1. 384's Normal (4.04 stars, 187 notes)
2. Easy (1.86 stars, 115 notes)
3. Insane (4.96 stars, 406 notes)
4. Rainbow's Hard (4.88 stars, 287 notes)

1. Remove iTunes from the tags and Kick Ass from the source. They're not related to the song, tbh.
2. Disable letterboxes, ountdown and widescreen support. Letterboxes cut your bg in a pretty ugly way, countdown doesn't fit and you have no SB to eanable widescreen support.
3. Hitsounds are pretty loud, I'd reduce volume a bit to make them more fitting!
4. This BG is already used in another map. Can't you find something different? It's better to be original! Anyway, it's a just a minor thing.
5. Kiai in your diff has no end. It's pretty weird, just finish it where mapped ends.

1. 00:28:868 (1) - usually you're following vocals, but this slider follows music and vocals in the middle of the slider are almost ignored. It doesn't sound right to me, what if you'll try to keep rhythm consistent?
   Note: best way to keep rhythm consistent is to mix vocals and music and mix them. So, you'll get pretty cute and consistent rhythm. Following vocals is pretty boring, but it's okay if you want to follow them.
2. 00:28:868 (1,2) - nazi - this pattern doesn't looks good and flows pretty weird, don't you think so? Try to make flow a bit neater, this is the easiest diff, be gentle with beginners!
3. 00:34:268 (3) - please, try to avoid using such sliders. Second reverse arrow appears too fast and slider is too short. Beginners are unable to read such patterns!
4. 00:53:268 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's pretty hard to hit 5 circles in a row with a perfect. Your rhythm is kinda choppy because you follow vocals, that's why it's hardly catchable for beginners. Try to add one or two sliders here to make rhythm easier catchable.
   Note: someone is lazy and does some copypasta :<
   
5. 01:15:268 (1,1) - first of all, tail of the second slider is too close to the previous slider. Try to move it somewher else because beginners may mistakenly hit it. What's more two new combos in a row are pretty confusing for beginners and it's agaains rhythm and your patterns. Try to remove one of these new combos.
6. 01:23:668 (1,2) - whoops!~ A spacing mistake, let's fix it as soon as possible! Beginners don't understand spacing changes!
7. 02:05:668 (2) - the slider is kinda off vocals.It starts with one part of lyrics, and it ends in the middle of another part of the lyrics. It sounds pretty weird. Try to follow music/vocals instead of doing cute, but unfitting copypasted patterns!
8. 02:09:668 (2,1) - spacing mistake + tail of (1) is too close to the previous slider!
9. 02:29:268 - one more reason to use consistent rhythm: empty gaps like this one are pretty boring even for beginners!
10. 02:39:268 (5) - you've missed a new combo, haven't you? This combo is too long, anyway.
    
    I don't really like how you follow vocals only because it makes rhythm choppy and hard-to-catch for beginners. But maybe it's just me. Your patterns are neat and comboing looks pretty accurate, good job!

• 
  Your AR is too low, it makes your flow look really strange. Try to increase AR by one or even two ticks. In fact, your patterns and flow are hardly suitable for a [Normal] diff. Song is relaxing, there's absolutely NO need to jump, a specially on a [Normal] diff! Try to re-arrange your patterns and change your flow. I'm sure that jumps sould be removed!
  
  Yes, diff really should be easier, imo. Spacing changes and rhythm are too hard, imo. Disagreeagree with me? Get more opinions on this diff!

1. Increase HP Drain by one tick, this diff is supposet to be hard!
2. 00:42:468 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - the overlap looks pretty messy + stream is too hard for a [Hard] diff. This is a hard, not insane! Remeber!
3. 01:29:268 (7) - 01:32:468 (7) - such sliders right after the stream aren't really readable and looks kinda strange.
4. 02:07:268 (6,7) - nazi - blanket is pretty messy. I'd try to make it better, but it's just a minor thing.
   
   The diff has too many streams, this is a [Hard], not [Insane], remember! Try to make rhythm a bit easier! But it's pretty good, overall.

1. Hitsounds don't really fit with the song. Try teducing their volume and looking for more fitting sampleset and/or re-hitsounding some parts of the map.
2. 00:27:268 (1,2,3,4,5) - jumps should represent/reflect music. These jumps are weird beacause of unreadable and hardly understandable spacing changes.
3. 00:31:268 (3) - velocity change here isn't really understandable. This slidertick is pretty hard to nitice, try to add a new combo to make it more readable. Same goes to every velocity change in the map!
4. 00:41:268 - 00:43:668 - this is the hardest diff, long gaps here are boring players. try to follow insturuments and map this part! And don't forget about the HP drain!
5. 00:50:868 (3) - wouldn't recommend you to use such patterns. Players don't expect that second reverse, so it may make them mad. But it's up to you, anyway.
6. 00:53:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - copypasta ruins everything.
   
