:267 (10,11,12,13) - d d d d ;; I thought the pattern here were like ddddkdkdddddkdkdkdddkdkdkdddkdkd ;; bolded = melody the same :| when it's dddd, it's when the 4 got exactly the same sound
00:10:620 (28) - ugu.. d =3= this one you can hear this note is stronger than the previous d
00:25:796 (88,89,90,91,92) - kddk ;; the (92) move to 00:26:679 - fix'd
00:32:149 (117) - ^ fix'd
00:36:914 (133) - move to 00:36:561 - fix'd
01:38:149 (372,374,376) - big notes fix'd
02:00:914 (459) - hm.. delete this. unecessary it fit the lil vocal melody
02:28:620 (570,571,573,574) - hue ;; don't finish this =3= sounds annoying ;; and the other too.. prefer keep it, I like finish strong note

[Oni]
HP +1/2 pls ;A;)a;; its like I get full hp bar already before half of the song
um.. ..... .... why the front same as muzu hue ;; the pattern I'm asking is probably the same on muzu.. the dddd kdkd dddd stuff
00:03:738 - hm.. you can add d here.
00:09:385 - ^ I don't know why for both <_<
00:06:385 (17,x,19,x,21) - kdddk or kdkkd still prefer keep it for melody
02:28:620 (270,271,272,273) - I really like this part. why don't you use this at the other part too.. better to keep the same pattern yeah I like too, but it don't feel the same, because of the next pattern
02:36:561 (304,305,306) - kdd .A. prefer keep it for melody
others are pretty okay .w.)b

uh.. what I say is.. the Kantan is pretty futsuu and the futsuu is pretty muzu. but well yeah.. .w.)b welldone. Star~
hm well, that true, futsuu feel kinda hard
thanks for star and mod \o
qoot8123
Hi~Taiko mod via M4M~

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. NONE~
[ Kantan]
SPOILER
  1. 00:00:032 - ~ 00:12:738 - here i can hear the beat clearly,try to add notes
  2. 00:12:738 - ~ 00:35:326 - hmm, i think the part is too hard to play for new player due to the tough rhythm you mapped,so i have some suggestions to improve this part :
    the pattern you use on 00:12:738 - ~ 00:14:855 - :
    My suggest pattern on 00:12:738 - ~ 00:14:855 - :
  3. if you accept the above on, please remove 00:15:031 (6) - and use similar pattern on 00:15:561 - ...etc
  4. 00:57:914 (82) - add finish? here is more powerful
  5. 00:46:620 - ~ 00:57:561 - i suggest you use the pattern as 00:12:738 - ~ 00:35:326 - to make the difference with 00:57:914 - ~ 00:46:973 (60) -
  6. 01:16:973 (119) - change to k and move to 01:17:326 - is better i think
  7. 02:05:679 - ~ 02:16:973 - as i said before,this part's rhythm is hard to play,so use the easier pattern would be better

Comment
The main problem is hard pattern you use on some part , try to make this diff easier can improve the diff well

[ Futsuu]
SPOILER
  1. 00:00:032 - ~ 00:12:738 -same as Kantan,try to add note
  2. 00:12:738 - ~ 00:33:914 - same as kantan, this kind of rhythm is hard to catch for new player try to use this pattern :

    (00:12:738 - ~ 00:17:679 - )


  3. 02:03:208 (277) - move to 02:03:561 - end on 02:04:267 - and 02:03:208 - add note sounds better to me
  4. 02:05:679 - ~ 02:16:973 - also need improve as i said before

Comment
Same as Kantan, some part's rhythm is a bit weird, also need improved

[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:26:149 (90,91) - move to 00:26:326 - and 00:26:679 (92) - remove to follow the vocal is better i think
  2. 00:28:973 (102,103) - ^
  3. 00:31:796 (115,116) - ^
  4. 00:44:679 (166) - move to 00:44:855 - and end on 00:45:208 - and add note 00:44:679 - .the slider start on red line is a bit weird
  5. 01:58:091 - try to add note as 01:54:738 (432,433,434,435,436) - ?
  6. 02:07:267 (484) - remove? i think there is not obvious sound

