well, this part is needed to fix imo 02:32:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

I'm a little confused with your collab, so i can't make my mod divided to who's mapping what, sorry

cirnocon wrote:

Hi Dennis~
Sweet love
Is it completed or WIP? Too bad if it is uncomplete.
Normal Love
00:33:270 (7,1) - You can make the slider shape properly (done)
04:09:986 (1) - you can adjust the spinner volume (done)
Tough Love
00:18:941 (2) - you can adjust the slider shape so it fits the previous slider (don't know what you mean, so not done)
01:26:777 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - i would like to know that these note is with which type of the music? Vocal or instrmental?
(I am considering whether to change it or not~ It's by my friend mike6649 and he says that this place should have a stream... I'll change it if one more modder suggests it)
04:12:673 (1) - adjust the spinner volume. (done)
Anyway the beatmap design of the Tough love diff is quite good especially heart shape circle.
Good luck~.

• 

  1. Who can fix it?

  1. The BG size is not 1024x768 or 1366x768 pixel

  1. Remove the "cute" from tags. I didn't found something cute on this map
  [Easy]
  00:06:852 (2) - please fix the blanket
  00:10:882 (5) - ^
  00:41:330 (2) - Stack at 00:38:643 (3) (Slider head)
  00:55:658 (2,3) - This sliders bit worse and different. Try this :
  
  Image

  
  01:00:136 (3,4) - Spacing
  01:14:464 (1) - It's kinda ugly for me. please Change it into Wave slider
  01:22:971 (2,3) - Overlap
  
  [Normal]
  00:01:031 - 01:12:673 NO HITSOUND ANY YET?
  
  00:05:956 (5) - NC
  00:08:195 (10) - ^
  00:08:419 (1) - Remove NC
  00:08:867 (4) - Ugly slider. then you make this :
  
  Image

  
  00:11:777 (1) - finish
  00:49:389 (3,4,5) - You can do this. It's more beautiful
  01:14:240 - The kiai time start in 01:14:464 not 01:14:240.
  01:14:464 (1) - finish (slider head)
  01:20:733 (7) - NC
  01:23:867 (5) - ^
  01:26:106 (5) - ^
  01:27:001 (8) - ^
  01:44:688 (5) - ^
  01:46:479 (1) -
  
  can you remap this slider? for remove that two reds.
  01:51:740 (4) - The object is in the blue. Move it into red ( 1/2 )
  02:02:822 (6) - NC
  02:16:927 (5) - ^
  02:21:180 (6) - ^
  02:22:076 (8) - Where is the rhythm you follow? D:
  02:28:121 (2) - Bad overlap D:
  02:32:822 (5) - NC
  02:46:255 (6) - ^
  03:27:001 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why you put jumps here D:
  03:32:374 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
  03:32:374 (6) - NC
  
  ._. only that
  Good luck :3

Groumiezi wrote:

[General]

• 

  1. Who can fix it?

  This does not really need to be fixed because I use all my mp3 except on the sweet love diff
  

  1. The BG size is not 1024x768 or 1366x768 pixel

  Done
  

  1. Remove the "cute" from tags. I didn't found something cute on this map

  Done
  Blue is for done and red for not done
  
  [Easy]
  00:06:852 (2) - please fix the blanket
  00:10:882 (5) - ^
  00:41:330 (2) - Stack at 00:38:643 (3) (Slider head)
  00:55:658 (2,3) - This sliders bit worse and different. Try this :
  
  Image

  
  01:00:136 (3,4) - Spacing
  01:14:464 (1) - It's kinda ugly for me. please Change it into Wave slider
  01:22:971 (2,3) - Overlap changed all for easy
  
  [Normal]
  00:01:031 - 01:12:673 NO HITSOUND ANY YET?
  tried to change this but my weakest point is hitsounds~ can't really improve~~
  
  00:05:956 (5) - NC
  00:08:195 (10) - ^
  00:08:419 (1) - Remove NC
  00:08:867 (4) - Ugly slider. then you make this :
  
