There are a few places where it's hard to hear the snare, but I made judgements based on what would make sense for the drum line as well as what I could hear
EZ00:12:607 - double for crash?
00:11:875 - it might be better if this LN ends here at the beginning of the next sound
00:33:095 (33095|0,33095|3,33460|2,33460|1,33826|3) - i'm not sure what the purpose of this section is. Maybe you could just follow the previous pattern?
00:50:656 - how come you only use two lanes here?
01:36:021 - it's probably best not to repeat this pattern so many times here.
http://puu.sh/uxc2l.png02:29:345 (149345|3) - this should be on 1/1 snap.
02:33:278 (153278|0) - same
02:51:387 (171387|0) - 03:01:631 (181631|3) - these LNs are inconsistent in length with the other LNs. You should end them on the 1/1 snap
02:57:058 (177058|0) - should be on 1/1 snap
03:14:710 (194710|0,194802|1) - you need to make these snaps consistent with HD, MX, and SC ;n;
NM00:36:021 - there should probably be two note here, it's a very strong beat. Or at least one ;n;
00:36:387 - 00:42:241 - 00:51:753 - 00:54:680 - 01:10:046 - 02:40:778 - double for snare?
00:56:875 - 01:53:948 - 02:35:656 - suggest double to follow the pattern
01:52:119 - again, double for the crash (also to follow the pattern)
02:02:729 - this double is inconsistent with the rest of the section, should be a single
02:03:826 - what an omission! I suggest adding a LN
02:11:387 (131387|1) - should be on 1/4 snap
02:23:491 (143491|0,143674|2,143857|0,144040|2) - this rhythm is ill-advised; the strong beats are on the 1/2 snap. I might suggest something like this
http://puu.sh/uxdis.jpg (remember to mind the hitsounds)
02:34:009 - missing note? also 02:33:826 - should be a double to follow the pattern and for the crash
02:42:424 - missing note again
03:00:534 - 03:01:265 - 03:02:363 - 03:02:729 - these doubles just seem to be randomly placed. you should either use a regular pattern or only use singles until 03:03:095 -
03:14:802 (194802|2,194848|1) - make consistent with HD, MX, and SC pls
the crashes in this diff are inconsistent. some of them are doubles and some of them are singles. I would really appreciate if you tried to make them more consistent ;n;
HD00:12:973 -00:15:899 - 00:22:119 - these should be double for consistency
00:19:924 - same, but you might also want to move 00:20:107 (20107|3) - to the first lane to avoid a three-note jack
00:21:021 - 00:21:387 - no reason for triples, i think. May be better to stick with doubles.
00:27:241 - add a single note for consistency with the other chords in the section
00:44:070 (44070|2,44253|3) - these should both be doubles for the kicks
01:09:589 - it's a bit weird that there's no notes here. Can I suggest this?
http://puu.sh/uxeg8.jpg (make sure to replace hitsounds)
01:11:143 - this should be a double (for the kick), not 01:11:326 -
01:21:021 - 1/4 doesn't quite fit here. I suggest using one LN instead ;n;
01:25:412 - 01:27:607 - 01:28:339 - possibly triples for consistency with earlier triples?
01:29:070 - missing note i believe
01:30:534 - double for snare? also might want to add a note at 01:30:442 -
02:03:735 - I'm not sure if this jack is appropriate for this level. It seems to be the only 1/4 jack in the whole map ;n;
02:06:753 - to 02:08:582 - looks a bit strange to me that the fourth lane is empty for so long
02:23:765 - I think the double should be here for the snare, not at 02:23:674 -
03:00:899 - should be a double to follow the pattern, i think
03:02:637 - 03:08:674 - 03:12:607 - 03:13:979 - might be better to add notes here for the drums
puxtu's MXno suggestions
Crono's SC00:02:546 - missing note on guitar (compare with 00:08:399 -)
00:33:095 - missing LN for guitar?
00:36:021 - suggest changing to short LN on third lane for electric guitar
01:10:046 - 01:15:899 - add notes for snare?
01:42:241 - I think this should just be a double 'cus no snare