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Ryoid
250 posts
Joined May 2017
Ryoid
Here on my arm lies a mark that I made.
When I was so low, I cut with a blade
To punish my body for being a mess,
Though here is my testament, I must confess...

That seeing these scars left on my arms, legs, and chest
Makes me realize I was in a place of no rest;
I feel guilty inside for leaving this token.
Now I will see and remember that I was so broken.

But seeing these scars helps me see
That I survived so much trauma and now I am free.
Unlike that time when I fall to the darkness pit
To bad that no one really give a shit
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Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
Retrospection is my key, the one I never used,

my reflection stares me back, with the face of someone new.

To think I'd see my self, the one before it all,

changing my future from the past, in matters none too small.
CatzerTM
273 posts
Joined January 2018
CatzerTM
I wake up...

my vision blurred...

all i could think of was anxiey,depression,torture

I spend my day locked out of reality

staring into the blue

all i could to do was dream

hoping they would come true

regretting everything i had done in my past

actions speak louder than words
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
…Step back, uncertain inconclusions-

…Come back, they'll feed you their illusions.

...Think fast, adapt to their delusions--

...Intact, your will is your solution.
TeeArctic1
69 posts
Joined December 2014
TeeArctic1
Tick tock

What an pleasing sound

Tick tock

The sound of future hope

Tick tock

The sound of new beginnings

Tick tock

The sound of the unknown

Tick tock

The sound of our common doom

Tick tock

The sound of grief, both present, past and future

Tick tock

The sound of all endings

Tick tock

What an annoying sound
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Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia

TeeArctic1 wrote:

Tick tock

What an pleasing sound

Tick tock

The sound of future hope

Tick tock

The sound of new beginnings

Tick tock

The sound of the unknown

Tick tock

The sound of our common doom

Tick tock

The sound of grief, both present, past and future

Tick tock

The sound of all endings

Tick tock

What an annoying sound
An interesting perspective and execution on the concept, but also an overdone insight.

Good job though.
TeeArctic1
69 posts
Joined December 2014
TeeArctic1

Achromalia wrote:

TeeArctic1 wrote:

Tick tock

What an pleasing sound

Tick tock

The sound of future hope

Tick tock

The sound of new beginnings

Tick tock

The sound of the unknown

Tick tock

The sound of our common doom

Tick tock

The sound of grief, both present, past and future

Tick tock

The sound of all endings

Tick tock

What an annoying sound


An interesting perspective and execution on the concept, but also an overdone insight.

Good job though.


Haven't written poetry in years. Felt a bit conflicted by time today. I'll be moving soon, growing up and making a name for myself, at the same time, I had to say goodbye to one of my best, most loyal and oldest friend today, maybe forever, so it's a bittersweet notion
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia

TeeArctic1 wrote:

Haven't written poetry in years. Felt a bit conflicted by time today. I'll be moving soon, growing up and making a name for myself, at the same time, I had to say goodbye to one of my best, most loyal and oldest friend today, maybe forever, so it's a bittersweet notion
Hmm. Yeah I just felt it was a bit similar and indicative of these four lines in a poem I made on the first page.

Achromalia wrote:

A hatred for the passing of time, shifting into place.
To nothing, will everything go.

What point is there for us to stay?
And in the time we waste, we say we'll never know.
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
To follow vivid dreams, that always seem to flee,

to be so elusive, to be so inconclusive.

Tomorrow's "woe is me, my dream of little deeds",

the fragile one's illusion, the fond and false delusion.
keremaru
217 posts
Joined November 2017
keremaru
red is red,
blue isn't black,
seeing ahead,
does anything really come back?
abraker
Global Moderator
8,295 posts
Joined July 2014
abraker
One word, three, four
Let me write some more
Third line just been made
This thread's in for a cascade
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
Things to be made as ticking time is bade,

Laden with troubles still not for trade,

Lines without the thought, and the ambition that was for naught,

Wanting creative fodder from the very emotions I sought to not have caught.
Calamari
15 posts
Joined December 2015
Calamari
claustrophobic dress
suffocating necklace
look at these shoes, aren't they fabulous
asphyxiating perfumes
strangled neck
such a sight, such a wreck
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45Traeath
388 posts
Joined February 2016
45Traeath
Again and again
I wonder when will I be
Kicking that bucket
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
The commodity of which we've lacked.

The concept itself for why we act.

