Hello there
I like FELT's song <3

[General]
fine

[Lunatic]
Edited:Sorry I didn't see that you haven't finished Lunatic yet but you can take my mod for some ideas
00:02:187 (2,4) - Add whistle
00:03:531 (5,6) - Clap at the end
00:05:322 (1) - ^
00:09:351 (2) - Ctrl+G ?
00:36:889 (5) - NC
00:40:471 (4,1) - Swap NC
00:58:157 (1) - Delete NC and NC 00:58:381 (2) -
01:05:545 - Add note and delete 01:05:657 (8) -
01:35:545 - How about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1782437
01:48:307 (1,2) - Stack ?
01:48:978 (3,4,5) - DS should consistent here
01:58:493 (2,3) - How about don't stack.The flow feel weird for me
02:18:307 (4,8) - Stack perfect
02:23:232 (1) - Move to x=451 y=181 for triangle with 02:22:784 (5,6) -
02:41:366 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1782458
02:48:083 (1,2) - Stack
02:48:978 (1,2) - ^
02:54:463 (5) - How about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1782404
03:01:963 (5) - NC
03:03:307 (4,5) - Don't stack ?
03:06:889 (2) - Ctrl+J ?
03:23:344 (5,6) - How about increase the spacing here a little bit?
03:25:023 (5) - Ctrl+G ? If yes apply to 03:28:606 (5) - and 03:32:188 (5) - too
03:56:590 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:58:493 (2,3) -
04:06:441 (4,5) - Something simillar to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1782486
04:31:963 (6) - NC
04:40:471 (5,6,7) - Same as 01:58:493 (2,3) -
I think I will skip the hitsound mod or it will be too much mod

[Hard]
Since I don't find problem with the pattern on this diff so I take this diff as hitsound mod
00:01:740 (1) - Whistle at the end
00:02:635 (2) - ^
00:03:531 (3) - ^
00:04:426 (4) - ^
00:05:322 (1) - Clap at the end
00:06:217 (2) - ^
00:07:113 (3) - ^
00:08:008 (4) - ^
00:08:904 (1) - ^
00:12:486 (1) - ^
00:13:157 (2) - Whistle at the end
00:13:493 (3) - ^
00:13:829 (4) - Whistle at the head
00:14:053 (5) - ^
00:35:769 (1) - Delete clap it feel sudden for me
00:41:142 - How about this? http://puu.sh/9WrRi/0d7030d13d.jpg
00:41:926 (2) - Delete clap it feel sudden for me
00:43:045 (1) - Delete clap at the head
00:44:277 (4) - Delete clap
00:52:337 (2) - At the end delete clap
00:56:254 (3) - Replace clap with whistle
01:22:337 (1) - Delete clap
01:22:784 (3) - ^ at the end
01:24:911 (3) - Replace clap with whistle and whistle slider's way
01:44:053 (1,2,3) - Whistle all
01:44:948 (4) - Whistle head and slider's way
04:10:695 - to 04:11:590 - How about add some notes?
I will mod hitsounds from the start to the first kiai and let you try to organize the rest
You don't have to follow my hitsounds mod.It's my first time modding the hitsounds

[Normal]
00:14:725 (2) - Move to x=300 y=184
00:24:128 (2) - Move to x=252 y=284 . If changed modifier 00:25:023 (1) - too
00:57:710 (2) - Move to x=312 y=320
01:21:889 (4) - NC
01:25:695 (1,2) - Blanket ?
02:26:814 (1) - Ctrl+H then modifier the placement ?
02:31:292 (2) - Move to x=292 y=252
02:58:157 (2,1) - Change the placement or keep overlap?
03:33:978 (2,1) - ^
03:37:560 (2) - Ctrl+H then modifier the placement ?
04:15:172 (2,1) - Symmetry them ?
04:24:128 (3) - End at 04:25:023 -

[Overall]
You can organize hitsounds more to make the song consistent with the hitsounds
A little bit improve and this map should be okay for me

osu! need more FELT
Good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there
I like FELT's song <3

[General]
fine

[Lunatic]
Edited:Sorry I didn't see that you haven't finished Lunatic yet but you can take my mod for some ideas
00:02:187 (2,4) - Add whistle
00:03:531 (5,6) - Clap at the end
00:05:322 (1) - ^
00:09:351 (2) - Ctrl+G ?
00:36:889 (5) - NC
00:40:471 (4,1) - Swap NC
00:58:157 (1) - Delete NC and NC 00:58:381 (2) -
01:05:545 - Add note and delete 01:05:657 (8) -
01:35:545 - How about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1782437
01:48:307 (1,2) - Stack ?
01:48:978 (3,4,5) - DS should consistent here
01:58:493 (2,3) - How about don't stack.The flow feel weird for me
02:18:307 (4,8) - Stack perfect
02:23:232 (1) - Move to x=451 y=181 for triangle with 02:22:784 (5,6) -
02:41:366 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1782458
02:48:083 (1,2) - Stack
02:48:978 (1,2) - ^
02:54:463 (5) - How about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1782404
03:01:963 (5) - NC
03:03:307 (4,5) - Don't stack ?
03:06:889 (2) - Ctrl+J ?
03:23:344 (5,6) - How about increase the spacing here a little bit?
03:25:023 (5) - Ctrl+G ? If yes apply to 03:28:606 (5) - and 03:32:188 (5) - too
03:56:590 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:58:493 (2,3) -
04:06:441 (4,5) - Something simillar to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1782486
04:31:963 (6) - NC
04:40:471 (5,6,7) - Same as 01:58:493 (2,3) -
I think I will skip the hitsound mod or it will be too much mod

Lunatic-diff is still WIP. but consider your sggetions~

[Hard]
Since I don't find problem with the pattern on this diff so I take this diff as hitsound mod
00:01:740 (1) - Whistle at the end
00:02:635 (2) - ^
00:03:531 (3) - ^
00:04:426 (4) - ^
00:05:322 (1) - Clap at the end
00:06:217 (2) - ^
00:07:113 (3) - ^
00:08:008 (4) - ^
00:08:904 (1) - ^
00:12:486 (1) - ^
00:13:157 (2) - Whistle at the end
00:13:493 (3) - ^
00:13:829 (4) - Whistle at the head
00:14:053 (5) - ^
00:35:769 (1) - Delete clap it feel sudden for me
00:41:142 - How about this? http://puu.sh/9WrRi/0d7030d13d.jpg
fine!
00:41:926 (2) - Delete clap it feel sudden for me
00:43:045 (1) - Delete clap at the head
00:44:277 (4) - Delete clap
00:52:337 (2) - At the end delete clap
00:56:254 (3) - Replace clap with whistle
01:22:337 (1) - Delete clap
01:22:784 (3) - ^ at the end
01:24:911 (3) - Replace clap with whistle and whistle slider's way
01:44:053 (1,2,3) - Whistle all
01:44:948 (4) - Whistle head and slider's way
04:10:695 - to 04:11:590 - How about add some notes?
I intend to add short break
I will mod hitsounds from the start to the first kiai and let you try to organize the rest
You don't have to follow my hitsounds mod.It's my first time modding the hitsounds
let me think about hitsound

[Normal]
00:14:725 (2) - Move to x=300 y=184 OK
00:24:128 (2) - Move to x=252 y=284 . If changed modifier 00:25:023 (1) - too a little change
00:57:710 (2) - Move to x=312 y=320 a little change
01:21:889 (4) - NC fix
01:25:695 (1,2) - Blanket ? ??
02:26:814 (1) - Ctrl+H then modifier the placement ? KEEP
02:31:292 (2) - Move to x=292 y=252 why?
02:58:157 (2,1) - Change the placement or keep overlap? fix
03:33:978 (2,1) - ^ Let me think...
03:37:560 (2) - Ctrl+H then modifier the placement ? KEEP
04:15:172 (2,1) - Symmetry them ? no change
04:24:128 (3) - End at 04:25:023 -
no change:
I want to follow clap at 04:24:799

[Overall]
You can organize hitsounds more to make the song consistent with the hitsounds
A little bit improve and this map should be okay for me

osu! need more FELT
Good luck

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Opens for M4M)

Thanks for the m4m

[General]
This song is so nice!
Favorited ♥
Please rank!!

[Normal]
Hmmm can try AR4, in my view it lets the slider ball move more smoothly after approaching
^ Some point like 01:39:799 - , the (3) slider is not end but next combo is start showing up slowly
Can try slidertick 2, prefer constant claps
00:16:068 (1,2) - Rotate 45 degree clockwise and make it like this:
00:23:232 - There's a light finish here sound (it's good too without finish)
00:27:710 (2) - I prefer to replace this to something like 00:26:366 (3) - with Ctrl+J (need to arrange 00:27:262 (1) - for a little):
00:29:501 (2) - Shape like this (need to arrange 00:30:396 (1) - )
00:30:396 (1) - Finish
00:33:978 (1) - I prefer this rhythm like this, because 00:34:202 - vocal here is dragging~:
00:37:560 - Finish
00:39:799 - Suggest to put a clap for slidertick in normal
00:41:590 - Some where like here too~ make the music beat!
00:51:889 - Finish
00:59:053 - ^
01:01:292 (2) - Can try to extend to 01:01:740 - for clap, but might be a little awkward, depends on how you arrange
01:02:635 - Finish
01:15:396 (1) - I prefer this to move to left side of 01:14:725 (4) - , don't really like the stack (hard for new HD plalyer):
01:16:963 (2) - For me I will prefer start of KIAI to be NC instead of 01:16:516 (1) - (it's personal preferences)
01:24:575 - Feel like too blanky~ clap~
01:46:292 - I prefer this rhythm:
02:14:277 (1) - Finish
02:23:792 - Hmm.. slider not end but 02:25:023 (1) - showing up! raise AR! or maybe dun stack
02:37:784 (1) - Can put at somewhere like here, since 02:34:874 (2) - is ending at left side
03:31:740 (2) - Prefer this to move further from 03:30:396 (2) - to avoid mistaking with 03:31:292 (1) -
03:34:650 - Finish
03:38:232 - Finish
03:57:710 (1) - Hmm this one is too hard even for me :d, I prefer to use spinner from 03:56:366 - until 03:57:710 -
04:11:814 (1) - Since this is the easiest diff of the map (normal), try to use spinner at 04:10:695 - to 04:12:038 -
04:23:232 - Prefer a hit here
04:24:128 (2,1,2,3) - Prefer this rhythm:

[Hard]
Could try AR 8.2? I'm not very sure, ask someone else to test coz 8.0 seems a bit slow for me
No major prob, I'll just point out a little bit
00:35:657 (5,1,2) - Strange stack owo
00:49:090 (2) - It "looks" like big jump cuz after 00:48:307 (1) - there's nothing and 00:49:090 (2) - is too cornered
01:15:396 (2,3,4) - Prefer not to stack, make it flowy hit (or maybe triangle, any pattern)
^ Even you want to stack don't make it so below the screen =w=''
01:31:068 - Put a hit for vocal (since most part is following vocal)
^ If you do try to NC here 01:30:844 (8) -
02:37:784 (1,2,3) - Prefer not to stack
02:39:128 - Vooocall! (vocal is too nice <3)
03:57:262 (5) - NC, might help to read and gives a bit HP to avoid fail for new players
04:06:441 (4) - NC, sudden DS change and to make vocal heavier
04:26:814 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure why, I dun like this pattern...hmm try to remap this part if you have any new idea?
04:34:650 (2) - Put at X:112 Y:152 (with DS) makes better looking IMO, or it's too close to 04:33:978 (1) -
04:40:247 (4) - NC! (dont know why :d)

