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NoboruP - Chain girl

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Topic Starter
S e e U
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 8월 3일 토요일 at 오후 3:43:28

Artist: NoboruP
Title: Chain girl
Tags: vocaloid, miku
BPM: 135
Filesize: 7998kb
Play Time: 04:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.79 stars, 480 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 739 notes)
  3. Normal (3.69 stars, 307 notes)
Download: NoboruP - Chain girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first mapping!
S e e U
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Nomal - 100%
Hard - 100%
Insane - 100%
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<Thanks to Modder>
Zzz
Kloyd
Kanbe Kotori
Dosirack
koreapenguin
InC0nceNtrateD
watashino
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+ 13/05/28 - BG/Comborburst/SectionPass Update!
+ 13/05/30 - Normal mod mapping clear
+ 13/05/31 - Delete Custom Hit sound / Hit Sound re Editting...( Normal / Hard / Insane )
[ Zzz ]
http://puu.sh/328Zq.zip

Mod~

글시가 꺠져서 수정했어요!
H i k a r i
하드하고 인세인에서 어프로치서클 레이트를 8로 올려주시고,
서클크키를 좀 더 크게? 해주세요
wjdals5015
[hard,insane]
인세인에 비해 하드가 다소 어렵게 보이네요 엇박또한 많이보이고
Tsumetaku
One of My Favorite song! :)
Topic Starter
S e e U

Tsumetaku wrote:

One of My Favorite song! :)
thx! :)
Topic Starter
S e e U

[ Zzz ] wrote:

http://puu.sh/328Zq.zip

Mod~

글시가 꺠져서 수정했어요!
ㅎㅎ 채팅도 백업이 가능한가보군요 감사합니당 :)
LQA20Ans
m4m. no kds

[General]

-BG를 좀더 질 좋은 걸로 구해보세요.

-이거 노래 노보루p거 아닌가요? artist에 노보루p 써주세요.
여담으로 artist 칸이랑 Title은 원문으로 써주셔야 해요. 즉 일본어로 써주시고
밑에 romanized에 영문 표기

-태그에 쿨쿨님이랑 클로이드님 닉넴 지우고 [ Sana ] 추가


아 그나저나 sb 넣으신건가요. 화면이 진동하는데...
갠적으로 구간만 넣는거 아니면 비추합니다...
Topic Starter
S e e U

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

m4m. no kds

[General]

-BG를 좀더 질 좋은 걸로 구해보세요.

-이거 노래 노보루p거 아닌가요? artist에 노보루p 써주세요.
여담으로 artist 칸이랑 Title은 원문으로 써주셔야 해요. 즉 일본어로 써주시고
밑에 romanized에 영문 표기

-태그에 쿨쿨님이랑 클로이드님 닉넴 지우고 [ Sana ] 추가


아 그나저나 sb 넣으신건가요. 화면이 진동하는데...
갠적으로 구간만 넣는거 아니면 비추합니다...
지적 감사합니당 ' ~' ㅎㅎ :)
Dosirack
Hard

일단 기본값으로 디스턴스 1.00을.. 노트간의 거리가 너무 뒤죽박죽 인것 같아요
00:50:771 - 슬라 속도 0.75
00:52:549 (6) - 여기서 슬라속도 1.00
00:52:549 - 이 부분 http://puu.sh/32Mh6.jpg 이런 모양은 어떨까요?
01:02:771 (1) - 이걸
01:02:660 - 이리로 옮기는것도 나쁘지 않을듯
01:37:216 - 여기에 노트하나 추가
02:03:216 (1) - 이것도
02:03:105 - 이쪽으로 옮기는거 나쁘지 않아보임
02:19:883 (4,5,6,7) - 이걸 http://puu.sh/32MAp.jpg 이런식으로 슬라이드 처리하는건 어떨까요? 슬라 속도 는 1.5배
03:54:771 (1,2,3) - 안겹치게하는게 더 좋게 보일꺼 같아요

마지막으로 서클 크기는 5보단 4가 더 좋아 보여요

이렇게 하면 되는건가요? 모딩은 한번도 안해봐서 ㄷ..
Topic Starter
S e e U

Dosirack wrote:

