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Chaoslitz

nadapan wrote:

Waaaaaai Chaos gave Nacchan a call ^w^ *shoots a star* thanks www

[General]
  1. Turn off the widescreen support. You're not making a storyboard ok fixed
[Normal]

  1. 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You have a polarity problem here. Lear more about it and how to fix it here. Discussed with Fort before, we think that a polarity is not needed in this parthere.
  2. 00:15:710 (3,1) - ^
  3. 00:18:998 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:25:573 (1) - Blanket fixed
  5. 00:43:861 (1) - Is it really okay to end the spinner on a blue tick? O__o I think there is no problem...?
  6. 01:16:532 (1,1,1) - Reverse point why isn't it on a tick? Is that eve okay ;-; thats following 1/6
The map is pretty good. I just wondered about the distance snap a few times because some notes are really close to each others. which may make it a bit confusing to people who just started playing osu. You need to be a bit more careful when it comes to polarity. I ran into that problem to in this map. Since you usual make insane diffs so is it really easy to avoid getting in polarity problems but it get's harder on Easy and Normal since you can't make things like streams ;-; You get used to it after being told a few times though.

[Hard]
  1. 00:11:190 (4,2) - Stack the end of (4) with the head of (2). ok
  2. 00:31:327 (2,3,4) - Polarity.
I prefer three notes instead owo

Hard is well build and it's really good. Btw when making this map were you following the vocal or the background music? vocal ww (I'm that kind who usually follow the background music, the map goes to hell if I follow the vocal Xd) There wasn't so much to mod here XD

[Assassination]
  1. 00:21:053 (4) - Blanket fixed
  2. 00:58:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice star! ^u^
xD

Why is that diff name so hard to spell? I bet there's a bunch of typos there >o<. This diff is "Typical Chaos" Your mapping style never fails to amaze me. that is assassaasassaasaasaasaassasssination

For the first time so does my mod not end up being a blanket and stack mod (Thanks god).

I was watching Ansatsu Kyoushitsu episode 3 before I modded your map. Still confused if Nagisa is a Boy or a Girl. Let's say He/She is Hideyoshi for now OpO

Edit: I just found this You can get help to get a high quality video here :3

Good luck Chaos and call me if you need me OwO
Thanks nacchan <33

LordGreg wrote:

You could use this video
ah the video contains extra subtitles inside
I think I will find another one
anyway thanks for help :3
Cerulean Veyron
Hello, litz~ Requested via PM :3/

[> General <]
  1. - Add "op" on tags? some people are too lazy to type "opening" in the search bar.
  2. 01:18:998 - You should continue mapping more until the end of the op. Since most anime opening/closing maps are mapped all the way.
  3. - Looks fine!
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:28:039 (5,1) - Since this diff is the easiest in the whole map, i guess you need to reduce slider length. Or remove the spinner and map a part of it.
  2. 00:36:875 (3,4) - You should follow the vocals here mainly, because it sounds more hearable for players than what you're trying to do.
  3. 00:49:820 (6) - Add clap.
  4. 01:00:094 (1) - Probably nazi, but recurve as the same position as 01:00:916 (3) - .
  5. - Seems perfect to me~ great job!
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:11:909 (2,3) - Are you trying to make a double blanket here? or not really making one?
  2. 00:13:039 (1,2) - Swap NC
  3. 00:14:683 (1,2) - ^, ehhh... there are more, so just find them.
  4. 00:25:573 (3,4,5,6) - Not quite symmetric enough, so recorrect?
  5. 00:31:635 (3,4,1) - This is a good triangle, but what a sudden jump. Players would think it's 1/4 beat like the previous notes you've did. Try to decrease the spacing.
  6. 00:35:436 (1,2,1) - Spacing looks unbalanced here, you've used 1.6x and changed another spacing in a sudden. I guess you should make the spacing the same for some perfect triangle.
  7. 00:51:053 (3) - Move to x:136|y:168 to perfect the triple parallel.
  8. 00:52:286 (2) - Weird-curved slider... o_o
  9. 01:05:025 (1) - Try to follow a bit of vocals here, how about removing the reverse and add two circles next to it?
  10. 01:14:683 (6,1,2) - Make a perfect triangle?
  11. - Some weird spacings found, but diff is likely fine.
[> Assassination <]
  1. 00:05:642 - You should map this part, since it's alike Insane. you should make a good rhythm here.
  2. 00:13:039 (4,1) - Imo, you probably need to make a jump here. Sounds intense enough.
  3. 00:24:546 (3,4) - Recorrect parallel? I can see it not perfect.
  4. 00:36:258 (3) - Ctrl + G?
  5. 00:43:861 (1,4) - Swap NC? just suggestion.
  6. 00:49:820 (6) - What does this slider actually follows? don't tell me the background music.
  7. 00:59:683 (1,1) - A jump should be here, like you've done in the previous track.
  8. 01:03:792 (2) - Ctrl + G?
  9. - Doesn't look so hard enough to be an Insane or Hard, and likely Hard+. I think you should make more jumps and a small stream to make the gap between diffs more correct and balanced.

I guess that's all, Good Luck Chaoslitz!
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, litz~ Requested via PM :3/ ~~~

[> General <]
  1. - Add "op" on tags? some people are too lazy to type "opening" in the search bar. ahh I updated and I forgot to add, will add it back later
  2. 01:18:998 - You should continue mapping more until the end of the op. Since most anime opening/closing maps are mapped all the way. I think thats okay
  3. - Looks fine!
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:28:039 (5,1) - Since this diff is the easiest in the whole map, i guess you need to reduce slider length. Or remove the spinner and map a part of it. I think there's no problem here, so I will keep this
  2. 00:36:875 (3,4) - You should follow the vocals here mainly, because it sounds more hearable for players than what you're trying to do.
  3. 00:49:820 (6) - Add clap. added
  4. 01:00:094 (1) - Probably nazi, but recurve as the same position as 01:00:916 (3) - . tried to fix
  5. - Seems perfect to me~ great job!
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:11:909 (2,3) - Are you trying to make a double blanket here? or not really making one? nice, I changed
  2. 00:13:039 (1,2) - Swap NC thats following the vocal so it is suitable imo
  3. 00:14:683 (1,2) - ^, ehhh... there are more, so just find them.
  4. 00:25:573 (3,4,5,6) - Not quite symmetric enough, so recorrect? ok
  5. 00:31:635 (3,4,1) - This is a good triangle, but what a sudden jump. Players would think it's 1/4 beat like the previous notes you've did. Try to decrease the spacing. my fault :xx changed
  6. 00:35:436 (1,2,1) - Spacing looks unbalanced here, you've used 1.6x and changed another spacing in a sudden. I guess you should make the spacing the same for some perfect triangle. fixed
  7. 00:51:053 (3) - Move to x:136|y:168 to perfect the triple parallel. ok
  8. 00:52:286 (2) - Weird-curved slider... o_o tried to fix
  9. 01:05:025 (1) - Try to follow a bit of vocals here, how about removing the reverse and add two circles next to it? that good, changed as what you suggest
  10. 01:14:683 (6,1,2) - Make a perfect triangle? ok
  11. - Some weird spacings found, but diff is likely fine.
[> Assassination <]
  1. 00:05:642 - You should map this part, since it's alike Insane. you should make a good rhythm here. done
  2. 00:13:039 (4,1) - Imo, you probably need to make a jump here. Sounds intense enough. increased the spacing
  3. 00:24:546 (3,4) - Recorrect parallel? I can see it not perfect. ok
  4. 00:36:258 (3) - Ctrl + G? spacing is large after that,so keep
  5. 00:43:861 (1,4) - Swap NC? just suggestion. thats pretty follow the vocal tho c:
  6. 00:49:820 (6) - What does this slider actually follows? don't tell me the background music. yes ;w;, same as Hard diff
  7. 00:59:683 (1,1) - A jump should be here, like you've done in the previous track. ok
  8. 01:03:792 (2) - Ctrl + G? keep the current one
  9. - Doesn't look so hard enough to be an Insane or Hard, and likely Hard+. I think you should make more jumps and a small stream to make the gap between diffs more correct and balanced.

I guess that's all, Good Luck Chaoslitz!
Thanks Veyron >w<
Krimek
Hey, mod as requested :3

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:382 (1) - If you Ctrl + G it, you can see that the slider ends on (x:109|y:62) so I would prefer move 00:05:025 (2) - on the same Y-Line. It would make no difference at the DS, moving '2' to (x:329|y:62).
  2. Suggestion: 00:43:450 (3) - Maybe move it to (x:332|y:48)? You probably know why.
  3. Move 00:46:943 (1) - to (x80|y:96) and make it a bit less curvy (like this) for better DS and to make 00:47:560 (1,2,3) - more linear.
  4. Move 01:11:190 (2) - to (x:356|y:116) for a triangle. Fix DS to 01:11:601 (3,4) - than.
  5. 01:18:998 (2) - Remove it a bit for triangle.
[Hard]
  1. Suggestion: How about blanketing 00:09:032 (3,4) - Example.
  2. 00:33:587 (1,2) - It's hard to read ;; I wouldn't stack it~ The other stacks were okay since there was no break between it.
  3. 00:52:286 (2,3,4) - Improve triangle.
  4. How about moving 00:57:217 (2) - (x:380|y:200) and 00:57:628 (3) - (x:348|108)?
  5. Suggestion: 00:58:245 (4) - Make a (better) triangle~ Fix DS to 00:58:450 (1,2) - than and make the ending of 00:59:272 (3) - stack with 00:58:245 (4) -
  6. 01:06:669 (1) - Improve blanket.
[Assassination]
  1. 00:15:299 (3) - Make it a bit more curvy.
  2. 00:18:587 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:943 (4,1) - Should be (x:170|y:80) if you want a prefect triangle~ Fix upcoming objects than.
  4. 00:41:190 (1) - Try to make the ending of the slider have the same distance to 00:40:368 (4) - as the beginning. Example.
  5. 00:54:957 (6) - Move it a bit upwards.
  6. 00:56:292 (4,5) - Improve stack.
  7. 01:12:217 (6) - Move it to (x:208|y:184) for better triangle.
  8. 01:12:628 (1) - This sounds much better to me, since there has to be a stream.
  9. 01:14:888 (1,2,3) - Move it to (x:154|y:252) to make 01:13:245 (7,9,1,2,3) - linear.
That's pretty much it! Great map, I enjoyed it :)
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Krimek wrote:

