This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunedì 4 marzo 2013 at 22:18:59

Artist: Marina & the Diamonds
Title: Lies
Tags: eleCtra heart
BPM: 124
Filesize: 5690kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,86 stars, 179 notes)
2. Hard (4,67 stars, 373 notes)
3. Insane (4,99 stars, 573 notes)
4. Normal (3,23 stars, 243 notes)

Download: Marina & the Diamonds - Lies
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Marina and the Diamnonds - Lies
I love this song!
Difficulties:
Easy: done
Normal: done
Hard: done
Insane: done (remapped)

this map is good, i think it really should be ranked <3

[General]
the song's bitrate should be 192kbps, you need to re-encode it.
timing should be the same for all diffs (check the timing after you reencode the mp3 file
the name of the group is "Marina & the Diamonds", so you should fix that. also remove marina and the dimanods and lies from tags, since they are song's title and artist
the background size should be between 800x600 and 1024x768. also there are plenty of marina's pictures, I suggest using that instead of a anime's image.

Call me back when you're done with this for a full mod :>

Wiinter wrote:

[General]
the song's bitrate should be 192kbps, you need to re-encode it.
timing should be the same for all diffs (check the timing after you reencode the mp3 file
the name of the group is "Marina & the Diamonds", so you should fix that. also remove marina and the dimanods and lies from tags, since they are song's title and artist
the background size should be between 800x600 and 1024x768. also there are plenty of marina's pictures, I suggest using that instead of a anime's image.

Call me back when you're done with this for a full mod :>

Ok all fixed exept for the picture, the size is fixed but... do i really have to change it? i like it very much, if it's possible i would like to keep it...

here we go~

[General]
the bitrate is still not 192kbps.. you won't be able to get the map ranked with it like this. I'll mod this anyways though.
add Eletra Heart to tags, it's the song's albums name
also, you need hitsounds.. here is a simple guide to adding claps:



I think the image already explains itself? there are a few exceptions but this rule applies to most cases. :>

[Easy]
you got the rhythm right but the notes placement and slider's shapes are a little too messy ><
avoid using red ticks on easy diffs; if you still feel like you should use them, I'd rather put them in sliders
00:24:079 (4) - new combo
00:25:289 (6) - ugly slider >:
00:28:676 (1) - remove new combo and I'd rather place it somewhere else, like this for example:


if you like it, just press Ctrl+Shift+R and change the angle until it looks like that :>
00:27:708 (5) - add new combo
00:31:821 (4) - add new combo
00:33:031 (6) - ugly slider :<
00:35:450 (5) - extend it to 00:35:934 and add new combo
00:37:144 (1) - remove new combo
00:39:563 (4) - add new combo
00:46:579 (1) - add new combo
00:48:515 (2) - use distance snap
00:50:450 (4) - add new combo and remove whistle
00:53:353 (8) - distance snap
00:54:321 (1) - ugly slider
00:56:257 (4) - add a note here
00:58:192 (7) - add new combo
01:06:418 (5) - ^
01:13:918 (5) - ^
01:15:853 (7) - move this note to 01:16:095 (7) -
01:16:337 (1) - move this slider to 01:16:579 (1) -
01:18:515 (3) - add new combo
01:27:224 (1) - remove new combo
01:29:160 (3) - add new combo

okay I think you got what the point was? >< keep doing those kinds of changes and let's see if you make progress :3 I'll be here to help you with this, even though it'd be WAY easier if we did this while you were online via IRC.

NOTE about the bg: you are free to use whatever image you want to :>

Wiinter wrote:

here we go~

[General]
the bitrate is still not 192kbps.. you won't be able to get the map ranked with it like this. I'll mod this anyways though.
add Eletra Heart to tags, it's the song's albums name
also, you need hitsounds.. here is a simple guide to adding claps:



I think the image already explains itself? there are a few exceptions but this rule applies to most cases. :>

[Easy]
you got the rhythm right but the notes placement and slider's shapes are a little too messy ><
avoid using red ticks on easy diffs; if you still feel like you should use them, I'd rather put them in sliders
00:24:079 (4) - new combo
00:25:289 (6) - ugly slider >:
00:28:676 (1) - remove new combo and I'd rather place it somewhere else, like this for example:

SPOILER

if you like it, just press Ctrl+Shift+R and change the angle until it looks like that :>
00:27:708 (5) - add new combo
00:31:821 (4) - add new combo
00:33:031 (6) - ugly slider :<
00:35:450 (5) - extend it to 00:35:934 and add new combo
00:37:144 (1) - remove new combo
00:39:563 (4) - add new combo
00:46:579 (1) - add new combo
00:48:515 (2) - use distance snap
00:50:450 (4) - add new combo and remove whistle
00:53:353 (8) - distance snap
00:54:321 (1) - ugly slider
00:56:257 (4) - add a note here
00:58:192 (7) - add new combo
01:06:418 (5) - ^
01:13:918 (5) - ^
01:15:853 (7) - move this note to 01:16:095 (7) -
01:16:337 (1) - move this slider to 01:16:579 (1) -
01:18:515 (3) - add new combo
01:27:224 (1) - remove new combo
01:29:160 (3) - add new combo

okay I think you got what the point was? >< keep doing those kinds of changes and let's see if you make progress :3 I'll be here to help you with this, even though it'd be WAY easier if we did this while you were online via IRC.

NOTE about the bg: you are free to use whatever image you want to :>

ok! all done! thank you very much!!
i think the mp3 file now should be ok... and i also tryed to add claps and to fix the rest of the map

gahh I mispelled >< it's eleCtra heart

Wiinter wrote:

gahh I mispelled >< it's eleCtra heart

LOL now is ok! XD

[General]

1. Offset : 15620
2. You didn't set a preview point.
   A preview point is the start point of the song when you choose the map or click thumbnail in beatmap listing.
   You can set it at "Timing - Set current position as preview point"
   Personally I suggest the point 01:00:128 as preview point.
3. Would you change the BG to the other related to the artist?
4. Audio volume 100% is too loud in whole time of the song. I suggest 40% for non-kiai section, and 50% for kiai section.
5. And I give a tip about hitsound. Wiinter gave you a hitsounding tip in Easy diff, unfortunately it doesn't fit music.
   When you listen to the music, you can hear something emphasized sounds on every third white tick.
   For examples, 00:16:579,　00:18:515,　00:20:450,　00:22:386...
   These points are good to use claps. Try to add them.
   Remember, this tip is available to only this song, not to the other song.
   Listen to the song carefully when you meet another song. There must be an answer in the song.

[Insane]

1. AR 8 is much better for Insane diff.

00:49:241 - I feel empty at this time. You've had a note each verse similar to this. For examples, 00:47:305 (7), 00:51:176 (4), 00:55:047 (7), 00:56:982 (5)
01:00:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Four and two circles don't fit music. There are only three snare drum beats, you can hear at 01:00:370 ~ 01:00:611. Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/1BxO3
01:02:063 (9) - Add finish. Almost of maps have finish at start point of Kiai time. Of course there should exist a cymbal sound!
01:04:241 (8) - It's quite close to previous circle, isn't it?
01:15:611 (7) - This linear style slider look a bit awkward to me. Maybe changing its shape from linear to curve would be good for keeping consistency.
01:54:079 (4) - You can make its end to cover 01:54:805 (6). Like this http://puu.sh/1BxXc
02:12:466 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the next note.
02:19:482 (9) - Add finish
02:17:547 (3,4,5,6,7) - Oh you did well at this time. I mean the rhythm.
02:26:741 (7) - Move right by 2 grids for better flow in streams.
02:38:111 (6) - You may fix the rhythm to the others. Listen to the music carefully, there is no matching to the reverse arrow on 02:38:474.
02:39:684 (6) - x:128, y:288
03:10:047 (7) - NC
03:11:378 (1) - Remove NC


[Hard]

1. HP Drain : 6
2. Circle Size : 4
3. Approach Rate : 7

00:44:886 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:095 (4) - NC
00:49:966 (6) - NC
00:51:176 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:837 (6) - NC
00:55:047 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:773 (3) - NC
01:22:628 (1) - Extend its length to 01:23:111. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/529078
02:06:902 (1) - Eh... this anti jump feels bad. Also I think its NC should be removed.
02:17:789 (1) - NCing isn't necessary

They were just a few part of modding. I'm really confused where do I start. x_x
Please understand me I have to skip other diffs.
Get more mods to improve your map. Also examine carefully other maps well made.
You may learn something from others such as comboing pattern, hitsounding and so on.


[Normal]

1. Fix the BPM. (123.995 -> 124.000) And don't forget resnap all notes also some green lines.

[Easy]

1. AR : 3 or 4

That's all for now. Good luck!

EDIT : something :3

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]

1. Offset : 15620
2. You didn't set a preview point.
   A preview point is the start point of the song when you choose the map or click thumbnail in beatmap listing.
   You can set it at "Timing - Set current position as preview point"
   Personally I suggest the point 01:00:128 as preview point.
3. Would you change the BG to the other related to the artist?
4. Audio volume 100% is too loud in whole time of the song. I suggest 40% for non-kiai section, and 50% for kiai section.
5. And I give a tip about hitsound. Wiinter gave you a hitsounding tip in Easy diff, unfortunately it doesn't fit music.
   When you listen to the music, you can hear something emphasized sounds on every third white tick.
   For examples, 00:16:579,　00:18:515,　00:20:450,　00:22:386...
   These points are good to use claps. Try to add them.
   Remember, this tip is available to only this song, not to the other song.
   Listen to the song carefully when you meet another song. There must be an answer in the song.

[Insane]

1. AR 8 is much better for Insane diff.

00:49:241 - I feel empty at this time. You've had a note each verse similar to this. For examples, 00:47:305 (7), 00:51:176 (4), 00:55:047 (7), 00:56:982 (5)
01:00:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Four and two circles don't fit music. There are only three snare drum beats, you can hear at 01:00:370 ~ 01:00:611. Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/1BxO3
01:02:063 (9) - Add finish. Almost of maps have finish at start point of Kiai time. Of course there should exist a cymbal sound!
01:04:241 (8) - It's quite close to previous circle, isn't it?
01:15:611 (7) - This linear style slider look a bit awkward to me. Maybe changing its shape from linear to curve would be good for keeping consistency.
01:54:079 (4) - You can make its end to cover 01:54:805 (6). Like this http://puu.sh/1BxXc
02:12:466 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the next note.
02:19:482 (9) - Add finish
02:17:547 (3,4,5,6,7) - Oh you did well at this time. I mean the rhythm.
02:26:741 (7) - Move right by 2 grids for better flow in streams.
02:38:111 (6) - You may fix the rhythm to the others. Listen to the music carefully, there is no matching to the reverse arrow on 02:38:474.
02:39:684 (6) - x:128, y:288
03:10:047 (7) - NC
03:11:378 (1) - Remove NC


[Hard]

1. HP Drain : 6
2. Circle Size : 4
3. Approach Rate : 7

00:44:886 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:095 (4) - NC
00:49:966 (6) - NC
00:51:176 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:837 (6) - NC
00:55:047 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:773 (3) - NC
01:22:628 (1) - Extend its length to 01:23:111. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/529078
02:06:902 (1) - Eh... this anti jump feels bad. Also I think its NC should be removed.
02:17:789 (1) - NCing isn't necessary

They were just a few part of modding. I'm really confused where do I start. x_x
Please understand me I have to skip other diffs.
Get more mods to improve your map. Also examine carefully other maps well made.
You may learn something from others such as comboing pattern, hitsounding and so on.


[Normal]

1. Fix the BPM. (123.995 -> 124.000) And don't forget resnap all notes also some green lines.

[Easy]

1. AR : 3 or 4

That's all for now. Good luck!

EDIT : something :3

ook! thank you veeery much!!! all fixed!
i tried to get the point on the hitsounds... now should be ok
The only thing is that I didn't want to change is the BG but if I really have to I'll change it later... :/

Hi o/

Mod time /o/

[General]

You have some unsnapped green lines, this may cause some volume changes/hitsounds set/kiai time be wrong, snap them.
I highly recommend working in long slider's shapes, specially the squarish ones, with the time you make something nice, like 01:26:265 (4) in Hard diff, even you can make more nice this, it's up to you.
Delete the .osb from the song folder.
Quit the countdown from all diffs, in my opinion looks better.