Hard

일단 기본값으로 디스턴스 1.00을.. 노트간의 거리가 너무 뒤죽박죽 인것 같아요
00:50:771 - 슬라 속도 0.75
00:52:549 (6) - 여기서 슬라속도 1.00
00:52:549 - 이 부분 http://puu.sh/32Mh6.jpg 이런 모양은 어떨까요?
01:02:771 (1) - 이걸
01:02:660 - 이리로 옮기는것도 나쁘지 않을듯
01:37:216 - 여기에 노트하나 추가
02:03:216 (1) - 이것도
02:03:105 - 이쪽으로 옮기는거 나쁘지 않아보임
02:19:883 (4,5,6,7) - 이걸 http://puu.sh/32MAp.jpg 이런식으로 슬라이드 처리하는건 어떨까요? 슬라 속도 는 1.5배
03:54:771 (1,2,3) - 안겹치게하는게 더 좋게 보일꺼 같아요

마지막으로 서클 크기는 5보단 4가 더 좋아 보여요

이렇게 하면 되는건가요? 모딩은 한번도 안해봐서 ㄷ..
좋은의견 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ 전부 수락되었어요
koreapenguin
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2013-04-23 16:52 S e e U: 으잌
2013-04-23 16:53 koreapenguin: your new nickname
2013-04-23 16:53 S e e U: your not korean?
2013-04-23 16:53 koreapenguin: i'm korean
2013-04-23 16:53 S e e U: ..;
2013-04-23 16:53 S e e U: 걍 한글로해요 그럼 ㅋㅋㅋ;
2013-04-23 16:53 koreapenguin: sp
2013-04-23 16:53 koreapenguin: Xp
2013-04-23 16:53 koreapenguin: 네
2013-04-23 16:53 S e e U: 깜놀했네
2013-04-23 16:53 koreapenguin: korea펭귄인데...
2013-04-23 16:53 koreapenguin: 외국인이 설마...
2013-04-23 16:53 S e e U: 닉만 그런줄 알았죠 ㅋ
2013-04-23 16:54 koreapenguin: ㅋ
2013-05-28 21:56 koreapenguin: Hey :3
2013-05-28 21:57 S e e U: 안녕하세요 ' ~'
2013-05-28 21:57 koreapenguin: 모딩하러왔어요.
2013-05-28 21:57 koreapenguin: IRC로 할껀데 괜찮으시죠?
2013-05-28 21:59 koreapenguin: 씨유님?
2013-05-28 22:01 S e e U: 네 괜찮아요 ㅎ
2013-05-28 22:01 koreapenguin: 대답이 없으셔서 죽으러가려고했는데.
2013-05-28 22:01 koreapenguin: 다행이네요.
2013-05-28 22:02 koreapenguin: 자 이리오세요.
2013-05-28 22:02 S e e U: 아 지금 바빠가지고 ㅋㅋㅋ 10분만 괜찮을까요
2013-05-28 22:03 koreapenguin: 그럼요 오시면 말씀해주세요.
2013-05-28 22:09 S e e U: 왔어요 ㅎㅎ
2013-05-28 22:09 koreapenguin: 그럼.
2013-05-28 22:10 koreapenguin: 미리말씀드리는거지만
2013-05-28 22:10 koreapenguin: 모든난이도가 완성되면 다시한번불러주세요.
2013-05-28 22:10 koreapenguin: 우선 있는난이도먼저
2013-05-28 22:10 koreapenguin: 모딩해드릴께요.
2013-05-28 22:10 S e e U: 겟난 2개는 언제 될지몰라서
2013-05-28 22:10 koreapenguin: 하드, 인센은 완료된거죠?
2013-05-28 22:10 koreapenguin: 겟난매퍼들 협박하세요.
2013-05-28 22:10 koreapenguin: 늦게주면 떄린다고
2013-05-28 22:10 S e e U: 하드는 금방된거고
2013-05-28 22:11 S e e U: 인센은 힛사랑 패턴 갈아엎고있어요
2013-05-28 22:11 koreapenguin: 아그럼
2013-05-28 22:11 koreapenguin: 그작업 완료되면
2013-05-28 22:11 koreapenguin: 말씀해주세요.
2013-05-28 22:11 S e e U: 하드를 중점적으로 해주시면되요
2013-05-28 22:11 koreapenguin: 흠.
2013-05-28 22:11 S e e U: 인센은 좀 오래걸릴거같아서;
2013-05-28 22:11 S e e U: 게다가 첫매핑이라 ㅎ
2013-05-28 22:13 koreapenguin: [General]
2013-05-28 22:13 koreapenguin: 괜찮은거같네요.
2013-05-28 22:14 koreapenguin: [Hard]
2013-05-28 22:14 koreapenguin: 제생각이지만
2013-05-28 22:14 koreapenguin: 키아이 잘못정하신거같아요.
2013-05-28 22:14 S e e U: 음 어느쪽이?
2013-05-28 22:14 koreapenguin: 01:06:771 - 키아이시작
2013-05-28 22:14 koreapenguin: 01:19:883 - 끝