   Try to get rid of copypasta and inconsistent jumps and feel free to call me again! I will try mest to help you in getting this map ranked!

-Bakari- wrote:

Shooting a star. So I won't foget to check it soon.

Yo! I've tested it and providing you with my opinion on this map!

[General]
Looks like your forgot to edit the "creator's word". There's no your [Hard] diff!

1. Remove iTunes from the tags and Kick Ass from the source. They're not related to the song, tbh.this is a song from Kick-ass :O
2. Disable letterboxes, ountdown and widescreen support. Letterboxes cut your bg in a pretty ugly way, countdown doesn't fit and you have no SB to eanable widescreen support.
3. Hitsounds are pretty loud, I'd reduce volume a bit to make them more fitting!
4. This BG is already used in another map. Can't you find something different? It's better to be original! Anyway, it's a just a minor thing.
5. Kiai in your diff has no end. It's pretty weird, just finish it where mapped ends.

[Easy]

1. 00:28:868 (1) - usually you're following vocals, but this slider follows music and vocals in the middle of the slider are almost ignored. It doesn't sound right to me, what if you'll try to keep rhythm consistent?
   Note: best way to keep rhythm consistent is to mix vocals and music and mix them. So, you'll get pretty cute and consistent rhythm. Following vocals is pretty boring, but it's okay if you want to follow them.
2. 00:28:868 (1,2) - nazi - this pattern doesn't looks good and flows pretty weird, don't you think so? Try to make flow a bit neater, this is the easiest diff, be gentle with beginners!
3. 00:34:268 (3) - please, try to avoid using such sliders. Second reverse arrow appears too fast and slider is too short. Beginners are unable to read such patterns!
4. 00:53:268 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's pretty hard to hit 5 circles in a row with a perfect. Your rhythm is kinda choppy because you follow vocals, that's why it's hardly catchable for beginners. Try to add one or two sliders here to make rhythm easier catchable.
   Note: someone is lazy and does some copypasta :<
   
5. 01:15:268 (1,1) - first of all, tail of the second slider is too close to the previous slider. Try to move it somewher else because beginners may mistakenly hit it. What's more two new combos in a row are pretty confusing for beginners and it's agaains rhythm and your patterns. Try to remove one of these new combos.
6. 01:23:668 (1,2) - whoops!~ A spacing mistake, let's fix it as soon as possible! Beginners don't understand spacing changes!
7. 02:05:668 (2) - the slider is kinda off vocals.It starts with one part of lyrics, and it ends in the middle of another part of the lyrics. It sounds pretty weird. Try to follow music/vocals instead of doing cute, but unfitting copypasted patterns!
8. 02:09:668 (2,1) - spacing mistake + tail of (1) is too close to the previous slider!
9. 02:29:268 - one more reason to use consistent rhythm: empty gaps like this one are pretty boring even for beginners!
10. 02:39:268 (5) - you've missed a new combo, haven't you? This combo is too long, anyway.
    
    I don't really like how you follow vocals only because it makes rhythm choppy and hard-to-catch for beginners. But maybe it's just me. Your patterns are neat and comboing looks pretty accurate, good job!

[384's Normal]

• 
  Your AR is too low, it makes your flow look really strange. Try to increase AR by one or even two ticks. In fact, your patterns and flow are hardly suitable for a [Normal] diff. Song is relaxing, there's absolutely NO need to jump, a specially on a [Normal] diff! Try to re-arrange your patterns and change your flow. I'm sure that jumps sould be removed!
  
  Yes, diff really should be easier, imo. Spacing changes and rhythm are too hard, imo. Disagreeagree with me? Get more opinions on this diff!

[Rainbow's Hard]

1. Increase HP Drain by one tick, this diff is supposet to be hard!
2. 00:42:468 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - the overlap looks pretty messy + stream is too hard for a [Hard] diff. This is a hard, not insane! Remeber!
3. 01:29:268 (7) - 01:32:468 (7) - such sliders right after the stream aren't really readable and looks kinda strange.
4. 02:07:268 (6,7) - nazi - blanket is pretty messy. I'd try to make it better, but it's just a minor thing.
   
