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Oh yeah it is finally submitted successly so I can post this I typed 3 days ago.
[Easy]
01:59:67(1):This overlapped slider is illegal, you can't tell the direction when you first play it, change this.
這個滾輪會讓第一次玩的玩家沒辦法判斷球先往哪邊跑，是不合規定的滾輪，改掉它。
[Normal]
00:55:71:Add a note here?It sounds better.在這裡加一個圈聽起來比較順些。
00:56:92:^同上。
01:00:58:^同上。
01:01:80:^同上。
01:05:45:^同上。
01:06:67:^同上。
02:24:64:^同上。
[Hard}
No comments.
[Insane]
01:35:76(1):Same as [Easy] 01:59:67(1)同[Easy] 01:59:67(1)。
good job for first mapping after all, you get damn teletubby's star.
[Easy]
01:59:67(1):This overlapped slider is illegal, you can't tell the direction when you first play it, change this.
這個滾輪會讓第一次玩的玩家沒辦法判斷球先往哪邊跑，是不合規定的滾輪，改掉它。
[Normal]
00:55:71:Add a note here?It sounds better.在這裡加一個圈聽起來比較順些。
00:56:92:^同上。
01:00:58:^同上。
01:01:80:^同上。
01:05:45:^同上。
01:06:67:^同上。
02:24:64:^同上。
[Hard}
No comments.
[Insane]
01:35:76(1):Same as [Easy] 01:59:67(1)同[Easy] 01:59:67(1)。
good job for first mapping after all, you get damn teletubby's star.
Topic Starter
[Easy]
Fixed.
[Normal]
Replace them with sliders. I don't want to put three circles in a row because that will make this difficulty harder.
換成slider。我不想在這個難度擺三個連續的circle
[Insane]
Fixed
Thanks for advice, teletubby!
Fixed.
[Normal]
Replace them with sliders. I don't want to put three circles in a row because that will make this difficulty harder.
換成slider。我不想在這個難度擺三個連續的circle
[Insane]
Fixed
Thanks for advice, teletubby!
[Easy]
01:26:77 (2) - make this either end in the same spot as 1 or move it away from 1 so the sliders dont overlap ^^
01:39:264 - break is very very long
try mapping some of it?
02:14:29 (1) - move so that it doesnt cross the prev. slider
02:38:65 (1) - this note is a bit soon after the spinner end
[Normal]
00:11:24 (4,1) - can you reposition so that 4 is not on top of 1, or rather that 1 is not underneath 2,3,4?
00:21:90 (2) - partly covered by fading 1
00:31:19 (7,8) - move 8 so that 7 doesnt overlap it
00:33:47 (1) - too close to the end of 8
00:55:55 (4) - move this so it isnt under the fading 2
01:00:43 (4) - ^
01:30:12 (3,4) - move so that 4 isnt under 3
02:07:28 (1,2,3,4,1...) - should be 1 full beat earlier? if this is intentional i guess you can leave it
02:16:42 (3,4) - move so that 4 isnt under 3
02:27:69 (5) - stack the beginning of this under the beginning of 4
[Hard]
01:19:77 (1) - just a little too close to the previous slider
01:34:54 (4) - this might be hidden
02:16:42 (3,4,5) - move so 4 isnt under 3 and the ends of 4 and 5 stack
[Insane]
00:11:85 (1,2,3) - move circles off of slider
00:14:13 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:34:38 (4) - this is an illegal slider overlap
00:35:60 (1) - ^
01:30:12 (3,4) - move circle off of slider
01:38:95 (3) - delete and re-place break
02:14:28 (1) - line this up horizontally with 8
02:32:25 (5,6) - move circle off of slider
01:26:77 (2) - make this either end in the same spot as 1 or move it away from 1 so the sliders dont overlap ^^
01:39:264 - break is very very long
try mapping some of it?02:14:29 (1) - move so that it doesnt cross the prev. slider
02:38:65 (1) - this note is a bit soon after the spinner end
[Normal]
00:11:24 (4,1) - can you reposition so that 4 is not on top of 1, or rather that 1 is not underneath 2,3,4?