2013-05-28 22:15 koreapenguin: 02:07:216 - 키아이시작
2013-05-28 22:15 koreapenguin: 02:20:327 - 끝
2013-05-28 22:15 koreapenguin: 끝은 스피너 끝나고 끝내주셔도되고
2013-05-28 22:15 koreapenguin: 스피너 시작할때 끝내주셔도상관없지만
2013-05-28 22:15 koreapenguin: 노래상으로 하이라이트는 저키아이가 맞는거같습니다.
2013-05-28 22:15 S e e U: 음 글쿤여 ' ~'
2013-05-28 22:16 koreapenguin: OD+1
2013-05-28 22:17 koreapenguin: 01:46:771 (9) - Error
2013-05-28 22:17 koreapenguin: 01:46:771 (9) - 원래위치는 가운데같습니다만.
2013-05-28 22:17 S e e U: 어.. 힛사만지면서 건드렸나보네요 ㄷ
2013-05-28 22:18 koreapenguin: 첫맵 이라기엔 너무 잘만드셨 ><
2013-05-28 22:18 S e e U: 그런가요?
2013-05-28 22:18 S e e U: 전 아직 부족해보이는데 ㅠ
2013-05-28 22:18 koreapenguin: 02:52:105 (2,3,4) - distance check
2013-05-28 22:19 koreapenguin: 얼추 이게맞는거같은데.
2013-05-28 22:19 koreapenguin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/780574
2013-05-28 22:19 S e e U: 이것도 힛사건들다 움직였나보네요 ㅎ
2013-05-28 22:20 koreapenguin: 03:29:021 (1) - 언스냅.
2013-05-28 22:20 koreapenguin: 03:29:021 (1) - 여기에 정확히 맞춰주세요.
2013-05-28 22:20 S e e U: 어 스핀은 겹쳐도 되네요?
2013-05-28 22:20 koreapenguin: 음....
2013-05-28 22:20 koreapenguin: 겹치진말고
2013-05-28 22:20 koreapenguin: 뒤에 부분에 마우스대셔서 길이조절만해주세요.
2013-05-28 22:20 koreapenguin: 언스냅되어있으니까요 ><
2013-05-28 22:20 S e e U: 넹 ' ~'
2013-05-28 22:20 koreapenguin: 03:33:660 (4,5) -
2013-05-28 22:21 koreapenguin: 제안입니다.
2013-05-28 22:21 koreapenguin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/780578
2013-05-28 22:21 koreapenguin: 이렇게 바꿔보심이 어떨까요?
2013-05-28 22:21 koreapenguin: 필요하시면 좌표불러드릴수있는데.
2013-05-28 22:22 koreapenguin: 정확히는 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/780579 이렇게네요.
2013-05-28 22:23 koreapenguin: 필요하신가요?
2013-05-28 22:24 S e e U: 잠시만요
2013-05-28 22:25 S e e U: 냄비타서;; ㄷㄷ
2013-05-28 22:29 S e e U: 후 ㅜ
2013-05-28 22:30 S e e U: 새카맣게 다태웠네
2013-05-28 22:30 koreapenguin: 하얗게 칠하세요.
2013-05-28 22:30 koreapenguin: 물감으로
2013-05-28 22:30 S e e U: 엌ㅋㅋㅋ
2013-05-28 22:30 koreapenguin: 그럼 계속하실까요?
2013-05-28 22:31 S e e U: 넹
2013-05-28 22:31 koreapenguin: 저기 위에 올려보시면
2013-05-28 22:31 koreapenguin: 좌표필요하시냐고 여쭤본게있을텐데
2013-05-28 22:31 koreapenguin: 보고 필요하시면 말씀하세요.
2013-05-28 22:31 S e e U: 네 수정했어요
2013-05-28 22:36 koreapenguin: 03:46:772 (1,2,3) -
2013-05-28 22:36 koreapenguin: 디스탄스체크
2013-05-28 22:36 koreapenguin: 03:46:994 (2) - 384 176 이 맞는거같네요.
2013-05-28 22:37 koreapenguin: 아..
2013-05-28 22:37 koreapenguin: 1.3쓰셨죠?
2013-05-28 22:37 koreapenguin: 1.3에 맞춰 재배치해주세요.
2013-05-28 22:38 S e e U: 432 176이네요 ㅎㅎ
2013-05-28 22:38 koreapenguin: 나머진.
2013-05-28 22:38 koreapenguin: 제가 터치할부분이없는거같네요.
2013-05-28 22:39 koreapenguin: 그리고 인센 작업중이라고하셨죠?
2013-05-28 22:39 S e e U: 네
2013-05-28 22:39 koreapenguin: AI모드 실행시키실줄아시죠?
2013-05-28 22:39 S e e U: 네
2013-05-28 22:39 koreapenguin: 인센에서 키시면
