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Title:quantum jump
TitleUnicode:quantum jump
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:Marika
Creator:Tari
Version:Umi's Easy
Source:Fureraba ~Friend to Lover~
Tags:visual novel eroge game opening moe galgame angel note wafu -umi- smee
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Trust wrote:

Hey Tari. My power got knocked for 60 hours because of an ice storm that rolled through Southern Ontario, but i'm glad it's back and I could get to mod this. So yeah sorry i'm late, rl has been rough lately.

These are all suggestions,
feel free to use any~

[Umi's Easy]
00:38:983 (1) - Missing a finish here.
01:18:675 (3,1,2) - The blankets for these sliders are all just a bit off by barely a few grids.

Well not much to say for this one. I do want to mention though that, setup settings aside, this map plays very similar in difficulty to the Normal. In any case, well done on this!
[Normal]
AR+1. This would make sense in terms of balancing the spread and creating a greater gap in difficulty between this diff and Umi's Easy. Probably not, its a relax song, lower settings are always good.

00:11:752 (3) - Spacing inconsistency. Consider shifting this slider upwards
00:14:060 (2) - ^
00:22:367 (4) - It would probably flow more nicely if you had this head/tail of this reverse slider pointing towards 00:23:752 (5).
01:15:906 (1) - This can be perfectly symmetrical if the tail is a tiny bit further down.
01:24:213 (2,3) - I would prefer to see a reverse slider here instead like you did for 01:16:829 (2) and other similar sounds. Nope, ruin consistency.

Fun stuff.
[Wafu's Hard]
OD+1. You're using the same as normal.

00:23:752 - Consider removing 00:23:983 (2) and using a 1/2 slider here instead because it feels empty here. Not to mention the 3/2 felt a bit awkward the first play-through, especially after hearing the clap on the tail of 00:22:367 (1).

Very nice.
[Insane]
00:18:675 (1,2) - This can definitely blanket more nicely.
00:29:752 (1,2,3) - Not sure if you were going for shape variety here but (2) feels a bit out of place. Especially since if you curved it like the adjacent sliders, it would bring out a nice pinwheel image:

SPOILER

00:32:752 (4,5) - The formation here can be a bit cleaner. Both these sliders fit together nicely as in (4) blankets the body of (5), but it seems like one of them is a bit too curvy for the other, or the other way around. Consider either option to bring out a cool rainbow effect:

SPOILER

00:50:752 (3) - This slider could look a bit cleaner. Perhaps adjusting the anchors so you can get the slightly sharp point evenly placed between the head and tail. This should make the curvy V-shape more clean and recognizable.
00:54:444 (3) - Similar case as above. This time just pull the red anchor slightly to the right (a grid or two may be good)
00:56:060 (6) - Rotate this like 2° or so to get more of a blanket with the tail of 00:56:983 (1)
00:59:752 (6) - Don't like this slider personally, feels pretty dull imo. There's so much build up in the music here with the guitar sounds (I think that's what they are) in the BGM that you can easily emphasize with two 1/2 sliders. Try it out, I think it makes a much more exciting transition into the stream.
01:04:829 (1,2,3) - The flow here wasn't very comfortable when I played it. The little nudge between 01:05:290 (2,3) just felt awkward because of how it followed a spaced jump from (1) and I don't really feel that there's anything in the music to denote such a sudden spacing decrease. Consider adjusting to this formation:

SPOILER

Alternatively you can adjust the slider to blanket properly and keep a consistent distance here:

SPOILER

01:22:367 (4) - Curve the same as (5)?

Great work Tari!

So yeah, the rhythm and hitsounding are pretty solid with how you've approached it in this map, and the diffs are really nicely done.
Best of luck on this~

-APXH wrote:

LOL it's quite sad that I was so busy that I couldn't get to many of my request moddings.

[Insane]
00:55:367 (5) - The slider stand out like a thumb, and doesn't really go with the flow of the beatmap (It's a bit too... Circle-ish? Yeah, I don't have vocabulary...) It makes a smile
01:03:444 (6,7,8,9,1) - Tilt your head both ways of sides to make sure that the star is symmetrical (Might be a minuscule thing though)

[Wafu's Hard]
01:01:829 (2) - Possibly flip endings of slider?