00:21:90 (2) - partly covered by fading 1
00:31:19 (7,8) - move 8 so that 7 doesnt overlap it
00:33:47 (1) - too close to the end of 8
00:55:55 (4) - move this so it isnt under the fading 2
01:00:43 (4) - ^
01:30:12 (3,4) - move so that 4 isnt under 3
02:07:28 (1,2,3,4,1...) - should be 1 full beat earlier? if this is intentional i guess you can leave it
02:16:42 (3,4) - move so that 4 isnt under 3
02:27:69 (5) - stack the beginning of this under the beginning of 4
[Hard]
01:19:77 (1) - just a little too close to the previous slider
01:34:54 (4) - this might be hidden
02:16:42 (3,4,5) - move so 4 isnt under 3 and the ends of 4 and 5 stack
[Insane]
00:11:85 (1,2,3) - move circles off of slider
00:14:13 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:34:38 (4) - this is an illegal slider overlap
00:35:60 (1) - ^
01:30:12 (3,4) - move circle off of slider
01:38:95 (3) - delete and re-place break
02:14:28 (1) - line this up horizontally with 8
02:32:25 (5,6) - move circle off of slider
Topic Starter
[Easy]
01:26:77 (2) - Fixed.
01:39:264 - Remain. I don't really know what to put here. There's nothing here in other 3 difficulties, either. So I don't think it's necessary to put things in the "Easy" one. Still, if there must be something, just let me know.
02:14:29 (1) - Fixed.
02:38:65 (1) -Removed.
[Normal]
00:11:24 (4,1) - Fixed.
00:21:90 (2) - Fixed.
00:31:19 (7,8) - Fixed.
00:33:47 (1) - Fixed.
00:55:55 (4) - Fixed.
01:00:43 (4) - Fixed
01:30:12 (3,4) - Fixed.
02:07:28 (1,2,3,4,1...) - Sorry for that, but it's intentional.
02:16:42 (3,4) -Fixed.
02:27:69 (5) - Fixed.
[Hard]
01:19:77 (1) - Fixed.
01:34:54 (4) - Fixed.
02:16:42 (3,4,5) - Fixed.
[Insane]
00:11:85 (1,2,3) - Fixed.
00:14:13 (4,5,6,7) - Fixed.
00:34:38 (4) - Fixed. But I'm sure that I've seen this design in a ranked map.
00:35:60 (1) - Fixed.
01:30:12 (3,4) -Fixed.
01:38:95 (3) - Fixed.
02:14:28 (1) - Fixed.
02:32:25 (5,6) - Fixed.
Thanks for advice!
01:26:77 (2) - Fixed.
01:39:264 - Remain. I don't really know what to put here. There's nothing here in other 3 difficulties, either. So I don't think it's necessary to put things in the "Easy" one. Still, if there must be something, just let me know.
02:14:29 (1) - Fixed.
02:38:65 (1) -Removed.
[Normal]
00:11:24 (4,1) - Fixed.
00:21:90 (2) - Fixed.
00:31:19 (7,8) - Fixed.
00:33:47 (1) - Fixed.
00:55:55 (4) - Fixed.
01:00:43 (4) - Fixed
01:30:12 (3,4) - Fixed.
02:07:28 (1,2,3,4,1...) - Sorry for that, but it's intentional.
02:16:42 (3,4) -Fixed.
02:27:69 (5) - Fixed.
[Hard]
01:19:77 (1) - Fixed.
01:34:54 (4) - Fixed.
02:16:42 (3,4,5) - Fixed.
[Insane]
00:11:85 (1,2,3) - Fixed.
00:14:13 (4,5,6,7) - Fixed.
00:34:38 (4) - Fixed. But I'm sure that I've seen this design in a ranked map.
00:35:60 (1) - Fixed.
01:30:12 (3,4) -Fixed.
01:38:95 (3) - Fixed.
02:14:28 (1) - Fixed.
02:32:25 (5,6) - Fixed.
Thanks for advice!
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檢查一下timing吧,不是歌手的問題就是OFF很多,反正我也測不準~就先跳過 
首先,
定一個DS長度,把全部難度的全部note重新拉一次間距
雖然只有一點點,距離看起來變的亂七八糟的
↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑
太多變來變去的間距！懶得一個一個地方列出來,全部重拉就可以改善
(至少我可以省下打20行以上的時間 )
normal:
00:19:161 (5) 結尾貼齊 00:17:333 (3)
01:32:868 (1) 無聊?
02:07:285 ~ 02:13:986 如果你有很好的理由可以不把note對在主音上, 那就維持這樣吧。
只是往前1拍聽起來感覺比較好
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hard:
00:17:942 (4) 無聊?
01:35:761 (6) 開頭的音哨拿掉
02:07:285 ~ 02:13:986 一樣
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insane:
把間距重新拉一拉應該就行了
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LAST
1.檢查換色的地方有沒有錯
2.音效不要設得很奇怪
3.間距重拉
4.不要設來回太多次的slider
5.快點改一改,不然dipsy的泡泡又要破了
↑
都確定OK得話就沒問題了
首先,
定一個DS長度,把全部難度的全部note重新拉一次間距
雖然只有一點點,距離看起來變的亂七八糟的
↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑
太多變來變去的間距！懶得一個一個地方列出來,全部重拉就可以改善
(至少我可以省下打20行以上的時間
)normal:
00:19:161 (5) 結尾貼齊 00:17:333 (3)
01:32:868 (1) 無聊?