Comment
Good diff in general! just remember that some part need follow vocal :)

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:42:738 (202,203,204,205) - is similar with 00:41:326 (194,195,196) - try to remove 00:42:826 (203,212,218) - may be better for me
  2. 01:28:002 (488,497) - ^
  3. 01:11:502 (383,384) - i think here can put kkdkk pattern
  4. 01:10:091 (373) - move to 01:10:002 - and 01:10:355 (375) - move to 01:10:179 - to make the 4 and 2-plet pattern as 01:10:973 (379,380,381,382) -
  5. 01:21:385 (445,446,447,448,449) - ^
  6. 02:00:032 (124) - add finish, here is more powerful than other part

Comment
pretty good diff! the beat and note's relationship is really nice~ :D


That's all~
GL~
Topic Starter
Kin
well firefox crashed when I fix'd the mod, and I'm too lazy to re write,
also almost everything fix'd
thanks !
captin1
hi

sorry for poor taiko mod >.<

[Kantan]
reduce to 1.2 or 1.0 sv? seems fast for a low diff, and ranking criteria seems to say that 1.2 or 1.0 is more common for kantan/futsuu

00:51:914 (43,44) - swap these? since melody goes from low to high here
01:45:208 (131) - k? the vocal does have a small increase here
01:55:796 (148,149,150) - and 01:58:620 (153,154,155) - swap the patterns of these? not sure since there's like, two vocal sounds, so either is fine. but i think it would be better to have the pattern with less k first, just my thought
02:45:914 (32) - move to 02:45:561 - and 02:48:385 (38) - move to 02:48:738 - I think with these two it will help the rhythm be more consistent, so that you have them kinda in two sets 02:39:561 - to 02:44:855 - and then 02:45:208 - to 02:50:502 - (although that skpped note at the end does work well with the new phrase)

[Futsuu]
same as kantan, reduce to 1.2 sv?

01:17:855 (118) - d? seems like the pitch of the vocal stays the same from the note before, and doesn't change until the note after
01:27:208 (139,140) - swap so it's d K? would be nice to have some variety in big notes and the end note is higher pitched than the one before
01:40:267 (165) - end 1/4 earlier? I think doing so would help make the sound after a lot cooler by opening up the space for it
01:46:973 (175) - d? to me this ruins the effect of the vocal being low, I think waiting until 01:48:385 (178) - to have a k seems more effective
02:02:855 (209) - why not add a finish so this is a big stream? imo would fit the build up
02:48:914 (56) - d? similar reason as 01:17:855 (118) -

[Muzukashii]

00:50:326 (183) - d? seems like it fits the music better to me
00:54:561 (202) - k? ^
01:29:326 (347) - d? since the vocal drops in pitch
01:41:326 (383) - same as futsuu
02:57:208 (686,687) - swap? it surprised me while playing that this started on k when the pitch is so low

[Oni]
are you sure using cs5 is right? I thought that they should all be the same so that the star rating isn't influenced by settings that don't affect gameplay

don't really have much to say about this one tho hah, it's fast o.o

good luck!
Topic Starter
Kin

captin1 wrote:

hi

sorry for poor taiko mod >.<

[Kantan]
reduce to 1.2 or 1.0 sv? seems fast for a low diff, and ranking criteria seems to say that 1.2 or 1.0 is more common for kantan/futsuu

00:51:914 (43,44) - swap these? since melody goes from low to high here prefer keep it
01:45:208 (131) - k? the vocal does have a small increase here sound strange to me
01:55:796 (148,149,150) - and 01:58:620 (153,154,155) - swap the patterns of these? not sure since there's like, two vocal sounds, so either is fine. but i think it would be better to have the pattern with less k first, just my thought fix'd
02:45:914 (32) - move to 02:45:561 - and 02:48:385 (38) - move to 02:48:738 - I think with these two it will help the rhythm be more consistent, so that you have them kinda in two sets 02:39:561 - to 02:44:855 - and then 02:45:208 - to 02:50:502 - (although that skpped note at the end does work well with the new phrase)

[Futsuu]
same as kantan, reduce to 1.2 sv?

