This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 03, 2013 at 8:35:52 PM

Artist: Nomizu Iori
Title: Black + White (TV Size)
Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
Tags: momochi dakedekaane xinely hinsvar kuro usagi bunny girl asuka you izayoi adaption novel opening
BPM: 192
Filesize: 21667kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Dekaane's Normal (4.22 stars, 118 notes)
2. Easy (2.73 stars, 85 notes)
3. Hinely's Hard (4.94 stars, 220 notes)
4. Mochi (5 stars, 252 notes)

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hi~ from my queue
m4m time!

[General]

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1. Please change artist name.
   
   　
2. you should make red line in 00:11:479 - cuz downbeat.

[Chi's Hard]

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1. HP&OD+1
   　
2. 00:19:135 - add note?
   　
3. 00:40:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing and rhythm is very bad. try this rhythm.
   
   　
4. 00:45:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - not fit song. try this
   
   　
5. 00:49:292 (4,5,1) - bad spacing
   　
6. 00:51:167 (4,1,2) - not fit.. remove (4),(1) and 00:51:323 (2) - move to 00:51:167 -
   　
7. 00:52:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - difficult timing.

[Easy]

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1. 00:19:604 (2,1) - lol, spinner start is 00:19:995 - better.

good luck~

Timing check~

Offset: around 11465~11470

Posting here to claim Normal as requested, wait for it.

Also doing a quick tiny mod as only Hard is finished.

[General]
Taking SNB's timing suggestion, the offset should be 11470, change please.
The dimensions of the BG must be 800x600 or 1024x768.
Remove "Anime" and "Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo ?" from tags, the first will be put as genre if this gets ranked, the second you already have it as source.
Tiny Edit: The source should be "Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?", just delete the space between "yo" and the question mark

[Easy]

Increase the Approach Rate by 1, plays better with high BPM.
00:13:979 - How about trying this, matches better with the music

00:19:604 (2) - Delete this, begin the spinner in 00:19:917 and finishing in 00:22:104, if you do, add a circle in 00:22:729.
00:30:229 - How about trying this


[Chi's Hard]
I don't want to be rude, but you should increase the Slider Velocity at least to 1.4-1.5 or reduce the Distance Spacing you use between the notes, this will make more enjoyable the map, it's too hard to play having all those jumps with >2.0x spacing @_@, this looks more as an Insane, but still has rhythm flaws, I'll be pointing here.
Decrease the AR by 1 when you do what I said above.
Only rhythm, you should fix all of them. Some combo colors could change
00:13:979 - Try this, fits better

00:33:042 (4) - Move this to 00:33:198
00:35:229 - Do this rhythm

00:38:510 (2,4,6) - Remove these, there's no sound in the music to follow.
00:40:776 (3) - Delete this
00:40:932 (2) - Move this to 00:41:010
00:45:307 (2,3) - Delete this, don't overmap x,x
00:45:776 (2,3) - ^
01:03:979 (1,2,3,4) - This part is really messed up, there's no need to use if 1/4 beat ticks here, do this, if you listen carefully, it matches better.

01:07:573 (8) - Same as above, also follow the combo suggestions here.

01:09:213 - Put a circle here and delete 01:09:370 (4,5), the drums are not hitting there.
01:10:073 (7) - Delete this and put a circle in 01:10:229
01:10:463 - Add a circle here and delete 01:10:620 (1,2)
01:13:510 - Do this.

01:21:557 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:22:729
01:23:042 (1,2,3) - There's no drumroll or a guitar riff, there's no need to do this @_@, do what I suggest

01:25:698 (3) - Either stack or place it more spaced, an antijump like this is not good.

That's all, good luck.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Posting here to claim Normal as requested, wait for it.

Also doing a quick tiny mod as only Hard is finished.

