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theres not really stuff i can do.. as just giving you some advices uwu~~
General
At first, you need an easy diff for this
In a 3 diff spread you need at least 1 diff beeing beyond 2*
Also you should really watch pishifat's mapping 'tutorials' if you didnt. they really are good to give you advices
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8F ... GGoLIrQtOx
Also! If you have some time you really should read the osu!wiki about mapping
Kay then lets get into it
Normal
https://nyu.s-ul.eu/d852WmGK You should really try mapping in the whole playfield, it gets really boring if its just the same thing over and over again
00:00:885 (1,2,3,1) - For those things, you should do something like this https://nyu.s-ul.eu/z1WhpyUr It looks really good and is easily playable for normal players
00:01:990 (3,2) - You should try to stack those. If you dont know what i mean, 00:03:094 (2) - Put under the beginning of 00:01:990 (3) -
00:03:830 - For this section here, i really suggest you to not only map the guitar sounds. You should also map the vocals since they have a really big impact here!
00:05:671 (2,3) - Here, you overlapped the notes and to be honest.. It looks really bad. You did this serveral times in the map, try to not do this anymore since its really.. meh ;;;
00:13:033 (2,3,1,2,3) - Why is this here so cramped? It shoudnt be like this, it looks bad and is really weird to play
00:24:996 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Why are you stacking so much? It doesnt really makes sense.. You should only stack something if the music supports it or it just looks good uwu
00:38:984 (2,1,2,3,4) - this isnt really appropriate for a normal. its too hard. Try mapping it like you did with the sounds in the beginning!
The next section uses really much types of slidershapes..
Why dont you take 2 or 3 of them and try to use them properly instead of making everytime a new one?
Sooo.. the other stuff is pretty much the same.
Try to do the stuff i told you, look at some ranked/qualified maps to get some inspiration and dont give up. c:
Good luck!
General
At first, you need an easy diff for this
In a 3 diff spread you need at least 1 diff beeing beyond 2*
Also you should really watch pishifat's mapping 'tutorials' if you didnt. they really are good to give you advices
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8F ... GGoLIrQtOx
Also! If you have some time you really should read the osu!wiki about mapping
Kay then lets get into it
Normal
https://nyu.s-ul.eu/d852WmGK You should really try mapping in the whole playfield, it gets really boring if its just the same thing over and over again
00:00:885 (1,2,3,1) - For those things, you should do something like this https://nyu.s-ul.eu/z1WhpyUr It looks really good and is easily playable for normal players
00:01:990 (3,2) - You should try to stack those. If you dont know what i mean, 00:03:094 (2) - Put under the beginning of 00:01:990 (3) -
00:03:830 - For this section here, i really suggest you to not only map the guitar sounds. You should also map the vocals since they have a really big impact here!
00:05:671 (2,3) - Here, you overlapped the notes and to be honest.. It looks really bad. You did this serveral times in the map, try to not do this anymore since its really.. meh ;;;
00:13:033 (2,3,1,2,3) - Why is this here so cramped? It shoudnt be like this, it looks bad and is really weird to play
00:24:996 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Why are you stacking so much? It doesnt really makes sense.. You should only stack something if the music supports it or it just looks good uwu
00:38:984 (2,1,2,3,4) - this isnt really appropriate for a normal. its too hard. Try mapping it like you did with the sounds in the beginning!
The next section uses really much types of slidershapes..
Why dont you take 2 or 3 of them and try to use them properly instead of making everytime a new one?
Sooo.. the other stuff is pretty much the same.
Try to do the stuff i told you, look at some ranked/qualified maps to get some inspiration and dont give up. c:
Good luck!
Topic Starter
nyu - wrote:
theres not really stuff i can do.. as just giving you some advices uwu~~
General
At first, you need an easy diff for this
In a 3 diff spread you need at least 1 diff beeing beyond 2*
Also you should really watch pishifat's mapping 'tutorials' if you didnt. they really are good to give you advices
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8F ... GGoLIrQtOx
Also! If you have some time you really should read the osu!wiki about mapping
Kay then lets get into it
Normal
https://nyu.s-ul.eu/d852WmGK You should really try mapping in the whole playfield, it gets really boring if its just the same thing over and over again
00:00:885 (1,2,3,1) - For those things, you should do something like this https://nyu.s-ul.eu/z1WhpyUr It looks really good and is easily playable for normal players
00:01:990 (3,2) - You should try to stack those. If you dont know what i mean, 00:03:094 (2) - Put under the beginning of 00:01:990 (3) -
00:03:830 - For this section here, i really suggest you to not only map the guitar sounds. You should also map the vocals since they have a really big impact here!
00:05:671 (2,3) - Here, you overlapped the notes and to be honest.. It looks really bad. You did this serveral times in the map, try to not do this anymore since its really.. meh ;;;
00:13:033 (2,3,1,2,3) - Why is this here so cramped? It shoudnt be like this, it looks bad and is really weird to play
00:24:996 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Why are you stacking so much? It doesnt really makes sense.. You should only stack something if the music supports it or it just looks good uwu
00:38:984 (2,1,2,3,4) - this isnt really appropriate for a normal. its too hard. Try mapping it like you did with the sounds in the beginning!
The next section uses really much types of slidershapes..
Why dont you take 2 or 3 of them and try to use them properly instead of making everytime a new one?
Sooo.. the other stuff is pretty much the same.
Try to do the stuff i told you, look at some ranked/qualified maps to get some inspiration and dont give up. c:
Good luck!
thank you for your modding !!
thanks the video !
Hi Hi ! NM from #modrequest ! :3
Overall, you need to improve on using the playfield and how objects relate to each other, if you're new to mapping, I recommend Pishifat's video on mapping to learn the basics of mapping (is that ok to do ad without having permision ? Anyway)
There's a lot of what I said in different part of the map so you should check them out !
