1. Hard (2.57 stars, 185 notes)
2. Kibbleru's Easy (1.16 stars, 75 notes)
3. Normal (1.51 stars, 111 notes)

[Mapset]

Kibbleru's Easy by Kibbleru : Done
Normal by eINess : Done
Hard by eINess : Done

Mod History

Sal32
Pho
Fast
Yuzu-
Julie
[Kamiya]
starvfox
HouseForever
smallboat
Ace3DF
------- re mapping --------
ikari_kyon
Tari
mangocurry
Hollow Wings
HabiHolic
Regraz
ts8zs
Kawaiwkyik
tutuhaha
IamKwaN : Quickly Check
Konei :
Konei :
smallboat :
alacat :
alacat : rebubbled
IamKwan : requalified

paseli wrote:

Generally, you should start sliders in the upbeats of the song, not downbeats. Try to tap the rhythm, you'll hear them out.
Also, do distance snap in the easier maps, the beginners will be thankful for this. The hard and insane map could need DS at certain crucial parts as well.

[Easy]
00:11:902 (1) - make spinner end on next white tick
01:02:741 (3) - i find this to be quite 'hard' for an easy BM, you may want to replace it. Orientate at 1/1 or 1/2 beat snap, you don't want cirles on blue ticks.
01:10:069 (4) - add circle here

01:04:115 (4) - smaller and start at next white tick
00:00:910 (1,2,1) - both slider start at next white tick, you shouldn't start exactly when he starts to sing. Make the last slider smaller
01:17:855 (2,3,4) - push them to the next white tick
01:21:519 (1,2) - This sounds odd. You should replace it with circle-slider-circle.
01:24:267 (1) - Better delete this, there is no sound after your last timing point. xD

[Normal]

Similar to the easy one.

[Hard]
00:06:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - You may want to rework this, the placement a bit chaotic.
00:37:322 (4,1,2) - place with distance snap (DS). But i would try something like this out http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1518300
01:13:275 (8) - would end the backslider at this place
01:15:336 (2,3,4,1,2) - rework this. Here's just a proposal
01:23:351 (2) - rework, it doesn't fit to the rhythm
01:21:519 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - rework, it doesn't sound good at all. and delete the spinner

[Insane]

Won't review much here cause I did in the other BM's already. It sounds pretty good, only a few flaws:

00:19:459 - Either circle or mini-slider (i prefer the latter).
01:21:977 - would add a circle here.
00:39:612 (1) - slider-circle instead of only slider?
00:44:879 (1,1,1) - maybe at this places as well, but this is just my own opinion


Good job till now, gl with your map! :3

Drodie wrote:

thanks for making this i love this song!

Fast wrote:

irc

15:54 Fast: ㅁ
15:57 Fast: 저
15:57 Einess: 넵?
15:57 Fast: 키아이타임을
15:58 Fast: 00:56:329 -  여기서부터 시작하는건 어떠세요
15:58 Einess: 모든난이도요?
15:58 Fast: 네
15:58 Einess: 슬라이더 중간에 껴있는데 괜찮아요 그래도?
15:58 Fast: 안바꾸셔도되요
15:58 Fast: 인세인에서
15:59 Fast: 00:55:413 (3) - 여기서 박자가 딱 끝나는데 슬라를넣어서
15:59 Fast: 뭔가 부자연스럽네요
15:59 Fast: 00:55:642 - 여기까지 슬라가 이어지는것도아니고 그냥 노트로 바꿔주셔도 무난해보여요
15:59 Einess: 해볼꼐요 ㄳㄳ
16:00 Einess: 오옹....
16:00 Einess: 사스가 fast 님...
16:00 Fast: 게다가
16:00 Fast: http://puu.sh/8eE4U.jpg 동선도 자연스럽게가다가
16:01 Fast: 마지막가기전에 갑자기 바뀌네요
16:01 Fast: 00:55:184 (2) - 를 컨트롤 G ?
16:01 Einess: 컨트롤 G는 뭐에요?
16:01 Fast: 슬라의 시작부분과
16:01 Fast: 끝 위치를
16:02 Fast: 반대로 
16:02 Fast: 00:57:359 (6) -  이거하고
16:03 Fast: 00:57:474 (1) -  이거
16:03 Fast: 사이 거리가 너무 멀어오 
16:03 Fast: 00:56:901 (2,3,4,5,6) -  이 스트림을 00:57:474 (1) - 여기에 맞게 이어주시던지 00:57:474 (1) -  이거의 위치를 옮겨주세요
16:04 Fast: 그리고 00:55:871 - 01:10:527 -  여기 빨간선은 그렇게 필요하지않는것같은데 없애주셔도될것같아요
16:04 Einess: 으음 괜찮군....
16:05 Einess: KiAi time 을 1개로 만들라고요?
16:05 Fast: 하나로하시든
16:06 Fast: 두개로하시는
16:06 Fast: 상관없어요
16:06 Einess:  1분10초꺼를 없에는게 낳겟다 그럼 
16:06 Fast: 초록색선으로도
16:06 Fast: 키아이설정할수있는데..
16:07 Einess: 어..
16:07 Einess: 만들떄는 않됐었던데 뭐지 ..
16:07 Fast: 비디오크기도 줄여주세요
16:07 Fast: 너무커요
16:08 Fast: Hana no Uta 난이도는 ai모드에 있는거 다 걸러주시면될거같고
16:08 Fast: (컨트롤 쉬프트 A)
16:08 Fast: 하드난이도는 그리드를 큰걸로해서그런지
16:08 Fast: 디스턴스가 엉망이네요 ..
16:08 Fast: 컸다가 작았다가 
16:09 Einess: 조정해볼꼐요 ㄳㄳ
16:09 Einess: 근데 컨트롤 쉬프트 A 했는데 ai모드가 어떤거에요?
16:09 Fast: 그냥 
16:09 Fast: 거깃는건
16:09 Fast: 되도록이면 다 그 설명대로 해주는게좋아요
16:10 Fast: ai(봇)이 체크해주는거에요
16:10 Einess: 아.
16:10 Fast: 나머지는 시간이없어서 못하겠네요
16:10 Einess: 아 이정도면충분해요 ! ㄳ

good luck.

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ M4M

Easy

1- You're mapping the whole first part before the spinner by the singer's voice. It's not really following the song, and I don't like it. You should really remap that.

Not really much to say about this. It's an easy difficulty, doesn't seem to be problematic for new players to go through.

Normal

1- Again, you're mapping the first part by the singer's voice. Same for Easy. If you aren't going to remove it, then give 00:02:284 (2,3,4,5,6) - a more curved flow into 00:04:574 (1) - .
2- Hmm, 00:43:047 (3,4) - might just be a tiny bit more complicated for newer players.
3- ^ again, here 00:48:543 (1,2) - . Inverting this slider horizontally and making it blanket the circle slightly would make it pretty~ Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1527289
4- 00:58:161 (2,3,4,5) - Leave 2 and 3 as circles, start a slider where 4 is and end it on the end of 5. 1/2 sliders are... meh.

Hard

1- Same as for Easy and Normal.
2- 00:46:711 (3,4,5) - maybe put a circle in the red tick next to 3, shorten it so that it won't reverse once and it will sound good. Like this: http://puu.sh/8eYgN.png Choose the placement as you see fit, it's an easy situation
3- 01:02:970 (1,2) - I like the sound of it more if I do it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1527347

Insane

1- Same as Easy, Normal and Insane.
2- 00:19:001 (4) - This is better off being a circle.
3- Add a circle here 00:20:719 (5) - , it fits better as a stream because of your previous patterns
4- 00:55:871 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels weird, you should check it again.
5- 01:22:206 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Same for ^, maybe a stream into those sliders if you really want them. It'd look something like this on the timeline (Please, ignore the placement, it was random): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1527375

Hana no Uta

1- Same for all the other difficulties.
2- Overall: you use maybe a bit too many 1/4, which some of them don't sound good at all. It's an "extra" (?) difficulty, the jumps aren't too complicated and are easy to read, so just look around and try to improve the sound a bit more. Some streams are a bit too big as well and don't sound as good as they could, like 00:24:039 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , where I'd remove 7 or 00:32:284 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - also removing 7

In overall, I don't like the first part on your maps because they're mapped on the singer's voice. If you are going to change it, the offset of the song will become 1368. Also, I don't think I've seen you use Distance Snap at all, not even in the easier difficulities! It's weird for me, I haven't modded many of those (I don't even know if they're accepted), but it's not REALLY hard to play.

