1. Hard (4,75 stars, 271 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 433 notes)
3. Normal (2,97 stars, 154 notes)

2. Yah! Rastafari!

1. Please, remove the skin from the map. There's no need to keep it there and it may annoy some players, moreover it makes us download extra data.
2. Please, consider mapping the break. Your song is rather short and players don't need a break here at all. As a player, I would prefer to enjoy your patterns rather than looking at empty playfield.

1. Try to use AR4 and OD/HP 3. This is the easiest diff, so players may need something a bit easier than an average Normal-diff. Also, your rhythm and patterns are pretty simple, they will work fine with lower diff-settings!
2. 00:02:605 (4,1) - nazi - the blanket here feels a bit imperfect. It might not be noticeable now, but with HR it becomes quite visible in-game. blanket
3. 00:21:824 (5,1) - nazi - would change it into a circle-shaped pattern to make it look prettier. See it and decide if you like this or not! example
4. 00:50:887 (3) - it is kinda against your comboing but I recommend you to place a new combo here. It will help you to emphasize end of the kiaia part + it will reflect the music/vocals much better!
5. 00:56:043 (4) - please, replace this slider with a circle at 00:56:043 - to keep consistency with 00:41:277 - or otherwise, you can place a circle at 00:41:277 - to keep rhythm consistent.
6. 01:37:762 - insist on keeping the break? Try to drag it to 01:37:762 - so it will match with the song much better. See?
   
   Everything else looks alright. Good job!

1. 00:05:887 (7) - nazi - personally, I feel like (7) is being a bit out of its place. It just doesn't works/flows here good enough and fels randomly-placed. Try my pattern instead!
2. 00:28:387 (4) and 00:32:137 (5) - nazi - sorry, it feels like shape of (4) is a bit weird-random. Don't want to offend you or anything, but it felt weird during the testplay, I would just copy-paste 00:27:449 (2).
3. 00:50:887 (5) - same as on Normal, consider adding a new combo here.
4. 00:56:980 - by the way, about beats like this one. THey're being ignored, but there's a sound which shouldn't be ignored. You can try to use custom slider-tick sound here. So, it won't sound like you've missed something.
5. 02:02:137 (6,7) - shouldn't it be replaced with one of those 3/4 sliders? It sounds kinda weird as it is, imo. 3/4 slider looks like this in case if you don't know.
   
   Neat, well-mapped and simple. Not bad!

1. OD6? On the Insane diff? You're being way too nice to players! Try to increase it, it will fit much better with the song and your patterns, imo.
2. 00:16:199 (3) - I like the way how you use 1/4 beats but there's NO any beats on 00:16:316 - therefore it is overmapping. Please, do not overmap and replace this slider with something else.
3. 00:24:285 - - come on, this is the hardst diff, don't ignore 1/4 beats! More triplets! More! Go Insane, show us some creativity!
   Note: in fact, you've missed plenty of beats, try to look for them and map them instead of overmapping sometimes!
4. 00:29:324 (8,9,10,11) - I recommend you to use new combos to emphasize such jumps. The DS is pretty big and jumps are rather hard to play, so NC here would warn players about uch jumps!
   Note: jumps should fit with the music, so placing NC to emphasize jumps should not hurt too much and will fit, as well.
5. 00:52:293 (4,5) - whoa! that was totally out of your regular pattern and I didn't expect that at all! Try to place a new combo to emphasize us about this antijump or simply avoid this antijump.
   Note: usually, we use such patterns to emphasize something in music, therefore NCs will fit pretty good!
6. 00:58:387 (7) - overlapped with the default HP-Bar. Not a big deal, but looks a bit messy, try to fix that if possible!
7. 01:29:558 (9,10) - this jump is absolutely random, isn't it? I can see/hear no reason to keep it here, why did you do that? Try to avoid random jumps, they may confuse players.
8. 02:09:402 (1) - 02:11:277 (1) - totally unexpected and rather hard-to-get circles which will generate a lot of rage. Feel free to keep them if you like some tricky patterns, but they will annoy players a lot!
   
   I recommend you to use NCs more often here and perhaps, check your jumps once again, some of them may be weird/off beat.

Best of luck!

1. 00:24:637 (3) - Transform this into a curve slider?
2. 01:03:543 (5) - Move this to x:212 y:160, so it could get a blanket combo, and move 01:04:012 (1) to x:304 y:116, if you moved the previous note.
3. 01:11:512 (1) - Move the last point (tick) to x:144 y:252.
4. 01:59:793 (1,2,3) - I feel that it's hard for an easy difficulty, but I.m not sure. Something like this perhaps?:
   
5. 02:05:887 (4) - Ctrl+G for a flow? If that's the case, move 02:07:293 (5) to x:256 y:340.

1. 00:33:543 (8) - Add a tick at x:192 y:152, so it could make a blanket?
2. 01:21:824 (7) - Turn this into a curve slider to match 01:19:949 (2,4) .

1. 01:49:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move them to x:266 y:165. This way, it'll not confuse the players.

Hard

1. 00:15:262 (1) - Maybe a whistle at the beginning? Sound empty without any whistle xD
   
2. 00:17:137 (4) - IMO there are too many parts like this. I know it's Hard, not Insane so can't be too hard. But... Maybe just
   
   make a slider but without reversing and make a circle just after slider? You know: 3/4 slider and 1/2 slider? I think you would
   
   copy 00:18:074 (6) and rotate for 180* and move after the first slider. I think that's not too hard but it'd be something more to
   
   use a brain during the game. XD Can you understand my babble? D:
   
3. 00:41:512 (1) - Again. It's too similar comparing the whole map. Please shorten the slider to make it without reversing and
   
   maybe make a 1/4 slider with reversing?
   