01:17:855 (118) - d? seems like the pitch of the vocal stays the same from the note before, and doesn't change until the note after fix'd
01:27:208 (139,140) - swap so it's d K? would be nice to have some variety in big notes and the end note is higher pitched than the one before hm prefer keep it
01:40:267 (165) - end 1/4 earlier? I think doing so would help make the sound after a lot cooler by opening up the space for it idk what you mean since I changed a lil thing but I end it on white tick
01:46:973 (175) - d? to me this ruins the effect of the vocal being low, I think waiting until 01:48:385 (178) - to have a k seems more effective almost fix'd
02:02:855 (209) - why not add a finish so this is a big stream? imo would fit the build up fix'd
02:48:914 (56) - d? similar reason as 01:17:855 (118) - the melody start to became more high pitched there, so prefer keep it

[Muzukashii]

00:50:326 (183) - d? seems like it fits the music better to me fix'd
00:54:561 (202) - k? ^ pattern has changed a bit
01:29:326 (347) - d? since the vocal drops in pitch fix'd
01:41:326 (383) - same as futsuu better to end it on white tick
02:57:208 (686,687) - swap? it surprised me while playing that this started on k when the pitch is so low previous pattern has change, so this one is better to play

[Oni]
are you sure using cs5 is right? I thought that they should all be the same so that the star rating isn't influenced by settings that don't affect gameplay I knew it was not a big deal, so I never touch it (and I'm lazy

don't really have much to say about this one tho hah, it's fast o.o

good luck!
thanks for mod !
XinCrin
OMG <33333333

Good Luck with this project
Evening
Mod from Queue o/

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:16:267 - There seems to be a lack of kats here, it creates a gap the kat rhythm which sounds awkward for me, I suggest to add kat(s) somewhere here
Minor Suggestion : 00:50:326 (253,255,257) - This rhythm feels awkward for me, I suggest to change this rhythm to something more smooth (1/2s) since this music mostly uses 1/2
01:06:385 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364) - This kat rhythm seems a bit messy in my opinion, I suggest to have a kdkdk kdkdk kkk rhythm here since it is a build-up in the music and you might want to have an increase in kat density as it progresses ( if you get what I'm talking about )
01:18:561 - I suggest to not have a break here, you did not have a break on the previous pattern, also, the rhythm in the music doesn't really cut off at any point here, the break is a bit awkward in my opinion.
01:19:796 (441,442,443,444,445) - ddkdd > DD(remove)DD | I suggest to emphasize on these dons since they are emphasized heavily in the music on 1/2s, you might not want to have any 1/4s here.
02:56:679 (100) - k > K | Since you emphasized 02:56:502 (99,101) - , I suggest to also emphasize this

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

[Muzu]

00:24:561 (84) - k > d | There's a strong bass here I highly recommend to change to don
01:19:091 (304,305) - Swap | Not putting a kat on 305 will ruin the kat rhythm here, I suggest to swap this since you might not want to have that much kats in succession
02:50:502 (656,657) - kd > KD | Since the music strongly emphasizes these two notes with a strong bass I suggest to change both of them to finishes

[Futsuu]

00:58:796 (64,66) - Swap | There seems to be too less kats around 64, I suggest to swap so that there won't be that much kats in succession around 66 also, this is to balance out the kat and don density
01:51:914 (185) - d > k | Shouldn't this be a kat in your pattern here?

[Kantan]

Not much to say about kantan :|

01:42:738 - I suggest to add a big kat here since this is pretty loud in the music and you might not want to neglect it
02:39:208 - Same here I suggest to add a normal kat

Not much problems for the whole mapset, the kat rhythm spread is pretty smooth in all charts

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Kin

lZenxl wrote:

