Oracle wrote:

打了一次感觉好,take my star
有时间来摸

Spring Roll wrote:

hello mod from 不公平的m4m~……所以让你在规则上面补上不接6分钟233……←.←

第一遍直接听歌听过去了没有看图。。。。
下面是正文

Refrain

1. 现在diff名应该不能这么取了吧，好像一定要加上具体的难度(? ……我相信APP是可以违法的！……大概吧
2. 02:57:369 (1) - 滑条违和，有点不好看，和其他滑条相比(网络抽风不能传图了……好吧……换正常的
3. 00:43:494 (4) - 这样的滑条在一些皮肤下会挡血条，建议往下移一点……没考虑过这个……捂脸
4. 01:10:494 (3) - ^，后略
5. 03:59:244 (6) - 我觉得五角星第一跳放7那里比较顺手，后面的顺序和现在一致……我怕别人滑条断尾……我看看有没有别人说，先保留
6. 04:20:244 (6,7) - 滑条尾没叠上。。故意的？……不……是我做完了一高兴就m4m去了……捂脸
7. 04:24:744 (2,3) - ^
8. 05:23:056 (5,6) - ^
9. 05:55:494 (4,6) - ^
10. 06:02:994 (4,2) - ^。。好吧后面还有许多就认为是故意的好了（这不是凑字数
11. 02:30:369 (1,2) - 可以包的更好一点……好
12. 02:33:931 (2,3) - ^
13. 05:09:744 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉这一段的hitnormal有点吵owo……额……是有点……降了25音量
14. 08:00:369 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里也是，可以弄个音量的渐变……这段不是我做的orz……不过我有权利改
15. 06:15:744 (5) - 用普通的直线或者弧形滑条就够了……年代久远……
16. 06:35:244 (4,5) - 初见有点坑，可以改成一个1/1滑条……是三连音，改成折返了
17. 07:34:494 (4,5,6) - 间距换成之前那样的吧，这样会产生错觉。(如果是我我就会把坑爹的地方放在长图相对靠前的位置，已经打到这么后面了突然这么一下只会让玩家生气……好
18. 08:24:369 (1) - HP8在这里真的不会挂掉么owo（或者开了hr以后……我偷偷告诉你HR会毁我桃心……所以我弄了这个让他们在这里剩5%的血，然后……转盘哇哈哈……咳咳……不要说出去（前提是前面满血233）
19. 画心Master
    
20. 总体而言是很漂亮的图，大致看没什么问题所以说的地方都很细了.Good Luck and shoot a star~

Anchor wrote:

[Refrain]

8分快９分鐘長是什麼的一回事　＝口＝｜｜｜……这该问阿南凉子是什么想法233
不加KIAI TIME 嗎? kiai是什么啊喵~~能吃吗~~

00:27:744 (1,2) - 要近一點，看起來沒有要連起來打的感覺……额……1/2本来就不是连打，距离2我觉得不远……
01:22:119 (3) - 這5個改成這樣比較合音樂……我觉得重音按下去比较合……
02:03:556 (1) - remove……两个finish中间不加note会很空
02:03:744 (2) - nc……
02:23:244 (5,6,7,8,9) - 連打好像不太合適?……高潮前加连打我觉得很好……原曲也在这里用了1/2clap强调速度
04:48:369 (1) - no nc……我全局是长白重音NC……
04:48:744 (2) - nc
06:34:119 (2,3) - 比較合音樂……我觉得我听力没问题……
06:53:619 (6,7) - 分開一點, stack起來的話要加速連打的信息不清楚……为什么你会认为1/2是连打？

Anchor wrote:

其他的也算個人喜好,但
06:34:119 (2,3) - 比較合音樂……我觉得我听力没问题……
你試試放慢到25%來播你會發現06:35:431 - 也有個音 但在06:35:056 就沒有

zengdaen wrote:

[*]08:24:369 (1) - HP8在这里真的不会挂掉么owo（或者开了hr以后……我偷偷告诉你HR会毁我桃心……所以我弄了这个让他们在这里剩5%的血，然后……转盘哇哈哈……咳咳……不要说出去（前提是前面满血233）

KevinKang wrote:

hi~我的mod来了
[Eternal]
没弄音效跟插线,而且还是恐怖的7K（4K玩家给跪了）……不是7K不舒服斯基
[Refrain]
00:09:007 (6) - 做点弧度出来如何……好

SPOILER

00:04:507 (2) - 00:16:507 (2) - 00:46:507 (2) - 01:10:507 (3) - 都是没声音的,但是为了打起来流畅我也感觉是必须加的,但是我希望能再减点音量,因为听起来那个hit的音的存在感太强了……好……没想到还减的不够啊……
00:27:007 (7) - 跟上一个slider覆盖到了,我觉的尽量不覆盖比较好,

SPOILER

下一个slider再复制一下……这个梗我挺喜欢的……不想换方向，不过分开来了
00:08:257 (4) - 这个也覆盖到了……本来前面是1.2固定距离……改了
00:29:257 (6) - 向右弯的幅度可以更大一点……好
03:31:882 (1) - 感觉放spinner不是太好啊,干脆去掉吧……因为break有点久用来提示别人开始了，不然有人会睡着0-0
04:54:569 (2,3) - 这两个slider真的不好啊,我建议……这里是本来就是overmap……提出来我就删

SPOILER

08:36:405 (1) - 这个腹黑的spinner感觉在08:39:382 - 停止好……虽然不知道为什么不过我照办了
我个人觉得从开头到01:12:007 (5) - 的音效还可以做点变动,里面很明显的分了两个段落……这样笼统的提议不太能处理，虽然前面只有一个音效是不好，我回去好好想想
后面那部分作为一个新人modder真的挑不出问题,我已经很努力的摸了→_→,其实只要打起来舒服就是正确的感觉了,对吧
最后那段吉他的伴音真的听醉了啊我要是有100颗星星我会全部射给这张图的

Ikaros_F wrote:

hello,zengdaen

[Refrain]
kiai time 没有真的可以嘛……这个曲子前后起伏太大……如果前面加了后面就全程kiai都感觉正常……只有最后加kiai又很蛋疼，闪啊闪的东西真的有意义么，有10个人说我就改
00:20:257 (5,6,7) - 我觉得这一段的旋律可以跳一下→http://puu.sh/6oUZ8……好，不过4.5的跳丧心病狂……我放近了
01:40:319 (4,5,6,7) - 我改变了一下它的排列，感觉能顺手一点→ http://puu.sh/6oVCJ 如果这么做的话，把01:41:257 (8) - 移动到01:41:632 (9) - 的正上方，位置是(256,146)……不错……不过1/1的空拍已经没有flow可言了而且我更喜欢我的01:41:257 (8,9,10) - 三角
01:52:132 (3) - 我怎么感觉这个比其他的有点弯._.……用旋转跟别的对比看了下……应该是视觉误差._.
01:54:007 (8) - ↑
02:18:007 (6,7,8) - 把这3个弄成一个正三角吧，吧8放在02:17:444 (3,5) - 的中下部分……毁我五角星……不能忍
03:00:382 (1) - 改成bpm减一半的滑条，把回转的部分去掉会更有意思嘛……原来就是这样的……又要改回去orz
03:06:382 (1) - ↑
05:17:257 (4,1) - 我改变了一下他的节奏→ http://puu.sh/6oWM6……本来想无视3连音的，因为音量，蓝线还是不下先……3.0的跳略大……换了个摆放
05:46:319 (2,3,4) - 3到4的地方不太好读啊，和前面一样，时间轴大的地方就放大他的间距吧……这个改动牵涉比较大……我试试……
06:00:757 (2,3,4) -3连莫名……overmap正式开始……可能未来会取消……主要是我妹妹后面太鬼畜了，所以我前面想下点铺垫，然后两个finish中间感觉是不错的选择XD
06:04:694 (4,5,6) - 这里也是3连莫名，我觉得加上音效的话可能会好一些……音效忘记了orz
06:34:132 (2) - 这里是1/6，其实我觉得可以不用跟这个音也没事._.自己看吧……单纯的想混过去……因为钢琴还是1/4……做maina的时候发现的，很郁闷……
06:53:819 (7) - 这里也是1/6……
07:12:944 (2,3,4) - 想这个三连也莫名，后面还有这样的，先不说了……如果我妹妹愿意把后面人性化的话……我会取消所有overmap的3连，也许全部3连都会消失也说不定……


很美的一张图
就先摸到这里了……先到这是什么意思？还会继续？
good luck

1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

yf_bmp wrote:

作为first map真心感到神


方向性的mod:

我认为有些梗用的很好 例如01:48:007 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 神…………虽然很开心不过不是我摆的……_(:3」∠)_

然后感觉03:00:382 (1) - 这种不太适合在鼓点多的地方 反倒是03:11:632 - 03:12:382 这种地方需要……好……我试试挪过去……

最后觉得这应该是想做insane吧 那么适量的overmap会更好一些(这个弄不好的话图会变糟)……无法理解overmap的方法……如何学……


细节mod:

• 
  

1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

[General]
难度名现在禁止非难度名称表示,换作insane……我不能忍受使用insane这个名字……我去问bat好了……
默认的softfinish违和 建议替换 : http://puu.sh/6rt4h.wav……谢谢~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦
finish与bgm乐器不符,建议替换 : http://puu.sh/6rt4Y.wav

