1. Hard (3,64 stars, 258 notes)
2. Insane (4,74 stars, 337 notes)
3. Normal (2,26 stars, 148 notes)
4. Wojowu's Easy (1,41 stars, 108 notes)

Yoshi_green wrote:

Hey, just passing by a mod here

[General]
The offset is -411 according to the ranked version of this map. It makes sense because the spinner at the end of your map currently doesn't end on a down beat. Your very first note should start 1/2 beat before the first down beat
I think you should lower the volume of all your samples by at least 30 to 40%. Right now they sound fairly loud to me
I also suggest you create combo colours that aren't the default colours, but that isn't important


[Easy]
Looks ok so far. Just don't forget to add claps/whistles here and there later on. But I'm not too sure about the [Easy] having the same slider velocity as the [Normal]. If possible, I would re-map with a lower SV... but you can wait to see what other people say about it

[Normal]
I see quite a few sliders which unnecessarily overlap other notes. Here's some of them that I'm a bit concerned with:
00:04:856 (4,1) -
00:43:491 (1,3) -
00:12:320 (4,5) -
01:17:881 (1,2,3) -

Other things:
00:24:759 (2,3,4,5) - try to come up with something more creative than just a whole bunch of stacked notes!
00:27:100 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:45:832 (1) - New combo here is not needed
01:24:905 (1) - the spinner here should end on 01:26:222

[Hard]
OD --> 6

ok, I'm going to fix all (or most) of your imperfect blanket sliders, because I do see a few problems:
All the adjustments that I am making are on Grid Snap 4 (Tiny), unless otherwise stated.
00:01:637 (4,1) - move the end point of 00:01:783 (1) - down 1 and left 1
00:03:393 (2,3) - move the middle point of 00:03:393 (2) - right 4
00:09:978 (1,2) - move the middle point of 00:09:978 (1) - left 1
00:10:856 (3,5) - move the middle point of 00:11:149 (5) - left 1 and the end point left 1
00:12:320 (1,2) - move the middle point of 00:12:320 (1) - down 1 and the end point left 2 and down 1
00:13:344 (4,1) - move the start point of 00:13:491 (1) - up 1 and the end point down 2
00:14:661 (1,2,5) - D: I don't know what to say about this ._.
00:23:588 (6,1) - move the end point of 00:24:027 (1) - down 2 and left 2
00:25:930 (7,1) - If you're trying to create a double blanket slider, then both sliders will have to blanket each other; maybe try another pattern?
00:40:125 (3,4) - move the end point of 00:40:125 (3) - right 2 and the third point up 2 and left 1
00:44:954 (8,1) - ✓
00:52:125 (1,2) - move the middle point of 00:52:125 (1) - to the centre of the grid
01:00:905 (3,4) - move the middle point of 01:00:905 (3) - right 4 and the end point up 2 and right 1
01:01:491 (1,2) - move the middle point of 01:01:491 (1) - up 2 and the end point left 1
01:10:564 (1,2) - move the start point of 01:10:856 (2) - down 2 and right 1 and the end point up 2 and left 1
01:12:759 (2,3) - ✓
01:15:539 (1,2) - move the middle point of 01:15:539 (1) - up 1 and left 2 and the end point right 1
01:16:710 (1) - umm maybe you can make another pattern here? making/modding a double blanket is hard
01:17:149 (2,3) - the end point of 01:17:149 (2) - is not snapped to grid. Just move it over to (212, 124) on the grid
01:20:222 (1,2) - move 01:20:661 (2) - (the whole thing) left 1. then move the middle point of 01:20:222 (1) - left 2 and the end point down 5
01:21:100 (3,1) - move the start point of 01:21:393 (1) - up 1 and left 1, move the middle point down 4 and right 1, and the end point down 1
Okay, we're done that, phew

Other things that I'm a bit concerned with:
The slider speed changes at 00:31:052 (1,2) - is not completely necessary, but I don't think that's much of a problem
I think you can remove 00:40:052 (2) -

The distance spacing between some of the notes is bit inconsistent, like for example:
00:46:125 (5,6,7,8,9) -
00:53:734 (5,6,7) -
01:04:564 (3,4,5) -
01:07:344 (5,1) -

[Insane]
OD --> 7
Alright, I don't play a lot of [Insane] maps, so to me, this doesn't look bad at all. I would just fix something like 00:50:222 (2,3) - because that was a bit confusing. Keep in mind that just because I find it not bad, it doesn't mean it's good to go either

Overall, it's a very good attempt given that you have no maps ranked yet. Also, I'm only doing the blanket slider mod for [Hard] because once you get the hang of it, you'll be able to spot out any more minor blanket errors here and there in your other difficulties. Good luck on your map!

ayaka2000 wrote:

I'm afraid my expressions may be rude or hard to read,
because I'm not so good at English. But please,
please be patient! I will try hard to learn English!


General
start ofset 630 bom205.00
Much Easy and Normal need to be corrected.
Hard and Insane are good tempos.

Easy
The earliness of a slider is too early for Easy.
The corrected one says offset first.
Probably, most Easy will be good to place on a white line.

Normal
00:27:101　Beautiful, when using a pentagon
00:33:686　Deletion

Hard
00:28:710　I want you to shorten a slider.
00:42:613　Ctrl＋G
00:46:564　It is more beautiful to arrange between. I don't know what are you talking about. Can you take screenshot for me for explain?
01:00:370～01:01:361　It is beautiful here.

Lokovodo wrote:

Wojowu is a good friend of mine and beatmapping got brought up in a conversation and he said he made a gd before so i am here to help out not only his gd but the map it is on~

Easy

~ As Yoshi_green said in his mod he recommends remapping [Wojowu's Easy] with a slower sv ( slider velocity )

~ Give all sliders some touch up. I will provide a "before and after picture" with what i mean
Before touching up

After touching up


~ 00:19:784 to 00:28:710 I suggest removing spinner and deleting 00:22:125 (1,2,3,4) - than copying 00:19:784 (1,2,3,4) - than pasting were the previous section was than hit "Crtl h" on your keyboard to do a horizontal flip so it will make a better symmetrical shape than afterwards move 00:21:686 (4) - and 00:24:027 (4) - to the center ( gripsnap on for that )
Here is what it should look like when done
Than from 00:24:467 to 00:28:710 do the same thing as above but with a new pattern

~ There are some sliders that repeat back and fourth for way to long and that makes for a dull/boring map i suggest changing this and just adding and repostioning the notes you already have to avoid this. ( Examples of the "bad sliders" 00:36:174 (4) - 00:32:076 (2) -

~ 00:47:003 to 00:55:784 : I suggest placing notes here, the break does not fit

Other than the stuff above there is not really that much to say. I say re-map with a lower slider velocity and use distance snap (makes mapping [easy] infact easy)

Normal

Normal is looking alright so far but the sliders look pretty random and some other stuff needs tweaking.