Hey, mod as requested :3

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:382 (1) - If you Ctrl + G it, you can see that the slider ends on (x:109|y:62) so I would prefer move 00:05:025 (2) - on the same Y-Line. It would make no difference at the DS, moving '2' to (x:329|y:62).
  2. Suggestion: 00:43:450 (3) - Maybe move it to (x:332|y:48)? You probably know why.
  3. Move 00:46:943 (1) - to (x80|y:96) and make it a bit less curvy (like this) for better DS and to make 00:47:560 (1,2,3) - more linear.
  4. Move 01:11:190 (2) - to (x:356|y:116) for a triangle. Fix DS to 01:11:601 (3,4) - than.
  5. 01:18:998 (2) - Remove it a bit for triangle.
[Hard]
  1. Suggestion: How about blanketing 00:09:032 (3,4) - Example.
  2. 00:33:587 (1,2) - It's hard to read ;; I wouldn't stack it~ The other stacks were okay since there was no break between it.
  3. 00:52:286 (2,3,4) - Improve triangle.
  4. How about moving 00:57:217 (2) - (x:380|y:200) and 00:57:628 (3) - (x:348|108)?
  5. Suggestion: 00:58:245 (4) - Make a (better) triangle~ Fix DS to 00:58:450 (1,2) - than and make the ending of 00:59:272 (3) - stack with 00:58:245 (4) -
  6. 01:06:669 (1) - Improve blanket.
[Assassination]
  1. 00:15:299 (3) - Make it a bit more curvy.
  2. 00:18:587 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:943 (4,1) - Should be (x:170|y:80) if you want a prefect triangle~ Fix upcoming objects than.
  4. 00:41:190 (1) - Try to make the ending of the slider have the same distance to 00:40:368 (4) - as the beginning. Example.
  5. 00:54:957 (6) - Move it a bit upwards.
  6. 00:56:292 (4,5) - Improve stack.
  7. 01:12:217 (6) - Move it to (x:208|y:184) for better triangle.
  8. 01:12:628 (1) - This sounds much better to me, since there has to be a stream. keep it I think the current one is better
  9. 01:14:888 (1,2,3) - Move it to (x:154|y:252) to make 01:13:245 (7,9,1,2,3) - linear.
That's pretty much it! Great map, I enjoyed it :)
others are all fixed :3 thanks >w<
Nyukai
Yo, as we did M4M.

[General]

  1. I've checked many official websites (amazon.co.jp, iTunes, and other japanese stuff) and I think we're a bit mistaken with title. It's 青春サツバツ論(TVサイズ) without any spaces. However, I'm not sure about Romanised Title, I mean, I don't know if it's (TV size), (TVsize)... So well, I'd ask to someone experienced with japanese metadata, but at least it has TV size on title, I think.
  2. 00:32:149 - Here should be another red point, didn't you notice here is like should be another stanza?
  3. Combo colours are not too bad buuuut I don't think green colour fits with the BG, I can't see anything green. What about a pink colour as we can see it on the BG?
  4. Song is not too slow, why didn't you added an Easy diff? It's a good mapset but it could be better imo ><
  5. You could also map all because 1:18 still feels really short for a TV size if you ask me.
[Normal]

  1. 00:09:957 (5,1) - Swap NC for a consistency with stanza, will look better.
  2. 00:48:587 (4) - Ctrl+H maybe for a better flow? You will need to move it to fix spacing.
  3. 00:50:231 (1) - I think I miss a finish hitsound here.
  4. 00:55:162 (1) - This NC is unnecessary according to the current consistency, remove it.
  5. 01:02:971 (6) - Missing clap?
  6. 01:08:313 (1) - Same as before, this NC is unnecessary.
  7. 01:17:354 (1,1) - NC spam is unnecessary as well imo, same in other diffs if it's the case o3o
[Hard]

  1. 00:08:724 (2,3) - Lol this is really unexpected, sudden, and too much for a Hard imo, just add Ctrl+G here 00:09:032 (3) - xD
  2. 00:24:957 (1,3) - I think swapping NC would fit better.
  3. 00:43:861 (5,1) - Same.
[Assassination]

  1. Nothing here.

Not bad but still need some improvements =w=
neonat
Just a quick look to check on hitsounds

Assassination

00:03:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the volume for this section could be louder, can't really hear the objects
00:06:669 (1) - finish on slider end
00:08:313 (1,1) - finish on slider ends
00:18:998 (3) - finish on slider start
00:20:642 (3) - ^
00:25:573 (1,3,1) - ^
00:36:258 (3) - ^
00:50:231 (1) - ^
00:56:806 (1) - ^
01:13:245 (4) - soft finish on slider start instead of the drum hitsound

Apply for all difficulties
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Inyuschan wrote:

Yo, as we did M4M.

[General]

  1. I've checked many official websites (amazon.co.jp, iTunes, and other japanese stuff) and I think we're a bit mistaken with title. It's 青春サツバツ論(TVサイズ) without any spaces. However, I'm not sure about Romanised Title, I mean, I don't know if it's (TV size), (TVsize)... So well, I'd ask to someone experienced with japanese metadata, but at least it has TV size on title, I think. Fixed the title, and for the romanised, I will add (TV size) first
  2. 00:32:149 - Here should be another red point, didn't you notice here is like should be another stanza? added :33
  3. Combo colours are not too bad buuuut I don't think green colour fits with the BG, I can't see anything green. What about a pink colour as we can see it on the BG? The green colour is appeared in here xD
  4. Song is not too slow, why didn't you added an Easy diff? It's a good mapset but it could be better imo >< maybe, but I am lazy :c
  5. You could also map all because 1:18 still feels really short for a TV size if you ask me. It is fine for me tho o3o
[Normal]

  1. 00:09:957 (5,1) - Swap NC for a consistency with stanza, will look better. fixed
  2. 00:48:587 (4) - Ctrl+H maybe for a better flow? You will need to move it to fix spacing. fixed
  3. 00:50:231 (1) - I think I miss a finish hitsound here. added
  4. 00:55:162 (1) - This NC is unnecessary according to the current consistency, remove it. ok
  5. 01:02:971 (6) - Missing clap? added
  6. 01:08:313 (1) - Same as before, this NC is unnecessary. ok
  7. 01:17:354 (1,1) - NC spam is unnecessary as well imo, same in other diffs if it's the case o3o okok owo
[Hard]

  1. 00:08:724 (2,3) - Lol this is really unexpected, sudden, and too much for a Hard imo, just add Ctrl+G here 00:09:032 (3) - xD ahh the blanket, fixed
  2. 00:24:957 (1,3) - I think swapping NC would fit better. fixed
  3. 00:43:861 (5,1) - Same.fixed
[Assassination]

  1. Nothing here.

Not bad but still need some improvements =w=

neonat wrote:

Just a quick look to check on hitsounds

Assassination

00:03:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the volume for this section could be louder, can't really hear the objects increased to 50%
00:06:669 (1) - finish on slider end I think keeping it without any hitsound is better for me
00:08:313 (1,1) - finish on slider ends ^
00:18:998 (3) - finish on slider start added
00:20:642 (3) - ^added
00:25:573 (1,3,1) - ^ using whistle here is better o3o
00:36:258 (3) - ^ added
00:50:231 (1) - ^ added
00:56:806 (1) - ^ added
01:13:245 (4) - soft finish on slider start instead of the drum hitsound changed

Apply for all difficulties
Thanks for mod >~<
Starfall9908
Okay. As promised I will now mod Easy :3

[Easy]
  1. Turn off the widescreen support
  2. 00:08:313 (3,4,1) - The player will think that You'll tap (1) first then (4) if it's like that. (1) is loser to the slider end of (3) than (4).
  3. 00:14:888 (2) - bow this a little bit.

lol this was all I found ;-;

Goddamn you Koro-sensei stop moving so freaking fast
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

nadapan wrote:

Okay. As promised I will now mod Easy :3

[Easy]
  1. Turn off the widescreen support
  2. 00:08:313 (3,4,1) - The player will think that You'll tap (1) first then (4) if it's like that. (1) is loser to the slider end of (3) than (4).
  3. 00:14:888 (2) - bow this a little bit.

lol this was all I found ;-;

Goddamn you Koro-sensei stop moving so freaking fast
all fixed xDD
Setsurei

[Easy]
00:18:998 (1) - blanket a bit off
00:33:792 (3) - a 1/1 slider that starts 00:33:587 - and ends 00:33:998 - ; also to not make confusion, change the polarity for next object a slider starts here 00:34:409 - and ends 00:35:025 - (or you want a 1/1 slider that ends 00:34:820 - , and keep 00:35:025 - as hitcircle)
[Normal]
00:10:676 (2) - curve the opposite direction much flow like. flip horizontal, and rotate 40° clockwise, and then move to 384|312
00:14:066 (3) - rotate 15° anti clockwise, move to 212|284
00:36:875 (3) - shift it to 00:37:080 - ?
00:41:190 (4) - change this to slider, that ends 00:41:806 -
[Hard]
00:07:902 (4) - curve this up, to blanket 00:07:388 (3) -
00:25:984 (2) - fix stack
00:34:923 (5) - ^
00:36:258 (2) - rotate 56° anti clockwise selection centre, to blanket 00:36:875 (1) -
00:38:210 (6) - fix stack
00:46:018 (8) - ^
00:49:306 (3,1) - ^
00:52:902 (4) - rotate 40° anti clockwise selection centre

good luck
Fikarghifar
I wonder why this beatmap not submited?
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fikarghifar wrote:

I wonder why this beatmap not submited?
submited? .-.

or if you mean rank
Fikarghifar
Yeah, maybe that I mean. I think this beatmap is great. I hope it will be a "qualified" beatmap, amin
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fikarghifar wrote:

Yeah, maybe that I mean. I think this beatmap is great. I hope it will be a "qualified" beatmap, amin
may be :33
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Setsurei wrote:


[Easy]
00:18:998 (1) - blanket a bit off
00:33:792 (3) - a 1/1 slider that starts 00:33:587 - and ends 00:33:998 - ; also to not make confusion, change the polarity for next object a slider starts here 00:34:409 - and ends 00:35:025 - (or you want a 1/1 slider that ends 00:34:820 - , and keep 00:35:025 - as hitcircle) i did the same thing in normal diff, so I wanna keep the rhythm easier in easy diff, so I prefer the current one
[Normal]
00:10:676 (2) - curve the opposite direction much flow like. flip horizontal, and rotate 40° clockwise, and then move to 384|312 fixed
00:14:066 (3) - rotate 15° anti clockwise, move to 212|284 keep
00:36:875 (3) - shift it to 00:37:080 - ? keep constant as 00:33:382 (2,3) -
00:41:190 (4) - change this to slider, that ends 00:41:806 - I use a note instead because 00:38:724 (1,2,3,4) with 4 sliders will be difficult for players to hold their cursor as it is a normal diff
[Hard]
00:07:902 (4) - curve this up, to blanket 00:07:388 (3) - keep instead
00:25:984 (2) - fix stack fixed
00:34:923 (5) - ^ fixed
00:36:258 (2) - rotate 56° anti clockwise selection centre, to blanket 00:36:875 (1) - the flow will be messed up x.x
00:38:210 (6) - fix stack fixed
00:46:018 (8) - ^ fixed
00:49:306 (3,1) - ^ fixed
00:52:902 (4) - rotate 40° anti clockwise selection centre same as 00:36:258 (2)

good luck[/color]
thanks >w<
zj0924
Hi!M4M.From your queue.May I speak Chinese?If I can't express clearly in sp.I may use chinese XD
[General]
  1. It seems that the song is very hard to 下节奏XD,In my opinion,there's some rhythm problems in your map

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:765 (1) - suggest to use a spinner?instead of the vocal?same to normal
  2. 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - polarity?this isn't normal and so few notes can‘t express 1/4 beat clearly really confused for easy player to play 00:07:902 (2) - ,drag to the white tick plz
  3. 01:14:888 (3) - don't use this kind of reverse1/2 sliders in easy,really confusing for easy player

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:834 (5) -should map this
  2. 00:26:190 (2) - curve a bit
  3. 00:40:368 (3) - ^
  4. 00:15:710 (3) - plz tell me why on the blue tick not white tick?
  5. 00:18:998 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:22:286 (1,2) - polarity?
  7. 00:26:806 (3) - try this?
  8. From 00:32:149 (1) - to 00:37:697 (4) - is the main problem in your map imo,It seems that you want to follow with both instrument and vocal,but it is really odd to play,suggest follow instrument00:33:382 (2,3) - and00:36:669 (2,3,4,5) - This mehtod may be better imo?
    or some harder
    and I suggest the rhythm here -
  9. 01:09:957 (1,2) - a better flow?
  10. 01:10:779 (2,3) - suggest curve a bit
  11. 01:11:601 (3) - suggest
  12. 01:14:888 (3) - I don't think it's good to use reverse at this time just common slider is better imo

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:436 (4) - add a spinner?
  2. 00:13:655 (3) - ctrl+g better flow?
  3. 00:18:587 (8) - suggest
  4. 00:32:971 (2) - I can't understand this slider
  5. From 00:32:149 (1) - to 00:37:697 (4) suggest follow instrument,it's hard to map vocal here
    http://puu.sh/grxf4/a256aec964.jpg
  6. 00:49:614 (4) - I don't think this fit
  7. 01:07:491 (3) - a little sudden,try

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:642 (1,2) - respectively ctrl+g flows better
  2. 00:07:286 (4) -rhythm doesn't fit imo suggest
same as 00:08:929 (3) - 00:10:573 (3) - you need a slider00:15:710 (4) - curve it a bit
00:17:765 (6,1,2) - distance confusing could you tell why are they same the beat is different though
00:43:655 (4,1,2,3) - bad flow
00:45:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest not stack like previous00:45:916 (6) -that's right rhythm imo
It's hard to master this song of rhythm imo,Well done in flow and spacing but still need to improve the rhythm I think.GL :)
A9M
Hi m4m from your queue

Easy
00:18:176 (5,1) - Improve blanket?
00:28:861 (1) - spinner end →00:30:505

Normal
00:28:861 (1) - spinner end →00:30:505

Hard
00:11:601 (1) - change slider1/2
00:11:909 (2,3) - Improve blanket
00:31:635 (3,1) - blanket
00:52:286 (2,4) - ^
00:46:840 - add green line volume5%
00:49:306 (3,4) - too close
01:17:354 (2) - remove NC

Assassination
00:07:388 (5) - suggestion http://puu.sh/gvybH/841a059ff0.jpg
00:18:176 (1,2) - Improve blanket
00:18:587 (2,3) - ^
00:46:840 - add green line volume5%
00:46:532 (1,3) - blanket

good luck >w<
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

zj0924 wrote:

Hi!M4M.From your queue.May I speak Chinese?If I can't express clearly in sp.I may use chinese XD
[General]
  1. It seems that the song is very hard to 下节奏XD,In my opinion,there's some rhythm problems in your map yea ;w;

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:765 (1) - suggest to use a spinner?instead of the vocal?same to normal nah I think slider is more suitable
  2. 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - polarity?this isn't normal and so few notes can‘t express 1/4 beat clearly really confused for easy player to play 00:07:902 (2) - ,drag to the white tick plz I am following the bgm, so I think it is fine o3o
  3. 01:14:888 (3) - don't use this kind of reverse1/2 sliders in easy,really confusing for easy player ok~

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:834 (5) -should map this
    keep
  2. 00:26:190 (2) - curve a bit
    keep
  3. 00:40:368 (3) - ^
    fixed
  4. 00:15:710 (3) - plz tell me why on the blue tick not white tick? that following vocal
  5. 00:18:998 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:22:286 (1,2) - polarity?
    nah it is fine
  7. 00:26:806 (3) - try this?
  8. From 00:32:149 (1) - to 00:37:697 (4) - is the main problem in your map imo,It seems that you want to follow with both instrument and vocal,but it is really odd to play,suggest follow instrument00:33:382 (2,3) - and00:36:669 (2,3,4,5) - This mehtod may be better imo?
    or some harder
    and I suggest the rhythm here -
    actually I follow instrument here, just leave this first
  9. 01:09:957 (1,2) - a better flow?
    fixed
  10. 01:10:779 (2,3) - suggest curve a bit
  11. 01:11:601 (3) - suggest
    i used a note
  12. 01:14:888 (3) - I don't think it's good to use reverse at this time just common slider is better imo
it is okay since it is following vocal

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:436 (4) - add a spinner? nope o3o
  2. 00:13:655 (3) - ctrl+g better flow? it will break the constant ds
  3. 00:18:587 (8) - suggest
    keep
  4. 00:32:971 (2) - I can't understand this slider its fine D:
  5. From 00:32:149 (1) - to 00:37:697 (4) suggest follow instrument,it's hard to map vocal here
    http://puu.sh/grxf4/a256aec964.jpg
  6. 00:49:614 (4) - I don't think this fit same as insane
  7. 01:07:491 (3) - a little sudden,try
keep constant o3o

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:642 (1,2) - respectively ctrl+g flows better
  2. 00:07:286 (4) -rhythm doesn't fit imo suggest
same as 00:08:929 (3) - 00:10:573 (3) - you need a slider fixed00:15:710 (4) - curve it a bit
fixed00:17:765 (6,1,2) - distance confusing could you tell why are they same the beat is different though
fixed00:43:655 (4,1,2,3) - bad flow
00:45:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest not stack like previous00:45:916 (6) -that's right rhythm imo
It's hard to master this song of rhythm imo,Well done in flow and spacing but still need to improve the rhythm I think.GL :)

NeK0Nyqn wrote:

Hi m4m from your queue

Easy
00:18:176 (5,1) - Improve blanket? fixed
00:28:861 (1) - spinner end →00:30:505 easy and normal diff needs time to recovery after a spinner, so it cannot be too close to next note

Normal
00:28:861 (1) - spinner end →00:30:505

Hard
00:11:601 (1) - change slider1/2 note works better
00:11:909 (2,3) - Improve blanket fixed
00:31:635 (3,1) - blanket
00:52:286 (2,4) - ^
00:46:840 - add green line volume5%
00:49:306 (3,4) - too close fixed
01:17:354 (2) - remove NC NC is needed i think