Mod from Queue o/

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:16:267 - There seems to be a lack of kats here, it creates a gap the kat rhythm which sounds awkward for me, I suggest to add kat(s) somewhere here maybe fix'd when changed lil thing
Minor Suggestion : 00:50:326 (253,255,257) - This rhythm feels awkward for me, I suggest to change this rhythm to something more smooth (1/2s) since this music mostly uses 1/2 pattern changed
01:06:385 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364) - This kat rhythm seems a bit messy in my opinion, I suggest to have a kdkdk kdkdk kkk rhythm here since it is a build-up in the music and you might want to have an increase in kat density as it progresses ( if you get what I'm talking about )
01:18:561 - I suggest to not have a break here, you did not have a break on the previous pattern, also, the rhythm in the music doesn't really cut off at any point here, the break is a bit awkward in my opinion. I didn't really fix it, but I change the pattern, the kat density is no higher at the end
01:19:796 (441,442,443,444,445) - ddkdd > DD(remove)DD | I suggest to emphasize on these dons since they are emphasized heavily in the music on 1/2s, you might not want to have any 1/4s here. fix'd
02:56:679 (100) - k > K | Since you emphasized 02:56:502 (99,101) - , I suggest to also emphasize this fix'd

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

[Muzu]

00:24:561 (84) - k > d | There's a strong bass here I highly recommend to change to don
01:19:091 (304,305) - Swap | Not putting a kat on 305 will ruin the kat rhythm here, I suggest to swap this since you might not want to have that much kats in succession I prefer keep it, I'm following the vocal here, the voice is more high pitched, so I prefer keep k
02:50:502 (656,657) - kd > KD | Since the music strongly emphasizes these two notes with a strong bass I suggest to change both of them to finishes fix'd

[Futsuu]

00:58:796 (64,66) - Swap | There seems to be too less kats around 64, I suggest to swap so that there won't be that much kats in succession around 66 also, this is to balance out the kat and don density fix'd
01:51:914 (185) - d > k | Shouldn't this be a kat in your pattern here? yeah fix'd

[Kantan]

Not much to say about kantan :|

01:42:738 - I suggest to add a big kat here since this is pretty loud in the music and you might not want to neglect it fix'd
02:39:208 - Same here I suggest to add a normal katfix'd

Not much problems for the whole mapset, the kat rhythm spread is pretty smooth in all charts

Good luck!
thanks for mod !
mingmichael
kin~ from my modding queue~


Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Kantan]

General
☞ change Slider Velocity to be 1.20. 1.00 is too slow for this btw, and don't worry. 1.20 isn't hard imo

Notes Structure
☞ basically all notes are nice and patterns are nice too. catch some mods again for kantan and it'll look better too :oops:

Notes
move 00:33:561 - to 00:33:914 - and add a note (don) at 00:34:267 - and change them to be kats. well maybe you wanted to make a different patterns at the last part of there. well nice~ but becareful and look carefully again with the consistency of the patterns. from 00:24:032 - when then new part comes, you used o o oo constantly until 00:31:443 - . but at the last (00:32:502 - ) you didn't use it. consider again about this

• remove this finisher 01:23:326 - . you didn't follow it at the previous notes 01:09:208 - ; 01:20:502 - . please keep the consistency there

• change 01:59:326 - to keep the dons pattern at the white strikes at that part (you used don too at 01:56:502 - btw)

move 02:27:738 - to 1/2 backward. well i know that you used a note at 02:27:738 - to follow the instrument sound which comes at there right? yeah it's nice basically~ but, consider again for the kantan player. a note which comes at the red strike (with 1/2 beat snap divisor) is quite hard for the kantan player, and then before that note comes, you gave a break. it makes the kantan players will be more confused too and hit that note incorrectly
btw, change it to be kat to make a good patterns for 4notes if you use this mod. so the notes will be
o o o o


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[ Futsuu]

General
☞ okay~!

Notes Structure
☞ basically patterns are nice~ hihii

Notes
a don missing at 00:45:208 -

a finisher missing at 01:00:738 - , to keep the finisher pattern that you used to follow the cymbals sounds like 00:56:502 - ; 00:57:914 - ; 01:03:561 - ; 01:06:385 -


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[ Muzukashii]

General
☞ okay~!