   The diff has too many streams, this is a [Hard], not [Insane], remember! Try to make rhythm a bit easier! But it's pretty good, overall.

[Insane]

1. Hitsounds don't really fit with the song. Try teducing their volume and looking for more fitting sampleset and/or re-hitsounding some parts of the map.
2. 00:27:268 (1,2,3,4,5) - jumps should represent/reflect music. These jumps are weird beacause of unreadable and hardly understandable spacing changes.
3. 00:31:268 (3) - velocity change here isn't really understandable. This slidertick is pretty hard to nitice, try to add a new combo to make it more readable. Same goes to every velocity change in the map!
4. 00:41:268 - 00:43:668 - this is the hardest diff, long gaps here are boring players. try to follow insturuments and map this part! And don't forget about the HP drain!
5. 00:50:868 (3) - wouldn't recommend you to use such patterns. Players don't expect that second reverse, so it may make them mad. But it's up to you, anyway.
6. 00:53:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - copypasta ruins everything.
   
   Try to get rid of copypasta and inconsistent jumps and feel free to call me again! I will try mest to help you in getting this map ranked!

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Good luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

Shooting a star. So I won't foget to check it soon.

Yo! I've tested it and providing you with my opinion on this map!

[384's Normal]

• 
  Your AR is too low, it makes your flow look really strange. Try to increase AR by one or even two ticks. In fact, your patterns and flow are hardly suitable for a [Normal] diff. Song is relaxing, there's absolutely NO need to jump, a specially on a [Normal] diff! Try to re-arrange your patterns and change your flow. I'm sure that jumps sould be removed!
  
  Yes, diff really should be easier, imo. Spacing changes and rhythm are too hard, imo. Disagreeagree with me? Get more opinions on this diff!

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Good luck!

CET 6 wrote:

刚开始mod 如有冒犯请见谅 ~


Easy

如果按你的节奏的话排列没什么问题，你很多是下在vocal 上而没有跟着鼓点，有点不连贯的感觉


384's Normal

很工整
00:34:868 (3) 或许可以叠到 00:34:268 (2) 那
00:49:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) normal 里的话，这个会不会有点难···还有后面几个类似的


Rainbow's Hard

壮观的绿线
00:51:668 (4,5) 这个或许可以弄对称
01:44:068 (1,2,3) 这个看起来有点··
02:30:068 (1) 感觉形状可以调一下和前面的滑条弧度相对


Insane

00:30:468 (1) 这个要不要包一下前个note？
00:44:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) 喜欢这里！不过有点难打- -
01:03:068 (4) 这个或许可以包一下下个note
02:12:068 (2) 大长直线··要不要弄些形状
02:30:468 (1,2,3,4) 这些或许可以调整得对称点
02:36:868 (1) 我觉得这里用spinner不合适

大概就这样了，水平有限，请谅解

GOOD LUCK !

CET 6 wrote:

刚开始mod 如有冒犯请见谅 ~


384's Normal

很工整
00:34:868 (3) 或许可以叠到 00:34:268 (2) 那 嗯。。我担心normal里的stack会给新人造成不便（甚至比normal跳要难
00:49:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) normal 里的话，这个会不会有点难···还有后面几个类似的 的确有些难了嗯。。但是应该没问题吧 我1pc就能DTHDFC （毕竟整个normal就挺难）


GOOD LUCK !

Kareov wrote:

CET 6 wrote:

刚开始mod 如有冒犯请见谅 ~


Easy

如果按你的节奏的话排列没什么问题，你很多是下在vocal 上而没有跟着鼓点，有点不连贯的感觉


384's Normal

很工整
00:34:868 (3) 或许可以叠到 00:34:268 (2) 那
00:49:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) normal 里的话，这个会不会有点难···还有后面几个类似的


Rainbow's Hard

壮观的绿线
00:51:668 (4,5) 这个或许可以弄对称
01:44:068 (1,2,3) 这个看起来有点··
02:30:068 (1) 感觉形状可以调一下和前面的滑条弧度相对


Insane

00:30:468 (1) 这个要不要包一下前个note？fixed
00:44:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) 喜欢这里！不过有点难打- - yahi
01:03:068 (4) 这个或许可以包一下下个note fixed
02:12:068 (2) 大长直线··要不要弄些形状 我不太会弄slider,不过fixed
02:30:468 (1,2,3,4) 这些或许可以调整得对称点 fixed
02:36:868 (1) 我觉得这里用spinner不合适 我想让这个难度更难一点:P

大概就这样了，水平有限，请谅解

GOOD LUCK !

改了一点。谢谢