ClariS - with you · forum

Decipher

617 posts

Joined December 2010

Decipher 2014-03-08T06:59:52+00:00

with rei..

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-03-08T11:44:40+00:00

whaaaattttt

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-03-12T06:58:54+00:00

SPOILER

In conclusion, Natsu = ...

EDIT: 999th post!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-12T07:24:04+00:00

w-what, that image is fake!

Btw:

http://puu.sh/7sjBW.rar

10nya

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-03-13T11:45:53+00:00

NATSU GAY DESU

kisata

521 posts

Joined September 2012

kisata 2014-03-13T20:38:47+00:00

ALL THIS NATSU

captin1

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-03-13T20:40:38+00:00

rip

10nya

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-03-14T04:47:09+00:00

allright

POSTS ABOVE MY POST WILL MOD THIS MAP THX <3

captin1

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-03-15T19:28:02+00:00

ok

[General]

ClariS <3
I bet you have a nice storyboard. Would be great if the files were in the folder so I could see it ;w;
Source should be "EXSTETRA", as this song is the opening for that game
Natsu's diff is missing "Laurier" and "Natsu" from the tags
add "Clara" and "Alice" (the two singers for ClariS) "opening" "エクステトラ" (japanese for the source) and "ex-tetra" (alternate name for the game) into tags
You should add ~1500 ms of audioleadin so that there are 2 seconds before the map starts

i'll be back sometime with a full mod

10nya

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-03-23T09:26:30+00:00

captin1 wrote:
ok www

[General]
ClariS <3
I bet you have a nice storyboard. Would be great if the files were in the folder so I could see it ;w; removed sb since my internet is slow...
Source should be "EXSTETRA", as this song is the opening for that game
Natsu's diff is missing "Laurier" and "Natsu" from the tags
add "Clara" and "Alice" (the two singers for ClariS) "opening" "エクステトラ" (japanese for the source) and "ex-tetra" (alternate name for the game) into tags
You should add ~1500 ms of audioleadin so that there are 2 seconds before the map starts
i'll be back sometime with a full mod

all fix thanks ~:3
updated

tennyecho

73 posts

Joined August 2012

tennyecho 2014-03-23T15:15:32+00:00

from #modreqs
Natsu's Normal

Umm... I think 40% is too dim, I couldn't hear well the hitsounds, I suggest raise it up around 45% - 50% in most of first part. This is very optional
00:33:680 (3) - make it better bird, so it will be a good blanket with 2
SPOILER
00:39:305 (3) - make it curvier so it looks good by 2 and 4
SPOILER
00:58:055 (4) - suggestion : move it to x=128, y = 64 so it looks like a wave
01:58:055 (4) - suggestion : move it to x=416, y = 308, ^

Natsu-san, your map is like an art :>

Hard

00:05:930 (3) - Suggestion : change the whistle to finish. IMO, it's better.
00:18:305 (4) - make it curvier
SPOILER
00:23:742 (1) - make this one curve looked like this one 00:26:742 (2) -
03:21:492 (9) - move it to x=196, y= 208 (seems better if you lower it)
03:22:055 (2) - move it to x=160, y= 100 ^
01:15:492 (1) - lower it a bit to y =336
02:45:680 (1,3) - suggestion : make this looks like a long blade (less curvy) , like comment no 2
03:28:617 (4) - move slider's end to x=148, y=272. So it forms 90 degree with 03:28:055 (3) -

10nya-san, your map is beautiful >w<

Laurier's Insane
For Laurier's Insane, I find it great. But, I will check it again later, coz it's so fun to play it.

Overall, I am sorry for my poor mod. I hope this map get the SB back and get ranked. ganbatte minna!!

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-24T06:13:38+00:00

tennyecho wrote:
from #modreqs
Natsu's Normal
Umm... I think 40% is too dim, I couldn't hear well the hitsounds, I suggest raise it up around 45% - 50% in most of first part. This is very optional Is a slow part I think the current way fit the music
00:33:680 (3) - make it better bird, so it will be a good blanket with 2
SPOILER
ok
00:39:305 (3) - make it curvier so it looks good by 2 and 4
SPOILER
It's on purpose
00:58:055 (4) - suggestion : move it to x=128, y = 64 so it looks like a wave did some
01:58:055 (4) - suggestion : move it to x=416, y = 308, ^ ^
Natsu-san, your map is like an art :> thanks :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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276,100,96305,2,0,B|204:105|171:30|171:30|88:20|78:103|78:103|142:154|120:221,1,400,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,304,98180,6,0,P|108:312|68:296,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,232,99305,2,0,P|288:224|328:240,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,320,100055,2,0,P|424:276|374:153,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,116,101180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
188,140,101555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,192,101930,2,0,P|88:132|100:92,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,102680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,240,103055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,292,103430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,348,103805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,292,104180,6,0,P|284:236|268:188,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,104930,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,92,105305,2,0,P|136:52|180:36,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,76,106055,2,0,B|328:76|360:40|360:40|412:56|416:120,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,212,107180,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,192,113180,6,0,P|312:192|352:160,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,140,114305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,64,114680,2,0,P|76:128|140:232,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,115805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,184,116180,6,0,L|352:84,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,88,116930,2,0,L|482:183,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,280,117680,2,0,P|480:300|452:308,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,300,118055,2,0,P|388:300|360:312,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,172,119180,6,0,P|104:160|44:180,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,256,120305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,256,120680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,172,121055,2,0,P|420:160|480:180,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,122180,6,0,B|312:314|211:310|215:264|211:252|211:252|207:241|211:183|99:183|111:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,348,123680,2,0,P|24:312|12:260,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,224,124242,2,0,P|12:144|60:92,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,95,125180,6,0,P|204:103|252:88,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,44,125930,2,0,L|400:8,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,89,126680,2,0,P|248:141|280:189,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,204,127242,2,0,P|344:252|292:320,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,332,128180,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,300,128555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,300,128742,2,0,P|56:256|56:160,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,129492,2,0,L|212:132,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,124,130055,2,0,B|304:108|304:76|304:76|344:76|344:76|344:108|408:124,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,160,131180,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,248,131555,2,0,B|396:288|352:260|352:260|304:240|260:272,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,324,132680,2,0,P|120:324|80:296,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,268,133242,2,0,P|20:208|44:128,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,196,134180,6,0,B|168:208|216:176|216:176|264:208,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,135680,2,0,B|96:88|48:120|48:120|0:88,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,137180,5,4,0:0:0:0:
344,112,137555,2,0,B|396:104|428:60|428:60|472:96|472:160,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,138680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,308,139055,2,0,B|304:344|232:284|172:320,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,332,140180,6,0,P|8:296|20:212,2,150,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,141492,2,0,P|192:304|212:184,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,128,142617,2,0,P|96:104|84:80,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143180,12,2,144680,0:0:0:0:
480,60,146180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
424,144,146555,2,0,P|328:180|240:132,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,38,147680,2,0,P|196:52|152:98,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,180,148430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,280,148805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,336,149180,6,0,P|292:336|344:308,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,256,149930,2,0,B|464:220|448:172|448:172|388:164|388:92,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,152180,6,0,B|176:220|192:172|192:172|252:164|252:92,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,316,154055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,320,154430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,276,154805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,176,155180,6,0,P|504:124|476:80,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,36,155930,2,0,B|336:12|248:68|196:36,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,158180,6,0,B|352:236|440:180|492:212,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,152,160055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,96,160430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,124,160805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,216,161180,6,0,P|0:236|72:268,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,240,161930,2,0,P|208:240|256:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,324,162680,2,0,B|436:376|480:252|480:252|392:168,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,116,164180,6,0,B|241:63|241:63|132:137|210:228,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,165680,2,0,P|288:292|232:328,2,100,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,179180,12,0,182930,0:0:0:0:
328,264,183680,6,0,P|380:276|440:256,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,120,185180,2,0,P|132:108|72:128,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,186305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,276,186680,5,2,0:0:0:0:
252,356,187055,2,0,P|184:372|100:288,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,216,188180,2,0,L|280:184,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,172,188742,2,0,P|312:104|232:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,68,189680,6,0,B|88:68|64:32|64:32|40:148,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,232,190805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,328,191180,2,0,P|48:356|108:344,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,332,191742,2,0,B|199:311|199:311|237:310|281:347,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,372,192680,6,0,P|404:328|388:268,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,260,193242,2,0,B|325:227|325:227|237:203|241:108,1,200,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,125,194367,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,125,194555,2,0,P|306:35|213:12,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,24,195680,6,0,L|60:28|4:32,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,12,196805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,40,197180,2,0,P|348:72|360:132,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,160,197742,2,0,B|288:204|288:204|252:172|184:180,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,176,198680,6,0,P|28:232|156:248,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,172,200180,2,0,P|252:148|312:152,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,244,201305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,216,201680,5,4,0:0:0:0:
393,118,202055,2,0,P|332:59|210:67,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,128,203180,2,0,P|141:225|205:298,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,328,204305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,312,204680,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,232,205055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,232,205242,2,0,P|472:172|456:120,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,180,205992,2,0,B|316:208|264:172|264:172|244:212,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,206742,2,0,B|172:276|120:240|120:240|104:271,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,180,207680,6,0,B|124:140|176:180|176:180|200:100,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,210680,12,2,213680,0:0:0:0:
312,224,214242,6,0,B|364:236|364:236|420:220,2,100,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,152,215367,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,152,215555,2,0,B|192:140|192:140|136:156,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,224,216680,6,0,P|346:159|322:91,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,56,217617,2,0,L|172:36,2,50,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,91,218367,2,0,P|400:80|456:28,2,150,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,219680,12,0,225680,0:0:0:0:

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2014-03-24T09:09:54+00:00

m4m!

[General]

In all diff...missing sb image file...is it only my problem..?
SPOILER
you used SB, so you should check "display epilepsy warning (stroyboard has quick strobing)"
check out "widescreen support" on Natsu's Normal, Laurier's Insane. maybe don't need it.

[Natsu's Normal]

00:21:492 (3) - finish
00:33:680 (3) - blanket. move 1 grid up 2nd slider point
00:59:180 (1) - blanket. move 1 grud down 2nd slider point
01:02:555 (2) - clap on end of slider
01:10:430 - add slider tick sound?
01:40:430 - ^
01:44:930 (2) - perfectly stack on 01:42:680 (4)'s location
02:20:180 (1) - finish on head of slider
03:20:180 (2,2) - blanket check
03:39:680 (1) - end 03:42:492 and add one more spinner 03:42:680 ~ 03:48:680. and volume down on end.

[Hard]

00:10:242 (3) - whistle on head of slider
00:10:992 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:35:180 (1) - whistle on head of slider with finish.
00:36:305 (4,1) - swap NC
00:55:430 (2) - S:C4 whistle?
01:04:992 (2) - perfectly overlap
02:02:742 (3) - blanket
03:13:242 (4) - blanket

[laurier's Insane]

01:22:805 (4,5) - blanket
03:10:617 (4) - clap on end of slider

it's all,good luck!!

Trust

1,240 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2014-03-25T09:15:48+00:00

hi

[General]

I see you removed your SB. If you don't intend on having one you should delete the .osb in the song folder otherwise leave it as is. This is probably why AImod is reporting so many missing files.
1500 Audio lead-in should be added to Natsu's Normal and Laurier's Insane as you have for the Hard.
As mentioned by TaMul there's an inconsistency with the Widescreen Support toggle.

[Natsu's Normal]

00:06:680 (1,3) - It's like the tails of these sliders are just asking for whistles here with those sounds in the background music. You can add whistles to the previous sliders that play like this as they fit too but I would definitely put them on these two.
00:58:055 (4) - Whistle on the tail fits the sound very nicely. If it's something you like make sure to apply it to all similar parts.
01:04:242 (4) - Finish on the tail, i'm hearing two consecutive cymbal crashes here.
01:10:055 (4) - I would use a whistle to go along with the clap here to bring out the instrument in the background music that starts picking up here. Also there's a lot going on in the music where the tail lands. Either a finish or whistle fits well for it. Make sure to adds these hitsounds to the other kiais for consistency if anything here is applied.
01:14:180 (1) - The left side of this is noticeably less curved than the right. See if you can get the same curve on both sides and try to centre it perfectly.
01:16:805 (3) - Add a finish, same reason as 01:04:242 (4).
01:40:055 (3) - Missed a clap for this slider-tick? There's one in use for 00:40:055 (4).
02:04:242 (3) - Finish on the tail, you should know why by now lol.
02:11:555 (2) - There's a bit of a kink in the curve of this slider. Move the red anchor to x:352 y:264 and the second node (between the slider-head and red anchor) to x:404 y:288 to smooth it out
03:08:742 (4) - Finish on the tail for same reason as earlier.
03:14:555 (4) - Same suggestion as 01:10:055 (4).
03:21:305 (3) - Finish here as well.
03:28:992 (2) - Whistles on the tail compliments that sharp sound.
03:30:117 (3) - Same as above on the head.
03:38:367 (3) - This was a bit odd to play because it doesn't fit very well with how you follow the music here. I would use a circle and reversing 1/1 slider as you had done previously instead. Try it out:
Example
Really great difficulty! Nice and friendly for beginner players~ <3

[Hard]