[Refrain]
00:34:319 (2,3,4,5) - 遮挡倒没什么 但是靠在一起排实在不好 分开些……好……
02:21:007 (5,6,7) - ctrl+g会更符flow……好……
06:34:132 (2) - 不太适合 打的时候感觉到了这样会比较突然 不如不跟吉他……因为吉他音比钢琴重……我滑条带过好了
07:04:507 (3) - 节奏不太好……不知道怎么换……我试试
08:24:382 - 这里结束就可以了……这个其实是杀HR的……能掉九成血，不能让HR毁我桃心……还有人说我就改

大体提一下 希望对你将来的作图有所帮助
Good luck

Edit: 也请帮忙看看图什么的 看到你愿意M4M 我就发上来了: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/130257 谢谢!……我作图是新人……只能说我尽力(๑´ㅂ`๑)……写的不对不要喷我…………

rinsukir wrote:

ingame req

[General]
个人认为在07:12:382到08:12:382可以放一个kiai..……再有9个人提我就加喵~~

[Refrain]
瞎 绿线好多(……来自某强迫症人士的手笔
心形滑条赞…………喵呜~~
曲子这么长我就不挑nazi啦(…………其实……那个……nazi是什么什么意思……捂脸

Komeiji Hatsu……她AFK了惹……所以现在我包办……不过听说有人特地指名道姓她又屁颠屁颠跑过来了……
有一些地方可以做blanket的为什么不包呢o.o 比如说:
00:01:507 (4) - 可以包3的尾巴.. 自己修改一下吧 后面我不再提(……距离1.2不好包……而且我觉得现在的好看
00:28:319 (2,3,4,5) - 排成一条弧线如何?……对角线我觉得很好……
02:49:319 (3,8,3) - 柑橘可以删掉……自带红线填满光环
06:28:132 (2) - 感觉红点没什么意义……让箭头指向下一个物件，卖萌都不让吗
06:34:132 (2) - 缩短1/4 然后在06:34:882加一个note?……为什么？吉他是1/3哦，而且不打算跟吉他
06:44:257 (5) - 换成1/1滑条?……好
07:04:507 (3) - 这个节奏意义不明……好
08:23:257 (5) - 后面的蓝线和红线有鼓点 不跟?……音量都降成这样了，不干
08:36:475 (1) - NC 顺便建议尾部消音……这个坑爹的转盘不是我干的

zengdaen
01:23:257 (6) - 折返处没压到鼓点上 建议取消折返然后缩短1/8 在01:24:007加个note 我错了 好多鼓点都这样的……其实很多曲子都这样……为了ACC只能当不知道
01:29:257 (4) - 这样和直线有什么区别 可以拉一个波浪型……文件大小会有区别（捂脸……改成了弧
01:34:882 (5) - 这个间距也拉大一点吧……喵~~
01:35:632 (7,8,9) - 做一个对跳?……好
04:45:382 (1,2) - 为什么有哨声...……不知道……捂脸

唔 柑橘没什么好挑的.. 感觉可以试试对跳 随机跳.. 还有一些连续单点排成直线感觉不怎么好看orz……我试试换掉些，主要是希望用固定距离来表现死板的感觉……
顺便 refrain在这里是重复的意思?…………唔~~~四暗刻~~

goodluck~

Jemmmmy wrote:

Hi, M4M

refrain

…………这个是各处offest么？这个……我手上的钢琴谱没有说这个曲子有offest变化的地方……可能你是按照鼓点测的offest……我只能说其他乐器bpm120~240都有，还有各种1/3……而且我不打算按照配乐的offest和bpm来作图……因为不在1/4线的音太多了，其实如果跟随这些配乐……虽然那些部分并没有钢琴，实际上关闭音乐后并没有给人原曲的感觉……这个方面我也很纠结……然后就选择了连打带过或者滑条带过……那些微小偏差的我就当不知道了惹……暂时先无视下面那些1/3节奏了惹

od+1？不过od6也是可以……送分无误XD
前面因为在测试offset，后面的之间点可能对不到位置上
00:06:944 (3,4) - 不必要重叠…………某人喜欢这个连着一条线的感觉……不好意思啦
00:14:444 (6) - …………好
00:25:132 - 一直重复有点，可以试试这样的节奏…………好
00:33:757 (1,3) - 这个3叠在1的尾部有点突然了…………是感觉坑吧……我也觉得坑……不过这个过不了后面不用打了惹
00:36:007 (7,1) -
01:02:257 (6) - 包好点…………好
01:07:507 (6,7) - 这个重叠比较难读…………额……也是一个理由惹，为后面鬼畜打铺垫？
01:42:007 (10,1) - 分开或者完全重叠，叠一半有点。。…………就是这个叠一半的风格某人特别喜欢我也……╮(╯▽╰)╭
01:48:007 (7,1) - ^
01:51:382 (1) - 包好…………好
01:54:757 (2,3) - ^………………好
02:05:444 (6,7,8) - 节奏…………节奏是你的好……不过会毁掉这个梗……我思考一下
02:22:882 - 节奏
02:42:382 (1,3) - 包好…………这个包好我感觉不如现在的好看
02:55:132 (3,4) - 有点重叠了…………233
03:12:007 (4) - 这里没有音哟…………一顺手就按下去了……
03:44:444 (6) - …………好
03:59:069 - 节奏
05:09:732 - 节奏
05:10:857 - 这里其实不是1/4.连打呢，节奏是这样
05:41:232 (7,8,9,1) - …………好
05:42:357 (1,3) - 不好的重叠…………这个改了
05:44:232 (6,7) - ^
05:48:263 - 加个circle…………不希望在这几段加连打……不过我会考虑
06:10:013 - 可以加个circle
07:08:623 (2,1) - 包好…………好

真的是很认真的mod……相比之下我的简直就是在水……我给你射星去……

之所以花了这么长时间回复都是因为那个该屎的offest……好想去直接问阿南凉子是怎么想的XD

加油

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

这音乐果然好听...还坚持了这么久
不过貌似就只剩下一个难度了，就直接写吧
进步很多了呢
00:34:319 (2,3,4,5) - 2，4 和 3，5 的间距不一致，修一下……已經不是肉眼可見的誤差了吧……
00:52:882 (5,6) - 对于HD党来说，很难……這個過不了後面也不用打了233
01:59:632 (5,6) - 同上
02:17:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个间距不太平衡...2.70x-2.77x都有……修……
02:37:694 (4) - 包好……修……
02:48:007 (7) - 同上……修……
02:50:069 (6) - 这个...有点像overmap了，不过加上去也挺好的
04:47:633 (7,8,9,10) - 间距不太平衡+1...不过这次前面的好很多了……修……
04:50:632 (6) - 改单点吧……好
06:34:132 (2) - 这个跟吉他吧，吉他音在蓝线上……不，而且吉他在1/3上
06:45:007 (6) - 包好…………修……
08:12:382 - 这里的音乐开始渐渐变小，hitsound却还在维持音量……線插太多忘記了……

另外，没有kiai啊，这里推荐几个时间段吧：……再有8個人提我就加……主要是我覺得那個閃啊閃不太適合
02:24:382 - 02:46:882
02:48:382 - 03:12:382
04:00:382 - 04:22:882
04:24:382 - 04:46:882
04:48:382 - 05:12:382
06:00:382 - 06:24:382
07:12:382 - 07:33:382
07:36:382 - 08:12:382
这些段落，不是有新音轨就是有跟其他旋律不相同的部分，最好能加上吧

跟一开始相比这次比好多了，加油……相當意外的一份mod……謝謝啦

sjoy wrote:

看BG还以为是东方的歌……那是爱❤？
通过打TAP感觉是80BPM的歌阿……钢琴160无误
随便粗略看一遍吧 我慢歌不会作……←.←黑凤凰麻婆
我觉得SC3WHISTLE挺刺的…………又要换音效0-0……我什么都没看见……什么都没看见……
推荐还能用个回音铃音效感觉不错
00:31:507 (4) - ctrl+g 再加个折返……好
01:07:507 (6,7,1) - 直线略蠢……好……？
02:04:882 (5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/6u0ZZ.jpg 不要偷换重音…………好，这么一个奇葩的梗就被拆了……
02:52:319 (3) - 感觉有点莫名放在02:52:507 (4) - 头试试……好
02:47:257 (5) - 放在下面266,173感觉比较好……好，从坐标可以推断你也有强迫症……
04:49:507建议 http://puu.sh/6u1vy.png……好
04:51:757 (1,2) - 后移半拍……好
06:34:132 (2) - http://puu.sh/6u1GK.jpg……其实吉他是1/3线……而且我不打算跟，这个曲子还有1/8的定音鼓重音呢，跟了那ACC美丽
06:47:632 (4) - 3/4折返吧
06:53:632 (6) - ^
06:59:632 (5) - ^
07:08:632 (2) - ^
懒了不看了……
有一点注意一下除非强音确实在红线……其实是梗用光了%……&
不然少用红线起的滑条……喵呜~~？？

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From In-game request.