~ Example of sliders looking random just look at this whole section from 00:56:808 - 01:26:223

~ 00:13:784 is unnecessary

~ I like this alot 00:26:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

~ 00:46:271 to 00:54:320 : add notes

~ 01:20:954 (3) - make this repeat

Hard

Well done, this is pretty good so far.

~ 00:05:003 (3) - move this either a bit more up or a bit more down to flow better

~ (suggestion ) either remove this 00:37:393 or move slider end to 00:37:637 since newer players will have trouble jumping to the note after the spinner

~ 00:47:003 - 00:52:125 add notes

~ 00:53:734 (5,6,7) - large jumps for a [hard] reduce spacing ( also use distance snap on the jump to make it easier on yourself

Insane

Not bad, needs a few tweaks though

~ CHANGE THE OD TO 8, getting 99% is VERY easy with OD7

~ 00:09:540 (2,3,4) - these notes are straight while the rest of the sream is curved use distance snap on the streams to get steady spacing while adding the curve is recommended

~ consider reducing the spacing 00:18:540 (2,3) -

~ consider adding a curve 01:15:467 (9,1) -

~ i say you should redo this and try to get a better shape i won't remap this diff. i think it is good and it's shape is also good

SPOILER

I am not good at modding maps so i just gave a little bit of help/suggestion's yeeeeeeeeeee

No_Gu wrote:

M4M
Artist:スズム feat.そらる Suzumu feat.Soraru
Title:絶望性:ヒーロー治療薬(TV Size) Zetsubousei: Hero Chiryouyaku(TV Size)

[Easy]
00:04:857 (5) - I think whistle is better than finish
00:18:906 (5,1,2) - overlap isn't good
00:21:686 (4) - wrong distance
01:14:662 (2,3) - 1/4 with high BPM in easy isn't good

[Normal]
00:02:954 (1,3) - ahhh please don't do so
00:24:028 (1,3) - bad
00:26:369 (1,3) - ^
00:34:125 (1) - wrong distance
01:08:954 (5) - the repeat doesn't good
please avoid overlapping in normal and easy.they will make newbies puzzled

[Hard]
01:05:149 add notes please
hmm.totally ok

[Insane]
00:34:710 (4) - you can copy 1 and make it rotate 180
01:26:223 - make here silent.
hmmm still need some work

Tagre wrote:

00:08:808 (1) - this is normal. what should i put here?

deejaydray wrote:

Hello, NM here from my queue ^^

Wojowu's EASY:

00:04:857 (5) - you are not supposed to use 1/2 beats for Easy, especially when you have a high BPM like 205

I'm gonna stop here, everything else is similar to what I said above ^... Sorry but I don't like this difficulty :c This Easy looks like a Normal. You should at least change the CS from 3 to 2, but that won't help too much either. Since the BPM is very high, 205, you need to use a 1/1 Beat snap divisor, reconsider this.

NORMAL:

00:21:247 (3) - instead of this, you should use the same type of slider like here 00:20:662 (2)
00:25:930 (6) - end this slider at 00:26:223
Hmm that's all I think

HARD:

00:29:734 (3) - move this slider to 00:29:881 and then delete this 00:30:027 (4), it sounds better imo
Nothing else, this difficulty is soooo nice, I love it! <3

INSANE:

00:27:979 (6) - NC here
01:23:296 (6) - NC here

This is all! ^^ I like your map, only Easy needs some attention, everything else is good in my opinion, hope you will get it ranked GL!

deejaydray wrote:

Oh, forgot to mention... You should change the Preview Point from 00:54:467 to 00:56:076 it's better this way, since the chorus starts here ^^
~ no need KD ~

sjoy wrote:

M4M from my queue
[Wojowu's Easy]
00:05:296 (1) - whistle on the head
00:06:467 (3) - ^
00:07:637 (1) - ^
00:11:881 (3) - whistle on the body the same as 00:10:710 (2) -
00:16:564 (3) - ^
00:26:369 (3) - 256,184?
00:28:710 (1) - add a fin set 256,184
00:42:613 set a 1/2 slider?
00:47:785 - fin
00:52:125 (1) - ^
00:56:808 (1) - ^
01:06:174 (1) - ^
01:15:540 (4) - ^
01:20:223 (2) - ^ Waiting for Wojowu
[Normal]
00:07:637 (1) - whistle on the head done
00:14:662 (2) - fin on the head done
00:18:174 (1) - extend to 00:19:491 00:19:784 add a note didnt extend but added note
00:28:710 (1) - start on 00:28:564? done
00:53:588 add a note? done
01:02:954 (3,4,5) - I don't like stack remapped
01:06:174 (1) - fin on the head done
01:15:247 (5) - overlap with 01:13:930 (3) - i didnt make it overlap. i think this overlap is too confused in normal. remapped
[Hard]
00:07:637 (1) - http://puu.sh/6tN9Y.jpg done
00:15:686 (4) - move to 264,12? done
00:28:710 (1) - add a fin done
00:40:856 (3,4) - ctrl+g? no
00:41:149 (5) - I prefer remove red node done
00:42:320 (3,4) - ctrl+g? no
00:53:295 (4) - the same as 00:41:149 (5) done
01:20:222 (1) - ctrl+g? done
[Insane]
00:01:784 (1) - ctrl+g done
00:08:881 (4) - repeat end on 00:09:174 00:09:247add a note didnt apply because slider will end as it starts so stream after would be harder to catch
00:18:906 (5) - ctrl+g? no
00:33:247 (8) - move to 256,136? no
00:50:223 (2) - stack on 00:49:491 (7) - 's end done
00:53:735 (6,7) - ctrl+g done
00:56:076 (1) - I prefer 3 note for a antijump http://puu.sh/6tNAg.jpg nice idea
00:56:808 (1) - add a findone
00:57:540 (4) - http://puu.sh/6tNCu.jpg done
01:00:028 (4) - move to 172,252? no
01:06:174 (1) - add a fin done
01:07:198 (4) - move to 160,224 no
01:11:296 (2) - stack with 01:10:564 (6) - 's end done
01:13:784 (6) - move to 311,77? done
01:24:028 (1) - http://puu.sh/6tNMx.jpg done and i had to ctrlg 01:24:613 (3) - for better flow
Good luck for rank~ thanks

Mira-san wrote:

Hi.
From my queue. *insert effects here*

ALL ARE SUGGESTIONS.