Notes Structure
☞ nice job here basically~! :3

Notes
• upss you missed finisher again at 00:57:914 - . basically 00:57:914 - has a same part like 00:46:620 - (same pitch sound too also) and you used finisher too at 00:46:620 - . so to keep the consistency, add a finisher too at 00:57:914 -
btw change 00:57:914 - to don too, not kat. to keep the the consistency too like 00:46:620 - . and it'll make a good pattern too which is o o o O

• and you must change 00:58:267 - to be kat if you use the previous mod ^ because of the kat pattern that you used constantly at this first kiai part (kats always appear at the white strikes. not at the white strikes actually, but at x:1 and x:3 on metronome). and it has a same part too like 00:46:973 - and you used kat too there

move 02:03:738 - to 02:04:091 - and change it to be don. change 02:03:914 - and 02:03:208 - to be kat and change 02:03:385 - to be don. and change 02:02:855 - and 02:03:561 - . sorry for the long suggestion. but this suggestion is to keep the finisher patterns. i saw that you followed the finisher sounds from 01:57:208 - (like at 02:00:032 - ; 02:01:443 - and 02:04:267 - ). it's nice~! but, why did you not follow that sound too at 02:02:855 - and 02:03:561 - ? consider this again

• kat at 02:09:561 - to make a good increasing piano sounds at there. you can hear 02:09:561 - becomes quite higher than 02:09:208 - and 02:09:385 - and you put dons at there. so to make a different sound at 02:09:561 - which becomes quite higher, i changed it to be kat. btw it'll make a good pattern too which is o o o o o

• 02:15:208 - ^

• just a suggestion here from my opinion. change 02:21:561 - to be don because of the low vocal. it's different like 02:18:738 - that the vocal becomes higher that the previous note. at 02:21:561 - , the vocal becomes lower that the previous note. so it looks quite weird for the lower sounds to use kat
btw you used dons too at Oni

• 02:27:208 - ^

• change 02:28:267 - to be kat. basically 02:28:267 - has a higher pitch sound than the previous three notes, but you used don there. so basically it'll be low because of don. and then please change 02:28:620 - and 02:28:973 - to be dons because the pitch sounds are lower than 02:28:267 - . and it'll make a reverse pattern with the next note. you can see here
btw you used O O O too at 02:32:502 - ; 02:32:855 - and 02:33:208 - . they have a same pitch sound too like02:28:267 - imo


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[ Oni]

General
☞ HP and OD are 6? well, i think that you wanted to make a good spread of the diffs. so kantan 3, futsuu 4, muzu 5 and oni 6. but for this diff (oni) for using 6 for HP and OD are quite hard for my own opinion. so, how about to change OD to be 5, and keep the HP with 6?

Notes Structure
☞ some inconsistent for finishers. you can look Notes box to see the suggestions

☞ hihii nice patterns basically :3 like it

Notes
• an idea from me, please look this from 00:17:679 - to 00:19:091 -

• what a sudden finisher pattern at 00:48:032 - and 00:48:385 - ? remove those finishers because i saw you didn't use that pattern at the next notes after that. and try to add some notes too by your own to avoid a single note like at 00:48:385 -

• 01:04:973 - and 01:05:326 - ^

• change 02:13:973 - to be kat to make ooo that follows the decreasing piano sounds at there

• change 02:28:267 - to be kat like Muzukashii

• 02:40:973 - and 02:41:326 - . same problem like the first kiai part

• 02:48:032 - and 02:48:385 - ^

• and i didn't tell you to remove the finishers at the next part (from 02:50:855 - until end) because you have used that finishers constantly and it's already consistent too for the finisher patterns

• how about add finisher at 02:57:914 - to follow the cymbal sound from the song too?


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okay that's all from me~ btw i agree with qoot's comment for you Oni diff :oops:
goodluck, Kin~
Topic Starter
Kin

mingmichael wrote:

kin~ from my modding queue~


Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Kantan]

General
☞ change Slider Velocity to be 1.20. 1.00 is too slow for this btw, and don't worry. 1.20 isn't hard imo

Notes Structure
☞ basically all notes are nice and patterns are nice too. catch some mods again for kantan and it'll look better too :oops:

Notes
move 00:33:561 - to 00:33:914 - and add a note (don) at 00:34:267 - and change them to be kats. well maybe you wanted to make a different patterns at the last part of there. well nice~ but becareful and look carefully again with the consistency of the patterns. from 00:24:032 - when then new part comes, you used o o oo constantly until 00:31:443 - . but at the last (00:32:502 - ) you didn't use it. consider again about this fix'd