I'm done, waiting for M4M~

Kenssai wrote:

M4M, I forgot which one you wanted to do xD
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/164930 or http://osu.ppy.sh/s/166638

[Easy]
You should recheck on the spacing, like some part have 1,2x distance spacind and some 1,6x.
I think it should be respected in the whole easy level.
00:11:902 (1,1) - give them more time to retablish (I might be using the wrong words) Some beginners tend to do huge spinner, so they might not have time to get for the next note in a short amount of time
01:16:481 (1) - end it to the next red tick

[Normal]
Should recheck spacing
01:15:565 (3) - move this to 01:15:794

[Hard]
00:05:032 (3) - slider should start here 00:04:803
00:24:039 (4,5) - switch those 2 places, I think it sound better that way
00:27:703 (4,5) - how about, slider start at 00:27:703 to 00:27:932, and add circle at 00:28:161 and 00:28:390
01:00:680 (2) - stop it at red tick instead of white, and add a circle on the white tick
01:12:817 (1) - take off one reverse so it should stop at 01:13:275
01:13:733 (2) - start the slider at 01:13:504 to 01:13:962
01:19:916 (2) - stop this at 01:20:374
01:20:603 - add circle here
01:20:832 (3) - replace it by a slider to 01:21:290

[Insane]
00:03:658 (4) - move this to 00:03:887, can make it longer to blue tick, and add a circle at 00:03:658
00:04:574 (1) - I supose you're trying to match the singer here? slider should start at 00:04:803 to 00:05:375, add a circle at 00:04:574 and 00:05:490
00:06:406 (5) - slider at 00:06:635 to 00:07:093 and add a circle 00:06:406
00:32:742 (2) - I rather put 2 circles then a slider if that's ok haha xD
00:33:200 (3) - replace by a circle at 00:33:200 and a slider starting at 00:33:429
00:56:901 (2,3,4,5,6) - carefull about the spacing on this stream
01:09:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^, you could try to curve the whole stream
01:21:977 (2,3,4,1) - maybe switch 3 and 4 places, because the spacing feel weird here xD

[Hana no Uta]
00:07:780 - I hear some music here, instead of circle because 00:06:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) this kinda match the voice, you could add a slider to 00:08:009
00:33:658 - I hear some music here but is your choice if you want to match the singer voice xD
00:40:986 - ^
01:20:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - lower the 2 so it curve better

Sniif I didn't know it was a yozukara no quartet map, wanted to make a GD T^T

[Kamiya] wrote:

안녕~~~
insane
00:19:230 (5,1) - 간격을 조금 벌려 주셈
00:59:535 (1,2) - 자리 맞춤
01:00:222 (3,4) - ^
01:04:802 (1,2) - 거리좀 가깝음
01:19:000 (5,6) - ^

이 beatmap 그러게 만들면 췹지 않냐 ?ㅋ

GJ

Einess wrote:

[Kamiya] wrote:

안녕~~~
insane
00:19:230 (5,1) - 간격을 조금 벌려 주셈
00:59:535 (1,2) - 자리 맞춤
01:00:222 (3,4) - ^
01:04:802 (1,2) - 거리좀 가깝음
01:19:000 (5,6) - ^

이 beatmap 그러게 만들면 췹지 않냐 ?ㅋ

GJ

모딩 해주신건 감사한데... 오타랑 반말 좀 자제해주실래요? ^^

starvfox wrote:

SPOILER

Insane
Ehmmm Only AR8? Why not AR9 OR 10? it's ok~ Hana no Uta is AR9 xD
01:03:886 New combo here fix it
01:06:176 same as above fix it
01:23:809 delete this spinners fix it

HouseForever wrote:

MOD4MOD here

EASY:

00:04:574 (1) Better begin this at 00:05:032 it's ok
00:06:864 (3) Better let this end at 00:07:551 fix it
00:27:016 (2,1) Increase the distance between 2 and 1, a short distance could irritate a beginner... just ok i think
01:01:367 (2,3,4) Maybe this rythm is too hard for a beginner it ok

The beginning as a whole could be a bit difficult for a beginner, because of the rythm and the placement of the hitcircles and slider... The rest is really good!

NORMAL:

00:00:910 (1,2) Increase distance fix it
00:04:574 (5,6,7) Increase distance ;D fix it
00:06:406 (7,1,2) DEcrease distance... Nobody would think that the timing between 7 and 1 is so short... fix it
01:03:428 (3,1,2) Order them in a way, so that the player can see, how it is to play rhytmical. I think there should be used Distance Snap...

