1. Easy (0.61 stars, 43 notes)
2. Hard (4.82 stars, 181 notes)
3. Normal (3.1 stars, 92 notes)

Foxxer wrote:

Timing Check~

Put the offset on 600, sounds better fixed

Cartridge wrote:

看來你有變動過bpm及offset
變動後會導致所有圓圈不在拍子上
請Resnap All Notes(必要)

另外我覺得Insane比較像Hard難度 因BPM偏低

Nemis wrote:

From TAM's Modding Queue

[Hard]
Please, check all the spacing, you changed it in random occasions: it's not fun to play! I suggest to use x1.2 in the kiai and x1 in the other parts.
00:00:858 (3) - I suggest to change this form
00:04:479 (6) - I suggest to change this form too
00:00:729 (2) - This spinner isn't needed, map this part um... there are no spinner, but maybe i know you mean where.
00:15:729 (3) - Remove this note and add one here 00:15:987 (5) - since there is a triple
00:20:255 (4) - Change this form, or at least fix it fixed
00:37:582 (2,3,4) - Use the same spacing for there sliders
00:45:600 (1) - This spinner is not needed
00:47:151 (1) - Add here a spinner that ends at 00:49:479 (1) -
This difficulty needs work! Try to fix the spacing how I said above okay!

[Normal]
00:07:324 (3,4,5,1,2) - Fix this curve well.. try to fix but not very sure.
00:12:496 (1) - This is unsnapped
00:15:599 (2) - This is unsnapped
00:18:703 (1) - You should change this form and this position, this slider isn't good esthetically with the previous one
00:18:703 (1) - This is unsnapped
00:20:772 (3) - This is unsnapped
00:21:806 (4) - This is unsnapped
00:23:358 (1) - This is unsnapped
00:25:427 (1) - Move this slider in the center
00:26:979 (2) - Move this beat in the center too
00:27:496 (3) - This is unsnapped
00:29:048 (1) - This is unsnapped
00:30:600 (3) - This is unsnapped
00:32:668 (2,2) - This is unsnapped
00:34:220 (5) - This is unsnapped
00:36:806 (3) - Make this slider more adherent with 00:36:289 (2) - and snap it

SPOILER

00:40:427 (10) - This is unsnapped
00:41:979 (1) - This is unsnapped
00:43:531 (1) - This spinner is not needed. Map this part
00:47:151 (1) - Add here a spinner that ends at 00:49:479 (1) -
00:50:255 (1,2) - These are unsnapped
00:54:910 (2) - This is unsnapped
00:56:462 (5,6) - These are unsnapped
01:01:117 (2) - This is unsnapped

[Easy]
All the sliders are unsnapped here too, fix them.
00:50:255 (1,2,3) - This is not easy and it hasn't got any sense...
Moreover it's unrankable:

• 
  00:06:289 (1) - Feels off, not sure what about it. Sorry I can't be more specific.
  00:26:979 (2) - This one is before the slider ends. That seems like a problem to me.
  00:30:599 (4,5,6) - These feel like they don't have a lot of connection to the actual music. The ends of the sliders in particular.
  00:40:427 (1) - This slider should probably end at 00:40:944 to match up properly with the music.
  00:41:979 (2) - This one should probably end at 00:42:496 to match up.
  00:51:806 (2,3) - Same problem here as earlier, the circles and sliders overlap in a way that is not only unintuitive for the player, I'm pretty sure it's unrankable. A new player might have difficulties with the speed at which the next comes as well.
  
  Overall, it feels like this difficulty has problems sticking to the music.

• 
  00:07:324 (3,4,5,1,2) - This curve is rather angular as it is. Try rounding it out a bit.
  00:43:531 (1) - You add a spinner without any change in the music. The spinner is better suited starting at 00:47:151 and ends at 00:48:703.

• 
  This difficulty is difficult to mod, I don't know where to start. The spacing is off, for starters. I can't hear anything that justifies shoving triplets in everywhere.
  00:51:548 (4,5,6,7,8) - These notes appear to be off beat.
  00:57:237 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same as above.

Dwargkiller wrote:

Hello! Dwargkiller reporting in from his/her queue.
[General]
Consider changing the background picture to one that is smaller or equal to 1024*768 change
01:01:117 - The fadeout is a bit quick and jarring. The last note is completely silent, giving no feedback that it's actually been hit. I try to use slider, it sound not bad.
[Easy]

• 
  00:06:289 (1) - Feels off, not sure what about it. Sorry I can't be more specific. um.. I try to fixd.
  00:26:979 (2) - This one is before the slider ends. That seems like a problem to me. ^
  00:30:599 (4,5,6) - These feel like they don't have a lot of connection to the actual music. The ends of the sliders in particular.fixed
  00:40:427 (1) - This slider should probably end at 00:40:944 to match up properly with the music. fixed
  00:41:979 (2) - This one should probably end at 00:42:496 to match up. fixed
  00:51:806 (2,3) - Same problem here as earlier, the circles and sliders overlap in a way that is not only unintuitive for the player, I'm pretty sure it's unrankable. A new player might have difficulties with the speed at which the next comes as well. oops, fixed!
  
