[Lally's Normal]
00:05:999 (3,4) - why don't you lengthen (3) until the red tick and remove (4)? it would fit better to the beat, and I think the beginning shouldn't be so fast anyway, for example:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/120959400:10:682 (3,4) - same here ^ -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/120960900:11:853 (1,2) - you should ctrl+g these on the timeline, it doesn't feel nice to click on (2) because it is not really on a big beat and there is fast melody going on after hitting (1), and if the hit circle was here 00:12:731 - it would feel better to hit it then using only a slider end at a big beat
00:32:926 (1,2) - I think this would fit better because (1) has a kind of...repeating sound, the vocals go from low to high and then go back to low, and thats why it is also a bit weird to start (2) at that point -
http://puu.sh/62jCX.jpg00:43:170 (2,3) - I think this would fit better to the rhythm, because in your version (2) ends on a bigger beat than the start of the slider, so it would be better if you started a slider there (focus on the timeline rather than the actualy pattern plz
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http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/121399600:49:755 (3,4) - it doesn't really play well if you end (3) on the red tick, and there are also hardly any big beats at that spot, so I would remove (4) and lengthen (3)
02:25:024 (1,1) - these two combo colours are too similar so if you really want to have a new combo at least change the color(?)
[Insane]
Priti:00:05:414 (3,1) - why so close? put (1) further, it's confusing to have such low distance, well an example:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/120578900:06:877 (4) - I would rather use a hit circle, since there is only one big beat, it would be much better if it was emphasized with a hit circle and not a slider
00:08:194 (4) - remove hit circle, sounds unnecessary and overmapped :< and removing it will emphasize the big beat from previous better imo
00:08:341 (1,2,3) - use some soft hitsounds on 00:08:341 (1) - end of the slider and 00:08:633 (2) - beginning and end of the slider and 00:09:072 (3) - (though tbh I would delete 3 because it sounds a bit overmapped but that's just my opinion)
00:10:097 (6,1) - too close again, just like the first suggestion
00:10:682 (1) - use soft sampleset on the end of the slider (you can add whistle or whatever if you think it fits) but in general if you use soft sampleset and normal sampleset at the part of the song, which is calm and not so loud, you can emphasize the bigger beats better, and it doesn't sound "overmapped", and on this slider there is a melody at the end of the slider, but it's not a big beat, so you should use soft sampleset, and normal sampleset at the beginning of the slider sounds right
00:11:268 (3) - use soft sampleset on both slider start and end because the song is soft here and there are no big beats and it will emphasize 00:11:560 (4) - the slider start a lot better
00:13:316 (2) - use soft sampleset on both slider start and end
01:26:487 (4,5,1) - don't use the same distance, it's confusing, and on the timeline there is a big gpa between (5) and (1), I would probably stack (4) and (5) or I would put (5) under (4) (as a blanket not overlap)
01:30:804 - add hit circle, there is a kind of sound in the music which could be emphasized, I think it would fit nicely (it's hard to explain but it sounds like when you're playing music and the computer freezes so it keep repeating the same sound) - you also did it like that here 01:34:243 (2,3,4) -
01:31:975 - same as above ^ - it is the same as this 01:34:243 (2,3,4) -
01:35:414 (4,5,6) - use the same spacing as you used 01:34:243 (2,3,4) - I don't see a reason to use different distance, and using the same will make your map more consistent imo
01:36:585 (2,3,4) - same ^
Ends:00:14:194 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, because the music has a similar "finish" sound
00:15:072 (4) - it would be better if you used a hit circle instead of a slider because it would emphasize the big beat better, and this is only the beginning of the song, there is no need to map so much imo :< (well if you don't want to do it, at least use soft sampleset at the end of the slider to emphasize the big beat at the beginning of the slider and because it won't sound overmapped even if there is almost nothing on the red tick)
00:15:365 (1) - use soft sampleset on the slider end so that it doesn't sound weird and because it will emphasize the beat on 00:15:804 (2) - better
00:15:950 (3) - use soft sampleset on both ends please, there are no loud sounds here
00:16:243 (4) - use soft sampleset on slider end
Well I'm not gonna highlight each note, but I hope you'll take these hitsound suggestions and go through your part!
00:16:975 (2,3) - ctrl+g on the timeline, it sounds a lot better to have the slider start on the white tick and to have the hit circle on the red tick, the melody in the song is also like that, there is a higher melody on the white tick so it's better to start the slider there
00:19:902 (1) - you should use a hit circle here, it sounds too much to have anything on the red tick, and slider start on red tick doesn't always fit, so use a hit circle on the white tick (at the end of the slider)
00:21:658 (2,3,4) - similar suggestion to 00:16:975 (2,3) -
http://puu.sh/61iLE.jpg and the same reason, it sounds better and also plays better if the sliders start on the white tick, and it also fits better to the melody
00:47:414 (2,3,4) - same as the suggestion above ^ I can hear those weird sounds starting on the white ticks, so start the sliders on the white ticks
02:16:389 (2,3,4) - 02:17:560 (1,2,3) - 02:18:731 (2,3,4) - why didn't you use the same spacing?
02:19:975 - add hit circle, just like you did 02:18:804 (3) -
02:20:341 (1,1) - was the overlap intended? well imo it would look nicer if you put 02:20:341 (1) - a bit up, but if that's what you wanetd to achieve, okay
02:34:682 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the musich as a similar sound and the louder part will be emphasized better
03:07:170 (1) - use soft sampleset on slider end, since there is nothing loud at that point and the song is calm here
03:18:585 (6,7) - first of all, I think the placement of (6) doesn't look nice, I would rather place it like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1207606 - but anyway I would rather ctrl+g 03:18:585 (6,7) - because it would fit better to the melody and the big beat, it doesn't feel good to hit (7) because it starts on a red tick where there are no big beats
03:30:877 (1) - add finish to the beginning fo the slider to emphasize the change in the song and because there is a sound like that in the song
03:34:097 - add hit circle because you followed the melody here (well and also the vocals) 03:33:658 (2,3) - so it is weird that you're not following it anymore
to be continued...
Trauma: Done by me
Insane: Done by me & Foreverends (Storyboard by KiyoshiX101)
Hard: Done by Nemis
Normal: Done by Lally
Easy: Done by Silverboxer