[Easy]
00:20:942 (1,2) - Fix spacing.
00:35:458 (1,2) - ^
00:51:184 (2) - Fix spacing here, these objects are too close, a newbie player will likely miss here.
01:00:136 (1) - Add finish here.
01:24:087 (4,5) - Fix spacing.
01:57:716 (3,4) - Fix spacing, these are too far from each other
02:05:458 (3,4) - ^
02:13:684 - You can add a circle here.
02:13:926 (5,6) - Fix spacing.
02:17:555 (1) - Add finish
02:27:232 (1,2) - Try to arrange this in a way that (1) won't be too near to 02:26:023 (7) and don't overlap each other.
02:35:942 (2,3) - Fix spacing.
02:49:249 (4,5) - Try not to do this patterns in an Easy, newbies can get confused by playing this, make the flow the more lineal you can.
03:02:071 (1) - Add finish.
03:17:071 (2,3) - Fix spacing
03:20:942 (3,4,5) - This could be a bit hard for an Easy, try deleting (5) and move (4) to 03:21:910
03:28:200 (3) - Move this in a way it don't get covered by 03:26:265 (2), and a bit further from 03:29:168 (4)

[Normal]
The BPM here is 123.995, change it to 124 to be equal as the other diffs.
Make the 1/2 beat sliders (like 00:16:345 (2)) straight, they looks too squeezed being in a curve, this will make them easier to read.
00:46:830 (1) - Make this in a curve, or make the red anchor be in the middle of the slider, it looks weird.
01:00:137 (1) - Put finish here and remove the finish in 01:02:799 (1)
01:17:799 (1,2,3) - You can arrange this in a way that (2) don't look to out of place, try to make the flow linear.
02:09:334 (6) - Move this ot 02:08:124 (5) - to another place as (6) gets covered by (5), don't forget fix the corresponding spacing.
02:18:286 (1) - Add finish
02:25:302 - Try this, easier to play

03:02:078 (1) - Add finish
03:30:627 - Try this here, 1/4 sliders can be confusing in a Normal


[Hard]
00:49:249 - Maybe a circle here
01:01:345 (5) - Add finish in the last repeat
01:15:861 - Maybe a circle here
02:18:281 (1) - Add finish
02:24:692 (8) - Move this either to 02:24:571 or 02:24:813
03:02:071 (1) - Add finish

[Insane]
01:01:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try to make this stream go in a curve, the flow will be better and nicer to play, maybe like you did in 01:06:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:17:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same for this
01:27:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:53:603 (3) - This gets a bit covered by HP bar, move it a bit down
02:37:152 - Try some thing like this here, sounds nice

02:44:047 (1,2,3) - Move this a half beat earlier, in 02:43:926, and put a circle in 02:44:652, sounds better in my opinion
03:02:071 (1) - Finish in this spinner to keep consistency with the other finishes in the star of the kiai time.
03:14:168 - Maybe a circle here.
03:19:490 (4,5,6,7) - You can begin with the slider and put the circle and the end of this, like here


That's all from my part, it still needs work, but it will keep improving. Good luck o/

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi o/

Mod time /o/

[General]

You have some unsnapped green lines, this may cause some volume changes/hitsounds set/kiai time be wrong, snap them.
I highly recommend working in long slider's shapes, specially the squarish ones, with the time you make something nice, like 01:26:265 (4) in Hard diff, even you can make more nice this, it's up to you.
Delete the .osb from the song folder.
Quit the countdown from all diffs, in my opinion looks better.

[Easy]
00:20:942 (1,2) - Fix spacing.
00:35:458 (1,2) - ^
00:51:184 (2) - Fix spacing here, these objects are too close, a newbie player will likely miss here.
01:00:136 (1) - Add finish here.
01:24:087 (4,5) - Fix spacing.
01:57:716 (3,4) - Fix spacing, these are too far from each other
02:05:458 (3,4) - ^
02:13:684 - You can add a circle here.
02:13:926 (5,6) - Fix spacing.
02:17:555 (1) - Add finish
02:27:232 (1,2) - Try to arrange this in a way that (1) won't be too near to 02:26:023 (7) and don't overlap each other.
02:35:942 (2,3) - Fix spacing.
02:49:249 (4,5) - Try not to do this patterns in an Easy, newbies can get confused by playing this, make the flow the more lineal you can.
03:02:071 (1) - Add finish.
03:17:071 (2,3) - Fix spacing
03:20:942 (3,4,5) - This could be a bit hard for an Easy, try deleting (5) and move (4) to 03:21:910
03:28:200 (3) - Move this in a way it don't get covered by 03:26:265 (2), and a bit further from 03:29:168 (4)

[Normal]
The BPM here is 123.995, change it to 124 to be equal as the other diffs.
Make the 1/2 beat sliders (like 00:16:345 (2)) straight, they looks too squeezed being in a curve, this will make them easier to read.
00:46:830 (1) - Make this in a curve, or make the red anchor be in the middle of the slider, it looks weird.
01:00:137 (1) - Put finish here and remove the finish in 01:02:799 (1)
01:17:799 (1,2,3) - You can arrange this in a way that (2) don't look to out of place, try to make the flow linear.
02:09:334 (6) - Move this ot 02:08:124 (5) - to another place as (6) gets covered by (5), don't forget fix the corresponding spacing.
02:18:286 (1) - Add finish
02:25:302 - Try this, easier to play

03:02:078 (1) - Add finish
03:30:627 - Try this here, 1/4 sliders can be confusing in a Normal


[Hard]
00:49:249 - Maybe a circle here
01:01:345 (5) - Add finish in the last repeat
01:15:861 - Maybe a circle here
02:18:281 (1) - Add finish
02:24:692 (8) - Move this either to 02:24:571 or 02:24:813
03:02:071 (1) - Add finish

[Insane]
01:01:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try to make this stream go in a curve, the flow will be better and nicer to play, maybe like you did in 01:06:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:17:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same for this
01:27:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:53:603 (3) - This gets a bit covered by HP bar, move it a bit down
02:37:152 - Try some thing like this here, sounds nice

02:44:047 (1,2,3) - Move this a half beat earlier, in 02:43:926, and put a circle in 02:44:652, sounds better in my opinion
03:02:071 (1) - Finish in this spinner to keep consistency with the other finishes in the star of the kiai time.
03:14:168 - Maybe a circle here.
03:19:490 (4,5,6,7) - You can begin with the slider and put the circle and the end of this, like here


That's all from my part, it still needs work, but it will keep improving. Good luck o/

ok! all done!
thanks a lot!
I have to make some sliders in a better way, yeah, but i'll fix it

Easy

03:25:781 - Maybe a note here.
03:27:716 - ^

Normal

01:03:039 (2) - How about moving this note like this? (check this picture)
01:07:878 - Maybe a circle here.
03:33:281 (8) - I think that this note is not following the music. How about placing it like this? (example~)

Hard

01:58:926 (2,3) - I think this part is too confusing! Maybe placing these notes like this image (image~) Makes this part more easy!(It follows the points of the previous slider)
01:06:184 (3,4,5) - INSANE! I miss those everytime I play It! Can you change this please? (\T~T/)

General
I think that the hard is a little insane... But it is very good! The music is good and the hitsounds are good! I hope I helped =^.^=!

ShiroiYume wrote:

Easy

03:25:781 - Maybe a note here.
03:27:716 - ^

Normal

01:03:039 (2) - How about moving this note like this? (check this picture)
01:07:878 - Maybe a circle here.
03:33:281 (8) - I think that this note is not following the music. How about placing it like this? (example~)

Hard

01:58:926 (2,3) - I think this part is too confusing! Maybe placing these notes like this image (image~) Makes this part more easy!(It follows the points of the previous slider)
01:06:184 (3,4,5) - INSANE! I miss those everytime I play It! Can you change this please? (\T~T/)

General
I think that the hard is a little insane... But it is very good! The music is good and the hitsounds are good! I hope I helped =^.^=!

oh thanks
I only didn't got well the first point of hard diff but the others are ok!

Hi! from my modding queue

Insane
01:10:297 (3,5) - clap
01:18:039 (3,4) - ^
01:21:910 (3,5) - ^
01:25:660 (3,4,5) - ^
01:27:837 (4) - ^
01:28:805 (9) - distance
01:53:119 (2) - clap in the top
01:54:087 (4) - ^
02:06:668 (2) - clap
02:07:636 (7) - clap
02:18:765 (3,4) - ^
02:35:942 (4,5) - Distance
03:11:386 (3,4,5,6) - more distance

Hard
00:19:490 (3) - clap
00:19:490 (3) - add note
00:51:910 (7) - more distance
00:51:668 - add note
01:01:345 (5) - remove finish
01:10:055 (6) - delete one turn and add a circle
01:58:926 (2,3) - sounds a little weird
01:58:926 (2,3) - add circle
02:11:749 (5) - weird slider form, http://puu.sh/1IBfX you should fix it
02:23:603 (7) - fix this slider cuz have no sense. (red - blue - white.. why) needs to be red-red-red line, i suggest.. after that delete 02:24:571 (8) - (or move it)
02:26:265 (3,4) - increase distance
02:43:684 (1) -

fix this slider cuz have no sense. (red - blue - white.. why) needs to be red-red-red line,

same
im so lazy to continue.

Normal
00:35:942 (1,2,3,4) - this is very confusing for a beginner http://puu.sh/1IBp9 use the same grid snap also distance.
01:08:845 (4) - distance
01:26:507 (5,6) - distance
02:30:136 (1,3,4,5,6,7,1) - distance ><
02:47:071 (2,3,4) - this is confusing -- http://puu.sh/1IBxj
03:24:571 (5) - x:288 y:200
03:25:781 (6,7,8) - x:432 y:224

I skipped easy, cuz im so tired~

Good luck!

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Hi! from my modding queue

Insane
01:10:297 (3,5) - clap
01:18:039 (3,4) - ^
01:21:910 (3,5) - ^
01:25:660 (3,4,5) - ^
01:27:837 (4) - ^
01:28:805 (9) - distance
01:53:119 (2) - clap in the top
01:54:087 (4) - ^
02:06:668 (2) - clap
02:07:636 (7) - clap
02:18:765 (3,4) - ^
02:35:942 (4,5) - Distance
03:11:386 (3,4,5,6) - more distance

Hard
00:19:490 (3) - clap
00:19:490 (3) - add note
00:51:910 (7) - more distance
00:51:668 - add note
01:01:345 (5) - remove finish
01:10:055 (6) - delete one turn and add a circle
01:58:926 (2,3) - sounds a little weird
01:58:926 (2,3) - add circle
02:11:749 (5) - weird slider form, http://puu.sh/1IBfX you should fix it
02:23:603 (7) - fix this slider cuz have no sense. (red - blue - white.. why) needs to be red-red-red line, i suggest.. after that delete 02:24:571 (8) - (or move it)
02:26:265 (3,4) - increase distance
02:43:684 (1) -

fix this slider cuz have no sense. (red - blue - white.. why) needs to be red-red-red line,

same
im so lazy to continue.

Normal
00:35:942 (1,2,3,4) - this is very confusing for a beginner http://puu.sh/1IBp9 use the same grid snap also distance.
01:08:845 (4) - distance
01:26:507 (5,6) - distance
02:30:136 (1,3,4,5,6,7,1) - distance ><
02:47:071 (2,3,4) - this is confusing -- http://puu.sh/1IBxj
03:24:571 (5) - x:288 y:200
03:25:781 (6,7,8) - x:432 y:224

I skipped easy, cuz im so tired~

Good luck!

thanks for mod!