Again the beginning is a little bit strange; the rest is very good


HARD:

Hm... I cant give u tips for single parts here...
The rythm itself is very well done!
BUT you really HAVE to use Distance-Snap (U activate it with Alt), because the notes are kind of random placed on the map. This irritates a player and he cant get the rythm you want to show him...

thanks

INSANE:

Same as at hard For example Parts like 00:40:528 (3,4,5) have to be closer with decreased distance...

Everything is very good, but the adjustement of the notes is kind of bad in hard and insane... You should go over hard and insane with distance snap (you can activate it below the hitsounds) to make your beatmap MUCH better ;-)

thanks

HANA NO UTA:

Here the distances are managed much better, but for example the parts, in which you use a lot of small sliders have to be coordinated new, because its not really possible to jump so fast. If you wanna use such big distances, then you should look after a same distance between every slider

thanks

All in all the betamap is going to be quiet good, if you arrange the distances between the notes in hard,insane and parts of hana no uta new. Otherwise its incalculable to play if you dont know the map... ;-)

smallboat wrote:

Random #modreq

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.Video offset are not consistent,check the Insane diff.true number is "-180" ,not "-268". fix it
2.You fotgot add " [Hebe] " tag, becauase he help you do insane diff,so the guest diff mapper need to add in tag.
i writen wrong i make map but clear by [Hebe]
3.Background need 800x600 size or 1024 (1366) x768 size,this is too small. fix it
4.Add a slidertslide mute the slidersound? This front part is soft part,shouldn"t have noisy sound. fix it
5.Disable the Widescreen Support and during break on all of the difficulties since it's not needed. fix it

[Easy] DS need keep consistent at Easy and Nm diff.Make beginner play to easy.(Rank rule) well.. fix it sorry

00:03:200 (2,1) - DS need keep consistent. (Keep 1.2x)
00:06:864 (3,1) - ^
00:08:238 (2,3) - ^
00:09:841 (1) - ^
00:14:192 (1) - ^
00:25:184 (2,1) - ^ (Later have many DS not consistent at behind.I just point out here first.)
fix it

Have many Ds problem at this diff,suggest fix it.

[Normal] Suggest keep 1.2 or 1.3x DS here.

00:04:57 4 (5) - NC
00:05:948 (6) - The same reason,why not keep consistent DS here? This cause hard to read here.
00:16:940 (3) - Cancel clap?
00:19:230 (2) - DS,This cause hard to read here,too.
00:44:879 (1) - ^
00:48:543 (1) - ^
00:53:581 (2,3,4) - ^
01:02:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:08:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - This not hard diff,so don"t change DS here. i think it ok ~
fix it

[Hard] Suggest AR+1 for diff average.

00:43:505 (3) - End add clap?
00:57:932 (4) - Head add clap?
01:02:970 (9) - This combo a bit long ,add NC?
01:10:756 (2) - Downbeat add finish.
01:23:580 (2) - ^
fix it
[Insane] This is a guest diff,this diff name should be named "Hebe"s Insane" is true (this is rank rule) changed

00:21:520 (1) - Check Aimod have unrankable element.
00:24:497 (3,4,5,6,7) - This hitsound noisy,cancel 00:24:612 (4,5,6) clap,sound is good better who I think.
00:25:184 (1) - Downbeat add finish.
00:46:253 (4) - Add clap is good better.
01:23:809 (3) - Have a vocal ,forget add note (add finish) here?
fix it
[Hana no Uta]

00:10:184 (4,5) - Stream keep consistent DS.
00:41:902 (2) - Stack 00:40:757 (7) ?
00:55:871 (1) - Downbeat add finish in end.
01:10:527 (1) - ^ in head.
01:18:084 (5) - ^
01:23:351 (1) - ^
01:23:809 (3) - Have a vocal ,forget add note (add finish) here?

fix it

GL.

Kibbleru wrote:

from timing queue thing idk

i think you actually have the downbeat wrong for your offset, the offset should be 1431

(ps you are allowed to have notes before the first red point)

Ace3DF wrote:

For Hana no Uta:-

Personally I don't think having these suit it at all
00:00:910 (1,2,3,4)
00:09:841 (1,2,3,4)
00:17:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4)
00:21:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:24:039 (2,3,4,5,6)

While this one fits well 00:29:764 (9,10,11)

It just doesn't flow well

ikari_kyon wrote:

Hihi, for the record: I'm a 2012 school mapper/modder and I'm not very used to this new mapping style yet, keep in mind this I may not be helpful.
With that said, lets do this

-There is no "Download witouth video" link, try full submision your map again~
-Wrong offset, try -454 (-10 on current) and add an extra timing point at 14190. Yes, the song have a bpm reset.