General

Change title to "Zetsubousei: Hero Chiryouyaku (TV Size)"
Separate the "Chiryouyaku" and "(TV Size)"

Wojawu's Easy

01:06:613 (2) - Blanket (1) properly
01:08:223 (4,5,6) - This doesn't follow some beats well. Try changing the order of notes to like this. Sounds better. (good luck with the positioning though.)


01:13:491 (1) - The shape of this slider is not fit for the rest of the diff. :v
01:22:125 (6,7,8) - Hope you could make a better pattern out of this. The slider seems out-of-place.Waiting for Wojowu

Normal

00:35:296 (4) - Slider positioning is kinda weird. Try to move this somewhere else. Probably y:192I moved circles before this slider and slider lol
00:35:735 (5) - If you're going to move (4), make sure to move this too. Moved
00:52:125 (1) - Fix this a little bit so it blankets (4). Fixed
01:19:052 (3) - Looks weird IMO. Make this less curved probably (this is curvier than most of the long sliders).Remapped to something

Hard

00:02:222 (2) - Fix this blanket for (1). lel. 22222 dont know what are you talking about. sorry
00:31:052 (1) - Suggestion: CTRL+G then move the slider head to (2). This is to make a consistent pattern on this part. keep my pattern
00:34:417 (3) - I think this is better if it's at x:96 y:272.replaced
00:51:540 (5) - CTRL+G maybe? keep
01:14:222 (6) - Make this parallel to (4). Just to keep consistency within the look. fixed
01:23:734 (1) - This one is too curvy i guess.i did something

Insane

00:24:759 (2) - Make this a flipped copy of 00:24:467 (1). done
00:32:369 (4) - CTRL+G then stack to the end of (2). You might need to disable grid snap for a while. keep my pattern
00:34:125 (2) - Stack the end of this slider to the head of 00:33:686 (2). done
00:50:223 (2) - Stack properly on the end of (7) this is properly lol
00:51:247 (4,5,6,7) - Try to form a shape on this one, or move 00:51:540 (6) to x:120 y:252 and 00:51:686 (7) to x:168 y:160. I don't like how it will look afterwards but you can try it. Also you're gonna need to turn of Distance Snap to do this. done
01:10:857 (1) - Try to blanket (6) properly. 01:11:296 (2) will also be blanketed once you do this. done
01:11:881 (5) - Suggestion: Try to copy 01:11:442 (3) and replace this slider. Also keep it pointing the same way as (3).Keep my pattern
01:24:906 (4) - Stack on (1). Done

wops.

Good luck! Thanks for M4M.

Flower wrote:

Hi~ This is my m4m~

[Insane]
00:08:515 (3,4) - this pattern has a problem. there is a strong beat at 00:08:808 - , but it's a slider's end, which makes it feels weak. I suggest removing the repeat of 00:08:515 (3) - , then add some tricks to emphasize the guitar, for example:

SPOILER

00:09:905 (9,1) - the spacing is 0.75x, but the stream's spacing is 1.00x. I suggest making it consistent.
00:18:540 (2) - moving to x:272,y:332 ; 00:18:613 (3) - moving to x:294,y:292 should make the blanket look better.
00:22:125 (3) - it's a controversial pattern because some BAT may consider it as "manipulating slider speed". better make its track clear.
00:25:345 (4) - move to x:444,y:72 should look better, because current pattern looks too tight to me.
00:37:637 (8,9) - I suggest add a note on 00:37:710 - to make it play better. btw, there is no beat on 00:37:710 - , I think the 3-plet should be on 00:37:564 -
00:39:832 (1,2,3,4) - it seems that you tried to follow the vocal and the drum. if so, it does not fit the music. I suggest this rhythm:
(pattern is just for a rough reference)

SPOILER

00:51:979 - add a note?
00:56:808 (1) - not a big deal. but if you have time, please turn grid off, set distance snap to 3.0x and re-snap the distance of the slider. this will make 00:56:076 (1,2,3,1) - look neater.
00:57:247 (3) - if you accept previous mod, move to x:260,y:36
01:05:881 (7) - there is a strong beat at slider end. I suggest that you separate the slider into 2 single notes.

[Hard]
some part is too hard as a Hard. (not just a tongue twister :-p)
00:15:539 (3,4) - insane jump. maybe move to x:288,y:60, then adjust following notes.
00:56:808 (1) - this should flow better. (also has blanket!)

SPOILER

00:59:881 (4) - move right by 1 grid. it looks too tight atm.
01:09:686 (1,2,3) - looks tricky imo, maybe like this?

SPOILER

01:19:491 (3,4,5,6,1) - better keep spacing consistent to make it less tricky?

[Normal]
00:02:954 (1) - the rhythm is strange. better shorten by 1/2. if so, please move 00:03:832 (2) - to 00:03:686 - .
00:36:467 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is like this:

I suggest that you consider changing the pattern to something similar to the image above.

[Easy]
I don't know how to mod this diff, because I don't think it's a good idea to make circle on the red tick, in Easy.
Just some suggestions:
00:05:296 (1,2) - and more patterns like this: change into a 3/2 length repeating slider.
01:13:491 (1) - fix the shape.
00:42:613 (1) - better prevent from using such short 1/2 sliders in easy.

Good luck~

1. You should offset 613. really weird now. if worry, please ask BAT.
2. Remove Widescreen Support all diff.
3. Remove Letterbox during breaks all diff.
4. Comno Color4 change better. because color3 same red color.. other color choise please. I suggest ping color BG fitting.
5. Suzumu feat. Soraru - Zetsubousei: Hero Chiryouyaku (TV Size) ← Title last LOL... please fix.

1. 00:10:710 (2,3,4,1) - add finish slider end (Additions soft)
2. 00:15:393 (2,3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:21:686 (4) - add finish.
4. 00:24:028 (4) - add finish.
5. 00:26:369 (3) - ^
6. 00:28:710 (1) - ^
7. 01:06:174 (1) - ^
8. 01:10:564 (3) - add finish slider end.
9. 01:12:613 (2) - add finish slider end.
10. 01:15:540 (4) - ^
11. 01:16:271 (2,4,6) - add finish.
12. 01:20:223 (2,4,6) - add finish slider end.