Hey,scusami per averti fatto aspettare,ecco la mod ^_^

[Easy]

00:19:490 (7) - Questo beat e lo slider successivo seguono il ritmo,quindi qui un NC ci dovrebbe essere.
00:36:426 (2) - Questo slider è molto brutto,ti consiglio di rimpiazzarlo con uno dritto o leggermente curvato,così:



Anche se così si allunga un pò,potresti abbassare la slider velocity in modo da renderlo corto come prima

00:37:878 (4) - Questo beat piazzalo a x:256 y:328
00:38:845 (5) - Se hai fixato il beat precedente,questo piazzalo a x:256 y:217
00:59:168 (2) - Questo slider è davvero brutto,perchè forma un'overlap con quello precedente. Ti consiglio di muoverlo a x:368 y:120 e di dargli questa forma:



Così lo rendi più bello da vedere come da giocare

00:59:894 (3) - Rimuovi questo beat,non segue niente ed è troppo vicino all'inizio dello spinner,non dà il tempo al giocatore di iniziare velocemente lo spinner,soprattutto se consideriamo che questa è una easy

01:24:813 (5) - Piazza questo beat a x:144 y:256 per creare un flow
02:33:039 (5) - NC


[Normal]

00:26:749 (6) - NC
00:34:490 (5) - ^
00:37:152 (4) - Modifica questo slider così:



(La modifica è che il 3o punto dello slider a partire da sù è spostato di un punto verso destra)

00:38:361 (6) - NC
00:42:232 (5) - ^
00:53:845 (5) - ^
00:55:297 (1) - Togli il NC qua,è inutile
03:11:265 (5) - NC

[Hard]

Tutto apposto qui

[Insane]

Niente nemmeno qui


Buona fortuna

Woof~
From my Modding Queue

General
Looking good to me.

Easy
I miss finish hitsounds here. It fits perfect in almost every new combo a finish instead of a clap imo.
00:15:619 (1) - Replace it for a finish?
00:17:555 (4) - Remove clap?
00:19:490 (7) - Add finish?
00:20:216 (2) - Move clap in the beginning to the end.
00:23:361 (3) - Finish?
00:25:297 (3) - Make it symmetric?
00:27:232 (4) - Remove clap? Will fit better with your patterns imo
00:46:587 (1) - Remove clap?
00:48:523 (2) - ^
00:50:458 (1) - ^
00:54:329 (1) - ^
01:03:523 (2) - ^
01:05:458 (4) - ^
01:13:684 (4) - ^
01:15:136 (2) - Could've been made symmetric with 01:13:926 (1) - Something like this
01:16:587 (1) - Clap should be moved to the beginning of slider and removed at the end.
01:25:297 (6) - NC?
01:53:845 (3,4) - Overlap is bad, how about something like this?
01:54:813 (4) - Remove clap.
02:15:620 (7,8,9) - Very confusing for an easy diff, suggest giving them some space.
02:35:942 (2) - Symmetric?
02:37:878 (4) - Overlap with 02:35:942 (2) - Looks weird, suggest placing a grid up.
03:15:620 (1) - Symmetric? o3o

Normal
You could've improved a lot more here in terms of visual. I suggest improving a bit more in your sliders.
00:30:619 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing.
00:42:232 (5,6,7) - ^
00:53:361 (4) - ^
03:13:684 (1,2) - Overlap looks bad don't you think?
03:21:426 (8) - NC?
03:22:394 (1) - Remove NC.
03:24:571 (5) - Fix spacing. Unless you made this thinking on a jump (which I think you didn't)

Hard
00:24:087 (5) - Suggest moving this a little "higher" on the grid, so it won't touch with 00:22:878 (3) -
01:12:232 (6) - Make it symmetric? How about this?
03:14:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move them to x:148 y:76 for symmetry? Be advised you need to use grid level 4 to do this: http://puu.sh/1IZAe
03:35:942 (1) - A bit off in the grid hm?

Insane
Couldn't find much stuff, but:
01:03:402 (2) - Remove this note? It doesn't match with the song imo. Or alternative, you could add a note in 01:03:281 -

Good luck~

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Hey,scusami per averti fatto aspettare,ecco la mod ^_^

[Easy]

00:19:490 (7) - Questo beat e lo slider successivo seguono il ritmo,quindi qui un NC ci dovrebbe essere.
00:36:426 (2) - Questo slider è molto brutto,ti consiglio di rimpiazzarlo con uno dritto o leggermente curvato,così:



Anche se così si allunga un pò,potresti abbassare la slider velocity in modo da renderlo corto come prima

00:37:878 (4) - Questo beat piazzalo a x:256 y:328
00:38:845 (5) - Se hai fixato il beat precedente,questo piazzalo a x:256 y:217
00:59:168 (2) - Questo slider è davvero brutto,perchè forma un'overlap con quello precedente. Ti consiglio di muoverlo a x:368 y:120 e di dargli questa forma:



Così lo rendi più bello da vedere come da giocare

00:59:894 (3) - Rimuovi questo beat,non segue niente ed è troppo vicino all'inizio dello spinner,non dà il tempo al giocatore di iniziare velocemente lo spinner,soprattutto se consideriamo che questa è una easy

01:24:813 (5) - Piazza questo beat a x:144 y:256 per creare un flow
02:33:039 (5) - NC


[Normal]

00:26:749 (6) - NC
00:34:490 (5) - ^
00:37:152 (4) - Modifica questo slider così:



(La modifica è che il 3o punto dello slider a partire da sù è spostato di un punto verso destra)

00:38:361 (6) - NC
00:42:232 (5) - ^
00:53:845 (5) - ^
00:55:297 (1) - Togli il NC qua,è inutile
03:11:265 (5) - NC

[Hard]

Tutto apposto qui

[Insane]

Niente nemmeno qui


Buona fortuna

grazie x il mod! fatto tutto

Wolf wrote:

Woof~
From my Modding Queue

General
Looking good to me.

Easy
I miss finish hitsounds here. It fits perfect in almost every new combo a finish instead of a clap imo.
00:15:619 (1) - Replace it for a finish?
00:17:555 (4) - Remove clap?
00:19:490 (7) - Add finish?
00:20:216 (2) - Move clap in the beginning to the end.
00:23:361 (3) - Finish?
00:25:297 (3) - Make it symmetric?
00:27:232 (4) - Remove clap? Will fit better with your patterns imo
00:46:587 (1) - Remove clap?
00:48:523 (2) - ^
00:50:458 (1) - ^
00:54:329 (1) - ^
01:03:523 (2) - ^
01:05:458 (4) - ^
01:13:684 (4) - ^
01:15:136 (2) - Could've been made symmetric with 01:13:926 (1) - Something like this
01:16:587 (1) - Clap should be moved to the beginning of slider and removed at the end.
01:25:297 (6) - NC?
01:53:845 (3,4) - Overlap is bad, how about something like this?
01:54:813 (4) - Remove clap.
02:15:620 (7,8,9) - Very confusing for an easy diff, suggest giving them some space.
02:35:942 (2) - Symmetric?
02:37:878 (4) - Overlap with 02:35:942 (2) - Looks weird, suggest placing a grid up.
03:15:620 (1) - Symmetric? o3o

Normal
You could've improved a lot more here in terms of visual. I suggest improving a bit more in your sliders.
00:30:619 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing.
00:42:232 (5,6,7) - ^
00:53:361 (4) - ^
03:13:684 (1,2) - Overlap looks bad don't you think?
03:21:426 (8) - NC?
03:22:394 (1) - Remove NC.
03:24:571 (5) - Fix spacing. Unless you made this thinking on a jump (which I think you didn't)

Hard
00:24:087 (5) - Suggest moving this a little "higher" on the grid, so it won't touch with 00:22:878 (3) -
01:12:232 (6) - Make it symmetric? How about this?
03:14:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move them to x:148 y:76 for symmetry? Be advised you need to use grid level 4 to do this: http://puu.sh/1IZAe
03:35:942 (1) - A bit off in the grid hm?

Insane
Couldn't find much stuff, but:
01:03:402 (2) - Remove this note? It doesn't match with the song imo. Or alternative, you could add a note in 01:03:281 -

Good luck~

thanks a lot! all fixed

alrighty let's see what we got here. mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or curiosity about something.

[General]
i highly suggest that you use a BPM of 62 because it's following the beat of the drums. if you wanna keep the BPM, then it's fine by me if you ignore this.
the preview times are inconsistent. normal and easy's preview time is different coimpared to the other diffs. set it to 60136 like the hard and insane diff in the song.

[Easy]
reduce the OD and HP by 1. i feel that doing this would be easier for beginners to follow during gameplay IMO.
the SV feels too fast for beginners to keep up. reduce the slider speed so that it'd be easier for beginners to follow during gameplay
00:17:555 (4,5) - since this is the easiest diff, this rhythm may throw off beginners during gameplay. they may be focusing in the vocals and not on the BGM. replace this for a 1/1 slider. it'll be easier to follow since it's following the vocals during gameplay.
00:20:942 (1,2) - remove the claps at the beginning and at the end. you're breaking consistency with the current clap pattern as as speak. instead add a clap at (2) because it'll match the clap in the BGM, and it'll be consistent during gameplay.
00:24:087 (1) - missing a clap at the end? add it for consistency with the current clap pattern.
00:27:716 (1,2) - i feel that it'd be a lot easier if you can delete (2) and extend this slider by 1/2. it'll be easier for beginners since that rhythm may catch them off guard and they might not play it anymore because of that.
00:37:152 (3) - follow the DS. yes i can see the blanket, but the spacing make it even harder for beginners to hit. i highly suggest that you put this note beside the slider. it'd be easier for beginners to get to during gameplay.
00:37:878 (4,5) - the spacing here is inconsistent, that beginners would hit (5) too early considering that the spacing is so close. follow the DS for this. space out (5) so that it'd make a lot of sense for beginners during gameplay.
00:40:297 (2) - this slider can look a lot smoother than this during gameplay. also i highly suggest that you extend it by 1/2 so that it'd be easier to follow consideing the BGM ends at that spot during gameplay.
00:56:265 (4) - remove the clap, NC, and space this note out away from (2). the clap ruins the clap pattern during gameplay, the NC is because of new lyrics in the song, and if you space out this note, it'd look neater and wouldn't be that much of a bother during gameplay.
00:59:168 (2) - that gap would make 1 big difference for beginners. it'll give them a hard time because they're not confident about the length of now much they have to move their cursor. make this a straight slider and move it here. it'll be easier for beginners to follow during gameplay.
01:02:797 (1) - replace this note for a circle. this would most likely throw off beginners because they just finished spinning. ending the note at the red tick on an easy might not be a good idea. so if you wanna give time for them to recover, then you should replace this for a circle at the downbeat. it'll give beginners plenty of time to recover and considering that the spinner ends at the downbeat, it'll be easy to follow during gameplay.
01:07:878 (3) - having 2 repeats on the slider isn't a good idea on an easy diff. it'll give beginners a hard time because they don't know when this slider will end. i want you to do something simple for a change. something that follows the music, and something easier for beginners to follow during gameplay.
01:09:813 (4) - replace the clap for a finish. it'll show emphasis in the BGM and it'll show that a new pattern is starting. adding finishes at the 1st downbeat is most likely a good idea because it's like the climax part in the song.
01:11:265 (2) - remove the clap. you're breaking consistency with the current clap pattern in this part during gameplay.
01:16:587 (1,2) - this rhythm may be hard for beginners to follow. yes it follows the vocals nicely, but it's too hard for them to follow. again, try to do something easier for beginners to follow in this part, because this one feels hard for them during gameplay.
02:00:136 (5) - remove the clap and make this a NC. again, the clap breaks the consistency in claps, and the NC is because of new lyrics in the song during gameplay.
02:15:620 (7) - ^
02:19:490 - re-snap this timing point because it's off by 8ms if you look at the timing panel.
02:22:878 (3) - if you want to make this blanket nicer, then move the last point of the slider up. it'll flow smoother and it'll give off a smooth feeling to the song during gameplay. it should look like this.
02:24:329 (4) - make this a NC because of the change in the lyrics. i feel that whenever i play this, it threw me off for a bit when i saw this during gameplay.
02:34:974 (1) - same as 01:09:813.
03:08:361 (1) - same as 01:02:797.
03:07:878 - same as 02:19:490.
03:26:265 (3,4,5) - the placement looks bad and there's no flow shown in this part of the song. i highly suggest that you do this placement. it'll be consistent eith (1) since you're technically blanketing this note during gameplay. it'll flow smoother and it'll look fun for beginners to do IMO.
03:31:103 (8) - same as 01:09:813.