  Overall, it feels like this difficulty has problems sticking to the music. D:

[Normal]

• 
  00:07:324 (3,4,5,1,2) - This curve is rather angular as it is. Try rounding it out a bit. fixed
  00:43:531 (1) - You add a spinner without any change in the music. The spinner is better suited starting at 00:47:151 and ends at 00:48:703. fixed

[Hard]

• 
  This difficulty is difficult to mod, I don't know where to start. The spacing is off, for starters. I can't hear anything that justifies shoving triplets in everywhere. D: Never mind.
  00:51:548 (4,5,6,7,8) - These notes appear to be off beat. i think it maybe can be like "~" (?)
  00:57:237 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same as above. ^

1. uhm no tags?
2. personaly i really don't like that for a such relaxing song you don't use sliderslide here for you -> http://puu.sh/2xFLK inser this in your folder and a second file too soft-sliderlide since you use a soft sampleset too and change all in timing to CS:1 and to CN:1
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:12:471 - snap to 00:12:496
2. 00:25:402 - snap to 00:25:427
3. 00:45:057 - snap to 00:45:082
4. 00:47:126 - snap to 00:47:151
5. 00:50:230 - snap to 00:50:255
6. 01:01:092 - snap to 01:01:117
7. 01:02:126 - snap to 01:02:151
8. 01:02:643 - snap to 01:02:668

1. 00:06:289 (1) - the next object is close
2. 00:12:496 (1) - the next object is to far
3. 00:26:979 (2) - next is to far
4. 00:55:944 (1) - next object is to far

1. 00:06:289 (1) - i think if you curve this slider it will have a better flow as now
2. 00:08:358 (2,3,4) - try do do a straight line like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:772 (2,3) - this overlap looks not so good try to improve it somehow by moving slider (2) -

1. You should add hitsounds >.<

1. 00:12:471 - snap to 00:12:496
2. 00:24:384 - snap to 00:24:393
3. 00:25:402 - snap to 00:25:427
4. 00:45:057 - snap to 00:45:082
5. 00:47:126 - snap to 00:47:151
6. 00:50:230 - snap to 00:50:255
7. 01:01:092 - snap to 01:01:117
8. 01:02:126 - snap to 01:02:151
9. 01:02:643 - snap to 01:02:668

1. add hitsounds
2. 00:06:289 (1) - curve this slider to have a better flow with the next circles
3. 00:09:393 (2) -same about here
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:37:841 - new combo here
5. 00:40:427 - new combo here
6. 00:47:151 (1) - this slider is cute but can be difficult to read for some beginners since this is a normal
7. 01:01:117 (2) - curve this slider to have a better flow for the next circles

1. I think you overuse triplets here try to remove some since it look like more a taiko map atm o3o
   and you should improve random jumps like 00:07:841 (5,1) -
2. 00:20:255 (4) - slider like this are a bit hard to read imo
3. Spacing is to close for a hard diff you should use more like 1.0 in a hard for a better flow and a better play, from: 00:50:255 - spacing seems a bit close try to do it a bit bigger in this part and in the other ofc too >.<

Lally wrote:

Hi from TAM queue :3
not a full mod,just first suggestions how to improve a bit your map

[General]

1. uhm no tags? eh, i don't know what word i can add.
2. personaly i really don't like that for a such relaxing song you don't use sliderslide here for you -> http://puu.sh/2xFLK inser this in your folder and a second file too soft-sliderlide since you use a soft sampleset too and change all in timing to CS:1 and to CN:1
   
   SPOILER

   

okay.
[Easy]
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:

1. 00:12:471 - snap to 00:12:496
2. 00:25:402 - snap to 00:25:427
3. 00:45:057 - snap to 00:45:082
4. 00:47:126 - snap to 00:47:151
5. 00:50:230 - snap to 00:50:255
6. 01:01:092 - snap to 01:01:117
7. 01:02:126 - snap to 01:02:151
8. 01:02:643 - snap to 01:02:668

all fixed

Spacing:

1. 00:06:289 (1) - the next object is close
2. 00:12:496 (1) - the next object is to far
3. 00:26:979 (2) - next is to far
4. 00:55:944 (1) - next object is to far

Placement:

1. 00:06:289 (1) - i think if you curve this slider it will have a better flow as now
2. 00:08:358 (2,3,4) - try do do a straight line like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:772 (2,3) - this overlap looks not so good try to improve it somehow by moving slider (2) -

i try to use that:

SPOILER

Hitsound:

1. You should add hitsounds >.<

okay i'll find which i can use. ^^

[Normal]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:

1. 00:12:471 - snap to 00:12:496
2. 00:24:384 - snap to 00:24:393
3. 00:25:402 - snap to 00:25:427
4. 00:45:057 - snap to 00:45:082
5. 00:47:126 - snap to 00:47:151
6. 00:50:230 - snap to 00:50:255
7. 01:01:092 - snap to 01:01:117
8. 01:02:126 - snap to 01:02:151
9. 01:02:643 - snap to 01:02:668

all fixed

General:

1. add hitsounds okay, i'll try.
2. 00:06:289 (1) - curve this slider to have a better flow with the next circles
3. 00:09:393 (2) -same about here
   
   SPOILER

   
   i try to use this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:37:841 - new combo here fixed
5. 00:40:427 - new combo here ^
6. 00:47:151 (1) - this slider is cute but can be difficult to read for some beginners since this is a normal
   thanks,i try to use 0.75x BPM, maybe can be easier.
7. 01:01:117 (2) - curve this slider to have a better flow for the next circles

fixed

[Hard]

1. I think you overuse triplets here try to remove some since it look like more a taiko map atm o3o
   and you should improve random jumps like 00:07:841 (5,1) -
   is it okay?:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:255 (4) - slider like this are a bit hard to read imo
   i try to use it:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. Spacing is to close for a hard diff you should use more like 1.0 in a hard for a better flow and a better play, from: 00:50:255 - spacing seems a bit close try to do it a bit bigger in this part and in the other ofc too >.<

i try to do that:

SPOILER

I hope it can help you to improve the map :3 thanks, it's helpful!
if you wanna try to mod my map here it is: >click o3o<

okay i'll try

Zero__wind wrote:

唔 看了一下 想mod一下但又不知道该怎么说……
还是多看看别人图 一开始就多学一学吧

哦对了 有一个必须说的建议： 加一个消音的normal-sliderslide！