[Normal]
00:08:521 (5) - Wow, that whistle surprised me. It was kinda random considering that the only OTHER hitsounds used was clap2. No hitsound changes, they sound nice to me tbh
00:17:752 (3,4) - I think using normal-whistle for the end of the slider and the combo sounds better
00:22:367 (4) - Same as above, except this time it's the first time the slider hits the first end, and then the second end, so keep the clap on the third hit of the combo (Ask me to try to rephrase this if you don't understand, 'k?)
00:25:136 (3,4) - Same as the one two above this one
00:29:752 (4) - What's with the shape of the slider? (Also the same as the one two above this mod)

[Umi's Easy]
00:32:521 (3) - If this is the case, why not change soft-sliderslide3 into "soft-slidertick3" since the "clap" falls on the slider's tick
00:39:906 (2) - Same as above
00:46:367 (1) - ^
00:58:367 (2) - ^
01:02:060 (2) - ^

Yay~ I like this song.

Alternative wrote:

Hi. My mod via your request form.

Just for suggestion.

[General]

1. Change the source to フレラバ 〜Friend to Lover〜 and add tags Fureraba ~Friend to Lover~
2. add Meis Clauson to tag. He is a composer of this song

[Easy]

1. 00:12:213 (3) - I felt uneasy about this distance. For myself, ±0.03 from 1.00 is better
2. 00:14:060 (2) - move to x:196 y:276. good for blanket
3. 00:17:752 (2,3) - mmm it's overlap. I think it is inappropriate for easy.
4. 00:23:752 - plz consider about adding note here.
5. 00:29:290 (2,3) - overlapped
6. 00:37:829 (4) - consider to use ctrl+j
7. 00:46:367 (1) - sorry for trival pointing out. it is 1.04
8. 00:47:983 (2) - appropriate for easy? I think a little bit overlapped
9. 00:52:598 (4) - consider to use ctrl+j
10. 00:56:290 (5) - how about adding a waypoint to curve it
11. 01:06:444 (4) - ^
12. 01:09:444 (2) - how about Ctrl+J and re-put
13. 01:20:521 (2) - move to x356 y340 is better
14. 01:21:213 (3) - Ctrl+H and re-put?
15. 01:24:906 (3,4) - how about under pic?
    
    SPOILER

    

[Normal]

1. 00:02:060 (1) - try like this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:02:983 (2,3) - set these same the y-axis
3. 00:03:675 (3) - how about putting like parallel to the x-axis?
4. 00:04:829 (5) - It sticks out a little bit. please move more left
5. 00:05:290 (6) - try under
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:08:983 (6) - like under? I prefer current one
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:14:521 (3,5) - set the same y-axis already same y-axis
8. 00:17:752 (3) - how about adding a waypoint to make a curve?
9. 00:22:367 (4) - how about? flow to 5 will be broken.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:25:136 (3) - how about adding a waypoint and making a blanket with 00:26:521 (4) -
11. 00:29:290 (3,4) - blanket
12. 00:31:136 (5,1) - ^ no change, its new rhythm here
13. 00:32:521 (2) - how about making a parallel to the x-axis no, curve makes next note little curved
14. 00:36:444 (1) - consider to use ctrl+H and re-put no change, slider is fine
15. 00:38:521 (4) - sticks out. move right
16. 00:37:829 (3,1) - use the same shape slider no change, its not same combo
17. 00:39:906 (2) - your mistook? the differ distance here
18. 00:43:136 (3,4) - overlapped I don't see problem.
19. 00:47:983 (3) - parallel to the x-axis no, curve slider makes it curved
20. 00:50:060 (1) - consider to use ctrl+H and re-put I think current slider fine
21. 00:51:444 (2) - parallel to x I don't see problem
22. 01:05:752 (3) - ctrl+J and re-put?
23. 01:08:521 (1) - according to 01:07:598 (5) - this,you can remove a waypoint to make straight no current slider is fine, and that would ruin flow
24. 01:09:906 (3) - how about like this
    
    SPOILER

    
25. 01:11:752 (5,1) - overlapped it suppose to stack orz
26. 01:13:136 (2) - how about Ctrl+J and H and G
27. 01:15:444 (6) - add a waypoint and make a curve
28. 01:16:829 (2) - how about removing a waypoint to make a straight nope, its fine
29. 01:19:136 (6) - how about like this
    