[Normal]
00:31:829 (1,2) - for this rhythm, remove the clap at (2) and add it at the end of (1) because it sounds unfitting and it ruins the rhythm sense in the claps during gameplay.
00:48:765 (6,7) - it'd be easier to follow if you can remove (7) and extend the slider by 1/2. the sliderticks follow the vocals nicely and the slider ends at the clap in the BGM, so don't forget to add a clap at the end of this slider.
00:57:716 (5,6,7) - this placement is bad because of the overlap on (4). it ruins the flow and transition in this part of the song. move i highly suggest that you stack this on the end of (5) for a smoother transition in the song.
01:12:958 (4,5,6) - remove (4,6) because they don't follow anything in the song. it's overmapped basically during gameplay.
01:31:829 (3,4) - ik that you're trying to be consistent with (1), but this rhythm doesn't fit with the song at all. do this instead. it'll follow the vocals a lot better and it'll give off a smooth feeling to the song during gameplay.
02:19:490 - same as easy.
03:37:878 (7) - this blanket is bad because it's actually overlapping the slider and not blanketing it. it'd be easier if you can align this note to (7) instead of blanketing this note during gameplay.

[Hard]
use tick rate 2. tick rate 4 sounds too noisy and it might interfere with other players during gameplay.
00:16:103 (2) - move the clap from the repeat to the end because it'll start the consistency pattern, and because there's a clap in the BGM.
00:19:490 (3) - replace the clap for a finish. the clap sounds unfitting and it ruins the consistency pattern in the claps during gameplay. the finish would give enough emphasis with the BGM
00:39:087 (5,6) - make this a 1/4 repeat slider instead. since this is a hard diff, this may be hard for less experienced players during gameplay, this requires little time to react, and it may surprise the less experienced players during gameplay IMO.
00:40:781 (3) - this repeat slider doesn't fit with the song at all. it doesn't follow the music during gameplay. to make it easier, and easier to follow for beginners, replace this for a 1/2 slider followed by a circle. it'll feel smoother and it'll be easier to follow during gameplay.
00:48:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - *nazi* move this 1 grid up so that it'd be aligned to the previous note. i feel that doing this would give off a smooth feeling for players during gameplay.
01:06:184 (3,4,5,6) - i highly suggest that you replace this for 1/4 repeats or triplets. same reason as 00:39:087.
01:10:055 (6,7) - these 2 notes don't fit with the song. it's overmapped because there are notes that don't follow the song. do something that would follow the music, but make it somewhat challenging because this is overmapped IMO.
01:15:861 (1,2) - same as 01:06:184.
01:24:571 (2) - same as 01:10:055 about the overmapped issue.
01:26:265 (4) - missing a clap at the beginning? add it for consistency with the clap pattern during gameplay.
01:48:765 (2,3) - same as 01:06:184.
02:19:490 - same as easy.
02:24:571 (9) - remove this note. same reason as 01:10:055 about the overmapped issue.
03:07:878 - same as 02:19:490.
03:28:200 (1) - same as 01:26:265.
03:33:281 (2) - this slider doesn't fit with the song, nor does it follow the music during gameplay. it basically broke the flow during gameplay. replace this for a 1/2 slider and a circle because it'll be easier to follow and it flows to the song perfectly during gameplay IMO.

i'm skipping the insane diff because there's a lot of problems that i can't mod myself orz. i'm gonna have to give you some advice about mapping.
keep your combos consistent and know when to change them: it's highly suggested that you change them whenever the lyrics/melody in the vocals change.
keep your hitsounds consistent: i noticed in the other diff that there are several claps that are at the wrong places and other that are missing. in song like this, you have to listen carefully on which hitsounds go where. the easy way is that if you add clap at the 2nd and 4th downbeat, or at the 1st and 3rd downbeat.
Play other players' maps: if you do that, you'll get a sense of where to put notes and how to make the flow smoother. you'll also make new patterns which may make the map fun or boring. the placement and rhythm is up to you.
follow the DS in easier diffs. it's highly recommended if you do that because it'll give beginners an easier time to enjoy the diff.
if you still don't understand, the it's highly recommended if you follow this guide because it'll be eaiser to follow than my advice IMO. anyways GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

alrighty let's see what we got here. mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or curiosity about something.

[General]
i highly suggest that you use a BPM of 62 because it's following the beat of the drums. if you wanna keep the BPM, then it's fine by me if you ignore this.
the preview times are inconsistent. normal and easy's preview time is different coimpared to the other diffs. set it to 60136 like the hard and insane diff in the song.

[Easy]
reduce the OD and HP by 1. i feel that doing this would be easier for beginners to follow during gameplay IMO.
the SV feels too fast for beginners to keep up. reduce the slider speed so that it'd be easier for beginners to follow during gameplay
00:17:555 (4,5) - since this is the easiest diff, this rhythm may throw off beginners during gameplay. they may be focusing in the vocals and not on the BGM. replace this for a 1/1 slider. it'll be easier to follow since it's following the vocals during gameplay.
00:20:942 (1,2) - remove the claps at the beginning and at the end. you're breaking consistency with the current clap pattern as as speak. instead add a clap at (2) because it'll match the clap in the BGM, and it'll be consistent during gameplay.
00:24:087 (1) - missing a clap at the end? add it for consistency with the current clap pattern.
00:27:716 (1,2) - i feel that it'd be a lot easier if you can delete (2) and extend this slider by 1/2. it'll be easier for beginners since that rhythm may catch them off guard and they might not play it anymore because of that.
00:37:152 (3) - follow the DS. yes i can see the blanket, but the spacing make it even harder for beginners to hit. i highly suggest that you put this note beside the slider. it'd be easier for beginners to get to during gameplay.
00:37:878 (4,5) - the spacing here is inconsistent, that beginners would hit (5) too early considering that the spacing is so close. follow the DS for this. space out (5) so that it'd make a lot of sense for beginners during gameplay.
00:40:297 (2) - this slider can look a lot smoother than this during gameplay. also i highly suggest that you extend it by 1/2 so that it'd be easier to follow consideing the BGM ends at that spot during gameplay.
00:56:265 (4) - remove the clap, NC, and space this note out away from (2). the clap ruins the clap pattern during gameplay, the NC is because of new lyrics in the song, and if you space out this note, it'd look neater and wouldn't be that much of a bother during gameplay.
00:59:168 (2) - that gap would make 1 big difference for beginners. it'll give them a hard time because they're not confident about the length of now much they have to move their cursor. make this a straight slider and move it here. it'll be easier for beginners to follow during gameplay.
01:02:797 (1) - replace this note for a circle. this would most likely throw off beginners because they just finished spinning. ending the note at the red tick on an easy might not be a good idea. so if you wanna give time for them to recover, then you should replace this for a circle at the downbeat. it'll give beginners plenty of time to recover and considering that the spinner ends at the downbeat, it'll be easy to follow during gameplay.
01:07:878 (3) - having 2 repeats on the slider isn't a good idea on an easy diff. it'll give beginners a hard time because they don't know when this slider will end. i want you to do something simple for a change. something that follows the music, and something easier for beginners to follow during gameplay.
01:09:813 (4) - replace the clap for a finish. it'll show emphasis in the BGM and it'll show that a new pattern is starting. adding finishes at the 1st downbeat is most likely a good idea because it's like the climax part in the song.
01:11:265 (2) - remove the clap. you're breaking consistency with the current clap pattern in this part during gameplay.
01:16:587 (1,2) - this rhythm may be hard for beginners to follow. yes it follows the vocals nicely, but it's too hard for them to follow. again, try to do something easier for beginners to follow in this part, because this one feels hard for them during gameplay.
02:00:136 (5) - remove the clap and make this a NC. again, the clap breaks the consistency in claps, and the NC is because of new lyrics in the song during gameplay.
02:15:620 (7) - ^
02:19:490 - re-snap this timing point because it's off by 8ms if you look at the timing panel.
02:22:878 (3) - if you want to make this blanket nicer, then move the last point of the slider up. it'll flow smoother and it'll give off a smooth feeling to the song during gameplay. it should look like this.
02:24:329 (4) - make this a NC because of the change in the lyrics. i feel that whenever i play this, it threw me off for a bit when i saw this during gameplay.
02:34:974 (1) - same as 01:09:813.
03:08:361 (1) - same as 01:02:797.
03:07:878 - same as 02:19:490.
03:26:265 (3,4,5) - the placement looks bad and there's no flow shown in this part of the song. i highly suggest that you do this placement. it'll be consistent eith (1) since you're technically blanketing this note during gameplay. it'll flow smoother and it'll look fun for beginners to do IMO.
03:31:103 (8) - same as 01:09:813.

[Normal]
00:31:829 (1,2) - for this rhythm, remove the clap at (2) and add it at the end of (1) because it sounds unfitting and it ruins the rhythm sense in the claps during gameplay.
00:48:765 (6,7) - it'd be easier to follow if you can remove (7) and extend the slider by 1/2. the sliderticks follow the vocals nicely and the slider ends at the clap in the BGM, so don't forget to add a clap at the end of this slider.
00:57:716 (5,6,7) - this placement is bad because of the overlap on (4). it ruins the flow and transition in this part of the song. move i highly suggest that you stack this on the end of (5) for a smoother transition in the song.
01:12:958 (4,5,6) - remove (4,6) because they don't follow anything in the song. it's overmapped basically during gameplay.
01:31:829 (3,4) - ik that you're trying to be consistent with (1), but this rhythm doesn't fit with the song at all. do this instead. it'll follow the vocals a lot better and it'll give off a smooth feeling to the song during gameplay.
02:19:490 - same as easy.
03:37:878 (7) - this blanket is bad because it's actually overlapping the slider and not blanketing it. it'd be easier if you can align this note to (7) instead of blanketing this note during gameplay.

[Hard]
use tick rate 2. tick rate 4 sounds too noisy and it might interfere with other players during gameplay.
00:16:103 (2) - move the clap from the repeat to the end because it'll start the consistency pattern, and because there's a clap in the BGM.
00:19:490 (3) - replace the clap for a finish. the clap sounds unfitting and it ruins the consistency pattern in the claps during gameplay. the finish would give enough emphasis with the BGM
00:39:087 (5,6) - make this a 1/4 repeat slider instead. since this is a hard diff, this may be hard for less experienced players during gameplay, this requires little time to react, and it may surprise the less experienced players during gameplay IMO.
00:40:781 (3) - this repeat slider doesn't fit with the song at all. it doesn't follow the music during gameplay. to make it easier, and easier to follow for beginners, replace this for a 1/2 slider followed by a circle. it'll feel smoother and it'll be easier to follow during gameplay.
00:48:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - *nazi* move this 1 grid up so that it'd be aligned to the previous note. i feel that doing this would give off a smooth feeling for players during gameplay.
01:06:184 (3,4,5,6) - i highly suggest that you replace this for 1/4 repeats or triplets. same reason as 00:39:087.
01:10:055 (6,7) - these 2 notes don't fit with the song. it's overmapped because there are notes that don't follow the song. do something that would follow the music, but make it somewhat challenging because this is overmapped IMO.
01:15:861 (1,2) - same as 01:06:184.
01:24:571 (2) - same as 01:10:055 about the overmapped issue.
01:26:265 (4) - missing a clap at the beginning? add it for consistency with the clap pattern during gameplay.
01:48:765 (2,3) - same as 01:06:184.
02:19:490 - same as easy.
02:24:571 (9) - remove this note. same reason as 01:10:055 about the overmapped issue.
03:07:878 - same as 02:19:490.
03:28:200 (1) - same as 01:26:265.
03:33:281 (2) - this slider doesn't fit with the song, nor does it follow the music during gameplay. it basically broke the flow during gameplay. replace this for a 1/2 slider and a circle because it'll be easier to follow and it flows to the song perfectly during gameplay IMO.

i'm skipping the insane diff because there's a lot of problems that i can't mod myself orz. i'm gonna have to give you some advice about mapping.
keep your combos consistent and know when to change them: it's highly suggested that you change them whenever the lyrics/melody in the vocals change.
keep your hitsounds consistent: i noticed in the other diff that there are several claps that are at the wrong places and other that are missing. in song like this, you have to listen carefully on which hitsounds go where. the easy way is that if you add clap at the 2nd and 4th downbeat, or at the 1st and 3rd downbeat.
Play other players' maps: if you do that, you'll get a sense of where to put notes and how to make the flow smoother. you'll also make new patterns which may make the map fun or boring. the placement and rhythm is up to you.
follow the DS in easier diffs. it's highly recommended if you do that because it'll give beginners an easier time to enjoy the diff.
if you still don't understand, the it's highly recommended if you follow this guide because it'll be eaiser to follow than my advice IMO. anyways GL

that's really a good mod! thanks a lot!
all fixed, it was really usefull! I hope i got the pont, so i'll try to improve my mapping style and to fix something that's wrong u.u
the only thing that i can't do it's how to change, in easy diff, the slider velocity whithout change every slder lenght :/ . anyway you said that it was good also in this way, i think i'll leave it as it is.
anyway thanks! ^.^