02:07:285 ~ 02:13:986 如果你有很好的理由可以不把note對在主音上, 那就維持這樣吧。
只是往前1拍聽起來感覺比較好
--------------------------------------------------------------
hard:
00:17:942 (4) 無聊?
01:35:761 (6) 開頭的音哨拿掉
02:07:285 ~ 02:13:986 一樣
--------------------------------------------------------------
insane:
把間距重新拉一拉應該就行了
--------------------------------------------------------------
LAST
1.檢查換色的地方有沒有錯
2.音效不要設得很奇怪
3.間距重拉
4.不要設來回太多次的slider
5.快點改一改,不然dipsy的泡泡又要破了
↑
都確定OK得話就沒問題了
Topic Starter
Chinese song
star~
star~
easy好像沒有修?
normal:
01:29:518 (1) 一點點遠,有可能會被ㄉ一ㄤ,但也不是大問題
hard:
我注意到有很多部分的間距突然縮短,但似乎還是可以rank,還是有可能被ㄉ一ㄤ
00:58:146 (1~3) 間距麻煩定一種就好
02:31:346 (4) 為什麼變遠了?
insane:
00:30:734 (6) 變近了...
00:38:044~00:39:262 好像也近了些
00:46:572 (1) 有一點點點點點點點點點點點遠啦,不是嚴重的東西
00:52:968~00:53:882 也是近了些
01:10:938~01:13:375 間距修一修
01:32:868 (1) 變近了...
01:38:655 (2.3) ^
.
.
.
你還是再修一次吧@@,好多....
如果是故意的話嘛...就等看bat怎說吧,不強迫你改
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其他我注意到的只有音效的部分有些聽起來有點怪,不是很重要,除非bat有提到
其實我也不喜歡一直看間距,不過他就很重要
normal:
01:29:518 (1) 一點點遠,有可能會被ㄉ一ㄤ,但也不是大問題
hard:
我注意到有很多部分的間距突然縮短,但似乎還是可以rank,還是有可能被ㄉ一ㄤ
00:58:146 (1~3) 間距麻煩定一種就好
02:31:346 (4) 為什麼變遠了?
insane:
00:30:734 (6) 變近了...
00:38:044~00:39:262 好像也近了些
00:46:572 (1) 有一點點點點點點點點點點點遠啦,不是嚴重的東西
00:52:968~00:53:882 也是近了些
01:10:938~01:13:375 間距修一修
01:32:868 (1) 變近了...
01:38:655 (2.3) ^
.
.
.
你還是再修一次吧@@,好多....
如果是故意的話嘛...就等看bat怎說吧,不強迫你改
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其他我注意到的只有音效的部分有些聽起來有點怪,不是很重要,除非bat有提到
其實我也不喜歡一直看間距,不過他就很重要
Topic Starter
我猜大概是因為我用了貼齊格線的功能，然後格線設定的太大的緣故吧？
然後就是不知道為什麼，他DS功能有點笨笨的？
我會再檢查看看，只是這要改的話有點小麻煩...
I guess it's because I used the grid snap, and the grid level is too big.
I don't know why. The distance snap function is a little strange sometimes.
I'll check it out. Through it might be a little difficult.
然後就是不知道為什麼，他DS功能有點笨笨的？
我會再檢查看看，只是這要改的話有點小麻煩...
I guess it's because I used the grid snap, and the grid level is too big.
I don't know why. The distance snap function is a little strange sometimes.
I'll check it out. Through it might be a little difficult.
Good. Just good.
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Topic Starter
It sure sounds better. That's really weird.Sinistro wrote:
Good map!I have just one small thing to note:
In all difficulties, I suggest you make the last spinner 1/4 shorter. I know it seems a weird request, since it will end on a blue tick, but for some reason the song seems to end slightly earlier, so I think it sounds better that way. I think there are a couple of parts in the song where the vocals are similarly slightly off (the timing seems to work well as it is now, though). Test it out and tell me if you agree!
While we're at it, here's an optional request that you can choose to ignore:
Normal
00:28:14 (8) and 01:14:44 (7) - How about making these a New Combo because of the change in spacing?
Get back to me soon so we can rank this
Anyway, I followed your suggest. Thanks a lot!
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