[Lunatic]
Very well mapped diff!
I like the 2nd KIAI the most!
00:26:814 (1,2) - Hmm strange stack
00:29:948 (8) - NC here
01:05:322 (7) - NC here, easier to read for 6 hits (players hit 5 and then see another new combo hit still left there)
01:15:396 (2,3,4) - Make it jumpy, can use DS around 01:13:605 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -
01:16:292 (5) - NC for SV change
01:16:740 - Hit! Vocal!!
01:29:948 (3) - Move a bit further from 01:29:501 (1) -
01:38:008 (6) - I prefer to put at left side of mapping area, more flow the better in KIAI
01:40:695 (6) - Prefer to unstack, or add a hit at 01:40:583 -
01:50:322 (7) - Last hit before spinner, NC? XD
01:53:008 - There should be a hit here, also at 01:53:344 -
01:54:575 (1,2,3) - ^ Like above, applies for other circles like this too
02:07:448 - A hit here would be nice, coz there's a stream/tap at 02:06:665 (4,5,6,7,1) - , don't want it to be slowed down suddenly
02:20:993 (7) - NC here, better looking (without 10 number) and give players little more HP (you'll never know it when it's useful)
03:06:665 - Prefer a hit here, or make 03:06:441 (1) - a slider too
03:07:560 (1) - Prefer not to slow down from 1.0x > 0.5x, maybe try 0.75x or remove the slow
03:07:784 - ^ Missing vocal here too! Can try a shorter slider with reverse
03:23:008 (3,4,5) - Same DS would be more neater
03:32:524 (6) - Can move the slider tail to left for a little, looks better away from head of 03:32:188 (5) -
03:33:866 (3) - NC for anti jump, or move it further from last note
03:36:217 (8) - NC here? 5+3 hits
03:38:232 (7) - NC here instead of 03:38:680 (1) -
03:40:023 (6) - NC for last hit before spinner
03:43:829 - Make break starts here (for the music), or you can map the part, it's a good part leading to KIAI (the feel), keep if you prefer longer break
04:06:665 (5) - Ctrl+G? Fun pattern for me
04:10:919 - Prefer something slow to hit here, not HP drain
04:24:799 (8) - NC here instead of 04:25:023 (1) - , then let 04:25:695 (3) - NC too for better looking

Good luck! Raaaank!!!
04:26:814 - Volume can +10% or 20% here, BGM still quite loud
04:32:859 (8) - NC (better looking)
04:36:441 (8) - ^
04:40:471 (5) - A bit change in the music, NC too

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Opens for M4M)

Thanks for the m4m

[General]
This song is so nice!
Favorited ♥
Please rank!!
thanks <3
[Normal]
Hmmm can try AR4, in my view it lets the slider ball move more smoothly after approaching
^ Some point like 01:39:799 - , the (3) slider is not end but next combo is start showing up slowly
remarkable indication for me!
Can try slidertick 2, prefer constant claps no change
00:16:068 (1,2) - Rotate 45 degree clockwise and make it like this: prefer it~

Image

00:23:232 - There's a light finish here sound (it's good too without finish) KEEP
00:27:710 (2) - I prefer to replace this to something like 00:26:366 (3) - with Ctrl+J (need to arrange 00:27:262 (1) - for a little):
OK, consider and remap

Image

00:29:501 (2) - Shape like this (need to arrange 00:30:396 (1) - ) try~

Image

00:30:396 (1) - Finish OK:
00:33:978 (1) - I prefer this rhythm like this, because 00:34:202 - vocal here is dragging~:

Image

00:37:560 - Finish
00:39:799 - Suggest to put a clap for slidertick in normal
00:41:590 - Some where like here too~ make the music beat!
00:51:889 - Finish
00:59:053 - ^ OK
01:01:292 (2) - Can try to extend to 01:01:740 - for clap, but might be a little awkward, depends on how you arrange remap
01:02:635 - Finish OK
01:15:396 (1) - I prefer this to move to left side of 01:14:725 (4) - , don't really like the stack (hard for new HD plalyer):
remap

Image

01:16:963 (2) - For me I will prefer start of KIAI to be NC instead of 01:16:516 (1) - (it's personal preferences)
agree with you <3
01:24:575 - Feel like too blanky~ clap~
01:46:292 - I prefer this rhythm: no change

Image

02:14:277 (1) - Finish OK
02:23:792 - Hmm.. slider not end but 02:25:023 (1) - showing up! raise AR! or maybe dun stack ??
02:37:784 (1) - Can put at somewhere like here, since 02:34:874 (2) - is ending at left side OK

Image

03:31:740 (2) - Prefer this to move further from 03:30:396 (2) - to avoid mistaking with 03:31:292 (1) - remap
03:34:650 - Finish OK
03:38:232 - Finish OK
03:57:710 (1) - Hmm this one is too hard even for me :d, I prefer to use spinner from 03:56:366 - until 03:57:710 -
nice idea!
04:11:814 (1) - Since this is the easiest diff of the map (normal), try to use spinner at 04:10:695 - to 04:12:038 -
nice idea, too!
04:23:232 - Prefer a hit here OK
04:24:128 (2,1,2,3) - Prefer this rhythm: OK

Image

KEEP about adding hitsound at slider ticks

[Hard]
Could try AR 8.2? I'm not very sure, ask someone else to test coz 8.0 seems a bit slow for me
No major prob, I'll just point out a little bit
let me think...
00:35:657 (5,1,2) - Strange stack owo fix
00:49:090 (2) - It "looks" like big jump cuz after 00:48:307 (1) - there's nothing and 00:49:090 (2) - is too cornered fix
01:15:396 (2,3,4) - Prefer not to stack, make it flowy hit (or maybe triangle, any pattern)
^ Even you want to stack don't make it so below the screen =w=''
KEEP
01:31:068 - Put a hit for vocal (since most part is following vocal)
^ If you do try to NC here 01:30:844 (8) -
KEEP
I want to add a little break at this part
02:37:784 (1,2,3) - Prefer not to stack
change
rut pattern is not good XD
02:39:128 - Vooocall! (vocal is too nice <3) mmm~, KEEP
03:57:262 (5) - NC, might help to read and gives a bit HP to avoid fail for new players OK
04:06:441 (4) - NC, sudden DS change and to make vocal heavier OK
04:26:814 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure why, I dun like this pattern...hmm try to remap this part if you have any new idea? remap!
04:34:650 (2) - Put at X:112 Y:152 (with DS) makes better looking IMO, or it's too close to 04:33:978 (1) - OK
04:40:247 (4) - NC! (dont know why :d)
no
this's a batch of the pattern
[Lunatic]
Very well mapped diff!
I like the 2nd KIAI the most!
00:26:814 (1,2) - Hmm strange stack fix
00:29:948 (8) - NC here OK
01:05:322 (7) - NC here, easier to read for 6 hits (players hit 5 and then see another new combo hit still left there)
nice idea!
01:15:396 (2,3,4) - Make it jumpy, can use DS around 01:13:605 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - no change
01:16:292 (5) - NC for SV change OK
01:16:740 - Hit! Vocal!! KEEP
01:29:948 (3) - Move a bit further from 01:29:501 (1) - why?
01:38:008 (6) - I prefer to put at left side of mapping area, more flow the better in KIAI KEEP
01:40:695 (6) - Prefer to unstack, or add a hit at 01:40:583 - add a note
01:50:322 (7) - Last hit before spinner, NC? XD KEEP

01:53:008 - There should be a hit here, also at 01:53:344 -
01:54:575 (1,2,3) - ^ Like above, applies for other circles like this too
Let me think...

02:07:448 - A hit here would be nice, coz there's a stream/tap at 02:06:665 (4,5,6,7,1) - , don't want it to be slowed down suddenly
no change: don't suit to rhythm?
02:20:993 (7) - NC here, better looking (without 10 number) and give players little more HP (you'll never know it when it's useful)
fix~
03:06:665 - Prefer a hit here, or make 03:06:441 (1) - a slider too fix
03:07:560 (1) - Prefer not to slow down from 1.0x > 0.5x, maybe try 0.75x or remove the slow no change
03:07:784 - ^ Missing vocal here too! Can try a shorter slider with reverse
I don't intend to suit vocal, sorry
03:23:008 (3,4,5) - Same DS would be more neater OK
03:32:524 (6) - Can move the slider tail to left for a little, looks better away from head of 03:32:188 (5) - fix
03:33:866 (3) - NC for anti jump, or move it further from last note OK
03:36:217 (8) - NC here? 5+3 hits KEEP
03:38:232 (7) - NC here instead of 03:38:680 (1) - OK
03:40:023 (6) - NC for last hit before spinner KEEP
03:43:829 - Make break starts here (for the music), or you can map the part, it's a good part leading to KIAI (the feel), keep if you prefer longer break
OK: and, consider mapping
04:06:665 (5) - Ctrl+G? Fun pattern for me OK
04:10:919 - Prefer something slow to hit here, not HP drain
Let me think...
04:24:799 (8) - NC here instead of 04:25:023 (1) - , then let 04:25:695 (3) - NC too for better looking OK

Good luck! Raaaank!!!
04:26:814 - Volume can +10% or 20% here, BGM still quite loud OK
04:32:859 (8) - NC (better looking):arrow: OK
04:36:441 (8) - ^:arrow: OK
04:40:471 (5) - A bit change in the music, NC too KEEP

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

m4mです。postありがとうございます。
どうでもいいですが、私もこの曲大好きです（=＞∀＜=）



[General]
fine


[Normal]
"もう"の音取りの部分はLunaticと同様なのでこの難易度では書きません(Lunaticからmodしたので順番変でごめんなさい）
02:25:695 (2) - 一番と同じ音取りを推奨します
03:37:560 (2) - 始点をx:60 y:256に移動


[Hard]
"もう"の音取りの部分はLunaticと同様なのでこの難易度では書きません
00:18:754 (4) - too far 少し遠すぎる気がします
00:59:053 (1) - 直前のノートとずらす必要が無い気がします
01:04:762 (2,3) - 2があるところに折り返し1回のスライダーを置いてみては？
04:06:441 (1,2,3) - 普通のスペーシングでいいのでは？

00:35:657 (5,1,2,3) - Lunaticと違う音取りでしかも青線から始まるというのはHardには似つかわしくないと思います
00:49:090 (2) - ^
00:56:254 (3) - ^
02:17:747 (1,2) - ^
02:18:642 (4,5) - ^

01:59:948 (1,2,3) - Hardの難易度なら01:56:366 (1) - と同様のスライダーに置き換えていいと思います
02:01:740 (1,2,3) - ^
02:03:531 (1,2,3) - ^
02:21:441 (1,2,3) - ^
02:25:023 (1,2,3) - ^　
03:21:441 (1,2,3) - ^　（特にここは難しすぎる気がします）