1. 00:13:930 x) - nothing sound is sad, add note better.
2. 00:14:223 x) - ^
3. 00:18:174 (1) - add finish.
4. 00:28:564 (1) - add finish slider end.
5. 00:47:442 (1) - add finish slider head.
6. 00:53:149 (2) - add finish slider end.
7. 01:09:686 x) - add note better. rhythm more good.
8. 01:26:223 - last spart really loud volume. try Insane diff same volume.

1. 00:24:028 (1) - remove clap slider head, instead add finish slider head.
2. 00:26:369 (1) - ^
3. 00:47:442 (1) - add finish slider head.
4. 00:49:491 (5) - remove finish, not fit in my opinion.
5. 00:53:296 (4) - add finish slider head.
6. 01:24:613 (3) - try this sound.
7. 01:26:223 - last spart really loud volume. try Insane diff same volume.

1. 00:08:808 (4) - move (x:256 y:120) more beautiful. Because middle point.
2. 00:46:271 (8) - add finish
3. 00:54:467 (10) - ^

P o M u T a wrote:

hi. #modreqs


[General]

1. You should offset 613. really weird now. if worry, please ask BAT.
2. Remove Widescreen Support all diff.
3. Remove Letterbox during breaks all diff.
4. Comno Color4 change better. because color3 same red color.. other color choise please. I suggest ping color BG fitting.
5. Suzumu feat. Soraru - Zetsubousei: Hero Chiryouyaku (TV Size) ← Title last LOL... please fix.

[Wojowu's Easy]

1. 00:10:710 (2,3,4,1) - add finish slider end (Additions soft)
2. 00:15:393 (2,3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:21:686 (4) - add finish.
4. 00:24:028 (4) - add finish.
5. 00:26:369 (3) - ^
6. 00:28:710 (1) - ^
7. 01:06:174 (1) - ^
8. 01:10:564 (3) - add finish slider end.
9. 01:12:613 (2) - add finish slider end.
10. 01:15:540 (4) - ^
11. 01:16:271 (2,4,6) - add finish.
12. 01:20:223 (2,4,6) - add finish slider end.

[Normal]

1. 00:13:930 x) - nothing sound is sad, add note better.
2. 00:14:223 x) - ^
3. 00:18:174 (1) - add finish.
4. 00:28:564 (1) - add finish slider end.
5. 00:47:442 (1) - add finish slider head.
6. 00:53:149 (2) - add finish slider end.
7. 01:09:686 x) - add note better. rhythm more good.
8. 01:26:223 - last spart really loud volume. try Insane diff same volume.

[Hard]

1. 00:24:028 (1) - remove clap slider head, instead add finish slider head.
2. 00:26:369 (1) - ^
3. 00:47:442 (1) - add finish slider head.
4. 00:49:491 (5) - remove finish, not fit in my opinion.
5. 00:53:296 (4) - add finish slider head.
6. 01:24:613 (3) - try this sound.
7. 01:26:223 - last spart really loud volume. try Insane diff same volume.

[Insane]

1. 00:08:808 (4) - move (x:256 y:120) more beautiful. Because middle point.
2. 00:46:271 (8) - add finish
3. 00:54:467 (10) - ^

good luck ~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod from queue

[Insane]
00:04:564 (2) - Ctrl +G, I don't really see the point in making this slider reversed.
00:11:002 (7,2) - Move more apart please, so they aren't attached to each other. IT'll help get rid of that crowded feeling.
00:38:076 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:01:930 (4,6) - Weirdest blanket ever O_O Please fix.

[Hard]
01:02:369 (3) - Sounds a bit too much here. Try removing the reverse, and shift the slider to start at 01:02:515 instead.
01:11:442 (4) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Remove reverse, and move slider to 01:11:588

[Normal]
00:14:662 (7) - NC instead of 00:17:003 (1) -
00:38:808 (2,5) - Move more apart so they're not touching each other.
00:21:247 (4,1) - Check DS here.
00:28:564 (1,2) - ^
01:00:906 (4,1) - ^Slight DS snap error here.

[Wojowu's Easy]
00:26:369 (3,1) - Fix DS here.
00:32:954 (3) - Tail should be ending at 00:33:393 (Similar to what you did with 00:30:613 (4) - since they both hit the ending of a verse)
00:35:149 (3) - Needs to start at 00:35:296, so that the rhythm spacing is consistent. You don't want to suddenly have an object that is 1 and 1/2 beats away from the previous object, when 00:34:710 (2) - was 2 beats apart from 00:34:125 (1) - .
00:39:832 (4) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Move to 00:39:979 instead.
01:00:320 (5) - NC?
01:05:003 (5,1) - Check DS

Good luck!

NaxelCL wrote:

rank this plz<3

tellertheworld wrote:

From Teller Anchor wwl's Insane modding M4M/NM( ･´ω･｀)