2013-05-28 22:39 koreapenguin: 언스냅노트몇개있어요
2013-05-28 22:39 koreapenguin: 체크해주시고
2013-05-28 22:39 koreapenguin: 이거 오프셋 누가 잰거죠?
2013-05-28 22:39 S e e U: 제가 직접잰거에요 ' ~'
2013-05-28 22:40 koreapenguin: 타이밍 재드릴테니까.
2013-05-28 22:40 koreapenguin: 음.
2013-05-28 22:40 koreapenguin: 만일을대비해서
2013-05-28 22:40 koreapenguin: osu송폴더가셔서
2013-05-28 22:40 koreapenguin: 이맵 백업해두세요.
2013-05-28 22:40 koreapenguin: 타임라인이랑 노트 전부이동시켜야되니까
2013-05-28 22:40 koreapenguin: 좀 어려울수도있겠네요.
2013-05-28 22:40 koreapenguin: 뭐하시면 제가 작업해서 드리면되니 말씀해주세요.
2013-05-28 22:41 S e e U: 음 오프셋 움직이는 이유가 따로있나요?
2013-05-28 22:41 koreapenguin: 오프셋은
2013-05-28 22:41 koreapenguin: 말로표현하기가어렵고.
2013-05-28 22:41 koreapenguin: 비트맵에서
2013-05-28 22:41 koreapenguin: 오프셋이안맞는다는것은
2013-05-28 22:41 koreapenguin: 노래랑 박자랑 안맞는다는것하고 같아요
2013-05-28 22:42 S e e U: 음 일단
2013-05-28 22:43 S e e U: orz파일로 묶어뒀어요
2013-05-28 22:43 S e e U: osz네
2013-05-28 22:43 koreapenguin: 굿
2013-05-28 22:45 S e e U: 그럼 스레드 올려두시면 나중에 확인할께요
2013-05-28 22:45 koreapenguin: 지금작업하셔야
2013-05-28 22:45 koreapenguin: 모딩받기편하실텐데.
2013-05-28 22:46 S e e U: 오래걸릴줄 알구요 ㅋㅋ;
2013-05-28 22:46 koreapenguin: 변속있는곡이아니라면
2013-05-28 22:46 koreapenguin: 금방되요.
2013-05-28 22:46 koreapenguin: 다만 정확히 재야하니
2013-05-28 22:46 koreapenguin: 다소 시간이걸릴뿐이죠.
2013-05-28 22:47 koreapenguin: 자이제.
2013-05-28 22:47 koreapenguin: 알려드릴테니
2013-05-28 22:47 koreapenguin: 하드작업하시고
2013-05-28 22:47 koreapenguin: 다른난이도도 똑같이 이행하시면되요.
2013-05-28 22:47 koreapenguin: 우선 컨트롤 A로 노트전체 복사하세요.
2013-05-28 22:47 S e e U: ' ~'
2013-05-28 22:48 koreapenguin: 컨트롤 C로 말이죠.
2013-05-28 22:48 S e e U: 네 했어요
2013-05-28 22:48 koreapenguin: 이작업이끝나기전까진 절때로 컨트롤 C를 다시누르시면안되요.
2013-05-28 22:49 koreapenguin: 자이제 타이밍 셋업으로가셔서
2013-05-28 22:49 koreapenguin: 아...가시면 챗을못보시는구나
2013-05-28 22:49 koreapenguin: 그냥 외워서 하세요.
2013-05-28 22:50 koreapenguin: 아니면 제가 해드릴까요?
2013-05-28 22:50 S e e U: 아뇨 계속 말씀하세요
2013-05-28 22:50 S e e U: 쇼틱 켜놓을테니
2013-05-28 22:52 koreapenguin: 이제 모든 타이밍라인을 12만큼 이동시켜야하는데.
2013-05-28 22:52 koreapenguin: 타이밍 셋업으로가셔서
2013-05-28 22:52 koreapenguin: 그상태로
2013-05-28 22:52 koreapenguin: 컨트롤 A누르시면
2013-05-28 22:52 koreapenguin: 모두 선택이되는데
2013-05-28 22:52 koreapenguin: 왼쪽에 무브투 어쩌고 저쩌고있을꺼에요.
2013-05-28 22:52 koreapenguin: 거기에 12쓰시고 무브버튼눌러주세요.
2013-05-28 22:53 koreapenguin: 하셨나요?>
2013-05-28 22:53 koreapenguin: 그후 노트 컨트롤 V하시고
2013-05-28 22:53 koreapenguin: 시작지점에 V하셔야해요.
2013-05-28 22:53 S e e U: 네
2013-05-28 22:53 koreapenguin: 00:20:561 - 여기에 V하시면되겠네요.
2013-05-28 22:54 S e e U: 싹다 지우고
2013-05-28 22:54 koreapenguin: 다른난이도도 마찬가지로
2013-05-28 22:54 koreapenguin: 같은작업이행해주시면되요.
2013-05-28 22:54 S e e U: 네 ㅎㅎ
2013-05-28 22:54 koreapenguin: 모딩끝
2013-05-28 22:54 koreapenguin: 원하시면 다른난이도 작업끝나시면 다시불러주세요.
2013-05-28 22:55 S e e U: 넵!

