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Silent Siren - Koi Yuki

posted 2016-11-19T05:15:48+00:00

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small boob

36 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

small boob 2016-11-19T05:15:48+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Last edited by small boob 2017-01-05T05:21:13+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

Murmur twins

73 posts

Joined December 2015

Murmur twins 2016-12-24T15:20:21+00:00

Wow this song is so touching that I nearly forgot to check the notes after my first listening

The flow goes pretty natural, though, some tiny flaws exist:

00:10:823 (6) - 00:13:005 (10) - Consider a new combo here?
00:10:686 (5) - Try to make DS consistent with 4 and 6, and this requires slight adjustment;
00:14:295 (12) - Hmm, this slider confuses me. AIMod keeps reminding that the end of this slider is not snapped, but that doesn't matter much during my testing, so I guess maybe there is deviation in timing; Also, I try to remake the slider like this, but the error still exists;

01:02:847 (1) - Better replace it with a slider + a note;
01:40:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks cool, but the flow seems a bit weird here;
01:45:737 (5,1) - Overlap these two notes?
02:19:018 (1,2) - Maybe a stream will be better?
02:41:518 (6) - Move it to x:148 y:120?
03:08:472 (1,2) - 03:12:222 (1,2) - These two parts should emphasize triples in the rhythm, so consider adding
triples instead;
03:27:222 (2) - Start new combo here;
04:58:862 (1,2,3) - Making DS consistent here;

Again, a great song fit for X-mas~ I like it~

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-12-24T21:00:26+00:00

siwu320 wrote:
Wow this song is so touching that I nearly forgot to check the notes after my first listening The flow goes pretty natural, though, some tiny flaws exist:

01:02:847 (1) - Better replace it with a slider + a note; non bpm is really low + ar so readability wont be too big of a problem. it flows nice too
01:45:737 (5,1) - Overlap these two notes? nope slowly going downwards
02:19:018 (1,2) - Maybe a stream will be better? im not really a stream person so i try to avoid it for aesthetics and such ;; personal preference

Again, a great song fit for X-mas~ I like it~

thanks although no change ~
rest is yours @ assimb

small boob

36 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

small boob 2016-12-24T22:59:15+00:00

siwu320 wrote:
00:10:823 (6) - 00:13:005 (10) - Consider a new combo here?

fixed!

siwu320 wrote:
00:10:686 (5) - Try to make DS consistent with 4 and 6, and this requires slight adjustment;

moved the two notes closer to the slider

siwu320 wrote:
01:40:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks cool, but the flow seems a bit weird here;

the switch from circular flow to back and forth jumps flow is made to emphasize each of the singer's syllables

siwu320 wrote:
01:45:737 (5,1) - Overlap these two notes?

fixed!

siwu320 wrote:
02:41:518 (6) - Move it to x:148 y:120?

changed the pattern a bit instead

siwu320 wrote:
03:08:472 (1,2) - 03:12:222 (1,2) - These two parts should emphasize triples in the rhythm, so consider adding
triples instead;

this is not mapped to the vocals and i personally think that the drums should be emphasized instead

siwu320 wrote:
03:27:222 (2) - Start new combo here;
04:58:862 (1,2,3) - Making DS consistent here;

fixed both

thank you for the mod!

Parachute

317 posts

Joined October 2011

Parachute 2016-12-28T04:03:03+00:00

Hey

so heres my mod from M4M

SPOILER

General:
First of all: offset is wrong, the first 2 red points are ~ 30 late imo, you should definitely check that again.
Offset at 00:17:847 - is about 17858, so maybe work around that since it appears to be wrong for the whole map...

For the map: ( sorry if its not in chronological order sometimes :c )
00:12:732 (4) - This should be around x:220 y:140 for better flow
00:21:597 (1,2,3) - I dont understand why you chose this weird spacing here.
Doesnt really fit to the music at all imo. If you wanna make a jump here make a jump from 1 to 2 and not from 2 to 3
00:45:972 - for this and the next 15 seconds you literally use the same beat placement o.o
Tbh I kinda think this is boring and you should at least place beats for the singing too
Also here 01:02:847 (1) - idk why you dont keep mapping her singing just like 01:00:972 (1) -
I mean from 01:06:597 (1) - you didnt use this too so idk.. i kinda like 01:06:597 (1) - these things much more.
01:12:925 (4,6) - These 2 sliders shouldnt touch, looks bad
01:16:909 (3) - ctrl+h and back to where it was for better flow
01:17:847 (1) - I dont understand what you mapped here? You could really do something better by mapping her singing again
01:20:659 (4) - Blanket could be better
01:23:237 (4) - I would stack this under the end of 01:22:065 (2) - or 01:24:643 (2) - it will have better flow and i dont think the jump fits there much because theres nothing really happening music-wise
01:26:518 (8) - Ctrl + g here would be better flow imo
01:34:722 (1) - Here i can kinda understand this slider, even though id still find it better to let it end on the red tick and map her singing instead
01:49:839 - Here i dont understand the beats again. you make the same until 01:58:628 - and then you start mapping the voice again for no reason.. why dont you just map her voice from the beginning instead to make it more interesting with different and more obvious beat placement

02:19:370 (2) - This seems like a reaaally big jump for no big reason besides the chorus starting... i dont think it should be that much.
2:33:198 (2) - This jump, imo, doesnt really fit at all and is really sudden. you dont expect this to be mapped on the blue tick so i dont really thing its a good idea to make a jump from 1 to 2
02:56:050 (6) - This should be ~ x:264 y:236 for better flow
02:57:222 (1) - Also this, rotated by 45° and brought back to where it was it would be better flow.
02:46:909 (2) - Id suggest to put this slider on the 2 red ticks and then adding a circle on where the end of this slider previously was. theres like a drum sound at 02:46:675 - But its also okay how it is atm
03:42:925 (2) - You can barely see that this is a slider, and for a 3,42* 5 minutes map i would really recommend changing this.
03:47:847 (1) - Here again i dont know why you dont map her singing and instead you just throw in a slider.. doesnt really fit to the music imo.
04:27:222 (9) - Make this so end and beginning dont overlap. It would look much better
02:44:565 (3,5) - Dont make these touch
02:51:362 - Idk why no circle here... shes singing on this beat so i think it would really fit to make a circle here thats different to the next ones.
04:15:972 (1) - this blanket could be muuuuch better by just dragging the slider a bit to the left

Okay so now.. hitsounding.. I would really recommend you adding whistles to the map. Right now it feels like theres no hitsounds besides some claps at some parts which seem more random imo since they only appear at some parts and at some they are just not existant.
00:02:096 (1) - here i would do whistle on every big white tick until 00:11:914 (3) - , here the end of the slider instead of the next big white tick.
00:13:972 (2) - Whistle
00:14:969 (4) - Whistle at the end of the slider
00:17:847 - From here on i would do a whistle on every second red tick every new measure
00:29:097 - Here i would do one at both 3's, and here if you want to: 00:30:972 (1) - although you wont hear this one.
00:30:972 - So from here i would do a whistle on every 3rd white tick each measure until 00:45:972 - here.. since you started mapping different here.
From this point i dont really understand. these "hitsounds" you used are not even noteable since its just the music you hear anyways. Id consider changing hitsounds into something more appealing and not just making it seem like theres nothing. I gave you a few examples and i really think you should use the soft clap more overall.
In these kiai sections you can really do good things with the whistle. for example you can start 01:15:972 (1) - Whistle at the beginning of this and then every second white tick or 01:16:675 (2) - here and then every second red tick.
01:29:097 (1,1) - Random whistles... idk why you used them ONLY here ^^
04:38:472 (1,2,3,4) - Did you start using whistles here for 4 sliders? lol... kinda random.. you should do more whistles and do them as i told you to, try to do some over the whole map yourself.

Then the last thing i noticed are ncs, which are kinda random sometimes
00:27:222 (5) - Until here you made nc every new measure, heres no nc?
00:40:347 (5,6,1,2,3) - Idk why no nc at the 5 but at the 1 instead?
00:44:097 (5) - nc
00:53:472 (5) - Why no nc when you did it in the previous parts just before this too and they are exactly the same?
00:55:347 (9) - ^
00:56:753 (1) - then here? why a nc here and not at 00:57:222 (3) -
00:58:628 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:862 (6) - nc maybe
01:27:222 (9) - nc
01:41:753 (1,2,3) - should do nc on 3 instead of the 1
01:53:003 (3,4,5) - Here again why no nc on 5?
01:54:878 (1,2,3) - also this? why nc at 1 and not 3
01:59:097 (5) - nc
02:10:347 (3) - ^
02:25:347 (6) - ^
02:26:753 (1,2,3) - Why nc at 1 and not 3?
02:29:097 (7) - nc
02:38:472 (5) - ^
02:53:589 - until 03:02:847 - , these ncs are all really random. you should redo them and do one every new measure.
03:28:159 (1,2,3) - Again why nc at 1 and not 3?
03:38:472 (5) - nc
03:40:347 (9) - ^
03:44:097 (5) - ^
03:49:722 (2) - ^
04:10:347 (5) - ^
04:14:097 (7) - ^
04:27:222 (9) - ^
04:44:097 (6) - ^
04:58:862 (1,2,3) - Why at 1 and not 3 again?