• remove this finisher 01:23:326 - . you didn't follow it at the previous notes 01:09:208 - ; 01:20:502 - . please keep the consistency there fix'd

• change 01:59:326 - to keep the dons pattern at the white strikes at that part (you used don too at 01:56:502 - btw) fix'd

move 02:27:738 - to 1/2 backward. well i know that you used a note at 02:27:738 - to follow the instrument sound which comes at there right? yeah it's nice basically~ but, consider again for the kantan player. a note which comes at the red strike (with 1/2 beat snap divisor) is quite hard for the kantan player, and then before that note comes, you gave a break. it makes the kantan players will be more confused too and hit that note incorrectly
btw, change it to be kat to make a good patterns for 4notes if you use this mod. so the notes will be[/color] o o o o


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[ Futsuu]

General
☞ okay~!

Notes Structure
☞ basically patterns are nice~ hihii

Notes
a don missing at 00:45:208 - yeah fix'd

a finisher missing at 01:00:738 - , to keep the finisher pattern that you used to follow the cymbals sounds like 00:56:502 - ; 00:57:914 - ; 01:03:561 - ; 01:06:385 - fix'd



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[ Muzukashii]

General
☞ okay~!

Notes Structure
☞ nice job here basically~! :3

Notes
• upss you missed finisher again at 00:57:914 - . basically 00:57:914 - has a same part like 00:46:620 - (same pitch sound too also) and you used finisher too at 00:46:620 - . so to keep the consistency, add a finisher too at 00:57:914 - fix'd
btw change 00:57:914 - to don too, not kat. to keep the the consistency too like 00:46:620 - . and it'll make a good pattern too which is o o o O

• and you must change 00:58:267 - to be kat if you use the previous mod ^ because of the kat pattern that you used constantly at this first kiai part (kats always appear at the white strikes. not at the white strikes actually, but at x:1 and x:3 on metronome). and it has a same part too like 00:46:973 - and you used kat too there both fix'd

move 02:03:738 - to 02:04:091 - and change it to be don. change 02:03:914 - and 02:03:208 - to be kat and change 02:03:385 - to be don. and change 02:02:855 - and 02:03:561 - . sorry for the long suggestion. but this suggestion is to keep the finisher patterns. i saw that you followed the finisher sounds from 01:57:208 - (like at 02:00:032 - ; 02:01:443 - and 02:04:267 - ). it's nice~! but, why did you not follow that sound too at 02:02:855 - and 02:03:561 - ? consider this again I add'd the finish, but didn't fix the 1st suggest, because on this part, I'm following a lil voice melody

• kat at 02:09:561 - to make a good increasing piano sounds at there. you can hear 02:09:561 - becomes quite higher than 02:09:208 - and 02:09:385 - and you put dons at there. so to make a different sound at 02:09:561 - which becomes quite higher, i changed it to be kat. btw it'll make a good pattern too which is o o o o o fix'd

• 02:15:208 - ^ fix'd

• just a suggestion here from my opinion. change 02:21:561 - to be don because of the low vocal. it's different like 02:18:738 - that the vocal becomes higher that the previous note. at 02:21:561 - , the vocal becomes lower that the previous note. so it looks quite weird for the lower sounds to use kat
btw you used dons too at Oni without kat, I find the patter kinda empty, prefer keep it

• 02:27:208 - ^ ^

• change 02:28:267 - to be kat. basically 02:28:267 - has a higher pitch sound than the previous three notes, but you used don there. so basically it'll be low because of don. and then please change 02:28:620 - and 02:28:973 - to be dons because the pitch sounds are lower than 02:28:267 - . and it'll make a reverse pattern with the next note. you can see here
btw you used O O O too at 02:32:502 - ; 02:32:855 - and 02:33:208 - . they have a same pitch sound too like02:28:267 - imo fix'd


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[ Oni]

General
☞ HP and OD are 6? well, i think that you wanted to make a good spread of the diffs. so kantan 3, futsuu 4, muzu 5 and oni 6. but for this diff (oni) for using 6 for HP and OD are quite hard for my own opinion. so, how about to change OD to be 5, and keep the HP with 6?
I'm pretty sure HP must be = to OD, so I keep 6 to both