GL ><
StaticSphere
음..

인세인도 어렵긴 한데 하드도 애매한 부분이 있는 거 같습니다만..

02:39:228 - 여기 살짝 거슬리네여..

저만 그런가..
Topic Starter
S e e U

StaticSphere wrote:

흠..

직접 해본 결과로는..

인세인도 어렵긴 한데 하드도 애매한 부분이 있는 거 같습니다만..

2분 39초 부분이 살짝 거슬리네요..

저만 그런가..
자세하게 수정안을 제시하거나 쉬프트+F12번 스샷으로 설명해주셔야되요
+ 시간은 에디터화면에서 걍 컨트롤+C눌러서 글쓸때 붙여넣기하면 됩니당
StaticSphere
02:39:228 - 그냥 전 개인적이지만 여기가 거슬려요 ㅇㅅ;;

다르게 해주실 순 없나여?
Topic Starter
S e e U

StaticSphere wrote:

02:39:228 - 그냥 전 개인적이지만 여기가 거슬려요 ㅇㅅ;;

다르게 해주실 순 없나여?
별 이상한점 못느끼겠는뎅.. :o
Pipse Cola
Mod Request

GENERAL:
You should search for other backgrounds, they're a bit small, recommended size is 1024x768.

Hard
00:37:895 (5) - Finish sound maybe?
00:46:339 (3) - Reverse it one more time.
01:37:228 (2,3) - I'd replace the doubletts with Sliders, to be honest, all of them, because Doubletts are not that nice to play, imo they should be in Insane only.
02:05:450 (5) - Whistle here?
02:35:672 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - You should snap the "Two-Button-Groups" with a higher or no distance, it's a bit confusing with those trippletts
02:39:228 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - same here. (I'd suggest no distance)
03:01:006 (6) - NC?
03:06:783 (7) - NC?
03:27:006 (5,6) - Flipp vertically.
03:40:478 (3) - This Note is not snapped, it's supposed to be on 03:40:450 - Blue Line.
04:23:450 (6,7) - Finish or whistle sounds here or sth?

Insane

00:22:561 (2,3,4) - I suggest you to lower the distance snap in these trippletts or streams, I know many people who don't like playing such things
00:25:672 (6) - Try to put this one more inside the room.
00:52:895 (7) - This one looks better with x: 408, y: 232 imo
01:01:006 (1,2,3,4,5) - Higher Distance between 1/2/3 or lower distance betwen 3/4/5, it's a bit confusing like this.
01:03:006 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Very nice! But try to put 10 more inside the room.
01:07:228 (6,7) - Im not a fan of overlapping distances betwen sliderend and button, but if its ur style u can keep it, but if u do, you should higher the distance between 01:19:450 (7,8,9,10) - 7/8 and 9/10,
E. g. :
7 x: 344 y: 192
8 x: 424 y: 192
9/10 just mirrored 7/8 horizontally. (In addition maybe rotated counterclockwise 45°?)
And I suggest Finish sounds on all four buttons.