  Image

  
  00:11:777 (1) - finish
  00:49:389 (3,4,5) - You can do this. It's more beautiful
  01:14:240 - The kiai time start in 01:14:464 not 01:14:240.
  01:14:464 (1) - finish (slider head)
  01:20:733 (7) - NC
  01:23:867 (5) - ^
  01:26:106 (5) - ^
  01:27:001 (8) - ^
  01:44:688 (5) - ^
  01:46:479 (1) -
  
  can you remap this slider? for remove that two reds.
  01:51:740 (4) - The object is in the blue. Move it into red ( 1/2 )
  02:02:822 (6) - NC
  02:16:927 (5) - ^
  02:21:180 (6) - ^
  02:22:076 (8) - Where is the rhythm you follow? D:
  02:28:121 (2) - Bad overlap D:
  02:32:822 (5) - NC
  02:46:255 (6) - ^
  
  
  03:27:001 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why you put jumps here D:
  03:32:374 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
  03:32:374 (6) - NC
  I think my jumps are perfectly fine. It's just that I want to add something harder during kiai time and the jumps looked pretty good~
  
  ._. only that
  Good luck :3

• 00:56:553 (3,4) - remove that it overlaps lightly
  00:58:792 (2) - reduce some curve. it looks ugly ;w;
  00:58:344 (1,3) - overlap. maybe it is look like better :3
  01:08:195 (4,5,6) - distance seems strange
  01:16:255 (2,3,4) - ^
  01:19:837 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  
  [Normal Love]
  
  • 00:05:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - what do you think about this placement?
    

    SPOILER

    

    00:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - distance
    00:33:270 (7) - move the second little square to (191,168) and move the square on tail to (289,247) for better blanket
    00:35:061 (1) - if you follow the above, move the square on tail to (256,320)
    00:38:419 (4,5) - overlap. it is look like better.
    00:45:583 (4) - NC
    00:50:733 - add circle
    01:01:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove some circle and use some slider. it is hard ;w;
    01:19:837 (4) - NC
    01:20:733 (1) - remove NC
    01:24:315 (7) - end on 01:24:762. maybe this rhythm is better~
    02:01:479 (3,4) - too close
    02:04:837 (2) - reduce some curve. it looks ugly D:
    02:07:076 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - use some slider
    02:15:807 (4) - this slider should start on 02:15:583 and end on 02:16:703 for follow the vocal
    02:25:658 (5,1) - set to parallel
    02:29:688 (5,6) - too close. it is too confuse ;w;
    02:33:718 (5,1) - overlap
    02:38:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - resetting distance. too confuse..
    02:46:255 (1,2) - distance
    02:47:150 (4,5) - ^
    02:50:956 (5) - NC
    03:46:703 (6) - remove this circle and 03:46:815 (1) - start on 03:46:70
    03:53:419 (5) - NC
    03:57:001 (6) - NC
    03:57:897 (8,9) - distance
    04:02:822 (1) ~ 04:05:956 (12) - use some slider
    
    [Tough Love]
    
    • 00:04:613 (3,5) - make same shape
      00:18:718 (1,2) - try another pattern. maybe many players feel confuse ;w;
      00:26:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make same shape
      00:28:792 (9) - end on 00:29:240
      00:38:419 (5,6,7) - move to (80,160).
      00:50:061 (9,1) - overlap
      00:53:195 (7,8) - make same shape. it is ugly.
      01:20:733 - add circle
      01:26:777 (5) - NC
      01:59:688 (9) - move to (384,32) for symmetry of (7)
      02:00:135 (10,4) - overlap
      02:05:061 (3) - ohhhhh, it is pretty! :3
      02:07:299 (9,10,11) - distance
      02:09:986 (6,8) - make same shape
      02:22:971 (12,1) - too close
      02:24:762 (1) - this slider start on 02:24:986 for follow the vocal
      03:04:389 (3,4) - too close
      03:08:419 (2) - place elsewhere. it is confuse with 03:07:300 (4)

[ Raphael ] wrote:

Hi~! from my queue!

[Sweet Love]

• 00:56:553 (3,4) - remove that it overlaps lightly
  00:58:792 (2) - reduce some curve. it looks ugly ;w;
  00:58:344 (1,3) - overlap. maybe it is look like better :3
  01:08:195 (4,5,6) - distance seems strange
  01:16:255 (2,3,4) - ^
  01:19:837 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  
  [Normal Love]
  
  • 00:05:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - what do you think about this placement?
    