Assassination
00:07:388 (5) - suggestion http://puu.sh/gvybH/841a059ff0.jpgfixed
00:18:176 (1,2) - Improve blanket
00:18:587 (2,3) - ^fixed
00:46:840 - add green line volume5%
00:46:532 (1,3) - blanket

good luck >w<
thanks~~~~~~~~~~~
Gaia
-w-
23:54 Chaoslitz: baka ;w;
23:54 Gaia: lewd-kun ;w;
23:54 Chaoslitz: D:
23:54 Chaoslitz: :<
23:55 Chaoslitz: tmr is the last the of my exam :3
23:55 Chaoslitz: \:D\ \:D| |:D| |:D/ /:D/
23:55 Gaia: O:
23:55 Chaoslitz: :3
23:55 Gaia: GOGOGOGO
23:56 Gaia: why are u playing osu lol
23:57 Gaia: oh my
23:57 Gaia: are u busy now?
23:59 Chaoslitz: nop
23:59 Chaoslitz: osu + study at same time \:D/
23:59 Gaia: =w=
23:59 Gaia: WANNA IRC
23:59 Gaia: hue hue
00:00 Gaia: i found unrankable already
00:00 Gaia: =.=
00:01 Chaoslitz: D:?
00:01 Chaoslitz: where ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;;w;w;w;
00:01 *Chaoslitz cries
00:01 Gaia: =w=
00:01 Gaia: wanna do it?
00:01 Chaoslitz: yea :D
00:01 Gaia: okie
00:01 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651877 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron(TV size) [Easy]]
00:01 Gaia: ive only looked at easy too lol
00:02 Gaia: 00:28:861 (1,1) - 00:43:861 (1,1) - not enough recovery time
00:02 Gaia: you need 1500 ms
00:02 Gaia: which is 1 measure
00:02 Chaoslitz: 00:31:327 (1) delete this? :3
00:02 Chaoslitz: 00:31:327 (1)
00:03 Gaia: yeah it works
00:03 Gaia: 00:46:943 (1) - tho
00:03 Chaoslitz: i am think if i end the spinner in 00:45:299 instead
00:03 Gaia: 00:43:861 (1) - you could end it at 00:45:299
00:03 Gaia: or
00:03 Gaia: u could map it out
00:03 Gaia: XD
00:03 Chaoslitz: 00:45:299 :3
00:04 Gaia: oky
00:04 Gaia: yeah thats it for unrankable
00:04 Chaoslitz: ok ww
00:04 Gaia: although
00:04 Chaoslitz: 1500 ms is? o3o
00:04 Gaia: 00:06:669 (1,2) - this bugs me a lot
00:04 Gaia: this rhythm i mean
00:04 Gaia: 1500ms = 1 measure
00:05 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF7Ek/6ef8d99596.jpg
00:05 Gaia: 2 big white ticks
00:05 Chaoslitz: :o ok
00:05 Gaia: anyway
00:05 Gaia: 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4) - etc
00:05 Gaia: land on blue tick then white then blue
00:05 Gaia: is really really really bad ;w;
00:05 Chaoslitz: i should end it in white tick?
00:06 Chaoslitz: ;w;
00:06 Gaia: yeah imo
00:06 Gaia: especially since this is easy diff
00:06 Chaoslitz: ok ;w;w;
00:06 Gaia: it screws players over
00:06 Chaoslitz: alright :3
00:07 Chaoslitz: ok no more blue ticks o/
00:07 Gaia: ok o/
00:07 Gaia: now
00:07 Gaia: 01:16:532 (1,2,3,4) - too pls
00:09 Chaoslitz: waitt
00:09 Gaia: while you're at it fix the rhythms in normal too pls
00:09 Gaia: =3=
00:09 Chaoslitz: normal still cant? D:
00:10 Gaia: tbh
00:10 Gaia: even insane shouldnt have it =w=
00:10 Gaia: but
00:10 Gaia: in normal i suggest this
00:10 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF7RS/0bfb45f77f.jpg
00:10 Gaia: put it on reverse then its no problem :3/
00:11 Chaoslitz: where? o3o
00:11 Chaoslitz: ah and easy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902285
00:11 Gaia: 00:06:669 (1) -
00:11 Gaia: ok good
00:13 Chaoslitz: wait i still dont get in D:
00:13 Chaoslitz: in normal
00:13 Gaia: D:?
00:13 Gaia: hm?
00:13 Chaoslitz: waittt >w<
00:13 Gaia: okok
00:14 Chaoslitz: but should i stack 2 and 3?
00:14 Gaia: ?
00:14 Chaoslitz: your puush
00:15 Gaia: i wouldnt
00:15 Chaoslitz: oh ok
00:16 Gaia: something like this http://puu.sh/gF859/63a301521e.jpg
00:16 Gaia: ignore the 4
00:16 Gaia: XD
00:16 Chaoslitz: xd
00:19 Chaoslitz: ok done xd
00:19 Gaia: xd
00:19 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902295
00:19 Chaoslitz: but how about 00:14:066 (3,3) ?
00:19 Chaoslitz: 00:14:066 (3,3) -
00:20 Gaia: ok good
00:20 Gaia: and hm
00:20 Gaia: reverse http://puu.sh/gF8gg/bcc1a9dbbb.jpg
00:21 Gaia: 00:18:998 (1,2) - this might be fine actually
00:21 Chaoslitz: ok
00:21 Gaia: you could make them into reverses too though
00:21 Gaia: that'd probably be for the best
00:26 Chaoslitz: yea
00:26 Chaoslitz: all fixed with reverse
00:26 Gaia: okie
00:26 Chaoslitz: :3
00:27 Gaia: =w=
00:27 Gaia: ok update
00:27 Gaia: then poke me again
00:28 Gaia: i have to brb 10 mins
00:28 Chaoslitz: ok :3~
00:30 Chaoslitz: done~
00:38 Gaia: w
00:38 Chaoslitz: xd
00:38 Gaia: ok lemme redl
00:38 Chaoslitz: okok
00:38 Gaia: np for myself
00:38 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651877 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron(TV size) [Easy]]
00:39 Chaoslitz: ww
00:39 Gaia: ;~;
00:39 Chaoslitz: D:?
00:39 Gaia: i hope the soma anime will be good
00:39 Gaia: ;~;
00:40 Chaoslitz: soma?
00:40 Gaia: i love ansatsu kyoshitsu
00:40 Gaia: but the manga is better than anime imo
00:40 Gaia: D:
00:40 Chaoslitz: the latest episode
00:40 Chaoslitz: manga
00:40 Chaoslitz: DDDDDD:
00:40 Gaia: Dx
00:41 Chaoslitz: wanna cry ;w;
00:41 Gaia: ;w;
00:41 Chaoslitz: OAOAOAOAOAO
00:41 Gaia: i shipped her with nagisa lol
00:41 Gaia: DDDDX
00:42 Chaoslitz: that time when she showed off her
00:42 Chaoslitz: tentacles
00:42 *Chaoslitz cries
00:42 Gaia: ;ww;
00:42 Gaia: her face
00:43 Gaia: ;wwwww;
00:43 Gaia: rape face op
00:43 Chaoslitz: QAQ
00:43 Chaoslitz: nuu ;~;
00:43 Gaia: ;~;
00:43 Gaia: anyways
00:43 Gaia: back to map
00:43 Gaia: LOL
00:43 Chaoslitz: ok ww
00:43 Gaia: easy not much problems
00:43 Gaia: just
00:43 Gaia: stop going in circles
00:43 Gaia: XDDDD
00:43 Chaoslitz: plz ww
00:44 Chaoslitz: 15 circles :p
00:44 Chaoslitz: btw
00:44 Chaoslitz: 01:12:217 (4) -
00:44 Gaia: 00:13:039 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this is kinda long
00:44 Gaia: hm?
00:44 Chaoslitz: it is rankable for easy?
00:44 Gaia: yes
00:44 Chaoslitz: ok
00:44 Chaoslitz: and you mean? owo
00:45 Gaia: its fine
00:45 Gaia: lol
00:45 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610299 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron(TV size) [Normal]]
00:45 Chaoslitz: 00:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this one fine?
00:45 Gaia: 00:13:039 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this slider train
00:45 Gaia: probably needs a break in here
00:45 Gaia: like maybe replace 00:14:888 (4) - into 2 circles
00:46 Chaoslitz: or end slider in 00:15:710 - ?
00:46 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF9dU/413c994bac.jpg
00:46 Gaia: up to u
00:46 Gaia: but im just saying the player needs to rest
00:46 Gaia: XD
00:47 Chaoslitz: ok :3
00:49 Gaia: btw
00:49 Gaia: how are u doing ur ncing
00:49 Gaia: it looks pretty inconsistent to me
00:49 Gaia: :>
00:50 Chaoslitz: vocal D:
00:50 Gaia: :V
00:50 Chaoslitz: ;w;?
00:50 Gaia: nothing i just dont do it like that usually lol
00:51 Chaoslitz: ok ;w;
00:51 Gaia: 00:16:532 (1,2) - do this less often
00:51 Gaia: what i meant when i said circle flow
00:51 Chaoslitz: normal?
00:51 Gaia: yeah
00:51 Gaia: it looks boring ;_;
00:52 Chaoslitz: ;w;
00:52 Chaoslitz: leave it now or?
00:52 Gaia: its fine
00:52 Gaia: but for future maps
00:52 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF9qO/69c9ed3cd8.jpg
00:52 Chaoslitz: :D
00:52 Chaoslitz: ok
00:52 Gaia: yay not a circle p/
00:52 Gaia: o/
00:52 Chaoslitz: xd
00:52 Chaoslitz: circle
00:53 Chaoslitz: for
00:53 Chaoslitz: the
00:53 Chaoslitz: lose
00:53 Gaia: =w=
00:53 Chaoslitz: .-.
00:53 Gaia: 00:40:368 (3) - curve other way pls :D
00:53 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF9tA/e04764d45f.jpg
00:53 Chaoslitz: ok :3
00:54 Gaia: 01:13:245 (1) - inconsistent spacing
00:54 Gaia: and while you're at it change the pattern too
00:55 Chaoslitz: oh thanks ;w;w;w;
00:55 Gaia: maybe like this
00:55 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF9yg/c35f162776.jpg
00:57 Chaoslitz: i will keep the current one i think owo
00:57 Gaia: owo
00:57 Gaia: ok
00:57 Chaoslitz: ~
00:57 Gaia: ok hard now
00:57 Chaoslitz: ok
00:58 Gaia: 00:05:436 (4,1) - u really shouldnt leave these unmapped imo
00:58 Gaia: cuz its a break but people clearly hear theres stuff in the bg
00:59 Chaoslitz: ah becuase
00:59 Chaoslitz: i did it in the insane diff
00:59 Chaoslitz: but not this
00:59 Gaia: 00:11:601 (1,2) - you know what to do =3=
01:00 Gaia: 00:14:477 - add circle here, there's drum sound
01:00 Gaia: 00:15:710 (4) - ^
01:00 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902369?
01:00 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902369
01:00 Gaia: yupyup
01:01 Chaoslitz: ok done ww
01:01 Gaia: 00:16:943 - circle here too maybe
01:01 Chaoslitz: ah and i change clap to the circle
01:01 Chaoslitz: ok~
01:01 Gaia: 00:18:176 (7) - wat is this spacing
01:02 Chaoslitz: ?
01:02 Gaia: werent u using 1.3x ds?
01:02 Gaia: or 1.2
01:02 Gaia: or i dont even know
01:02 Gaia: ==
01:02 Chaoslitz: wait
01:02 Chaoslitz: hard need to ? DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:
01:03 Gaia: yeah
01:03 Gaia: ....
01:03 Gaia: is this ur first time mapping hard
01:03 Gaia: or something
01:03 Chaoslitz: ..
01:03 Chaoslitz: yes .-.
01:03 Gaia: =3=
01:03 Gaia: ..
01:03 Gaia: u need to
01:03 Chaoslitz: all hard by GD
01:03 Gaia: use DS
01:03 Chaoslitz: anyway i chnage to 1.3
01:03 Chaoslitz: that circle
01:03 Gaia: well
01:04 Gaia: you're guna have to redo this diff
01:04 Gaia: and fix every non-jump into 1.3x ds
01:04 Chaoslitz: ok wait me ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;
01:04 Gaia: wait
01:04 Gaia: do it later
01:04 Gaia: im gunna keep modding
01:04 Gaia: u fix ds later
01:04 Gaia: =3=
01:04 Chaoslitz: ok OAO
01:04 Chaoslitz: 00:05:025 (2,3,4) -
01:05 Chaoslitz: this need to? D:
01:05 Chaoslitz: 1.3 for this is just
01:05 Chaoslitz: weird
01:05 Gaia: 00:22:902 (3) - 00:24:546 (3) - consider making into reverse?
01:05 Gaia: oh
01:05 Gaia: u changed sv
01:05 Gaia: thats why
01:05 Gaia: that's fine
01:05 Gaia: the hard should have equal distance
01:05 Chaoslitz: ?
01:05 Chaoslitz: you mean?
01:05 Gaia: but because you changed sv
01:05 Gaia: ds changes as well
01:06 Chaoslitz: ok
01:06 Gaia: but just make it the same distance apart and its ok
01:06 Gaia: because
01:06 Gaia: 00:05:231 (3,4) -
01:06 Gaia: is the same distance as 00:06:669 (1,2) -
01:06 Gaia: but the 2nd one is 1.3x ds
01:06 Gaia: its cuz u sped up thats why
01:07 Gaia: so in the kiai parts use 1.0x ds
01:07 Chaoslitz: ok
01:08 Gaia: 00:35:025 - circle
01:08 Gaia: 00:38:210 (6) - ^
01:08 Gaia: 00:49:409
01:09 Chaoslitz: added
01:09 Gaia: alright
01:09 Gaia: so just fix distance in this hard
01:09 Gaia: and ill take a look later
01:09 Chaoslitz: ok :>
01:09 Gaia: insane now
01:10 Gaia: 00:14:066 (4) - circle after
01:10 Gaia: 00:15:710 (4) - ^
01:10 Gaia: 00:34:614 (3,4) -
01:11 Gaia: 00:38:210 (5) -
01:12 Gaia: oh btw for al diffs
01:12 Gaia: 01:19:820 - consider a circle here
01:13 Chaoslitz: i dont think it is needed D:
01:13 Gaia: u can look at all the ranked maps with an outro
01:13 Gaia: most if not al have that last note mapped
01:13 Gaia: :V
01:14 Chaoslitz: ok then owo
01:14 Chaoslitz: lemme fix those ds first OAO
01:14 Gaia: 01:00:916 (3,1) - do u like this overlap?
01:15 Chaoslitz: i think it is okk...(?
01:15 Gaia: =3=
01:15 Gaia: well
01:16 Gaia: it overlaps the sliderend a bit much
01:16 Gaia: so try to avoid it
01:16 Chaoslitz: lemme try
01:16 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gFagJ/e952c50bdf.jpg
01:16 Gaia: this would look great though
01:16 Gaia: but
01:16 Gaia: ur slider isnt long enough to do that
01:16 Chaoslitz: ok moved
01:17 Gaia: 01:06:669 (1,2,3) - this slider pattern..
01:17 Gaia: u can do better than this!!
01:18 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gFalc/bd4b5eacd5.jpg
01:18 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902398 ? :3
01:18 Gaia: maybe something like that
01:18 Chaoslitz: oh wow
01:18 Gaia: hmm
01:18 Gaia: well
01:18 Gaia: that could work too
01:19 Gaia: anyway
01:19 Gaia: thats about it
01:19 Gaia: fix ds in hard
01:19 Gaia: get like 1-2 mods on it
01:19 Gaia: then poke me
01:20 Gaia: hard and insane *
01:20 Gaia: easier diffs look okey
01:20 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902404
01:20 Chaoslitz: ok :3
01:20 Gaia: thats good too
01:20 Gaia: w
01:20 Chaoslitz: ww
01:21 Gaia: ok
01:21 Gaia: time to post log then sleep
01:21 Gaia: o///