[General]

1. default-comma.png default-dot.png default-percent.png default-x.png 這些東西要把default改成score才對
   另外就是default只有物件的數字會改，右上分數的部份不會，所以你需要把default-0到9複製一次在把default改成score……唔…… :o
2. 04:14:075這條綠線歪了

……0-0……

[Refrain]

1. 00:03:757 (1,2,3) - 因為你這裡用了三個slider，可以考慮把他們擺成一個三角形，順便讓(3)包住00:06:382 (1) - ，這樣的話我覺得好看些……好……那个1真是不能吐槽……
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2. 00:20:257 (5,6,7) - 這三個note的音是低->高->低，如果能擺成橫的去強調音階的話會更符合音樂……影响面积比较大……我试试
3. 00:37:882 (5) - 這裡可以試著往下擺一點，讓(4)和(5)能變一條弧線……好，那个钻头也很想吐槽
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4. 00:48:382 (1) - 跟前面有點類似，這裡的音明顯比00:47:257 (3) - 高，我的話會把他擺在高處去凸顯他的音調……好深奥的技巧……
5. 01:01:882 (1) - 這裡加NC？ 你前面也是在長白線放的……漏了……捂脸……
6. 02:46:694 (4,5,6) - 把這些移到y軸上當作對稱吧……本来就是在Y轴上面弄对称了移过来保持距离的……趴……
7. 02:57:382 (1) - 往左移一點包住02:56:632 (7) - ？……好……
8. 03:00:382 (1) - 其實我覺得0.55x有點太慢了，不過你覺得要重拉很麻煩的話就算了唄……拉桃心很简单……主要是滑条太长……空间占用太大……我试试再大一点……
9. 03:05:257 (2) - 這個放在愛心的中間就好了，不用刻意放在中心，或者是把愛心往下拉也行……好……
10. 05:05:632 (4) - 可以考慮在這加NC，這樣就能很明顯的分出三角形和星形……我感觉不加NC有那个线比较好……
11. 05:32:257 (5) - 我會在這邊加NC去指出spacing和節奏的改變，下一小節也是……唔……因为是固定2长白NC……我考虑一下
12. 05:47:820 (8) - 根據音樂的話我覺得疊在(7)會適合些，不過既然你這裡擺了個星星就算了……额……
13. 05:52:132 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 雖然玩得時候不一定會注意到，但我還是會把間距在拉大一點讓他們包住05:51:382 (1) - ……我试试……
14. 07:21:569 (1) - 往上移到愛心中間唄……好
15. 08:36:475 (1) - 我是覺得這個spin沒什麼必要，如果你堅持要放的話就把finish拿掉吧，太違和了……已删！

gw2010 wrote:

今天打了一下，感觉非常棒的map呢^w
于是提出一些建议 nokudosu~……←.←……怎么可能……我要星

Refrain

可RANK水平→_→，感觉吊炸天……我妹妹说这个图是平时随手连到梗断成屎的渣图……（捂脸
02:03:569 (1) - 按照整首曲子你的风格，这个note还是去掉比较好，然后……好
02:03:569 (1) - NC
02:43:882 (5) - 前后像这样重复的一大段，能不能考虑部分加上“从02:43:882 (5) - 开始至02:44:257 (5) - 结束的一次reverse滑条"呢……因为这一段是第一个我感觉高潮的地方所以想增加玩家按键次数提升难度……虽然实际上这里的难度没有后面高

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zengdaen wrote:

gw2010 wrote:

今天打了一下，感觉非常棒的map呢^w
于是提出一些建议 nokudosu~……←.←……怎么可能……我要星

Refrain

可RANK水平→_→，感觉吊炸天……我妹妹说这个图是平时随手连到梗断成屎的渣图……（捂脸
02:03:569 (1) - 按照整首曲子你的风格，这个note还是去掉比较好，然后……好
02:03:569 (1) - NC
02:43:882 (5) - 前后像这样重复的一大段，能不能考虑部分加上“从02:43:882 (5) - 开始至02:44:257 (5) - 结束的一次reverse滑条"呢……因为这一段是第一个我感觉高潮的地方所以想增加玩家按键次数提升难度……虽然实际上这里的难度没有后面高

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gw2010 wrote:

收集了一些玩家的试玩和建议 希望对app有帮助:3

>w<

另外ForeverU9的HD成绩其实是第⑨PC（窝在某人的威逼下屈服了。。。哭哭QAQ）

这些是REP~需要就拿走吧~

http://puu.sh/6zWnf.zip

1. 這個曲子最後段是最高潮當然難度最高……這個不會改的……
2. 休息時間有人提mod我就改……我自己打反正DT也不燒耐力……可能我強雙耐力好
3. 這圖不是為了觸手設計的除非DT，AR8絕對是合理的
4. HP8是為了防止HR調轉我桃心……如果很多人認為不人道……我就刪最後的桃心並且調整HP
5. maina是渣無誤，等Simple_Star的collab來了后我會重置我的maina

zengdaen wrote:

這個曲子最後段是最高潮當然難度最高……這個不會改的……
HP8是為了防止HR調轉我桃心……如果很多人認為不人道……我就刪最後的桃心並且調整HP

Oracle wrote:

zengdaen wrote:

這個曲子最後段是最高潮當然難度最高……這個不會改的……
HP8是為了防止HR調轉我桃心……如果很多人認為不人道……我就刪最後的桃心並且調整HP

please,
永远不要靠HP来制造难度,最高潮拉slider而死那是憋屈死,用HP来体现难度实在不是一个好主意.
不要这么纠结桃心好么...相信也不止一个人说过这个了."为了不让人HR"这个理由真的站不住脚

1. 如果mania难度要改为bg.jpg的话,记得上传的时候要点否哦。不然就是黑屏的
2. mania的图想要approval的话现在需要有音效了，文件名为“clap、cymbol、hihat”等等

1. 02:24:288 - 从这里开始whistle略显吵 建议多试试比较短的whistle音效 或者音量小些
2. 02:48:288 - 突然的spacing变化其实是强烈不建议的 从1.4变到1.8差距还是挺大的 （只是提一下> < 在这里如果想凸显曲子更加高昂的话用timing里面的sv调整更好 只调sd的话滑条速度是不会变化的
3. 02:51:569 (1) - 这个不太好 因为前面有一个长长的slider了 02:51:757 - 建议这个时间点改成一个circle 空出红线
4. 03:59:257 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里的音效很生硬 音调是逐渐降低的哦 试试7的clap音量降到50% 8的clap改为finish
5. 04:23:632 (5) - 音量稍微低些
6. 04:48:194 (11) - 去掉这个circle 乃这个跳的flow在这个点没有音效的 相反这里要加上04:46:694 -
7. 06:21:007 (6) - 去掉whistle 好违和哦
8. 06:28:132 (2) - 箭头歪掉啦= =
9. 07:21:569 (1) - 这个要删掉的 很乱节奏的一个circle
10. 07:28:882 (7,8) - 这个spacing完全不一样的最好不要有

1. 好长的breaktime> <
2. 02:46:975 (166975|1,167069|6) - 这个有些坑呢 虽然对触手来说挺容易的 不过这样怎么样> <
   
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3. 02:59:069 - 这里要加circle
4. 00:49:507 - 这里略显无聊呢 试着把其中一个另一半反过来 很多地方都可以这样 不然会有些无聊
   
   请戳

   
5. 06:34:132 - mania更讲究完全的演奏 这里的吉他还是map上的好 这种超适合一边琴一边吉他的map方式呢
6. 06:42:194 - 这里也要有circle
7. 06:47:819 - ^
8. 07:06:007 - 这里的额吉他好美 求map上;w;
9. 后面好难T T

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

hi~zengdaen QvQ~
咱是渣麻婆> < ...有的内容不喜欢就无视掉它吧……怎么可能←.←
[General]

1. 如果mania难度要改为bg.jpg的话,记得上传的时候要点否哦。不然就是黑屏的………唔……不好意思啊……我不知道会有人modmaina……，那个是我闲着蛋疼自己弄的……我找了Kuo Kyoka求GD了……按照他作图的速度大概这个月内就到……_(:3」∠)_
2. mania的图想要approval的话现在需要有音效了，文件名为“clap、cymbol、hihat”等等

[Refrain]

1. 02:24:288 - 从这里开始whistle略显吵 建议多试试比较短的whistle音效 或者音量小些 ……好~
2. 02:48:288 - 突然的spacing变化其实是强烈不建议的 从1.4变到1.8差距还是挺大的 （只是提一下> < 在这里如果想凸显曲子更加高昂的话用timing里面的sv调整更好 只调sd的话滑条速度是不会变化的 ……其实难度提升不大……至少我自己DT的时候没在这里断过……不过我还是加了SV减了距离
3. 02:51:569 (1) - 这个不太好 因为前面有一个长长的slider了 02:51:757 - 建议这个时间点改成一个circle 空出红线……好
4. 03:59:257 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里的音效很生硬 音调是逐渐降低的哦 试试7的clap音量降到50% 8的clap改为finish……插了跟50的线在7前面，不过8本来就是clap，不会换finish的
5. 04:23:632 (5) - 音量稍微低些 ……已经是……50线了惹，而且这个是重音啊……
6. 04:48:194 (11) - 去掉这个circle 乃这个跳的flow在这个点没有音效的 相反这里要加上04:46:694 - ……唔……04:48:194 - 是有个明显的finish的……我应该没有听错……吧……04:46:694 - 只是音叉倒是感觉不重要……前面两个连续重finish的影响下根本注意不到，我看看有没有别人提
7. 06:21:007 (6) - 去掉whistle 好违和哦 ……好~~
8. 06:28:132 (2) - 箭头歪掉啦= =……某人要卖萌的指向下一个物件……_(:3」∠)_
9. 07:21:569 (1) - 这个要删掉的 很乱节奏的一个circle……好~~~
10. 07:28:882 (7,8) - 这个spacing完全不一样的最好不要有…………为了后面的物件能放在桃心上面……额……我re掉这一部分好了