[Hard]

1. 00:13:754 (5) - wow the guitar slash or whatever sounds good with the whistle!, try adding a finish to the end of the slider, you may like it
2. 00:34:800 (2) - normal sampleset for the start? dunno sounds annoying here
3. 00:48:083 (6,7) - add whistles to the end of this, they point really well to the next finish

Not much to say here, soft patterns and nice hitsounding~

[Normal]

1. 00:46:731 (1) - maybe remove the whistle on the end, as suggested on [Hard] the 2 whistles are enough to point to the next finish

all fixed!!

SPOILER

OMG how he did that

lol

that is all from me, gl!

Why the hell nobody kudo star this? geez, have one from me

1. 00:01:388 (1) - Reduce the volume of the notes here , its only vocals and no instrument, and so the volume of notes shouldn't be that loud, I think 45% volume here is best.
2. 00:14:212 (1) - Hi Kibbs, this is just a reminder for u to not use such 3/4 sliders in this diff, since most of the beats are particularly in white ticks, and using such rhythms like these just makes it hard for beginners, extend this to the white tick :3 (orz RIP puush)
3. 00:16:044 (3) - Same ^
4. 00:27:036 (1) - ^, pretty much all of them.
5. 00:58:181 (2) - This one is acceptable, but definitely not the one at 01:00:014 (1) - , could be extended.
6. 01:17:647 (3) - For this note, I really like how the drum-clap sounds here, totally optional but I would like if you added it here :3 (and maybe decrease volume too for just this note)

1. 00:01:388 (1) - Reduce volume of notes too like said in easy, too strong for just the vocals here.
2. 00:16:044 (3,4) - Rhythm, here is a little complex. could be simplified to something like what you did at 01:03:449 (3,4,5) - , personally I find it fit more than previous one.
3. 00:19:708 (3,4,5) - ^
4. 00:31:617 (2,3) - Replace them with two circles is better here imo.
5. 01:05:739 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:21:540 (1,2,3) - Well, seems they are symmetrical, but would make the symmetrical pattern more beautiful if you center them in the grid, not needed but should makes this look nicer.

1. 00:56:120 (5) - I feel it would make the map more fun if you increased DS in this note, so jump to first note in kiai will be more shown, and make play experience interesting.

Tari wrote:

hi , cool song. let's mod // haiiiiii~

[Normal]

1. 00:01:388 (1) - Reduce volume of notes too like said in easy, too strong for just the vocals here.
   // I think it's okay now. Seems to be awkward around the change. owo
2. 00:16:044 (3,4) - Rhythm, here is a little complex. could be simplified to something like what you did at 01:03:449 (3,4,5) - , personally I find it fit more than previous one. // I do not want to change a good idea to have the best right now. but chage 01:03:449 (3,4,5) this part. thanks!!
3. 00:19:708 (3,4,5) - ^ // ^
4. 00:31:617 (2,3) - Replace them with two circles is better here imo. // nice. xD fixed!
5. 01:05:739 (1,2) - ^ // ^
6. 00:21:540 (1,2,3) - Well, seems they are symmetrical, but would make the symmetrical pattern more beautiful if you center them in the grid, not needed but should makes this look nicer. I guess? lol fixed!!

[Hard]

1. 00:56:120 (5) - I feel it would make the map more fun if you increased DS in this note, so jump to first note in kiai will be more shown, and make play experience interesting. // ok.

Easy and hard are great, Normal needs some work on the rhythms though.

Good Luck!

mangocurry wrote:

다른사람도 이해해야될부분은 영어쓸게요. 몇몇 벳하고 모더들은 예전 포스팅도 읽는듯하니.

[General]
*get rid of typo—put space between ミand the bracket in title. (이게 오타일지는 모르지만, title부분에 “ツキヨミ(TV Size)” 라고 되있는데 ミ랑 괄호 사이에 스페이스바 넣으세요. Tokohana와같이 랭크된 맵은 그렇게 되어있습니다.)
//이런 실수를... Fixed!