A solace for none, but a hope to stall the end of it all.

So on we run, but for a comfort not worth a dime.

Urgency, is the final call.

We're still running out of time.
MisakiTobisawa-
372 posts
Joined September 2017
MisakiTobisawa-
Mapping makes me mad because mapping makes men memorize multiple concepts, more than just mathematics

It's no wonder I almost failed my literature exam.
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
I don’t know what to think. I don’t know what to feel.
Uncertain of what I am, I fear what’s to be revealed.

What’s it like to show oneself, a self that one never really knows?
What’s it like to know oneself, when it’s the self that one still stows?
45Traeath
388 posts
Joined February 2016
45Traeath
Everytime when
I'm about to "get out"*
Bad news at the end


*In other words, my way of "being done with something"
Westonini
0 posts
Joined May 2018
Westonini
I'm bad at poetry
I'm good said nobody
keremaru
217 posts
Joined November 2017
keremaru
roleplaying with semi-imbeciles is not likeable
however, with being out of the "game" for a while
it brings back a sense of nostalgia
so now i must make a character inspired upon fable
and nekos
someone ohko
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
Some are sane,

A pill away
it reeks of ill.
In pain,

Yours to flay
run of the mill.
Long feigned,

Façades break
the world sits still.

Some are sane,

An inch away
don't get killed.

Just an inch away now.
Don't get killed.

I sit at the ledge.
Would slip off the edge.

A foot, for the fall.
One more, end it all.
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
To revive this thread,
Would be my greatest honor.
Poetry survives.
Wuxo
213 posts
Joined July 2014
Wuxo
i hate my mind, i hate my body,
my mind's foggy, everything cloudy,
my body isn't how i'd like.
i might be in need of a psych.
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
Feeling inert in my lingering indecision,
the creative dilemma of how I should live
is at hand when I look at the screen.

Yielding to a momentary lapse of vision,
the state of mind I'm in is dehabilitative
to the creative process I must preen.
Zelzatter Zero
3,962 posts
Joined October 2016
Zelzatter Zero
I feel hot,
I feel unsettling.
There's something...
Something inside me...
It lingers though under my skin,
Destroy my scents,
It likes me suffering.
It loves me dying in pain.
Him... that's him!
I can see his shadow,
Through my imagination.
He is coming... He is coming...
There's not much time left... I have to hide...
Somebody
Somebody please...
Who can help me right now??? who...
SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME!
Nuuskamuikkunen
1,197 posts
Joined March 2013
Nuuskamuikkunen
Feeling inspired.
Well, that is actually false,
I want to sleep now.
Achromalia
213 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Achromalia
with desires to be pondered and something fonder over yonder,
i saunter and behold the story i left untold.

unveil the tale that so deeply contains me,
and reign the fruits of perspective for your pursuits.

with desires to be shared and my void there laid bare,
i stare and stay inert despite my potential and my worth.

unravel this listless bliss in my oblivion,
for i see nothing amiss, i embrace this accursed abyss.
JustABeginner
1,029 posts
Joined December 2016
JustABeginner
Have you ever wonder,
What will it be to offer,
A second chance,
To fix what's done?

Have you tried to tell,
Your feelings to a well,
Your wish to find someone,
That will be your loved one?

Have you think about the future,
How miserable to be with her,
With reality strikes upon you,
So start planning something new.
Meguro
557 posts
Joined June 2017
Meguro
It's a beautiful day
A beautiful day to say ayyy
JustABeginner
1,029 posts
Joined December 2016
JustABeginner
Hello, my friend.
Why have you meet your end?
You have a long way to go.
Don't let your dreams flow,
where nothing remains in you.

Believe and you will see,
how exciting will it be,
to chase your dreams,
in a shining beam,
that is you.
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Nuuskamuikkunen
1,197 posts
Joined March 2013
Nuuskamuikkunen
Inspiration comes
Inspiration leaves
Just like the wind blows
A small pile of leaves
YyottaCat
1,057 posts
Joined July 2020
YyottaCat
Bad Poetry
Poetry can be hard,
But cleaning the yard,
Is always the thing,
That I think is hard.

Inspiration comes,
But never to be caught,
Is always the thing,
That makes you "uhh".
Meguro
557 posts
Joined June 2017
Meguro
I don't know
at least I don't know
YyottaCat
1,057 posts
Joined July 2020
YyottaCat
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