Well. Thats it, hope its helpful

gl with the map

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-12-28T06:11:42+00:00

YukiZura- wrote:
from mod queue - Bye Bye 2016
sorry late lolz

Snowfall
00:00:732 (1,2) - blanket this? i like my aesthetic better + it flows better ;;
00:47:378 - overlap this with 00:47:847 - this slider end (to make it look more nice and tidy ) its just my style to do the overlap thing sorry
example
01:34:487 - wanna move this a little bit down ✓
so that it will look like this
02:16:909 (3,4) - blanket this? not destroying my overlaps
05:04:751 (1,2) - full blanket this would be nicer music isnt so strong here so i would keep it not so curved

goodluck ^^

thank you !

BounceBabe wrote:
🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓

Hard

01:27:222 (9,10,11) - try to stack things like that perfectly since they are supposed to i think i fixed from previous mod uwu

02:32:847 (1,2) - 02:33:784 (3,4) - 2 different spacing for the same pattern doesnt work. 1/4 spacing should be consistent. ✓

thank ~

for assim

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220,164,282917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,282,283151,2,0,L|285:270,1,82.5
140,348,283620,2,0,L|58:359,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,364,283971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,368,284089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,256,284323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,348,284557,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,176,284792,2,0,L|140:164,2,41.25,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
304,120,285260,2,0,L|344:127,2,41.25,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
312,268,285729,1,0,1:0:0:0:
332,260,285846,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,253,285964,6,0,B|383:237|383:237|241:221,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,332,286667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,164,286901,2,0,B|230:143,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,245,287604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,120,287839,6,0,P|175:67|169:31,1,82.5
93,195,288307,2,0,P|80:248|86:284,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,120,288776,2,0,P|85:105|2:146,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,235,289479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,207,289714,6,8,B|89:196|89:196|121:219,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,313,290417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,138,290651,2,0,B|143:117,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,207,291354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,138,291589,6,0,P|339:78|333:34,1,82.5
396,207,292057,2,0,P|382:267|388:311,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,146,292526,2,0,P|411:117|307:151,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,293229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,293464,6,0,B|376:360|376:360|480:368,2,123.75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,294401,2,0,B|272:211|272:211|177:220,2,123.75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,253,295339,2,0,P|487:308|469:366,2,123.75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,118,296276,2,0,P|273:173|291:231,2,123.75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,36,297213,6,0,P|308:0|224:20,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,297917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,118,298151,2,0,B|304:80|304:80|168:108,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,168,298854,5,0,3:0:0:0:
64,196,298971,1,0,3:0:0:0:
56,224,299089,2,0,L|32:312,1,82.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,236,299557,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,248,299792,1,0,1:0:0:0:
224,248,299909,1,0,1:0:0:0:
224,248,300026,1,0,1:0:0:0:
327,263,300260,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,284,300377,1,0,1:0:0:0:
294,302,300494,1,0,1:0:0:0:
255,304,300611,1,0,1:0:0:0:
217,307,300728,1,0,1:0:0:0:
178,309,300845,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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140,168,303562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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246,314,306633,6,0,L|243:226,1,66
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209,149,307578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,35,307814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,117,308050,2,0,P|452:116|476:108,1,66

assimb's parts :
notes
00:12:732 (4) - This should be around x:220 y:140 for better flow
00:45:972 - for this and the next 15 seconds you literally use the same beat placement o.omusic calls for it as this is the most prominent beat imo. i dont really want to be inconsistent with the rhythm too & overmap it too (this applies to both of us as well)
01:12:925 (4,6) - These 2 sliders shouldnt touch, looks bad
01:26:518 (8) - Ctrl + g here would be better flow imo
01:49:839 - Here i dont understand the beats again. you make the same until 01:58:628 - and then you start mapping the voice again for no reason.. why dont you just map her voice from the beginning instead to make it more interesting with different and more obvious beat placement same thing as last time, sorry i follow more prominent beats than the vocals :c
02:56:050 (6) - This should be ~ x:264 y:236 for better flow
02:57:222 (1) - Also this, rotated by 45° and brought back to where it was it would be better flow.
03:42:925 (2) - You can barely see that this is a slider, and for a 3,42* 5 minutes map i would really recommend changing this.
04:27:222 (9) - Make this so end and beginning dont overlap. It would look much better
02:44:565 (3,5) - Dont make these touch

Okay so now.. hitsounding.. I would really recommend you adding whistles to the map. Right now it feels like theres no hitsounds besides some claps at some parts which seem more random imo since they only appear at some parts and at some they are just not existant.
00:02:096 (1) - here i would do whistle on every big white tick until 00:11:914 (3) - , here the end of the slider instead of the next big white tick.
00:13:972 (2) - Whistle
00:14:969 (4) - Whistle at the end of the slider
00:17:847 - From here on i would do a whistle on every second red tick every new measure
00:29:097 - Here i would do one at both 3's, and here if you want to: 00:30:972 (1) - although you wont hear this one.
00:30:972 - So from here i would do a whistle on every 3rd white tick each measure until 00:45:972 - here.. since you started mapping different here.
From this point i dont really understand. these "hitsounds" you used are not even noteable since its just the music you hear anyways. Id consider changing hitsounds into something more appealing and not just making it seem like theres nothing. I gave you a few examples and i really think you should use the soft clap more overall.
In these kiai sections you can really do good things with the whistle. for example you can start 01:15:972 (1) - Whistle at the beginning of this and then every second white tick or 01:16:675 (2) - here and then every second red tick.
01:29:097 (1,1) - Random whistles... idk why you used them ONLY here ^^
04:38:472 (1,2,3,4) - Did you start using whistles here for 4 sliders? lol... kinda random.. you should do more whistles and do them as i told you to, try to do some over the whole map yourself.

combos
00:27:222 (5) - Until here you made nc every new measure, heres no nc?
00:40:347 (5,6,1,2,3) - Idk why no nc at the 5 but at the 1 instead?
00:44:097 (5) - nc
00:53:472 (5) - Why no nc when you did it in the previous parts just before this too and they are exactly the same?
00:55:347 (9) - ^
00:56:753 (1) - then here? why a nc here and not at 00:57:222 (3) -
00:58:628 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:862 (6) - nc maybe
01:27:222 (9) - nc
01:41:753 (1,2,3) - should do nc on 3 instead of the 1
01:53:003 (3,4,5) - Here again why no nc on 5?
01:54:878 (1,2,3) - also this? why nc at 1 and not 3
01:59:097 (5) - nc
02:10:347 (3) - ^
02:25:347 (6) - ^
02:26:753 (1,2,3) - Why nc at 1 and not 3?
02:29:097 (7) - nc
02:38:472 (5) - ^
02:53:589 - until 03:02:847 - , these ncs are all really random. you should redo them and do one every new measure.
03:28:159 (1,2,3) - Again why nc at 1 and not 3?
03:38:472 (5) - nc
03:40:347 (9) - ^
03:44:097 (5) - ^
04:10:347 (5) - ^
04:14:097 (7) - ^
04:27:222 (9) - ^
04:44:097 (6) - ^
04:58:862 (1,2,3) - Why at 1 and not 3 again?

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yukizura mod :
01:08:472 (1,3) - blanket this? ^^
02:08:472 - this slider is a bit funny lol

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bouncebabe mod :

02:00:268 (10) - hitburst is covering the reverse arrow up too much. why not create another triangle arrangement like 01:59:097 (5,6,7) -

02:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - after that curved 1/2 slider the diagonal flow plays rather uncomfortable. try placement like this http://puu.sh/t3vne/e0d8b471c1.jpg

00:53:472 (5) - missed a nc

00:55:347 (9,1) - nc swap for consistency same 00:57:222 (3,1) -

add nc after that 00:57:222 (3,3) -

01:11:987 (5) - jump doesnt quite fit here. tbh id remove the circle to fit the stop and go motion 00:45:972 (1,2,3,4) - and for build up. either way, the jump doesnt fit cus the sounds are not intense. try http://puu.sh/t3vy1/a255bc08e3.jpg

remove the decreasing sv 01:13:862 (6,7,8) - its not noticeable, guitar plays 3 identical strokes. spacing is also too clustered 01:12:691 (3,4) - so spaced them out

01:25:581 (5,9) - nc these, gets too long

01:30:034 (1) - redundant nc, remove

01:34:487 (4,1) - spacing change looks like an accident. doesnt musically match. use normal ds.