[Hard]
[*Timing/composition/flow]
Rhythm feels blank for hard. I’ll suggest some ways to fill in the gaps:
(박자가 하드치곤 비어있는 느낌. 이렇게 하면 어떨까요?)
* 00:01:388 (1) –http://puu.sh/clZew.jpg (노멀에 쓴 리듬이랑 비슷하니 좀더 재밌게 만들어야될듯.)
* 00:44:899 – to 00:47:647- http://puu.sh/cm09G.jpg (여기선 의견이 분분해지네요. 고의인건 알지만… 더 경험있는 분한테 이대로가 좋을지 물어보세요)
*00:49:937 (3) –만약 인센만들고 있다면 이부분에 3/4슬라이더 넣어도 될듯?
* 00:59:556 (1,2) –(1) 말고 (2)에 뉴콤. 01:14:670 (1) –에 했듯이. // Fixed!

이외의 나머지 의견들은 난이도 비율을 생각하면 언랭요소로 바뀌기 떄문에 스킵하겠습니다. 인센을 않만들거든요 ㅎ

[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
Good

[*hit-sounds]
00:41:464 (1) – 리버스 부분에 normal hitfinish넣는게 어떨까요. 00:38:029 (1) – 에 했듯이.
//앞부분은 원래 피니쉬가 오는 위치에 있고 피니쉬 소리가 약간 약하기떄문에 노멀피니쉬 사용했습니다. 그 뒤부분은 피니쉬 올자리가 아니고 소리가 약하기떄문에 사용하지 않겠습니다.

[Normal]

[*Timing/composition/ flow]
Again, some parts need to be filled in.
00:02:762 – 노트 넣으세요. // 하드랑 맞추기 위해서 넣지않았습니다.
01:18:792 (2,3) – 은 01:16:273 (3,4) –에서 했듯이01:19:479 –에 노트 넣으세요.// 뒤에 박자와의 리듬을 맞추기위해서 고려는 해보곘지만 일단은 바꾸지않겠습니다.

[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
Good
[*hitsounds]
Good

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

NO KD

General

1. i think ur timing's not good, ask at least one bat to check it further more. ok

Hard

1. 00:38:029 (1) - remove finish hs at the head. no need to set that heavy hs there, song's part here's quiet in original track. but i think u can add finish hs at 00:41:464 (1) - of its arrow's tick, for there's a downbeat here and crash hs in original song's track as well.
2. most of ur finish hs r too loud if u over use them to give ur original hs style, try to low down the volume by single in ur audio software.

actually ur map's good to me

good luck

1. 00:01:388 (1,2) - 이거 보컬에 맞추는게 좋지 않을까요.?
2. 00:13:067 (4) - 끝부분에 휘슬이 노멀인데 별로 어울리지 않는다고 생각해요 그냥 드럼으로 바꾸시는게 어떠신지
3. 00:16:044 (3,4) - 좀 흐름이 이상한데 00:16:960 (5) - 이거랑 리듬이랑 패턴 똑같이 하시는건 어떠신가요
4. 00:46:731 (1) - 모양이 좀 이상하네요 자연스럽게 보이기위한 제안이니 한번 사진 보세요
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:05:281 (6,1) - 1번 노트 지우고 6번슬라를 1번있는곳까지 늘리는게 좋을듯요. 지금껀 어색하기도 해서 지적해봐요
6. 01:14:441 (6) - 머리에 피니쉬는 별로 안어울리네요. 그냥 휘슬로 바꾸시는건 어떠신지
7. 01:14:441 (6,1) - 뉴콤 체인지

Regraz wrote:

Hi! ein-san!

Normal

• 
  Rhythm:

1. 00:08:029 (1,2,3) - Hmm, about this part,The long slider you used covered to many vocals but you se single notes at 00:08:029 (1,2) - . Which is a bit imbalance imo. try this one? http://puu.sh/cqMuG/aad95e07cd.jpg
2. 00:10:319 (6) - http://puu.sh/cqMyp/0e6acb96f9.jpg Overlooking the vocal at 00:11:006 is not good imo.
3. 01:21:540 (1) - Just a suggestion...From my personal perspective, I'd rather make this into notes coz spinnerhere seems not appropriate.
   Structure:
4. 00:04:823 (2) - Why not create a blanket here? http://puu.sh/cqMcA/dd8f5650d4.jpg
5. 00:21:540 (1,3) - Make your curve at the place of Clap to provide more hit-feeling. // Just I want use long slider. so keep it know.
6. 00:45:357 (5,6,1) - Try this kind of overlap, it is more flow-friendly. http://puu.sh/cqMOW/636aaa71b5.jpg
7. 00:49:937 (2,3) - Avoid this overlap.
   Hitsounds
8. 01:14:441 (6) - You can make the volume of the Finishes rise higher little by little, sudden finshes here in the same volume sound weird.
   Others:
9. Uncheck wide-screen support if you wont put a storyboard.