Notes Structure
☞ some inconsistent for finishers. you can look Notes box to see the suggestions

☞ hihii nice patterns basically :3 like it

Notes
• an idea from me, please look this from 00:17:679 - to 00:19:091 -

• what a sudden finisher pattern at 00:48:032 - and 00:48:385 - ? remove those finishers because i saw you didn't use that pattern at the next notes after that. and try to add some notes too by your own to avoid a single note like at 00:48:385 -

• 01:04:973 - and 01:05:326 - ^ I really want to keep both pattern

• change 02:13:973 - to be kat to make ooo that follows the decreasing piano sounds at there fix'd

• change 02:28:267 - to be kat like Muzukashii fix'd

• 02:40:973 - and 02:41:326 - . same problem like the first kiai part

• 02:48:032 - and 02:48:385 - ^same

• and i didn't tell you to remove the finishers at the next part (from 02:50:855 - until end) because you have used that finishers constantly and it's already consistent too for the finisher patterns

• how about add finisher at 02:57:914 - to follow the cymbal sound from the song too? I'm not really sure about it, I think it will make inconsistant with the pattern since finish mostly follow strong melody


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okay that's all from me~ btw i agree with qoot's comment for you Oni diff :oops:
goodluck, Kin~

thanks for mod ! :D
TKS
Graveyarded... sorry for the late ;__;

[ Oni]
  • 00:06:738 (17,18) - swap these colors? it would fit music.
  1. 01:45:649 (26,27,28) - del them. then, make a 7-plet from 01:46:091 - ? current pattern sounds/plays a bit weird to me.
  2. 01:51:296 (75,76,77) - the same. balance of the breakpoint is a bit bad. also, 01:51:738 - add dkd?
  3. 02:05:149 - move this green section to 02:05:061 - big volume change of sudden doesnt work correctly.
  4. 02:05:679 (155) - same as above. maybe move to 02:05:620 - ?
  5. 02:28:620 (270,271,272,273) - i have understand your intention but that pattern is a bit weird. so how about dkd(1/2)?
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:738 (17,18) - same as Oni. swap these colors?
  2. 00:52:267 (193,194) - swap? its very useful for the drum sound.
  3. 02:43:796 (627,628) - maybe swap these notes? it would work as an accent with these patterns 02:40:973 (614,615) - (d k) and 02:42:385 (621,622) - (k d)
  4. 02:49:267 (652,653) - d K? same reason as above. it will be a good contrast with 02:48:032 (647,648) - (d d)
[ Futsuu]
  1. 01:30:032 (146) - finisher? there is no big reason. its just simply beautiful.lol
[ Kantan]
  1. HP+1. HP3 is absolutely unnecessary setting.

  2. 00:17:326 (4) - 00:22:972 (4) - change to d? these points have a relatively low-pitched.
  3. 00:28:620 (12) - same reason as above. change to d in the same way as 00:34:267 (20) -
  4. 01:41:326 (128) - slider is a bit hard object for a Kantan. maybe change to d d d?
what.. almost perfect mapset to me. :o
call back me when you find one more mod.
Topic Starter
Kin

TKS wrote:

Graveyarded... sorry for the late ;__;

[ Oni]
  • 00:06:738 (17,18) - swap these colors? it would fit music. Nice one, fix'd
  1. 01:45:649 (26,27,28) - del them. then, make a 7-plet from 01:46:091 - ? current pattern sounds/plays a bit weird to me. instead of 7-plet ; I changed it to 5-plet, I think it's better
  2. 01:51:296 (75,76,77) - the same. balance of the breakpoint is a bit bad. also, 01:51:738 - add dkd? dkd, fix'd, also I tried to change the 7-plet to something better
  3. 02:05:149 - move this green section to 02:05:061 - big volume change of sudden doesnt work correctly.
  4. 02:05:679 (155) - same as above. maybe move to 02:05:620 - ? both fix'd
  5. 02:28:620 (270,271,272,273) - i have understand your intention but that pattern is a bit weird. so how about dkd(1/2)? hm, delet'd the doublet, Instead of this, I prefer to change it as 1/1 DD
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:738 (17,18) - same as Oni. swap these colors? fix'd
  2. 00:52:267 (193,194) - swap? its very useful for the drum sound. ^
  3. 02:43:796 (627,628) - maybe swap these notes? it would work as an accent with these patterns 02:40:973 (614,615) - (d k) and 02:42:385 (621,622) - (k d) yeah it's true, fix'd
  4. 02:49:267 (652,653) - d K? same reason as above. it will be a good contrast with 02:48:032 (647,648) - (d d) yeah fix'd
[ Futsuu]
  1. 01:30:032 (146) - finisher? there is no big reason. its just simply beautiful.lol maybe for the cymbal sound ? But yeah a good one, fix'd \o
[ Kantan]
  1. HP+1. HP3 is absolutely unnecessary setting. okay hp+1