    SPOILER

    

[Hard]

1. 00:05:752 (1) - mmm how about removing one waypoint to make just gentle curve?
2. 00:32:290 (2) - how about putting like this
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:983 (1) - Rotate?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:20:521 (1) - how about making like symmetry
   
   SPOILER

   
   nice hard

[Insane]

1. 00:02:290 (2) - move to x112 y112
2. 00:03:675 (1,2,3) - consider about 00:04:829 (4) - , how about it
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:05:983 (2) - x56 y232
4. 00:11:752 (2,3) - make a blanket
5. 00:12:675 (5) - just suggestion. how about it?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:17:290 (2,3) - more Rotate and make a blanket
7. 00:22:367 (1,2,3) - use same slider shape
8. 00:22:829 (2,3,4) - blanket
9. 00:22:829 (2,5) - stack more accurate
10. 00:23:752 (4,5) - how about ctrl+G?
11. 00:27:906 (1,2) - make it like this
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:30:675 (3) - Rotate 1 degree
13. 00:32:752 (4) - x264 y260
14. 00:35:290 (3) - Rotate and make like this
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 00:35:983 (5,6) - consider about flow, how about ctrl+G?
16. 00:36:444 (1) - how about adding a waypoint to make a curve to blanket 00:36:213 (6) -
17. 00:49:598 (9,1) - use the same shape?
18. 00:52:367 (6) - x88 y268
19. 00:52:598 (7) - umm how about ctrl+j and rotate it
20. 00:55:367 (5) - Rotate 4 degree
21. 00:56:060 (6) - 1 grid left
22. 01:00:444 (7) - 2 grids left
23. 01:00:675 (8,9,10,11,1) - make these parallel
24. 01:02:521 (4) - 1 grid down?
25. 01:03:444 (6) - Rotate -4 degree
26. 01:04:136 (7,8,9) - how about changing order 01:04:367 (8) - to 01:04:136 (7) - to 01:04:598 (9) -
27. 01:06:213 (4) - like this
    
    SPOILER

    
28. 01:06:444 (5,6,7,9) - use the same shape
29. 01:07:829 (8) - x240 y320
30. 01:14:752 (3) - just for suggestion. how about stacking to 01:15:444 (5) - 's head?
31. 01:23:290 (1) - 3 grids right?
32. 01:24:213 (3,4) - rotate and get a blanket with 01:23:290 (1) -
33. 01:25:136 (1) - 3 grids up?
    Fix some nazi blankets and stuff o/

OK done.
Sorry for my silly English
Nice song~
Good luck
you forgot to write your name on your request form. Don't do that next time~

Lust wrote:

Mod request

1. The kiai times aren't consistent throughout all the difficulties. My suggestion is make them all match Tari's difficulties.

[Umi's Easy]

1. The reddish combo color is kind of hard to see on the background.
2. 00:02:060 (1,2) - (Nazi) the blanket isn't completely perfect. If you ctrl+g (1) and use the approach circle you can see what I mean.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:598 (4,2) - You can have the ends of these sliders stack better than this. 00:21:444 (2) - Move this to 372:223. It also doesn't mess around with your pattern as much.
4. 00:22:136 (3,4) - (Nazi) This blanket is off as well too. Move the slider midpoint to 183:170 and the endpoint to 118:142
5. 00:29:290 (2,3) - Stacking objects 1/2 apart from eachother in an easy is not recommended. Newer players will be clicking too fast and will end up missing the notes.
6. 00:47:983 (2,3) - This would turn out more interesting if you slanted these two sliders. It will also help out the flow since the first slider kind of kills it.
   
   SPOILER

   
   If you decide to follow this suggestion be sure to adjust the spacing in the following pattern
7. 00:50:983 (2,3,4) - Having these all connect confuses the player, the newbie will fumble around with his fingers trying to hit the sliders one after eachother. I know I had a problem doing things like this even now.
8. 00:53:752 (1,2) - Linear flow is weird and hard to play sometimes. Try adding a curve to it. Have the first note curve down with the slider before it and then the second note above it. Adjust the spacing if you decide to accept the suggestion.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:54:675 (3,4,5) - Same thing as before
10. 00:56:290 (5,1,2) - This overall pattern is confusing. You go down and back up again. (2) stacks with (5) which makes it hard to read
11. 00:59:521 (3) - This doesn't hold the rhythm well as I hoped. Delete this and instead put a note 00:59:521 - here and 00:59:752 (4) - . Also the 1/2 slider is weird to play, since you did not use many of them.