Hi Hi Here My Mod :3

[Easy]

(*) 00:56:265 (1) - This note is being blocked by 00:55:297 (2) - please move it elsewhere
(*) 00:57:232 (3,1) - this slider is confusing for new players as these would go to the closest to the slider and the note would fail, this is a bad flow x.x
(*) 01:04:974 (3) - Check the distance snap D:
(*) 01:52:394 (1) - ^ Respects the distance, at all times in an easy
(*) 02:16:587 (8) - ^ Same :I
(*) 03:24:329 (1) - Oh Good ^!!!
(*) 02:24:329 (1) - Really, do not respect the distance snap, this is unranked, could you please fix ù.u
(*) 03:08:845 (1) - add a clap here do not ignore the claps of the song please :3
(*) 03:29:894 (7) - This note is covered by this 03:28:200 (5) -

[Normal]

(*) 00:35:942 (1,2,3,4) - this is very difficult for a normal D:
(*) 00:58:926 (1) - Remove it very uncomfortable one clap

[Hard]

I liked this difficulty :3
*·*

Nice Map Good Lucky :3

Gero wrote:

Hi Hi Here My Mod :3

[Easy]

(*) 00:56:265 (1) - This note is being blocked by 00:55:297 (2) - please move it elsewhere
(*) 00:57:232 (3,1) - this slider is confusing for new players as these would go to the closest to the slider and the note would fail, this is a bad flow x.x
(*) 01:04:974 (3) - Check the distance snap D:
(*) 01:52:394 (1) - ^ Respects the distance, at all times in an easy
(*) 02:16:587 (8) - ^ Same :I
(*) 03:24:329 (1) - Oh Good ^!!!
(*) 02:24:329 (1) - Really, do not respect the distance snap, this is unranked, could you please fix ù.u
(*) 03:08:845 (1) - add a clap here do not ignore the claps of the song please :3
(*) 03:29:894 (7) - This note is covered by this 03:28:200 (5) -

[Normal]

(*) 00:35:942 (1,2,3,4) - this is very difficult for a normal D:
(*) 00:58:926 (1) - Remove it very uncomfortable one clap

[Hard]

I liked this difficulty :3
*·*

Nice Map Good Lucky :3

thanks for mod!

Hi, from the Queue!

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 15.635ms BPM: 124,00
Resnapp elements after and then move the timing points too!

Easy

00:20:957 (1) - Remove NC
00:23:376 (3) - NC Remove next
00:38:860 (5) - ^
00:42:731 (4) - ^
00:48:054 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:941 (1) - I suggest to move this slider where the circle (4) is and remove the circle too, add a circle here 01:14:667 - after
01:16:602 (1) - Remove NC
02:15:635 (7) - NC
02:34:989 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
03:27:731 (4) - I suggest to move this circle next to the sliderend, Ctrl + G this slider 03:28:215 (5) - and move them different 03:29:183 (6,7,8) -
03:36:925 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + J them and then move them closer again

Please change the combos too because you did on the secong half like i suggested

Normal

00:26:749 (1) - Remove NC and make a reserve slider instead of these circles
00:34:490 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:361 (1) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
00:42:232 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:587 (8) - Remove this circle and put the next slider to 00:46:587 - fits the vocal more
00:48:523 (5,6) - ^
00:50:458 (3,4) - ^
01:17:071 (6,7) - Ctrl + H them and put them back to where they was to make them more visible
01:29:168 (4,5) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
02:03:523 (7) - Add NC
02:04:732 (1) - Remove add NC on next sldier
02:11:265 (9) - Add NC remove next
02:13:200 (1) - Remove NC
02:15:620 (7) - Add NC
02:16:829 (1) - Remove NC
02:23:361 (6,7) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
02:23:361 - NC here then
02:25:297 (1) - Remvoe NC
02:27:716 (4) - Add NC
02:30:136 (1) - Remove NC
02:31:345 (3) - Add NC
02:33:039 (7) - ^
02:34:007 (1) - Remove NC
02:35:700 (3) - NC
02:40:781 (7) - ^
02:41:749 (1) - Remove NC
02:43:200 (3) - Add NC
03:11:990 (4) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
03:27:716 (4) - NC
03:30:136 (1) - Remove NC
03:31:345 (4) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
03:31:103 - NC here then

Fix the combos please!

Hard
00:20:942 (6) - Add NC remove nxt
00:23:603 (4) - ^
00:27:474 (8) - ^
00:31:345 (7) - ^
00:32:555 (3,4,5) - Look at the spacing these circle are not right
00:39:087 (5,6) - Make a reserved slider again
00:42:232 (6) - NC remove next
00:44:652 (4) - Add NC
00:46:587 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:523 (3,4,5) - , 00:50:458 (2,3,4,5,6) - Distance between them should be better
00:58:926 (4,5) - I dont suggest putting it like this, try move them opposite
01:03:644 (3) - , 01:11:386 (3) - , 01:18:886 (2) - , 01:21:063 (3) - , 02:15:257 (3) - , 02:22:031 (3) - , 02:27:837 (6) - , 02:37:273 (2) - , 03:31:708 (8) - , 03:38:482 (6) - No tripple in BG remove this please
01:09:813 (1) - Remve NC
01:18:039 (7) - NC remove nxt
01:20:700 (1) - Remove NC Add here 01:21:426 (5) -
01:22:636 (1) - Remove NC
01:24:329 (1) - ^
01:29:894 (1) - ^
01:30:861 (5) - Add NC
01:32:313 (1) - Remve NC
01:49:490 (4) - Spacing, put this bit more up
01:56:990 (7) - NC
02:00:378 (8) - ^ remove next
02:06:668 (1) - Remove NC add here 02:07:394 (3) -
02:10:781 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
02:14:652 (1) - ^
02:27:716 (5) - NC remove nxt
02:31:103 (5,6) - Put the slder one half beat back where the circle is and remove circle then add a circle here 02:32:071 -
02:36:184 (7) - NC remove nxt
02:43:684 (1,2) - Spacing, fix it
03:23:361 (6,1) - like 02:31:103 (5,6) -
03:35:216 (7) - NC remove nxt
03:37:878 (4) - NC remove next

Insane

General
The spacing is too big for such a soft song, decrease it a bit and fix the spacing then, also the streams, the circles are too far away from each other
I also suggest to not use so many streams, make less because it destroys the flow of the song
I dont even think an Insane suits such a song :s

00:43:200 (7) - Dont put this down up down, make it down only to make it smoother
00:49:974 (7) - NC remove nxt
01:20:700 (1,2,3,4) - , 01:24:934 (7,8,1) -, 02:21:910 (3,4,5,6) - , 02:22:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , 02:27:474 (1,2,3,4) - , 02:30:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 02:35:942 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 02:43:926 (1,2,3,4) - , 03:11:990 (1,2,3,4) - , 03:19:490 (4,5,6,7) - 03:15:861 (6,7,8) - 03:13:926 (4,5,6) - , 03:21:184 (3,4,5) - , 03:27:474 (2,3,4) - , 03:28:442 (1,2,3) - 03:34:249 (2,3,4) - , 03:37:152 (4,5) - , Dont make this please it destroys the rythm fully and the flow of the song, try another pattern
01:26:265 (7) - Add NC remove nxt
01:28:442 (8) - Add NC
02:01:950 (3) - like 01:20:700 (1,2,3,4) -
03:31:345 (1,3) - I dont think this suits the map, try something different

Ok thats it, waiting for you to fix then i recheck

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 15.635ms BPM: 124,00
Resnapp elements after and then move the timing points too!

Easy

00:20:957 (1) - Remove NC
00:23:376 (3) - NC Remove next
00:38:860 (5) - ^
00:42:731 (4) - ^
00:48:054 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:941 (1) - I suggest to move this slider where the circle (4) is and remove the circle too, add a circle here 01:14:667 - after
01:16:602 (1) - Remove NC
02:15:635 (7) - NC
02:34:989 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
03:27:731 (4) - I suggest to move this circle next to the sliderend, Ctrl + G this slider 03:28:215 (5) - and move them different 03:29:183 (6,7,8) -
03:36:925 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + J them and then move them closer again

Please change the combos too because you did on the secong half like i suggested

Normal

00:26:749 (1) - Remove NC and make a reserve slider instead of these circles
00:34:490 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:361 (1) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
00:42:232 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:587 (8) - Remove this circle and put the next slider to 00:46:587 - fits the vocal more
00:48:523 (5,6) - ^
00:50:458 (3,4) - ^
01:17:071 (6,7) - Ctrl + H them and put them back to where they was to make them more visible
01:29:168 (4,5) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
02:03:523 (7) - Add NC
02:04:732 (1) - Remove add NC on next sldier
02:11:265 (9) - Add NC remove next
02:13:200 (1) - Remove NC
02:15:620 (7) - Add NC
02:16:829 (1) - Remove NC
02:23:361 (6,7) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
02:23:361 - NC here then
02:25:297 (1) - Remvoe NC
02:27:716 (4) - Add NC
02:30:136 (1) - Remove NC
02:31:345 (3) - Add NC
02:33:039 (7) - ^
02:34:007 (1) - Remove NC
02:35:700 (3) - NC
02:40:781 (7) - ^
02:41:749 (1) - Remove NC
02:43:200 (3) - Add NC
03:11:990 (4) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
03:27:716 (4) - NC
03:30:136 (1) - Remove NC
03:31:345 (4) - Like 00:26:749 (1) -
03:31:103 - NC here then

Fix the combos please!

Hard
00:20:942 (6) - Add NC remove nxt
00:23:603 (4) - ^
00:27:474 (8) - ^
00:31:345 (7) - ^
00:32:555 (3,4,5) - Look at the spacing these circle are not right
00:39:087 (5,6) - Make a reserved slider again
00:42:232 (6) - NC remove next
00:44:652 (4) - Add NC
00:46:587 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:523 (3,4,5) - , 00:50:458 (2,3,4,5,6) - Distance between them should be better
00:58:926 (4,5) - I dont suggest putting it like this, try move them opposite
01:03:644 (3) - , 01:11:386 (3) - , 01:18:886 (2) - , 01:21:063 (3) - , 02:15:257 (3) - , 02:22:031 (3) - , 02:27:837 (6) - , 02:37:273 (2) - , 03:31:708 (8) - , 03:38:482 (6) - No tripple in BG remove this please
01:09:813 (1) - Remve NC
01:18:039 (7) - NC remove nxt
01:20:700 (1) - Remove NC Add here 01:21:426 (5) -
01:22:636 (1) - Remove NC
01:24:329 (1) - ^
01:29:894 (1) - ^
01:30:861 (5) - Add NC
01:32:313 (1) - Remve NC
01:49:490 (4) - Spacing, put this bit more up
01:56:990 (7) - NC
02:00:378 (8) - ^ remove next
02:06:668 (1) - Remove NC add here 02:07:394 (3) -
02:10:781 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
02:14:652 (1) - ^
02:27:716 (5) - NC remove nxt
02:31:103 (5,6) - Put the slder one half beat back where the circle is and remove circle then add a circle here 02:32:071 -
02:36:184 (7) - NC remove nxt
02:43:684 (1,2) - Spacing, fix it
03:23:361 (6,1) - like 02:31:103 (5,6) -
03:35:216 (7) - NC remove nxt
03:37:878 (4) - NC remove next

Insane

General
The spacing is too big for such a soft song, decrease it a bit and fix the spacing then, also the streams, the circles are too far away from each other
I also suggest to not use so many streams, make less because it destroys the flow of the song
I dont even think an Insane suits such a song :s

00:43:200 (7) - Dont put this down up down, make it down only to make it smoother
00:49:974 (7) - NC remove nxt
01:20:700 (1,2,3,4) - , 01:24:934 (7,8,1) -, 02:21:910 (3,4,5,6) - , 02:22:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , 02:27:474 (1,2,3,4) - , 02:30:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 02:35:942 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 02:43:926 (1,2,3,4) - , 03:11:990 (1,2,3,4) - , 03:19:490 (4,5,6,7) - 03:15:861 (6,7,8) - 03:13:926 (4,5,6) - , 03:21:184 (3,4,5) - , 03:27:474 (2,3,4) - , 03:28:442 (1,2,3) - 03:34:249 (2,3,4) - , 03:37:152 (4,5) - , Dont make this please it destroys the rythm fully and the flow of the song, try another pattern
01:26:265 (7) - Add NC remove nxt
01:28:442 (8) - Add NC
02:01:950 (3) - like 01:20:700 (1,2,3,4) -
03:31:345 (1,3) - I dont think this suits the map, try something different

Ok thats it, waiting for you to fix then i recheck

oook! thanks a lot!
All fixed!
but i only don't know well how to reduce the spacing in insane diff :/
anyway ready for recheck

Some parts arent fixed yet, needs to be more improved before i show him

BounceBabe wrote:

Some parts arent fixed yet, needs to be more improved before i show him

i remapped some parts, maybe it should be better

You reduce the spacing by holding Alt and then in the upper right corner you see the Distance spacing, its 0,8 atm, try reducing it, and then make the spacing different Call me back via PM then

Hi from the Queue!