[Lunatic]
00:01:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5,6のスライダーが丁度原点に対して点対称になる位置にずらしてもいいかも？
00:15:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5角形の入りをコピペして144度回転したこういう形はどうでしょう
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1832614
00:27:038 (2) - too near　少し近すぎる気がします
01:27:486 (1,2) - 直前の01:26:590 (1,2) とかと同じ音取りはどうでしょう？
01:32:635 (6) - 少し端すぎて打ちづらいので直前の5をコピーして点対称にしてx:256 y:364に始点をもってきては？（他にいい配置があれば他で全然いいとおもいます）
01:52:784 (1,2,3) - 個人的にスピナーの後に初見では分かりづらい音取りは避けた方がいいと思います。この音取りをしたいのであればスライダー折り返しと取り替えてみては
02:05:098 (7) - 直前の02:04:650 (4,5,6) - と同一直線上にあるほうが綺麗かもしれません。どちらかを動かしたり両方動かしたりしてそうなるような配置はどうでしょう？
02:38:680 (4,5,6) - 1番と同じ感じでもいいかも？
02:49:874 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:27:486 (1,2) でも後ろのSBの歌詞の"もう"が2回だけ光ってるのでこのSBなら両方とも修正しなくていいかも。個人的にはこの曲なら3回同じにするかなっていう程度です
02:52:560 (4,5) - きちんと直線上にあるほうが綺麗
03:21:441 (1,2,3) - 初見の人用にこの音取りならスライダー折り返しがベター？
03:33:866 (1,2) - もうすこしスペーシングを考えた方がいいかもしれません
04:02:523 (3,4) - 直前のスライダーの流れを考えるとこれくらいの位置のほうがいいかも？
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1832687



Good luck!!　がんばってください

PEPOTTI wrote:

m4mです。postありがとうございます。
どうでもいいですが、私もこの曲大好きです（=＞∀＜=）　 <3



[General]
fine


[Normal]
"もう"の音取りの部分はLunaticと同様なのでこの難易度では書きません(Lunaticからmodしたので順番変でごめんなさい）
02:25:695 (2) - 一番と同じ音取りを推奨します OK
03:37:560 (2) - 始点をx:60 y:256に移動 OK


[Hard]
"もう"の音取りの部分はLunaticと同様なのでこの難易度では書きません
00:18:754 (4) - too far 少し遠すぎる気がします fix
00:59:053 (1) - 直前のノートとずらす必要が無い気がします KEEP
01:04:762 (2,3) - 2があるところに折り返し1回のスライダーを置いてみては？ OK
04:06:441 (1,2,3) - 普通のスペーシングでいいのでは？ KEEP: いいアイディア浮かんだら変えるかも

00:35:657 (5,1,2,3) - Lunaticと違う音取りでしかも青線から始まるというのはHardには似つかわしくないと思います
00:49:090 (2) - ^ fix
00:56:254 (3) - ^
02:17:747 (1,2) - ^ fix
02:18:642 (4,5) - ^ fix

01:59:948 (1,2,3) - Hardの難易度なら01:56:366 (1) - と同様のスライダーに置き換えていいと思います fix
02:01:740 (1,2,3) - ^ fix
02:03:531 (1,2,3) - ^ fix
02:21:441 (1,2,3) - ^
02:25:023 (1,2,3) - ^　
03:21:441 (1,2,3) - ^　（特にここは難しすぎる気がします）


[Lunatic]
00:01:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5,6のスライダーが丁度原点に対して点対称になる位置にずらしてもいいかも？ OK
00:15:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5角形の入りをコピペして144度回転したこういう形はどうでしょう nice: いい感じ
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1832614
00:27:038 (2) - too near　少し近すぎる気がします
no change
ここは意図的です。が、中途半端な間隔だったのでもっと近づけました
01:27:486 (1,2) - 直前の01:26:590 (1,2) とかと同じ音取りはどうでしょう？
KEEP
直前の2setとは違う音取りをしたかったのでこうしました。rhythmは同じなので3setで揃えても良いんですけどね
01:32:635 (6) - 少し端すぎて打ちづらいので直前の5をコピーして点対称にしてx:256 y:364に始点をもってきては？（他にいい配置があれば他で全然いいとおもいます）
no change
次のcircleへのつながりを考えるとこの位置が良いかなと。少しだけ調整しました
01:52:784 (1,2,3) - 個人的にスピナーの後に初見では分かりづらい音取りは避けた方がいいと思います。この音取りをしたいのであればスライダー折り返しと取り替えてみては
fix
insaneだしいいかな？と思いましたがreverse sliderにしました。SVも変えてるので初見ではたたけないかもしれませんね
02:05:098 (7) - 直前の02:04:650 (4,5,6) - と同一直線上にあるほうが綺麗かもしれません。どちらかを動かしたり両方動かしたりしてそうなるような配置はどうでしょう？ KEEP
02:38:680 (4,5,6) - 1番と同じ感じでもいいかも？
KEEP
別なpatternにしたかったのでこうしてます。同じ指摘が多いようなら変えようかと
02:49:874 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:27:486 (1,2) でも後ろのSBの歌詞の"もう"が2回だけ光ってるのでこのSBなら両方とも修正しなくていいかも。個人的にはこの曲なら3回同じにするかなっていう程度です KEEP: 上で書いた通り
02:52:560 (4,5) - きちんと直線上にあるほうが綺麗 OK
03:21:441 (1,2,3) - 初見の人用にこの音取りならスライダー折り返しがベター？
KEEP
ここはspinnerの所と違って余裕があるのでこのままで
03:33:866 (1,2) - もうすこしスペーシングを考えた方がいいかもしれません fix
04:02:523 (3,4) - 直前のスライダーの流れを考えるとこれくらいの位置のほうがいいかも？ fix a little
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1832687

Good luck!!　がんばってください

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

Hi, from V&V's modding queue~

[Normal]

• 00:15:172 (3) - unsharp, and smooth this slider
  01:06:217 (1,1) - overlap, stack better
  02:27:710 - add note, i hear a beat here.
  02:45:844 (2) - smooth slider
  04:14:277 (1) - unsharp, smooth like other sliders

[Hard]

• 00:21:889 (3) - smooth slider
  00:29:948 (4,1) - why jump here?
  00:39:463 (2) - smooth slider
  00:42:262 (2,3,4,1,2) - remake perfect star
  00:54:575 (3,1) - Why jump here? but bigger than before.
  01:22:113 (6,1) - same as above
  01:24:575 (2) - smooth slider
  02:59:948 (5) - smooth slider
  04:15:172 (4) - smooth slider

Almost perfect for me to mod, GL~

今日は。M4Mしたをありがとう～ (sorry for poor Japanese orz)

[General]
* Add "eosd" and "embodiment of scarlet devil" since that original song came from that game

[Normal]
01:08:232 (1) - Overlapped by previous slider can suprised for beginners. Consider to move further away from previous slider
01:36:665 (1,2,3) - Move backward to red tick to following vocal like you did at 01:25:695 (1,2)?
02:37:784 (1) - Because this note is far from center of spinner and it's 1/1 difference with end spinner, it may hard to reach for beginners. Consider to make it closer to center
03:06:441 (1) - ^
03:35:769 (2) - How about make a wave slider? Linear slider with curve slider in previous one seems weird to see...

[Hard]
00:03:531 (3,4) - Your current position of these two are likely breaking flow that players expecting that this pattern is actually a circular flow. Consider to make a pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848675
00:14:277 (1) - How about stack this with tail slider or make it closer to previous one? I found it difficult while testing this pattern....
00:24:911 (6) - Remove this note because it doesn't follow any instruments in music itself
00:59:053 (1) - During gameplay, this slider is overlapped by stacks of 00:58:605 (2,3,4,5). Perhaps stack together or maybe move further away so it doesn't overlapped by stacks during in-game?
01:30:172 (4) - Why short slider here even the doublets vocal isn't belongs here? Perhaps, replace it with circle?
02:34:314 (2) - I would like to remove this note since the instruments inside music isn't heard here
02:48:978 (1) - Why new combo here? Any explaination?
03:56:366 (1,2,3,4,1) - It doesn't looks like a good star pattern here... Fix the pattern until it ends like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848723

[Insane]
00:20:993 (5) - Move to X:312 and Y:124, so it makes the spacing between previous one and this note is having a consistent jump spacing (nazi)
00:27:038 (2) - This anti-jump makes players thought that this is a 1/4 note here. Consider to move further away to prevent of confusion?
00:33:083 (5,6) - Since 00:31:963 (1,2) is a circular flow. Why not this two slider make a circular for by reverse the slider of (6)?
00:38:904 (5) - Move to X:236 and Y:260 for consistent jump spacing
00:50:993 (4) - Having a sudden jump here makes players plays uncomfortable and suprising, especially if the note is 1/4 difference from previous note. Consider to correct a spacing for this note?
01:23:232 (5) - ^
02:39:799 (3) - Reverse this slider to make a circular flow?
03:25:919 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:50:993 (4)
03:57:374 (2) - Move 1 grid down for fix the curve pattern? (nazi)
04:10:247 (6) - ^
04:32:859 (8) - Add new combo here for shorten the long combo

頑張ってね～

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

Hi, from V&V's modding queue~

[Normal]

• 00:15:172 (3) - unsharp, and smooth this slider no change
  01:06:217 (1,1) - overlap, stack better fix
  02:27:710 - add note, i hear a beat here. remap
  02:45:844 (2) - smooth slider fix: curving
  04:14:277 (1) - unsharp, smooth like other sliders no change

[Hard]

• 00:21:889 (3) - smooth slider
  no change
  no porblem in playing ,imo
  00:29:948 (4,1) - why jump here?
  starting vocal position. jump pattern is not bad for hard
  00:39:463 (2) - smooth slider no change
  00:42:262 (2,3,4,1,2) - remake perfect star
  KEEP
  interesting suggetion~. but not good flow...
  00:54:575 (3,1) - Why jump here? but bigger than before.
  no problem for playing because of NC and considering flow
  01:22:113 (6,1) - same as above ^
  01:24:575 (2) - smooth slider no
  02:59:948 (5) - smooth slider no
  04:15:172 (4) - smooth slider no

Almost perfect for me to mod, GL~

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no chang

Leorda wrote:

今日は。M4Mしたをありがとう～ (sorry for poor Japanese orz)

[General]
* Add "eosd" and "embodiment of scarlet devil" since that original song came from that game
KEEP: but consider it
[Normal]
01:08:232 (1) - Overlapped by previous slider can suprised for beginners. Consider to move further away from previous slider fix
01:36:665 (1,2,3) - Move backward to red tick to following vocal like you did at 01:25:695 (1,2)?
no change
hard to find rhythm for beginner
02:37:784 (1) - Because this note is far from center of spinner and it's 1/1 difference with end spinner, it may hard to reach for beginners. Consider to make it closer to center fix
03:06:441 (1) - ^ fix
03:35:769 (2) - How about make a wave slider? Linear slider with curve slider in previous one seems weird to see...
fix: interesting~