01:39:878 (5,6) - too clustered again compared to the other spacing

01:43:159 (5,6,7) - consistently spaced triangle would suit better, spacing changes like those look sloppy

02:25:347 (6) - nc and nc swap 02:26:753 (1,3) - consistency

02:29:097 (7) - 02:38:472 (5) - nc

Last edited by Shira 2016-12-29T03:00:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

YukiZura-

762 posts

Joined October 2015

YukiZura- 2016-12-28T10:22:00+00:00

from mod queue - Bye Bye 2016
sorry late lolz

Snowfall
00:00:732 (1,2) - blanket this?
00:47:378 - overlap this with 00:47:847 - this slider end (to make it look more nice and tidy

)

example

01:08:472 (1,3) - blanket this? ^^
01:34:487 - wanna move this a little bit down

so that it will look like this

02:08:472 - this slider is a bit funny lol
02:16:909 (3,4) - blanket this?
05:04:751 (1,2) - full blanket this would be nicer

goodluck ^^

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2016-12-28T12:24:00+00:00

🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓

Hard

02:00:268 (10) - hitburst is covering the reverse arrow up too much. why not create another triangle arrangement like 01:59:097 (5,6,7) -

02:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - after that curved 1/2 slider the diagonal flow plays rather uncomfortable. try placement like this http://puu.sh/t3vne/e0d8b471c1.jpg

00:53:472 (5) - missed a nc

00:55:347 (9,1) - nc swap for consistency same 00:57:222 (3,1) -

add nc after that 00:57:222 (3,3) -

01:11:987 (5) - jump doesnt quite fit here. tbh id remove the circle to fit the stop and go motion 00:45:972 (1,2,3,4) - and for build up. either way, the jump doesnt fit cus the sounds are not intense. try http://puu.sh/t3vy1/a255bc08e3.jpg

remove the decreasing sv 01:13:862 (6,7,8) - its not noticeable, guitar plays 3 identical strokes. spacing is also too clustered 01:12:691 (3,4) - so spaced them out

01:25:581 (5,9) - nc these, gets too long

01:30:034 (1) - redundant nc, remove

01:27:222 (9,10,11) - try to stack things like that perfectly since they are supposed to

01:34:487 (4,1) - spacing change looks like an accident. doesnt musically match. use normal ds.

01:39:878 (5,6) - too clustered again compared to the other spacing

01:43:159 (5,6,7) - consistently spaced triangle would suit better, spacing changes like those look sloppy

02:25:347 (6) - nc and nc swap 02:26:753 (1,3) - consistency

02:29:097 (7) - 02:38:472 (5) - nc

02:32:847 (1,2) - 02:33:784 (3,4) - 2 different spacing for the same pattern doesnt work. 1/4 spacing should be consistent.

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-12-29T03:01:31+00:00

replied on previous post if didnt notice

small boob

36 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

small boob 2016-12-29T09:46:52+00:00

parachute's mod:
00:12:732 (4) - This should be around x:220 y:140 for better flow okey
00:45:972 - for this and the next 15 seconds you literally use the same beat placement o.o music calls for it as this is the most prominent beat imo. i dont really want to be inconsistent with the rhythm too & overmap it too the next 15 seconds are the same rhythm because of consistency in the map.
01:12:925 (4,6) - These 2 sliders shouldnt touch, looks bad fixed
01:26:518 (8) - Ctrl + g here would be better flow imo idk about that the flow changes and moving from 01:26:510 (8) - to 01:27:214 (9) - would be way harder and wouldnt fit the emphasis put on the clap of 01:26:510 (8) -
01:49:839 - Here i dont understand the beats again. you make the same until 01:58:628 - and then you start mapping the voice again for no reason.. why dont you just map her voice from the beginning instead to make it more interesting with different and more obvious beat placement same thing as last time, sorry i follow more prominent beats than the vocals :c fixed the awkward change of mapping to vocals
02:56:050 (6) - This should be ~ x:264 y:236 for better flow fixedd
02:57:222 (1) - Also this, rotated by 45° and brought back to where it was it would be better flow. the flow is still correct placed like this moreover the aesthetic of 02:58:151 (3) - would be ruined if rotated
03:42:925 (2) - You can barely see that this is a slider, and for a 3,42* 5 minutes map i would really recommend changing this. overlapped the slider heads instead of the slider tails

Okay so now.. hitsounding.. I would really recommend you adding whistles to the map. Right now it feels like theres no hitsounds besides some claps at some parts which seem more random imo since they only appear at some parts and at some they are just not existant. added a lot more whistles
00:02:096 (1) - here i would do whistle on every big white tick very good idea until 00:11:914 (3) - , here the end of the slider instead of the next big white tick. i dont understand what sound is emphasized there id rather stay with every big white tick as it sounds better
00:13:972 (2) - Whistle ^
00:14:969 (4) - Whistle at the end of the slider done~
00:17:847 - From here on i would do a whistle on every second red tick every new measure done
00:29:097 - Here i would do one at both 3's, and here if you want to: 00:30:972 (1) - although you wont hear this one. done
00:30:972 - So from here i would do a whistle on every 3rd white tick each measure until 00:45:972 - here.. since you started mapping different here. done
From this point i dont really understand. these "hitsounds" you used are not even noteable since its just the music you hear anyways. Id consider changing hitsounds into something more appealing and not just making it seem like theres nothing. I gave you a few examples and i really think you should use the soft clap more overall. removed custom hitsound
In these kiai sections you can really do good things with the whistle. for example you can start 01:15:972 (1) - Whistle at the beginning of this and then every second white tick or 01:16:675 (2) - here and then every second red tick. kept it simple by putting whistle every white tick
01:29:097 (1,1) - Random whistles... idk why you used them ONLY here ^^ not random anymore
04:38:472 (1,2,3,4) - Did you start using whistles here for 4 sliders? lol... kinda random.. you should do more whistles and do them as i told you to, try to do some over the whole map yourself. ^

fixed all ncs lol

yukizura's mod

01:08:472 (1,3) - blanket this? ^^ hell yeah
02:08:472 - this slider is a bit funny lol u rite fixed

bouncebabe's mod

02:00:268 (10) - hitburst is covering the reverse arrow up too much. why not create another triangle arrangement like 01:59:097 (5,6,7) - changed the pattern's rhythm so the reverse doesnt exist anymore :C

02:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - after that curved 1/2 slider the diagonal flow plays rather uncomfortable. try placement like this http://puu.sh/t3vne/e0d8b471c1.jpg fixedd

00:53:472 (5) - missed a nc fixed

00:55:347 (9,1) - nc swap for consistency same 00:57:222 (3,1) - fixd

add nc after that 00:57:222 (3,3) - yea no i fixed all ncs

01:11:987 (5) - jump doesnt quite fit here. tbh id remove the circle to fit the stop and go motion 00:45:972 (1,2,3,4) - and for build up. either way, the jump doesnt fit cus the sounds are not intense. try http://puu.sh/t3vy1/a255bc08e3.jpg changed the first three jumps to a reverse as the sounds are not that prominent

remove the decreasing sv 01:13:862 (6,7,8) - its not noticeable, guitar plays 3 identical strokes. done~

spacing is also too clustered 01:12:691 (3,4) - so spaced them out fixed

01:25:581 (5,9) - nc these, gets too long

01:30:034 (1) - redundant nc, remove fixed both

01:34:487 (4,1) - spacing change looks like an accident. doesnt musically match. use normal ds. fixed

01:39:878 (5,6) - too clustered again compared to the other spacing fixed

01:43:159 (5,6,7) - consistently spaced triangle would suit better, spacing changes like those look sloppy fixed hopefully it looks better now

02:25:347 (6) - nc and nc swap 02:26:753 (1,3) - consistency fixed

thank you for modding!

micchi_chi

764 posts

Joined July 2013

micchi_chi 2016-12-29T10:05:16+00:00

Hello, late M4M from my modding Q~

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Snowfall]