    SPOILER

    

    00:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - distance
    00:33:270 (7) - move the second little square to (191,168) and move the square on tail to (289,247) for better blanket
    00:35:061 (1) - if you follow the above, move the square on tail to (256,320)
    00:38:419 (4,5) - overlap. it is look like better.
    00:45:583 (4) - NC
    00:50:733 - add circle
    01:01:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove some circle and use some slider. it is hard ;w;
    01:19:837 (4) - NC
    01:20:733 (1) - remove NC
    01:24:315 (7) - end on 01:24:762. maybe this rhythm is better~
    02:01:479 (3,4) - too close
    02:04:837 (2) - reduce some curve. it looks ugly D:
    02:07:076 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - use some slider
    02:15:807 (4) - this slider should start on 02:15:583 and end on 02:16:703 for follow the vocal
    02:25:658 (5,1) - set to parallel
    02:29:688 (5,6) - too close. it is too confuse ;w;
    02:33:718 (5,1) - overlap
    02:38:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - resetting distance. too confuse..
    02:46:255 (1,2) - distance
    02:47:150 (4,5) - ^
    02:50:956 (5) - NC
    03:46:703 (6) - remove this circle and 03:46:815 (1) - start on 03:46:70
    03:53:419 (5) - NC
    03:57:001 (6) - NC
    03:57:897 (8,9) - distance
    04:02:822 (1) ~ 04:05:956 (12) - use some slider
    Didn't do this because I was trying to put a heart pattern here~
    
    [Tough Love]
    
    • 00:04:613 (3,5) - make same shape
      00:18:718 (1,2) - try another pattern. maybe many players feel confuse ;w;
      tried to do this, but I think I like the original one better~~
      00:26:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make same shape
      Sorry~ don't know what you mean
      00:28:792 (9) - end on 00:29:240
      00:38:419 (5,6,7) - move to (80,160).
      00:50:061 (9,1) - overlap
      00:53:195 (7,8) - make same shape. it is ugly.
      01:20:733 - add circle
      01:26:777 (5) - NC
      01:59:688 (9) - move to (384,32) for symmetry of (7)
      02:00:135 (10,4) - overlap
      02:05:061 (3) - ohhhhh, it is pretty! :3 Thanks
      02:07:299 (9,10,11) - distance
      02:09:986 (6,8) - make same shape
      Sorry, don't know what you mean~
      02:22:971 (12,1) - too close
      02:24:762 (1) - this slider start on 02:24:986 for follow the vocal
      03:04:389 (3,4) - too close
      03:08:419 (2) - place elsewhere. it is confuse with 03:07:300 (4)

Sanbyoururu wrote:

This is my first mod ever, I hope I can help you a bit. :3


Sweet Love:

Why is this only 90 secs? I understand hard diffs seem more fun to you, but you should also think of the people who want to play easy maps. I don't like how the other diffs are full length while this one isn't.
( I think if I had mapped the whole thing, it would be too long for newbies~~ 4 minutes is for approved not for newbies usually~~)

00:08:195 (1,2,3,4) - Is there a certain reason to increase the DS here and go back to 0,6 on 00:10:882 (5) ? I don't think there's any emphasis on there. It's an easy difficulty anyway, so you should be very careful with changing DS. (changed)
00:56:553 (3) - While ^ might still be appropriate, I think this one is over the top. There's no emphasis at all, and jumps really shouldn't be a thing in an easy diff. (modders recommended this. changed)
00:56:553 (3,4) - Also, try to improve the blanketing here, it looks a bit weird. (changed)
01:12:673 (1,1,1,1) - I can see why you would want to increase the DS here, but this ist just too much for an easy diff. Stick to your usual DS or at least put them a bit closer together. (changed from 1.1 DS to 0.9 DS)
01:18:046 (1,2) - Why are these overlapping? Doesn't look good. Just stick to your 0,6 DS. o.o (changed)
01:21:180 (6,1,2) - ^ (Not exactly overlapping, but you might want to at least get a minimum of space between the notes) (changed)



Normal Love:

I don't really get your DS, to be honest. You start at 0,7 I think, but later on it's often at 0,8 or 1,0 or even 1,4 without apparent reasons... All in all, I don't think this is a good idea to have in a normal map. xp (tried to change)
Overall: I think this is pretty difficult for a normal map. Remember this is actually the only difficulty between easy and hard, so you might want to keep it simple.
Maybe you could go a bit easier with the red ticks?
Also, I'd prefer decreasing the SV and increasing the DS instead. There's a notable difference between how fast you have to move from circle to circle/on sliders, which isn't always easy to handle. (no, sorry~ I think maps with high SV are cool)


00:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Example of ^ . Maybe a slider in there could help. (fixed)
00:38:419 (4,5) - Looks kinda ugly... Seeing how this is the only time in the whole song you use this pattern, I think you could just drop it and only put a circle instead of a slider. (fixed)
00:42:225 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3 + 4 + 5 would make a great curved slider imo. (fixed)
01:19:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I find this too cramped and not nice to look at. Increasing the DS (while decreasing the SV) could help, or you could just rearrange it,

kinda like

or something. (fixed)
02:20:956 (1,2) - Blue lines in normal? Personally, I think thats too difficult, save hat stuff for hard diffs. You could turn it into a slider. (this was originally a tough (hard diff) before a modder said it was too easy and wanted me to change the name of this diff to normal. So there's still some hard stuff left) (changed)
02:26:106 (1,2,3,4,1) - Again, I find these jumps too hard for normal. If you really insist on increasing the spacing there, at least make it a bit easier. (sorry, keeping this. having jumps here is fun)
02:32:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here, pretty tough for normal. Decrease DS, maybe putting a slider in there would also help. (fixed)
02:36:404 (4,1) - I don't understand this jump at all. .- . (fixed)
02:38:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, too tough for normal imo. (fixed)
02:50:061 (3,4) - Another jump I don't get. (simply a pattern. wasn't meant to be a jump)(fixed)
03:27:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No, this is simply too hard for normal, especially after that pause. Actually, there's no need to put any jumps at all, but if you insist, at least make them smaller and arrange them like you did here: 03:32:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) . (fixed)
03:35:844 (5) - Again, blue ticks? Nah... (kept, sorry, this is in kiai time so I think a little harder notes are ok)
03:37:636 (2) - ^ (^ same )
03:38:643 (5,6,7,8,9) - Too tough, no emphasis. Decrease DS. (fixed)
03:45:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (didn't fix)
03:55:210 (4) - Move to 382|272 for better blanketing. (done)
04:03:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Ugh, how about some sliders in there? (okay)



Tough Love:

00:18:718 (1,2) - Avoid that overlap, also the blanketing didn't turn out so well. (I think this is nice~~)
01:07:076 (8) - Maybe make the curve a little gentler so the end doesn't overlap with the slider body? It looks pretty ugly imo. D:
03:07:300 (4) - ^ , more like 03:34:837 (4) .
01:55:658 (9) -

Do it like this

to get that nice teardrop-shaped hole in the middle. (fixed)
02:26:106 - Not sure if that weird shape is intentional, but why not make it a perfect circle? Would look and feel a lot smoother. (intentional, sorry, the DS increases bit by bit here~~)
02:29:464 (5,6,7) - If these are supposed to be part of a heart, I think you might want to move them to the left a bit. Otherwise, it's shape is pretty weird. :'3 (no, not a heart~)
02:42:225 (1) - Uh, this looks kinda deformed. You might want to make it wider and less high to get a smoother heart shape. :3 (fixed)



Uh, that's it for my first mod I guess. Tough Love was pretty fun while Normal Love still needs some tuning imo. Also, as I said, I really think you shouldn't just cut corners with that easy diff like that. xp

I hope I could get everything across, but if there are questions, just PN me. :3
Good luck!

1. BG is invisible without video (maybe, do you change the filename of BG?)
2. BG file should be not png but jpg
3. video: aspect ratio is not correct. I recommend to fix it
4. the following is necessary for tags?
   hatsune miku
   append
5. how about adding "Suzunosuke" for tags?
6. I suggest to remove Letterbox in breaks
7. Kiai time suggetion:
   01:14:464~01:28:121- end at 01:28:792
   02:28:344~03:01:031- start at 02:27:897 and end at 02:42:225
   03:26:553~03:42:897- remove
   03:44:464~03:48:494- remove
   03:48:494~04:09:538- add
8. preview point suggetion: 01:14:464

1. I suggest to decrease SV and increase DS. by doing this, you can avoid several overlaps
2. you should do mapping until the end of song
3. 01:09:091 (6,1) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
4. 01:14:016 (1,1) - avoid overlap