01:03:492 (5,6) - This is a very significant part of the music so it feels rather empty to leave these powerful sounds without hitsounds. Consider adding soft-whistles on the tail of (5) and the head and reverse of (6). Essentially it's the same as what you did for 01:15:492 (1,2,3).
01:15:867 (2,3) - You can make a cleaner blanket around the tail here.
Example
01:23:180 - Consider adding a note with a finish and NC here. It would be nice to put emphasis on that strong downbeat like you did for 02:23:180 (8) and 03:30:680 (1). Have the spinner start on the blue tick right after it.
02:03:867 (2,3,4) - Same suggestion as 01:03:492 (5,6).
02:10:992 (1) - Finish on the tail as you used one for this part in the previous kiai.
02:23:180 (8) - Use a NC here to follow the same idea as 03:30:680 (1).
02:26:180 (2) - Try a whistle on the tail here, it fits very well with the sound in the music. The whistle suggestion here and the ones that follow all remain consistent with your whistle usage for 02:38:930 (3,5,7).
02:27:680 (1) - Same as above on the head.
02:28:430 (3) - Here as well.
02:32:180 (1) - On the tail.
02:33:680 (3) - On the head.
02:34:430 (5) - ^
03:07:992 (6) - I would NC here to split up this combo. It's rather long compared to what I've seen so far.
03:07:992 (6,7,8) - Same suggestion as 01:03:492 (5,6).
03:10:992 (5) - Perhaps a NC here for the vocal change similar to why you used a NC for 03:16:992 (1)
03:19:992 (5) - NC for this to split up the combo and fit the combo patterning better.

Very nice as well!

[Laurier's Insane]

01:10:805 (4) - Add a finish for the cymbal crash.
01:15:680 (1) - Remove finish? You don't have one here for the other kiais. (like 02:15:680 (2) for example)
01:23:648 - Unneeded green line.
02:03:492 (6) - Use NC here for consistency with 01:03:492 (1) in the first kiai and remove NC on 02:03:867 (1). If you prefer using NC here then swap NC for 01:03:492 (1,2).
02:16:242 (5) - NC here? The combo is very long compared to the rest.
02:16:805 (9) - Same as 01:10:805 (4).
03:25:992 (1,2) - These are touching the HP bar. Try to avoid this if you can.
03:21:305 (3) - Same as 01:10:805 (4).
03:40:242 (3) - Use a finish instead of a whistle for the cymbal crash.

Well done as always!

Love this mapset and the song is just incredible. I hope some of this helps,
Best of luck 10nya!

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-03-25T14:53:19+00:00

http://puu.sh/7IVXq.osu
add 2 finishes ._.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-26T06:17:37+00:00

TaMul wrote:
m4m!

[Natsu's Normal]

00:21:492 (3) - finish ok
00:33:680 (3) - blanket. move 1 grid up 2nd slider point It will broke the spacing :/
00:59:180 (1) - blanket. move 1 grud down 2nd slider point ok
01:02:555 (2) - clap on end of slider k
01:10:430 - add slider tick sound? nah, I'm keeping a 2 and 4 clap pattern, I don't want to break it
01:40:430 - ^ ^
01:44:930 (2) - perfectly stack on 01:42:680 (4)'s location not even noticeable, also will broke some blankets and spacing
02:20:180 (1) - finish on head of slider ok
03:20:180 (2,2) - blanket check ok
03:39:680 (1) - end 03:42:492 and add one more spinner 03:42:680 ~ 03:48:680. and volume down on end. nop, multiple spinners are not ok for newplayers IMO

Trust wrote:
hi

[Natsu's Normal]
00:06:680 (1,3) - It's like the tails of these sliders are just asking for whistles here with those sounds in the background music. You can add whistles to the previous sliders that play like this as they fit too but I would definitely put them on these two. Usually I don't like to break my hitsounds pattern but this make sense, ok
00:58:055 (4) - Whistle on the tail fits the sound very nicely. If it's something you like make sure to apply it to all similar parts. For this one no, since I feel just the finish sund nice there, lets hear more opinions
01:04:242 (4) - Finish on the tail, i'm hearing two consecutive cymbal crashes here. ok
01:10:055 (4) - I would use a whistle to go along with the clap here to bring out the instrument in the background music that starts picking up here. Also there's a lot going on in the music where the tail lands. Either a finish or whistle fits well for it. Make sure to adds these hitsounds to the other kiais for consistency if anything here is applied. I think just clap fit this part correctly
01:14:180 (1) - The left side of this is noticeably less curved than the right. See if you can get the same curve on both sides and try to centre it perfectly. uvu ok did some here, hopeis ok now
01:16:805 (3) - Add a finish, same reason as 01:04:242 (4). k
01:40:055 (3) - Missed a clap for this slider-tick? There's one in use for 00:40:055 (4). no lol I add the other one for error, removed
02:04:242 (3) - Finish on the tail, you should know why by now lol. k
02:11:555 (2) - There's a bit of a kink in the curve of this slider. Move the red anchor to x:352 y:264 and the second node (between the slider-head and red anchor) to x:404 y:288 to smooth it out k
03:08:742 (4) - Finish on the tail for same reason as earlier. k
03:14:555 (4) - Same suggestion as 01:10:055 (4). same as before
03:21:305 (3) - Finish here as well. k
03:28:992 (2) - Whistles on the tail compliments that sharp sound. need to thing a bit more about this, not sure if I should break my whistle pattern
03:30:117 (3) - Same as above on the head. ^
03:38:367 (3) - This was a bit odd to play because it doesn't fit very well with how you follow the music here. I would use a circle and reversing 1/1 slider as you had done previously instead. need to think about this one, since for me is ok you can listen a continue drum sound in 1/2 all the way, that's why the long slider work better for me
Really great difficulty! Nice and friendly for beginner players~ <3 Glad to hear that , I missed too much finish QQ

Thanks for mods

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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-03-29T08:59:34+00:00

tennyecho wrote:
from #modreqs hi~

Hard
00:05:930 (3) - Suggestion : change the whistle to finish. IMO, it's better.
00:18:305 (4) - make it curvier
SPOILER
fix
00:23:742 (1) - make this one curve looked like this one 00:26:742 (2) -
03:21:492 (9) - move it to x=196, y= 208 (seems better if you lower it) fix
03:22:055 (2) - move it to x=160, y= 100 ^ fix
01:15:492 (1) - lower it a bit to y =336
02:45:680 (1,3) - suggestion : make this looks like a long blade (less curvy) , like comment no 2
03:28:617 (4) - move slider's end to x=148, y=272. So it forms 90 degree with 03:28:055 (3) -
10nya-san, your map is beautiful >w< thanks(:

Overall, I am sorry for my poor mod. I hope this map get the SB back and get ranked. ganbatte minna!!

TaMul wrote:
m4m!