SPOILER

Honestly the first part seems kinda off. I mean the offset is kinda late. Try to listen at 25% and maybe use earphone or headphone if you have any. It would help you hear better. And I don't think the first red line is needed. You only need one at the big beat here 00:02:069 but if you want to map the part before that, move the offset 4 beats earlier. Try offset -102, that should work much better. Well this is pretty big problem tbh .-. I'll mod the next things according to your current timing so if you do apply this, you might find the selection is kinda off, hope you can comprehend.
I think the hitsound volume at this first part is also kinda too high... Maybe try to lower it to 30% or something.
00:11:368 (2,3) - Maybe you could try to blanket (2)'s body with (3) to make it looks neater http://puu.sh/t4u5k/cdac1ec32f.jpg
00:13:005 (1) - Actually I think the sound here 00:13:327 is bigger and worth more to be clicked. But since the bpm change here, maybe it would be pretty tricky to click properly... You can keep tho.
00:17:645 You don't map this part so I don't think this red line is necessary.
00:19:604 Just pointing out that there's a triplet sound here... Maybe if you want to keep the jump pattern, you could change this 00:19:253 (4) - into two circles and add triplets afterwards.
00:21:128 The sound here is too big to be ignored tbh. Better remove (2)'s reverse and add a note here and at red tick afterwards. Or use 1/2 slider here. Just make sure to map this sound.. Doing that would also create a nice lead up to 00:21:597 too so I don't see the reason not to do it.
00:22:300 (2,3) - The flow here is not really good... Try to look http://puu.sh/t4ulA/75b5e741f8.jpg You could make a nice circular flow if you move (3) to the right http://puu.sh/t4uoq/25e7a96a8b.jpg but I don't know about the next pattern tho .-. Maybe you could do something about it.
00:27:222 (5) - Keep your Nc-ing consistent, NC here. And you better move this further from 00:26:987 (4) - to emphasize the big crash sound at (5)'s head. Or maybe just add a circle here 00:27:104 to emphasize it without jump because there's also a triplet sound there. I encourage you to do the latter.
00:27:222 (5) - But actually, since there's a sound here 00:27:456 I think you better map this entire thing 00:27:222 (5,6) - with two 1/2 sliders instead. It will fit much better imo.
00:28:159 (7,8) - If you do so ^ you can try to change this into four circles to differentiate it from the previous rhythm because the guitar sound here is totally bigger. If you don't want too many notes, at least change only 00:28:628 (8) - to two circles to make the big drum sound here 00:28:862 clickable and thus emphasized better.
00:28:628 (8) - If you don't apply above ^, at least move this slider a bit upward or something because currently its tail is too close to (7)'s tail and it's kinda annoying too look at, lol.
00:28:862 I think you don't need finish hitsound here tho because there's no such sound as crash or its kind, only drum. Just using clap should be enough imo.
00:29:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Hemm. Sorry to ruin your nice pattern here but I think using dense circle jump pattern for weaker sound like this piano is just too much. It make the sound over emphasized and make the big sound like this 00:28:862 got less emphasized. I suggest to either delete the entire thing and make a short break or use simpler rhythm like 1/2 reverse sliders or something. I don't suggest doing it like this.
00:33:784 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Actually the repeating pattern here is wrong. If you want to make repeating pattern for that "fuwari fuwari" vocal, do it like this http://puu.sh/t4uPC/f97127a518.jpg where the sliders follow the long "ri" vocal here 00:34:487 and here 00:35:425 But I know you're trying to make the big sound at big white tick clickable to emphasize it. That way, better don't make repeating pattern.
00:33:315 (2) - Anyway, if you do change it into something I suggested above, this part 00:33:784 would be empty and instead of adding a circle, you better change 00:33:315 (2) - into 1/1 slider so the vocal sound don't get mixed with 00:34:018 (4,5) -
00:41:518 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well you did it like this here so you better change the previous part.
Wait, why your NC-ing becoming absurd... Keep it consistent at every big white tick. NC here 00:40:347 (5) - 00:44:097 (5) - And you better make some jump for emphasis here 00:43:393 (4,5) -.
00:45:737 VERY BIG SOUND. Map this please.
00:53:472 (5,9) - NC. And be consistent if you want to NC at big white tick or at the two circles before big white tick here 00:53:003 because it changed midway
01:00:034 - 01:00:268 map these two sounds!! The sound changes so it's alright to change rhythm. It would be a nice lead up to the change of verse here 01:00:972 (1) - too.
01:04:018 - 01:05:893 I'm just pointing out that these sounds actually very worth mapping. You still can keep tho.
01:10:815 (2) - I think you better NC here instead of here 01:10:112 (1) - because the sound at (2)'s head is noticeably bigger.
01:13:862 (6,7,8) - What is this.... Make the space between their tails even and forming a nice triangle. Pay attention to the previous note too because currently (6) is badly touching (4). Better move them. http://puu.sh/t4vmQ/88582660d7.jpg
01:25:112 (4,9) - Oh god, you don't NC in THREE big white ticks?! NC here. Keep it consistent.
01:27:222 (9,10) - Stack the tails properly, lol.
01:30:034 (1,1) - Why the stack tho, honestly. The sound here is very big 01:30:972 and the stack is totally ruin the emphasis. Unstack and make jump to emphasize (1)
01:36:362 (5,1) - Add more space too. Maybe you could stack (5) under 01:35:425 (2) - instead of over it http://puu.sh/t4vwL/d52d7b65e2.jpg it would make a little nice jump without ruining your pattern.
01:37:534 (3,1) - Touchinggg. Move (1) a bit to the left.
01:42:222 (3,8) - NC here and remove NC here 01:44:331 (1) - Adding more space here 01:41:987 (2,3) - too would be even better.
01:44:565 (2,3,1) - Maybe you could make their spaces even. Making a triangle shape would be nice too. The secret not to ruin the next pattern is by rotating the entire pattern here 01:45:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - a few degrees counter-clockwise. Try 9°
01:49:253 Map this.
Look at your NC.
01:59:097 (5,8) - Either just stack properly or unstack more. This one looks very grey...
01:59:800 (8,10) - Boom, reverse arrow is covered, it's unrankable http://puu.sh/t4vJy/993f11dfdd.png Move it. This pattern don't make a nice flow too tbh...
02:00:972 Map this
02:00:268 (10,1,2,3,4,5) - Map all of these the same way because the cover similar sound. Especially these two 02:00:268 (10,1,2,3) -
02:10:347 (3,4,5,6) - Why their spacing are very close here.... Try to make your spacing consistent for the entire map.
02:19:370 (2,1) - And it's very far here... Emphasize, okay, but even you don't usually make jump this far for emphasize...
02:26:284 (9,3) - Maybe just blanket them would work much better.
02:29:800 (8,9) - The previous pattern spacing are further than this yet they are following the same sound. Make the spacing the same as previous pattern.
02:41:753 (7,1) - Placing them this close would make a pretty pointy flow tbh. Maybe try to place (1) lower. It would make a better appearance too.
02:42:925 (3,5) - If you're trying to make symmetry, at least place 02:43:393 (4) - at the middle http://puu.sh/t4vXn/9b77bf790e.jpg
02:45:972 (1,2) - Is this supposed to be heart-shaped? .-. Don't really look like so tbh... Try to revise it
03:15:503 (4,1) - Add more space.
Wow... I hope it's alright to end this here... I'm tired ;-; Most problems I found are NCs, fix them, make them consistent. Then there's pretty much unmapped notes without reason, you better map them unless you have a reason for that. Then the last is about spacing, make them more constant for normal notes and don't be afraid to make jump for emphasize. Ah and you better consult some other mapper about that offset at the start. Anyway else, this map have potential.
One more, this is a collab right? Maybe you should add storyboard to show which part is whose. Don't ask me since I can't, lol. And I know it actually hard to make things consistent because of different mapping style and stuff, but it's a consequences at collab and you better bear with it since you decided to do one.

Good luck ^^

Shira

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Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-12-29T21:44:09+00:00

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Hello, late M4M from my modding Q~ ~