[Hard]
00:03:531 (3,4) - Your current position of these two are likely breaking flow that players expecting that this pattern is actually a circular flow. Consider to make a pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848675
OK
00:14:277 (1) - How about stack this with tail slider or make it closer to previous one? I found it difficult while testing this pattern....
fix: make it closer
00:24:911 (6) - Remove this note because it doesn't follow any instruments in music itself OK
00:59:053 (1) - During gameplay, this slider is overlapped by stacks of 00:58:605 (2,3,4,5). Perhaps stack together or maybe move further away so it doesn't overlapped by stacks during in-game?
all right： stack together
01:30:172 (4) - Why short slider here even the doublets vocal isn't belongs here? Perhaps, replace it with circle?
I intend to emphasis triplet 01:30:396 (5,6,7) -
02:34:314 (2) - I would like to remove this note since the instruments inside music isn't heard here remap
02:48:978 (1) - Why new combo here? Any explaination?
intend to empasis the phrase "もう"
03:56:366 (1,2,3,4,1) - It doesn't looks like a good star pattern here... Fix the pattern until it ends like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848723
no change
this shape is on purpose in order to stack 03:57:710 (5) - on the SB effect

[Insane]
00:20:993 (5) - Move to X:312 and Y:124, so it makes the spacing between previous one and this note is having a consistent jump spacing (nazi)
OK
00:27:038 (2) - This anti-jump makes players thought that this is a 1/4 note here. Consider to move further away to prevent of confusion?
fix
00:33:083 (5,6) - Since 00:31:963 (1,2) is a circular flow. Why not this two slider make a circular for by reverse the slider of (6)?
circular pattern is not good fow against after pattern
00:38:904 (5) - Move to X:236 and Y:260 for consistent jump spacing OK
00:50:993 (4) - Having a sudden jump here makes players plays uncomfortable and suprising, especially if the note is 1/4 difference from previous note. Consider to correct a spacing for this note? OK
01:23:232 (5) - ^
KEEP
this pattern is no problem because of flow?
02:39:799 (3) - Reverse this slider to make a circular flow? nice!
03:25:919 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:50:993 (4) OK
03:57:374 (2) - Move 1 grid down for fix the curve pattern? (nazi) OK
04:10:247 (6) - ^ OK
04:32:859 (8) - Add new combo here for shorten the long combo OK

頑張ってね～ ありがとうございました～

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

ok~

[Lunatic]

00:03:531 (5,6) - The flow here is little strange, I'd expect 6 to be ctrl+g to have more circular movement,
00:22:784 (5,6,7,8,1) - I think the curve formed from these notes, can be fixed up, currently looks a little messy to me , could use a little bit more curve to be more appealing.
00:29:837 (7) - Make it straight? I wouldn't start the curve until the next note which has a new combo.
00:31:963 (1) - Move right? I don't like overlaps like these, imo unless they really help flow.
00:41:142 (1) - The slider can be improved? the curve at end should be smoother.http://puu.sh/arSUn.jpg
00:59:053 (1) - Seems you forgot to make it stack with 01:00:620 (4) -
01:25:695 (1,2,1) - The blanket looks ugly here :c
01:26:590 (1) - New combo is unnecessary here.
02:48:978 (1) - ^
01:37:337 (3,4,5) - This is about to touch hp bar, move it down more?
01:46:292 (4) - Make sure this is same place as 01:47:635 (4) -
02:20:993 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing of the notes in this stream should be evenly spread out.
02:43:717 (3) - I think the stacking is wrong here again, place them at 02:42:934 (1) -
03:33:866 (1,2) - I would prefer you stack them , since the rhythm here is easy to read.
04:25:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Stream designing needs some work.
04:41:142 - Add note here? there still fade out going on.

[Hard]

00:18:754 (4) - decrease the spacing a little bit? I almost thought this was on blue tick instead of white.
00:30:396 (1) - Add Finish? sounds better than whistle here.
01:11:366 (1) - Curve it down? the next notes are slightly placed above the slider, curve will fit with it.
01:26:590 (1) - Same as insane. remove new combo
02:48:978 (1) - ^
01:40:023 (5) - New combo should be here, makes more sense with jump , prob remove nc from 01:40:919 (1) -
02:03:531 (1,2,3) - blue tick rhythm here may be little tricky suggest turn this all into 1 slider.
02:40:471 (4) - Jump makes more sense if you ctrl+g.
03:40:023 (5) - Form a triangle with this note? http://puu.sh/arXtj.jpg

[Normal]

00:19:650 (1,2) - Place them like this? http://puu.sh/arXAa.jpg looks cleaner.
00:31:292 (3) - Move slider end to the left so it can get blanketed more.
01:23:904 (1,2) - I don't want to ruin your pattern here, but I'd prefer you stack them orz
01:25:695 (1,2) - Symmetry is not good here.

great!

Tari wrote:

ok~

[Lunatic]

00:03:531 (5,6) - The flow here is little strange, I'd expect 6 to be ctrl+g to have more circular movement,
remap
00:22:784 (5,6,7,8,1) - I think the curve formed from these notes, can be fixed up, currently looks a little messy to me , could use a little bit more curve to be more appealing. fix
00:29:837 (7) - Make it straight? I wouldn't start the curve until the next note which has a new combo. KEEP
00:31:963 (1) - Move right? I don't like overlaps like these, imo unless they really help flow. OK
00:41:142 (1) - The slider can be improved? the curve at end should be smoother. http://puu.sh/arSUn.jpg OK
00:59:053 (1) - Seems you forgot to make it stack with 01:00:620 (4) - woops, fix
01:25:695 (1,2,1) - The blanket looks ugly here :c fix
01:26:590 (1) - New combo is unnecessary here.
02:48:978 (1) - ^
KEEP
I intend to suit to phrase "もう". but I consider if other moder indicates the same stuf
01:37:337 (3,4,5) - This is about to touch hp bar, move it down more? OK
01:46:292 (4) - Make sure this is same place as 01:47:635 (4) - fix
02:20:993 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing of the notes in this stream should be evenly spread out. fix
02:43:717 (3) - I think the stacking is wrong here again, place them at 02:42:934 (1) - fix
03:33:866 (1,2) - I would prefer you stack them , since the rhythm here is easy to read. OK
04:25:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Stream designing needs some work. let me think...
04:41:142 - Add note here? there still fade out going on. I prefer no object

[Hard]

00:18:754 (4) - decrease the spacing a little bit? I almost thought this was on blue tick instead of white. OK
00:30:396 (1) - Add Finish? sounds better than whistle here. fix: forgot it...
01:11:366 (1) - Curve it down? the next notes are slightly placed above the slider, curve will fit with it. OK
01:26:590 (1) - Same as insane. remove new combo
02:48:978 (1) - ^
KEEP
01:40:023 (5) - New combo should be here, makes more sense with jump , prob remove nc from 01:40:919 (1) -
fine!
02:03:531 (1,2,3) - blue tick rhythm here may be little tricky suggest turn this all into 1 slider. remap
02:40:471 (4) - Jump makes more sense if you ctrl+g. nice!
03:40:023 (5) - Form a triangle with this note? http://puu.sh/arXtj.jpg
no change
I want to keep better flow

[Normal]

00:19:650 (1,2) - Place them like this? http://puu.sh/arXAa.jpg looks cleaner. no change
00:31:292 (3) - Move slider end to the left so it can get blanketed more.
no change
I want to keep better flow
01:23:904 (1,2) - I don't want to ruin your pattern here, but I'd prefer you stack them orz
fix
I prefer to stack at this part, too
01:25:695 (1,2) - Symmetry is not good here. really?

great!

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

お久しぶりです！

[General]

1. Mapsetのバランスが悪い気がします
   Hardを２連など減らしもう少し簡単にしてみてはどうでしょう？

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]

1. SV1.2、1.8、2.0はバランス悪いと思うので1.5辺りでRemapしてはどうでしょう？
2. 低BPMでジャンプもそんなありませんしARも７でいいかと
   
   
3. 02:19:538 (6,1,4,5) - Kiai中や盛り上がる所なら分かりますがHardユーザーには難しいんじゃないでしょうか？
4. 02:51:889 (1,2,3) - 綺麗な△にしませんか？
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:54:351 (3) - スタックミス？
6. 04:23:680 (3,4) - 03:01:516 (3,4) - こういった１/４の後に単発はキツそうなのでリバースで音取りしてはどうでしょう？

[Lunatic]

1. Hardと同じ理由でAR８で良いと思います
   
2. 04:00:732 (4,5) - ここ難しすぎませんか？lol
   04:00:396 (3,4) - Ctrl+Jで同じ場所か、こんな感じにして欲しいです
   
   SPOILER

   

見ようと思ったものの綺麗であまり指摘できる部分がありませんでした
☆投げるので許してください

-Nanaka- wrote:

お久しぶりです！

[General]

1. Mapsetのバランスが悪い気がします
   Hardを２連など減らしもう少し簡単にしてみてはどうでしょう？
   考えてみますね

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]

1. SV1.2、1.8、2.0はバランス悪いと思うので1.5辺りでRemapしてはどうでしょう？
   SVはこのままでもよいかなと思ってます。その分patternで違いをつけますので
2. 低BPMでジャンプもそんなありませんしARも７でいいかと OK~
   
   
3. 02:19:538 (6,1,4,5) - Kiai中や盛り上がる所なら分かりますがHardユーザーには難しいんじゃないでしょうか？
   OK
   ６を消して少し調整
4. 02:51:889 (1,2,3) - 綺麗な△にしませんか？ OK
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:54:351 (3) - スタックミス？ fix
6. 04:23:680 (3,4) - 03:01:516 (3,4) - こういった１/４の後に単発はキツそうなのでリバースで音取りしてはどうでしょう？
   no change
   曲が盛り上がるところなので少し難しくても良いかなと

[Lunatic]

1. Hardと同じ理由でAR８で良いと思います OK~
   
2. 04:00:732 (4,5) - ここ難しすぎませんか？lol
   04:00:396 (3,4) - Ctrl+Jで同じ場所か、こんな感じにして欲しいです
   
   SPOILER

   
   fix
   別なpatternですが、DS揃えました

見ようと思ったものの綺麗であまり指摘できる部分がありませんでした
☆投げるので許してください

mod + star ありがとうございました！
Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Normal

1. 00:19:650 (1,2) - I think the positioning here can be made neater. What about simply continuing the curved sliders pattern from 00:17:859 (1,2)?
2. 00:27:710 (2) - Move to (396,268) so it'll look vertically in line with 00:26:366 (3)? Looks better IMO.
3. 00:44:725 (1,2) - Move them until they look like this? Again, this is for neatness.
4. 00:48:307 (1) - Curve the slider near its tail like this for a slightly better flow, if you want?
5. 00:53:456 (1) - Move to (312,336) to make a blanket pattern with 00:52:560 (2)?
6. 00:58:381 (3) - You may want to make this curved, preferably by copy-pasting and flipping 00:57:710 (2).
7. 01:02:187 (3,1) - The blanket here can be better. Try moving the second node of (1) to (316,304).
8. 01:15:396 (1) - Try to use a horizontally-flipped version of 01:14:725 (4)? Looks better IMO.
9. 01:21:889 (1,2) - Swap NC? I think that follows the song more correctly.
10. 02:25:023 (1,1) - Why don't you use the same slider shape for these two sliders for the sake of symmetry?
11. 04:14:277 (1) - Why is this the only slider with a straight curve around the other sliders before and after it? It just feels awkward IMO. I think you should keep using softly curved sliders (sliders without red nodes) for shape consistency.

