This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 30 August, 2013 at 16:03:20

Artist: Taneda Risa
Title: Wareta Ringo
Source: Shin Sekai Yori
Tags: Watanabe Saki From the New World Ending 新世界より
BPM: 120
Filesize: 6442kb
Play Time: 04:08
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.51 stars, 391 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 581 notes)
3. Normal (2.74 stars, 216 notes)

Download: Taneda Risa - Wareta Ringo
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Skin elements (lighting and star2) take from Colin Hou under the permission. Thank you !!!
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frostmourne speed mapper~

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Hi from M4M
I'm a new mapper.But I try my best to mod your map .
Normal:
I think ar 4 is ok
00:10:379 (2) - I think it can start on 00:10:504
00:25:004 (1) - add fin?
00:45:004 (1) - add fin?
00:53:004 (1) - ^
00:57:879 (2) - I think is diffcult to set note on blue line for this diff try change it to slider
01:01:004 (1) - add fin?
01:09:004 (1) - ^(I think other kiai time can be add like this)
01:28:379 (3) - I think is diffcult to set note on blue line for this diff try change it to slider
01:32:379 (3) - ^
01:36:379 (2) - ^
Hard:
01:06:254 (3) - I think a little far from 01:05:504 (2) -
01:35:004 I think this:
http://puu.sh/3LdG9.jpg
03:36:754 (3) - I think change it to note on 03:37:004
03:44:754 (3) - ^
Insane:
00:14:004 (3,4,5) - I think the distance can be more far
00:33:004 (1) - I think 1 back is enough
00:59:504 (4) - I think it's too far move up?
01:02:504 (6,7) - don't stack looks more better
01:28:254 (5,6) - ^
02:22:504 (8,9) - ^


Sorry my mod is not very good.I hope it can help you
Good luck

Hi~ from M4M

My Normal mod sucks so, i mod only Hard, Insane.






Done, GL

btw, can i get your mod later? because my map is WIP yet (waiting for GD)..

:O

Mod 4 Mod!
I'm obviously a new modder, so don't expect this to be anything really good.
-Just a comment, I really like this song!

[Normal]
I didn't want you to think I did not include this for some reason in my mod. I played this song around 6 or 7 times, and I never broke my combo, nor did anything feel weird or out of place. Since my accuracy was around 98-99%, I can honestly say I have nothing to add for this chart.

[Hard]
Again, I didn't break my combo a lot on this song, and my accuracy was very high (96%~), so not much to add.

03:24:129 (3,4) - This seems like it is in a weird place. Never mind, it's okay.
04:02:004 until end - Since this is the Hard difficulty, you might want to consider more notes here.

[Insane]
You weren't joking about the speed on this chart, I could barely keep up.

00:14:004 (3,4,5,6) - You should probably stack these.
00:36:504 (1,2,3) - Consider spreading these out just a little bit, I kept hitting 2 and 3 early, since I thought they were coming faster than they were. After playing 2 or 3 more times, I didn't have that issue anymore. It's probably okay.
00:40:004 (1) - This seems slow, considering the sound that is played here. I kept moving my mouse faster than this slider.
01:36:004 (3,4) - I would put 4 a little closer to 3, I thought 4 would occur later than it was.
01:38:879 (4) - Consider putting 4 right in the middle of 3 and 5.
01:52:004 (1) - Same as before, seems slow for the sound being played here.
02:12:254 (5) - This is a little hard to read considering the speed. I kept thinking that slider 5 would go on farther behind slider 6, because of their note placement. I would consider moving 5 off of 6 a little to the left, so you can see where 5 ends a bit more clearly.
03:04:504 (2) - Consider moving this note to closer to 1 and 3, like 4 or 5 grid marks. It's a bit hard to hit right where it is now.
03:20:004 (2) - Same as before, seems slow.

Sorry I wasn't a big help on your Normal and Hard charts, but I would probably consider that a good thing. I hope this helped in someway! Good luck!