Good Luck with mapping and have a Nice Day ! :3
General
- You should use the whole playfield for mapping, don't hesitate to use and go into the corners because from this point we can see that you restrain to much on the middle of the playfield
- Remove "Erepyon Ono Erena" from the tags, it's already in the artist and title
- If you want to rank this, you need to do a Hard diff (between 2.25 and 3.75*)
- Remove "Erepyon Ono Erena" from the tags, it's already in the artist and title
- If you want to rank this, you need to do a Hard diff (between 2.25 and 3.75*)
Hard
- The star rating is 4.65 which considered an Insane diff, you should rename this diff "Insane"
- 00:05:303 (1,3) - Try to avoid overlaps between sliders and circles like that, it doesn't look very well
- 00:21:683 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I found the circles a bit to close to each other
- 00:33:278 (1) - That slider looks weird
- 00:39:352 (2) - ^ (there are other like that to in the map)
- 00:53:708 - There is a vocal here, you should not ignore it
- 01:03:738 (1) - There are some vocals after combo 5 on the white 01:03:830 and red 01:04:014 tics and the instrument on the big white tic just after, you should map those so it doesn't feel like the song is doing nothing in this part
- 01:14:505 (1,2,3) - Wide angle jump like this one are unconfortable to play, also the song doesn't support such jumps here
- 01:44:597 (5) - The vocal here is actually on the red tic 01:44:505 here, replace that circle
- 02:34:751 - Put a kai time here until 02:58:125
- 00:05:303 (1,3) - Try to avoid overlaps between sliders and circles like that, it doesn't look very well
- 00:21:683 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I found the circles a bit to close to each other
- 00:33:278 (1) - That slider looks weird
- 00:39:352 (2) - ^ (there are other like that to in the map)
- 00:53:708 - There is a vocal here, you should not ignore it
- 01:03:738 (1) - There are some vocals after combo 5 on the white 01:03:830 and red 01:04:014 tics and the instrument on the big white tic just after, you should map those so it doesn't feel like the song is doing nothing in this part
- 01:14:505 (1,2,3) - Wide angle jump like this one are unconfortable to play, also the song doesn't support such jumps here
- 01:44:597 (5) - The vocal here is actually on the red tic 01:44:505 here, replace that circle
- 02:34:751 - Put a kai time here until 02:58:125
Normal
- 00:24:444 (1,2,3,4) - Space those little apart
- 01:16:162 (1) - Reverse slider with 4 tics a pretty unpredictable for a new player, especially if it's the first time you use this reverse slider in the map, maybe make to separate sliders
- 01:50:027 (3,4,5) - Weird overlap
- 02:33:646 (1) - Spinner a little bit to short for new players
- 02:52:051 - Vocal here
- 01:16:162 (1) - Reverse slider with 4 tics a pretty unpredictable for a new player, especially if it's the first time you use this reverse slider in the map, maybe make to separate sliders
- 01:50:027 (3,4,5) - Weird overlap
- 02:33:646 (1) - Spinner a little bit to short for new players
- 02:52:051 - Vocal here
Easy
- 00:05:303 (1,1) - ugly overlap
- I see that this one is not finish lul
- I see that this one is not finish lul
Overall, you need to improve on using the playfield and how objects relate to each other, if you're new to mapping, I recommend Pishifat's video on mapping to learn the basics of mapping (is that ok to do ad without having permision ? Anyway)
There's a lot of what I said in different part of the map so you should check them out !
Good Luck with mapping and have a Nice Day ! :3
Topic Starter
Thank you for modding!!Toshino Kyoko wrote:
Hi Hi ! NM from #modrequest ! :3General- You should use the whole playfield for mapping, don't hesitate to use and go into the corners because from this point we can see that you restrain to much on the middle of the playfield
- Remove "Erepyon Ono Erena" from the tags, it's already in the artist and title
- If you want to rank this, you need to do a Hard diff (between 2.25 and 3.75*)Hard- The star rating is 4.65 which considered an Insane diff, you should rename this diff "Insane"
- 00:05:303 (1,3) - Try to avoid overlaps between sliders and circles like that, it doesn't look very well
- 00:21:683 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I found the circles a bit to close to each other
- 00:33:278 (1) - That slider looks weird
- 00:39:352 (2) - ^ (there are other like that to in the map)
- 00:53:708 - There is a vocal here, you should not ignore it
- 01:03:738 (1) - There are some vocals after combo 5 on the white 01:03:830 and red 01:04:014 tics and the instrument on the big white tic just after, you should map those so it doesn't feel like the song is doing nothing in this part
- 01:14:505 (1,2,3) - Wide angle jump like this one are unconfortable to play, also the song doesn't support such jumps here
- 01:44:597 (5) - The vocal here is actually on the red tic 01:44:505 here, replace that circle
- 02:34:751 - Put a kai time here until 02:58:125Normal- 00:24:444 (1,2,3,4) - Space those little apart
- 01:16:162 (1) - Reverse slider with 4 tics a pretty unpredictable for a new player, especially if it's the first time you use this reverse slider in the map, maybe make to separate sliders
- 01:50:027 (3,4,5) - Weird overlap
- 02:33:646 (1) - Spinner a little bit to short for new players
- 02:52:051 - Vocal hereEasy- 00:05:303 (1,1) - ugly overlap
- I see that this one is not finish lul
Overall, you need to improve on using the playfield and how objects relate to each other, if you're new to mapping, I recommend Pishifat's video on mapping to learn the basics of mapping (is that ok to do ad without having permision ? Anyway)
There's a lot of what I said in different part of the map so you should check them out !
Good Luck with mapping and have a Nice Day ! :3
You gave me some advice, and it helped me a lot.