see u in a few mods =w=
Keada

  • Assassination

  1. 00:44:273 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I see different spacing in this stream D: try to make a slider and click ctrl+shift+F on it instead and you'll get a nice stream :>
    not much else to say on this diff :D its well made! :3 Good job!

Really short mod ;w; im sorry D: but this map is too good. :D
Starfy
God map
Star~
Always draw my water :(

[Easy]
00:53:518 (1,2) - Why not http://puu.sh/gFkb1/12a29fd199.jpg
01:06:669 (1,2) - ^
01:12:217 (4) - Suggest using 1/1 http://puu.sh/gFkeL/d68177acf3.jpg
01:16:532 (1,2,3) - Try try http://puu.sh/gFkio/3f2fda4454.jpg

[Normal]
SV seems .. too low .-.
00:06:669 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - So strange and extremely hard to follow the rhythm Try http://puu.sh/gFktx/417360e502.jpg
00:34:820 Add a note pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehifghjiofghjfghfglhfjgiokhjdifophj
00:38:107 ^
01:18:998 (4,1) - Maybe change them to a slider because their da~~~~ sound is still continuing

Tried my best ;_;
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

StarForYou wrote:

God map
Star~
.-.

Keada wrote:


  • Assassination

  1. 00:44:273 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I see different spacing in this stream D: try to make a slider and click ctrl+shift+F on it instead and you'll get a nice stream :>
    not much else to say on this diff :D its well made! :3 Good job!

Really short mod ;w; im sorry D: but this map is too good. :D
fixed :3 will update soon
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

StarForYou wrote:

God map
Star~
Always draw my water :(

[Easy]
00:53:518 (1,2) - Why not http://puu.sh/gFkb1/12a29fd199.jpg You know this is a easy diff
01:06:669 (1,2) - ^
01:12:217 (4) - Suggest using 1/1 http://puu.sh/gFkeL/d68177acf3.jpg
01:16:532 (1,2,3) - Try try http://puu.sh/gFkio/3f2fda4454.jpg

[Normal]
SV seems .. too low .-.
00:06:669 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - So strange and extremely hard to follow the rhythm Try http://puu.sh/gFktx/417360e502.jpg I just changed it from last mod D:
00:34:820 Add a note pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehifghjiofghjfghfglhfjgiokhjdifophj added
00:38:107 ^added
01:18:998 (4,1) - Maybe change them to a slider because their da~~~~ sound is still continuing so thats why a note in 01:19:820 (1) -

Tried my best ;_;
baka ;w;w;
Prophecy
[Hard]
00:16:943 - I think that it is so strange for that.
00:19:306 - Why not use 1/4 Slider instead of?

[Assassination]
00:30:505 - Spinner Stop here instead.
00:45:299 - I don't suggest that 5 Notes in 1 Place = =

[Overall]
Awesome Map. Support with no star<3
Go for Rank~
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Prophecy wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:943 - I think that it is so strange for that. I think there is no problem o3o
00:19:306 - Why not use 1/4 Slider instead of? nah becuase I am following vocal

[Assassination]
00:30:505 - Spinner Stop here instead. I think it is better to have time for recovery
00:45:299 - I don't suggest that 5 Notes in 1 Place = = ok :33

[Overall]
Awesome Map. Support with no star<3
Go for Rank~
thanks~
WildOne94
Hey there :D
Here from "Wild and Hyper's NM/M4M Queue [STD|CTB]" from your request.
As you also requested i will only do Hard and Assassination.