Nice map, good luck on ranking! :3

HabiHolic wrote:

Alright Normal diff only modding here

[Normal]

1. 00:01:388 (1,2) - 이거 보컬에 맞추는게 좋지 않을까요.? /하드랑 맞추다보니..ㅎ
2. 00:13:067 (4) - 끝부분에 휘슬이 노멀인데 별로 어울리지 않는다고 생각해요 그냥 드럼으로 바꾸시는게 어떠신지 / ^
3. 00:16:044 (3,4) - 좀 흐름이 이상한데 00:16:960 (5) - 이거랑 리듬이랑 패턴 똑같이 하시는건 어떠신가요
4. 00:46:731 (1) - 모양이 좀 이상하네요 자연스럽게 보이기위한 제안이니 한번 사진 보세요 // 지금도 괜찮아보여서 일단 않바꾸겠습니다.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:05:281 (6,1) - 1번 노트 지우고 6번슬라를 1번있는곳까지 늘리는게 좋을듯요. 지금껀 어색하기도 해서 지적해봐요
6. 01:14:441 (6) - 머리에 피니쉬는 별로 안어울리네요. 그냥 휘슬로 바꾸시는건 어떠신지 // 소리 줄였어요!
   
7. 01:14:441 (6,1) - 뉴콤 체인지

랭크 힘내세욧!

ts8zs wrote:

FIX BG PLZ

Use this rhythm

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55891
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 0.8999999

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Title:Tsukiyomi (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ツキヨミ (TV Size)
Artist:phatmans after school
ArtistUnicode:phatmans after school
Creator:eINess
Version:Use this rhythm
Source:「夜桜四重奏 ～ハナノウタ～」
Tags:ending Kibbleru Yozakura Quartet: Hana no Uta
BeatmapID:404902
BeatmapSetID:166579

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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1. 00:08:029 (1,2,5,6) - those stack maybe too hard for beginner

1. 00:32:533 - sampleset auto whistle?

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:08:029 (1,2,5,6) - those stack maybe too hard for beginner

[Hard]

1. 00:32:533 - sampleset auto whistle?

sorry, nothing to say :3
great map great song

Kibbleru wrote:

the rhythm you gave me will require me to use a 1/2 gap in easy which is a bit eh. and i think the only akward thing in my rhythm is that 3/2 gap but there isnt anything better i can put there

ts8zs wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

the rhythm you gave me will require me to use a 1/2 gap in easy which is a bit eh. and i think the only akward thing in my rhythm is that 3/2 gap but there isnt anything better i can put there

No,it is for Normal XD
sorry :3

1. Add an audio lead-in. Something like 1000 should be good.
   
   
2. Would be cool to move your preview point to 00:55:777 - so it won't start in the middle of the vocals.
   
   
3. Offset like -10? Feels much better to me.

1. 00:04:594 (3) - This spacing is quite confusing, consider increasing it since this antijump thingy isn't really sensefull here.
2. 00:38:487 (2) - Using 1/1 here doesn't really fit your previous rhythms, which were quite close to the vocals, consider making this 1/2 shorter and adding a circle.
3. 00:41:464 (1) - Having the heavy beat on the repeat is not really good here, since you can't click it and therefore won't have the emphasis.
4. 01:00:014 (1) - Removing the finish here would give a much better emphasis to the following and the previous finish, like less is more in this case.
5. 01:01:388 (1) - Remove the NC here, it's inconsistent with your pattern.
6. 01:20:166 (1) - Remove this one aswell for the same reason.

1. 00:01:388 (1,2) - Might be better to remove those whistles from the ends, the high guitars you're trying to catch are on the red ticks.
2. 00:05:052 (2) - Add a whistle to the start to follow the high guitar as previously?
3. 00:41:235 (6) - Replace the clap by a whistle on the head? Sounds more like a bass than a snare. Also you might want to add a finish to the end to follow the cymbals.
4. 00:54:059 (1) - I would like you to map the Spinner out, it's a bit short for a Normal and also this seems perfectly mappable.
5. 01:01:159 (4,5,6) - Stacking three objects seems quite harsh, better to replace those circles by an 1/2 Slider.
6. 01:20:166 (4) - Sounds weird since you follow the vocals mostly in the KIAI, better to replace this by a circle.