[General]
Taking SNB's timing suggestion, the offset should be 11470, change please.
The dimensions of the BG must be 800x600 or 1024x768.
Remove "Anime" and "Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo ?" from tags, the first will be put as genre if this gets ranked, the second you already have it as source.
Tiny Edit: The source should be "Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?", just delete the space between "yo" and the question mark

[Easy]

Increase the Approach Rate by 1, plays better with high BPM.
00:13:979 - How about trying this, matches better with the music

00:19:604 (2) - Delete this, begin the spinner in 00:19:917 and finishing in 00:22:104, if you do, add a circle in 00:22:729.
00:30:229 - How about trying this


[Chi's Hard]
I don't want to be rude, but you should increase the Slider Velocity at least to 1.4-1.5 or reduce the Distance Spacing you use between the notes, this will make more enjoyable the map, it's too hard to play having all those jumps with >2.0x spacing @_@, this looks more as an Insane, but still has rhythm flaws, I'll be pointing here.
Decrease the AR by 1 when you do what I said above.
Only rhythm, you should fix all of them. Some combo colors could change
00:13:979 - Try this, fits better

00:33:042 (4) - Move this to 00:33:198
00:35:229 - Do this rhythm

00:38:510 (2,4,6) - Remove these, there's no sound in the music to follow.
00:40:776 (3) - Delete this
00:40:932 (2) - Move this to 00:41:010
00:45:307 (2,3) - Delete this, don't overmap x,x
00:45:776 (2,3) - ^
01:03:979 (1,2,3,4) - This part is really messed up, there's no need to use if 1/4 beat ticks here, do this, if you listen carefully, it matches better.

01:07:573 (8) - Same as above, also follow the combo suggestions here.

01:09:213 - Put a circle here and delete 01:09:370 (4,5), the drums are not hitting there.
01:10:073 (7) - Delete this and put a circle in 01:10:229
01:10:463 - Add a circle here and delete 01:10:620 (1,2)
01:13:510 - Do this.

01:21:557 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:22:729
01:23:042 (1,2,3) - There's no drumroll or a guitar riff, there's no need to do this @_@, do what I suggest

01:25:698 (3) - Either stack or place it more spaced, an antijump like this is not good.

That's all, good luck.

FIXED
Tq for mod..
I'll wait for ur normal

General:


Chi hard:


Easy:


call me back when u finish your map i check it again :3

Thx for mod. ^^ i'll finish my map this weekend

*.* more of her voice ... i love her songs thank you sooooo much and a really nice beatmap

from moddin queue

[General]

1. Inconsistency in combo colours
2. Folder size exceeds limit of 10 MB. Find a more compressed video.
3. Unsnapped green timing sections literally everywhere

[Hard]

00:42:720 (4) unsnapped slider's end

[Easy]

Why would you request mods for a song you didn't even finish mapping half of one difficulty for?? The only completed one is the guest diff, finish at least one before requesting mods plz...

That's it for me, good luck with your map

SuperMoutarde wrote:

from moddin queue

[General]

1. Inconsistency in combo colours
2. Folder size exceeds limit of 10 MB. Find a more compressed video.
3. Unsnapped green timing sections literally everywhere

[Hard]

00:42:720 (4) unsnapped slider's end

[Easy]

Why would you request mods for a song you didn't even finish mapping half of one difficulty for?? The only completed one is the guest diff, finish at least one before requesting mods plz...

That's it for me, good luck with your map

All Fixed,
and that Hard is not GD, is mine --''
Whatever, i'll change the name

M4M~ :3

[Hard]

More like an Insane.. acctually, this IS an insane. Its not hard enough to fit as an Insane for this song, but it is def too hard
for a Hard diff. Concider remapping it to either Hard or Insane. I will point out what I find is too hard for this difficulty.

First, The spacing seems to be too big. I reeally recommend to use distance snap on Hard difficulties. Probably 1,2 for this Velocity.
Speaking of Velocity. The velocity is too slow. This really kills the potential of this map .__. Maybe like 1,40 - 1,60 is what I would use.
There are some Jumps that are reeeeally nonsense to me. I'm not the best at finding places for jumps, I usually place them not correctly either
but this is placed so wrong even for me. I'm not trying to be ugly to you, if I come across like that, I'm sorry.
The jumps for example from 00:44:595 to 00:47:407 play really hard for this Difficculty.

