1. Easy (3.16 stars, 107 notes)
2. Hard (4.92 stars, 235 notes)
3. Kuro's Taiko Oni (4.78 stars, 502 notes)
4. Normal (4.26 stars, 144 notes)
5. Prism (5 stars, 310 notes)
6. SR's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 469 notes)
7. Taikin Muzukashii (4.76 stars, 349 notes)

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

미연시 오프닝 같은데
미연시 오프닝은 short ver. 써야되요.

여담이지만 아이리 노래는 개꿀곡이 많네요.

ricky981021 wrote:

모두 수정 완료.
[ GENERAL ]



offset 180 -> 181 하드만 바꾸면대죠?

난이도는 대문자로 prism -> Prism

[ Prism ]

드레인이 너무 쎼요..!

00:45:556 (3) - NC 추가
01:27:743 - NC 추가
01:35:243 - 스핀 끝날때 무음으로 하면 조을듯 ㅇㅋㅇㅋ

[ Hard ]

00:38:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - 하드가 점프?! 그냥 디스턴스 맞추는개조을듯
01:29:055 - 무음으로 처리

[ Normal ]

00:55:305 (4) - ㅋㅋ엇박을 무시햇어여
01:04:867 (1) - 스핀너무짧음앞에 써클지우고 스핀늘리세요
01:29:055 (1) - 또 무음 ㄱㄱ

[ Easy ]

01:01:867 (4) - 슬라이더를 1/4박자 길게
01:29:055 (1) - 무음처리


무음처리는 5%인데 저절로 나는거에요
와우 존잘ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Miya wrote:

Wrong, the offset is too early ><

Here is my timing :

BPM 160
Offset 555

That's it, i get overal 0ms with that offset.
Good luck ^^

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey!

[Overall]
I guess you need to put 16+ content warning in creator's words since video have some fan service (you know, osu! is a game w/o age restrictions)
Prism diff have 181 offset while ather diff's have 180 lol..i like this video><
You obviously need some hitsounds in your diff's i think so i'm looking for hitsounds~

[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:12:555 (4) - I'd suggest to remove it and start 00:12:742 (5) from herefixed
Rest seems fine

[prism]
Why not [Insane]? umm..just my mind?
Spinner at the start seems too long. Consider to reduce it.
00:52:118 (3,4) - breaking playing rhythm a bit. Consider to respace i don't think its so bad

That's all I can find. Good luck w/ it

HabiHolic wrote:

Yo

히트사운드 삽입 부탁드립니다 구하는중ㅠㅠㅠ
BG 변경바랍니다 랭크 권장사이즈는 800 X 600 , 1024 X 768 입니다 수정하겟습니다

[Easy]
00:52:492 (1) - 스피너 안어울리는데.. 수정완료.
01:04:867 (1) - 흐억... 스피너들어가있네요 이건 난이도유지가 잘 안되서 지우시고 이구간 매핑해주세요 수정완료.
01:21:555 - 노트추가 이부분이 비어있으니까 어색한 기분이 드네요 수정완료.
01:28:492 (1) - 뉴콤 제거 수정완료.

[Normal]
이지하고 다른점을 못느끼겠습니다.. AR이라던지 이런것들좀 높여주세요 AR+1 HP+1
00:50:242 (3,4,5) - 겹치지 않도록 배치하는건 어떤가요? 수정완료.
00:57:367 (1,2) - ^ 수정완료.
00:57:930 (1,2) - ^ 수정완료.

[Hard]

00:12:555 (4) - 지우고 00:12:742 (5) - 이 슬라이더의 시작을 00:12:367 - 여기서부터 하고 00:13:117 - 여기에 서클추가 수정완료.
00:38:242 (7) - Ctrl + G? 음..이건 디스턴스때문에~ + 플라하시는분들 너무 쉽게깰까봐도 잇구요..ㅋㅋ
00:49:117 (1) - 뉴콤제거 수정완료.