ok let's do something

Insane
well at the beginning when there's no vocal, add some whistle to decorate ? also for the very last part
00:04:379 (2) - maybe replace it with a 1/4 slider or even 1/8 slider/reverse or something for there's a special sound in the music
00:14:379 (6) - the clap on head is missing
00:18:504 (3) - whistle to respond ? I mean whistle on body
00:19:004 (4,1) - why not exchaneg NC
00:40:004 (1) - add some whistles ? and also the rhythm at this point is not accurate it should be like http://puu.sh/3LdqH.jpg , also for the other similar ones at pre-kiai
00:41:879 (4) - If I were you I would add clap at its end, it's not because there is the sound in the music, it's just that I thnk it would form a really nice hitsound pattern, which can be used in and throughout all the kiais and the solo part
00:58:879 (1,2) - maybe exchange NC, referring to 02:18:754 (3,1) - , of course you can change the other one, I think just to make it consistent
01:12:754 (1,3) - also here
01:24:504 (5) - miss clap on head
01:26:379 (5,6) - switch their order may make the rhythm more intuitive ? the slider go first and the circle follows
02:31:254 (1) - it can start at the former blue tick
02:47:504 (1) - maybe finish at end
02:52:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - is that you changed the hitsound usage for this part ? the whistles used to be at 02:52:254 - , instead of 02:52:004 - and 02:52:379 - , I said so because even just at the previous combo 02:49:004 (1,2,3,4,1) - , the hitsound was the same as that in kiai. well, it' just a reminder though
02:53:879 (3) - also here, the whistle at end may be not neccessary, also some more, such as 02:58:379 (6) - , but well, they sound ok so I won't point out more
02:50:004 (1,2) - maybe exchange NC
03:21:004 (1) - missing whistle at end
for the last part after kiai, Intended not to add claps ? yeah I think it works :3
yeah Insane don't need mods (>.<)

Hard
00:18:504 (6) - I would add a NC here because you are mapping to something different and players need to hit one more time than usual, well, it may be not neccessary
01:26:004 (3) - clap on both head and tail
01:34:004 (3) - clap at end
02:48:004 - not needed green line
02:49:004 - just reminding that if you have did some change to this part in Insane, you may do the same here
03:47:754 (2) - maybe replace it with two circles at 03:47:629 - and 03:47:879 - , you know where to put them :3

Normal
00:07:004 (1) - clap
00:10:379 (2) - clap at end
00:13:004 (1) - clap on head
01:01:879 (2,3) - please do something to these =.= http://puu.sh/3LeNO.jpg or you can think of something better
01:25:004 (1) - clap at end
01:28:004 (2) - clap
02:07:004 (1) - whistle
02:14:504 (3) - (292,56) ?
02:19:004 (1) - whistle
02:48:004 - not needed green line
03:37:879 (2,3) - and yeah I really don' like this =.= http://puu.sh/3Lf0p.jpg or http://puu.sh/3Lf3M.jpg

That's all
Good luck ;w;

yeah how2mod

[General]

1. tag Shin Sekai since someone will search 新世界 as this, also opening (not sure about opening since wikipedia doesn't show the ending song and I didn't watch it at all)
2. Add muted soft-sliderslide.wav?

[Insane]

1. 00:25:004 (1) - This sucks :C Won't suggest you to do like that, not a big fan of "adding red nodes on 1/2 sliders" since it's too short. Just do something simple >:
2. 00:39:129 - I can hear a sound at here, which has connection with the sound at 00:39:004 - . So try to use a 1/4 (you can speed up) to instead 00:39:004 (2) - this note?
3. 00:46:754 (4,5,1) - How about move (5) to x:188, y:332 to make a better flow? I know that you want a jump between (5,1), but current placement isn't really flow.
   
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4. 00:52:254 (5) - Make a little curve on this slider? Since 00:51:879 (4) -'s shape contains a curve, it will be better if you can do something like that~
   
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5. 00:57:629 (3) - I'll ctrl+g to this slider to get a better flow. See the example picture, it explains everything T_T//
   
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6. 01:31:504 (2) - ctrl+j for the shape might get a better flow (naziiiiiii
7. 02:01:754 (4) - I'll recommend to stack this with 02:00:754 (7) -, the place there is near to where (3) towards ;_;
8. 02:28:504 (1,3) - Swap the nces? Just following the downbeat things

[Hard]

1. 00:05:254 - Add a note here? Seems too empty ;_; (and 1/1 rhythm sucks lol)
2. 00:18:379 (5,6) - Remove (5) and move (6) to the blue tick (where (5) is)? Even I can hear a vocal sound at 00:18:504 -, it's still a bit weird if this pattern are inconsistent with others >: (or just remove (6)
3. 01:59:004 (1,2,3,4) - Square pls ;_;
4. 02:09:004 (1,2) - This is much better :S Don't know how to explain, just take a look at the picture~
   
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[Normal]

1. AR+1? This diff contains some 1/2 (even 1/4), AR3 will be hard to read.
2. 00:57:004 (1,2,3) - This is so ugly :C Try to do like this? It's better than current pattern ;_;
   
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3. 01:31:504 (1,2,3) - I don't think those beginners (or even pros or not-so-beginner-but-not-so-pro) can read this easily and beat it correctly when they see it first time. Just combine (2,3) to a slider and it will get more readable ;_;
   You're so blue tick u.u

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