1. I suggest to increase DS to 1.0x. by doing this, you can avoid several overlaps and do mapping more clearly
2. 00:33:270 (7,1) - swap NC
3. 00:46:703 (5) - I prefer slider: 00:46:703~00:47:150
4. 01:04:389 (7) - ^: 01:04:389~01:05:061
5. 01:12:673 (1,2,3) - this overlap is not good
6. 01:20:733 (4) - decrease 1 reverse
7. 02:18:494- add a note
8. 02:21:404 (7) - NC
9. 02:30:583 (7) - end at 02:31:031
10. 02:48:270- add a note
11. 02:48:494 (7) - slider: 02:48:494~02:48:941
12. 02:51:852 (9) - end at 02:52:300
13. 02:55:434 (6) - I prefer to delete
14. 02:56:553 (1) - end at 03:00:136
15. 03:00:583~03:27:001- too long break time
16. 03:41:330 (1) - don't suit to music
17. 04:01:031 (6,7,8) - avoid overlap

1. it is better to add "collab" in diff-name

1. 00:00:136~00:07:747- increase hitsound volume more
2. 00:06:404 (7) - NC
3. 00:13:121 (5,8) - avoid overlap
4. 00:18:718 (1,2) - very hard to distinguish. you sould remap while avioding overlap
5. 01:16:255 (3,4) - avoid overlap
6. 01:24:762- add a note
7. 01:28:009 (1) - end at 01:28:792

1. 00:40:882 (4,5,6,7,8) - it is better to conform DS
2. 00:52:524- add a note
3. 00:54:091 (9,11) - I prefer Ctrl+G
4. 01:55:658 (9) - you can make more symmetrically
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   424,316,115658,2,0,B|368:296|344:284|288:208|380:132|472:208|416:284|396:296|

5. 02:28:344 (3,4) - avoid overlap
6. 02:37:524 (9,10) - ^
7. 02:49:389 (1) - end at 02:50:733
8. 03:30:583 (3,4) - avoid overlap
9. 03:48:606~04:09:538 In this part, I prefer normal-hitsound
10. 03:56:330 (4,6,7) - avoid overlap

1. 03:07:300 (4) - it is better to increase edge's angle
2. 03:09:091 (5,6) - make symmetrically with 03:08:643 (3,4) -
3. 03:12:673- add a note

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. BG is invisible without video (maybe, do you change the filename of BG?)
   BG file should be not png but jpg
   I don't know how to change, sorry
2. video: aspect ratio is not correct. I recommend to fix it
3. the following is necessary for tags?
   hatsune miku
   append
4. how about adding "Suzunosuke" for tags?
5. I suggest to remove Letterbox in breaks
   Kiai time suggetion:
   01:14:464~01:28:121- end at 01:28:792
   02:28:344~03:01:031- start at 02:27:897 and end at 02:42:225
   03:26:553~03:42:897- remove
   03:44:464~03:48:494- remove
   03:48:494~04:09:538- add
   Didn't do this, because I think the last part of this song is the recap, which is a little more soft, and also my kiai times are the parts which the singer sounds most urgent
6. preview point suggetion: 01:14:464

[Sweet Love]

1. I suggest to decrease SV and increase DS. by doing this, you can avoid several overlaps
2. you should do mapping until the end of song
3. 01:09:091 (6,1) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
4. 01:14:016 (1,1) - avoid overlap

[Normal Love]

1. I suggest to increase DS to 1.0x. by doing this, you can avoid several overlaps and do mapping more clearly
2. 00:33:270 (7,1) - swap NC
3. 00:46:703 (5) - I prefer slider: 00:46:703~00:47:150
4. 01:04:389 (7) - ^: 01:04:389~01:05:061
5. 01:12:673 (1,2,3) - this overlap is not good
6. 01:20:733 (4) - decrease 1 reverse
7. 02:18:494- add a note
8. 02:21:404 (7) - NC
9. 02:30:583 (7) - end at 02:31:031
10. 02:48:270- add a note
11. 02:48:494 (7) - slider: 02:48:494~02:48:941
12. 02:51:852 (9) - end at 02:52:300
13. 02:55:434 (6) - I prefer to delete
14. 02:56:553 (1) - end at 03:00:136
    03:00:583~03:27:001- too long break time
    I only map vocal parts in normal~
15. 03:41:330 (1) - don't suit to music
16. 04:01:031 (6,7,8) - avoid overlap

[Tough Love]
it is better to add "collab" in diff-name
Didn't do as collab love sounds bad
mike6649

1. 00:00:136~00:07:747- increase hitsound volume more
2. 00:06:404 (7) - NC
3. 00:13:121 (5,8) - avoid overlap
4. 00:18:718 (1,2) - very hard to distinguish. you sould remap while avioding overlap
5. 01:16:255 (3,4) - avoid overlap
6. 01:24:762- add a note
7. 01:28:009 (1) - end at 01:28:792

dennischan(?)