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Snowfall]
SPOILER
Honestly the first part seems kinda off. I mean the offset is kinda late. Try to listen at 25% and maybe use earphone or headphone if you have any. It would help you hear better. And I don't think the first red line is needed. You only need one at the big beat here 00:02:069 but if you want to map the part before that, move the offset 4 beats earlier. Try offset -102, that should work much better. Well this is pretty big problem tbh .-. I'll mod the next things according to your current timing so if you do apply this, you might find the selection is kinda off, hope you can comprehend. ✓ will definetly fix will come back once finish mod
I think the hitsound volume at this first part is also kinda too high... Maybe try to lower it to 30% or something. ✓
00:17:645 You don't map this part so I don't think this red line is necessary. ✓
00:19:604 Just pointing out that there's a triplet sound here... Maybe if you want to keep the jump pattern, you could change this 00:19:253 (4) - into two circles and add triplets afterwards. personally, im not a really big stream/triplet person so i usually dont map it unless its ridiculously noticeable which the part here isnt imo
00:21:128 The sound here is too big to be ignored tbh. Better remove (2)'s reverse and add a note here and at red tick afterwards. Or use 1/2 slider here. Just make sure to map this sound.. Doing that would also create a nice lead up to 00:21:597 too so I don't see the reason not to do it. non ive been following the guitar so i want to keep up my consistency with it + the guitar noise is more louder than the bg noise although some might disagree
00:22:300 (2,3) - The flow here is not really good... Try to look http://puu.sh/t4ulA/75b5e741f8.jpg You could make a nice circular flow if you move (3) to the right http://puu.sh/t4uoq/25e7a96a8b.jpg but I don't know about the next pattern tho .-. Maybe you could do something about it. for the aesthetics and such xD i dont really want to ruin the pattern as well since the flow problem isnt too noticeable in game
00:33:784 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Actually the repeating pattern here is wrong. If you want to make repeating pattern for that "fuwari fuwari" vocal, do it like this http://puu.sh/t4uPC/f97127a518.jpg where the sliders follow the long "ri" vocal here 00:34:487 and here 00:35:425 But I know you're trying to make the big sound at big white tick clickable to emphasize it. That way, better don't make repeating pattern. nah the beat on 00:34:714 - is too strong to be ignored so the rhythm would sound off
00:33:315 (2) - Anyway, if you do change it into something I suggested above, this part 00:33:784 would be empty and instead of adding a circle, you better change 00:33:315 (2) - into 1/1 slider so the vocal sound don't get mixed with 00:34:018 (4,5) - ~
00:45:737 VERY BIG SOUND. Map this please. wat.. the sound is barely noticeable
01:04:018 - 01:05:893 I'm just pointing out that these sounds actually very worth mapping. You still can keep tho. pretty calm part if you ask me so i dont want to overmap it too much
01:36:362 (5,1) - Add more space too. Maybe you could stack (5) under 01:35:425 (2) - instead of over it http://puu.sh/t4vwL/d52d7b65e2.jpg it would make a little nice jump without ruining your pattern. ✓
01:49:253 Map this. ✓
02:19:370 (2,1) - And it's very far here... Emphasize, okay, but even you don't usually make jump this far for emphasize... explained in previous mod but the bpm is really low so the notes isnt actually that hard to click
02:45:972 (1,2) - Is this supposed to be heart-shaped? .-. Don't really look like so tbh... Try to revise it ✓ totally is
Wow... I hope it's alright to end this here... I'm tired ;-; Most problems I found are NCs, fix them, make them consistent. Then there's pretty much unmapped notes without reason, you better map them unless you have a reason for that. Then the last is about spacing, make them more constant for normal notes and don't be afraid to make jump for emphasize. Ah and you better consult some other mapper about that offset at the start. Anyway else, this map have potential.
One more, this is a collab right? Maybe you should add storyboard to show which part is whose. Don't ask me since I can't, lol. And I know it actually hard to make things consistent because of different mapping style and stuff, but it's a consequences at collab and you better bear with it since you decided to do one. will try to find connections or just do it myself kek

Good luck ^^

thank you so much !

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assimb's parts :

00:11:368 (2,3) - Maybe you could try to blanket (2)'s body with (3) to make it looks neater http://puu.sh/t4u5k/cdac1ec32f.jpg
00:13:005 (1) - Actually I think the sound here 00:13:327 is bigger and worth more to be clicked. But since the bpm change here, maybe it would be pretty tricky to click properly... You can keep tho.
00:27:222 (5) - Keep your Nc-ing consistent, NC here. And you better move this further from 00:26:987 (4) - to emphasize the big crash sound at (5)'s head. Or maybe just add a circle here 00:27:104 to emphasize it without jump because there's also a triplet sound there. I encourage you to do the latter.
00:27:222 (5) - But actually, since there's a sound here 00:27:456 I think you better map this entire thing 00:27:222 (5,6) - with two 1/2 sliders instead. It will fit much better imo.
00:28:159 (7,8) - If you do so ^ you can try to change this into four circles to differentiate it from the previous rhythm because the guitar sound here is totally bigger. If you don't want too many notes, at least change only 00:28:628 (8) - to two circles to make the big drum sound here 00:28:862 clickable and thus emphasized better.
00:28:628 (8) - If you don't apply above ^, at least move this slider a bit upward or something because currently its tail is too close to (7)'s tail and it's kinda annoying too look at, lol.
00:28:862 I think you don't need finish hitsound here tho because there's no such sound as crash or its kind, only drum. Just using clap should be enough imo.
00:29:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Hemm. Sorry to ruin your nice pattern here but I think using dense circle jump pattern for weaker sound like this piano is just too much. It make the sound over emphasized and make the big sound like this 00:28:862 got less emphasized. I suggest to either delete the entire thing and make a short break or use simpler rhythm like 1/2 reverse sliders or something. I don't suggest doing it like this.
00:33:784 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Actually the repeating pattern here is wrong. If you want to make repeating pattern for that "fuwari fuwari" vocal, do it like this http://puu.sh/t4uPC/f97127a518.jpg where the sliders follow the long "ri" vocal here 00:34:487 and here 00:35:425 But I know you're trying to make the big sound at big white tick clickable to emphasize it. That way, better don't make repeating pattern. nah the beat on 00:34:714 - is too strong to be ignored so the rhythm would sound off
00:33:315 (2) - Anyway, if you do change it into something I suggested above, this part 00:33:784 would be empty and instead of adding a circle, you better change 00:33:315 (2) - into 1/1 slider so the vocal sound don't get mixed with 00:34:018 (4,5) - ~
00:41:518 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well you did it like this here so you better change the previous part. < this part is yours so if you need explanation then its ^
Wait, why your NC-ing becoming absurd... Keep it consistent at every big white tick. NC here 00:40:347 (5) - 00:44:097 (5) - And you better make some jump for emphasis here 00:43:393 (4,5) -.
00:53:472 (5,9) - NC. And be consistent if you want to NC at big white tick or at the two circles before big white tick here 00:53:003 because it changed midway
01:00:034 - 01:00:268 map these two sounds!! The sound changes so it's alright to change rhythm. It would be a nice lead up to the change of verse here 01:00:972 (1) - too.
01:10:815 (2) - I think you better NC here instead of here 01:10:112 (1) - because the sound at (2)'s head is noticeably bigger.
01:13:862 (6,7,8) - What is this.... Make the space between their tails even and forming a nice triangle. Pay attention to the previous note too because currently (6) is badly touching (4). Better move them. http://puu.sh/t4vmQ/88582660d7.jpg
01:25:112 (4,9) - Oh god, you don't NC in THREE big white ticks?! NC here. Keep it consistent.
01:27:222 (9,10) - Stack the tails properly, lol.
01:30:034 (1,1) - Why the stack tho, honestly. The sound here is very big 01:30:972 and the stack is totally ruin the emphasis. Unstack and make jump to emphasize (1) @assimb easier fix you just move 01:30:026 (1) - ex : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6927756
01:37:534 (3,1) - Touchinggg. Move (1) a bit to the left.
01:42:222 (3,8) - NC here and remove NC here 01:44:331 (1) - Adding more space here 01:41:987 (2,3) - too would be even better.
01:44:565 (2,3,1) - Maybe you could make their spaces even. Making a triangle shape would be nice too. The secret not to ruin the next pattern is by rotating the entire pattern here 01:45:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - a few degrees counter-clockwise. Try 9°
Look at your NC.
01:59:097 (5,8) - Either just stack properly or unstack more. This one looks very grey...
01:59:800 (8,10) - Boom, reverse arrow is covered, it's unrankable http://puu.sh/t4vJy/993f11dfdd.png Move it. This pattern don't make a nice flow too tbh...
02:00:972 Map this
02:00:268 (10,1,2,3,4,5) - Map all of these the same way because the cover similar sound. Especially these two 02:00:268 (10,1,2,3) -
02:10:347 (3,4,5,6) - Why their spacing are very close here.... Try to make your spacing consistent for the entire map.
02:26:284 (9,3) - Maybe just blanket them would work much better.
02:29:800 (8,9) - The previous pattern spacing are further than this yet they are following the same sound. Make the spacing the same as previous pattern.
02:41:753 (7,1) - Placing them this close would make a pretty pointy flow tbh. Maybe try to place (1) lower. It would make a better appearance too.
02:42:925 (3,5) - If you're trying to make symmetry, at least place 02:43:393 (4) - at the middle http://puu.sh/t4vXn/9b77bf790e.jpg
03:15:503 (4,1) - Add more space. can make it like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6927839

RevenKz

203 posts

Joined December 2014

RevenKz 2016-12-30T05:47:02+00:00

Lince's mod as he promised on discord:

This collab is actually good.jpg
General:
There are some unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap.wav
soft-hitclap2.wav.
Objects:
00:30:495 (1,2) - hmmm i dont get if you did the spacing different on purpose or not, but i think that it will looks more clear if you use overlaps, something like this (or similar) is what i say... If you understand the pic, its basically doing triangles adding spacing on every triangle and keeping the consistency of the spacing on the overlap. (wow this is harder to explain that i thought)
00:44:089 (1) - Doesn't this sound like a reverse slider?, or well, it does at least for me.
00:51:354 (4) - You can move this a bit down to continue the overlaping you did here 00:47:604 (4,2,3) -
01:04:714 (1) - Consider making the slidershape a bit more clear , this works i think
01:10:104 (1) - what if we move this to x:156 y:168 ? it will be a blanket with 01:09:401 (3) -
01:12:917 (4,1) - isn't this TOO close?
01:14:323 (2) - hmm i moved this a bit and i think it was slightly wrong snapped, but its not really relevant
01:16:901 (3) - Ctrl + H and 01:17:370 (4,5) - Ctrl + G ? I think it flows better
01:26:510 (8) - What about doing a curve here and moving the slider end a bit? something like this
01:27:917 (2) - I see that this slider is bad snapped, take a look (also if it is, dont forget to resnap 01:28:620 (3) - ) ... i say "i see" because sometimes the game bugs so it show different things :/
01:30:964 (1,2,3) - Move the sliderend of the slider 3 a bit to the left ( Like this ), so it can blanket perfectlly with the circle 2 and the slider 1
01:35:651 (3) - Ctrl + H? and 01:36:120 (4,5) - Ctrl + G? like before, for flow you know xD
01:38:464 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems a bit weird, maybe moving the circle 2 a bit up like snapping it with the sliderend of 01:37:526 (3) - , and snapping 01:39:167 (3) - with 01:38:229 (4) - .
01:40:104 (6,2) - This overlap seems weird imo, maybe moving the 2 between 01:39:870 (5,6) - is a good idea, Like this
01:41:510 (6) - Since i said that you should move the 2 before (the thing that i said above) , you should re-move this between 01:40:573 (2,4) - , exactly at " x:236 y:180 "
02:10:104 (2,3) - I had to say something nazi, so yes.... fix blanket xd
02:08:464 (1) - You can make the shape more clean, Like this
02:23:229 (5,1) - Isn't it too far away? maybe moving the 5 a bit closer to the slider 1 is a good idea :p
02:24:401 (4) - You should consider doing Ctrl + G here because flow things, if you do it you might move 02:25:104 (5) - a bit closer and down imo
02:33:776 (3,4) - This should have same spacing that 02:32:839 (1,2) - because they're actually the same thing, also for consistency lol
02:35:651 (3) - Ctrl + H and 02:36:120 (4,5) - Ctrl + G (you know the reasons)
02:41:042 (4) - Move it a bit to make it be exactly between 02:40:339 (1,2) - , its actually pretty noticeable ingame and thats not really clean
02:43:385 (4,5) - why the spacing increases here? i think its a bit excesive xD, you might make it similar to this 02:42:917 (3,4) -
02:44:792 (4) - same thing than before, move it to x:216 y:296
02:44:557 (3,5) - kinda weird overlap, maybe move the whole pattern a bit high? (im refering to: 02:45:026 (5,2,1) - )
02:45:026 (5,2,1) - maybe you should keep the consisitency between the spacing here
02:56:042 (2,3,4,5) - This is really weird to play xD idk what to say to change it but its ... weird, the cursor movement isn't really comfortable
03:00:495 (5) - move it to x:232 y:292 , because it looks better and its not too much closer to 02:59:792 (2,3) - than before xD
03:22:526 (3) - Ctrl + J seems A LOT better
03:22:995 (4) - You should add one more repeat, because 03:23:346 - here's where the sound ends
03:41:510 (3) - just... why? it sounds exactly like 03:40:339 (1) - , you might consider deleting 03:41:276 (2,3) - this, then copy 03:40:339 (1) - and paste it on there, Ctrl + H and done, it will looks better i swear!!
03:41:569 - Why is this line here? XD
04:03:776 (3) - This just breaks the flow so hard, i think doing Ctrl + G is a lot better on here
Ok let's try something:
04:06:589 (1) - Ctrl + G
04:07:526 (3) - Ctrl + G
It looks good XD
04:10:339 (5) - It was all good... except for this xD, first:
04:10:339 (5) - Add NC
Do Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J then do Ctrl + G
04:09:167 (2,1) - Stack them
Move this 04:10:807 (2) - to x:48 y:220
It should looks like this
04:11:042 (3) - Ctrl + G so it will fit with the pattern you did above
04:14:089 (7) - Add NC, there's a new pattern starting here :p
04:18:307 (2,4) - Stack the 4 with the 2, it seems better imo
04:25:104 (7,1) - The spacing here is just too much, at least move the 1 a bit up, like between 04:24:401 (4,5) - (basically move it exactly on x:336 y:204)
04:27:214 (9) - First: the sliderend and the sliderhead aren't suposed to be touching themselves,
Second: 04:27:214 (9,1) - the blanket is bad done :v, if you keep the first think at least move the slider 1, the blanket should be like this
If you do the thing that i said above, dont forget to re-snap this 04:29:089 (1,1) - and 04:30:964 (1) - this and then 04:31:667 (2) - move this a bit down to re-blanket it

That's all from Lince.

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-12-30T06:18:23+00:00

separated for assim for less work xd will reply after him like i said

Lince Cosmico wrote:
Lince's mod as he promised on discord:
This collab is actually good.jpg
General:
There are some unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap.wav
soft-hitclap2.wav.
Objects:
00:30:495 (1,2) - hmmm i dont get if you did the spacing different on purpose or not, but i think that it will looks more clear if you use overlaps, something like this (or similar) is what i say... If you understand the pic, its basically doing triangles adding spacing on every triangle and keeping the consistency of the spacing on the overlap. (wow this is harder to explain that i thought)
00:44:089 (1) - Doesn't this sound like a reverse slider?, or well, it does at least for me.
01:10:104 (1) - what if we move this to x:156 y:168 ? it will be a blanket with 01:09:401 (3) -
01:12:917 (4,1) - isn't this TOO close?
01:14:323 (2) - hmm i moved this a bit and i think it was slightly wrong snapped, but its not really relevant
01:26:510 (8) - What about doing a curve here and moving the slider end a bit? something like this
01:27:917 (2) - I see that this slider is bad snapped, take a look (also if it is, dont forget to resnap 01:28:620 (3) - ) ... i say "i see" because sometimes the game bugs so it show different things :/
01:38:464 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems a bit weird, maybe moving the circle 2 a bit up like snapping it with the sliderend of 01:37:526 (3) - , and snapping 01:39:167 (3) - with 01:38:229 (4) - .
01:40:104 (6,2) - This overlap seems weird imo, maybe moving the 2 between 01:39:870 (5,6) - is a good idea, Like this
01:41:510 (6) - Since i said that you should move the 2 before (the thing that i said above) , you should re-move this between 01:40:573 (2,4) - , exactly at " x:236 y:180 "
02:10:104 (2,3) - I had to say something nazi, so yes.... fix blanket xd
02:08:464 (1) - You can make the shape more clean, Like this
02:23:229 (5,1) - Isn't it too far away? maybe moving the 5 a bit closer to the slider 1 is a good idea :p
02:24:401 (4) - You should consider doing Ctrl + G here because flow things, if you do it you might move 02:25:104 (5) - a bit closer and down imo
02:41:042 (4) - Move it a bit to make it be exactly between 02:40:339 (1,2) - , its actually pretty noticeable ingame and thats not really clean
02:43:385 (4,5) - why the spacing increases here? i think its a bit excesive xD, you might make it similar to this 02:42:917 (3,4) -
02:44:792 (4) - same thing than before, move it to x:216 y:296
02:44:557 (3,5) - kinda weird overlap, maybe move the whole pattern a bit high? (im refering to: 02:45:026 (5,2,1) - )
02:45:026 (5,2,1) - maybe you should keep the consisitency between the spacing here
02:56:042 (2,3,4,5) - This is really weird to play xD idk what to say to change it but its ... weird, the cursor movement isn't really comfortable
03:00:495 (5) - move it to x:232 y:292 , because it looks better and its not too much closer to 02:59:792 (2,3) - than before xD
03:41:510 (3) - just... why? it sounds exactly like 03:40:339 (1) - , you might consider deleting 03:41:276 (2,3) - this, then copy 03:40:339 (1) - and paste it on there, Ctrl + H and done, it will looks better i swear!!
03:41:569 - Why is this line here? XD
04:03:776 (3) - This just breaks the flow so hard, i think doing Ctrl + G is a lot better on here
04:10:339 (5) - It was all good... except for this xD, first:
04:10:339 (5) - Add NC
Do Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J then do Ctrl + G
04:09:167 (2,1) - Stack them
Move this 04:10:807 (2) - to x:48 y:220
It should looks like this
04:11:042 (3) - Ctrl + G so it will fit with the pattern you did above
04:14:089 (7) - Add NC, there's a new pattern starting here :p
04:25:104 (7,1) - The spacing here is just too much, at least move the 1 a bit up, like between 04:24:401 (4,5) - (basically move it exactly on x:336 y:204)
04:27:214 (9) - First: the sliderend and the sliderhead aren't suposed to be touching themselves,
Second: 04:27:214 (9,1) - the blanket is bad done :v, if you keep the first think at least move the slider 1, the blanket should be like this
If you do the thing that i said above, dont forget to re-snap this 04:29:089 (1,1) - and 04:30:964 (1) - this and then 04:31:667 (2) - move this a bit down to re-blanket it
That's all from Lince.