General
The colour of green in the combo colours seems weird as it does not contain and green in the background. Suggest something else like white, light pink or black.
You miss a bit of music at the end which would be nice to hear mapped. Imo the mapping does not end till the music is at an end >w<. Should end at 01:26:395 - .
Not too essential but custom hitsounds would go nicely with this beatmap.

Hard
00:03:382 (1) - i was thinking this could be a bit more of a creative first slider. Maybe some how like the tentacles owo? e.g.(this was taken in Assassination by mistake though)


00:09:957 (1) - blanket this into the previous slider 00:09:546 (4) -
00:11:601 (1) - to fix overlap ctrl + h this.(same with 00:12:423 (2) - so it has a nice pattern then)

(adjust (3) too so it looks like a triangle shape space between 00:12:423 (2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/gFpO9/0e96bde1b4.jpg)

00:14:888 (2,3) - bend the 2nd points of these sliders a bit more to make the curve a bit more noticeable (just a little)
00:19:203 - this song maps from vocals to drums all the time. and you miss quite a noticeable drum sound here. try change to one of these sliders.


00:20:025 - ^
00:22:183 (2) - possible add note here between the 2 sliders
00:26:806 (1) - same as 00:14:888 -
00:27:217 (2) - Extend point 2 down more and point 3 up more for more of a wave
00:32:149 (1) - pull end back to white tick and add note where the end previously was
00:35:436 (1) - the anchor here does not really go with the vocal. a curve with one point in the middle only would be better
00:40:984 (4) - Move to x:70 y:124 (but maybe reduce the distance of (4) and (5) so it's closer to (3)
01:01:224 (4) - add circle note here
01:04:512 (4) - ^
01:06:669 (1) - reduce slider by 1 tick and make into a reverse. Sounds better with vocal
01:15:196 (2) - add circle note (for more of a climax)
01:18:724 (2,3) - it be nice if these were jumps
01:18:998 (3) - This would sound much better as a long slider. and you could also add symmetry along with 01:18:176 (1) -
01:19:820 (1) - add finish

Assassination
00:03:382 (1) - as in Hard
00:06:258 (3,4,5,6) - this stack seems a bit too much. try spread out instead
00:10:573 (3) - This might be a tricky suggestion to arrange but it would look better if this had a reverse on it
00:21:464 (1,2) - same with the curves again. extend out a tinchy bit
00:24:957 (4) - shorten slider to the white tick and add 2 circle notes on the next to ticks
00:27:217 (2) - for this slider you can remove point 3 and drag point 2 up too make it look smoother and go along more with the holded vocals (maybe move point 5 left a bit too to cover that anchor corner)
00:32:149 (1) - drag this sliders end back to the white tick on the timeline. sounds better (move 2, 3 back if you do and add a note at 00:33:176 -)
00:32:149 (1,2) - possible blanket too?
00:38:416 - drum sound here. add note (i recommend a small stream)
00:42:217 (1) - reduce end to white tick and add a circle note at 00:42:628 -
00:50:642 (2,3) - make (2) a copy of (3) cause they look different with the curves (i sure do notice good curves ;) )
00:54:649 - this sounds nicer here


01:04:717 (5) - add circle note here
01:14:888 - around here should have that long slider feel again. try change it up a bit


01:19:820 (1) - add finish

Well i hope this helped :D it's a great looking beatmap.
Any questions ask me in pm or leave a message in my inbox
Best of luck ouo/
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

WildOne94 wrote:

Hey there :D
Here from "Wild and Hyper's NM/M4M Queue [STD|CTB]" from your request.
As you also requested i will only do Hard and Assassination.

General
The colour of green in the combo colours seems weird as it does not contain and green in the background. Suggest something else like white, light pink or black.
You miss a bit of music at the end which would be nice to hear mapped. Imo the mapping does not end till the music is at an end >w<. Should end at 01:26:395 - .
Not too essential but custom hitsounds would go nicely with this beatmap.

Hard
00:03:382 (1) - i was thinking this could be a bit more of a creative first slider. Maybe some how like the tentacles owo? e.g.(this was taken in Assassination by mistake though) [/color]


00:09:957 (1) - blanket this into the previous slider 00:09:546 (4) - keep
00:11:601 (1) - to fix overlap ctrl + h this.(same with 00:12:423 (2) - so it has a nice pattern then) yea nice

(adjust (3) too so it looks like a triangle shape space between 00:12:423 (2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/gFpO9/0e96bde1b4.jpg)

00:14:888 (2,3) - bend the 2nd points of these sliders a bit more to make the curve a bit more noticeable (just a little) fixed
00:19:203 - this song maps from vocals to drums all the time. and you miss quite a noticeable drum sound here. try change to one of these sliders.
others mentioned this so, fixed

00:20:025 - ^
00:22:183 (2) - possible add note here between the 2 sliders nah the current one look fine
00:26:806 (1) - same as 00:14:888 - fixed
00:27:217 (2) - Extend point 2 down more and point 3 up more for more of a wave fixed
00:32:149 (1) - pull end back to white tick and add note where the end previously was current one match vocal
00:35:436 (1) - the anchor here does not really go with the vocal. a curve with one point in the middle only would be better keep .-.
00:40:984 (4) - Move to x:70 y:124 (but maybe reduce the distance of (4) and (5) so it's closer to (3) it will break the consistant
01:01:224 (4) - add circle note here but theres already a note .-.
01:04:512 (4) - ^
01:06:669 (1) - reduce slider by 1 tick and make into a reverse. Sounds better with vocal 1/2 is okay
01:15:196 (2) - add circle note (for more of a climax) same theres already a note .-.
01:18:724 (2,3) - it be nice if these were jumps
01:18:998 (3) - This would sound much better as a long slider. and you could also add symmetry along with 01:18:176 (1) -
01:19:820 (1) - add finish

Assassination
00:03:382 (1) - as in Hard
00:06:258 (3,4,5,6) - this stack seems a bit too much. try spread out instead it should be fine since it is the beginning of the music
00:10:573 (3) - This might be a tricky suggestion to arrange but it would look better if this had a reverse on it
00:21:464 (1,2) - same with the curves again. extend out a tinchy bit fixed
00:24:957 (4) - shorten slider to the white tick and add 2 circle notes on the next to ticks nice :33
00:27:217 (2) - for this slider you can remove point 3 and drag point 2 up too make it look smoother and go along more with the holded vocals (maybe move point 5 left a bit too to cover that anchor corner)
00:32:149 (1) - drag this sliders end back to the white tick on the timeline. sounds better (move 2, 3 back if you do and add a note at 00:33:176 -) this is following the vocal,so no change
00:32:149 (1,2) - possible blanket too?nop :/
00:38:416 - drum sound here. add note (i recommend a small stream)keep i think
00:42:217 (1) - reduce end to white tick and add a circle note at 00:42:628 - this is following vocal o3o
00:50:642 (2,3) - make (2) a copy of (3) cause they look different with the curves (i sure do notice good curves ;) ) fixed a bit
00:54:649 - this sounds nicer here keep


01:04:717 (5) - add circle note here
01:14:888 - around here should have that long slider feel again. try change it up a bit


01:19:820 (1) - add finish

Well i hope this helped :D it's a great looking beatmap.
Any questions ask me in pm or leave a message in my inbox
Best of luck ouo/
thanks >W<
Gaia
Kayano x Nagisa Best OTP!!



