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General
For Easy and Normal
00:44:309 - kiai time isn't snapped - should be 00:44:325
01:00:123 - kiai time isn't snapped - should be 01:00:139
Normal
General: Use constant spacing, it would make the map look nicer and easier for players, inconsistency especially in a Normal where the differences is not intended or needed. Examples at 00:42:698 (3,4,5) - 00:44:325 (1,2) - use a fixed spacing
00:00:605 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - using single circles for this 1.5 beat rhythm is tougher accuracy for non-experienced players, using sliders for this rhythm would be much better for this Normal
00:11:186 (1) - you didn't follow the vocals for the previous spinner, so do likewise for this one, start at 00:10:837 - also, do not use Normal hitsound finish, it's too jarring and the audio level is too loud for this portion of the song
00:15:256 (1) - this starts on nothing, start at 00:15:488
00:20:837 (6) - sounds more natural ending at 00:22:000
00:24:442 (4) - only start slider at 00:24:558
00:27:597 (3) - object is not snapped
00:35:488 (6) - end this at 00:35:721 and add a note at 00:36:186
01:03:860 (6) - new combo
01:11:302 (6) - ^
Hard
00:11:186 (1) - same as Normal
00:24:442 (1) - off-rhythm, start at 00:24:558
00:26:418 (1,2,3) - that is not good spacing
00:34:093 (1) - tail and start of slider almost completely stacks over each other, can't really be seen as to which direction you are supposed to flow with the slider ball, this would be a rankable issue
00:35:023 (4) - ^
01:14:558 (7) - bad rhythm, use something like this instead:
01:16:884 (1) - to at least fit somewhat to the music, end it at 01:18:744
01:19:209 (2) - start at 01:19:442
Spacings could be done better and less close to each other
Insane
00:11:186 (1) - same as Normal
01:00:372 (3,4,5) - they have 1/2 beat rest between them, do not put them so close
01:02:465 (4,5,6) - don't stack on other stream
01:04:325 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:08:046 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:11:767 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:16:884 (1) - end at 01:18:279
01:19:209 (2) - start at 01:18:744 end at 01:19:442
01:20:604 - add a slider from here to 01:21:302
Do not place sliders for the sake of it's shape when the length and rhythm of it does not fit the song. The song does not fit to your rhythm, you have to blend/fit to it. Not the other way around
There are quite a number of gaps, mostly because you place objects to the vocals, and do not have fillers and lead-ins, which could help, not only in continuing the flow of play. Spacings also can be improved.
Good Luck
General
For Easy and Normal
00:44:309 - kiai time isn't snapped - should be 00:44:325
01:00:123 - kiai time isn't snapped - should be 01:00:139
Normal
General: Use constant spacing, it would make the map look nicer and easier for players, inconsistency especially in a Normal where the differences is not intended or needed. Examples at 00:42:698 (3,4,5) - 00:44:325 (1,2) - use a fixed spacing
00:00:605 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - using single circles for this 1.5 beat rhythm is tougher accuracy for non-experienced players, using sliders for this rhythm would be much better for this Normal
00:11:186 (1) - you didn't follow the vocals for the previous spinner, so do likewise for this one, start at 00:10:837 - also, do not use Normal hitsound finish, it's too jarring and the audio level is too loud for this portion of the song
00:15:256 (1) - this starts on nothing, start at 00:15:488
00:20:837 (6) - sounds more natural ending at 00:22:000
00:24:442 (4) - only start slider at 00:24:558
00:27:597 (3) - object is not snapped
00:35:488 (6) - end this at 00:35:721 and add a note at 00:36:186
01:03:860 (6) - new combo
01:11:302 (6) - ^
Hard
00:11:186 (1) - same as Normal
00:24:442 (1) - off-rhythm, start at 00:24:558
00:26:418 (1,2,3) - that is not good spacing
00:34:093 (1) - tail and start of slider almost completely stacks over each other, can't really be seen as to which direction you are supposed to flow with the slider ball, this would be a rankable issue
00:35:023 (4) - ^
01:14:558 (7) - bad rhythm, use something like this instead:
01:16:884 (1) - to at least fit somewhat to the music, end it at 01:18:744
01:19:209 (2) - start at 01:19:442
Spacings could be done better and less close to each other
Insane
00:11:186 (1) - same as Normal
01:00:372 (3,4,5) - they have 1/2 beat rest between them, do not put them so close
01:02:465 (4,5,6) - don't stack on other stream
01:04:325 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:08:046 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:11:767 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:16:884 (1) - end at 01:18:279
01:19:209 (2) - start at 01:18:744 end at 01:19:442
01:20:604 - add a slider from here to 01:21:302
Do not place sliders for the sake of it's shape when the length and rhythm of it does not fit the song. The song does not fit to your rhythm, you have to blend/fit to it. Not the other way around
There are quite a number of gaps, mostly because you place objects to the vocals, and do not have fillers and lead-ins, which could help, not only in continuing the flow of play. Spacings also can be improved.
Good Luck