>Hard

1. 00:13:157 (2,3) - These are spaced relatively similar to 00:13:829 (4,5), but the rhythm is very different. Don't you think this is going to trap players?
2. 00:33:531 (4,1) - Try to make them spaced like 00:33:083 (3,4)? Maybe move (1) to (244,216).
3. 00:36:441 - Add a circle to follow the noticeable instrument sound here?
4. 00:42:934 (1,2) - Move to (40,108) so 00:42:262 (2,3,4,1,2) will look neater?
5. 01:04:762 (2,3,4) - Don't you think this is going to be a bit hard to play? What about combining 01:05:098 (3,4) into a 1/4 slider with a repeat instead?
6. 01:05:545 (5,1) - I feel that these sliders are a little too close to each other... Try something like this?
7. 01:14:725 (4,1) - Why do you choose to make an anti-jump? A regular jump would fit the song much better and it'd be less awkward.
8. 02:10:247 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - The flow here is just weird. Try to play this part by yourself to judge it.
9. 02:10:695 (1) - Add a finish? There's clearly a heavy instrument sound here...
10. 02:53:120 (6) - I can't hear what is this circle trying to follow. Remove it? It'd make 02:52:784 (5,7) more emphasized, anyway.
11. 03:22:337 - 03:32:859 - The rhythm here is very hard to follow because you're mapping the weaker instruments most of the time... I really recommend to remap this part with an easier-to-follow rhythm.
12. 04:05:769 (2) - Try curving it like this for a better flow from 04:05:098 (1)? Btw, I recommend making the curve of (1) smoother so it looks nicer and gives a nicer flow too.
13. 04:06:217 (3,1,2,3) - Any reason of using such a small spacing (with anti-jumps) here? It just feels awkward to play, IMO...
14. 04:26:366 (6,7,1) - ^

>Lunatic

1. 00:06:665 (4,5,6,7) - Why is this stream not connected with 00:07:113 (1)? It may confuse players, especially since you have the 1/4 sliders at 00:05:993 (2,3). People might think that this is a 3/4 beats stream and will assume that there's a 1/2 beats gap to 00:07:113 (1).
2. 00:35:545 (6,7) - What's with this overlap? I'm sure it can be easily avoided.
3. 01:16:292 (1) - Whoa. Won't the increase in speed be shocking? There's no indication that this is going to happen, you know... At least use 1.5x multiplier so it won't feel so sudden?
4. 01:38:008 (6,1) - Is this anti-jump really necessary? It plays weirdly, IMO...
5. 01:52:784 - 02:04:202 - Don't you think the 3/4 patterns here can be confusing, at least to sightread? Just asking.
6. 02:11:590 (5,6,7,8) - Why is the 1/4 stream spaced so big? People may mistake this as a series of 1/2 notes...
7. 02:19:202 (8,9,1) - Why are they spaced like this? This can work in certain circumstances where the pattern fits with the music, but not here. Try to just space them consistently.
8. 02:38:680 (4,5) - Again, what's with the usage of such a small spacing? I honestly can't see any point in this...
9. 03:32:859 (1,2) - ^
10. 04:09:575 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Same as the first suggestion for this diff.

I believe that this mapset can still be improved in terms of placement and design, but the other stuff is... okay enough, I guess.

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Normal

1. 00:19:650 (1,2) - I think the positioning here can be made neater. What about simply continuing the curved sliders pattern from 00:17:859 (1,2)?
   change
   since several modders indicated it, I dicide to change
2. 00:27:710 (2) - Move to (396,268) so it'll look vertically in line with 00:26:366 (3)? Looks better IMO. OK
3. 00:44:725 (1,2) - Move them until they look like this? Again, this is for neatness.
   fix
4. 00:48:307 (1) - Curve the slider near its tail like this for a slightly better flow, if you want?
   fine!
5. 00:53:456 (1) - Move to (312,336) to make a blanket pattern with 00:52:560 (2)? no problem, imo
6. 00:58:381 (3) - You may want to make this curved, preferably by copy-pasting and flipping 00:57:710 (2).
   intersting idea!
7. 01:02:187 (3,1) - The blanket here can be better. Try moving the second node of (1) to (316,304). fix
8. 01:15:396 (1) - Try to use a horizontally-flipped version of 01:14:725 (4)? Looks better IMO.
   no change
   not good flow, imo
9. 01:21:889 (1,2) - Swap NC? I think that follows the song more correctly. OK
10. 02:25:023 (1,1) - Why don't you use the same slider shape for these two sliders for the sake of symmetry?
    OK, good suggetion~
11. 04:14:277 (1) - Why is this the only slider with a straight curve around the other sliders before and after it? It just feels awkward IMO. I think you should keep using softly curved sliders (sliders without red nodes) for shape consistency. remap

>Hard

1. 00:13:157 (2,3) - These are spaced relatively similar to 00:13:829 (4,5), but the rhythm is very different. Don't you think this is going to trap players?
   adjusting a little
2. 00:33:531 (4,1) - Try to make them spaced like 00:33:083 (3,4)? Maybe move (1) to (244,216). fix
3. 00:36:441 - Add a circle to follow the noticeable instrument sound here? fix
4. 00:42:934 (1,2) - Move to (40,108) so 00:42:262 (2,3,4,1,2) will look neater? fix
5. 01:04:762 (2,3,4) - Don't you think this is going to be a bit hard to play? What about combining 01:05:098 (3,4) into a 1/4 slider with a repeat instead?
   fix
6. 01:05:545 (5,1) - I feel that these sliders are a little too close to each other... Try something like this?
   change to the other pattern
7. 01:14:725 (4,1) - Why do you choose to make an anti-jump? A regular jump would fit the song much better and it'd be less awkward.
   OK: stack correctly
8. 02:10:247 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - The flow here is just weird. Try to play this part by yourself to judge it.
   remap
9. 02:10:695 (1) - Add a finish? There's clearly a heavy instrument sound here...
   OK
10. 02:53:120 (6) - I can't hear what is this circle trying to follow. Remove it? It'd make 02:52:784 (5,7) more emphasized, anyway.
    OK
11. 03:22:337 - 03:32:859 - The rhythm here is very hard to follow because you're mapping the weaker instruments most of the time... I really recommend to remap this part with an easier-to-follow rhythm.
    OK, I'll try
12. 04:05:769 (2) - Try curving it like this for a better flow from 04:05:098 (1)? Btw, I recommend making the curve of (1) smoother so it looks nicer and gives a nicer flow too.
    fix: good flow<3
13. 04:06:217 (3,1,2,3) - Any reason of using such a small spacing (with anti-jumps) here? It just feels awkward to play, IMO...
    KEEP
    I want to emphasize it by use of small spacing
14. 04:26:366 (6,7,1) - ^ fix: conform DS

>Lunatic

1. 00:06:665 (4,5,6,7) - Why is this stream not connected with 00:07:113 (1)? It may confuse players, especially since you have the 1/4 sliders at 00:05:993 (2,3). People might think that this is a 3/4 beats stream and will assume that there's a 1/2 beats gap to 00:07:113 (1).
   you're right, fix~
2. 00:35:545 (6,7) - What's with this overlap? I'm sure it can be easily avoided. delete 6
3. 01:16:292 (1) - Whoa. Won't the increase in speed be shocking? There's no indication that this is going to happen, you know... At least use 1.5x multiplier so it won't feel so sudden?
   I like this pattern very much. so KEEP it
4. 01:38:008 (6,1) - Is this anti-jump really necessary? It plays weirdly, IMO... fix: stack correctly
5. 01:52:784 - 02:04:202 - Don't you think the 3/4 patterns here can be confusing, at least to sightread? Just asking.
   Let me think...
6. 02:11:590 (5,6,7,8) - Why is the 1/4 stream spaced so big? People may mistake this as a series of 1/2 notes...
   fix
7. 02:19:202 (8,9,1) - Why are they spaced like this? This can work in certain circumstances where the pattern fits with the music, but not here. Try to just space them consistently.
   fix: stack 9 on 1
8. 02:38:680 (4,5) - Again, what's with the usage of such a small spacing? I honestly can't see any point in this...
   in this part, small spacing is not bad, imo
9. 03:32:859 (1,2) - ^ change to stack
10. 04:09:575 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Same as the first suggestion for this diff. fix

I believe that this mapset can still be improved in terms of placement and design, but the other stuff is... okay enough, I guess.

Good luck on the way

Thank you for modding!
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Hard: (most of this is a matter of constancy)

00:58:605 - space these out.
1. 01:30:396 (5,7) - squish these together a bit.
2. 01:37:337 (3,4)
01:40:919 (3,4)
01:53:904 (2,3)
01:55:695 (2,3)
01:57:486 (2,3) - try to substitute these for sliders or do what you did at 01:57:486 (2,3)
3. 01:48:754 (2) - don't overlap these. it's too hidden.
4. 02:08:904 (1) - I wouldn't hide a circle in the wake of another circle. it makes it too hard to see.

Even thought it's really well done I might argue that some of the elements in the hard mode are too much. I mean even the star rating for hard and lunatic are very similar.

I hope that helps.

dorillis wrote:

Hard: (most of this is a matter of constancy)

00:58:605 - space these out.
1. 01:30:396 (5,7) - squish these together a bit.
2. 01:37:337 (3,4)
01:40:919 (3,4)
01:53:904 (2,3)
01:55:695 (2,3)
01:57:486 (2,3) - try to substitute these for sliders or do what you did at 01:57:486 (2,3)
fix some
3. 01:48:754 (2) - don't overlap these. it's too hidden.
4. 02:08:904 (1) - I wouldn't hide a circle in the wake of another circle. it makes it too hard to see. OK, remap

Even thought it's really well done I might argue that some of the elements in the hard mode are too much. I mean even the star rating for hard and lunatic are very similar. umm, let me think...

I hope that helps.