IRCMOD

18:30 tellertheworld: hello~
18:30 Tagre: hi
18:31 tellertheworld: From my modding queues~
18:31 Tagre: oh hai
18:31 tellertheworld: Is it ur map?
18:31 Tagre: Xd
18:31 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/341330 Suzumu feat. Soraru - Zetsubousei: Hero Chiryouyaku (TV Size)]
18:31 Tagre: yes
18:31 tellertheworld: Can I make a IRCmod twith u?
18:31 tellertheworld: with u
18:31 Tagre: no problem
18:32 tellertheworld: Wait a few time. I play it once
18:40 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/341330 Suzumu feat. Soraru - Zetsubousei: Hero Chiryouyaku (TV Size) [Insane]]
18:41 Tagre: k
18:43 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qj61.png
18:44 tellertheworld: The same rhythm but two flow
18:44 Tagre: ahh
18:44 tellertheworld: 000:01:052 (2,3,2,3) -
18:45 Tagre: ok
18:45 tellertheworld: U can try to CTRL+G 00:02:515 (3) -
18:45 Tagre: i think the same
18:45 Tagre: ok
18:46 tellertheworld: 00:23:881 (3) - distance not balance
18:47 Tagre: done
18:47 tellertheworld: 00:23:588 (1,2,3) -
18:47 tellertheworld: 00:31:052 (1,2) - the rhythm not speed up here
18:48 Tagre: hmm
18:48 Tagre: sorry but ill keep it
18:51 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qjDF.png
18:52 Tagre: waht time
18:52 tellertheworld: 00:36:906 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
18:53 tellertheworld: 00:36:906 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) ?
18:53 Tagre: what is wrong?
18:53 Tagre: angles between?
18:53 tellertheworld: yea
18:54 Tagre: hmm
18:54 Tagre: wait a sec
18:54 Tagre: i have to play this
18:54 tellertheworld: 00:37:052 (4) - too far and angle problem.
18:55 Tagre: x:272 y:160 is better?
18:58 tellertheworld: I think this
18:58 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qk6D.png
18:59 tellertheworld: But I amp id you like~
18:59 tellertheworld: if
18:59 tellertheworld: .. But u should map if u like
18:59 Tagre: hmm
18:59 Tagre: i will think about this later
19:00 tellertheworld: 01:12:174 - break to long here?
19:01 Tagre: long slider
19:01 Tagre: ?
19:03 tellertheworld: I not think there is long slider
19:03 Tagre: http://puu.sh/7qkrN.jpg
19:03 Tagre: something like this
19:04 Tagre: 6 is on 2
19:04 tellertheworld: how about this?
19:04 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qksL.jpg
19:04 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qkkV.png 01:08:954 (2,4) -
19:04 Tagre: yeah i made this XD
19:05 Tagre: ok
19:05 tellertheworld: look it not beautiful
19:05 Tagre: done
19:06 tellertheworld: 01:23:735 (7) - should be slider
19:07 tellertheworld: song setup > colours
19:07 tellertheworld: U should setup some colours to match the song/map
19:08 tellertheworld: U can make it easily so mapper usually make it
19:08 Tagre: ok
19:09 Tagre: i will make them
19:09 tellertheworld: song setup > design
19:10 tellertheworld: Display epilepsy warning should be reject
19:10 Tagre: ok
19:11 tellertheworld: timing hitsound always 60%?
19:12 Tagre: yes
19:12 tellertheworld: The Display epilepsy warning is for SB.
19:12 Tagre: sounds good so i didnt change it
19:12 Tagre: ok
19:12 Tagre: i will remember
19:13 tellertheworld: 01:00:320 - kiai time not end here
19:14 Tagre: ok
19:14 tellertheworld: the sound jump here but it not change the rhythm
19:14 tellertheworld: 01:09:686 - ^
19:15 tellertheworld: that all for insane
19:16 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qlgg.png
19:16 tellertheworld: ONCE isnt snapped
19:18 tellertheworld: Call me if u finish ur change in Insance
19:18 tellertheworld: Insane
19:19 Tagre: ok
19:20 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/341329 Suzumu feat. Soraru - Zetsubousei: Hero Chiryouyaku (TV Size) [Hard]]
19:20 tellertheworld: 00:09:540 - 'di' sound start here
19:21 tellertheworld: 00:09:978 (1) - u follow 'fi' sound here but you do not follow it before.
19:22 Tagre: sorry but it is too much for remap
19:23 tellertheworld: 00:23:588 (6,1) -
19:23 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qlJ7.png
19:23 tellertheworld: blanket it
19:24 Tagre: donr
19:24 Tagre: done
19:26 tellertheworld: 01:10:856 (2) - ^
19:27 tellertheworld: sorry I am error in OSU..
19:27 Tagre: done
19:27 tellertheworld: song setup > desgin >
19:28 tellertheworld: Widscreen support and...
19:28 tellertheworld: Display epilepsy warning
19:28 Tagre: ok
19:28 tellertheworld: reject it.
19:29 tellertheworld: kiai same at Insane
19:29 Tagre: done
19:29 tellertheworld: check the Aimod
19:29 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qmay.png
19:29 Tagre: i know i fixed it before
19:30 tellertheworld: For General
19:31 tellertheworld: ur map is too many set to song. U should try to set in voice.
19:32 tellertheworld: And hard should not speed to 1.5X SV . U can set to 1.2X SV. (this I cannot sure)
19:33 Tagre: i set speed on 1,3
19:34 tellertheworld: Okay~
19:34 tellertheworld: Call me if u finish ur change
19:35 Tagre: done
19:35 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/341331 Suzumu feat. Soraru - Zetsubousei: Hero Chiryouyaku (TV Size) [Normal]]
19:35 tellertheworld: 00:12:320 (4) - blanket it..
19:36 Tagre: done
19:36 tellertheworld: normal map must? open the Distance snap and map it.
19:37 tellertheworld: 00:04:857 (4) -
19:37 tellertheworld: and no jump in normal
19:38 tellertheworld: and SV should keep in 1.0X
19:38 tellertheworld: item and item should keep 1.00X in next and prev.
19:39 tellertheworld: In the rhythm. U should try to listen what vioce is loud and u can map there.
19:40 tellertheworld: e.g. 00:10:418 -
19:41 tellertheworld: But I am not good at hard/normal/easy. So I was learn with my friend
19:42 Tagre: im not good too
19:42 Tagre: ;_;
19:42 tellertheworld: song setup > design...
19:43 tellertheworld: U know that- -"
19:43 Tagre: xD
19:43 Tagre: yes
19:43 tellertheworld: Easy song setup too...
19:43 Tagre: k
19:43 tellertheworld: Easy 00:02:954 (3) - distance not balance
19:44 Tagre: but easy is not mine
19:44 Tagre: i can change it but Wojowu will be mad at me
19:44 Tagre: ;_;
19:44 tellertheworld: oh..
19:44 Tagre: but
19:44 Tagre: you can write errors to me
19:45 Tagre: and i will take them to Wojowu
19:45 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7qnju.png
19:45 tellertheworld: kiai time
19:47 tellertheworld: the easy too hard?
19:47 tellertheworld: look like normal
19:47 tellertheworld: but I am not sure...
19:47 Tagre: normal is harder than easy
19:48 Tagre: but normal is too hard
19:48 Tagre: xD
19:48 tellertheworld: 01:00:320 (1,2,1) - too hard..
19:48 tellertheworld: 01:14:662 (2,3,4,1) -
19:49 tellertheworld: U can find my friend. she is good at mod hard/normal
19:49 tellertheworld: [http://osu.ppy.sh/u/1856463 IamKwaN]
19:50 tellertheworld: U can ask her if she have some time
19:50 Tagre: ok
19:50 Tagre: i will
19:50 Tagre: thanks
19:50 tellertheworld: But I was error Osu so I dont have any savelog...
19:51 tellertheworld: Can you save it and send to me?