=w=
22:08 Gaia: OKOKOK
22:11 Chaoslitz: ?
22:11 Chaoslitz: lolol
22:11 Gaia: =w=
22:11 Gaia: how much time till u gtg?
22:11 Chaoslitz: half an hr
22:11 Gaia: orz
22:11 Chaoslitz: it should be enough?
22:11 Chaoslitz: nop? pwp
22:12 Gaia: ok
22:12 Gaia: lets see
22:12 Gaia: np me pls
22:12 Chaoslitz: :34
22:12 *Chaoslitz is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610295 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron]
22:12 Gaia: gg why do i have to redl lol
22:12 Gaia: o3o
22:13 Chaoslitz: title o3o
22:13 Chaoslitz: METDATA =w=
22:13 Gaia: =3333=
22:13 Gaia: i swear if metadata dq's this
22:13 Gaia: ill kill myself
22:13 Gaia: jk
22:13 Gaia: but
22:13 Gaia: ;w;
22:13 Chaoslitz: nuuu ;w;
22:14 Chaoslitz: may be i ask other for a metadata check? >_>
22:14 Chaoslitz: idk ;w;
22:14 Gaia: nah no need
22:14 Gaia: yolooo
22:14 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651877 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Easy]]
22:14 Gaia: 00:11:601 (3) -
22:14 Chaoslitz: okok
22:14 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gJ4D3/9a562e3bc3.jpg
22:14 Gaia: ?
22:14 Gaia: 00:17:354 (4) - clap too?
22:15 Chaoslitz: ok~
22:15 Gaia: 00:17:354 (4) - you can end on 00:30:505 - if you want
22:15 Chaoslitz: ??
22:16 Chaoslitz: what is that
22:16 Gaia: oops
22:16 Gaia: spinner
22:16 Gaia: i meant
22:16 Gaia: 00:38:724 (1) - finish on the head and clap on end?
22:17 Gaia: 00:39:546 (2) - clap on end
22:17 Gaia: 00:40:368 (3) - ^
22:17 Chaoslitz: added :3
22:18 Gaia: 01:19:820 (3) - finish
22:18 Gaia: and thats it
22:18 Chaoslitz: ok~
22:19 Chaoslitz: normal?
22:19 Gaia: normal now
22:19 Gaia: 00:31:327 (1,1) - whats with the ncing here
22:19 Gaia: 00:36:669 (2) - this doesnt follow anything
22:19 Chaoslitz: since there is red tick?
22:19 Chaoslitz: or should i remove the NC
22:19 Gaia: remove nc
22:20 Gaia: and delete 00:36:669 (2) -
22:20 Chaoslitz: k
22:20 Gaia: also fix spacing after
22:21 Gaia: maybe this could work too http://puu.sh/gJ4X2/f94811fd4b.jpg
22:21 Gaia: 00:40:368 (3) - whistle on head too?
22:21 Chaoslitz: forget to add whistle lol
22:21 Gaia: lol
22:22 Chaoslitz: ah and for 00:36:669 deleted
22:22 Chaoslitz: fixed ds
22:22 Chaoslitz: btw
22:22 Gaia: 01:19:820 (1) - finish
22:22 Gaia: yeah?
22:22 Chaoslitz: 00:43:861 (1) -
22:22 Gaia: mhm?
22:22 Chaoslitz: suitable to end here?
22:22 Chaoslitz: the spinner
22:22 Gaia: well i was thinking earlier too
22:22 Chaoslitz: can i end it in blue tick
22:23 Gaia: i gues ssince theres a drum sound its ok
22:23 Chaoslitz: ok
22:23 Chaoslitz: the artist is too long that I cant see the diff name lol
22:24 Gaia: oh lol
22:24 Gaia: ok
22:24 Gaia: hard now
22:24 Chaoslitz: kk
22:24 Gaia: 00:19:614 (3,4) - dont let these 2 touch
22:24 Gaia: maybel ike this http://puu.sh/gJ56H/fe46b1ba8a.jpg
22:24 Gaia: 00:25:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - where are ur hitsounds ==
22:25 Gaia: add some claps there
22:25 Chaoslitz: okok ;w;
22:25 Gaia: 00:30:710 (1) - claps on all 3 of these too
22:25 Chaoslitz: ok
22:26 Gaia: 00:44:786 (4) - u forgot clap?
22:26 Gaia: 00:43:861 (1,2) - also dont overlap these either
22:27 Chaoslitz: ok owo
22:27 Gaia: and then just finish on 01:19:820 (1) -
22:27 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2913542
22:27 Chaoslitz: how about this?
22:28 Gaia: thats ok
22:28 Chaoslitz: ok
22:28 Gaia: insane
22:28 Gaia: 00:30:710 (1) - claps on all 3
22:28 Chaoslitz: is that i miss something?
22:28 Chaoslitz: hard
22:28 Chaoslitz: 01:05:025 (1) -
22:29 Chaoslitz: ah nothing
22:29 Chaoslitz: forget what i said ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;
22:29 Gaia: lol
22:29 Gaia: 00:45:916 (6) - i dont remember
22:29 Chaoslitz: :<
22:29 Gaia: did i tell u to make this into reverse lol
22:29 Chaoslitz: ?
22:29 Chaoslitz: 00:45:916 (6) - ?
22:29 Gaia: yeah
22:29 Gaia: no reverse please
22:29 Gaia: no sound on white tick
22:30 Chaoslitz: ok
22:30 Gaia: 00:49:409 - maybe circle here
22:30 Chaoslitz: ok
22:30 Gaia: 01:19:820 (1) - and then finish!
22:30 Chaoslitz: and i stacked
22:31 Gaia: good
22:31 Chaoslitz: done~
22:31 Gaia: ok now update while i check ur hitsounds
22:31 Chaoslitz: ok xd
22:31 Chaoslitz: updated
22:32 Gaia: yay no problems
22:32 Chaoslitz: owo
22:32 Gaia: redl just incase
22:32 Chaoslitz: kay xd
22:32 Gaia: oh it only took 20 mins
22:32 Gaia: XDDDD
22:32 Chaoslitz: xD
22:32 Gaia: i am lazy bn
22:32 Gaia: ;wwww;
22:32 Chaoslitz: no D:
22:33 Gaia: oh is ur video offset right?
22:33 Chaoslitz: i tested before
22:33 Chaoslitz: lemme recheck
22:33 Gaia: oky
22:34 Chaoslitz: i think it is correct o3o
22:35 Gaia: hue
22:35 Gaia: okay
22:35 Gaia: it doesnt matter really
22:35 Gaia: but if u want to
22:35 Gaia: add nc on 00:31:327 (1) -
22:35 Gaia: normal
22:35 Chaoslitz: i just removed o3o
22:35 Chaoslitz: it is okay i think
22:36 Gaia: i mean
22:36 Gaia: its 1st combo
22:36 Gaia: but it doesnt have combo
22:36 Gaia: xd
22:36 Gaia: ok nvm lol
22:36 Gaia: you dont really have to LOL
22:36 Chaoslitz: >_>
22:36 Gaia: anyways
22:36 Gaia: anything else to change?
22:36 Chaoslitz: nothing ~_~
22:36 Gaia: oky
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Gaia wrote:

Kayano x Nagisa Best OTP!!



=w=
22:08 Gaia: OKOKOK
22:11 Chaoslitz: ?
22:11 Chaoslitz: lolol
22:11 Gaia: =w=
22:11 Gaia: how much time till u gtg?
22:11 Chaoslitz: half an hr
22:11 Gaia: orz
22:11 Chaoslitz: it should be enough?
22:11 Chaoslitz: nop? pwp
22:12 Gaia: ok
22:12 Gaia: lets see
22:12 Gaia: np me pls
22:12 Chaoslitz: :34
22:12 *Chaoslitz is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610295 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron]
22:12 Gaia: gg why do i have to redl lol
22:12 Gaia: o3o
22:13 Chaoslitz: title o3o
22:13 Chaoslitz: METDATA =w=
22:13 Gaia: =3333=
22:13 Gaia: i swear if metadata dq's this
22:13 Gaia: ill kill myself
22:13 Gaia: jk
22:13 Gaia: but
22:13 Gaia: ;w;
22:13 Chaoslitz: nuuu ;w;
22:14 Chaoslitz: may be i ask other for a metadata check? >_>
22:14 Chaoslitz: idk ;w;
22:14 Gaia: nah no need
22:14 Gaia: yolooo
22:14 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651877 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Easy]]
22:14 Gaia: 00:11:601 (3) -
22:14 Chaoslitz: okok
22:14 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gJ4D3/9a562e3bc3.jpg
22:14 Gaia: ?
22:14 Gaia: 00:17:354 (4) - clap too?
22:15 Chaoslitz: ok~
22:15 Gaia: 00:17:354 (4) - you can end on 00:30:505 - if you want
22:15 Chaoslitz: ??
22:16 Chaoslitz: what is that
22:16 Gaia: oops
22:16 Gaia: spinner
22:16 Gaia: i meant
22:16 Gaia: 00:38:724 (1) - finish on the head and clap on end?
22:17 Gaia: 00:39:546 (2) - clap on end
22:17 Gaia: 00:40:368 (3) - ^
22:17 Chaoslitz: added :3
22:18 Gaia: 01:19:820 (3) - finish
22:18 Gaia: and thats it
22:18 Chaoslitz: ok~
22:19 Chaoslitz: normal?
22:19 Gaia: normal now
22:19 Gaia: 00:31:327 (1,1) - whats with the ncing here
22:19 Gaia: 00:36:669 (2) - this doesnt follow anything
22:19 Chaoslitz: since there is red tick?
22:19 Chaoslitz: or should i remove the NC
22:19 Gaia: remove nc
22:20 Gaia: and delete 00:36:669 (2) -
22:20 Chaoslitz: k
22:20 Gaia: also fix spacing after
22:21 Gaia: maybe this could work too http://puu.sh/gJ4X2/f94811fd4b.jpg
22:21 Gaia: 00:40:368 (3) - whistle on head too?
22:21 Chaoslitz: forget to add whistle lol
22:21 Gaia: lol
22:22 Chaoslitz: ah and for 00:36:669 deleted
22:22 Chaoslitz: fixed ds
22:22 Chaoslitz: btw
22:22 Gaia: 01:19:820 (1) - finish
22:22 Gaia: yeah?
22:22 Chaoslitz: 00:43:861 (1) -
22:22 Gaia: mhm?
22:22 Chaoslitz: suitable to end here?
22:22 Chaoslitz: the spinner
22:22 Gaia: well i was thinking earlier too
22:22 Chaoslitz: can i end it in blue tick
22:23 Gaia: i gues ssince theres a drum sound its ok
22:23 Chaoslitz: ok
22:23 Chaoslitz: the artist is too long that I cant see the diff name lol
22:24 Gaia: oh lol
22:24 Gaia: ok
22:24 Gaia: hard now
22:24 Chaoslitz: kk
22:24 Gaia: 00:19:614 (3,4) - dont let these 2 touch
22:24 Gaia: maybel ike this http://puu.sh/gJ56H/fe46b1ba8a.jpg
22:24 Gaia: 00:25:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - where are ur hitsounds ==
22:25 Gaia: add some claps there
22:25 Chaoslitz: okok ;w;
22:25 Gaia: 00:30:710 (1) - claps on all 3 of these too
22:25 Chaoslitz: ok
22:26 Gaia: 00:44:786 (4) - u forgot clap?
22:26 Gaia: 00:43:861 (1,2) - also dont overlap these either
22:27 Chaoslitz: ok owo
22:27 Gaia: and then just finish on 01:19:820 (1) -
22:27 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2913542
22:27 Chaoslitz: how about this?
22:28 Gaia: thats ok
22:28 Chaoslitz: ok
22:28 Gaia: insane
22:28 Gaia: 00:30:710 (1) - claps on all 3
22:28 Chaoslitz: is that i miss something?
22:28 Chaoslitz: hard
22:28 Chaoslitz: 01:05:025 (1) -
22:29 Chaoslitz: ah nothing
22:29 Chaoslitz: forget what i said ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;
22:29 Gaia: lol
22:29 Gaia: 00:45:916 (6) - i dont remember
22:29 Chaoslitz: :<
22:29 Gaia: did i tell u to make this into reverse lol
22:29 Chaoslitz: ?
22:29 Chaoslitz: 00:45:916 (6) - ?
22:29 Gaia: yeah
22:29 Gaia: no reverse please
22:29 Gaia: no sound on white tick
22:30 Chaoslitz: ok
22:30 Gaia: 00:49:409 - maybe circle here
22:30 Chaoslitz: ok
22:30 Gaia: 01:19:820 (1) - and then finish!
22:30 Chaoslitz: and i stacked
22:31 Gaia: good
22:31 Chaoslitz: done~
22:31 Gaia: ok now update while i check ur hitsounds
22:31 Chaoslitz: ok xd
22:31 Chaoslitz: updated
22:32 Gaia: yay no problems
22:32 Chaoslitz: owo
22:32 Gaia: redl just incase
22:32 Chaoslitz: kay xd
22:32 Gaia: oh it only took 20 mins
22:32 Gaia: XDDDD
22:32 Chaoslitz: xD
22:32 Gaia: i am lazy bn
22:32 Gaia: ;wwww;
22:32 Chaoslitz: no D:
22:33 Gaia: oh is ur video offset right?
22:33 Chaoslitz: i tested before
22:33 Chaoslitz: lemme recheck
22:33 Gaia: oky
22:34 Chaoslitz: i think it is correct o3o
22:35 Gaia: hue
22:35 Gaia: okay
22:35 Gaia: it doesnt matter really
22:35 Gaia: but if u want to
22:35 Gaia: add nc on 00:31:327 (1) -
22:35 Gaia: normal
22:35 Chaoslitz: i just removed o3o
22:35 Chaoslitz: it is okay i think
22:36 Gaia: i mean
22:36 Gaia: its 1st combo
22:36 Gaia: but it doesnt have combo
22:36 Gaia: xd
22:36 Gaia: ok nvm lol
22:36 Gaia: you dont really have to LOL
22:36 Chaoslitz: >_>
22:36 Gaia: anyways
22:36 Gaia: anything else to change?
22:36 Chaoslitz: nothing ~_~
22:36 Gaia: oky
\:D\\:D||:D||:D//:D/
Ciyus Miapah
dat artist name o.o
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fort wrote:

dat artist name o.o
yea -w-
IamKwaN
Hi there, metadata check as requested.
Reference: http://ansatsu-anime.com/discography/de ... id=1009321
Unicode Artist: 3年E組うた担(渚&茅野&業&磯貝&前原)
Romanised Artist: I can't find any sources about the romanised artist, so normal practice to romanise that would work. '3 Nen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa & Kayano & Karuma & Isogai & Maehara)' sounds more reasonable to me. I will poke KSHR for that before any claims, please wait for a while. C:
Unicode Title: 青春サツバツ論
Romanised Title: Seishun Satsubatsuron (Also leave this to him.)
@KSHR: Here are the booklet images for your reference - http://imgur.com/RVQ9L9v,TpQ4FVr,LRZFXwq,yYL58SL,VfZEzmU,KTmuaAQ,ZBuH8J3,JbQ6WLM
My another two cents here:


Prophecy

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi there, metadata check as requested.
Reference: http://ansatsu-anime.com/discography/de ... id=1009321
Unicode Artist: 3年E組うた担(渚&茅野&業&磯貝&前原)
Romanised Artist: I can't find any sources about the romanised artist, so normal practice to romanise that would work. '3 Nen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa & Kayano & Karuma & Isogai & Maehara)' sounds more reasonable to me. I will poke KSHR for that before any claims, please wait for a while. C:
Unicode Title: 青春サツバツ論
Romanised Title: Seishun Satsubatsuron (Also leave this to him.)
@KSHR: Here are the booklet images for your reference - http://imgur.com/RVQ9L9v,TpQ4FVr,LRZFXwq,yYL58SL,VfZEzmU,KTmuaAQ,ZBuH8J3,JbQ6WLM
My another two cents here:



Hentai Kwan~ xDD
Rizia
as request

[Assassination]
  1. 00:05:231 (3,4) - ctrl+g? better flow
  2. 00:05:642 (1,2) - 我覺得可以拆成兩個兩連打
  3. 00:10:573 (3,4) - 這個距進有點近 可能誤讀成1/4
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:902 (3,1) - 1/1 slider?
call me back
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz
Updated metadata
just wait Gaia to give a rebubble ww
Gaia
K-Kwanyano
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

as request

[Assassination]
  1. 00:05:231 (3,4) - ctrl+g? better flow
  2. 00:05:642 (1,2) - 我覺得可以拆成兩個兩連打 prefer slider o3o
  3. 00:10:573 (3,4) - 這個距進有點近 可能誤讀成1/4
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:902 (3,1) - 1/1 slider?
call me back
others all fixed~
Rizia
qualified.
Nathan
grats my neko

that was quick
Lanturn
On easy: 00:25:573 (1) - ouch that DS. >_<
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Lanturn wrote:

On easy: 00:25:573 (1) - ouch that DS. >_<
ok will soon gg
Rizia

Lanturn wrote:

On easy: 00:25:573 (1) - ouch that DS. >_<
wtf

my fault ;w;

sorry chaoslitz OAO
Prophecy
yay :3

DQ > Find KwaN help you~ Q_Q
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Lanturn wrote:

On easy: 00:25:573 (1) - ouch that DS. >_<

Prophecy wrote:

yay :3
you cant yay ;w;
CPLs
why not put the jap. title in source? or at least on tags (well I know people won't search the jap. name anyway lol)
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

CPLs wrote:

why not put the jap. title in source? or at least on tags (well I know people won't search the jap. name anyway lol)
will put it in tag

please qat come here
Frim4503
contact QAT to DQ this map. then call BN to qualify again
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Frim4503 wrote:

contact QAT to DQ this map. then call BN to qualify again
yea i will

let see how long i need to wait
IamKwaN
Hello, disqualified upon request by the mapper because of spacing fluctuation in Easy.

[Easy]
  1. 00:23:929 (2,1) - The DS soars too much.
It is supposed to be a quick fix, good luck with the requalification!
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

IamKwaN wrote:

Hello, disqualified upon request by the mapper because of spacing fluctuation in Easy.

[Easy]
  1. 00:23:929 (2,1) - The DS soars too much.
It is supposed to be a quick fix, good luck with the requalification!
Thanks a lot :3

updated
edit: I add "暗殺教室" in tags
Lanturn
If you have trouble reaching Gaia/Kawaiwkyik to get this requalified, then feel free to call me. I'm sure you won't have trouble reaching them though.

Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Lanturn wrote:

If you have trouble reaching Gaia/Kawaiwkyik to get this requalified, then feel free to call me. I'm sure you won't have trouble reaching them though.

Good luck :3
oh thanks :3
Rizia
rebubbled
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

rebubbled
<33
Nyukai
No kudosu.

[General]

  1. 00:18:998 - Actually second red point should be here. Fix it :>
    Note: I don't know how to explain it, just catch me in-game and I'll try to explain.
[Easy]

  1. 00:16:532 (3) - You missed a NC here if you add it each two stanzas.
  2. 01:19:820 (3) - Well, if you added NC here in other diffs, why not here?
[Assassination]

  1. 00:49:820 (7) - That clap in blue tick sounds a bit bad, I think you should've added it in white tick especially for consistency lol
  2. 00:54:751 (5,6) - More or less like here, sounds better the clap added in white tick imo. (Same in other cases)
Let me know.
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Inyuschan wrote:

No kudosu.

[General]

  1. 00:18:998 - Actually second red point should be here. Fix it :>
    Note: I don't know how to explain it, just catch me in-game and I'll try to explain.
[Easy]

  1. 00:16:532 (3) - You missed a NC here if you add it each two stanzas.
  2. 01:19:820 (3) - Well, if you added NC here in other diffs, why not here?
[Assassination]

  1. 00:49:820 (7) - That clap in blue tick sounds a bit bad, I think you should've added it in white tick especially for consistency lol as explained
  2. 00:54:751 (5,6) - More or less like here, sounds better the clap added in white tick imo. (Same in other cases) imo using claps in the white tick is weird x.x
Let me know.
others are all fixed ww
Nyukai
Requalified.
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Inyuschan wrote:

Requalified.
>w<

Thanks all people who modded this map

will edit description later :c
Lanturn
Regrats :)

That video though XD
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Lanturn wrote:

Regrats :)

That video though XD
whats wrong? D:
Pho
:)
Lanturn
Nothing. The video is just silly lol.
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Pho wrote:

:)
><

Lanturn wrote:

Nothing. The video is just silly lol.
Lets dance
\:3\ \:3| |:3| |:3/ /:3/
Nyukai

Lanturn wrote:

Nothing. The video is just silly lol.
You scared me.
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Inyuschan wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

Nothing. The video is just silly lol.
You scared me.
same
Taskmaster
Congrats (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑
Bladesu
Gr8 map m8.
Love it!
Rizia

Inyuschan wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

Nothing. The video is just silly lol.
You scared me.
Athrun
Gratz Chao~~
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Athrun wrote:

Gratz Chao~~
thanks ww

just updated the map description =w=

and...



/me runs
Ciyus Miapah
dat #1
Nakano Itsuki

Chaoslitz wrote:

thanks ww

just updated the map description =w=

and...



/me runs
Pro
LOVE AYANO
為什麼沒有動畫?
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