Next is Hitsounding. Why not use normal sound stamples and a custom snare drum as clap? Thats all on hitsounding. :3

00:18:970 (6,7) - Sounds like a slider to me.
00:18:970 (6) - add NC
00:19:282 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:688 (2,3,4) - Anti-Jump plays weird here :/
00:57:407 (1) - remove one reverse arrow and place 00:57:798 (2) on 00:57:720 and make 00:57:720 (2) a 1/1 slider.
01:06:157 (4) - It says '1,2,3'. Remove it or place it on the head of 01:06:313 (1)
01:08:657 (1) - ^
01:10:220 (1) - Make a 1/1 slider. plays better
01:21:626 (1) - This really ends late. 1/2 to the next note is hard to hit. Shorten it to 01:22:720.

[Normal]

Nothing~ :3

00:23:188 (2,3) - U used a lot of these. Well, I recmmend to change 60% of them to a slider to make this diff easier.
01:05:845 (3,1,1) - Not sure about the combo colors :c I would either remove 01:06:157 (1) or 01:06:470 (1)
01:15:845 (3,1,1) - ^

[Easy]

Nothing~ 'w'

00:33:032 (1) - Uh well, if you want to keep this diff easy then you should remove one reverse because
this reeeally confuses. I was like WTF when i found out that you can have multiple reverse on a slider.

Thats it on this diff :3 You can contakt me if you want me to mod this diff when its done~

Good luck~

Easy

00:11:157 Add a circle
00:34:282 Maybe a new silder?
01:10:220 (2) is overlapping with (3)
01:18:345 till 01:20:845 i miss curvy sliders

Dekaane's Normal

It has a different tick rate maybe you do 1 by this diff or you do 2 by Easy

00:25:688 (2) maybe a slider till 00:25:845 i mean, its normal diff not Hard


Mochi

00:18:970 (6) is overlapping with 00:18:188 (2)
00:46:888 (5) is overlapping with (2)


Well, good luck :3

Thx for mod

hi your from Momochi's Modding n m4m queue
M4M

[Easy]
00:12:720 (2) - finishi remove
00:18:970 (2) - Slide head finishi add?
00:30:220 (2) - all finishi add
01:23:970 (1,1) - So do not want to try? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/596049
01:25:376 (1) - NC remove

[Dekaane's normal]
00:40:220 (6) - Ctrl+J? Fixed-position
01:05:220 (1) - NC remove?
01:08:970 (1) - Add the finish to repeat, To finish the tail section deleted
01:10:220 (2) - ^
01:11:470 (3) - ^
01:16:157 (1) - NC remove?
01:25:688 (1) - ^

[Mochi]
00:47:798 (3) - reomve Odd bits
00:54:282 (1) - NC remove?
00:58:188 - Circle where you want to add?
01:01:001 (1) - 01:01:157 - move (The fixed length of the spinner)

Seems to be fine if you add the Insane difficulty.
Good luck to you~

-Kirito wrote:

hi your from Momochi's Modding n m4m queue
M4M

[Easy]
00:12:720 (2) - finishi remove
00:18:970 (2) - Slide head finishi add?
00:30:220 (2) - all finishi add
01:23:970 (1,1) - So do not want to try? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/596049
01:25:376 (1) - NC remove

[Dekaane's normal]
00:40:220 (6) - Ctrl+J? Fixed-position
01:05:220 (1) - NC remove?
01:08:970 (1) - Add the finish to repeat, To finish the tail section deleted
01:10:220 (2) - ^
01:11:470 (3) - ^
01:16:157 (1) - NC remove?
01:25:688 (1) - ^