Julini wrote:

Hi, a really nice map Here is my mod~

Normal

Volume corrections to let it sound epicer~

00:08:808 - 00:28:564 Volume 85%
00:28:710 - 00:31:491 Volume 30%
00:31:491 - 00:33:832 Volume 35%
00:33:832 - 00:35:588 Volume 50%
00:38:076 - 00:56:808 Volume 75%
00:56:808 - 01:15:539 Volume 85% are these mods for entire mapset?

And something more:

00:01:344 first part of the slider should be whistle
00:04:856 ^
00:34:125 remove whistles of the slider and add claps as before
00:44:369 remove whistle

Julini~

Tagre wrote:

are these mods for entire mapset?

Jemmmmy wrote:

Hi, from my M4M queue
[easy]
00:02:954 (3,4) - check the distance
00:17:735 (4) - try other shape? break the consistency
01:22:125 (6,1) - bad overlap
[normal]
00:11:881 (4,6) - try snap two sliders' end in fact, but i made them blanket so there is a lot of work so i wont do this, sorry ;_;
00:29:442 (2) - try ok
00:44:369 (3) - decrease the angle ok
[Hard]
00:37:052 (4,5) - 5 is not flow well i dont understand what are you talking about. you mean replace it?
00:39:247 - ok
00:46:564 (1) - nc ok
[insane]
00:24:759 (2) - ctrl+g? ok, and reversed 00:25:052 (3) - also
00:26:808 (2,3) - ok
00:45:832 (6) - ok
00:51:247 (4) - nc ok

1. Uncheck All diff "LetterBox During Breaks" there's no break time
2. Just Easy diff checked display warning. uncheck plz. there's no storyboard
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:12:320 (5) - NC here
2. 00:33:686 (2) - Finish. i can hear beat here
3. 01:14:808 (4,5) - i think this beat is right but yours are enough nice so just suggestion
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:19:052 (3) - maybe this slider should be end at 01:19:637
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:25:637 (6) - how about make this slider's shape same with 00:25:052 (4) - ? so it goes bend straight bend straight
2. 00:51:540 (5) - Ctrl + G looks better flow
3. 01:03:832 (1,2) - this is really not that good flow. i recommend Ctrl+g 01:03:832 (1) - this one or change pattern

1. Test Play

   
2. 00:19:784 (2) - slider's speed goes different NC plz
3. 00:22:125 (3) - ^
4. 01:05:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is overbeat. can't hear triplet i think this is right beat
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:12:320 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - ^
   SPOILER

   

Neta wrote:

Hi~ from my modding queue i think i'm little late sorry

[General]

1. Uncheck All diff "LetterBox During Breaks" there's no break time
2. Just Easy diff checked display warning. uncheck plz. there's no storyboard
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:12:320 (5) - NC here
2. 00:33:686 (2) - Finish. i can hear beat here
3. 01:14:808 (4,5) - i think this beat is right but yours are enough nice so just suggestion
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:19:052 (3) - maybe this slider should be end at 01:19:637
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:25:637 (6) - how about make this slider's shape same with 00:25:052 (4) - ? so it goes bend straight bend straight
2. 00:51:540 (5) - Ctrl + G looks better flow
3. 01:03:832 (1,2) - this is really not that good flow. i recommend Ctrl+g 01:03:832 (1) - this one or change pattern

[Insane]

1. Test Play

   
2. 00:19:784 (2) - slider's speed goes different NC plz
3. 00:22:125 (3) - ^
4. 01:05:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is overbeat. can't hear triplet i think this is right beat
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:12:320 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - ^
   SPOILER

   
   I didn't follow these two mods because I can hear triplets in there lol
   

GOOD LUCK!

1. Since you've added hitcircle.png into your beatmap file, you'll have to add sliderborder at the bottom of the [color] part in every .osu file. Something like Sliderborder: 255,255,255 might be rankable, anyways you can choose any RBG value to make your sliderborder more colorful.
2. Source should be the full name of the anime I think, so replace current source as Danganronpa: Kibou no Gakuen to Zetsubou no Koukousei The Animation would be a great idea. (Even though short name is still acceptable, I'd like to suggest you to type the full name of it.) >>EXAMPLE<<
3. You could add more tags! Such as the character's name (in romaji), the Japanese of the anime's name, ending due to it's the ending theme of the anime. That would be more searchable by adding these keywords!
4. Perhaps you'll need to add AudioLeadIn on your map, since the first note will just be appeared in 0.6 secs after you start your playing. I thought that at least 2 secs (2000 ms) is the minimum length to be rankable, so add 1500ms to audioleadin might be a great idea.

1. 00:01:345 (3,4) - / 00:02:515 (3) - / 00:03:686 (3,4) - I can't see any consistency between these objects, but the music there is totally the same among these three time point. Make sure the hitsound of these three pattern is the same, so the map itself here won't sound that messy.
2. 00:04:857 (3) - The finish sound here is pretty useless in my opinion. Since the music isn't that loud around this object, finish sound might be too noisy to follow the music. Two whistles to place at the sliderhead and the slidertail of this slider would sound nice I think.
3. 00:08:808 (4) - You should add a new combo here to separate the "streamy" music and the music before this object. Also, remove the new combo on 00:09:320 (1) -.
4. 00:09:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like the flow of this stream, it could be better by fixing the shape of it. Something like the following picture would look nice imo cuz the shape is more curve.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:12:320 (4) - / 00:17:003 (4) - Add new combos on these objects to follow your new combo rule.
6. 00:25:052 (3,4,5) - This pattern might be a bit crowded in my eye. Perhaps move (4) upwards?
7. 00:37:345 (6) - Move this note to x:352, y:32, so the distance between 00:37:052 (4,6) - and 00:36:906 (3,6) - will be the same afterwards.
8. 00:47:149 - Why not add something here to fill the break? I think you can add a 4-note-stream to follow the music, but it depends on you. :p
9. 00:50:661 - Same opinion as ^. Add a note here to continue the 1/2 rhythm?

Flask wrote:

Hi! Sorry for huge delay.
Since you're beginner in mapping world, I'll only point out some important issue to let you know.