[General]

In all diff...missing sb image file...is it only my problem..? sb deleted also osb, perhaps error orz
SPOILER
you used SB, so you should check "display epilepsy warning (stroyboard has quick strobing)"
check out "widescreen support" on Natsu's Normal, Laurier's Insane. maybe don't need it. ok
[Hard]

00:10:242 (3) - whistle on head of slider fix
00:10:992 (1) - finish on end of slider fix
00:35:180 (1) - whistle on head of slider with finish. fix
00:36:305 (4,1) - swap NC fix
00:55:430 (2) - S:C4 whistle? fix
01:04:992 (2) - perfectly overlap
02:02:742 (3) - blanket
03:13:242 (4) - blanket
it's all,good luck!! [b]thx~ i'll mod yours soon ><

Trust wrote:
hi hii!

[General]
I see you removed your SB. If you don't intend on having one you should delete the .osb in the song folder otherwise leave it as is. This is probably why AImod is reporting so many missing files.
1500 Audio lead-in should be added to Natsu's Normal and Laurier's Insane as you have for the Hard.
As mentioned by TaMul there's an inconsistency with the Widescreen Support toggle. all fix
[Hard]
01:03:492 (5,6) - This is a very significant part of the music so it feels rather empty to leave these powerful sounds without hitsounds. Consider adding soft-whistles on the tail of (5) and the head and reverse of (6). Essentially it's the same as what you did for 01:15:492 (1,2,3). fix
01:15:867 (2,3) - You can make a cleaner blanket around the tail here.
Example
fix
01:23:180 - Consider adding a note with a finish and NC here. It would be nice to put emphasis on that strong downbeat like you did for 02:23:180 (8) and 03:30:680 (1). Have the spinner start on the blue tick right after it.
02:03:867 (2,3,4) - Same suggestion as 01:03:492 (5,6).
02:10:992 (1) - Finish on the tail as you used one for this part in the previous kiai.
02:23:180 (8) - Use a NC here to follow the same idea as 03:30:680 (1).
02:26:180 (2) - Try a whistle on the tail here, it fits very well with the sound in the music. The whistle suggestion here and the ones that follow all remain consistent with your whistle usage for 02:38:930 (3,5,7).
02:27:680 (1) - Same as above on the head.
02:28:430 (3) - Here as well.
02:32:180 (1) - On the tail.
02:33:680 (3) - On the head.
02:34:430 (5) - ^
03:07:992 (6) - I would NC here to split up this combo. It's rather long compared to what I've seen so far.
03:07:992 (6,7,8) - Same suggestion as 01:03:492 (5,6).
03:10:992 (5) - Perhaps a NC here for the vocal change similar to why you used a NC for 03:16:992 (1)
03:19:992 (5) - NC for this to split up the combo and fit the combo patterning better.
all fix
Very nice as well!
thx for mods all updated :3
Love this mapset and the song is just incredible. I hope some of this helps,
Best of luck 10nya!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-03-30T04:21:01+00:00

hi~ pm req~
good song and good map~ i'm a newbie mapper/modder so there's not many suggestions i can give you, sorry ;w;
[General]
missing sb... don't know why

need an epilepsy warning (AiMod checked)
Tags in "Laurier's Insane" are different from others

[Natsu's Normal]
00:24:305 (3,1) - consider blanket these two objects
00:58:805 - add a circle?
01:14:180 (1) - this slider isn't symmetrical
01:58:805 - add a circle?
02:45:680 (2) - how about this one?

SPOILER

03:26:742 (5,1) - not blanket perfectly right?
03:39:680 - 03:42:680 don't skip by using a spinner because it's the end of the main theme. and then set the spinner at 03:42:680 to 03:48:680.

[Hard]
pretty good! :3 just some jumps are too hard for a hard diff (example. 01:17:555 (3,4), 01:57:680 (1,2,3,4), 03:12:867 (2,3,4)
i think there's no big problems in this diff :3

[Laurier's Insane]
some 1/2 sliders can be 1/1 sliders, it's better imo. however the rhythm is a bit boring. (example. 01:00:117 (5), 02:07:617 (5), 02:27:680 (1)

gl~ and take this star! :3

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-30T05:12:35+00:00

[_Crystal] wrote:
[Natsu's Normal]
00:24:305 (3,1) - consider blanket these two objects this is not my intention here
00:58:805 - add a circle? I know why, but I think is more new player friendly starting again with the vocals <:
01:14:180 (1) - this slider isn't symmetrical I just change the shape, I'm not a fan of symmetry
01:58:805 - add a circle? same as the other
02:45:680 (2) - how about this one? Fixed on my own
03:26:742 (5,1) - not blanket perfectly right? done
03:39:680 - 03:42:680 don't skip by using a spinner because it's the end of the main theme. and then set the spinner at 03:42:680 to 03:48:680. Fixed the spinner lenght, but not the start of it, Iprobably agree with you, but this one is the easy diff in the set, that's why

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 06 with you.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 58617
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:with you
TitleUnicode:with you
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:10nya
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:EXSTETRA
Tags:エクステトラ ex-tetra opening clara alice second story -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- Laurier Natsu
BeatmapID:385065
BeatmapSetID:153793

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-03-30T13:00:28+00:00

sb still bugged heh, updated

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-03-31T12:16:30+00:00

hey, from your queue~

[Hard]

00:14:742 (3,2) - stack each slider's head
00:24:680 (2) - I prefer curved slider in common with 00:25:055 (3,4) -
00:27:680 (3) - ^
00:38:367 (2,4) - stack each slider's head
00:56:930 (3,2) - ^
01:04:055 (6,2) - stack correctly
01:34:992 (1) - I prefer to stack on the head of 01:35:180 (2) -
01:39:867 (3,4,7) - stack correctly
01:56:742 (2,3) - I feel DS is too large...
02:19:242 (3,1) - I prefer the following
02:59:180 (1) - end at 03:02:930 (a little difficult, imo)
03:34:805 (3,1) - stack correctly

[Natsu's Normal]

00:57:680 (3,4) - I prefer straight sliders because of argute sound
SPOILER
01:57:680 (3,4) - ^
01:18:680 (3) - x:347 y:75
01:38:180 (1) - I prefer the same shape slider as 01:35:180 (1) -
03:28:992 (2) - NC?