[Mochi]
00:47:798 (3) - reomve Odd bits
00:54:282 (1) - NC remove?
00:58:188 - Circle where you want to add?
01:01:001 (1) - 01:01:157 - move (The fixed length of the spinner)

Seems to be fine if you add the Insane difficulty.
Good luck to you~

I fixed some of hitsounds problem.. tq

Hi from M4M ~

general :

disable "letter box during break"
add "DakeDekaane" as tag

Easy :

00:16:470 (6) - New combo here and remove new combo here 00:17:720 (1) - I think it's better, it's follow the keyboard sound
00:49:907 (1) - remove new combo here and add new combo here ? 00:49:595 (4) - (for vocal)
00:47:407 (1) - add finish at slider end for cymbal sound ?
00:52:720 (3) - ^
00:58:345 (2) - ^ end of slider
01:19:595 (1) - remove new combo here and add new combo here ? 01:18:345 (3) - (for vocal)

Normal :

00:22:720 (1) - remove finish at slider end ?
01:08:970 (1) - adjust blanket on this circle 01:08:657 (6) -
01:10:220 (2) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:08:970 (1) -
01:11:470 (3) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:10:220 (2) -
01:12:563 (4) - add new combo ? (for vocal)


Mochi :

00:18:970 (6) - I think it's better if this circle is on this one 00:18:188 (2) -

that all I can find good luck ~

Kin wrote:

Hi from M4M ~

general :

disable "letter box during break"
add "DakeDekaane" as tag

Easy :

00:16:470 (6) - New combo here and remove new combo here 00:17:720 (1) - I think it's better, it's follow the keyboard sound .k
00:49:907 (1) - remove new combo here and add new combo here ? 00:49:595 (4) - (for vocal) k
00:47:407 (1) - add finish at slider end for cymbal sound ? k
00:52:720 (3) - ^ idk ?
00:58:345 (2) - ^ end of slider fail here.
01:19:595 (1) - remove new combo here and add new combo here ? 01:18:345 (3) - (for vocal) k

Normal :

00:22:720 (1) - remove finish at slider end ? k
01:08:970 (1) - adjust blanket on this circle 01:08:657 (6) - i don't know what do u mean
01:10:220 (2) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:08:970 (1) - - - - -
01:11:470 (3) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:10:220 (2) - -- - - -
01:12:563 (4) - add new combo ? (for vocal) k


Mochi :

00:18:970 (6) - I think it's better if this circle is on this one 00:18:188 (2) -

that all I can find good luck ~

Fix some of that.. thx for mod

Hi. Check your upload plz, I failed in downloading >o<;

Hi, M4M

General---
The pure white combo color is not a good idea. Some say it can be blinding with Kiai time. I suggest you change it.
I recommend the preview point be at 01:03:657 for all diffs
Kiai time is not the same for all diffs - in Dekaane's the 2nd one ends later.

Easy---
01:13:501 (6) - i think this should be just 1 circle instead of really short slider

Dekaane's Normal---
00:19:751 (3) - make this another short slider like (2)
01:25:688 (1) - is new combo really needed?

Mochi
In general the stacks look weird.. are they all stack on the same grid point?

Nothing major to mod... just suggestions.. good map, good luck

Hi there, I came to bring an updated version of my diff ( http://puu.sh/1XaOJ ), fixed some combos and hitsounds :v don't kd this, also correct the tags, it's DakeDekaane, not just Dekaane :c
As for the kiai, I think I'll better keep what I have, it's not obligatory to have the same kiai, as I'm a guest mapper.

Don't need to do nothing with the last modpost in my diff, as I corrected both things.

Kin wrote:

Hi from M4M ~

Normal :

01:08:970 (1) - adjust blanket on this circle 01:08:657 (6) - /*My intention is not a blanket there
01:10:220 (2) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:08:970 (1) - /*^
01:11:470 (3) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:10:220 (2) - /*^

Thanks for modding, I'll be appearing more frequently o/