[Eternal]

1. 好长的breaktime> <……因为我做了5分钟就做不下去了……_(:3」∠)_
2. 02:46:975 (166975|1,167069|6) - 这个有些坑呢 虽然对触手来说挺容易的 不过这样怎么样> <……我不懂maina的啦……自己也只能打打4K……只能说……谢谢mod了XD
   
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3. 02:59:069 - 这里要加circle
4. 00:49:507 - 这里略显无聊呢 试着把其中一个另一半反过来 很多地方都可以这样 不然会有些无聊
   
   请戳

   
5. 06:34:132 - mania更讲究完全的演奏 这里的吉他还是map上的好 这种超适合一边琴一边吉他的map方式呢……1/3线的吉他……ACC真的不会坠毁？
6. 06:42:194 - 这里也要有circle
7. 06:47:819 - ^
8. 07:06:007 - 这里的额吉他好美 求map上;w;……我也觉得很好听可是它在1/3线上啊啊啊%……&
9. 后面好难T T

就这么多了 贴颗星星~……谢谢~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦，现在的女孩子都喜欢深夜发帖麽？不萌了怎么办？

gw2010 wrote:

降HP好评，射星~

pkmnyab wrote:

早上好! From your modding queue~

I suggest putting "Eternal Light" as the source because that is the name of the album from which this song came from. …… no , because rule

my sister wish ↓↓↓



08:20:257 (7) - Make (7)(1)(1) a new combo, so it becomes (1)(2)(3) since the piano starts playing …… ok

08:24:382 (8) - This slider is easy compared to the rest of your song and is sort of long. Maybe you can replace with spinner or something else, or maybe
increase slider velocity?…… ahh ……the slider very hard …… lol …… because HP ……lol ……

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Overall your map was pretty good, the song was very relaxing. Have fun mapping~

Fort wrote:

this is my Mod, my Friend

okay, let's begin.

00:10:507 (3) - CTRL + G it, looks beautiful …… no , no jump here
00:34:319 (2,3,4,5) - i like this patter is same in above …… no it's fun
02:20:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for better placement , CTRL + , it and move circle 1 in X:160 y:276 (it move all circles) ……ahh……ok
02:29:819 (7) - move it to x:20 y:12. for nice jump and nice look too …… no jump here , distance 1.4 all time
02:44:819 - add circle here, stack it with slider 7……why ?
03:38:257 (5) - umm it looks nice like this i think …… i think so so ……
03:55:694 (4) - this slider so tricky, i think change it to 2 hitcircle is the best……tricky ? no ……
04:20:257 (6) - umm... i think move it to x:192 y: 191 …… no too closed for 04:19:882 (5) -
04:24:757 (2) - stack it like this ……no too closed for 04:24:382 (1) -
04:48:382 (1) - i think place it in x:128 y:268 for better flow …… not want to stack
04:50:632 (6) - i think its better to place in x:468 y:264 …… not want to stack
04:57:757 (2) - this slider is hard to read, try to place them like this …… none miss note here
04:58:132 (3) - you can place move this to x:192 y:84 …… i wish jumping , because it's downbeat
05:01:507 (5) - it looks fit with two hitcircle …… no , but two hitcirle better
05:08:257 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i think this jumps like tricky, try make another patter of this jumps …… ahh …… it's easier than 05:05:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
05:13:882 (5) - i think the kiai time is make player (especially mouse player) is tired try place this in x:448 y:216 for little rest …… no jump
05:23:819 (7,8) - for circle 7 place it in 8. for circle 8, try place it in X:288 y:96 …… not want to stack
05:29:632 (7,9) - try make curves on this slider …… ok

Some Procedure (suggestion for me) …… ahh ……i add NC each long white tick
1. 06:07:507 (3) - NC it
2. 06:07:882 (1) - release NC
3. 06:08:257 (2) - NC it
4. 06:09:007 (5) - NC it
5. 06:09:382 (1) - Release NC.

06:34:132 (2) - i think move it to x:292 y:108 is nice idea ……distance 1.0
07:28:132 (4) - i suggest move it to x:44 y:176 …… ok
07:29:069 (7) - stack it with circle 6 …… no , symmetry for 07:28:319 (5) -
07:36:382 - to 08:12:194 - in this time try to make anti-jumps, looks like hard patterns and umm sorry "random jumps" and hard reading reversed slider pattern is a little bit confusing player (my opinion). for this problem, try to make slider interested to read like making curved sliders, star patter jumps, or manymore, including add some antijumps …… ahh ……maybe ~~

if this mod useful for you, just give a little kudos for me, same like "thanks" words.
if this mod is useless, just feel free. you have star rating by me, and it's okay if you dont give kudos for me . maybe im wrong

and i am sorry for my english.
and sorry i cant read chinese, so i cant read beatmap description. lol …… beatmap description just some fun

Atrue wrote:

脑补图好评

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

1. 请勿将滑条tick和slide音同时静音，rules明确说了you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
2. I think that “Refrain” cannot be used as difficult name since rules changed, https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/169960
3. 我觉得BPM是80，将SV翻倍即可，最好别把BPM翻倍
4. TAGS里的Komeiji可以去掉一个，tags以空格区分是便于搜索，只有一个就可以了

1. 02:58:882 (7) –unsanpped object
2. 02:59:632 (8) - unsanpped object
3. 02:00:194 –多余的绿线
4. 00:27:757 (1,3) –碰一块了，有点难看，把3往上面放点，而且2,3,4,5一条直线flow还不好，或者可以改成和00:33:757 (1,2,3,4,5) –类似的
5. 01:12:757 (2) –这里的滑条滑动音简直十分难听，建议把S;C1的sliderslide音给静音了，但是tick音要去掉，不能同时静音
6. 01:21:382 (1,2,3) –等间距？建议等边三角形
7. 01:29:257 (4) –滑条尾部点都去掉吧，这个尾部箭头被那么多点弄的方向已经变了，和01:17:257 (4) –保持统一，或者可以复制这个04:17:257 (5) -，觉得没必要可以这么做
8. 01:48:007 (7,1) –别碰一起吧，打起来看着不好
9. 02:05:632 (5) –头上漏了个clap
10. 02:20:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –这个跳打起来就没之前的那么舒服，可以试试把02:20:632 (3,4) –ctrl+g然后把7放到左边去
11. 02:22:882 (4,5,6,7,8,) –wrongly snapped，这里你仔细听一下鼓点，应该是1/3的串子，从02:22:882 –到02:23:632 –正好7个音
12. 02:26:257 (6) -6可以稍微顺时针转一点，看着有点难看，可能是5碰到6尾巴了
13. 02:47:257 (6,7) –这clap加错位了啊，把6头上的clap换到7身上去，仔细听一下音乐
14. 02:48:007 –这里可以放个五连
15. 02:48:382 (1) –形状有点难看，还是normal-slider合适
16. 02:49:319 (3) –这个circle去掉吧，没音，打着有点别扭
17. 02:50:819 (7) –这个也是，去掉，正好构成个节奏梗，和02:53:913 –一样
18. 02:57:288 –不加个circle吗，这里恰好有个乐器音
19. 04:00:382 (1) –我感觉默认的softfinish好点
20. 04:04:882 (5,6) –可以离远点，像这样，
    SPOILER

    
21. 05:58:694 (4,5,1,2,3,4) –这里也是，首先这个05:58:788 (5) –overmapped，强烈建议去掉，而且根据你NC加的位置也是，然后05:58:882 (1,2,3,4) –仔细听，应该是1/3的串子，所以应该snap到1/3上去，如果这样改着有点不好打的话可以把05:58:507 (3,4) –合并成1/2滑条
22. 06:34:132 (2) –这不跟下电音吗？像这样
    SPOILER

    
    ，看你最后几乎都是1/1节奏很无聊啊。跟电音的地方就别管钢琴
23. 06:47:632 (4) –如果上面的改了这个也相应改一下
24. 06:53:632 (6) -^
25. 07:09:757 (2) –换成circle吧，我觉得1/4slider在这并不好
26. 07:11:444 (8) –强烈建议去掉这个circle，这没音
27. 07:59:069 (3) –这个clap在这严重影响打击和这一块的音效梗，音乐里这是没音效的

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. 请勿将滑条tick和slide音同时静音，rules明确说了you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together. …… 额……其实……没有任何一个滑条是有tick的……除了桃心……桃心上的tick是加音效的，唉，我还是删了算了
2. I think that “Refrain” cannot be used as difficult name since rules changed, t/169960 …… ahh……希望不是最近又加了新规则 http://tieba.baidu.com/p/1792019779?pid ... 4756399775
   
3. 我觉得BPM是80，将SV翻倍即可，最好别把BPM翻倍 ……160 ……无误……合计6个人说是80了……orz……我上图算了↓↓↓
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. TAGS里的Komeiji可以去掉一个，tags以空格区分是便于搜索，只有一个就可以了

…… 喵~~

[Refrain]