Good Map Star +1

jonathanlfj wrote:

m4m~
song is nice

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
use (Short Ver.)? capitalize the letter v lol my caps lock doesn't work!!
The bg is somewhat low quality, here is a better (kinda) one in widescreen: thx i'll use it

SPOILER

i saw alot of interesting things while searching for the bg

Change audio lead-in to 2000ms in the .osu files
instead of tagging "op", tag "opening" since beatmap search does not accept strings with less than 3 characters fixed

[Easy]
would like to see some different hitsounds, e.g. finishes. Hitsound suggestions apply to all diffs (i will point out a few, the rest are up to you)
00:06:555 (1) - finish on slider start fixed
00:10:305 (2) - finish on end fixed
00:10:305 (2) - finish fixed
00:12:555 (1) - finish on start fixed
00:18:555 (1) - finish on end fixed
00:26:055 (3) - try to not overlap with 00:25:305 (2) yep!
00:30:555 (1) - finish on start fixed
00:41:055 (2) - finishfixed
00:42:555 (1) - finish on startfixed
00:51:555 (4) - NC, and finish on startfixed
00:54:555 (2) - finish on start, and then ones after i will leave for you to judge fixed
01:01:867 (1) - no need for NC, and this repeat slider lands on a really awkward rhythm, how bout this:

SPOILER

good idea fixed
01:06:930 (2) - try to avoid partially overlapped notes fixed
01:09:930 (2) - don't make extra repeats in an Easy, it will confuse newbie players and cause them to lose the rhythm they are following. use long slider instead
01:19:680 (4) - spacing fixed
01:27:742 (1) - take off NC fixed
Aside from finishes, it also wont hurt to use claps on the 2nd and 4th white lines of a measure, as you can clearly hear clap sounds on those spots
i think so im looking for proper hitsound

[Normal]
00:36:367 - felt like there should be a note here fixed
01:04:867 (1) - this spinner is a bit too short and challenging for a Normal diff, it will kinda rush the player to spin and surprise them with notes appearing so soon after the spinner. Consider using a long slider or repeat slider instead (if you do that, end it at 01:05:617) fixed i put notes there
01:13:680 - add note? it would be hard for normal diff.
overall nicely made diff

[Hard]
00:09:180 (4) - stack on the end of 00:08:055 (1) fixed
00:15:930 (1) - NC necessary? i would remove itfixed
00:42:555 (3) - NC here instead of 00:43:305 (1) (finish sound indicates start of new verse)fixed
00:47:055 (6) - not stacked properly with 00:46:305 (4)fixed
00:52:492 (1,2) - this one plays better if you make it into a triplet imo (add note at 00:52:586)fixed
this is a nice diff as well~ thanks!

[Prism]
capitalize the p in prism xD kkkkkkkkkk
00:00:181 (1) - this feels better if u start it at 00:00:556 insteadfixed
00:08:431 (2) - stack on 00:07:681 (4)fixed
00:17:618 (1) - take off the NC so the follow points will appear from 00:17:243 (1)fixed
00:24:368 (1,2,3) - not stacked properly ><fixed - an eagle eye
00:42:556 (9) - NC here instead of 00:43:306 (1)fixed
00:52:493 (4,5,6,7,1) - spacing on this stream is a bit messy, clean it up with a constant distance spacingfixed
00:56:993 (4) - reverse selection flows better imofixed
01:05:431 (1,2,3,4) - this jump flows better onto the stream if you can somehow rearrange it so the last note is at the position of 01:05:806 (3)
01:13:587 (1) - NC not really neededfixed
01:20:618 (2,3) - reverse selection?fixed - goodbbb
jumps are neat, just clean up some stacking issues between notes that are close on the time line and this diff will be great

Very solid mapset, just invest some time into hitsounding and it should be good to go. Here is a star and good luck~

THANK YOU~!!