[Laurier's Insane]

00:58:430 (5) - NCは00:58:805 (1) - よりここが良いような気がします
01:45:305 (4,5) - 位置逆の方が良いと思います
01:58:430 (4) - NC

good song!
~☆
~Good Luck~

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-31T20:42:51+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
hey, from your queue~

[Natsu's Normal]
00:57:680 (3,4) - I prefer straight sliders because of argute sound I made them a bit less curved
01:57:680 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:18:680 (3) - x:347 y:75 ok
01:38:180 (1) - I prefer the same shape slider as 01:35:180 (1) - I'm doing a blanket with the second one, that's why
03:28:992 (2) - NC? nah, I'm adding them every 2 stanzas

good song!
~☆
~Good Luck~

thanks for mod

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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Title:with you
TitleUnicode:with you
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:10nya
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:EXSTETRA
Tags:エクステトラ ex-tetra opening clara alice second story -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- Laurier Natsu
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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-04-01T01:36:04+00:00

M4M via queue

[Insane]

00:13:055 (2,3,4) - space these out evenly? or something?
01:58:711 (5) - move this down a bit so it doesn't SEEM to overlap with 01:57:680 (1)
01:21:117 (3,1) - flow is weird. /me runs
01:34:992 - circle here?
00:27:680 (1) - touches hp bar
well i don't think it's my place to judge about rhythm but for some sliders like this one i don't really get what you're trying to map out
01:01:805 (6) - like it seems to make more sense if this was placed 1/2 earlier
01:13:805 (5) - here too, makes more sense with 2 circles
01:14:555 (2) - this one seems to make more sense 1/2 later
01:16:805 (7) - ^
bleh the rest seems good. lel 2 good for me to mod *-*

[Hard]

00:11:367 (2,3) - this blanket is pretty noticeably off
00:14:742 (3,2) - stack?
00:38:367 (2,4) - ^
00:56:930 (3,2) - ^
01:04:055 (6,2) - ^
00:24:680 (2,3,4) - ehh how bout this (rotate 45 degree)
SPOILER
00:27:680 (3,4,5) - ^
00:34:805 (2,3) - unstack this from (1)? probably just me being noob but it kinda caught me a bit off guard lel
01:01:055 (3,4) - ehh these kind of imperfect blankets ewe. im a hater so gunna post this here anyway
01:18:492 (1,1) - im starting to think you might not be stacking these purposely from some kind of design but i'd still like highly recommend you stack these lol. just makes the map neater without so many overlapping circles on screen
01:47:180 - map out the break. its gives a nice variety in rhythm for you
02:34:430 (5,6) - um. make parallel?

[Normal]

01:15:680 (2) - touches the little time indicator thing
03:14:555 (4) - ALMOST touches the hp bar
bleh this diff is good, just that, im not sure about stacking in normal difficulties

Quilt

1,476 posts

Joined May 2010

Quilt 2014-04-01T04:54:19+00:00

gl

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-02T05:58:18+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
M4M via queue

[Normal]
01:15:680 (2) - touches the little time indicator thing Is just a bit, It doesn't affect the gamplay IMo
03:14:555 (4) - ALMOST touches the hp bar but it don't touch it orz, is ok
bleh this diff is good, just that, im not sure about stacking in normal difficulties of course is ok, also they play really easy cuz they are 1/2 ones so with od 3 is not a problem

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-04-03T09:24:32+00:00

;q;/ finally here

General

everything seems fine

Natsu's Normal

00:16:805 (5) - as I listen a cymbal sound here, add a finish maybe? So it will also consist with Hard diff
00:20:180 (1) - since I saw you placed finishes at the head of 00:20:742 (2) - and 00:21:492 (3) - , how about adding a finish to this slider head as well?
01:13:242 (5) - nazi, try to improve this slider look if you can :
SPOILER
01:21:492 (2) - move this some grids down to make 01:20:180 (1,2) - into a rounded circle!
SPOILER
02:23:180 (1) - since this is the easiest diff, so this spinner might be a little bit harsh to the newbies, for me, I suggest that extend this spinner until 02:25:430 - or 02:25:805 -, but make sure that if you end this spinner at 02:25:805 -, you need to drag 02:26:180 (1) some grids back for newbies to recover and catch up
02:41:180 (1) - hmm, curve it less? Or the flow will not be really nice imo
03:28:992 (2,3) - I'd remove these 4 green lines on these sliders, since music is turning down, the claps are not really needed here imo

Hard

00:45:680 (1) - IMO, hitsounds in here is a bit hard to hear, how about increasing them by 20%? Also, you can add a green line in 00:46:805 (4) - to increase the volume, it sounds better for me!
01:15:867 (2,3) - naaaazi for blanket
01:34:992 (1) - If I were you, I'd remove this note to consist with other diffs
01:38:742 (2) - Ctrl+G here? Since you are jumping in 01:37:805 (3,4,1) - , and you suddenly change back into normal ds in 01:38:180 (1,2) - , players may get confused and misclicked it as a jump as well, Ctrl+G will solve this
02:28:055 (2,3) - same in here, because of the jump in 02:27:680 (1,2) - , it will confuse player and they will think that 02:28:055 (2,3) - is a 1/2 jump, I'd Ctrl+G with 02:28:430 (3,4) - to avoid this

Laurier's Insane

00:16:805 (5) - same as Normal, how about adding a finish to emphasize the cymbal sounds and also consist with Hard diff?
00:31:805 (4) - as the vocal is going up here, I'd put it on the left of 00:31:055 (2) -, what do you say?
02:20:180 (1) - add finish at the head? As there is a loud cymbal sound behind, just like what you did in 03:24:680 (1,3) - !
02:20:742 (2) - ^, because you placed 02:21:492 (1) -'s head a finish, adding this 2 more finishes will make it more exciting!

thats all o/
gl for rank!

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-04-03T12:53:16+00:00

all stacking suggestion are declined (since i prefer its not stacked hue) also thanks for modding!

i'll update natsu's diff when he replied happus mod hue

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-03T22:16:40+00:00

happy623 wrote:
Natsu's Normal
00:16:805 (5) - as I listen a cymbal sound here, add a finish maybe? So it will also consist with Hard diff ok
00:20:180 (1) - since I saw you placed finishes at the head of 00:20:742 (2) - and 00:21:492 (3) - , how about adding a finish to this slider head as well? yes
01:13:242 (5) - nazi, try to improve this slider look if you can I want it to look a bit weird like the next one
01:21:492 (2) - move this some grids down to make 01:20:180 (1,2) - into a rounded circle! okis
02:23:180 (1) - since this is the easiest diff, so this spinner might be a little bit harsh to the newbies, for me, I suggest that extend this spinner until 02:25:430 - or 02:25:805 -, but make sure that if you end this spinner at 02:25:805 -, you need to drag 02:26:180 (1) some grids back for newbies to recover and catch up the actually way is ok, since the auto get 7000 points there, It will not be a problem
02:41:180 (1) - hmm, curve it less? Or the flow will not be really nice imo keeped for now, actually I love big curves :3
03:28:992 (2,3) - I'd remove these 4 green lines on these sliders, since music is turning down, the claps are not really needed here imo there are still claps :l, I lower the volume a bit

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:with you
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ArtistUnicode:ClariS
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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-04-04T08:01:23+00:00

all has been updated :>

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-04-06T02:54:59+00:00

From queue
[Laurier's Insane]
00:01:055 (3) - 104,120
00:04:617 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:14:555 (2) - ^
01:38:180 (1) - Ctrl+G
>01:38:742 (3) - ^
01:42:867 (2) - 72,328
02:01:242 (4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486132
>02:02:180 (1) - Ctrl+G
>>02:02:742 (3) - Ctrl+G
02:38:555 (2) - Ctrl+G
>02:38:930 (3) - ^
>>02:39:305 (4) - ^
02:40:805 (5) - 376,120
03:48:492 - End at here?
[Hard]
01:46:242 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:58:617 (5) - NC
02:23:180 (1) - 460.272
03:48:492 - End at here?
[Normal]
00:37:055 - sounds strange?
01:46:242 - use ^ here?
01:46:617 - ^
03:48:492 - End at here?