01:42:117 (5,6) - Try to put these more inside the room
01:53:006 (1,2) - Instead of this positioning u could use the 00:52:561 (6,7) - rotated.
02:07:672 (2) - NC?
02:19:895 (4,5,6,7) - imo, it would fit better if u put the longer distance between 6/7 instead of 4/5.
02:39:006 - Insert Note here, sounds better to me plus NC on 02:39:228 (6) -
02:42:561 - Insert Note here with Clap(?) sound and
02:42:783 - Insert Note here with Finish or Whistle, sounds good.
03:26:783 (4,5,6) - Maybe use Finish or Whistle sound here?
04:23:895 (11) - Make a Slider out of this to 04:24:006 - ? Additional you could reduce the audio to 25% or sth.

I really like your song and the Hard diff, Insane has awsome parts but I honestly dont like these Far-away-from-the-next-button-streams :) But gooooood job!
Topic Starter
S e e U

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Mod Request

GENERAL:
You should search for other backgrounds, they're a bit small, recommended size is 1024x768.

Hard
00:37:895 (5) - Finish sound maybe? Fixed
00:46:339 (3) - Reverse it one more time. Fixed
01:37:228 (2,3) - I'd replace the doubletts with Sliders, to be honest, all of them, because Doubletts are not that nice to play, imo they should be in Insane only. Fixed
02:05:450 (5) - Whistle here?
02:35:672 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - You should snap the "Two-Button-Groups" with a higher or no distance, it's a bit confusing with those trippletts Fixed
02:39:228 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - same here. (I'd suggest no distance) Fixed
03:01:006 (6) - NC? Fixed
03:06:783 (7) - NC? Fixed
03:27:006 (5,6) - Flipp vertically. Fixed
03:40:478 (3) - This Note is not snapped, it's supposed to be on 03:40:450 - Blue Line. Fixed
04:23:450 (6,7) - Finish or whistle sounds here or sth? Fixed

Insane

00:22:561 (2,3,4) - I suggest you to lower the distance snap in these trippletts or streams, I know many people who don't like playing such things Fixed
00:25:672 (6) - Try to put this one more inside the room. Fixed
00:52:895 (7) - This one looks better with x: 408, y: 232 imo Fixed
01:01:006 (1,2,3,4,5) - Higher Distance between 1/2/3 or lower distance betwen 3/4/5, it's a bit confusing like this. Fixed
01:03:006 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Very nice! But try to put 10 more inside the room. Fixed
01:07:228 (6,7) - Im not a fan of overlapping distances betwen sliderend and button, but if its ur style u can keep it, but if u do, you should higher the distance between 01:19:450 (7,8,9,10) - 7/8 and 9/10, Fixed
E. g. :
7 x: 344 y: 192
8 x: 424 y: 192
9/10 just mirrored 7/8 horizontally. (In addition maybe rotated counterclockwise 45°?)
And I suggest Finish sounds on all four buttons. Fixed

01:42:117 (5,6) - Try to put these more inside the room Fixed
01:53:006 (1,2) - Instead of this positioning u could use the 00:52:561 (6,7) - rotated. Fixed
02:07:672 (2) - NC? Fixed
02:19:895 (4,5,6,7) - imo, it would fit better if u put the longer distance between 6/7 instead of 4/5. Fixed
02:39:006 - Insert Note here, sounds better to me plus NC on 02:39:228 (6) - Fixed
02:42:561 - Insert Note here with Clap(?) sound and Fixed
02:42:783 - Insert Note here with Finish or Whistle, sounds good. Fixed
03:26:783 (4,5,6) - Maybe use Finish or Whistle sound here?
04:23:895 (11) - Make a Slider out of this to 04:24:006 - ? Additional you could reduce the audio to 25% or sth. Fixed

I really like your song and the Hard diff, Insane has awsome parts but I honestly dont like these Far-away-from-the-next-button-streams :) But gooooood job!
Thx!I'll fix your mod
watashino_old
Hi~M4M plz~

General
I think offset should be 00:13:450 -
Insane
00:27:672 (7) - add nc here and remove nc at 00:28:117 (1) - because you add nc at every downbeat

sorry i am not good at mod insane...
Hard
00:21:783 (5) - move to X:292 Y:304

00:24:117 (1) - Will it be more better?