1. 00:40:882 (4,5,6,7,8) - it is better to conform DS
2. 00:52:524- add a note
3. 00:54:091 (9,11) - I prefer Ctrl+G
4. 01:55:658 (9) - you can make more symmetrically
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   424,316,115658,2,0,B|368:296|344:284|288:208|380:132|472:208|416:284|396:296|

5. 02:28:344 (3,4) - avoid overlap
6. 02:37:524 (9,10) - ^
7. 02:49:389 (1) - end at 02:50:733
8. 03:30:583 (3,4) - avoid overlap
9. 03:48:606~04:09:538 In this part, I prefer normal-hitsound
10. 03:56:330 (4,6,7) - avoid overlap

irvinchan

1. 03:07:300 (4) - it is better to increase edge's angle
2. 03:09:091 (5,6) - make symmetrically with 03:08:643 (3,4) -
3. 03:12:673- add a note

if you have any question about my modding, feel free to send me PM
~Good Luck~

[Tough Love]
This Diff is much better than the other diffs! A good diff!
1. 01:12:673 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Using finish and clap on each first note of a combo is better, I think. done

2. 01:43:568 (3) - I think it should end at 01:44:016 instead of 01:43:904
3. 01:45:807 (9) - same as above.
4. 01:47:150 (3) - same as above.
(I guess these slider length problem result from the adjustment you did about slider velocity. So plz recheck all the sliders after changing slider velocity.)
5. 01:48:270 (4,7) - same as above. (类似问题不再阐述。)


6. 02:39:315 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hard to read（not a good flow I think.）This is called irregular flow, and it makes the map more interesting and fun
7. 03:30:583 (3,4) - not a good shape? Try to move them further away from each other.done

• 
  [General]

1. Stack Leniency最好维持0.7 没有特殊原因的话
2. Romanised Artist中Hitoshizuku和P的空格去掉 "HitoshizukuP"
3. 按现在的rule，ez和hd的难度名都不适合，可以改成"Easy Love"和"Hard Love"
   
   [Sweet Love]
4. 00:08:195 (1,2) - 节奏略怪 我建议改成1/2
5. 00:43:568 这里后面的音效部分音量调大 然后clap加多点
6. 这没做完....?
7. 整体就是音效加的太少了
   
   [Normal Love]
8. 00:44:016 (2) - (308,64)和(348,64)的两个描点没有必要
9. 整体节奏下的有点奇怪..在副歌部分应该塞的满一点..用大量的自创节奏是哪般
   
   [Tough Love]
10. 00:11:777 (3) - 这个滑条带过太多音了，拆开
    
    纵观整体来看
    最大的问题是排列，排列下的十分没有整体性和布局感，使得看起来就像随便乱放的物件一样
    然后是节奏问题，节奏下的也略过单调，几乎跟的都是vocal，然后有时候vocal也没跟完...
    音效你没下多少啊似乎...

Awaken wrote:

Mod From my queue

• 
  [General]

1. Stack Leniency最好维持0.7 没有特殊原因的话 I changed it~~
2. Romanised Artist中Hitoshizuku和P的空格去掉 "HitoshizukuP" OK
3. 按现在的rule，ez和hd的难度名都不适合，可以改成"Easy Love"和"Hard Love" I remember that the rule stated that the diff names needed to be intuitive, easy to understand, but it is not necessary to change all diff names into easy,normal hard...SO I think that my current diff names are ok
   
   [Sweet Love]
4. 00:08:195 (1,2) - 节奏略怪 我建议改成1/2 changed
5. 00:43:568 这里后面的音效部分音量调大 然后clap加多点 改了
6. 这没做完....? 做完了...
7. 整体就是音效加的太少了改了
   
   [Normal Love]
8. 00:44:016 (2) - (308,64)和(348,64)的两个描点没有必要 did that
9. 整体节奏下的有点奇怪..在副歌部分应该塞的满一点..用大量的自创节奏是哪般
   
   [Tough Love]
10. 00:11:777 (3) - 这个滑条带过太多音了，拆开 changed
    
    纵观整体来看
    最大的问题是排列，排列下的十分没有整体性和布局感，使得看起来就像随便乱放的物件一样
    然后是节奏问题，节奏下的也略过单调，几乎跟的都是vocal，然后有时候vocal也没跟完...
    音效你没下多少啊似乎...