Thank you for modding!
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from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

no kd

well... i have to say u r a bit of lacking patterns... idk what kind of mapping idea u always own, i still think u can give a better version in ur detail designs...

same thing to hard and normal diffs... after modding lots of maps, appreciate set should be set in ur maps imo... 0.0

good luck

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

no kd

Lunatic

1. 00:40:471 (4,1) - partly blanket? OK: I didn't notice///
2. 00:48:083 (6,1) - ^, and lots more ^
3. 01:23:120 (4,5) - is this jump necessary? for there're more heated part using shorter ones OK
4. 03:00:620 (1,2) - larger ds no change

well... i have to say u r a bit of lacking patterns... idk what kind of mapping idea u always own, i still think u can give a better version in ur detail designs...

same thing to hard and normal diffs... after modding lots of maps, appreciate set should be set in ur maps imo... 0.0

good luck

Thank you for modding!
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Hi! From M4M! Sorry For the late mods. It's because the internet connection
Okay, then, here's my mod (^ w ^)

Normal
01:40:471 How about make a small slider from here to 01:40:695 ? I think it will make the flow easier to read.
01:41:814 Add a note at x: 356 y: 72 so it will fit the song
02:22:113 (1) How about move this slider to 02:22:337 ?
03:06:889 (1) Add whistle there
03:07:560 (3) Make this slider shorter from here to 03:07:784 and reversed it once
04:02:635 (2) Make the slider shorter from here to 04:03:083
04:03:307 Add a note
04:04:202 (2) Make this slider shorter from here to 04:04:650
04:05:098 Add a note

Hard
00:31:068 Add a note so it will make the flow easier to read
01:04:426 Reversed it once
01:05:434 Add a short slider from here to 01:05:545 and reversed it once. It will follow the piano
02:18:307 (2) Remove this note
02:18:531 Move it to 02:18:307
02:18:754 Move it to 02:18:531
03:07:113 (2) Move it to 03:07:737
03:07:560 (3) Move it to 03:07:784

Lunatic
02:15:060 (3) Remove this note
02:15:172 Move this slider to 02:15:060
02:15:396 Add a note and blanket it
02:59:837 Move it closer to the slider at 02:59:501 (2) and 02:59:984 (4)
03:07:560 (1) Make this slider shorter to 03:07:784 and move it to 03:07:784
03:07:560 Add a note

Nice map and beautiful storyboard! Hope this map can get ranked soon!!! Good luck! (^ w ^)

Modem wrote:

Hi! From M4M! Sorry For the late mods. It's because the internet connection
Okay, then, here's my mod (^ w ^)

Normal
01:40:471 How about make a small slider from here to 01:40:695 ? I think it will make the flow easier to read.
01:41:814 Add a note at x: 356 y: 72 so it will fit the song
02:22:113 (1) How about move this slider to 02:22:337 ?
it might good for hitsound. but a little hard to find rhythm
03:06:889 (1) Add whistle there
03:07:560 (3) Make this slider shorter from here to 03:07:784 and reversed it once
04:02:635 (2) Make the slider shorter from here to 04:03:083
04:03:307 Add a note
04:04:202 (2) Make this slider shorter from here to 04:04:650
04:05:098 Add a note

Hard
00:31:068 Add a note so it will make the flow easier to read
01:04:426 Reversed it once
01:05:434 Add a short slider from here to 01:05:545 and reversed it once. It will follow the piano
sound good~ but a little difficult...
02:18:307 (2) Remove this note

02:18:531 Move it to 02:18:307
02:18:754 Move it to 02:18:531
remap

03:07:113 (2) Move it to 03:07:737
03:07:560 (3) Move it to 03:07:784

Lunatic
02:15:060 (3) Remove this note

02:15:172 Move this slider to 02:15:060
02:15:396 Add a note and blanket it
remap

02:59:837 Move it closer to the slider at 02:59:501 (2) and 02:59:984 (4) make other pattern
03:07:560 (1) Make this slider shorter to 03:07:784 and move it to 03:07:784
03:07:560 Add a note

Nice map and beautiful storyboard! Hope this map can get ranked soon!!! Good luck! (^ w ^)

Thank you for modding!
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らんどさーんんんｎ

[Normal]

1. 00:08:904 (1,1) - スピンとnoteの間が短いので直したほうがいいかもです。unrank回避のためにも
   02:35:769 (1,1) - ,03:04:426 (1,1) - ,03:56:366 (1,1) - ,04:10:695 (1,1) - ^
2. 01:40:471 - ここ1/2のsliderほしいです！03:02:859 (4) - みたいに！

[Hard]

1. SV1.8早くないですか･･･。SV1.5ぐらいまで下げたいです._.
2. 01:28:381 (4,5) - 1/4Reverseでおいたほうが私は好きです。。
3. 02:11:142 (3,4,5) - 配置自体はきれいなのですが02:11:142 (3,5) - でnoteが被ってしまってplay中見づらく感じました。
   02:11:366 (4) - とnoteの空きが無く繋がっているのでここは他のnoteと被せず配置したほうが自分としてはいいかなと感じました。
4. 02:21:441 (1,2) - vocalフォローした音取りのほうが叩きやすく感じました。(02:25:023 (1) - )
   
   LunaticとHardのStar Difficultyの差があまり無くHardをすこし簡単にした方がいいと思いました。(diffバランス的な意味です!

[Lunatic]

1. 01:04:762 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 01:05:210 (6) - ここにピアノの音入ってない気がします。01:05:098 (5,1) - をsliderでつなぐと合うとおもいますがどうでしょうか。
2. 02:38:680 (1) - 両端にwhistle合うと思います！

ラストサビ入る前の波紋のSB好きです
ふぁいとです"

litoluna wrote:

らんどさーんんんｎ りとるなさーんんんｎ

[Normal]

1. 00:08:904 (1,1) - スピンとnoteの間が短いので直したほうがいいかもです。unrank回避のためにも
   02:35:769 (1,1) - ,03:04:426 (1,1) - ,03:56:366 (1,1) - ,04:10:695 (1,1) - ^
   OK
   unrankedになってる譜面いくつかあるらしいですしね。最低難易度だし直します
2. 01:40:471 - ここ1/2のsliderほしいです！03:02:859 (4) - みたいに！
   KEEP
   ちょっと難しいかな。。。次のsliderを長くすればいいんだけどとりあえすこのままで

[Hard]

1. SV1.8早くないですか･･･。SV1.5ぐらいまで下げたいです._.
   f...f... fix!
   nanakaさんにも同じこと言われたんですよね。hardの難易度下げたいですし直すことにしました!
2. 01:28:381 (4,5) - 1/4Reverseでおいたほうが私は好きです。。
   fix:ちょっとは難易度下がったかな？
3. 02:11:142 (3,4,5) - 配置自体はきれいなのですが02:11:142 (3,5) - でnoteが被ってしまってplay中見づらく感じました。
   02:11:366 (4) - とnoteの空きが無く繋がっているのでここは他のnoteと被せず配置したほうが自分としてはいいかなと感じました。
   fix
   1/4rhythmはやめて1/2rhythmにしました
4. 02:21:441 (1,2) - vocalフォローした音取りのほうが叩きやすく感じました。(02:25:023 (1) - )
   fix
   3/4rhythmのcircleはわかりにくいかな。sliderにしました
   
   LunaticとHardのStar Difficultyの差があまり無くHardをすこし簡単にした方がいいと思いました。(diffバランス的な意味です!
   最近はdiffバランスもunranked要素になるみたいですね。SV修正しながら直してみます

[Lunatic]

1. 01:04:762 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 01:05:210 (6) - ここにピアノの音入ってない気がします。01:05:098 (5,1) - をsliderでつなぐと合うとおもいますがどうでしょうか。
   fine!
2. 02:38:680 (1) - 両端にwhistle合うと思います！ OK:いいかんじ

ラストサビ入る前の波紋のSB好きです うれしいです<3 ありがとう！
ふぁいとです"

Thank you for modding!
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HI~from your modding queue ,poor english
m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/210772

General
i like this song

Normal
fine~

Hard
a little bit diffcult in general>.<
00:19:650 (1) - move the last point of this slider down 264,108, prettier
00:38:232 (2) - change it into a 1/4 reverse slider
00:26:366 (6) - rotate 5 degree of secletion centre
00:48:978 (2) - curve this
01:04:762 (2,3) - both reverse 2 times
01:48:754 (2) - shoud stack well
04:06:441 (1,2,3) - why keep this spacing too small,i mean normal DS here is ok
04:25:695 (2,3,4,5) - i think this pattern is too hard to a hard diff,maybe use a 5 circles stream


Lunatic
well done l like this diff
00:12:934 (2) - shoud stack well
00:29:948 (1,2,3,4,1) - i'm not sure but seems need claps here
02:00:284 (2) - feel weird because instrumen not that prominent compare to vocal at 02:00:396 -
03:32:188 (5) - reduce DS move 03:32:188 (5,6) - down a little bit
03:35:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make ths stream more smoothly especially 03:36:105 (5) -
03:57:038 (4) - try rhythm like this？ http://puu.sh/btglR/9c04105e0a.jpg
04:26:254 (6,7,8,9,10) - i think add claps and put a greenline at 04:26:254 (6) - to turn down the volume , 40% or less

hope helpful
GOOD LUCK~

Koa wrote:

HI~from your modding queue ,poor english
m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/210772

General
i like this song

Normal
fine~

Hard
a little bit diffcult in general>.< yes, I'm remapping now~ (no comment figures are remapped parts)
00:19:650 (1) - move the last point of this slider down 264,108, prettier
00:38:232 (2) - change it into a 1/4 reverse slider no: I want to follow vocal
00:26:366 (6) - rotate 5 degree of secletion centre
00:48:978 (2) - curve this
01:04:762 (2,3) - both reverse 2 times no: 2times reverse is confusing. so I intend to avoid it
01:48:754 (2) - shoud stack well fix
04:06:441 (1,2,3) - why keep this spacing too small,i mean normal DS here is ok Let me think...
04:25:695 (2,3,4,5) - i think this pattern is too hard to a hard diff,maybe use a 5 circles stream OK, I'll fix~


Lunatic
well done l like this diff
00:12:934 (2) - shoud stack well fix
00:29:948 (1,2,3,4,1) - i'm not sure but seems need claps here no: I like finish of drum-hitsound
02:00:284 (2) - feel weird because instrumen not that prominent compare to vocal at 02:00:396 -
KEEP
you may well say it. but I want to keep 3/4 rhythm in the same way as others
03:32:188 (5) - reduce DS move 03:32:188 (5,6) - down a little bit fix
03:35:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make ths stream more smoothly especially 03:36:105 (5) - change a little
03:57:038 (4) - try rhythm like this？ http://puu.sh/btglR/9c04105e0a.jpg no: I like stream
04:26:254 (6,7,8,9,10) - i think add claps and put a greenline at 04:26:254 (6) - to turn down the volume , 40% or less cool!!!

hope helpful
GOOD LUCK~

Thank you for modding!
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[Lunatic]

Nice map and work!
Sorry i couldn't help you so much ;w;

Otaku-kun123 wrote:

[Lunatic]

00:11:031 (2) - I prefer that u delete this note because i think it sound better.
I intend to follow tweet sound
02:38:680 (1,2) - I prefer to set the note first and then the slider.
It sounds better if delete 02:41:590 (3) - and make 02:41:366 (2) - longer to 02:41:590 -
KEEP
your idea might be good, but I want to follow big clap by circle
03:33:866 (1) - press Q OK
03:33:978 (1) - same ^ OK

Nice map and work!
Sorry i couldn't help you so much ;w;

Thank you for modding!
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Hello~

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[ General]

[ Normal]

[ Hard]

[ Lunatic]

＜気になったこと＞
●Normal(1.68)-Hard(3.11)の差とHard(3.11)-Insane(3.95)の差があまりバランスが取れていません。少しHard diffが難しい（star ratingが高い)ので、3.00未満に調整してみてはどうでしょうか。Hard diffで1/4多く使ってるので、それを減らしたりすれば調整はそこまで苦ではないと思います。


以上です。　がんばってください～

Gamu wrote:

Hello~

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[ General]

1. fine!