00:33:006 (6) - nc?

00:55:228 (3) - this slider has a little bit ugly. suggest to make like this:

01:03:672 (2) - move to X:224 Y:296?

01:08:783 (7) - end of the slider can be put at X:496 Y:120 like this:

01:16:894 (11) - suggest to add a note here

02:19:450 (5,6,8) - should be overlapped more better, i think

02:37:006 (3) - add nc here because of the change of the note.

02:40:562 (3) - ^

02:41:895 (1) - Consider to make like this:

02:55:895 (2) - suggest remove this note and add slider here.
Normal
00:23:672 (5) - move to X;352 Y:232 may be more better

00:24:117 (6) - i think this slider has a little bit ugly. try this :)
code
304,120,24117,2,0,B|264:128|232:168|232:168|184:176,1,120

00:24:117 - a very long combo in normal...strongly recommend adding nc here.

00:27:672 - ^

00:31:228 - ^

okay...one thing want to say is, normal should not be more than 8/12 (forgotten :? ) in a combo.

00:34:783 (1,4) - this two note be X:112 will be more better?

00:37:450 (6) - ^same Y:282 will be more better.

00:43:672 (16) - spacing...now is 0.94X. normal should have same spacing. Otherwise, it may confuse newbie.

00:53:450 (7,8) - if you want to make slider like this, suggest to make overlapping at the end of the slider.

01:05:895 (27) - i think this may be more better:
code
216,144,65895,2,0,B|192:168|192:168|144:152|104:176,1,120

01:10:339 (33) - move to X:168 Y:264

01:38:783 (8) - umm...has a little bit ugly...suggest to change it

01:40:561 (12) - ^

01:41:450 (13) - change to slider will be more better

02:03:672 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - this...awesome but may confuse newbie. suggest change to slider.

02:20:006 (52,53) - spacing~
hope my mod is useful for you. If you have time, can you mod my map too?
Topic Starter
S e e U

watashino wrote:

Hi~M4M plz~

General
I think offset should be 00:13:450 -


Insane
00:27:672 (7) - add nc here and remove nc at 00:28:117 (1) - because you add nc at every downbeat Fixed

sorry i am not good at mod insane...
Hard
00:21:783 (5) - move to X:292 Y:304 Fixed

00:24:117 (1) - Will it be more better? Fixed


00:33:006 (6) - nc? Fixed

00:55:228 (3) - this slider has a little bit ugly. suggest to make like this: Fixed


01:03:672 (2) - move to X:224 Y:296? Fixed

01:08:783 (7) - end of the slider can be put at X:496 Y:120 like this: Fixed

01:16:894 (11) - suggest to add a note here

02:19:450 (5,6,8) - should be overlapped more better, i think Fixed Another way

02:37:006 (3) - add nc here because of the change of the note. Fixed

02:40:562 (3) - ^ Fixed

02:41:895 (1) - Consider to make like this:

02:55:895 (2) - suggest remove this note and add slider here. Fixed
Normal
00:23:672 (5) - move to X;352 Y:232 may be more better Fixed

00:24:117 (6) - i think this slider has a little bit ugly. try this :) Fixed
code
304,120,24117,2,0,B|264:128|232:168|232:168|184:176,1,120

00:24:117 - a very long combo in normal...strongly recommend adding nc here. Fixed

00:27:672 - ^ Fixed

00:31:228 - ^ Fixed

okay...one thing want to say is, normal should not be more than 8/12 (forgotten :? ) in a combo. Thank you!

00:34:783 (1,4) - this two note be X:112 will be more better? Fixed

00:37:450 (6) - ^same Y:282 will be more better. Fixed

00:43:672 (16) - spacing...now is 0.94X. normal should have same spacing. Otherwise, it may confuse newbie. Fixed

00:53:450 (7,8) - if you want to make slider like this, suggest to make overlapping at the end of the slider. Fixed

01:05:895 (27) - i think this may be more better: Fixed
code
216,144,65895,2,0,B|192:168|192:168|144:152|104:176,1,120

01:10:339 (33) - move to X:168 Y:264 Fixed

01:38:783 (8) - umm...has a little bit ugly...suggest to change it Fixed

01:40:561 (12) - ^ Fixed

01:41:450 (13) - change to slider will be more better Fixed

02:03:672 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - this...awesome but may confuse newbie. suggest change to slider. Fixed

