Delis wrote:

LQ bg ok
no kiai in tv size ok

addressed most of the things in discord so only minor thing came up i think
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ndPZvjBidEk official video instead because i cant put booklets here it's full nsfw so you're missing はな in artist

[Insane]
00:04:656 (1,2,3) - I think only 1/1 and 1/2s will work nicely in this part because it's most quiet part so far but 2 3/4s are kinda intenser than how it should be imo, maybe shorten the sliders into 1/2, simply works prob. 00:11:387 (3,4) - is also 2 3/4s im ok with this but old maps don't really use this a lot just saying i'll try to keep the second one listed cuz the vocals really extends p much
00:35:041 (5) - would make a pause by stacking it onto 00:35:426 (1) - or put the circles further? it's readable but the rhythm doesn't look clearn stacked on 00:35:426 (1) -, i hope it's betta
00:49:849 - circle here might be a good material to accelerate the intensity here!! also I actually came up with an idea that to do CTRL+G on the sliders 00:50:810 (1,2,3,4) - because the flow 00:50:426 (5,6,1) - feels not intuitive and out of place compared to the rest of the map? you don't really have to emphasize it and the flow after they're ctrl-g'd plays c00l combo'ing towards 00:52:349 (1,2,3,4) - tried, tell me if it's gud now
01:15:233 - I actually feel like to have a circle or even a triplet here since the spacing 01:14:849 (4,1) - has triggered me again xD triple'd :sunglasses:
01:25:233 (4) - Haha ball i love this one!!
[Hard]
00:25:810 (4) - this is sex gae
00:57:156 (1) - this cirlce may bother newer players as only 1/2 blank after a spinner is pretty quick lol tried somethin
01:02:733 (6) - would just put this along the slider curve for a better flow owo is this really necessary? would destroy the aes
[Normal]
00:24:656 (2) - this rhythm is weird since the rhythm suddenly goes for the background sound and ignoring the vocals that you've been following for https://delisha.s-ul.eu/MM5KI4Yb rhythm like this feels more decent to catch everything you wanted here so give it a shot pretty cool, added
00:49:272 (5) - I think this does do nothing here, extend the slider into 3/2 may work well for the sound in the song, the vocals etc.. sure
01:00:233 (1,2) - maybe should tilt them some more, it's currently unbalanced with how the sliders are mapped around, and that causes some awkward playability https://delisha.s-ul.eu/lceRv12q done
01:05:810 - a circle? you haven't had any blank thats longer than 1/1 before yes!
01:31:003 (1,2) - 01:32:349 (3,4) - you could stack these notes like you did for 00:24:464 (1,2) - it will look clearner, you can do this for 01:24:464 (4,1) - 01:29:080 (2,3) - only if you want though it makes the map neater didn't change the last two cuz i changed stuff on that section so it wouldn't look so good

only thing I've noticed is the chorus is less intense than the other part, like 00:57:926 (3) - can be a 1/2 repeat slider instead for the vocals, a circle at 01:01:003 - and so move 01:01:195 (2) - by 1/2 tick, so you remove the slider where was at 01:01:580 - but add a circle at 01:01:964 - instead, to make the rhythm more suitable with how this section is normally mapped out, it's still up to you but increasing the intensity at THE KIAI is a definitely good idea!
tried something with major focus on vocals, tell me if it's betta!!

[Easy]
haha combo is inconsistent actually feels like you can just make everything as long as possible
setting is edgy can u go with like ar3 od2 hp2 or whatever ok
00:17:349 (5) - what slider is it similar to 00:05:041 (4) - on rhythm, it's rotated like this cuz the original pattern didn't support a linear one :/
00:28:118 (4) - I personally think how you didn't tilt the slider on 00:30:810 (2) - is pretty cool but 00:28:118 (4) - flows kinda odd according to how 00:26:580 (2,3) - flow, consider tilt the (4) a bit? tilt
01:09:272 (1,2) - 01:24:656 (1,2) - should swap the nc because you usually put a nc wheres the last note before a 1/1 blank fixed

Battle wrote:

[General]
metadata ?

Delis wrote:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ndPZvjBidEk official video

consider changing ur combo colors cuz they don't rly fit ur bg fixed

[Easy]
00:11:195 - to 00:12:733 - im not quite sure what rhythm youre following here and it kinda just seems out of place, if it's a low frequency i can't hear it so you kinda have to tell me what you're following here oh, those pauses were a tribute to Alacat's diff, i find it pretty cool and the pauses help newbies in some way and after that things get more intense and stuff
00:21:580 - also this pause i can't really tell what you're following so pls clarify fixed this one
tbh kinda the first part with pauses I don't really get cuz they kinda just sound like they're making their own rhythms since quite a few strong sounds are being ignored

[Hard]
00:25:810 (4,1) - consider not stacking this since every stack you've done indicated 1/2, having a 1/1 pause can be confusing now stacked with 00:26:772 (2) - instead

[Insane]
00:44:656 (1,2) - im not really liking this stack since you're coming out of consecutive 1/2 stacks so maybe try to move 2? insane players can distinguish these things, also 00:44:656 (1) - this beat has a potential to a pause after it, so stacking would be the more appropriate imo
01:32:541 (2,3) - tbh low key triggering that this isn't perfectly linear lol fixed this thing

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