[General]

1. Since you've added hitcircle.png into your beatmap file, you'll have to add sliderborder at the bottom of the [color] part in every .osu file. Something like Sliderborder: 255,255,255 might be rankable, anyways you can choose any RBG value to make your sliderborder more colorful.
2. Source should be the full name of the anime I think, so replace current source as Danganronpa: Kibou no Gakuen to Zetsubou no Koukousei The Animation would be a great idea. (Even though short name is still acceptable, I'd like to suggest you to type the full name of it.) >>EXAMPLE<<
3. You could add more tags! Such as the character's name (in romaji), the Japanese of the anime's name, ending due to it's the ending theme of the anime. That would be more searchable by adding these keywords!
4. Perhaps you'll need to add AudioLeadIn on your map, since the first note will just be appeared in 0.6 secs after you start your playing. I thought that at least 2 secs (2000 ms) is the minimum length to be rankable, so add 1500ms to audioleadin might be a great idea.

[Insane]

1. 00:01:345 (3,4) - / 00:02:515 (3) - / 00:03:686 (3,4) - I can't see any consistency between these objects, but the music there is totally the same among these three time point. Make sure the hitsound of these three pattern is the same, so the map itself here won't sound that messy.
2. 00:04:857 (3) - The finish sound here is pretty useless in my opinion. Since the music isn't that loud around this object, finish sound might be too noisy to follow the music. Two whistles to place at the sliderhead and the slidertail of this slider would sound nice I think.
3. 00:08:808 (4) - You should add a new combo here to separate the "streamy" music and the music before this object. Also, remove the new combo on 00:09:320 (1) -.
4. 00:09:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like the flow of this stream, it could be better by fixing the shape of it. Something like the following picture would look nice imo cuz the shape is more curve.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:12:320 (4) - / 00:17:003 (4) - Add new combos on these objects to follow your new combo rule.
6. 00:25:052 (3,4,5) - This pattern might be a bit crowded in my eye. Perhaps move (4) upwards?
7. 00:37:345 (6) - Move this note to x:352, y:32, so the distance between 00:37:052 (4,6) - and 00:36:906 (3,6) - will be the same afterwards.
8. 00:47:149 - Why not add something here to fill the break? I think you can add a 4-note-stream to follow the music, but it depends on you. :p
9. 00:50:661 - Same opinion as ^. Add a note here to continue the 1/2 rhythm?

That's it. I'd just mod insane difficulty. I think you should try to look at other people's map to learn how to place the objects wisely and nicely, because to be honest, your diff is still a mess. But the rhythm is kinda fine, and the hitsounds aren't a big problem. The next step you should do is to mod more and more maps and try to follow the placement of a "great map" that you think. That would help your map much.

Good luck! This map has potential!

neonat wrote:

General

Offset should be 1/2 beat earlier (so tracking back your offset, 466) because this song the starting of each phrase is an offbeat, but currently they are all on onbeat. Hearing the ticks, it sounds weird.

Normal

00:01:784 (3) - I feel using the same rhythm as 00:00:613 (1,2) would be better, as this slider feels out of place
00:02:954 (1) - this slider ends on no particular beat in the music, it is better to end the slider at 00:03:393
00:03:832 (2) - shift to 00:03:686

SPOILER

00:07:637 (1) - 00:05:295 (1,2) is still fine because of consistency with each other but for 00:07:637 (1) it should end at 00:08:369 with the music
00:24:028 (1,3) - you could blanket better by shifting around the objects
00:50:954 (3) - end at 00:51:393 with the vocals
00:52:125 (1) - end with vocals at 00:52:856
01:01:784 (1) - shift slider so it starts from 01:01:930 and ends at 01:02:222
01:12:613 (1) - it feels weird because the held vocal only starts at 01:12:759 - so possibly have a separate note at 01:12:612 if you still want that portion mapped and have a slider from 01:12:759 to 01:13:198
01:19:052 (3) - nicer if ends at 01:19:783

Hard

00:28:710 (1) - sounds abrupt, end at 00:29:149
00:40:125 (2) - doesn't really fit the rhythm here, try this with 2 sliders instead?

SPOILER

01:24:613 (3) - add a finish on the end of slider too

Insane

00:04:857 (3) - replacing this with a triplet might be nicer
00:18:906 (5) - don't repeat and link it up with 00:19:344 (1) by having a stream? You can hear the drums over here, like this:

SPOILER

00:23:296 (5) - don't stack it on 00:23:003 (4) but have some jump instead
00:32:369 (4) - shorten it to end at 00:32:588 and have a note at 00:32:661 - either slider to 00:32:808 or the 2 circles, but basically this rhythm:

SPOILER

00:36:467 (2) - same suggestion ^ because of the quick double words he says
00:40:198 (3) - split slider to triplets
00:53:296 (8) - NC to shorten combo
00:56:076 (1,2,3,1) - please have a way to differentiate the timing differences between 00:56:369 (2,3) and 00:56:662 (3,1) - equal distance spacing between them when the time between the objects are not the same is not good and confuses people. Either change the spacings for them or stack 00:56:662 (3) and 00:56:808 (1) on each other i will consider this
01:19:417 - add a note

Good Luck 1300th post!

yurunneram wrote:

requested through PM

Hi there \(//w//)/

Anyways exams incoming. So I can't do proper mod here. Still your Normal is good (star for that) and I can't mod beyond that. No kudosu for this thankyou. Just a run through

GENERAL

Please remove "chiryouyaku suzumu soraru" from tags as they are already in the source and artist

Also would be recommended to switch combo colours 4 and 3 since 4 is very close to 1

EASY

First of all, nice circle size

00:02:954 (3,4) - Please stick to x0.9 spacing for everything. This is an easy diff.

00:24:027 (4) - The DS is nearly x1 with previous and x0.8 with next. Stick to 0.9 please

01:01:491 (1) - DS with previous

01:14:661 (2,3) - DS

01:22:125 (6,7,1) - DS

I actually find the rhythm very difficult for an Easy diff. I'd highly recommend simplifying it. Won't mod note placement or anything if the DS isn't fixed though. DS is most important in Easy diffs. No modifying whatsoever. I'll do a better mod if I have time to come back in the future.

Lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala second attempts are always respected. Good luck

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[General]
Personally I'd change the offset to 613 to keep the beats consistent with the music bars. You should only need to change the red timing point.

[Wojowu's Easy]
Lots of weird 2½ beat gaps here. I think they're bad for an Easy diff. The 0.9x distance spacing is really obvious too.
Not too much to say, pretty good diff.