02:20:006 (52,53) - spacing~ Fixed
hope my mod is useful for you. If you have time, can you mod my map too?
Thanks to mod :D
I'll modding your map :)
HabiHolic



모딩 늦어서 ㅈㅅ합니다 ㅠㅠ


[Normal]
HD -1, AR -1, OD -2
00:22:339 (1) - 여기 뉴콤제거 00:24:117 (4) - 여기에 뉴콤
00:22:339 (1) - 피니쉬 제거 대신 클랩 추가
00:24:117 (4) - 거리 약간 어긋났네요..
00:43:672 (3) - 피니쉬 제거
00:56:561 (4,6) - 노트 안겹치도록 해주시면 좋겠습니다
00:59:228 (3,4,5,6) - 너무 산만해서 지저분해 보여요
01:03:228 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:06:783 (2) - 여기에 뉴콤
01:08:117 (4) - 끝에 피니쉬를 제거하고 클랩으로 대체
01:14:783 (2,3) - 디스턴스 어긋나는것처럼 보여요 다른곳에 배치좀요
01:15:672 (4) - 처음부분 피니쉬 제거
01:19:561 (4,5,6) - 노멀에서는 이런패턴쓰시면 안됩니다
01:40:561 (5) - 모양 잘 다듬기
01:41:450 (6) - 변속이 안어울립니다
01:45:895 (1) - 이쁘게 다듬을것
01:46:783 (2) - 클랩제거
01:47:228 (3) - 여기에 클랩
01:53:895 (4,5) - 겹치지 않도록 배치할것
01:57:006 (2,3,4) - ^
02:19:672 (3,4,5) - 패턴이 너무 어렵습니다
03:33:895 (3) - 끝에 피니쉬 제거
03:41:450 (4) - 피니쉬 제거


[Hard]
00:46:339 (3) - 반복한번 제거하고 00:47:006 - 이곳에 서클추가
01:07:228 (2,3) - 이런건 어떠신가요?


01:43:895 - 이곳에 노트추가
01:53:005 (1,2) - 패턴 제안입니다


01:55:672 (3) - 디스턴스 지킬것
02:04:117 (2,4) - Ctrl + G
02:10:783 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
02:14:339 (1) - ^
02:16:117 (7) - 피니쉬 제거

GL 바빠서 이렇게만 모딩하겠습니다 남은건 나중에 하겠습니다 ㅈㅅㅈㅅ ㅠㅠ
bilang5820
I love this song! :)
It's sounds good! :D
But I want to play the TAIKO MODE. :(
Can I make a TAIKO MODE? :)
Topic Starter
S e e U

bilang5820 wrote:

I love this song! :)
It's sounds good! :D
But I want to play the TAIKO MODE. :(
Can I make a TAIKO MODE? :)
ok :)
veniastcline
Hi, I like this song so much :3 Random quick mod, pls dont be hard on me, this is my first mod x_x

Just suggestion, add 'hatsune miku', 'vocaloid', 'vocaloid2' on the tags. I've seen other map with tags like that :D

Insane

00:21:189 (3,2,4) It looks not really neat imo, why dont change is like this:
00:32:288 (3,4,5) Make the circle under slider more easy to read?
01:14:691 (4) make the circle further from the last slider?
02:07:587 (2) ^
02:12:712 (6,7) why not stack?
04:23:669 (5,6) ^

Uh that's all I can try to mod >< Hope this useful, all of my mod there is just a suggestion ^^ GL! Tell me if you want further modding, I can try :3
Topic Starter
S e e U

veniastcline wrote:

Hi, I like this song so much :3 Random quick mod, pls dont be hard on me, this is my first mod x_x

Just suggestion, add 'hatsune miku', 'vocaloid', 'vocaloid2' on the tags. I've seen other map with tags like that :D

Insane

00:21:189 (3,2,4) It looks not really neat imo, why dont change is like this:
00:32:288 (3,4,5) Make the circle under slider more easy to read?
01:14:691 (4) make the circle further from the last slider?
02:07:587 (2) ^
02:12:712 (6,7) why not stack?
04:23:669 (5,6) ^

Uh that's all I can try to mod >< Hope this useful, all of my mod there is just a suggestion ^^ GL! Tell me if you want further modding, I can try :3
thx! :D
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