  2. 00:17:326 (4) - 00:22:972 (4) - change to d? these points have a relatively low-pitched. yeah fix'd
  3. 00:28:620 (12) - same reason as above. change to d in the same way as 00:34:267 (20) - ^
  4. 01:41:326 (128) - slider is a bit hard object for a Kantan. maybe change to d d d? fix'd
what.. almost perfect mapset to me. :o
call back me when you find one more mod.
thanks for mod !
Kurai
[Oni]
  1. 02:18:385 (228,229) - d k instead ? Fits the pitch of the vocals better imo. Or k k like you did at 02:24:032 (252,253).
  2. 02:35:855 - add a kat ?
  3. 02:59:326 - Why don't you make a stream starting from there ? :O
Great map, I don't see what else could be improved there :O
Topic Starter
Kin

Kurai wrote:

[Oni]
  1. 02:18:385 (228,229) - d k instead ? Fits the pitch of the vocals better imo. Or k k like you did at 02:24:032 (252,253). changed as k k like next pattern
  2. 02:35:855 - add a kat ? fix'd
  3. 02:59:326 - Why don't you make a stream starting from there ? :O I follow the melody, it will be kindra strange if I suddenly follow the drum roll sound
Great map, I don't see what else could be improved there :O
thanks ! I love you Kurai <3
Julie
Welp didn't really follow my modding queue rules, my bad for accepting >,<!!

Nice taiko mapset, I'm really sorry wasn't able mods the map!! This is perfect :D!!

*shoots stars* GO FOR RANKED :3!!! Go go go~
TKS
sorry, i didn't explain enough.

TKS wrote:

  1. 02:05:149 - move this green section to 02:05:061 - big volume change of sudden doesnt work correctly.
  2. 02:05:679 (155) - same as above. maybe move to 02:05:620 - ?
these also the same on the Muzukashii.

* Kantan
00:12:738 - move this green section to 00:12:649 -
unnecessary green sections 01:42:738 - 02:05:149 - 02:05:679 - . so delete.

* Futsuu
00:12:738 - move this green section to 00:12:649 -
unnecessary green section 01:42:738 -

* Muzukashii
00:12:738 - move this green section to 00:12:649 -
and 02:05:149 - 02:05:679 - these sections in the same way as Oni.
unnecessary green section 01:42:738 -

* Oni
00:12:738 - move this green section to 00:12:649 -
unnecessary green section 01:09:208 -

8-)
Topic Starter
Kin

TKS wrote:

sorry, i didn't explain enough.

TKS wrote:

  1. 02:05:149 - move this green section to 02:05:061 - big volume change of sudden doesnt work correctly.
  2. 02:05:679 (155) - same as above. maybe move to 02:05:620 - ?
these also the same on the Muzukashii.

* Kantan
00:12:738 - move this green section to 00:12:649 -
unnecessary green sections 01:42:738 - 02:05:149 - 02:05:679 - . so delete.

* Futsuu
00:12:738 - move this green section to 00:12:649 -
unnecessary green section 01:42:738 -

* Muzukashii
00:12:738 - move this green section to 00:12:649 -
and 02:05:149 - 02:05:679 - these sections in the same way as Oni.
unnecessary green section 01:42:738 -

* Oni
00:12:738 - move this green section to 00:12:649 -
unnecessary green section 01:09:208 -

8-)
Meh, I missed so much thing,
also, all fix'd, thanks !
TKS
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