[ Normal]

1. Normalにしては設定が甘いので、HPまたはODのどちらかを+1上げることをお勧めします。Easyがないからこの設定をしてるかもしれませんが、BPMが低いので+1上がったところで問題はないと思います。
   fix: OD+1しました
2. 00:12:486 (1) - スピナー後にwhistleをつけているので、ここにもwhistleを入れたほうがいいです。back soundにもそういう音はあります。あと、スピナー後のオブジェクトはど真ん中に置くことはあまりおすすめしたくないです。osuを始めたばっかの人はデフォルトスキンを使ってることが多いと思いますので、300とかの点数表示で被っちゃうので、何処か違うとこに置きたいです。
   fix!
   spinner後のcenter objectは目からうろこでした。今度私もmodで誰かに教えます
3. 00:18:754 (2) - hitsoundのパターンを見てますと、ここにwhistleをつけるのは変です。外したほうが自然かと思います。
   fix: ミスです...
4. 00:59:053 (1) - whistleだけでは物足りない感じがしましたのでfinishを始点に入れてみてはどうでしょうか？
   fix~
   2番にはfinish入ってるのになんでここには入れなかったのか...
5. 01:00:844 (1,2) - (2)のリズムにちょっと違和感があります。このようなボーカルをフォローするリズムを試してみてはどうでしょうか？この方がリズムが理解しやすいし、プレイもしやすくなると思います。
   
   image

   
   KEEP
   良いflowが思いつかなかったのでこのままで。normalなのでこのくらいのrhythmは良いかなと思います
6. 01:10:247 (3) - normal-whistleを始点に入れませんか？ OK
7. 01:24:128 (2,3) - リズムちょいと難しいというかわかりにくいと思います。ボーカルにフォローしたいのはわかりますが、ちょっとわかりにくいかなって思います。なので、このリズムを試してみてください。
   
   image

   
   fix!
   1/2が続くから難しいか心配でしたが、絶対こっちのrhythmが良いですよね。
8. 01:46:292 (1) - 00:12:486と同じ感じで、真ん中には（ｒｙ (ry
9. 02:37:784 (1) - ^　ここはスピナー後との時間の間隔があまりないので、もしかしたら間隔をもっと空けなければならないかもしれません。結構厳しいので・・・
   fix
   りとるなさんにも言われたけど最近厳しくなったかな。3連clap気に入ってるんですけど減らしました
10. 03:07:337 (1) - ないほうが自然かも。 OK
11. 04:01:068 (2) - うーん、前の(1)がボーカルをフォローしているので、ここもボーカルにフォローすべきかと思います。なので、スライダーの代わりに04:01:292にサークルを一個置くほうがいいです。
    OK
12. 04:06:441 (3) - 中点にclapを～ OK: 良く聞いたら聞こえた
13. 04:11:814 (1) - Normal diffで1/4はダメかなって思います。今までいろんな譜面見てきましたが、Normal diffでこれは見たことがないです。ここは素直に04:12:038にサークルを一個って感じにしたほうがいいです。
    fix
    やっぱだめかぁ。。。

[ Hard]

1. 00:01:740 (1) - 始点にhitsoundがないのは勿体無いかな、曲の開始でもありますし、finishをつけて強調させたい。
   fix
2. 00:07:113 (3,4) - 見た目がちょっとあまりよくないので、スライダーを曲げてこのような感じにしてみてはどうでしょうか？ fine!
   
   image

   
3. 00:13:829 (4,5,1) - スライダーよりも５連打にした方が良いです。
   no change
   streamはなるべく使いたくないので（私が苦手というのもありますが。。。）
4. 00:16:963 (3) - 綺麗にスタックさせたいのでx:332 y:220に移動させてください。 OK
5. 00:34:650 (2) - リピートスライダーに変えてみませんか？今のままだとやりにくくて(3)でミスしてしまいます。 fix
6. 00:44:277 (5) - 中途半端に音を取ってしまっているので、1/4スライダーよりもサークル一個が適しています。
   fix
7. 00:56:254 (3) - これも中途半端に音を取っています。このリズムを試してみてください。
   
   image

   
   fix: 1/4始点は中途半端かな、やっぱり
8. 00:59:053 (1) - 始点にfinishが欲しいです～ OK~
9. 01:30:172 (4,5,6,7) - Hard diffでは、あまりこのようなinsaneレベルのリズムはおすすめしたくないです。(4)をサークル１個に変えてください。
   fix
   SR少しでも下げないと。。。
10. 01:31:292 (1) - 始点finish~ KEEP
11. 01:43:605 (1) - new comboいらないかな。 OK: なんかかっこつけたかった
12. 01:44:053 (1) - 前の(4)と近すぎるので離したほうがいいです。 remap
13. 02:53:232 (6) - 終点にfinish~ KEEP
14. 03:21:441 (1,2,3) - リピートスライダーにかえることをお勧めします。急にこのようなリズムがサークルで来るとミスりやすくなってしまいますので。Hard diffですから。
    fix
    ここもなんかかっこつけたかった。mapping中にplayした譜面の影響でもありますけど
15. 04:06:441 (1,2,3) - 重ねていますが、ここは重ねないほうがいいです。特にこのようにスペーシングを狭くして配置するべきところではないので。
    fix：　上と同じです
16. 04:11:814 (1,2) - hard diffのことを考えて(1)を消して(2)だけにしたほうが自然かと思います。もしくは、３連打に変えてしまったほうがいいです。
    remap
    reverse sliderにしました。normalで削ったのでこっちに使います
17. 04:19:650 (1) - finish~ OK: いいかんじ

[ Lunatic]

1. 00:01:740 ~ 00:14:277 - このパートに何もhitsoundが付いてないのは寂しいです。以下に書いてあるとおりにhitsoundを入れてみてはどうでしょうか？ ほかのdiffには書いていませんが、同じ感じでお願いします。
   
   hitsoundの提案

   -00:01:740 (1) - ほかのdiffにも書いてある通りfinish欲しいです。
   -00:03:531 (5,6) - これらの始点にnormal-whistleをつけてみてはどうですか？
   -00:07:113 (1,4) - ^
   -00:10:695 (1,4) - ^
   -00:05:322 (1) - 始点にfinish~
   -00:08:904 (1) - ^
   -00:12:486 (1) - ^
   fine!!!
   実はいろいろ試してうまくいかなかったのでno hitsoundにしてました。
   ほぼ提案通り修正。すごい助かりました
2. 00:18:195 (2) - これちょっと変かな。00:18:195で何の音を取っているかわからないです。このスライダーを消して、00:18:307にサークル一個置きましょ！
   fix
   1/4rhythm並べたかったって意図があったと思います。これがovermappingってやつ？
3. finish付けて欲しいところ書きました。もし一つでも入れたいと思いましたら全部いれることをお勧めします。
   
   finishの提案

   -00:33:978 (1) - 始点に
   -00:37:560 (1) - ^
   -00:41:142 (1) - ^
   -00:48:307 (1) - ^
   -00:51:889 (1) - ^
   -00:55:471 (1) - ^
   KEEP
   これは保留で。backmusicに合わせたいと思います。
4. 00:59:053 (1) - 強い音がありますので、finishが始点に欲しいな。 OK
5. 01:07:560 (4) - 流れ的にCTRL+Gしたほうが好きです。 fine!
6. 01:16:292 (1) - スピード変化は合ってないように見えます・・・通常速の1.0xにしたほうがいいかも。
   no change
   これも他の譜面の影響でいれました。insaneなのでこれは残したい
7. 01:26:590 (1) - ここのnew comboいらないです。
   OK
   SBに合わせて・・・なんて意図がありましたが、あまり意味ないので消します
8. 01:27:486 (1,2) - new combo交換しましょ！(1)を外して、(2)に入れる。 OK
9. 01:43:605 (1) - new comboいらないかな。 OK
10. 01:44:053 (1) - 前のオブジェクトに近いからもっと離すか、スタックさせたほうがいいかも。
    no change
    このあたりで流れ止めたくてこうしてます。
11. 01:45:620 (1) - finish~ OK
12. 01:52:784 (1) - 始点finish~ OK
13. 01:56:366 (1) - ^ OK
14. 03:35:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 開始が青線からっていうのはちょっといやらしいです。よく聞いてみるとこの連打は03:35:545から始まってるように聞こえますので、03:35:545にサークルを追加しませんか？もしくは、聞き取りやすい03:35:769から開始してもいいかと思います。
    remap
    ここも何か意図があったような。。。circle x8だと対称な形が作りやすいとか。。。
15. 04:11:814 (1) - 01:16:292 (1)と同じです。 no change
16. 04:19:650 (1) - finish~ OK

＜気になったこと＞
●Normal(1.68)-Hard(3.11)の差とHard(3.11)-Insane(3.95)の差があまりバランスが取れていません。少しHard diffが難しい（star ratingが高い)ので、3.00未満に調整してみてはどうでしょうか。Hard diffで1/4多く使ってるので、それを減らしたりすれば調整はそこまで苦ではないと思います。
最初はSR3.5くらいありました（爆
がんばって減らしましたがもう少しがんばりますね。（SRに効いてる因子ってよーわからんです）


以上です。　がんばってください～

Thank you for modding!
orange: change
purple: no change

sorry for late reply
ごめんなさい！！！　なかなかosuできなくてこんな遅くなってしまって・・・
とっても勉強になりました 　

Awesome map, Good luck in the rank

DaxMasterix wrote:

Awesome map, Good luck in the rank

thank you!

Hey! M4M from PM.
Well, here's my mod:




Overall, very nice mapset.
Hope this gets ranked soon.
Good Luck!

-Nya- wrote:

Hey! M4M from PM.
Well, here's my mod:

Normal:
00:17:859 (1) – Not good flow. Maybe try something like this?

Picture

OK
but about 00:17:859 (1) - , I use other way for good flow to next note 00:23:232 (1,2) – Blanket here? OK

Picture

00:26:366 (3,1) – Also not good flow. Maybe move 00:27:262 (1) – till it’s somewhere here: X:40 Y:132
no change
I intend to align 00:27:262 (1) - and the end of 00:26:366 (3) - in a straight line00:29:501 (2) – Rather remove the second white square, so the last part of the slider won’t be curved.

Picture

The one in the middle. So in the end the slider must look something like this:

Picture

no: I want irregular curveing at this part00:41:142 (1,2) – Try to fix the blanket a bit. no: I don't intend to blanket00:57:710 (2) – Why not make this slider look the same as this slider: 00:58:381 (3) - ? Like this:

Picture

change to other pattern01:22:560 (1) – Rather remove new combo KEEP01:38:904 (2,3) – Why not just blanket here?

Picture

no change
for good flow to next note, I don't use blanket pattern02:16:516 (2) – Rather just make this a straight slider. OK!02:40:247 (2) – Rather do this? I think it looks much better.

Picture

Copy and paste 02:39:351 (1) – then Ctrl+J and then Ctrl+G.
no change
moving to next part is so confusing... 02:43:381 (2,3) – Maybe make a small blanket? good!

Picture

02:54:351 (3) – Move this circle till it’s here: X:52 Y:172 OK02:56:366 (4,1) – Improve the blanket. OK

Picture

03:02:187 (3) – Rather do this?