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-06T04:46:56+00:00

Hey, mod from queue

[Laurier's Insane]
Looks good.

[Hard]
AR -1, Objects aren't too crowded together. Plus the speed of the approach circles don't really correspond well with the tempo of the music.
00:10:805 (4,1) - I don't think the big spacing here is really necessary, it looks rather weird instead. I think you're trying to make the spacing here consistent with the spacing between 00:08:742 (2,1) - but it isn't necessary. Notice that 00:08:742 (2) - ends at 00:09:492 (on a red tick mark) and
00:09:680 (1) - starts on the white tick mark. So the spacing is happening between red - big white tick mark.

But now here, 00:10:805 (4) - isn't on a red tick mark, 00:10:992 (1) - is. 00:10:992 (1) - has pretty much covered this spot (which the spacing should be, but can't now). Does this makes sense?

01:35:180 (2) - NC since it starts on a new rhythm (it's on the big white tick mark).

02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - Awkward flow, no I don't mean the zig-zag flow. I mean where you've placed 02:37:805 (9) - . Please consider remapping this part.

SPOILER

Okay, I haven't quite touched on finding a better brand new flow for this part, but a square formation of some sort might work well here. Something like this:

03:03:680 (3) - NC, since it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

[Natsu's Normal]
02:00:680 (3,4) - Switch timing spots so that 02:01:055 (4) - starts at 02:00:680 and vice versa. Now add a clap on the hit circle which should appear on 02:01:805 now.
This rhythm sounds better imo, because both the note at 02:00:305 (2) - and on 02:01:805 will help highlight the custom hitsound clap better.
With that, you can also form symmetry with the objects in this rhythm too!

Good luck!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-06T21:05:08+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
From queue

[Normal]
00:37:055 - sounds strange? is fine
01:46:242 - use ^ here? nop, just 2 and 4 downbeats
01:46:617 - ^ ^
03:48:492 - End at here? o.o, nop, unless 10nya change this on her diff

thanks for mod, I apply the one that 10crystalmask01 suggested

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 06 with you.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 58617
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:with you
TitleUnicode:with you
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:10nya
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:EXSTETRA
Tags:エクステトラ ex-tetra opening clara alice second story -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- Laurier Natsu
BeatmapID:385065
BeatmapSetID:153793

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-04-13T09:34:33+00:00

all diff end at 03:48:492 ^-^

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-04-26T17:09:50+00:00

Hi :3 Sorry for waiting delay

[General]

Consider disabling Letterbox during breaks all diffs.

[Natsu's Normal]

Umm... it's great idea you use clap hitsound in "soft-sliderslide2.wav". Sure. it's no problem, but to it get better sound, you move the green line section that next to the rhythm to the red line all. Example: the rhythm in slider 00:21:867 (4). Please make like this picture.
SPOILER
00:00:680 (1) - The flow is weird for me, so I think you use regular slider curve like this picture would be better, thought.
SPOILER
00:04:617 (2) - It doesn't good idea for adding a circle in here, because it seems no fit with any imo. I think you should move this at 00:04:805 - or use 3/2 slider like 00:05:180 (3) - . It would be better with listening.
00:21:180 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end of (1), and remove it on (2). I think it would move fit than imo if you have compared with the vocal.
00:26:180 (1,2) - ^
00:29:555 (2) - Add whistle? It seems better than with listening, thought.
00:30:680 (4) - ^
01:20:180 (1,2) - Whistle on both slider begin rarely fit to use in this rhythm, so please change these are finish instead like 02:20:180 (1,2) -
01:41:555 (2,4) - Please try to avoid overlaping both, because this can cause the newbie player miss here.
02:23:180 (1) - This spinner can end at 02:25:430 - although it would reduce during to start next note, but I think it's no problem for the normal diff.
03:17:742 (4,1,2) - You can move the slider begin of (2) stack with the slider end of (4), and move slider (1) to down 3 grids. which it would look better.
03:24:680 (1) Same with 01:20:180 (1,2) - so please change it is finish.
03:30:117 (3) - It looks weird when I play it. I suggest that move it to x:220 y:44 would be better imo.
03:35:555 (3) - Please add finish on slider end because I heard the melody on that.
03:38:367 (3) - This slider doesn't fit with the melody, but however, you can fix by remove repeating of slider. Then add a circle at 03:39:305 instead.

Note: For Hard and Insane, I will post yours again, or edit mine later if I already have freetime T.T

[Hard]

Umm... this diff has so much overjumped, which it would difficult for who use mouse to playing standard map. However, this is just my suggestion.
00:10:992 (1) - Did you forget to add finish in slider end? Because I heard the rhythm in the song explicitly. So please add it.
00:28:992 (6) - The flow was weird here. So I suggest that move this to x:428 y:316 would be better.
00:33:680 (1) - Just move slider end of (1) to left 2 grids, to cause this stack with 00:34:805 (2,3) -
00:38:180 (1) - Why you use whistle here? Seem it doesn't fit for this
00:46:242 (3,4,5,1) - This flowing may cause me and other player confused. So please fix these easier that this (Sorry that I don't have idea)
01:17:555 (3) - I want this move this to x:300 y:232, which I think it cause flow better, although it just move a bit.
01:21:492 (1,2) - Please move these like this picture, by move (2) to stack with 01:19:992 (1) - , because spacing was so far and flow was weird for me.
SPOILER
01:40:992 (7,1) - Add whistle these, because I heard something in the rhythm.
01:56:180 (1) - I heard the rhythm in the middle of slider. So you can use 1/2 slider to fit with the rhythm.
01:56:930 (3) - ^ , and if you don't fix it, please don't forget to add clap.
02:03:305 (4) - Move this to x:396 y:228, which I think it would flow better to playing imo.
02:18:680 (1) - Remove finish on slider begin, because I think it doesn't fit enough yet to use finish.
02:59:180 (1) - You can end spinner at 03:02:180 - because it would more fit with the melody than ending a spinner in the vocal.
03:03:305 (1) - Clap hitsound was too loud. Please remove it.
03:04:805 (4,1) - If you want flow better, please move circle (4) to down about x:484 y;136, which I think it's better to playing, and make slider (1) is curve slider.
03:07:055 (2,3) - It's flow so weird. So please move these notes like this picture would be better to playing.
SPOILER
03:25:055 (2) - Putting this note in that, I think it causes confused about playing. Perhaps moving this to downward than slider would be reduce this problem.
03:30:773 (1) - Why you use clap here? I think it's too loud for this. So please remove it.
03:42:586 (1) - Please end spinner at 03:48:640 - to follow the melody.