[Normal]
00:04:856 (4) - Remove finish from the start. ok
00:07:637 (1) - Shorten to 00:08:076 ok
00:08:368 - Add a note. ok
00:10:710 (2) - Lengthen to 00:11:002 no
00:11:880 (4) - Lengthen to 00:12:173 no
00:15:393 (2) - Lengthen to 00:15:685 no
00:29:149 - Add a note. ok
00:40:563 (1) - Delete, add new notes at 00:40:417 and 00:40:710. ok
00:59:002 - Add a note. ok
01:14:661 - Add a note. ok
01:16:271 (2) - Lengthen to 01:16:563 no
01:17:441 (4) - Lengthen to 01:17:734 no
01:22:124 (5) - Lengthen to 01:22:417 no

[Hard]
1.5x distance spacing? Eww...
00:27:686 (5,6) - You have a note overlapped with the end of the slider (this is unrankable). perhaps that was mistake after previous editing lol
00:31:052 (1,2) - These don't really fit the rhythm, especially with the huge distance spacing in the rest of the map. i keep my pattern
00:33:393 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:53:734 (5,6) - This doesn't look like a jump. so what it looks like? o.O
01:05:296 (1,2,3,4) - Change to this rhythm: http://puu.sh/8Bt2p.jpg ok

[Insane]
Too hard for me... XD
00:08:808 (1) - Remove two repeats so the slider ends on 00:09:100 and add stream notes at 00:09:173 and 00:09:246. ok
00:51:393 (2,3) - Swap these so that the player flows from top left to bottom middle. no
00:56:076 (1,2,3,1) - The overlaps could be a little more even. Maybe disable grid snap for it. i keep my pattern

Nice maps.

<3 モノクマ

Flask wrote:

That's it. I'd just mod insane difficulty. I think you should try to look at other people's map to learn how to place the objects wisely and nicely, because to be honest, your diff is still a mess. But the rhythm is kinda fine, and the hitsounds aren't a big problem. The next step you should do is to mod more and more maps and try to follow the placement of a "great map" that you think. That would help your map much.

1. offset +5 from current state (325). offset is little early.
2. feel strongly the start is sudden. how about add Lead-In time? I recommend 1000~2000

1. please add Video,0,"video.avi" to Events in .osu file. video is missing in this diff.
2. 00:04:125 (4,5) - well.... try to slider repeat instead of that circle? this is too hard to read as use Easy diff. also 00:05:003 (5) - I can't find proper sound that has matching for circle on here. I heard only chiptune sound instead of drum. so you should use repeat slider...
3. 00:05:296 (1,2) ~ same as above.
4. 00:19:784 (1,2,3) - feel difficult a little bit. how about try to similar with 00:24:467 (1,2) - here?
5. 00:42:320 (3,1) - it's... not good. why don't you use slider like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:491 (4) - if you accept above opinion, please add NewCombo here.

1. 00:08:368 (2,3) - how about use slider too?
2. 00:28:563 ~ hm... current state feel little mess. this is Normal diff. that circle pattern is difficult for Normal diff. how about try remap this part as use long sliders?

1. overall distance like 00:01:493 (3) - this, too far. this diff need more relax at silent part.
2. 00:31:054 (1,2) - eh.... please this pattern only use on Insane. sometimes, some Hard diffs have exception. but, this is not.
3. 00:33:981 ~ please remove some notes or use some long slider or both. should relax like previous part.
4. and.. yea. this diff has so many jump. (I can't assurance that. because of this diff's distance is overall too far.) some jumps are very good for Hard diff. but.. overused is terrible.

1. how about reduce that streams' distance? like 00:08:807 - this part and 01:15:100 - here.
2. 00:39:979 (2,3) - feel too awkward. i recommend use repeat slider as add repeat to 00:39:979 (2) - this note. and adjust placement too.
3. 01:05:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream is feel to suddenly. because of you didn't used many stream at previous parts. how about reduce number of note? in example:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   or
   
   
4. 01:12:320 (7,8,9,1,2) - same as above
5. 01:23:735 (1,2) - please split beat from current state. feel so awkward for now.

Dark Fang wrote:

Flask wrote:

That's it. I'd just mod insane difficulty. I think you should try to look at other people's map to learn how to place the objects wisely and nicely, because to be honest, your diff is still a mess. But the rhythm is kinda fine, and the hitsounds aren't a big problem. The next step you should do is to mod more and more maps and try to follow the placement of a "great map" that you think. That would help your map much.

o_o

[General]

1. offset +5 from current state (325). offset is little early.
2. feel strongly the start is sudden. how about add Lead-In time? I recommend 1000~2000

[Wojowu's Easy]

1. please add Video,0,"video.avi" to Events in .osu file. video is missing in this diff.
2. 00:04:125 (4,5) - well.... try to slider repeat instead of that circle? this is too hard to read as use Easy diff. also 00:05:003 (5) - I can't find proper sound that has matching for circle on here. I heard only chiptune sound instead of drum. so you should use repeat slider...
3. 00:05:296 (1,2) ~ same as above.
4. 00:19:784 (1,2,3) - feel difficult a little bit. how about try to similar with 00:24:467 (1,2) - here?
5. 00:42:320 (3,1) - it's... not good. why don't you use slider like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:491 (4) - if you accept above opinion, please add NewCombo here.

and KIAI time... please fix some things yourself as refer to that modding. I can't mention more.

[Normal]

1. 00:08:368 (2,3) - how about use slider too?
2. 00:28:563 ~ hm... current state feel little mess. this is Normal diff. that circle pattern is difficult for Normal diff. how about try remap this part as use long sliders?

Let me skip Hard and Insane diff. that diffs have many problem that can't improve as moddings. well.. let me notice little thing.

[Hard]

1. overall distance like 00:01:493 (3) - this, too far. this diff need more relax at silent part.
2. 00:31:054 (1,2) - eh.... please this pattern only use on Insane. sometimes, some Hard diffs have exception. but, this is not.
3. 00:33:981 ~ please remove some notes or use some long slider or both. should relax like previous part.
4. and.. yea. this diff has so many jump. (I can't assurance that. because of this diff's distance is overall too far.) some jumps are very good for Hard diff. but.. overused is terrible.

[Insane]

1. how about reduce that streams' distance? like 00:08:807 - this part and 01:15:100 - here.
2. 00:39:979 (2,3) - feel too awkward. i recommend use repeat slider as add repeat to 00:39:979 (2) - this note. and adjust placement too.
3. 01:05:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream is feel to suddenly. because of you didn't used many stream at previous parts. how about reduce number of note? in example:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   or
   
   
4. 01:12:320 (7,8,9,1,2) - same as above
5. 01:23:735 (1,2) - please split beat from current state. feel so awkward for now.

be honest... I can say Hard, Insane diffs are 'little' terrible. that placement and idea is good. but express is not good..