Insane Recheck

I still suggest to remove some stream since they dont fit with the song :s

00:26:764 (8) - NC
00:35:715 (7) - ^ Delete next NC
00:30:151 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
01:50:473 (7) - NC remove next
02:05:473 (7) - ^
02:10:796 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
02:31:965 (7) - Dont stack these since you didnt before so far
02:34:022 (6) - NC remove next
03:23:376 (4,5) - The "whoa" vocal starts at 03:23:376 - and i suggest to move the slider to this point
03:24:344 (5) - NC here and spacing !
03:36:199 (8) - This doesnt fit, make it different, its a sudden change for the player

Change the combos too! Get me to give you a recheck again and after that i think its ready to give jericho2442.

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue!

Insane Recheck

I still suggest to remove some stream since they dont fit with the song :s

00:26:764 (8) - NC
00:35:715 (7) - ^ Delete next NC
00:30:151 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
01:50:473 (7) - NC remove next
02:05:473 (7) - ^
02:10:796 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
02:31:965 (7) - Dont stack these since you didnt before so far
02:34:022 (6) - NC remove next
03:23:376 (4,5) - The "whoa" vocal starts at 03:23:376 - and i suggest to move the slider to this point
03:24:344 (5) - NC here and spacing !
03:36:199 (8) - This doesnt fit, make it different, its a sudden change for the player

Change the combos too! Get me to give you a recheck again and after that i think its ready to give jericho2442.

ok! thanks for everything! I also tryed to remove some streams and to check some combos. tell me if it's ok now

Needs still more improvment! Get more mods and then try to get into the queue again

General - only modding insane. I don't think this is ready to be considered for ranking. I think this diff, and most likely the others, could use much more symmetry and more DS.

Use Tiny grid snapping when dealing with making perfect sliders and placing circles.

3.0 SV is good I like it.
BUT you should use a higher DS. .6 is too low. .75 felt better. Your streams are good tho. Keep the DS you use for it. Just change DS for 1/2 and 1/1 stuff

00:16:360 (5,6,7) - Make more symettrical to eachother. Circle should be in the center of the sliders
00:17:570 (1) - start on 00:16:118 (4) -
00:32:570 (6,7,8) - try for more symmetry
00:35:231 (4,5,6,1) - ugly
01:17:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - claps in here seem weird
02:26:280 (5) - clap
03:10:796 (2) - remove last clap on this slider

There's plenty of things you could fix, I just pointed out the very most obvious. But to be considered for ranking, which I'd love to see this song get to, you should brush it all over, remap stuff if you gotta.

cirno- wrote:

General - only modding insane. I don't think this is ready to be considered for ranking. I think this diff, and most likely the others, could use much more symmetry and more DS.

Use Tiny grid snapping when dealing with making perfect sliders and placing circles.

3.0 SV is good I like it.
BUT you should use a higher DS. .6 is too low. .75 felt better. Your streams are good tho. Keep the DS you use for it. Just change DS for 1/2 and 1/1 stuff

00:16:360 (5,6,7) - Make more symettrical to eachother. Circle should be in the center of the sliders
00:17:570 (1) - start on 00:16:118 (4) -
00:32:570 (6,7,8) - try for more symmetry
00:35:231 (4,5,6,1) - ugly
01:17:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - claps in here seem weird
02:26:280 (5) - clap
03:10:796 (2) - remove last clap on this slider

There's plenty of things you could fix, I just pointed out the very most obvious. But to be considered for ranking, which I'd love to see this song get to, you should brush it all over, remap stuff if you gotta.

thanks for mod! adjusted spacing and symmetry also, hope now it's better u.u

[Easy]
ar -1. its a bit high because of the low bpm (it feels more like 70)
00:31:844 (2) - place it like this may confuse players because they think its like ctrl+g
00:33:054 (4) - make it symmetrical ? move to (336;128 - 296;64 - 224;104 - 152;64 - 104;136)

no kudo

phaZ wrote:

[Easy]
ar -1. its a bit high because of the low bpm (it feels more like 70)
00:31:844 (2) - place it like this may confuse players because they think its like ctrl+g
00:33:054 (4) - make it symmetrical ? move to (336;128 - 296;64 - 224;104 - 152;64 - 104;136)

no kudo

oh! thanks anyway! all fixed

[Easy]

00:20:957 (3) - Oh, you could shape it a bit rounder by moving the middle tick a bit down.
00:54:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The structure is not so nice. I think you can make this even better. How about using such one as example: http://puu.sh/1S2Lv You could also have the same beat at 00:46:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - It is easy for beginner and looks nice.
01:05:473 (2,3) - shape it round? Not a must of course.
01:07:893 (5) - moving the last tick to x:488 y:160 ? It seems so pressed.
01:13:699 (1,2) - how about this http://puu.sh/1S2W5 ? It plays once again easier and the ticks have a nice feeling here.
01:16:602 (4) - Moving this a bit more up would be an option to make the flow better.
01:22:409 (1,2,3,4) - Hm... Playing first on white tick and the red tick could confuse beginners. Consider this please.
01:25:312 (1,2,1,2) - Same as before, probably two long sliders which are round is better. Easier for playing and dosen't sound bad as well.
01:29:183 (1) - Shape it round?
01:31:844 (4,5,6) - simplify it by moving (5,6) a bit further away from (4)?
- Break -
01:53:860 (3) - Looks pretty pressed.
01:57:005 (2,3,4) - This can be made nicer I would say. You may use a similier constalation I suggested before. Here a example: http://puu.sh/1S3eo
02:04:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above at 00:54:344
02:10:312 (4,5) - First you are having your own beat and then 02:13:699 (4,5) - you follow the songs beat. Try to stick on one way here, else it could confuse beginners.
02:27:247 (1,2) - There we go! Haha. Great sliders.
02:31:602 (2) - Shape it round, looks nicer.
03:13:699 (4,5,6) - Dosen't look so nice. Maybe use it like you did here: 03:09:828 (2) -
03:28:215 (5) - Shape rounder it?
03:24:344~03:38:860 - To be honest, you have started here to become abstract. Better stick on your current mapping system/style.

Easy is fine, but sometimes there are combos which are confusing for beginners. Many things could be simplified a bit more.

[Normal]

00:36:441 (2,3,4) - Hm, in my opinion this dosen't look so nice, could be better.
00:44:909 (2) - Last tick is red. http://puu.sh/1Sa4q
00:46:602~00:49:505 - I think this part can be made similiar as in easy, just with some more hitcircles. Long sliders are importand in my view. Right now you had just short one.
00:48:538 (3) - As allways I suggest to shape the slider.
00:51:925 (1,2) - I think you can place such sliders in general like that: http://puu.sh/1S48Y It's more interesting in this way and plays not much different.
00:54:102 (2) - Move this just one grid up.
00:54:344 (3,3) - Those to sliders don't fit together that well. How about giving them the same curve?
00:57:731 - try this beat: http://puu.sh/1Sagn - Simple and clean.
01:04:022 (2) - shape it rounder? Looks cooler here with this slider: 01:03:054 (1) -
01:06:925 (1) - make this one rounder as well?
01:14:909 (2,3) - Au, this can be considered as unrankable because thie hitburst from (2) is hiding the (3). It is still somehow readable and predictable, but I think it is better to change it, so you are on the save side.
02:00:876 (1,5) - To be honest I don't think it is a good idea to use such sliders since you didn't done that before either. Consider it please.
02:25:312 (4,5) - Same as above. Could be unrankable, but this one is even more predictable caused by the AR.
02:31:360 (1) - Think about this one, one more time. Using a round slider is recommendable.
02:34:505 (7) - Can be shaped round.
03:32:812 (4) - Move it one grid up.
03:34:505 (8) - Having curve would be once again nice.
03:35:957 (4,5,6) - This can be made better in my opinion. I think you have enough examples above. ^^

It seems like you like to use short sliders instead long one. That's fine in my view, but keep in mind that it is hard to variate with them as having a balanced long-short-slider usage. It can make it look messy.

[Hard]

00:20:231 (5,4,6) - This time I will call this just one time up. I think the map would be more nice if you are using overall more sliders which are round. Linear is fine but could be boring and nothing special.
{
01:00:393~01:05:957 - I want to give you an example how you could rather map it:
http://puu.sh/1SaYi
http://puu.sh/1SaZc
http://puu.sh/1SaZG
More longer sliders, less shorter. Giving the whole part more flow into the music. The music is soft even if it has bass; that means it is recommendable to use rounder and longer sliders as having anchor-sliders. Try to do it in all kiais, it would help a lot.
(01:06:199~01:10:554 - this part for example may have shorter sliders, it fits because of the vocals.)
}
01:57:731 (3,1) - Not so nice overlap. Just move slider or circle a bit to fix this.
02:03:538~02:06:925 - You could do the same as I recommended it in easy and normal by using more longer sliders.
02:09:344 (7,8) - Nah... dosen't look so pretty.
02:15:634 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This can be made better as well.
- second kiai is much better in my opinion!
02:26:522 (4) - Looks like a misplaced anchor slider between thos round sliders.
02:46:844 (2) - Having one half circle as slider is probably better...?
03:02:086 (1,1) - Are you sure about this? You didn't placed slider and spinner that close before.
03:15:393 (4,5,6) - Try to make them like 03:14:909 (1,2,3) -
03:23:376 (1,2,3,4) - This overlap is so-so. Not really needed, but also not a must to change.

I say you could use more reverse arrows and longer sliders. You did that at the end but not at the beginning.
The Hard is okay, though.

[Insane]

General:
Same as above, I suggest to use more curved sliders. Also you could stack many of these tripplets in your Insane, would make it more structured in my opinion.

00:23:376 (3,4,5,6) - Just pointing this out. Not unrnkable or so, but you may like to consider this one once again.
00:20:231 (5,6) - the space here is really small, don't you think so? It broke my move when I was playing it.
00:27:610 (4,5) - alt + g, because else it breaks the movement of player.
00:35:352 (5,6) - ^
01:11:038 (1,2) - You could try a little slider with reverse arrow.
01:16:844 (1,2,3) - ^ (01:16:844~01:18:538 - many hitcircles we have here)
03:12:973 (3,4,5) - could be stacked.
03:15:151 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be stacked or made rounder.
03:16:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Cane be made nicer and structured in my opinion. Just tell me if you want another example/suggestion by me.
03:24:102 (2) - Think about it to move the hitcicle a bit forward or so to be able to see it better because of the hitburst from 03:23:134 (3) -

Well, that's all for the Insane. The reason is that I have mentioned many things in the other difficulties before, which you can apply on the Insane as well.
This difficultie will need some more mods before it is ready for rank.