1. 02:58:882 (7) –unsanpped object……fixed
2. 02:59:632 (8) - unsanpped object……fixed
3. 02:00:194 –多余的绿线……fixed
4. 00:27:757 (1,3) –碰一块了，有点难看，把3往上面放点，而且2,3,4,5一条直线flow还不好，或者可以改成和00:33:757 (1,2,3,4,5) –类似的……fixed …… 不过直线留了……和后面那个一起用能坑不少人
5. 01:12:757 (2) –这里的滑条滑动音简直十分难听，建议把S;C1的sliderslide音给静音了，但是tick音要去掉，不能同时静音……fixed
6. 01:21:382 (1,2,3) –等间距？建议等边三角形……fixed
7. 01:29:257 (4) –滑条尾部点都去掉吧，这个尾部箭头被那么多点弄的方向已经变了，和01:17:257 (4) –保持统一，或者可以复制这个04:17:257 (5) -，觉得没必要可以这么做……某人就是希望弄弯箭头惹……不过终于屈服了……fixed
8. 01:48:007 (7,1) –别碰一起吧，打起来看着不好……fixed
9. 02:05:632 (5) –头上漏了个clap……fixed
10. 02:20:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –这个跳打起来就没之前的那么舒服，可以试试把02:20:632 (3,4) –ctrl+g然后把7放到左边去……好，不过4和5有点远……我还是换个吧……DT的时候跳一次死一次
11. 02:22:882 (4,5,6,7,8,) –wrongly snapped，这里你仔细听一下鼓点，应该是1/3的串子，从02:22:882 –到02:23:632 –正好7个音……这个我知道……前面也有人提了……不过难道要下1/3的串么……ACC美丽……折返感觉沙皮……沙皮……当沙皮好了
12. 02:26:257 (6) -6可以稍微顺时针转一点，看着有点难看，可能是5碰到6尾巴了…………fixed
13. 02:47:257 (6,7) –这clap加错位了啊，把6头上的clap换到7身上去，仔细听一下音乐……fixed
14. 02:48:007 –这里可以放个五连……好~
15. 02:48:382 (1) –形状有点难看，还是normal-slider合适……fixed
16. 02:49:319 (3) –这个circle去掉吧，没音，打着有点别扭……fixed
17. 02:50:819 (7) –这个也是，去掉，正好构成个节奏梗，和02:53:913 –一样……fixed，其实这个部分某人希望填满红线来着……所以这段很多没音的红线有note，再后面的note也挑了几个删掉了
18. 02:57:288 –不加个circle吗，这里恰好有个乐器音……这段还是不加蓝线了
19. 04:00:382 (1) –我感觉默认的softfinish好点…………忘记插线了……orz……果然线多了肯定出错……
20. 04:04:882 (5,6) –可以离远点，像这样，……fixed
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21. 05:58:694 (4,5,1,2,3,4) –这里也是，首先这个05:58:788 (5) –overmapped，强烈建议去掉，而且根据你NC加的位置也是，然后05:58:882 (1,2,3,4) –仔细听，应该是1/3的串子，所以应该snap到1/3上去，如果这样改着有点不好打的话可以把05:58:507 (3,4) –合并成1/2滑条……额，滑条了……不过那个1/3的……唉……只能继续用沙皮折返了
22. 06:34:132 (2) –这不跟下电音吗？像这样
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    ，看你最后几乎都是1/1节奏很无聊啊。跟电音的地方就别管钢琴……ahh~其实是1/3惹~~这个改动下次上传
23. 06:47:632 (4) –如果上面的改了这个也相应改一下
24. 06:53:632 (6) -^
25. 07:09:757 (2) –换成circle吧，我觉得1/4slider在这并不好……fixed
26. 07:11:444 (8) –强烈建议去掉这个circle，这没音……哦……因为后面都是没音的地方有note，所以提前加个提醒注意目押来着……orz
27. 07:59:069 (3) –这个clap在这严重影响打击和这一块的音效梗，音乐里这是没音效的……fixed

整体不错，加油！

谢谢~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦……这份mod实在太给力了……

Yoeri wrote:

god damn it zexous

[Refrain]Extremely nice and relaxing map, I like it.…… ><

1. 00:22:507 (2) - Flows terribly, try something like this: http://puu.sh/6Sjlp.jpg…… fine , fixed
2. 00:34:319 (2,3,4,5) - Pattern is ruined because (3) is stacked under (1), making (3) overlap slightly with (4). Spacing (3), (4) and (2) further away from each other would fix this. …… I try
3. 00:39:007 (8,1) - Curve slightly less for a better blanket. …… fixed
4. 01:04:507 (4,1) - ^…… fixed
5. 01:23:257 (6) - Try making this slider symmetrical.…… fixed
6. 01:32:257 (6,7,1) - Again, stacking makes this look a bit weird. The sliderends don't stack, but (1) does. Try creating a 'fake' stack with the sliderends: http://puu.sh/6Sknp.jpg (lowered AR to show the entire stack) …… fixed
7. 01:47:257 (6) - Would look better if it was curved somewhat more.……it's a straight line
8. 01:51:944 (2,4) - Not stacked properly.……stacked now
9. 01:57:382 (1) - Try custom sampleset 4 for this finish?……i forget it _(:3」∠)_
10. 02:12:382 (1) - ^…… fixed
11. 02:12:382 (1,2) - Not stacked properly.…… fixed
12. 02:22:882 (4,5) - Unstacking these would make them less confusing to read.…… separate now
13. 02:24:382 (1) - Sampleset 4?…… fixed
14. 02:27:007 (7,1) - This slight overlap looks rather bad.…… but i don't kown how to change _(:3」∠)_
15. 02:28:132 (3) - You could ctrl+g this for neat flow, unless you don't want that jump.no jump here……orz
16. 02:36:382 (1) - Sampleset 4 on start?…… fixed
17. 02:37:132 (3,5) - Not stacked properly I think.…… fixed
18. 02:46:132 (3) - Sampleset 4?…… fixed
19. 03:00:382 (1) - Sliderart is neat and all, but I feel like you're missing too much of the music by making it so long. Try to end it at 03:02:632, and remove the slider velocity change This is a big change , i try …… maybe no change _(:3」∠)_
20. 03:06:382 (1) - Same here, end at 03:08:632. Also the curves at the top seem off. Move the two topmost points one down and four away from the middle. Also try to avoid that overlap of the start and end, if you can.……orz
21. 03:11:632 (3) - Add a clap.…… fixed
22. 03:56:257 (5) - This is neat, but ctrl+g would flow better.……i think own is ok
23. 03:58:882 (5) - This needs to be snapped to 1/3. …… fixed
24. 04:20:257 (6,7,1) - Same as before, try making a fake stack.…… fixed
25. 04:21:757 (2,3,4,5) - Drums are 1/3 here, not 1/4.…… fixed
26. 04:22:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kind of not fun because they're nearly squares. Maybe try the order 1, 6, 7, 5, 3, 4, 2.…… Temporarily do not change
27. 04:24:382 (1) - Sampleset 4?…… fixed
28. 04:27:569 (1,2) - Blanket could be better.…… fixed
29. 04:56:819 (6,7) - This looks rather bad.…… i try other layout
30. 04:57:757 (2,3) - This PLAYS rather bad.……^
31. 05:01:507 (5,6) - ^ Try pointing (5) down and slightly to the right, or even blanket (3) with it.
32. 05:08:632 (4) - Sampleset 4 finish?
33. 05:10:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This needs to be 1/3, not 1/4.…… fixed
34. 05:24:382 (1) - Sampleset 4?…… fixed
35. 05:33:382 (1) - ^…… why i forget so much orz
36. 05:36:382 (1) - ^…… fixed
37. 05:48:382 (1) - ^…… fixed
38. 05:58:882 (1,2) - Confusing. Ctrl+g would work I guess.……fixed
39. 06:18:382 (1) - Custom sampleset 4?…… fixed
40. 06:28:132 (2) - Why is the return arrow pointed right? Looks really weird.……喵呜……
41. 06:56:257 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Try to avoid the overlaps? They don't look too great.……ok~
42. 06:59:632 (5) - Why aren't you following the guitar here like you did before?……i forget it …… orz
43. 07:09:850 (3) - Remove this, it doesn't play well. Besides, it's not correct either. The correct timing would be 07:09:710. Which wouldn't play well either because it's 1/8.removed , but piano is 1/4 , and i kown 04:23:628 (5) - is 1/8 too , i think player will hit note in 1/4 , maybe 1/4 better , i use stream Instead of 1/3 because i dislike reverse slider, i will consult others , temporarily do not change
44. 07:12:382 (1) - Sampleset 4?……fixed
45. 07:18:382 (1,1) - Not stacked correctly.……It is meant to be separated ?
46. 07:24:382 (1) - Sampleset 4?……fixed
47. 07:30:382 (1) - Top curves could be better. Ideally, the holes in the loops should look like droplets.…… i …… try …………
48. 07:30:382 (1,2) - Not stacked properly.……It is meant to be separated ?
49. 07:34:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this drum fill is actually 1/6 instead of 1/4.……ahh……1/6 reverse……orz
50. 07:36:194 - Feels like something is missing here.……fixed
51. 07:48:382 (3) - Soft sampleset 4?……fixed
52. 07:57:382 (4) - ^……fixed
53. 08:15:569 (2,3) - Blanket?……fixed

Atrue wrote:

脑补图好评

Laurier wrote:

from my queue

Refrain
00:03:749 (1,2,3) - move to center ? http://puu.sh/6VGtu.jpg
00:22:499 (2) - nazi 1 grid down and make a perfect stack.
00:34:874 (5) - move to x156y193
00:35:249 (6) - stack
00:40:874 (5,6,7,8) - please make better blanket. like this http://puu.sh/6VGB8.jpg
01:08:812 (5,6) - Ctrl+G. it will be better jump.
01:32:624 (7,1) - why dont stack 01:32:249 (6) - ? ……

Yoeri wrote:

01:32:257 (6,7,1) - Again, stacking makes this look a bit weird. The sliderends don't stack, but (1) does. Try creating a 'fake' stack with the sliderends: http://puu.sh/6Sknp.jpg (lowered AR to show the entire stack)

01:52:874 (5,6,7,8) - same as 00:40:874 (5,6,7,8) -
04:06:749 (2) - make a blanket ? http://puu.sh/6VGTK.jpg
04:20:624 (7,1) - same as 01:32:624 (7,1) -
04:30:374 (1) - I don't like this overlap. please move more down
06:21:749 (1) - remove newcombo
07:49:124 (5) - nazi move this http://puu.sh/6VH5b.jpg

thats all !!