1. 00:38:029 (1) - Since there is no enduring sound in the music I'd prefer a whistle on the head.
2. 01:00:014 (1) - Same as for Hard, I think removing this finish will give a nicer emphasis to the previous and next one.
3. 01:09:174 (3) - I'd actually prefer an 1/1 Slider plus circle here so you could catch the drums to build up more emphasis for the next part but it's just a suggestion.

Konei wrote:

As you requested.

[General]

1. Add an audio lead-in. Something like 1000 should be good. ok.
   
   
2. Would be cool to move your preview point to 00:55:777 - so it won't start in the middle of the vocals. If you say so ' ㅅ'
   
   
3. Offset like -10? Feels much better to me. ok!! :3

[Hard]

1. 00:04:594 (3) - This spacing is quite confusing, consider increasing it since this antijump thingy isn't really sensefull here.
2. 00:38:487 (2) - Using 1/1 here doesn't really fit your previous rhythms, which were quite close to the vocals, consider making this 1/2 shorter and adding a circle.
3. 00:41:464 (1) - Having the heavy beat on the repeat is not really good here, since you can't click it and therefore won't have the emphasis.
   well.. I think it ok. If re-make this part , break follow I guess. so keep it know.
4. 01:00:014 (1) - Removing the finish here would give a much better emphasis to the following and the previous finish, like less is more in this case.
5. 01:01:388 (1) - Remove the NC here, it's inconsistent with your pattern.
6. 01:20:166 (1) - Remove this one aswell for the same reason.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:388 (1,2) - Might be better to remove those whistles from the ends, the high guitars you're trying to catch are on the red ticks.
2. 00:05:052 (2) - Add a whistle to the start to follow the high guitar as previously?
3. 00:41:235 (6) - Replace the clap by a whistle on the head? Sounds more like a bass than a snare. Also you might want to add a finish to the end to follow the cymbals.
4. 00:54:059 (1) - I would like you to map the Spinner out, it's a bit short for a Normal and also this seems perfectly mappable.
5. 01:01:159 (4,5,6) - Stacking three objects seems quite harsh, better to replace those circles by an 1/2 Slider.
6. 01:20:166 (4) - Sounds weird since you follow the vocals mostly in the KIAI, better to replace this by a circle.

Quite neat mapset, Easy is nice.

Feel free to call me back for a recheck when you've checked this.

Konei wrote:

As you requested.


[Kibbleru's Easy]

1. 00:38:029 (1) - Since there is no enduring sound in the music I'd prefer a whistle on the head. there already is a whistle tho o-o but i did remove finish if thats what you meant?
2. 01:00:014 (1) - Same as for Hard, I think removing this finish will give a nicer emphasis to the previous and next one. k
3. 01:09:174 (3) - I'd actually prefer an 1/1 Slider plus circle here so you could catch the drums to build up more emphasis for the next part but it's just a suggestion. mm i prefer what i have

Quite neat mapset, Easy is nice.

Feel free to call me back for a recheck when you've checked this.

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:ツキヨミ (TV Size)
Artist:phatmans after school
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Creator:eINess
Version:Kibbleru's Easy
Source:「夜桜四重奏 ～ハナノウタ～」
Tags:ending Kibbleru Yozakura Quartet: Hana no Uta
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1. Preview point is not snapped, please snap it.

1. 01:01:159 (4,5,6) - Stacking three objects seems quite harsh, better to replace those circles by an 1/2 Slider. <- this issue hasn't been addressed.

Kibbleru wrote:

fyi this does not necessairly need to be snapped, some poeple prefer having it slightly early to get the full vocal.

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

OvO

1. 01:10:538 (8,9,1) - You've made a triple stack again, I don't think they're fair used in a Normal, please change to an 1/2 Slider.
2. 01:17:637 (6,7,1) - Same as above.

Tari wrote:

Well brackets (」) are unneeded in source, they are not part of anime name. should remove them.

1. Some missed htsound fixed in Kibbleru's easy
2. Adjust the background make clear
3. Fix some NC in his diff set