I hope I could help you with this. If you should have qeustion, just ask me.
Good luck!

thanks for the mod! it was veeery usefull i tryed to change those things, easy and normal diff now should be good, i still have to fix hard and insane, but i'll do this before getting modded again u.u

qkenan wrote:

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Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General


Nice song but you mapped the similar rhythm again and again.It would make players feel boring and too long.I suggest to end at 01:33:054 or 02:50:473 since there are not many big changes comparing the three parts.
Disable the letterbox during breaks


Easy


Circle Size+1
Suggest to use AR4 (at least AR3)


Normal


01:04:022 (2) - Slider head remove Clap ?
01:14:183 (1,2,3,4) - Stack them well plz
02:45:634 (4) - Why slider end added Clap ? Remove it
03:08:860 (1) - ^
03:34:022 (7) - Add Clap


Hard


00:50:715 (3,4,5) - Suggest to use repeat slider like previous.
02:36:199 (1) - Remove the red point in slider
03:22:651 Add a circle ?
03:27:731 (9) - Move to (60,176) to stack well


Insane


Slider Velocity of 3 feels too fast and bad. It makes the flow weird. Even you just want to increase the difficulty you can do it in the other way.
00:51:925 (7,8) - Stack the sliders' ends
01:28:457 (1,2) - Bad shape
02:17:812 (2,3,4) - According to the previous burst 300,It's hard to read the pattern.Place farther?


Other


Sorry for my poor mod.If it doesnt help you then not kd is ok

thanks to you too, but lots of the things you suggested was arleady posted by OnosakiHito's mod :/ anyway i don't want to make the map shorter (i have done lots of work... i don't want to deleate it and i don't undertand what are the letterbox and how to remove them O.o

Hai there, request from my queue

Holy crap this song is amazing o-o

Sorry for the enormous mod, but I really want this map to be as modified to be as good as possible. If there are any questions you may contact me in game ofcourse,

General

• 
  In case you haven't found out yet, you can remove the letterbox like this: http://puu.sh/1TAQs
  It's the first box under ''Misc. toggles''

Insane

• 
  In general I think the spacing you're using doesn't fit with the slider velocity. I suggest to increase the spacing to 1.0 or more, at least during the kiai time.
  (Although it would be great to see in increased over the whole map, as there are currently no jumps in this insane diff)
  
  !Also, the combo's. It's not consistent at all, I suggest putting a NC every big white tick, I didn't list any NC changes further in the mod on this diff as the whole diff should be rechecked on this
  
  Playability and looks:
  00:43:457 (1,3) - In such cases I would suggest copying the first slider and flipping it to make this pattern look a lot better
  00:54:344 (3,6) - Put these underneath the center of 00:53:860 (1,2) - : http://puu.sh/1Tyeq
  00:56:522 (4,5) - These would look 120% better if they were blankets and more symmetric. Since I was experimenting with this I made it already, So I've included a picture of it and the code. Feel free to use it: http://puu.sh/1TynV
  

  340,136,56522,2,0,P|390:192|390:192|340:248,1,149.999995231629
  424,304,57005,2,0,P|524:192|524:192|424:80,1,299.999990463257

  
  00:58:215 (1) - I really suggest making a curved slider here, fits way better, you might have to rearrange the pattern in order to make it flowing though.
  00:59:183 (1) - ^
  01:06:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is a bit out of proportion, try using the ''Slider to stream'' function
  Make a stream from 01:08:860 - till 01:09:828 - , this would fit with the current way it's mapped
  01:14:667 (6,7,8) - This doesn't fit the music, make slider (7) 1/4th shorther, so that it ends on 01:15:393 -
  01:19:264 (2,4) - Stack these
  01:53:134 (2,3) - Would be nice if you copied slider (2) and put it at the location of (3) and flip it(More flow and looks better): http://puu.sh/1TyLF (Don't forget to remove the clap on the new slider)
  02:29:425 (6,7) - In such cases I would suggest copying the first slider to make this pattern look a lot better
  02:34:022 (1,2) - ^
  02:43:699 (7) - Moving this note to x:440 y:320 would make a world of difference in the looks of it (X and Y coordinates are in top right corner)
  03:33:054 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - Kind of boring pattern, I suggest making something else here
  
  
  Hitsounds:
  In most cases it's important to keep the hitsounds consistent.
  The pattern you're using here means you're using a clap on each 3rd white line.
  
  00:20:231 (5) - Add clap on slider end
  00:31:844 (1) - ^
  00:57:247 - I suggest you use a custom hitclap on this slidertick
  01:02:812 (1) - Add clap on slider end
  01:03:538 (3) - Remove clap
  01:10:312 (3) - ^ I see what you're trying to do with the claps in the stream, but it really doesn't fit
  01:10:554 (5) - ^
  01:18:538 (7) - Add clap
  01:25:675 (3) - Remove clap
  01:25:917 (5) - ^
  02:07:409 (3) - ^
  02:18:780 (3) - ^
  02:18:901 (4) - ^
  02:19:022 (5) - Add clap
  03:38:860 (8) - Add finish because it's the end of the song?(Optional)

Hard

• 
  !Also in this diff you should recheck all the combo's
  
  Playability and looks:
  00:19:505 (8) - I suggest putting this note at x:116 y:320, This makes it more fun and readable to play
  00:28:699 (3) - I'd prefer to see a curved slider here. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/1TzWl
  00:32:812 (5,6) - This looks really messy, try making the slider even on both sides(You can do this by counting the grids and making sure the last anchor is in the center of the slider end, for example): http://puu.sh/1TA0z
  00:44:909 (2,3) - This stack doesn't really fit here
  01:12:247 (5) - Why not remove 2 anchor points and use the autocurve with 3 anchors, looks better
  01:18:780 (1,2) - Stack doesn't fit, Suggestion: http://puu.sh/1TA5u
  01:26:280 (4) - Would be great of the start and the end of this slider wouldn't collide
  01:28:215 (9) - Apply a little downwards curve here for looks and flow
  02:08:618 (3) - Make this a perfect stack on the end of 02:07:409 (1) - (Turn off grid snap if necessary)
  02:15:634 (4,5) - This is kind of ugly to be completely honest, I suggest making something else out of this, with curves preferably
  02:20:473 (1) - This could look way better, try reading this guide: t/37194
  02:21:925 (2,3) - Stack doesn't really fit
  02:43:699 (1,3) - In such cases I would suggest copying the first slider and flipping it to make this pattern look a lot better, also keep an eye on the approach circle of the note in the center of them, you could make a pretty blanket by using that as guideline
  02:49:505 (1) - Move this spinner to 02:49:626 - and add a note with a clap on 02:49:505 - (Don't forget making the spinner 1/4th shorter)
  03:08:376 (1) - Should have a prettier curve: http://puu.sh/1TAm8
  03:12:973 (5,6) - Would be great if you could make these sliders form a better blanket over eachother (Use the approach circle like i mentioned before)
  03:19:747 (6) - A little downwards curve would be awesome
  03:35:715 - Add a note here
  
  Hitsounds:
  Same goes for this diff, consistency is important
  
  00:20:231 (1) - Add clap on slider end
  01:02:086 (1) - Finish on slider start
  01:17:570 (6) - Perfect location for a finish
  01:19:505 (4) - Remove clap on start
  01:32:086 (3) - Add clap
  02:00:876 (2) - Add clap on slider end
  02:04:989 (4) - Add clap
  02:31:118 (5) - Remove clap on end
  02:32:086 (6) - Add clap
  02:34:022 (2) - ^
  02:35:473 (4) - Remove clap
  02:35:957 (6) - Add clap
  02:43:699 (1) - Add clap on slider start
  03:08:376 (1) - Add clap on slider end
  03:20:473 (1) - Remove clap on end
  03:23:376 (1) - ^
  03:24:344 (2) - Add clap
  03:26:280 (7) - Add clap on slider start
  03:35:957 (1) - ^
  03:34:022 (3) - Add clap
  03:38:860 (8) - Add finish because it's the end of the song?(Optional)

Normal

• 
  !Also in this diff you should recheck all the combo's
  
  Playability and looks:
  00:29:425 (3) - This might be a bit hard to read for a normal diff, I suggest adding a note at 00:29:183 - to prevent confusion
  00:41:038 (3) - ^
  00:43:457 (1) - ^
  01:03:054 (2) - Add NC
  01:06:441 (4,5) - These notes shouldn't be stacked
  01:07:893 (2) - Move this slider to x:200 y:80
  01:28:699 (5,6) - Shouldn't be stacked
  01:50:957 (4,1) - In such cases I would suggest copying the first slider and flipping it to make this pattern look a lot better
  02:15:151 (6,7) - Shouldn't be stacked
  02:36:925 (3) - This slider looks kind of ugly, I suggest making something different
  02:42:247 - Add a note
  03:08:860 (1) - This slider doesn't look that good either, Try and make something else
  03:23:860 (2,3) - ^
  
  Hitsounds:
  Same goes for this diff, consistency is important
  
  00:22:409 (5) - Add clap
  00:43:457 (1) - Add clap on slider end
  00:49:505 (5) - Add clap
  01:25:796 (1) - Add clap on slider end
  01:27:247 (4) - Remove clap on slider start
  03:23:860 (2) - Add clap on slider end
  03:38:860 (8) - Add finish because it's the end of the song?(Optional)

Easy

• 
  !Also in this diff you should recheck all the combo's
  
  00:25:312 (4) - I dislike this slider, it's not symmetric and it doesn't really look good, even if it was
  00:31:844 (2) - Start this slider from 00:31:602 - and end it on 00:32:086 - to prevent confusion
  00:40:312 (3) - This slider could look better if it was symmetric
  00:51:199 (2) - Start this slider at 00:50:957 - and end it on 00:51:441 -
  01:11:280 (2) - Make a curve in this slider, and possible place it somewhere else to give it more flow
  01:32:570 (5,6) - I'd prefer to see this unstacked
  02:07:893 (1) - This looks pretty awkward, I suggest making the angle more clear or removing it
  02:09:344 (3) - ^
  02:12:489 (2) - Start this slider at 02:12:247 - and end it on 02:12:731 -
  02:13:941 (4) - ^Do the same thing here
  02:26:764 - Add a note here, you might have to rearrange the previous pattern to make this work
  02:34:505 - ^
  02:35:957 (2) - Still not a fan of such sliders
  02:44:667 (1) - This slider could look better too, make the curves symmetric on both sides
  03:24:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just a quick note here, there shouldn't be such long combo patterns in an easy diff, make 4/5 like the max.
  
  Hitsounds:
  Same goes for this diff, consistency is important
  
  00:46:602 (1) - Add clap on slider start
  00:48:538 (3) - ^
  01:06:441 (1) - Add clap on slider end
  01:07:893 (3) - Remove clap on slider end
  01:33:054 (6) - Remove finish to keep consistent with the other diffs
  01:57:247 (3) - Add clap on slider start
  01:59:183 (4) - Add clap
  02:11:764 (1) - Remove clap
  02:22:893 (3) - Remove clap on slider end
  02:37:893 (4) - Add clap on slider start
  02:46:118 (2) - Remove clap on slider end
  03:17:570 (3) - Remove clap on slider start
  03:19:505 (1) - Remove clap
  03:32:086 (2) - Add clap on slider start

Longest mod I've ever made. Just to show my love for this song huehue.

Please comment on this and let me know what you did add and what you didn't add

After you're done with this, and gained a few more mods, feel free to call me for a recheck, Like I said, I really like this song and I would like to see this ranked in time.

Remember that looks are very important.

If there are any questions, feel free to contact me in game :3

~Kyshiro

thaaaanks really a lot for this mod! very usefull! and i'm really happy you liked the song anyway I tryed the best to add all the things, but i still have to recheck the combos etc XD anyway i wanted to answer you in time sooo... i wrote in red the things i didn't add in the map, all the rest schould be ok i could have forgot something maybe but generically it should be right
I'll contact you when I'll recive some more mods for a recheck as you say, if for you is ok

luxoDeh wrote:

thaaaanks really a lot for this mod! very usefull! and i'm really happy you liked the song anyway I tryed the best to add all the things, but i still have to recheck the combos etc XD anyway i wanted to answer you in time sooo... i wrote in red the things i didn't add in the map, all the rest schould be ok i could have forgot something maybe but generically it should be right
I'll contact you when I'll recive some more mods for a recheck as you say, if for you is ok

Alright, you should have contacted me about the things you didn't understand though, if you are going to continue as a mapper you'll need to know about it anyhow. If you still feel like fixing them feel free to talk to me in game, i'm online most of the time.