[Trigger] wrote:

加油做张好图吧~

richardfeder wrote:

Atrue wrote:

脑补图好评

我就马一下/W\怕忘了

sample+使用指南(雾
puu.sh/6VQu0.rar

GL!

jogfi2002 wrote:

先占个坑，现在开始MOD。

一个难度8分钟，好厉害！

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好图，打起来很舒服！
结果舒服到最后一段高潮打了一堆100ww

ACC高是因为OD低……后面出100是因為最後的高潮很坑！是我妹妹故意弄坑的！她還說不能讓人一PC就SS！尼瑪誰能一PC就SS馬拉松啊！

感觉只能鸡蛋里挑骨头了，觉得没道理的可以完全无视的w

00:20:249 (5,6,7,8) - 这三个可以放得更对称一些，比如将5往右下方拉一点……好
00:29:999 (7) - 7的NC放到这里？……不，我是啟用了無腦max系統進行的全局長白NC
00:45:374 (1) - 去掉NC，然后NC放到00:47:249 (4)……^
01:19:686 - 可以塞个NOTE，有非常微弱的鼓声……我知道……看我maina的diif就知道了……不過因為這一段是重複四次的所以不想一口氣跟上所有音，想弄個遞進的感覺，最後段我連藍線的鼓都跟了
01:20:061 - 同上 ^
01:21:186 - 同上。不过我猜你是不想做得太吵？^，是想慢慢鬼畜起來~~
01:21:280 - 同上。^
01:35:624 (7) - 可以NC以提醒玩家 ^
02:26:999 (7,1) - 稍微有点重叠……修掉了
03:46:124 (2,3,4) - 这一小段的连续滴答音略微有点点吵……難道要我刪音效……先保留
03:56:249 (5,6,7) - 这段我会这么排……好，不過折返我換了滑條接note


05:32:249 (5) - 建议NC …… ^ ， 其實這些地方沒坑爹到要NC的程度……而且NC本身提示作用一般很小
最后一小段的滴答声建议起始小声一点……好

射~

toybot wrote:

Huh, first mod under No Dap Q

the green lines …… 233

[Refrain]

I can like never put a comment on these awesome hitsounds ;A;

00:43:124 (3) - ctrl+g? flows better and makes a nice wave into the next slider …… changed
01:22:874 (5) - a bit nazi, but make it so that the heads of 4, 5, and 6 are in a straight line? like at x428 y324 …… fixed
02:36:374 (1) - nazi make blanket a bit better? …… fixed
02:48:374 - 03:00:186 - i found this section a bit too loud. maybe reduce to 50-53% volume …… i think that need stress
03:06:374 (1) - put whistle at head? makes it less monotonous imo …… i add finish all long white ……
04:25:686 - place a note here? on top of the (4)'s head …… ok
04:35:249 (6) - same with that head alignment suggestion i put out earlier, this at x332 y160 …… ok
05:32:999 (10,1) - these could be put at a better spot. maybe use these to make a W-shaped jump pattern ? these at around x16 y200……no , too closed for 05:33:374 (1) -
05:49:499 (4) - have this look the same as (3), like bent at same direction and stuff……？？？
06:05:999 (4) - ctrl+g?……i think own ok
06:11:249 (2) - ^……ok
07:06:749 (1) - maybe remove nc? for hp drain …… no it's very trouble because i use 8 colours
07:08:249 (1) - ^ …… ^
07:16:874 (6) - sounds so awkward as a 1/4 slider, when nothing in the music suggests it. make it into a 1/2 beat slider instead?……fixed
07:49:686 (6) - maybe make this the nc instead of 07:49:874 (1) - , make it look the same with the few objects after it ……fixed
07:54:374 (8) - nc, and you should stack the tail on top of the previous (4)……fixed
08:23:999 (7) - you should move this a little bit down, so it's right in the middle of the diamond created by the slider…… ~！@#￥%……&*（）
08:24:374 (1) - dat slider……ahh……

Once again, really freaking awesome hitsounds
These are all suggestions, since there are no real issues I could actually find (i am poor modder)

Good luck on your approve mapset! :3

Simple_Star wrote:

Here is Mania Mod
[Eternal]
00:28:311 (28311|1) - 移到右手
00:55:499 (55499|6,55499|0) - 移到3和6
01:14:061 (74061|6) - 无音 …… ><
02:22:967 (142967|3,143155|5) - 删去 如果不想删..其实这里是1/3
02:58:686 - 加一个Note在4 ……:><:
03:58:999 -~ 03:59:124 - 音抓错了 这里也是1/3
04:21:749 - 抓错音了 这里是1/3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345800
04:48:186 - Add a Note at 1 ……::><::
05:10:874 - ~ 05:11:436 - 不幸的..这里是1/3
05:35:342 (335342|5,335530|4) - ..1/3 要好好听音啊
08:23:342 (503342|4,503530|3) - 基本上用1/3的地方你都用成了2连的1/4

多找些测试者试试手感吧 排列方面..说不太清楚 有点怪怪的

Akabato wrote:

一種壯士斷腕的悲壯感 。_。

neonat wrote:

Refrain

04:00:186 - with the cymbal sound here, add a note? .......
If mapped to the snares, add notes to 04:06:186 and 04:06:280
There is the trill downwards by the saxophone, as well as the snares at 04:15:186 and 04:15:280 so possible triplet
04:59:249 (2) - to build up to this note, add objects at 04:59:061 and 04:59:155
06:08:999 (5) - change to a slider that ends at 06:09:186 with the cymbal sound
Build up to 06:20:249 (2) - with notes at 06:20:061 and 06:20:155

Streliteela wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1438505
很喜欢于是试了试放了半年的ctb……水果模式下也是张相当好的图...原谅我最后耐力不够断掉了
祝福早日rank~^_^

Garven wrote:

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2014-03-21 21:31 Narcissu: hi ><
2014-03-21 21:32 Garven: hi ><
2014-03-21 21:32 Narcissu: a……excuse me …… could you mod my map ?
2014-03-21 21:33 Garven: Refrain?
2014-03-21 21:33 Narcissu: yes！
2014-03-21 21:33 Narcissu: %>_<%
2014-03-21 21:33 Garven: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/289752 Anan Ryoko - Refrain [Refrain]] -NoFail
2014-03-21 21:34 Narcissu: ..
2014-03-21 21:34 Garven: That first set of jumps was D:
2014-03-21 21:34 Garven: I wasn't expecting them at all haha
2014-03-21 21:35 Narcissu: 额……
2014-03-21 21:35 Garven: Was that double click sound intentional?
2014-03-21 21:35 Garven: 中国語が読めない・・・
2014-03-21 21:37 Narcissu: because i think this high tide ><
2014-03-21 21:37 Garven: Maybe we can redesign it a bit so it isn't so startling
2014-03-21 21:37 Garven: Is this a touhou song?
2014-03-21 21:38 Narcissu: no
2014-03-21 21:38 Narcissu: it's not touhou song orz
2014-03-21 21:38 Garven: Just wondering since you have a touhou background q:
2014-03-21 21:38 Narcissu: 233
2014-03-21 21:38 Garven: Those heart sliders... maybe scale them up a bit and not have such a huge change in speed
2014-03-21 21:38 Narcissu: it's suitable
2014-03-21 21:43 Narcissu: a
2014-03-21 21:44 Garven: Personally I think mapping the fadeout is a waste
2014-03-21 21:44 Garven: Since there's no real good point in which you feel that you have "finished"
2014-03-21 21:44 Narcissu: o
2014-03-21 21:44 Garven: Overall it felt pretty nice though
2014-03-21 21:45 Narcissu: ~\(≧▽≦)/~
2014-03-21 21:45 Garven: 00:28:499 (3) -
2014-03-21 21:45 Garven: I think this is the reason why I messed up
2014-03-21 21:45 Garven: You go back to a previous hit object
2014-03-21 21:45 Narcissu: change it？
2014-03-21 21:45 Garven: I think if you placed this so that it isn't covered by another object, it would read better and give the player a better cue to show that it's going to be a jump
2014-03-21 21:46 Narcissu: ok-
2014-03-21 21:47 Garven: 01:05:061 (1) - This whistle intended?
2014-03-21 21:47 Narcissu: ？
2014-03-21 21:48 Garven: 01:04:499 (4,1,2) -
2014-03-21 21:48 Garven: Whistle whistle whistle
2014-03-21 21:48 Garven: Not sure if you wanted three in a row
2014-03-21 21:48 Garven: Sounds strange compared to your patterns before
2014-03-21 21:48 Narcissu: o……
2014-03-21 21:49 Narcissu: but i think that sounds like a good idea
2014-03-21 21:49 Narcissu: ……
2014-03-21 21:49 Narcissu: maybe i should delete it？
2014-03-21 21:49 Garven: It just felt out of place
2014-03-21 21:49 Garven: If you used it in mor ethan one spot, I wouldn't care
2014-03-21 21:49 Garven: But that's the only one I noticed, so it felt odd
2014-03-21 21:51 Garven: 03:00:374 (1) - So I found you can scale this up by 1.4 and set the SV to 0.85x and it mostly fits
2014-03-21 21:52 Garven: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1440493
2014-03-21 21:52 Narcissu: i try change the
2014-03-21 21:52 Narcissu: slider
2014-03-21 21:52 Garven: Ends up bing about this large
2014-03-21 21:52 Garven: being*
2014-03-21 21:52 Garven: Probably the same scale/SV change with 03:06:374 (1) -
2014-03-21 21:52 Narcissu: √
2014-03-21 21:52 Narcissu: i will make a new heart slider
2014-03-21 21:54 Narcissu: your sliderb …… a butterfly…………(⊙o⊙)
2014-03-21 21:55 Garven: Haha, yeah
2014-03-21 21:55 Garven: 07:30:374 (1) - Trying to make the loops on this a little more rounded
2014-03-21 21:55 Garven: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1440499
2014-03-21 21:56 Narcissu: ok
2014-03-21 21:57 Garven: Offset sounds a little late to me too hrm
2014-03-21 21:57 Narcissu: offest ……
2014-03-21 21:57 Narcissu: How much should be
2014-03-21 21:58 Garven: Not sure...
2014-03-21 21:58 Garven: but you should raise OD +1 or 2
2014-03-21 21:58 Narcissu: ...
2014-03-21 21:58 Narcissu: ok
2014-03-21 22:01 Garven: Mm probably best to keep the offset where it is.
2014-03-21 22:01 Garven: I tried to fix it and made it worse haha
2014-03-21 22:01 Narcissu: 0....
2014-03-21 22:02 Garven: Anyway, that's about it.

Akabato wrote:

我去，加文你竟然勾搭成功了，我可是被拒过的啊～ 无论如何先恭喜（？

Sellenite wrote:

比一开始做得时候好了几百倍，我就尽量写些东东O.o
摸一摸啊摸一摸~

[Refrain]
00:02:436 (6) - 这里开始的flow不顺..我给你一个代码你看看好不好用，这个代码改了00:02:249-00:07:124的flow的位置，找到对于的坐标替换试试……但是不好看……1/1就不管flow啦

SPOILER

408,344,2249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,344,2436,2,0,P|408:312|416:284,1,60.000000298023,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,121,2999,2,0,P|424:172|352:204,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,3749,6,0,P|140:200|200:200,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,311,4499,2,0,P|325:280|290:232,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,36,5249,2,0,P|303:95|274:147,2,120.000000596046,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,52,6374,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,136,6749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,136,6936,2,0,P|19:171|28:206,1,60.000000298023,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:28:686 (4,5) - ctrl+g?……这里完全改了
00:34:311 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这个flow很不顺..但不知道怎么改好，用转圈flow？……我也不知道怎么改好……
00:39:374 (1) - blanket……哦
03:39:749 (1,2) - 两个各自ctrl+g？你好像是特意这样放的，但是flow不顺……1/1就不管了啦……不过我还是重新弄了
03:58:874 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这里我也给你一个code，五角星flow，你的很不顺……这只是换了个位置吧……需要用cobe吗orz……

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360,84,238874,2,0,L|391:58,2,40.000000198682
264,184,239249,1,4,0:0:0:0:
284,48,239436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,168,239624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,108,239811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,84,239999,1,4,0:0:0:0:

04:20:249 (6,7,1) - 没完全叠起来……额……

Yoeri wrote:

01:32:257 (6,7,1) - Again, stacking makes this look a bit weird. The sliderends don't stack, but (1) does. Try creating a 'fake' stack with the sliderends: http://puu.sh/6Sknp.jpg (lowered AR to show the entire stack)

05:07:874 (1) - 放在 176,244？……不……
07:13:686 (4,5,6) - 要么叠起来要么好像后面那样分开啦……辛辛苦苦弄个偏移又要改回去……
07:25:686 (4,5,1) - ^
07:43:686 (4,5,6) - ^
07:47:436 (7,8,9) - ^
07:49:686 (4,5,6) - ^
07:50:436 (7,8,9) - ^
08:24:374 (1) - 结尾用S:C3的finish好些？和每次kiai结束的时候都用这个……结尾那个finish是误操作，删了

感觉kiai部分的音效还能丰富些，说不清楚不要打我/w\……

先这么多..祝好运>w<……先这么多是什么意思……还有续集？

Frostmourne wrote:

@Garven are you going to do a recheck soon?
if not, I guess I can take place here

After I took a skim, this map may need -6 offset from the current (374 -> 368) and 04:34:874 (5,6,7,8) - spacing like this shouldn't be used. It's confusing.

The last thing bothering me is that if this song may need some another offsets.

ZZHBOY wrote:

之前说好的mod抱歉一直托了这么久不过现在好像没啥大问题了说些小建议吧.-.
00:08:243 (5,6) - 这里可以blanket美观wa
00:34:493 (3,4,5) - 这样感觉flow好些

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00:37:493 (4) - ctrl+g 感觉flow好些吧
01:04:493 (4) - ^
03:49:680 (4) - ^
04:50:993 (4) - ^
05:23:243 (6) - ^
02:36:368 (1,2) - 感觉可以修一下blanket完美一些
04:35:993 (9,1) - ^
06:13:493 (4,5) - 感觉可以把4的clap放到5的滑条头部更合曲吧.-.
后面更多有滑条尾在重音上然后nc美丽 但也可吧`_>`
美丽 曲和图都很喜欢啊 ❤

gw2010 wrote:

(´・ω・` )加油~~ 我和我的朋友们都希望你能早日RANK（Approved）~


===(* >ω<)

Narcissu wrote:

gw2010 wrote:

(´・ω・` )加油~~ 我和我的朋友们都希望你能早日RANK（Approved）~


===(* >ω<)

謝謝支持(>_<)


不過我快不行了惹，己經被約二十個Bat無視了呢。。真是傷心

Garven wrote:

I didn't forget! Just busy, sorry! it doesn't matter , i'm good at wait LOL

Just a few things:

03:58:868 (3) - The snapping is way off D: Fix that ......i use long slider exchanged it , but Jemmmmy and Yoeri said 03:59:407 (3,4,5,6) - is 239407 not 239430 ... it's right ?
04:21:743 (2) - ^ ......fixed
05:58:868 (3) - ^ ......fixed
06:47:618 (5,6,7) - Considering your general velocity, this was pretty tricky, and quite evil to put near the end of such a long track ..... www , it by my sister orz , but i can change it , slider now
06:52:868 (5,6) - This also was tricky since the spacing looks similar to the rest of the 1/1 rhythms ..... fixed
06:59:618 (4,5,6) - See, these ones read much much better than the others since you actually keep the distance snap.
I still think mapping the fadeout is cheesy, but whatever......it's mean i should use slider ? and i don't kown how to change some part like 07:34:868 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - , because someone said the sound in here , but it's confusion orz

Frostmourne wrote:

Things should be going well.. hopefully

no kd

BPM is actually 80, not 160. You can fix this and increase slider velocity x2 (1.4 => 2.8)
Don't forget to resnap notes carefully
04:46:868 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - snapped wrongly ， fixed，maybe...

Please fix bpm first and resnap things so that I can continue modding more efficiently (timeline will be correct)

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Frostmourne wrote:

It's ok~ I do believe both can work somehow and 160 is technically correct as well. I just personally think it feels wrong for this calm music. ……it's mean i can keep 160 ?, i don't mind to 80 , just believe book and confirm it …… i know 160 is higher than most calm music , but i get the 160BPM in book ..
Somehow I will pick only some necessary points before I'm going to bubble this as Garven allowed me to contribute it

02:00:743 (2) - swap finish here. I can't hear finish on the start of the slider but the end of slider sounds good (now it's doubled bass) …… it's mean i should delete finish and add finish in the end of slider ? i add finish in 02:00:930 - now ， but i add finish every second white lines ， can i keep it ?
02:03:743 (2) - ^ ……^
02:09:743 (2,3) - ^……^
02:23:243 (5) - add clap at the end of this slider (last hit) …… fixed
02:35:430 (8) - finish on? you can hear from the music…… fixed
04:23:243 (8) - new combo here is a nice idea for avoiding a consecutive newcombo…… ok ， but it's a lot of trouble because i use eight colors LOL
04:30:368 (1) - remove finish on the tail here and add on 04:30:930 (2) - instead…… i add finish on 04:30:930 (2) - .. but keep finish on the tail now …… just ……feel good …… i will delete it if you think it's wrong ……
04:33:368 (1) - remove finish on tail ……^

will check the rest tomorrow orz…… 喵~

Frostmourne wrote:

I would say I rely on the book says too and about the finish hitsound, your additional hitsounds are nice as they give more dynamic to the song as well so feel free to keep it~

"04:23:243 (8) - new combo here is a nice idea for avoiding a consecutive newcombo"
I'm sorry ._______. …… Don't mind ><
05:09:743 (2) - add clap at tail to follow drum …… ok ~
05:10:024 (3) - clap…… fixed ~
05:10:118 (4) - clap head…… fixed ~
The reason here is similar to what you added on 05:11:243 (7) - 's last point
05:35:243 (6,7,8) - similar ^ …… fixed
05:58:493 (x) - mind adding a note here? There is a little cymbal sound appears there and I personally feel adding a note here would maintain the stability in playing more than leaving it blank on a point that feels like a note is about to exist. …… ok √
07:23:805 (10,12) - add finish? I don't know if you have any logic in your hitsounding so sorry! if it's ruining your logic and leave it. I just point out from what I hear~ ……ok , i add finish and clap according to "oox- oox- " , but , maybe follow the music better , some part change too
08:11:805 (9) - finish? …… fixed
08:15:368 (8) - Try this rhythm? if you are going to add something following trumpet(the loudest sound at certain point), I think this rhythm can express it well without ruining the playing ability. Just make sure you adjust hitsounds after you are done this.……ok~
(finish only 1st and 3rd for 08:15:368 (8) - and clap on 08:16:118 (9) - )

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08:23:243 (1) - can you change to all clap for these 3 points instead? ……ok

Sorry for a delay, feel free to pm me after finished and I will bubble. …… thx you very much very more ::><:: …… wish you good health and happiness

Akabato wrote:

finally, i see the hope of ranking…… QvQ
大恩快出来改图啊，瞅这不容易的……233，超害羞的说

Frostmourne wrote:

Actually the ArtistUnicode could be in written in Japanese but I see nothing wrong with it. (Romanji still works)
Please add the artistunicode in Japanese if the next BAT tell you to do so. …… But I can't find her Japanese name orz
#1 Bubble

Good luck !

Sellenite wrote:

加油

你两个月走了我八个月的人生其实我是相当的羡慕嫉妒恨你知道么……

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Woohoo, grats on 1st bubble, Narcissu! >w<
Sorry for can't make mania diff for you!

don't mind it ，it was such a big job ……

Oracle wrote:

好评啊，赶紧再找俩去app

应该已经找完了……大概……Atrue是萌少女WW

Fycho wrote:

爱心大使加油~

喵嗷……话说我的外号已经决定了是爱心大使了么……

Atrue wrote:

[General]
Nice map~ Just some small suggestions.
Time flies since I first modded this map, Every thing changed a lot, including ourselves huh? ……这种青春偶像剧的感觉是怎么回事XD……
Other than that, I have to put some thing here. to remind you. S:C3 is not that comfortable to here at the beginning. But I know you are seeking for a feeling, so just let you no that. And the arcs of sliders can be controlled better imo. Feel free to contact me about the slider arc. Overall I think the map is ready so I'm here.……这……arc是什么意思，基本看不懂orz……额，是有很多人不喜欢S:C3那个滴滴答答的东西……但是我不会换的……除非你给我钱【喂

[Refrain]
Placement
00:17:243 (3) - As a matter of fact I don't think here the flow will be a big problem. But you can do better. The flow will be better if the slider is bit downward and extend it to a little left-downward will be better. And next note 1 needs to be put a bit upward. Just have a try. Just pick it out as a example, Not too serious but you can improve more imo. ……好长的解释啊可是我看不懂啊orz……反正我改了
00:55:868 (3,5,6) - I know maybe you set the stack not perfectly intentionally. But the 3 circles are all based on the piano and you may want to emphasize the feeling of hitting the same place. So just stack them completely to make the map more clear. (Considering the stack leniency, just put 3 a grid left-upward. :……额，这样的东西好像挺多的……
04:31:868 (5,7) - Same reason as above mentioned. Just stack completely, and would seem better here.……^
07:42:368 (1,3) - Stuffs like this I think is not perfect.. Symmetry is a good way to get the pattern look better. Just saying here, after all changing here is a pretty tough thing to do and the sliders here is just ok for me..……这一段是真的看不懂这这么改啊orz……

Hitsound
06:18:274 - You can consider adding volume here. I think the music is gradually increasing the volume here and 80% here for the small part here. Maybe to 06:21:649 - and back to 70%.……呃……还是只有50和70看上去舒服点……一开始的设置时有钢琴右手就70否则就50……不过后来又打算有鼓点的维持70……有加上有段时间是妹妹改图删了很多线……结果现在的感觉就是“虽然错落有致但是毫无逻辑”……然后就不管了（至少第一段钢琴独奏还是正常的XD）…我回去整個翻修一下。。剛剛在机房斷線地獄。。不知道今天能不能上傳…
NCs
02:13:868 - Ok here I think you have a clear way of NC. But here the music is really consequent and I'd prefer add NC here, and remove NC at 02:15:368 , then 02:17:055 - add NC. Give it a try and you will like it. All NCs are on the emphasis of the piano.
06:33:368 (1,2,3) - I think the 1/3 slider jumps can get an NC to emphasize here. To fix it, you can remove the NC on slider 1, and add NC on 2 instead.……如果能轻松改就好了……少女你好像为了避免一些图的note颜色坑爹无视了铺面自带的颜色……其实我用了8种颜色……暗的四种是我做的办法亮的四种是我妹妹做的，所以改动NC对我这个图其实……工作量挺大的……无脑的长白NC能完全避免这样的工作量，1/3线的地方改了

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From ingame pm request. Seems that I need to explain to you in Chinese.. 看来我还是翻译一下或者给你一点反馈

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Nice map~ Just some small suggestions.
Time flies since I first modded this map, Every thing changed a lot, including ourselves huh?
Other than that, I have to put some thing here. to remind you. S:C3 is not that comfortable to here at the beginning. But I know you are seeking for a feeling, so just let you know that. And the arcs of sliders can be controlled better imo. Feel free to contact me about the slider arc. Overall I think the map is ready so I'm here. 这里是说我觉得你的S:C3其实不是很合适，但是你有自己的感觉，我也只是在这里提醒你一下吧。。 另外滑条的弧度我认为控制的还是有一点问题。总体上我认为你的图是可以了。

[Refrain]
Placement
00:17:243 (3) - As a matter of fact I don't think here the flow will be a big problem. But you can do better. The flow will be better if the slider is bit downward and extend it to a little left-downward will be better. And next note 1 needs to be put a bit upward. Just have a try. Just pick it out as a example, Not too serious but you can improve more imo. Example:

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这里我的解释是这样的，说的是flow问题，虽然这里显然不是一个大问题，在这样的慢速段里面，但是你还是能够做得更好的，所以我给你提供了一个让flow稍微舒服一点的办法。
00:55:868 (3,5,6) - I know maybe you set the stack not perfectly intentionally. But the 3 circles are all based on the piano and you may want to emphasize the feeling of hitting the same place. So just stack them completely to make the map more clear. (Considering the stack leniency, just put 3 a grid left-upward. Example:

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40,44,55868,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,220,56243,2,0,P|39:187|33:152,1,70.000000298023
44,48,56618,1,2,0:0:0:0:
44,48,56993,1,0,0:0:0:0:

看你的回复好像看懂了，对的是这样的东西确实不少，但是我觉得这两个地方合曲的问题还是稍微改一改是可以的。当然你如果还是觉得自己有自己的想法这样也还行。考虑到stack leniency我让3稍微偏了一点，试过test，应该是可以的。
04:31:868 (5,7) - Same reason as above mentioned. Just stack completely, and would seem better here.
07:42:368 (1,3) - Stuffs like this I think is not perfect.. Symmetry is a good way to get the pattern look better. Just saying here, after all changing here is a pretty tough thing to do and the sliders here is just ok for me.. 嗯我这里是一个提示向的说法，像这个地方我认为明显是有更好的摆法的，只是在这里跟你说一下。这里明显对称会显得美观一些。

Hitsound
06:18:274 - You can consider adding volume here. I think the music is gradually increasing the volume here and 80% here for the small part here. Maybe to 06:21:649 - and back to 70%.结合你的回复我觉得我的思路是着眼在对于音乐的把握上，但是你的回复我读的云里雾里的。。嘛，你如果十分坚持想要那样弄的话那就按照你的思路来好了。。（我觉得其实不妥，音效上的问题为什么是“看着舒服”。。下次的图希望你能够给出一个更加合理的答案，不一定是给我的答案，是给你自己的答案）
NCs
02:13:868 - Ok here I think you have a clear way of NC. But here the music is really consequent and I'd prefer add NC here, and remove NC at 02:15:368 , then 02:17:055 - add NC. Give it a try and you will like it. All NCs are on the emphasis of the piano.
06:33:368 (1,2,3) - I think the 1/3 slider jumps can get an NC to emphasize here. To fix it, you can remove the NC on slider 1, and add NC on 2 instead.关于NC的话既然你这么说我就不强求了，虽然我感觉作图要贴合音乐为主，至于作者，合作人，对于图实际的主观影响，应该是要小于，或者远小于音乐的。这里也请好好考虑一下。

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. . Call me back for a recheck when you finish checking my mods.