[Laurier's Insane]

00:16:805 (5) - I feel this can add finish to cause this is more fit with the rhythm than.
00:20:742 (3) - ^
00:32:742 (2) - Move this to x:292 y:72. It may reduce awkwardness.
00:48:867 (2) - Remove whistle here. It's unnecessary to use in this.
01:42:680 (1,2) - Please stack them by moving (1).
02:20:180 (1) - Add finish in slider begin to follow the melody.
03:10:617 (4) - You forget to add clap in slider end, I guess. So please add it.
03:16:055 (3) - Umm... why you use whistle here? Please change it is clap to follow the rhythm.
03:42:586 (1) - This seems 10nya had moved spinner end at 03:48:492 - when latest, but however please end spinner at 03:48:640 - to follow the melody.

Beautiful mapped =w= all diff is good for me, but I felt Hard diff was too difficult for the hard diff, may be because it's overjump between each notes so much imo, which although it may no problem for some player, but please consider about this would be better. So I will give a star because it's nice map

Good luck~

Edit: Modded Hard and Laurier's Insane

Last edited by Nichiyouki 2014-05-02T20:35:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-27T23:14:16+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:
[Natsu's Normal]
Umm... it's great idea you use clap hitsound in "soft-sliderslide2.wav". Sure. it's no problem, but to it get better sound, you move the green line section that next to the rhythm to the red line all. Example: the rhythm in slider 00:21:867 (4). Please make like this picture. It doesn't affect anything
00:00:680 (1) - The flow is weird for me, so I think you use regular slider curve like this picture would be better, thought.mmm I like my current slider shape, also the flow is linear there, no body will have problems with it
00:04:617 (2) - It doesn't good idea for adding a circle in here, because it seems no fit with any imo. I think you should move this at 00:04:805 - or use 3/2 slider like 00:05:180 (3) - . It would be better with listening. It's following the vocals, just like I did with 00:00:680 (1,2) - and 00:02:180 (3,4) -
00:21:180 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end of (1), and remove it on (2). I think it would move fit than imo if you have compared with the vocal. no, first it will broke my pattern plus the sound in 00:20:742 - is loud than the tail of the previous one, also there is not vocal
00:26:180 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:29:555 (2) - Add whistle? It seems better than with listening, thought. mm no, I prefer to keep it in 00:29:930 - the music is more prominent
00:30:680 (4) - ^ ^
01:20:180 (1,2) - Whistle on both slider begin rarely fit to use in this rhythm, so please change these are finish instead like 02:20:180 (1,2) - added finish in 01:21:492
01:41:555 (2,4) - Please try to avoid overlaping both, because this can cause the newbie player miss here. that's not an overlap is a stack with other circle, due to the new skin the hitburst are not even a problem with this kind of patterns, I guess is fine
02:23:180 (1) - This spinner can end at 02:25:430 - although it would reduce during to start next note, but I think it's no problem for the normal diff. first to all 10nya ended the kiai there, plus this is a normal but an easy at the same time, I prefer to leave a big gap between the spinner end and the next object
03:17:742 (4,1,2) - You can move the slider begin of (2) stack with the slider end of (4), and move slider (1) to down 3 grids. which it would look better. did something here
03:24:680 (1) Same with 01:20:180 (1,2) - so please change it is finish. yup
03:30:117 (3) - It looks weird when I play it. I suggest that move it to x:220 y:44 would be better imo. It looks fine to me, I don't see an issue with this
03:35:555 (3) - Please add finish on slider end because I heard the melody on that. I guess the current clap work better than a finish there
03:38:367 (3) - This slider doesn't fit with the melody, but however, you can fix by remove repeating of slider. Then add a circle at 03:39:305 instead. yeah

thanks for mod

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Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2014-05-01T14:11:40+00:00

hi there! :3
mod from my queue, even though it's been a while.. orz
please keep in mind that I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me! :3

[Natsu's Normal]

imo, in the beginning it's incredible hard to read red/white tick changes
and since this is the easiest difficulty you should try to make it as easy as possible (while still having a Normal diff), imo
so you might want to consider to change the pattern up to something like this -
screen

or
the same applies for any other red/white tick change!
00:24:305 (3,4,1) - the movement/flow here doesn't work nicely with the calm, relaxing nature of the song
(plus, it looks really crowded to me. ><) maybe change the shapes up a bit?
weird example
I'm sure you can think of something better here!
00:32:180 (1,2,3,4) - movement could be improved here a lot, if you move 2 further to the left and adjust 3 -
screen
00:51:680 (3,1) - why don't you blanket 1 here perfectly? that'd look better, I think
01:47:555 - 01:53:180 - I don't get why there is a break here. o.o the part is totally mapable.. kinda feels off. >:
(I didn't look at the other diffs yet, so maybe you just kept it consistent, so ignore this if it's like that. xD or take a look at what I said about it in the other diffs, up to you.)
02:14:180 (1,2) - if you increase the curve here they could blanket each other better (which looks better I think)
02:20:180 (1) - consider matching this better with 02:21:492 (2) - so they create a nice circle, maybe
screen
03:28:617 - maybe add a cirlce here? you'd get rid of the red/white tick change and if you slow down you can clearly here that it still matches the vocals
(might match them even better if you just extend the slider to that red tick.)
03:34:055 - I'm missing a circle here as well. >:
03:39:680 (1) - this spinner is like.. endlessly long, maybe split this up at around 03:42:680 -?

sorry for using so mayn screens, I'm just bad at explaining using words. orz

[Hard]

hmh, that whistle you use in the beginning sounds a bit overused to me. ><
it's so high pitched.. really hurts in the ears. :\ consider using it a bit less, eg at 00:04:242 (2) - it works perfectly fine without a whistle
00:08:180 (1) - might look better with 00:07:242 (2) - if you mirror one of them
00:51:680 (1,2,3) - maybe it's just me, but this could look better if triangle patterns are equilateral (> move 3 to 124|28)
01:18:492 (1,2,3,4) - movement from 2 to 3 to 4 feels 'forced', you could improve this if you move them around a bit
example
01:47:555 - 01:53:180 - so the break is in every diff. hmh. '^' I don't like it. It's in the middle of the song, coming out of nowhere. D:
consider mapping this part? it doesn't make the difficulty much harder while giving it a nicer feeling.
if you want to have a 3rd break, I think you could fit one somewhere else, eg 02:25:055 - 02:29:180
03:48:680 - move timing point to red tick before? I guess the spinner should be silenced there, but it's off.. o.o

nice difficulty!
if you're bored you might want to check through it and fix some blankets. I didn't mention them, cause ppl never fix them anyway, but it improves the looks of a map by a lot, I think, so it's worth it!

skipping Insane, sorry. x:
(it did look really nice while playing tho)

good luck to you!
*squee* o/

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-05-02T05:38:06+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
hi there! :3
mod from my queue, even though it's been a while.. orz
please keep in mind that I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me! :3