[Normal]

1. 00:10:367 (2,3) - In the end maybe it would be best for (2) to blanket (3) The pattern is fine imo
2. 00:19:598 (5,1) - ^ Maybe this is supposed to be a blanket, would be nicer if it was. If you want it to be a blanket move the slider midpoint to 87:82 and the endpoint to 97:13. This doesn't really mess up your spacing too much and it will end up looking better. Nah, I don't do blankets if the next note is a new combo
3. 00:26:983 (5,1) - Same here, slider curves inwards towards the end. (Unless this was intentional, but if it was I suggest you make it a perfect blanket)
4. 00:43:136 (3,4) - You haven't stacked a lot, so why break the consistency? Unstack these would be beneficial to not only the difficulty but to newer players as well. I did another stack there, and I want some variation between the vocals parts here and uh lets say 00:14:521 (3,4) -
5. 01:11:752 (5,1) - See now this stack is great, 1/1 works well and gives players time to read the pattern.
6. 01:19:598 (1,2) - (Nazi) These aren't perfectly symmetrical. Ctrl+G 01:20:521 (2) - and you will see what I mean. Move it to 11:272

[Insane]

1. 00:02:060 (1,3) - Blanket is off. Use the approach circle of 00:02:060 (1) - to fix it
2. 00:05:752 (1,3) - ^
3. 00:11:290 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:11:752 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:23:290 (3,4) - ^ Geez
6. 00:30:675 (3,4) - (Nazi) ^. I am not going to point these out anymore, use the approach circles of the objects you are blanketing to check all of them. They are sloppy looking the way they are now.
7. 00:50:752 (3) - This looks like a boomerang, a regular 3 point slider will fit in better with the rest of the map
8. 00:54:444 (3) - ^
9. 00:55:367 (5) - Would be better as a regular blanket
10. 01:10:136 (5,7) - (Nazi) Isn't symmetrical perfectly. 01:11:060 (7) - Move this to 27:83

Good luck

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Kytoxid wrote:

Yo. Guess I'm modding TV size again.

[General]

- So apparently 真里歌 is the official artist, despite what it says in the video. Source: http://www.angelnote.jp/works/index.html.
- Probably should also add the official game title, フレラバ～Friend to Lover～, to the tags.
- normal-hitwhistle.wav also has a looong empty part after the beat; it's 2 seconds long even though the beat is less than 200 ms. Here's a version that's cut to 250 ms: http://puu.sh/6vr9d.wav

[Umi's Easy]

I think the tick effect is going to be really confusing for a new player. If you insist on keeping it, please lower the volume to roughly the level of a slider tick.

00:50:983 (2) - You could start this slider 1/2 earlier, since you follow the lyrics for the rest of the combo anyways.
00:54:675 (3) - ^

Nice.

[Normal]

00:10:367 (2) - Feels a bit empty compared to how you've mapped this section of music in other parts, since they always had an element of 1/2 in them.
I wanted some variation
00:28:829 (2,3,4,5) - I'd map something other than straight 1/1 here, since you did so previously 00:21:906 (3,4) - , and there's a lot of 1/1 in this section already. This part is the calm part of the song, all the notes here 00:16:829 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - are the calm part of the song, so I just did simple 1/2 mapping

This is alright. I was hoping the kiai section would follow the melody a bit more, instead of mostly just the background to put claps on 2 and 4.

[Wafu's Hard]

00:09:444 (1) - This little jump is a bit weird, but not too much of a problem.
00:23:752 - Add a note here? Your slider is on a 1/1 pattern, so it might be easier for players to catch this note if it's also 1/1 after the slider.
00:35:290 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and add a note after it? Would match 00:33:213 (1) - better; there's no real gap in the music here.
00:42:675 (1) - ^ he does not wants to change this, since each of the new combo's here are suppose to have a pause to be consistent.

Good.

[Insane]

00:26:060 (1,2) - Blanket could be better.

Neat.

Lemme know when you've had a look at this.