Picture

It forms a kind of triangle and blankets 03:01:740 (2) –
fine!03:03:307 (1) – Remove NC?
no: but move NC to 03:02:859 (1) - 03:25:919 (1,2) – This doesn’t look so good in my opinion. Make these two sliders look the same? Copy and paste 03:26:814 (2) – and then rotate the new slider till it looks like this:

Picture

OK, I agree04:13:381 (2,1) – Blanket this better, like you have blanketed this one: 04:12:038 (1,1) –
change to other patternThis is all I could find. Nice diff. <3

Hard:
00:39:799 (3,4) – What about a blanket here? no, I prefer mine

Picture

00:43:605 (3,4) – I don’t like this. Rather this?

Picture

Copy and paste 00:43:045 (2) – then Ctrl+J
KEEP00:47:859 (5) – Maybe this here:

Picture

Copy and paste 00:46:963 (3) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G
OK! good looking~00:55:919 (2,4) – Improve this stack. Place 00:56:814 (4) – here: X:276 Y:212 fix01:12:934 (5,2) - ^, move 01:13:829 (2) – till it’s here: X:332 Y:151 fix01:26:366 (2,3) – Blanket here.
no change
I want copy pattern01:28:829 (5) – Rather do this? good!

Picture

01:55:919 (3,1) – Rather blanket here.
no
since low SV and small DS, blanketting is hard to keep good flow02:10:695 (1,2,3,4,5) – Complete this square shape. So DS 02:11:366 (4,5) – like you had DS’ed the previous notes.

Picture

Something like that.
fine!02:20:322 (4,5) – Don’t make a jump here. Rather form a triangle shape with the previous notes. Like this:

Picture

KEEP
I think jump pattern is suitable for this part, but if other modders say not good it, I reconsider02:22:784 (4,1) – Fix this stack. Move 02:23:232 (1) – till it’s here: X:448 Y:319 fix02:51:889 (1,2,3,4) – Try to form a shape with these. Like this:

Picture

Something like above, but just better.
OK, fix it~03:29:501 (1,4) – This stack can be improved. Move 03:30:844 (4) – till it’s here: X:148 Y:148 fix03:57:262 (1) – Move this slider a bit upwards till it’s somewhere here: X:256 Y:236 to make the flower shape look better
KEEP
your right, but a little hard because of large spacing, imo04:27:486 (2,4) – Improve stack. Place 04:28:381 (4) – here: X:288 Y:371 fix04:31:963 (4,6) - ^, place 04:32:859 (6) – here: X:380 Y:183 fixAlso a very nice diff. <3<3

Overall, very nice mapset.
Hope this gets ranked soon.
Good Luck!

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

No don't grave this please ;w;

Kinshara wrote:

No don't grave this please ;w;

I cannot prevent to grave it now,,, sorry

but, I'll never give up for ranked!!!

from pm ~
張ってあったURL見てみたらプロフィールにとばされてどれmodしていいかわかんなくて
とりあえずこれやってみますー

これじゃなかったらまた連絡してね


　Lunatic　

難易度が簡単に感じたので、HPドレインをもう少し下げてもいいかなって感じます

00:18:531 (3,4) - 　初見だとここの部分は厳しいと思います

01:00:956 (2,3) - 　３をはやく押してしまいます。　もうちょっと離したほうがいいと思います
こんなのはどうかな？
http://gyazo.com/a577b229dfd69a430a6a4ba269b41c8b

01:14:725 (7,1) - 　csがいきなり大きくなって違和感を感じました
01:13:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 　ここの部分で少しずつ大きくするような緑線を入れてみてはどうでしょうか

02:12:262 (8,1) - 　８と１のｄｓと02:12:486 (1,2) - 　１と２のｄｓを同じにしたほうがたたきやすいです

03:07:560 (1) - 　個人的には曲げたほうが好きです
こういうリズムとか
http://gyazo.com/86ee1abe1b1c0a960cffe5b01928f4ec

03:25:695 (7,8,1) - 　stackきちんとしてあげましょう
結構ずれてるように見えます
http://gyazo.com/b91e01ec04ad17481fa667cecf7f9ff6

03:26:814 (4) - 　５にstackしてみてはどうでしょうか

04:22:784 (7,8,1) - 　ｄｓがきつく感じます


　Hard　

00:44:277 (5) - 　方向を１のほうに向けてみてはどうでしょうか

01:33:307 (2,4,1) - 　全部まっすぐはすごい固いかんじになってしまうので、どれか曲げたほうがいいかもです

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SBできるんですね！
今度たのもうかなｗ

またね

-Yuzuriha wrote:

from pm ~
張ってあったURL見てみたらプロフィールにとばされてどれmodしていいかわかんなくて
とりあえずこれやってみますー

これじゃなかったらまた連絡してね
ごめんないさい！URLミスりました...　でもこの譜面のmodをお願いしたかったのでよかったです～

　Lunatic　

難易度が簡単に感じたので、HPドレインをもう少し下げてもいいかなって感じます
気持ち下げました

00:18:531 (3,4) - 　初見だとここの部分は厳しいと思います
KEEP
それほどspacingもきつくないのでこのままで

01:00:956 (2,3) - 　３をはやく押してしまいます。　もうちょっと離したほうがいいと思います
こんなのはどうかな？
http://gyazo.com/a577b229dfd69a430a6a4ba269b41c8b
OK：ちょっと修正

01:14:725 (7,1) - 　csがいきなり大きくなって違和感を感じました
01:13:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 　ここの部分で少しずつ大きくするような緑線を入れてみてはどうでしょうか
no change
やってみましたがかえって違和感出た気がするので

02:12:262 (8,1) - 　８と１のｄｓと02:12:486 (1,2) - 　１と２のｄｓを同じにしたほうがたたきやすいです
fix~

03:07:560 (1) - 　個人的には曲げたほうが好きです
こういうリズムとか
http://gyazo.com/86ee1abe1b1c0a960cffe5b01928f4ec
SV変えないなら有ですね。でもここは遅くしたいのでこのままで

03:25:695 (7,8,1) - 　stackきちんとしてあげましょう
結構ずれてるように見えます
http://gyazo.com/b91e01ec04ad17481fa667cecf7f9ff6
fix！

03:26:814 (4) - 　５にstackしてみてはどうでしょうか
いいかんじ<3

04:22:784 (7,8,1) - 　ｄｓがきつく感じます
fix~

　Hard　

00:44:277 (5) - 　方向を１のほうに向けてみてはどうでしょうか
やっぱ違和感あるよね。。。

01:33:307 (2,4,1) - 　全部まっすぐはすごい固いかんじになってしまうので、どれか曲げたほうがいいかもです
４に決めた！

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SBできるんですね！
今度たのもうかなｗ
edit久しぶりすぎて忘れたんですけどねw　Ruleも変わったみたいだし勉強しなおそうかな
またね

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

Hi there, coming from either your or my request/queue or m4m, whatever. Be so kind to answer to my mod and tell my why you denied suggestions.

(copy paste end | HistoryTag: ~ Sploosh ~)

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from either your or my request/queue or m4m, whatever. Be so kind to answer to my mod and tell my why you denied suggestions.

Unrankable
Suggestion, no change neccessary
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion

(copy paste end | HistoryTag: ~ Sploosh ~)

[Lunatic]
■ 00:08:008 (4) - You could silence the Sliderend if you feel fancy
no thank you
■ 00:08:904 (1) - Maybe ctrl+g this one?
I intend rightside moving like 00:09:351 (2) -
■ 00:12:486 (1,2) - I think you should unstack this one (not only to be consistent with stuff like 00:07:113 (1,2) - and 01:48:307 (1,2) - , but also so that it's easier to read)
I like this stack pattern for accent
■ 00:16:068 (1,2) - ^
■ 00:18:531 (3,4) - This doesnt really look like it'd be that fast, since it has, well, kinda the same distance 00:18:195 (2,3) - has. They player only knows this from before 00:16:740 (3,4) - . People might misread that.
As another example, the player could also read 00:35:322 (6,7) - as a faster combo like ^ is, yet it isnt.
OK, decrease spacing
■ 00:19:202 (6) - stack is pretty off
u~m, I dont think so
■ 00:22:225 (4) - This also has more spacing than it should have (since they just played the same rhythm with less spacing, 00:21:441 (1,2) - )
fix
■ 01:15:396 (2,3,4) - How about this?

I want symmetrical pattern at this part
■ 01:16:292 (1) - if you did ^, then you probably want to move this one (maybe stack it?)
■ 01:30:844 (8) - Maybe you could make this one faster (since it's the same sound as 01:16:292 (1) - ) and place it somehow similar to this?

Make it round so that the player doesnt Sliderbreak if he's suprised by the speedup

no change
your suggetion is intersiting! but I don't want to use this SV-changing many times.
■ 02:38:680 (1,2) - I think this one should be consistent with 01:16:292 (1) -
I feel the same pattern is boring
■ 02:39:799 (3,4) - I would never expect this spacing like this, once again
fix
■ 02:53:232 (9) - See 1:15
■ 03:40:135 (1) - I think it'll be better if you let the Spinner end on where the break starts now, since that swoosh sound doesnt stop until then
nice suggetion!
■ 04:05:769 (2,3) - unstack (see previous ones)
■ 04:11:814 (1) - Now, this is where it'll become a problem I think. The song's kinda slow on that part, youve had a break before that and suddeny, BAM, fast Slider and you realize that too late - Your combo is now gone. In the end it might be better if you just mapped all of these like 02:38:680 (1,2) -
KEEP
this part is the turning point from slow to fast. so I think this pattern is suitable. but this SV-changing is unusual way. if other modder indicate the same stuff, I consider again
Now, there's that spacing thing that buggs me. Sometime you use the same spacing for either 1/4 or 1/2 timings and there is no way of telling which is which. You maybe want to go over that again (Ive written down some examples)
This also forces some rather random speedups and slowdowns (kinda like 03:00:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) which dont really have to be there.
ok, consider it

[Hard]
■ 00:29:053 (1) - unstack please. It'll be easier to read if it's more visible, since so many things appear at one in that combo
OK
■ 01:04:762 (2) - I think something like this would be easier to read (having a Slider start on the blue tick feels weird to me)

fix
■ 02:27:934 (3,4,5) - move these down by just a little so that the automatic stacking doesnt make them touch ingame

nice!

■ 03:40:135 (1) - same as in Lunatic
fix!

[Normal]
■ 00:21:889 (4,5) - since this is the easiest diff, I'd try to avoid stack everywhere possible
OK
■ 01:44:053 (1,1) - Iam not sure if QATs will let you go through with that. The minimum time between a Spinner and the next object should be at least 750ms and you're just under that with ~670ms. Might want to ask a QAT for this
remap
according to t/241019 , this amount of time worries me. so I change to no spinner pattern
■ 02:46:516 (1) - This one is extremely close to the bottom of the screen, you might want to move it up just a little bit
in playing view, I see it no problem
■ 03:28:157 (4) - ^ same thing
■ 03:40:135 (1) - same as the other diffs
fix!

Thank you for modding!
orange: change
green: no change