[Natsu's Normal]
imo, in the beginning it's incredible hard to read red/white tick changes and since this is the easiest difficulty you should try to make it as easy as possible (while still having a Normal diff), imo the transitions are mostly slider to slider, is really easy IMO
so you might want to consider to change the pattern up to something like this -
screen

or
the same applies for any other red/white tick change! is a normal diff not an easy <:
00:24:305 (3,4,1) - the movement/flow here doesn't work nicely with the calm, relaxing nature of the song
(plus, it looks really crowded to me. ><) maybe change the shapes up a bit?
weird example
I'm sure you can think of something better here! I don't see a valid reason to change my moe shape <;, since I like it
00:32:180 (1,2,3,4) - movement could be improved here a lot, if you move 2 further to the left and adjust 3 -
screen
is almost the same, just my (2) is placed a bit to the right, is on purpose <:
00:51:680 (3,1) - why don't you blanket 1 here perfectly? that'd look better, I think was not a blanket, but I did some here
01:47:555 - 01:53:180 - I don't get why there is a break here. o.o the part is totally mapable.. kinda feels off. >: (I didn't look at the other diffs yet, so maybe you just kept it consistent, so ignore this if it's like that. xD or take a look at what I said about it in the other diffs, up to you.)almost every part in a song is, but for consistency with 10nya diff and also you can listen a bit slowdown in the music, the break is fine
02:14:180 (1,2) - if you increase the curve here they could blanket each other better (which looks better I think) I move them a bit
02:20:180 (1) - consider matching this better with 02:21:492 (2) - so they create a nice circle, maybe
screen
03:28:617 - maybe add a cirlce here? you'd get rid of the red/white tick change and if you slow down you can clearly here that it still matches the vocals
(might match them even better if you just extend the slider to that red tick.) Is fine, since I can't notice the difference between your and mine
03:34:055 - I'm missing a circle here as well. >: too soon after a spinner
03:39:680 (1) - this spinner is like.. endlessly long, maybe split this up at around 03:42:680 -? you right, done

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10nya

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10nya 2014-05-04T11:14:01+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi :3 Sorry for waiting delay

[General]
Consider disabling Letterbox during breaks all diffs. since i don't use sb so i'll keep this
[Hard]
Umm... this diff has so much overjumped, which it would difficult for who use mouse to playing standard map. However, this is just my suggestion. i do agree but since there's no stream (only triplet with slider) so i guess the diff will be boring so i added jumps orz.)
00:10:992 (1) - Did you forget to add finish in slider end? Because I heard the rhythm in the song explicitly. So please add it.
00:28:992 (6) - The flow was weird here. So I suggest that move this to x:428 y:316 would be better.
00:33:680 (1) - Just move slider end of (1) to left 2 grids, to cause this stack with 00:34:805 (2,3) -
00:38:180 (1) - Why you use whistle here? Seem it doesn't fit for this it follow music if you hear this carefully w
00:46:242 (3,4,5,1) - This flowing may cause me and other player confused. So please fix these easier that this (Sorry that I don't have idea)
01:17:555 (3) - I want this move this to x:300 y:232, which I think it cause flow better, although it just move a bit.
01:21:492 (1,2) - Please move these like this picture, by move (2) to stack with 01:19:992 (1) - , because spacing was so far and flow was weird for me.
SPOILER
01:40:992 (7,1) - Add whistle these, because I heard something in the rhythm.
01:56:180 (1) - I heard the rhythm in the middle of slider. So you can use 1/2 slider to fit with the rhythm. i'm following vocal here
01:56:930 (3) - ^ , and if you don't fix it, please don't forget to add clap.
02:03:305 (4) - Move this to x:396 y:228, which I think it would flow better to playing imo.
02:18:680 (1) - Remove finish on slider begin, because I think it doesn't fit enough yet to use finish.
02:59:180 (1) - You can end spinner at 03:02:180 - because it would more fit with the melody than ending a spinner in the vocal.
03:03:305 (1) - Clap hitsound was too loud. Please remove it.
03:04:805 (4,1) - If you want flow better, please move circle (4) to down about x:484 y;136, which I think it's better to playing, and make slider (1) is curve slider.
03:07:055 (2,3) - It's flow so weird. So please move these notes like this picture would be better to playing.
SPOILER
03:25:055 (2) - Putting this note in that, I think it causes confused about playing. Perhaps moving this to downward than slider would be reduce this problem.
03:30:773 (1) - Why you use clap here? I think it's too loud for this. So please remove it.
03:42:586 (1) - Please end spinner at 03:48:640 - to follow the melody. i'll keep to make the map a bit long
Beautiful mapped =w= all diff is good for me, but I felt Hard diff was too difficult for the hard diff, may be because it's overjump between each notes so much imo, which although it may no problem for some player, but please consider about this would be better. So I will give a star because it's nice map
thank you so much nich-san! :3

Good luck~

Edit: Modded Hard and Laurier's Insane

Squirrel wrote:
hi there! :3
mod from my queue, even though it's been a while.. orz
please keep in mind that I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me! :3

hi and thanks for the time~

[Hard]
hmh, that whistle you use in the beginning sounds a bit overused to me. ><
it's so high pitched.. really hurts in the ears. :\ consider using it a bit less, eg at 00:04:242 (2) - it works perfectly fine without a whistle i want to make this part a but loud
00:08:180 (1) - might look better with 00:07:242 (2) - if you mirror one of them nah keep this one
00:51:680 (1,2,3) - maybe it's just me, but this could look better if triangle patterns are equilateral (> move 3 to 124|28) i think it's not a big deal :3
01:18:492 (1,2,3,4) - movement from 2 to 3 to 4 feels 'forced', you could improve this if you move them around a bit
example

01:47:555 - 01:53:180 - so the break is in every diff. hmh. '^' I don't like it. It's in the middle of the song, coming out of nowhere. D:
consider mapping this part? it doesn't make the difficulty much harder while giving it a nicer feeling. this part is a bit calming (since the map is full of jumps) so let the player rest
if you want to have a 3rd break, I think you could fit one somewhere else, eg 02:25:055 - 02:29:180
03:48:680 - move timing point to red tick before? I guess the spinner should be silenced there, but it's off.. o.o it's a bookmark :3 doesnt affect any timing
nice difficulty!
if you're bored you might want to check through it and fix some blankets. I didn't mention them, cause ppl never fix them anyway, but it improves the looks of a map by a lot, I think, so it's worth it! well i do aware about this but i prefer to let them like this orz.

skipping Insane, sorry. x:
(it did look really nice while playing tho)

good luck to you!
*squee* o/

didn't reply means fixed and Natsu's diff updated!

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Natsu 2014-05-05T05:26:10+00:00

10nya take care of my diff

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Laurier 2014-05-05T07:12:03+00:00

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