1. Hard (4.5 stars, 128 notes)
2. Normal (3.34 stars, 77 notes)

Phoenipx wrote:

Hello Phoenipx here, random mod.

General
- (Optional) Add "SNSD" to tags. added tags
-Use "Distance Snap" fixed
-Your background must be 1024x768 hmmm...
-Turn off "Letterbox During Breaks"? fixed

Easy
00:34:519 (3) - Move away from 2. eeh i think it looks fine

Difficulty looks good at the moment. thanks~~

Hard
00:11:041 (5,6) - Make this look like 00:09:997 (2,3) - or the other way around so it looks more neat. haah i don't understand what you mean orz
00:17:302 - Add a note? added
00:17:823 (4,5) - Align these and make them symmetrical. nope sorry
00:24:867 (2,3) - This is confusing to read because it's too close. too close to what? this? 00:24:345 (1)
00:45:476 (6) - Move this away. eeh doesn't looks right to me but okay ^^'
00:57:997 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing spacing. Move 4 away from 3, 2 and 1. fixed

Good luck!

pife1 wrote:

Hi from your M4M

General:
This map need tags and you need check the raking criteria: http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria I mean about "You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it" Knew that already, was just too lazy ><

In the Normal:
00:36:606 (1) - This note look a bit weird because of its repetition eeeh..
00:42:606 (4) - When start a KIAI also need a new combo and since here need new combos because of the combo get 38 and that look weird Fixed ^^

In the Hard:
00:09:997 (2,3) - I suggest change these notes and copy 00:09:475 (1) and ctrl v and ctrl h Haaah not sure what you mean
00:11:562 (1,2,3,4) - This part is confusing Reduced the difficulty of it a bit
00:16:519 (2) - Remove it and move to 00:16:649 (3) at the red note previous and extend until the red note following ...

00:22:649 (2) - Remove Okiee
00:23:693 (5) - ^ Mmmh nope
00:24:867 (2) - repeat and 00:25:910 (4) - remove Okay so i did the repeat part, not so sure about moving it though..
00:26:823 (6) - Remove Removed
00:28:780 (4) - move to at the red note previous
00:29:302 (5) - move to at the red note previous and also move it
like this

00:29:302 (6) - Move to at the White note previous and cut this slider
Image:

01:03:215 (5) - New combo
01:05:302 (5) - New Combo
01:09:476 (7) - New Combo
01:12:606 (12) - New combo

This difficulty need more work, and also you need use notes red and White not blue

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

hello, from my queue.

General:
why end in 01:16:258 ? cheer up, i think you can map a FULL version. or you should cut the mp3 file to reduce size.

Metadata:
Atrist:소녀시대
Romanised Artist:Girls' Generation
Title:Baby Maybe
Tags:i got a boy SNSD GG Soshi

Because Girls' Generation(소녀시대) is a korean artist. also, you can add "少女時代" to the tags(because chinese and japanese are translate to this.).

diff:normal
AiMod:
00:15:215 (4,5) - too far
00:18:606 (2,3) - ^
00:18:867 (3,4) - ^
00:20:171 (4,5) - ^
00:28:780 (2,3) - ^
00:49:649 (8,9) -
00:22:519 (2,3) - too close
00:23:041 (3,4) - ^
00:23:302 (4,5) - ^
01:05:823 (5,6) - ^
my mod:
00:42:606 (1) - NC
00:45:997 (1) - ^
00:54:345 (10) - ^
00:56:432 (4) - ^
00:59:562 (7) - ^
01:03:476 (6) - ^

diff:hard
00:16:519 (2,3) - change to a long slider
00:55:910 (3,5) - more stright
01:03:215 (5,6,7,8) - more symmetry
01:03:215 (5) - NC
01:07:910 (8) - ^
01:11:823 (7) - ^

Lusy wrote:

Nice and the skin also pretty..

• Nice skin O_o it is too pretty !
  
  [Normal]
  
  • Norma diffl is feel like hard. How about CS -1 ?
    00:18:867 (3,4,5) - positioned correctly
    00:21:476 (1,2) - jump ??maybe it is hard for beginner
    00:25:128 (2) - reduce some curve
    00:36:606 (1,2,3,1) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner
    00:43:910 (3,4) - too close. positioned correctly
    from 00:50:954 - to 00:54:084 - add something. it is too bored
    00:57:215 (5) - reduce some curve
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:09:997 (2,3) - too close. Many players will click earlier than necessary.
      00:12:606 (3,4,5,6) - ^
      00:15:997 (1) - change big SV. it is too sudden.
      00:17:823 (5,1) - change NC
      00:33:736 (1,3) - ^
      00:36:215 (7) - please be placed further
      01:03:215 (5) - NC
      01:05:302 (9) - NC
      01:07:910 (12) - NC
      01:11:823 (18) - NC
      01:12:606 (3,4,5) - too close