4. 01:09:637 (6) - I KNOW. But please! Don't kill me! ;_; Again shorten the slider. But maybe after that make a circle and another
   
   one circle at 01:10:340. I think it could be placed at the circle before or at the beginning of the 01:10:574 (7) slider. What do
   
   you think?
   
5. 01:26:512 (1) - You know what to do at the beginning. XDDDD After cutting the slider: maybe place a circle at 01:27:215 on the
   
   beginning of the slider 01:27:449 (3)?
   
6. 02:07:762 (1) - And maybe shorten the spinner to 02:11:043 and add "clap" and MAYBE "whistle" at the same time. I think it will
   
   sound better. :3

Insane

1. 01:02:019 (7) - IDK maybe add "whistle"? I think it'll be cool and will fit.
   
2. 01:15:144 (9) - "Whistle" again. Hey it will really fit D:
   
3. 01:16:199 (3,4) - I think you can extend the slider for another 1/4. Also I think there will be cool to put "Whistle" at the
   
   end of the (4) slider. What do you think about it all?
   
4. 02:04:012 (1) - Maybe again make it longer for another 1/4?
   
5. 02:07:879 (1,1) - Could you give "Claps" to the spinners at the end? IMO it will sound well.

1. 00:00:262 (1,2) - Nothing big, but it'd be nice to start this song on a slider. Hitting the very first note of a song that has no audio before it makes timing the first note extremely hard.
2. 00:33:543 (4) - How about straightening this, and having the (1) come more off the end so it feels a bit natural. | http://puu.sh/86Kck.jpg | remember to adjust the (2) if you do this.
3. 00:35:887 (4) - How about symmetry with 00:37:762 (1) - ? Rotated 180° of course.
4. 00:41:512 (1) - Try a little curve, since this is different from the previous (3,4) sliders. | http://puu.sh/86K16.jpg
5. 01:04:480 (2) - I'm not feeling this 1/2 slider. Like it's in the wrong spot. A slider like this would fit better where 01:03:543 (5) - is on the timeline. I suggest turning this into a circle, or rearranging this so the 1/2 slider is where the (5) is.
6. 01:19:012 (5,1) - Swap NC's to maintain consistency.
7. 01:25:105 (4,5,6) - Since this is an Easy, It might be better to reduce the 1/2 usage here. | I'm glad you are using more than the simple 1/1 but I feel that this might be too many 1/2s running. | The best solution would simply be to try this: http://puu.sh/86Kxc.jpg
8. 01:34:012 (1,2) - blanket the (1) around the (2)?
9. God my ears... >_>
10. 01:52:762 (1,3) - Symmetry? Make (1) the same as (3)

1. 00:18:543 (6) - Nazi: x214 y296 for perfect 1.20. Right now it's unbalanced 1.17 to 1.22
2. 00:34:012 (1,2) - Join these as a 1/4 reverse slider?
3. 00:52:058 (2) - From 00:17:137 - to the first break. You do not have a single 1/1 gap anywhere. Why not delete this note? seems to be the best place to do so.
4. 01:04:012 (1) - See 01:57:449 (2) - below as it's virtually the same thing.
5. 01:14:324 (7) - Z shape instead? | http://puu.sh/86M97.jpg
6. A bit late to be suggesting this but... 01:26:277 (9) - How about trying a clap here with 30% volume. As well as any other place that it might fit. Double claps seem to work nicely in this section! I'll only mention this once really because I don't feel like overcrowding something you'd probably want to work on your own.
7. 01:29:793 (7) - Rotate this by 18° and place like so (at x336 y204) | http://puu.sh/86Mi7.jpg | (adjust the (1) afterwards as well with grid snap off)
8. omg my ears just keep bleeding.
9. 01:57:449 (2) - This could be perfectly symmetrical. | Try lining up the center node on the grid so you can control+H it and see if the nodes line up when flipped horizontal | http://puu.sh/86L78.jpg | The key is to get the spot right when it switches lengths. If I move the red node down any lower than where I have it. It'll be swapped to a 3/4. So right now, control+h will be perfectly symmetrical.
10. 02:05:887 (5) - Maybe NC here because of the rhythm change in the music? (and also if you decide to do the thing I mentioned with combo colors at the start)

1. 00:01:668 (4) - map these as 1/4 circles or a reverse 1/4 slider? To catch the sound at 00:01:785 -
2. 00:16:668 (4) - same idea. Try to catch the sound on the blue tick as well.
3. 01:02:019 (7) - wouldn't this make more sense at 01:01:785 - ?
4. 01:31:199 (3) - how about a little curve? | http://puu.sh/87imb.jpg
5. 01:52:527 (1) - Just gonna drop another opinion here. I don't see a need for this note. It does match the vocals but they're pretty insignificant.

I think you really deserve so much attention because this map is awesome The only 1 thing imo is that OD - could you reduce it to 7?

00:01:668 (4) - map these as 1/4 circles or a reverse 1/4 slider? To catch the sound at 00:01:785 -
00:16:668 (4) - same idea. Try to catch the sound on the blue tick as well.
01:02:019 (7) - wouldn't this make more sense at 01:01:785 - ?
01:31:199 (3) - how about a little curve? | http://puu.sh/87imb.jpg
01:52:527 (1) - Just gonna drop another opinion here. I don't see a need for this note. It does match the vocals but they're pretty insignificant.

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Thank you for star. :3

You're welcome

Good luck with your beatmap!