Hey, as requested :3
Facil
00:27:620 (1) - I suggest to move it around x348|y276 to follow (4)'s movement and increase the flow.
00:41:232 (1,2,3) - This kind of pattern on red ticks is very hard for beginners. I remember 2 years ago when I was a newbie, these kind of patterns were very difficult. I suggest to only start sliders on white ticks.
00:49:843 (3,4,5) -You can maybe try to have some blankets here maybe ? It'll looks a bit cleaner.
00:59:009 (1,2,3) - This pattern is also on red ticks, but you can make the sliders starts on white ticks, it's not a problem here since there's always a beat on these notes :
01:20:954 (1) - The curves at the start and the end of the slider are ugly, you need to decrease a bit these curves to makes them looks good :
01:25:398 (4) - If I follow your NC logics, this objects needs to be a new combo
02:10:120 (2,3,4) - This pattern can be on white ticks, it's not a problem here (also the NC need to be on 02:10:120 (2))
02:18:732 (3) - You need to add a NC here
02:27:898 (2,3,4) - Same as above, you should move this on white ticks (and move the NC on 02:27:898 (2))
02:37:620 (1) - This NC should be moved on 02:36:787 (4)
02:44:565 (1) - There's a problem on this slider : the NC should be at 02:45:398. It's important to have something clickable when new combo should start, because it means there's a finish or/and an emphasized beat. I suggest this :
02:54:287 (4) - You should add a NC here.
03:03:176 (4) - ^
03:34:009 (1) - I guess a lot of people will fail here because it starts on a red tick. You should maybe map here 03:33:176
03:56:509 (4) - You need to add a NC here
Intermedio
00:29:287 (1) - This slider isn't placed at the best position since the NC should start at 00:29:843, so I suggest to use 2 circles instead and put the NC on the second one.
00:31:509 (1) - Same problem for this slider.
00:47:343 (3) - You should add a new combo on this slider to follow your NCs logics.
00:56:509 (3,3) - ^
01:18:454 (4) - You need to add a NC on this slider and delete the one at 01:19:565 (1)
01:25:676 (3) - You need to add a NC here too
01:36:232 (4,1) - Same as above, you need to reverse the NC.
01:43:454 (3) - Add another NC here.
02:16:232 (3) - ^
02:25:398 (3) - ^
02:32:621 (1) - You should reverse this slider's curve in my opinion to make its movement goes to 02:33:732 (2), and then it'll increase the flow :
02:47:343 (4) - Add a NC here please, to follow your NC logics
02:54:565 (3) - ^
03:04:010 (3) - ^
03:12:343 (3) - ^
I'm sorry for all these NC suggestions... The combo are a not very logical in this difficulty, and that's the only problem here, that's why there's only suggestion about it ;w;
Dificil
00:23:732 (2,3) - You can maybe try to add a blanket here ?
00:45:676 (2) - I don't really see why you added a hitsound here, there's no emphasized beat on the song so it's quite absurd to add a histound without any reason here
00:55:954 (5) - Still the same problem in this slider : the NC should be on his tail. I suggest to make it a 1/2 slider and add a circle with a NC at 00:56:509.
01:09:565 (3) - Same thing here (but the NC should be on 01:09:843, so maybe add a circle and a 1/2 slider at 01:09:843 with the NC ?)
01:13:176 (4,5) - You can maybe try to make them blanket ?
01:14:009 (5) - Same thing about the NC, it should be at 01:14:287
01:18:454 (5) - Even if the NC should be on 01:18:732, I think it's justified to have this slider on red ticks. But you have to add a NC on it.
01:25:676 (4) - You can also add another NC here
01:31:787 (5) - Here it's more problematic. You need to have the NC on 01:32:065 here.
01:36:509 (4) - Add a new combo here please.
01:43:454 (5) - ^
02:15:120 (4,5,6) - If you look at (5)'s circleoverlay (see the picture below), you'll see the blanket isn't perfect, so try to move (5) or to change a bit the slider.
02:16:232 (6) - Add a NC here to follow your NC logics please.
02:20:676 (4) - ^
02:34:009 (6) - ^
02:38:454 (5) - ^
02:42:898 (6) - ^
02:47:343 (6) - ^
02:54:565 (3) - ^
03:00:676 (6) - ^
03:05:120 (4) - ^
03:12:343 (5) - ^
Many NCs here which doesn't follow your logics, and I think it's important to follow the same NC pattern on the whole diff.
03:36:232 (5) - NC here
03:40:676 (5) - ^
03:45:398 (4) - ^
03:49:009 (3) - ^
03:54:009 (4) - ^
03:58:454 (4) - ^
04:03:176 (5) - ^
04:06:787 (3) - ^
Same as in the Normal, I noticed a lot of NC issues. The map is really good and polished, there's only the NCs you have to fix
Good luck for rank :3