Verlaren wrote:

Hai~ M4M from Aincrad's Modding queue~

Red: Must be fixed
Blue: Higly recommended
Black: suggenstion

General:
delete all bookmarks Fixed
remove from tags - op, AiRI
add to tags - Clochette, Pricolle, Kugayama Masanobu, Aina Ashwin, Kugayama Konoka, Renjou Sayaka, Uisaki Hinano,
Kujou Hatsune, Kujou Izumi, Mashiba Tae, Ooshima Hikari, Uisaki Utako, Veronica Adelheid Heinzel,
Kugayama Atsuro, Kugayama Shizuka, Teramae Anzu, Uisaki Yoshino.Fixed
Your background is a pretty poor quality, change on more quality picture with resolution 1024x768(4:3) or 1366x768(16:9)Fixed
Also you have a video and audio file of poor quality; I recommend find audio with 192kbps and video 480p; If you can not do this, then you can ask me via PM in forum. Help me about video..
and deselect letterbox during breaks, because you haven't a storyboard.
Kiai-time must be started on 00:54:555 and ends on 01:12:180
01:17:055 - remove this kiai, there is no need[/color]Fixed


Easy:
01:17:805 (1,2) - spacing error
01:18:555 (2,3) - ^Fixed
01:18:930 (3,4) - ^[/color]Fixed
00:12:555 (1,3) - make a more symmetrical shape. For example -

SPOILER

or

SPOILER

or

SPOILER

Fixed like 1
00:23:430 (4,5) - change on 1/1 slide. IMO is betterFixed
00:26:055 (3,4) - one grid up. 00:25:305(2) touches 00:26:055(3).Fixed
00:54:555 (2,3) - change this patterns on one slider: start in 00:54:555 with duration to 00:55:117 and add one reverse

SPOILER

Fixed
00:54:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this shape:

SPOILER

Fixed
00:56:055 (3) - new combo, because easy diff should not be more than 4-5 combo on one color. And the beginners difficult to recover after misses.Fixed
01:01:867 (1) - Reduce slider on one tick. 1/2 be a much better. Fixed
01:23:055 (1) - move on one grid right for symmetryFixed
01:29:055 (1) - extend spinner on two ticks(1/4 beat snap). IMO is better.Fixed


Normal:
OMG...
DR -2!
AR -1!Fixed
That is normal diff~
00:20:055 (4) - change on:Fixed

SPOILER

Fixed
It is more convenient to play and easier to read.
00:23:055 (5,6) - unstack this. In Normal isn't recommended.Fixed
00:45:555 (1,2,3) - make a perfect symmetrical sliders!Fixed
00:58:492 (1) - remove NCFixed
01:01:117 (3,4) - in normal diff shouldn't be a hidden notes. i put extra sliders there~
01:06:367 (2) - remove note . Leave such a model for the high diffs.Fixed
01:12:367 (2) - ^Fixed
01:14:805 (2) - move on x:114 y:210 or use -

SPOILER

Fixed
01:15:555 (1) - this spinner must be ended on 01:16:880Fixed
01:29:055 (1) - extend spinner on two ticks(1/4 beat snap). IMO is better.


Hard:
00:07:680 (4) - move on one grid down (x:291 y:299) for symmetryFixed
00:12:555 (4) - move on one grid down for symmetryFixed
00:15:930 (1) - remove NCFixed
00:52:867 (3,4) - stack this notes.Fixed
01:28:492 (1) - remove NCFixed
01:29:055 (1) - extend spinner on two ticks(1/4 beat snap). IMO is better.
good job.


Prism:
AR -1 sry i use only AR9 for insane diff.
00:07:681 (4,1) - make a perfect stack!
00:07:868 (1,3) - ^Fixed
00:17:618 (1,1) - remove this NC's it's for users to know the 3/4beats~ i didnt change it
00:42:556 (9,2) - make a perfect stack!Fixed
00:45:556 (1) - remove NCFixed
00:52:118 (3,4) - random spacing....please use regular spacing, here)Fixed
01:06:931 (2,5) - make a perfect stack!Fixed
01:14:806 (1,1) - remove this NC's just for highlight
01:29:056 (1) - ^
01:29:055 (1) - extend spinner on two ticks(1/4 beat snap). IMO is better.
good job!
THANKS~!

I also would like to emphasize one more thing - In your map is not absent hitsounds. Absolute. Remember - their presence is very important for the map.
I can help you with that (if you want ask me in game). You can also ask someone else to help you with this.
That's all, good luck.