And about the spacing, I really suggest you fix this issue because the insane diff just plays a bit awkward how it is right now.

PS: You forgot the kudosu for my mod and the previous mod :3

(Also, the slider speed is just fine in the insane, it's the spacing that makes it a bit awkward)

hi there~~ got this req from my queue.

unfortunately, i can't say your map is ready for bubble or further, so let me give your some general suggestions~

[Insane]

1. First of all, 3.0SV is toooo high for this bpm, which cause your overall DS is lower than 1.0x. As a result, the flow of your map is terrible. in my opinion, approx 1.8 ～ 2.2 SV is enough.
2. 00:15:876 (2,3,4) - this kinda placement is looked odd although it is playable. In general, we choose to reduce DS when place 1/4 beats, and use average DS for 1/2 beats.
3. 00:20:715 - i don't like the blank because there's vocal here. Add a note here could make your beat more smooth. Please do not overuse blank in your beat or it would ruin your map.
4. Then say something about NC. In general, there're three commom ways to place NC
   
   1. 1. Add NC at downbeat (long-white tick) by drum.
   2. 2. Add NC at each new vocal phrase
   3. 3. Add NC at some designed pattern for emphasizing/warning.
   a good use of NC could make your map neat and clear~
5. 01:04:264 (1,2) - This slider shape is so...inflexible.. and ugly. use right triangle along axes carefully.
   
   looked more smooth right~?

   
6. 01:07:167 (6,7) - then it is about blanket: curved slider blanket note's edge is looked better like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:10:070 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream shape: try your best to make it even and smooth. A simple way is check Distance Snap then uncheck Grid Snap, and place it one by one.
8. 01:15:634 (1) - here is a beat issue: vocal is snapped to 1/2 but not 3/4, so this repeat slider is heard weird...
9. 01:30:513 (5,1) - look at here, you need a perfect stack here but not overlap.

the other parts have similar issues so i won't list all of them but leave it to yourself. Don't hesitate to remap it :>

Hi, luxoDeh

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for my mod very delay)







That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

[General]

1. Hai mai pensato invece di usare gli hitsound ''Normal'' di usare quelli ''Soft'' perche credo che ci starebbero meglio :3
2. poi mi chiedo perchè tu abbia usato lo stesso distance spacing in tutte le diff :/ se non sai come modificarlo: (salvi la mappa, apri .osu in notepad e nella voce distance spacing metti quella che piu si adatta, salvi le modifiche nel notepad, fai test mappa e si fixa da solo o esci dalla diff e rientri)

[Easy]

1. 01:15:151 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
2. Allora la diff non è male ma credo che tu abbia esagerato con il distance spacing con cui hai rovinato tutto il flow della mappa la cosa che ti consiglierei di fare e di ridurlo e poi di spostare tutti gli elementi affinche abbiano uno spacing giusto dato che hai mappato il 99% della mappa a 1/1 credo che sia inutile avere il distace cosi grande
3. Riguardo gli hitsound dovresti veramente seguire il consiglio che ti ha dato Wiinter all'inizio
   
   SPOILER

   
   perche in tante parti si senta l'incosistenza del clap, i finish e i whistle vanno sulla 3 e sulla linea piu alta (''tra parestesi'')

[Normal]

1. qui lo spacing si adatta ma il floww non è uno dei migliori la cosa che ti consiglierei di fare e di seguire una line cioè esempio:
   00:50:473 (6,7,8) - flowa male la cosa che potresti fare per migliorarlo è fare una cosa del genere
   
   SPOILER

   
   poi proseguendo la pattern in questo modo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   questo è solo un esempio di come miglioralo , con forme piu soffici e meno messe a random, le stesse cose valgono sia per la Hard che per l'Insane

credo che hai un sacco di cose da migliorare nel flow :X spero che questo suggerimento ti possa essere utile >_<

Scorpiour wrote:

hi there~~ got this req from my queue.

unfortunately, i can't say your map is ready for bubble or further, so let me give your some general suggestions~

[Insane]

1. First of all, 3.0SV is toooo high for this bpm, which cause your overall DS is lower than 1.0x. As a result, the flow of your map is terrible. in my opinion, approx 1.8 ～ 2.2 SV is enough.
2. 00:15:876 (2,3,4) - this kinda placement is looked odd although it is playable. In general, we choose to reduce DS when place 1/4 beats, and use average DS for 1/2 beats.
3. 00:20:715 - i don't like the blank because there's vocal here. Add a note here could make your beat more smooth. Please do not overuse blank in your beat or it would ruin your map.
4. Then say something about NC. In general, there're three commom ways to place NC
   
   1. 1. Add NC at downbeat (long-white tick) by drum.
   2. 2. Add NC at each new vocal phrase
   3. 3. Add NC at some designed pattern for emphasizing/warning.
   a good use of NC could make your map neat and clear~
5. 01:04:264 (1,2) - This slider shape is so...inflexible.. and ugly. use right triangle along axes carefully.
   
   looked more smooth right~?

   
6. 01:07:167 (6,7) - then it is about blanket: curved slider blanket note's edge is looked better like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:10:070 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream shape: try your best to make it even and smooth. A simple way is check Distance Snap then uncheck Grid Snap, and place it one by one.
8. 01:15:634 (1) - here is a beat issue: vocal is snapped to 1/2 but not 3/4, so this repeat slider is heard weird...
9. 01:30:513 (5,1) - look at here, you need a perfect stack here but not overlap.

the other parts have similar issues so i won't list all of them but leave it to yourself. Don't hesitate to remap it :>

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, luxoDeh

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for my mod very delay)

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Remove .osb file, since it isn't necessary.

Easy

1. 00:46:602 (1) - Change clap in slider begin to slider end instead. To following the rhythm of song.
2. 00:48:538 (3) - ^
3. 00:50:957 (2) - Add clap in slider end to following the rhythm of song.
4. 01:06:411 (1,2) - If you want (1) is symmetry with 01:05:473 (2), Move these to up 2 grids.
5. 01:09:828 (1) - It is not necessary to add NC. Please remove it.
6. 01:23:376 (3) - Remove clap in slider begin. It isn't suitable for putting clap sound on this note.
7. 01:25:312 (1,1) - You can make these are symmetry by this picture and code, to make it more beautiful, and you should remove NC on 01:27:247 (1)
   
   SPOILER

   

   456,144,85312,6,0,P|348:52|224:148,1,320,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   456,252,87247,2,0,P|348:344|224:248,1,320,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

8. 02:25:312 (3) - Same as 01:23:376 (3).
9. 02:29:183 (1) - Same as 01:09:828 (1).
10. 02:33:054 (3) - Same as 01:23:376 (3).
11. 02:40:796 (1) - ^
12. 02:48:538 (2) - ^
13. 02:50:473 (5) - Finish sound is too loud. Please remove finish.
14. 03:13:699 (2,3,4) - It contributes to the confusion. I suggest that make to this. It will be easier and more beautiful.
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 03:17:570 (3) - Same as 01:23:376 (3).
16. 03:23:376 (5) - Are you forget add finish on this note?
17. 03:27:731 (4) - Remove a circle?
18. 03:28:215 (5) - Add NC here to following the rhythm.
19. 03:29:183 (3) - Same as 01:23:376 (3).
20. 03:29:909 (4,1) - Move last point of slider (4) to right 1 grid and down 4 grids to make (3,4) to parallel. Then move (1) to left 1 grid to adjust spacing.
21. 03:36:925 (3) - Same as 01:23:376 (3).
    
    Comment: I think this diff has problem only putting some hitsound, but your mapping is good.

Normal

1. OD -1 (4)
2. 00:17:570 (4,5) - Move (4) to x:184 y:348. Then move (5) to x:312 y:184. It will be more beautiful
3. 00:31:884 (1,2) - Move these to down 1 grid by you can observe putting the past note.
4. 00:53:860 (1) - Move to down 1 grid.
5. 00:57:731 (1) - ^
6. 01:03:054 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
7. 01:20:473 (4) - Move to down 1 grid to adjust spacing.
8. 01:27:247 (4) - Remove clap in slider begin. It isn't suitable for putting clap sound on this note.
9. 02:17:570 (1) - Add finish here.
   
   Comment: This diff is look good for me. I may be able to find the problem more than this.

Hard

1. 01:12:247 (6) - Add clap in slider end to following the rhythm.
2. 02:08:618 (3,4) - Move to up 1 grid.
3. 02:32:570 (7,8,9) - The rhythm of notes are weird. I think move (8) to 02:32:933 be better.
4. 02:38:376 (4) - Same as 01:12:247 (6)
5. 03:17:086 (2) - Move to up 1 grid to reduce spacing between this and next note.
6. 03:20:473 (1) - Same as 01:12:247 (6)
7. 03:23:376 (1) - ^
   
   Comment: Good diff for me.

Insane

1. HP -1? (7)
2. SV in this diff is too high which same as Scorpiour said. But for me, if you use 2.1SV in Hard diff, I will suggest you use about 2.5SV at the farthest.
3. 00:24:828 (6) - Move to up 1 grid.
4. 00:44:183 (6) - Remove clap in slider end.
5. 01:04:747 (2) - Try to move to stack with (7).
6. 01:21:925 (3,5) - Remove clap.
7. 01:25:796 (4) - ^
8. 01:33:054 (7) - Move to x:108 y:204?
9. 02:09:102 (5) - Move 2nd point of slider to left 5 grid. It will be more beautiful.
10. 02:43:669 (7) - Spacing is between (6) and this is too close. Please move (7) to down 1~2 grids.
11. 03:17:812 (2,3,4) - Make to this. It will be able to play more smoothly.
    
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12. 03:26:280 (7) - Move to down 1 grid to stack with 03:27:247 (1).
    
    Comment: You should consider SV in this diff, because some player or modder may think why SV is very high? Addition to what I said, it has problem for me.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Lally wrote:

[General]

1. Hai mai pensato invece di usare gli hitsound ''Normal'' di usare quelli ''Soft'' perche credo che ci starebbero meglio :3
2. poi mi chiedo perchè tu abbia usato lo stesso distance spacing in tutte le diff :/ se non sai come modificarlo: (salvi la mappa, apri .osu in notepad e nella voce distance spacing metti quella che piu si adatta, salvi le modifiche nel notepad, fai test mappa e si fixa da solo o esci dalla diff e rientri)

[Easy]

1. 01:15:151 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
2. Allora la diff non è male ma credo che tu abbia esagerato con il distance spacing con cui hai rovinato tutto il flow della mappa la cosa che ti consiglierei di fare e di ridurlo e poi di spostare tutti gli elementi affinche abbiano uno spacing giusto dato che hai mappato il 99% della mappa a 1/1 credo che sia inutile avere il distace cosi grande
3. Riguardo gli hitsound dovresti veramente seguire il consiglio che ti ha dato Wiinter all'inizio
   
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   perche in tante parti si senta l'incosistenza del clap, i finish e i whistle vanno sulla 3 e sulla linea piu alta (''tra parestesi'')

[Normal]

1. qui lo spacing si adatta ma il floww non è uno dei migliori la cosa che ti consiglierei di fare e di seguire una line cioè esempio:
   00:50:473 (6,7,8) - flowa male la cosa che potresti fare per migliorarlo è fare una cosa del genere
   
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   poi proseguendo la pattern in questo modo:
   
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   questo è solo un esempio di come miglioralo , con forme piu soffici e meno messe a random, le stesse cose valgono sia per la Hard che per l'Insane

credo che hai un sacco di cose da migliorare nel flow :X spero che questo suggerimento ti possa essere utile >_<

ook! thanks to all of you soo... i fixed quite everything... or i tryed to do this... In this period i had been a bit lazy, but now i'm ready to go on whit this map. anyway I still have not fixed the insane spacing, but i'm going to do this in a while... anyway, thanks!/grazie!
solo non ho ben capito in che modo dovrei mettere gli hitsounds... non mi pare tanto giusto come dici... forse capisco male io :/ ... proverò a sistemarli comunque u.u

nice beatmap, keep working on it please

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