is it gonna happen at some point?
Trynna wrote:
is it gonna happen at some point?
這真是我的圖嗎Garden wrote:
- Chaoslitz
- 01:12:349 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里可以随人声音高逐渐加间距,大概这样,个人认为比较有感觉 改了
- 01:26:619 (1) - 感觉没有必要nc,一个方向的跳给一组nc像 01:25:646 (1,2,3,4) - 一样 刪了
- 02:44:781 (1,2,3) - 这里做个圆润的blanket可能更好看些 還好吧這個
- 04:03:105 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建议从人声 04:03:267 - 这里起五连,或者考虑这个 04:03:349 - 蓝线没音,把 04:03:267 (5,6,7) - 换成滑条? 04:03:511 - 這邊沒聲音感覺現在就好了
- 04:11:213 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ^
00:22:078 (1) - 00:32:457 (1) - 这两个地方用到啦~Garden wrote:
normal-hitfinish2.wav
确认一下没用到的话就删掉
thanks!Trynna wrote:
checking snaps on this song is so tiring
hi btw, came cuz you, chaoslitz and garden pm'd me, but i was going to do it anywaycall me or garden back, but i prefer giving you my heart
- 00:40:889 (5,6,7) - this jump feels a bit overdone for such a calm section in comparison to the others, i don't think it's really suitable since people can get frustrated in such a chill part, introdutory jumps are fine but such spikes are a bit sad ok
- 01:43:808 (1,2) - while the song has a little pause effect that was represented pretty well on 03:47:051 (1) - and 04:46:726 (1) - respectivelly, you tried to represent it with a kick and a circle, representing something way denser and active than the song provides. i know it's not completely bad but maybe it's cool to consider should be fine represent the kick with a 1/4 slider, and imo leaving a gap between doesn't sounds good so i placed a note before entering the kiai
- 02:02:619 (1) - 04:05:862 (3) - inconsistent NCs, i'd rather remove 02:02:619 (1) - actually i prefer adding the nc xD anyway fixed
* need to fix sb- 02:36:349 (3,4,5) - that should be 1/6, compare with 02:33:754 (1,2,3,4) - were you followed this background accurately, also 02:36:592 (4) - seems like covering nothing in special. This also happens on 02:43:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -, where you clearly followed 02:43:376 (4) - with 1/6s and randomly switched to 1/4 while the basis is still the same. 02:43:727 (2) - 02:44:051 (5) - 02:44:376 - etc seems like having no specific beat, just a constant sound (except for 02:44:376 -) yup, fixed 02:43:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - oo
* need to fix sb- 02:46:240 (2) - that's definitely not 1/6 it's 1/8 but you can also simplify with 1/4 if you want aswell prob ok
- 04:04:889 (4,5,6,1) - in my opinion this kick (04:05:051 (6) -) has nearly no effect since it's super close to the next object that also basically starts a new section with stream sounds. doing something else or giving the transition more impact with more spacing or something would be great fixed
- 04:52:808 (8) - i'd remove this beat as done on 03:53:132 - and 01:49:889 - cuz seems pure overmap and a bit random as there are 1/6 beats on the background. try adding something on 04:53:132 - as there is a drum there okay
Thanks~Trynna wrote:
02:43:808 (2) - seems like missing drum sample added clap
02:46:240 (2) - whistle on 02:46:362 - should be moved to the upbeat moved it to 02:46:403 -
I think i wasn't intended to map the 1/6s in the past so i used a 1/4 silder to represent the kick instead, both case sounds fine for me imoLasse wrote:
05:10:889 (9) - shouldn't this be a 1/6 repeat?