Aloda wrote:
Some suggestions for Toorun's diff:
[Toorun12's Muzukashii]
I read this and convinced.
I referred to all of your suggestions!
最初のkiaiにもう少し1/4パターンを入れて下さい。kiaiそれぞれに密度を増やしてるだと分かりますが、kiai地帯は曲の最も強い部分のはずだからこうして00:31:953 - のような他の地帯よりシンプルなパターンを使うのはなんだかおかしいです。
now I expressed a sense of unity in all kiai times. Only a possibility that said "that it is too similar" in there.
最後のkiaiの1/2以上のパターンは長すぎます。もう少し休憩を設けて、そのようなパターンを縮めて下さい。
I thought maps should be difficult as much as the last. Considering Muzukashii players, I realize that I was a devil anymore.
低bpmだからこれは大問題ではないけど、ranking guidelinesを従うように3/2以上の休憩をもっと設ければいいです。
two new break points added.
01:03:428 - 01:28:019 - この地帯はちょっと混乱しています。マッピングスタイルは色々で、ドラム、メロディー、ボーカルを同時にフォローしてるみたいで、プレイにくくなります。もっとシンプルなパターンにすればいいと思います。02:31:953 -の同じリズムのある地帯にも同じ問題があります。
I chose to value vocals the most. If my ears crearly working, this is just a mapping for vocals.
03:12:650 - にkを入れればいいです。この地帯の他の同じリズムのところにそうしましたみたいです。
It is just my thought that "not to put k that point". Despite this short section, I thought it should be a gradually change, but perhaps its too short to make a change.
同じリズムのあるけどmappingは大違う地帯は多少あります。00:31:953 - と02:00:478 - 、そして01:44:740 - と03:42:773 - アンド 01:03:428 - と02:31:953 - の地帯を見て下さい。それから最初のkiaiの前半と後半も同じような問題はあります。
I'll be careful about the sense of unity. But I devised not to be a copy machine from mapper...
I need to express my gratitude for your kindness and more than yours, because I'm Japanese.
I will give advice to the two diffs.
-Kantan-
01:28:019 - k here. The volume of the song changes greatly.
01:47:199 - k and 01:47:691 - d
I thought kdk was better than kkd. For Futsuu and Muzukashii you take melodies like "k_kdk" "k__k__d_k", but in Kantan I think kkk are going better.
In order to accept the proposal, it is desirable to change "01: 55: 068 and 01: 55: 560" as well.
01:59:986 (112) - In order to emphasize "ru" of melody pronunciation, I think that it is important to erase this note.
03:26:543 (8) - I felt this scene is somewhat intense, because 1/4 7 times has not appeared so far, and it is 1/4 9 times that first appeared. I recommend that you delete this note.
03:43:756 - It is the last part, I thought that you should add a note (d or k). Although it is outside Kiai Time, I personally think something is necessary here.
I will do the same advice to the following two points.
03:47:691 -
03:51:625 -
- Futsuu -
00:23:101 (36) - I thought kdkdd or ddkkd was more appropriate than kdkkd. If you feel uncomfortable starting this 5 combos from d, I think that it is one strategy to convert 00:22:609 's note to k.
01:29:002 (167) - At the point where the song changes, k to k feels slightly unnatural. it sounds nice to change from k___K to k_d_K
02:36:871 (313) - Since the melody's pitch rises, dkk and ddk felt more natural than kdk. The same situation is in the following point.
02:44:740 (324) -
02:53:593 (336) - I thought that the form of ddd + kkk is better than twice repeating of kkk. It will not be monotonous.
03:11:051 (40) - When there is Notes near Finish, the power of Finish falls down slightly. In my opinion, destroying or being weak the vol of this notes is better.
03:50:642 (73) - It was the starting point of the measure. d was more appropriate than k.
If I can overcome this week's research presentation, I'll be sure to write advice Oni and InOni!