rock time

264 posts

Joined January 2015

rock time 2016-12-30T06:59:17+00:00

from q
sorry so late >.<
im bad at modding under 5* so if its just aesthetics im srru ;;

aaaaaaaaa

00:14:961 (4) why whistle here?
00:30:495 (1,2,1) the harsh change in angle and spacing feels uncomfy
01:12:917 (4,1) i feel like you could blanket them better
01:55:339 (1) why is this the only slider with a red anchor in this section?
02:10:339 (3,4) blanket a lil better?
02:26:745 (1) place this under 02:25:104 (5)
03:01:901 (4,5) spaced like 1/2 jump, but its a 1/4 jump. Put them closer so players dont get caught off guard
04:04:714 (1,2) ^^
04:09:870 (3,5) the tiny overlay plz

sorry for small mod! was such a good map

good luck getting it ranked
(dont give kudosu if it isnt deserved thx)

small boob

36 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

small boob 2016-12-31T03:32:34+00:00

Blue: my comments

hanyuu's mod

00:11:368 (2,3) - Maybe you could try to blanket (2)'s body with (3) to make it looks neater http://puu.sh/t4u5k/cdac1ec32f.jpg fixed
00:13:005 (1) - Actually I think the sound here 00:13:327 is bigger and worth more to be clicked. But since the bpm change here, maybe it would be pretty tricky to click properly... You can keep tho. emphasized it a bit more with a sv change
00:27:222 (5) - Keep your Nc-ing consistent, NC here. And you better move this further from 00:26:987 (4) - to emphasize the big crash sound at (5)'s head. Or maybe just add a circle here 00:27:104 to emphasize it without jump because there's also a triplet sound there. I encourage you to do the latter. added a note to make it a triplet
00:27:222 (5) - But actually, since there's a sound here 00:27:456 I think you better map this entire thing 00:27:222 (5,6) - with two 1/2 sliders instead. It will fit much better imo. changed it into one slider and two notes since
00:28:159 (7,8) - If you do so ^ you can try to change this into four circles to differentiate it from the previous rhythm because the guitar sound here is totally bigger. If you don't want too many notes, at least change only 00:28:628 (8) - to two circles to make the big drum sound here 00:28:862 clickable and thus emphasized better. guitar sound is louder so no need to emphasize the drum sound
00:28:628 (8) - If you don't apply above ^, at least move this slider a bit upward or something because currently its tail is too close to (7)'s tail and it's kinda annoying too look at, lol. moved slider 00:28:612 (5) - upwards
00:29:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Hemm. Sorry to ruin your nice pattern here but I think using dense circle jump pattern for weaker sound like this piano is just too much. It make the sound over emphasized and make the big sound like this 00:28:862 got less emphasized. I suggest to either delete the entire thing and make a short break or use simpler rhythm like 1/2 reverse sliders or something. I don't suggest doing it like this. idk how youre calling the piano sound a weak sound even though it is the only sound you can hear . Besides the guitar sound was heavier than the drum sound on the slider 00:28:612 (5) - which is why I did not change it into two circles. Moreover, the cymbal sound is usually used at the end of a measure so i think that the slider end fits perfectly that sound
00:41:518 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well you did it like this here so you better change the previous part. fixed
And you better make some jump for emphasis here 00:43:393 (4,5) -. theres no emphasis to be put as the tone goes lower. in fact the emphasis is put by lowering the ds
01:00:034 - 01:00:268 map these two sounds!! The sound changes so it's alright to change rhythm. It would be a nice lead up to the change of verse here 01:00:972 (1) - too.there is no sound here 01:00:251 - and the sound here 01:00:017 - is not emphasized as the drum sounds are more important
01:10:815 (2) - I think you better NC here instead of here 01:10:112 (1) - because the sound at (2)'s head is noticeably bigger. fixed
01:13:862 (6,7,8) - What is this.... Make the space between their tails even and forming a nice triangle. Pay attention to the previous note too because currently (6) is badly touching (4). Better move them. http://puu.sh/t4vmQ/88582660d7.jpg fixed
01:27:222 (9,10) - Stack the tails properly, lol. done
01:30:034 (1,1) - Why the stack tho, honestly. The sound here is very big 01:30:972 and the stack is totally ruin the emphasis. Unstack and make jump to emphasize (1) fixed
remove NC here 01:44:331 (1) the nc is present on this note to emphasize the drum sounds and to indicate the change into linear flow
01:44:565 (2,3,1) - Maybe you could make their spaces even. Making a triangle shape would be nice too. The secret not to ruin the next pattern is by rotating the entire pattern here 01:45:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - a few degrees counter-clockwise. Try 9° fixed
01:59:097 (5,8) - Either just stack properly or unstack more. This one looks very grey... changed pattern
01:59:800 (8,10) - Boom, reverse arrow is covered, it's unrankable http://puu.sh/t4vJy/993f11dfdd.png Move it. This pattern don't make a nice flow too tbh... ^
02:00:972 Map this ^
02:00:268 (10,1,2,3,4,5) - Map all of these the same way because the cover similar sound. Especially these two 02:00:268 (10,1,2,3) -^
02:10:347 (3,4,5,6) - Why their spacing are very close here.... Try to make your spacing consistent for the entire map. ａｅｓｔｈｅｔｉｃｓ
02:26:284 (9,3) - Maybe just blanket them would work much better.02:26:737 (1,2,1) - are parralel which gives good aesthetics no need for blanket as it would also ruin the spacing
02:29:800 (8,9) - The previous pattern spacing are further than this yet they are following the same sound. Make the spacing the same as previous pattern. fixed
02:41:753 (7,1) - Placing them this close would make a pretty pointy flow tbh. Maybe try to place (1) lower. It would make a better appearance too. fixed
02:42:925 (3,5) - If you're trying to make symmetry, at least place 02:43:393 (4) - at the middle http://puu.sh/t4vXn/9b77bf790e.jpg fixed
03:15:503 (4,1) - Add more space.fixed

for the nc mods i already did them before and uploaded so idk why it would still be there

Lince's mod

There are some unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap.wav
soft-hitclap2.wav. fixed
00:30:495 (1,2) - hmmm i dont get if you did the spacing different on purpose or not, but i think that it will looks more clear if you use overlaps, something like this (or similar) is what i say... If you understand the pic, its basically doing triangles adding spacing on every triangle and keeping the consistency of the spacing on the overlap. (wow this is harder to explain that i thought) I personally think rotating the triangles looks better
00:44:089 (1) - Doesn't this sound like a reverse slider?, or well, it does at least for me. it emphasizes the vocals
01:10:104 (1) - what if we move this to x:156 y:168 ? it will be a blanket with 01:09:401 (3) - fixed
01:12:917 (4,1) - isn't this TOO close? fixed
01:26:510 (8) - What about doing a curve here and moving the slider end a bit? something like this i want to keep it parallel with the two notes 01:26:034 (3,4,5) -
01:27:917 (2) - I see that this slider is bad snapped, take a look (also if it is, dont forget to resnap 01:28:620 (3) - ) ... i say "i see" because sometimes the game bugs so it show different things :/ fixed
01:38:464 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems a bit weird, maybe moving the circle 2 a bit up like snapping it with the sliderend of 01:37:526 (3) - , and snapping 01:39:167 (3) - with 01:38:229 (4) - . fixed? not sure
01:40:104 (6,2) - This overlap seems weird imo, maybe moving the 2 between 01:39:870 (5,6) - is a good idea, Like this fixed it but didnt move 2 between 5,6
01:41:510 (6) - Since i said that you should move the 2 before (the thing that i said above) , you should re-move this between 01:40:573 (2,4) - , exactly at " x:236 y:180 " done
02:10:104 (2,3) - I had to say something nazi, so yes.... fix blanket xd done
02:08:464 (1) - You can make the shape more clean, Like this fixed
02:23:229 (5,1) - Isn't it too far away? maybe moving the 5 a bit closer to the slider 1 is a good idea :p fixed!
02:24:401 (4) - You should consider doing Ctrl + G here because flow things, if you do it you might move 02:25:104 (5) - a bit closer and down imo i think the slight flow change matches the high pitch vocal on the slider head so id rather keep it like that
02:41:042 (4) - Move it a bit to make it be exactly between 02:40:339 (1,2) - , its actually pretty noticeable ingame and thats not really clean fixed
02:43:385 (4,5) - why the spacing increases here? i think its a bit excesive xD, you might make it similar to this 02:42:917 (3,4) - fixed
02:44:792 (4) - same thing than before, move it to x:216 y:296 changed the jump pattern
02:44:557 (3,5) - kinda weird overlap, maybe move the whole pattern a bit high? (im refering to: 02:45:026 (5,2,1) - )
02:45:026 (5,2,1) - maybe you should keep the consisitency between the spacing here ^
02:56:042 (2,3,4,5) - This is really weird to play xD idk what to say to change it but its ... weird, the cursor movement isn't really comfortable changed the pattern
03:00:495 (5) - move it to x:232 y:292 , because it looks better and its not too much closer to 02:59:792 (2,3) - than before xD done
03:41:510 (3) - just... why? it sounds exactly like 03:40:339 (1) - , you might consider deleting 03:41:276 (2,3) - this, then copy 03:40:339 (1) - and paste it on there, Ctrl + H and done, it will looks better i swear!! theres a small sound so i think that this 1/8 reverse fits perfectly while the aesthetics are still good looking imo
03:41:569 - Why is this line here? XD fixed
04:10:339 (5) - It was all good... except for this xD, first:
04:10:339 (5) - Add NC
Do Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J then do Ctrl + G
04:09:167 (2,1) - Stack them
Move this 04:10:807 (2) - to x:48 y:220 fixed everything
04:11:042 (3) - Ctrl + G so it will fit with the pattern you did above the reverse is really small and it will flow the same way as a normal circle so id like to keep it that way for aesthetic purposes
04:14:089 (7) - Add NC, there's a new pattern starting here :p done
04:25:104 (7,1) - The spacing here is just too much, at least move the 1 a bit up, like between 04:24:401 (4,5) - (basically move it exactly on x:336 y:204) fixed
04:27:214 (9) - First: the sliderend and the sliderhead aren't suposed to be touching themselves,
Second: 04:27:214 (9,1) - the blanket is bad done :v, if you keep the first think at least move the slider 1, the blanket should be like this
If you do the thing that i said above, dont forget to re-snap this 04:29:089 (1,1) - and 04:30:964 (1) - this and then 04:31:667 (2) - move this a bit down to re-blanket it all fixed!