That's all
Good Luck

Feverie wrote:

[Sweet Love]

01:12:673 (1,1,1,1) - You may not want these all the be a new combo. It might become confusing for some people. (not really confusing...)

Gl with the rest of this Map

[Normal Love]

00:44:016 (2) - Slider Looks Ugly, consider changing (I think this looks nice)
00:59:240 (4) - Same again (changed)
01:21:628 (1) - Slider Start too late. Move the begging to forward and keep the end in the same place! (changed)

Good Luck!

neonat wrote:

General

You have to change your difficulty names such that they can indicate the level of difficulty it is. Change Sweet and Tough so that they indicate Easy and Hard respectively. done

Sweet Love

00:08:195 (1) - a repeat slider with 2 repeats is unexpected and tough for this easy difficulty, change it such that it repeats once at 00:08:643 and ends at 00:09:091 done
00:52:971 (3) - split this into 2 1/1 beat sliders done
01:12:673 (1,1,1,1) - use 1 combo only done
01:29:240 onwards - still not mapped? It is finished. I don't intend to map the rest of it as this diff is for novices. It will be hard for novices to play such a long diff.
The use of the finish hitsound is weird as well, it's always 2 beats before the end of a verse Sorry, I'm too noob

Normal Love

00:02:374 (5) - whistle on end of slider
00:10:882 (6) - remove clap on end of slider
00:46:703 (5) - remove clap at start of slider, put clap on end of slider
00:57:449 (9) - end the slider at 00:57:897I changed this slider to a repeat slider
01:01:927 (2) - end slider at 01:02:262
01:04:389 (6) - end slider at 01:05:061
01:08:195 (6) - remove, instead, add a slider from 01:07:971 to 01:08:419
01:57:897 (3) - clap on start of slider
01:58:792 (5) - clap
01:59:688 (7) - clap on start of slider
02:00:136 (8) - clap on end of slider
02:01:479 (3) - clap
02:01:927 (4) - clap on end of slider
02:03:270 (2) - clap
02:04:165 (4) - ^
02:04:837 (2) - clap on end of slider
02:05:956 (4) - clap
02:06:628 (3) - clap on end of slider
02:07:524 (6) - ^
02:08:643 (2) - clap on start of slider
02:09:538 (4) - clap
02:09:986 (6) - clap on end of slider
02:26:106 (1,1,1,1) - do not combo spam here
Placements look quite ugly though, you should look through the design again
All done. I did everything you suggested, except the parts with red comments
Tough Love

00:07:747 - 00:14:912 - where are the claps? All the hitsounds are missing
00:14:912 - 00:29:688 - ^
00:43:568 - 00:58:344 - ^
00:52:971 (8) - new combo
01:57:113 - 02:11:777 - Hitsounds?
02:24:762 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - do not spam new combo
02:27:897 - 02:42:225 - Hitsounds?!
03:09:538 (7) - new combo
03:12:673 (8) - ^
03:48:606 - 04:09:650 - Hitsounds?!?!
This doesn't mean you can leave the soft parts without hitsounds. You need to put the hitsounds
Tried to do it, put not sure if the end result is good
Keep working to improve this and make it nicer and better.

1. 00:09:538 (2) - blanket properly.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:777 (1,3) - remove clap on both slider, sounds bad because inconsistent. add here 00:13:121 (2) instead.
3. 01:09:090 (2) - make this a repeat slider? or add a note 01:10:433 ?
4. 01:12:673 (1,2,3,4,1) - not sure with this DS. but I think it's ok. try to ask BAT about this.