furusatori's mod

00:14:961 (4) why whistle here? because i put whistles on every white tick and for it to sound better i put one on the slider end so that it fits
00:30:495 (1,2,1) the harsh change in angle and spacing feels uncomfy there is no piano note on this circle 00:30:956 (1) - so the first two circles continue as the pattern is supposed to go (as in rotating triangles) but the third circle has no piano note so it changes patterns into a sharp angle
01:12:917 (4,1) i feel like you could blanket them better done
01:55:339 (1) why is this the only slider with a red anchor in this section? removed the red anchor
02:10:339 (3,4) blanket a lil better? fixed
02:26:745 (1) place this under 02:25:104 (5) fixed

Thank you all for your mods!!!

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-12-31T04:34:09+00:00

RevengeZ wrote:
Lince's mod as he promised on discord:
[notice]This collab is actually good.jpg
Objects:
00:51:354 (4) - You can move this a bit down to continue the overlaping you did here 00:47:604 (4,2,3) - ✓
01:04:714 (1) - Consider making the slidershape a bit more clear , this works i think ✓
01:16:901 (3) - Ctrl + H and 01:17:370 (4,5) - Ctrl + G ? I think it flows better would ruin the emphasis of 01:17:831 (1) -
01:30:964 (1,2,3) - Move the sliderend of the slider 3 a bit to the left ( Like this ), so it can blanket perfectlly with the circle 2 and the slider 1 ✓
01:35:651 (3) - Ctrl + H? and 01:36:120 (4,5) - Ctrl + G? like before, for flow you know xD same thing as last time D:
02:33:776 (3,4) - This should have same spacing that 02:32:839 (1,2) - because they're actually the same thing, also for consistency lol ✓
02:35:651 (3) - Ctrl + H and 02:36:120 (4,5) - Ctrl + G (you know the reasons) uwu
03:22:526 (3) - Ctrl + J seems A LOT better nuhh would ruin the aesthetic of 03:21:581 (1,3) - imo
03:22:995 (4) - You should add one more repeat, because 03:23:346 - here's where the sound ends ✓
04:03:776 (3) - This just breaks the flow so hard, i think doing Ctrl + G is a lot better on here ✓
Ok let's try something:
04:06:589 (1) - Ctrl + G spacing shouldnt be so large xc
04:07:526 (3) - Ctrl + G ^
It looks good XD
04:18:307 (2,4) - Stack the 4 with the 2, it seems better imo ✓
That's all from Lince.

thank you ~

FuruSatori wrote:
from q
sorry so late >.<
im bad at modding under 5* so if its just aesthetics im srru ;;

aaaaaaaaa
03:01:901 (4,5) spaced like 1/2 jump, but its a 1/4 jump. Put them closer so players dont get caught off guard ✓
04:04:714 (1,2) ^^ naaah this is the only overlap i use like this so itll be pretty unique on its own + it looks good kek

sorry for small mod! was such a good map
good luck getting it ranked
(dont give kudosu if it isnt deserved thx)

thanks !

woop

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Shira

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Shira 2016-12-31T05:17:15+00:00

double post kek
thought id try to mod your part @assimbee

Snowfall

00:11:352 (2,3) - flow here feels kinda forced? i recommend you try making the transition from clockwise > counterclockwise smoother. maybe try : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938703.
00:15:797 - consider adding a spinner here ending 00:17:342 - (if you do, make sure to turn down the volume at the end of the spinner) to hit the echo noise + would be a nice distraction on the mapping style change
00:26:268 (3) - this doesnt sound bad but i think its the sampleset that's making it sound awkward since its kinda loud. perhaps change it to drum/soft sampleset
00:29:080 - i would have these triangles flow counterclockwise since the sliders are leading up to it (00:28:143 (4,5) - )
00:41:034 (2,3) - flow breaker here :/ picture time : 1 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938809 2 - http://puu.sh/t6u4H/7d56018415.jpg
00:53:221 (4,1) - spacing here is smaller than 00:52:987 (3,4) - which should actually be the opposite since 00:53:455 (1) - is the stronger beat : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938815
01:10:096 (6) - try not to start the repeat on the downbeat ! i assume youre following the background music so when you start the repeat 01:10:330 - it ruins the impact and emphasis of it. i would do this rhythm : http://puu.sh/t6ucQ/093b4caf3e.jpg
01:11:502 (2) - same thing above ^ although this one isnt a downbeat, it's still pretty strong compared to the rest of the beats in this part
01:23:456 (1) - i feel like this could be mapped so much more.. the kiai you mapped doesnt have a lot of notes in them compared to the other parts of the song which are softer (pm for ideas and such). like i get youre following the vocals but imo the instrument noise is much more significant
01:25:096 (1,2) - ending the notes on such a loud sound isnt so good ahaha

wow one kiai done ! waht a pleb
well most can be applied everywhere else so good luck on your parts i guess xd

small boob

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small boob 2017-01-05T05:20:38+00:00

replying to shi-chwan~

00:11:352 (2,3) - flow here feels kinda forced? i recommend you try making the transition from clockwise > counterclockwise smoother. maybe try : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938703. fixed~~~
00:15:797 - consider adding a spinner here ending 00:17:342 - (if you do, make sure to turn down the volume at the end of the spinner) to hit the echo noise + would be a nice distraction on the mapping style change i personally think that putting a break there instead would be better as there are no sounds except the last piano note
00:26:268 (3) - this doesnt sound bad but i think its the sampleset that's making it sound awkward since its kinda loud. perhaps change it to drum/soft sampleset fixed~!
00:29:080 - i would have these triangles flow counterclockwise since the sliders are leading up to it (00:28:143 (4,5) - ) it flows better clock-wise and the general change in circular flow emphasizes the piano notes
00:41:034 (2,3) - flow breaker here :/ picture time : 1 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938809 2 - http://puu.sh/t6u4H/7d56018415.jpg fixed
00:53:221 (4,1) - spacing here is smaller than 00:52:987 (3,4) - which should actually be the opposite since 00:53:455 (1) - is the stronger beat : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938815 fixed
01:10:096 (6) - try not to start the repeat on the downbeat ! i assume youre following the background music so when you start the repeat 01:10:330 - it ruins the impact and emphasis of it. i would do this rhythm : http://puu.sh/t6ucQ/093b4caf3e.jpg fixed
01:11:502 (2) - same thing above ^ although this one isnt a downbeat, it's still pretty strong compared to the rest of the beats in this part fixed
01:23:456 (1) - i feel like this could be mapped so much more.. the kiai you mapped doesnt have a lot of notes in them compared to the other parts of the song which are softer (pm for ideas and such). like i get youre following the vocals but imo the instrument noise is much more significant fixed
01:25:096 (1,2) - ending the notes on such a loud sound isnt so good ahaha fixed
thanks 4 mod

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