1. 00:08:867 (4) - remove clap here. add here 00:09:538 (1) instead (slider head).
2. 00:52:524 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you used too much finish on this part. I don't hear any cymbal on this part btw. this kind of hitsound is not really good. looks very random.
3. 01:09:762 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this.
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:12:673 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - no for this. keep your DS, don't use 1.30x. your combo too, use 1 combo here and your usage of finish. don't add finish hitsound randomly.
5. 01:14:464 (1) - remove clap on 2nd and 4th white tick.
6. 01:22:971 (2) - not sure about this. players tend to hit the closest note. your notes too close here. I don't know if this is acceptable or not.
7. 02:26:106 (1,2,3,4) - uh....well, this is too hard for normal diff.
8. 02:42:336 (1) - remove clap pls
9. 03:30:471 (3) - waa...you should start this on red tick.
10. 03:44:688 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - pls change this. this is normal diff you know. you don't have to add jump this hard.

1. 00:38:195 (5) - move to x320 y248
2. 02:24:762 (1) - the rhythm here doesn't sounds good in my opinion.
3. 03:09:538 (1,2) - ctrl + g
4. 03:10:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - try to change some circle into a slider because this part is very hard to read.
5. 03:26:777 - 03:42:896 remove kiai time here? this is calm part of the song so kiai time does not fit with this part. and I suggest you to use soft hitsound on this part. use whitsle instead of clap.
6. 04:10:882 (5) - change this into 2 slider?

raheta_adi wrote:

hi dennischan, from mod queue.

[Easy]

1. 00:09:538 (2) - blanket properly.
   SPOILER

   
   done
2. 00:11:777 (1,3) - remove clap on both slider, sounds bad because inconsistent. add here 00:13:121 (2) instead.done
3. 01:09:090 (2) - make this a repeat slider? or add a note 01:10:433 done
4. 01:12:673 (1,2,3,4,1) - not sure with this DS. but I think it's ok. try to ask BAT about this.

I don't think there's a problem
some words from me. I really think you should map the rest of the song or at least map half of the full song. there are newbie who wants to play easy diff with a longer duration you know. it may be boring for you but not for those who can't play hard difficulty yet. well it's up to you in the end.

I noticed that your usage of finish hitsound too much on some part, I don't think that is good.
[Normal]

1. 00:08:867 (4) - remove clap here. add here 00:09:538 (1) instead (slider head). I don't have a clap here?
   
2. 00:52:524 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you used too much finish on this part. I don't hear any cymbal on this part btw. this kind of hitsound is not really good. looks very random.done
3. 01:09:762 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this.
   SPOILER

   
   This part has been remapped
4. 01:12:673 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - no for this. keep your DS, don't use 1.30x. your combo too, use 1 combo here and your usage of finish. don't add finish hitsound randomly.I think this is nice. Those notes are important in the vocals and thus need to be made stronger
5. 01:14:464 (1) - remove clap on 2nd and 4th white tick.done
6. 01:22:971 (2) - not sure about this. players tend to hit the closest note. your notes too close here. I don't know if this is acceptable or not.This part has been remapped
7. 02:26:106 (1,2,3,4) - uh....well, this is too hard for normal diff.not really
8. 02:42:336 (1) - remove clap plsremoved
9. 03:30:471 (3) - waa...you should start this on red tick. done
10. 03:44:688 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - pls change this. this is normal diff you know. you don't have to add jump this hard. This is the strongest part of the song!!

okay, here's my conclusion. this map looks like hard diff than a normal one. what you should fix first is your DS because it's too inconsistent for a normal diff. then review your hitsounds, you place many hitsound randomly so it makes the map sounds bad. try to add clap on 2nd and 4th (long white tick). the ryhthm is uh....too hard I think. you really need much more works on this diff.
[Collab]

1. 00:38:195 (5) - move to x320 y248 This part has been remapped
2. 02:24:762 (1) - the rhythm here doesn't sounds good in my opinion.This is here for symmetry
3. 03:09:538 (1,2) - ctrl + g done
4. 03:10:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - try to change some circle into a slider because this part is very hard to read. ok
5. 03:26:777 - 03:42:896 remove kiai time here? this is calm part of the song so kiai time does not fit with this part. and I suggest you to use soft hitsound on this part. use whitsle instead of clap.The story is the most engaging at this time
6. 04:10:882 (5) - change this into 2 slider?

the ryhthm is fine I suppose but your placement and pattern is not really good. some looks random and some doesn't fit with the song. just like 02:23:195 (1) and please review your hitsound.
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so that's it.

my conclusion is you map needs much more works because yeah.....I already mention it above. your difficulty spread is kinda bad because from easy to normal there is a huge gap.

good luck with this map!