Ok, before I'll mod this, check the following things:
- There are two very small (similar) sections where the timing is obviously off. It's not doable with a single extra timing section though, that's why I can't do it to be 100% sure. That's why you should ask an experienced timing-checker like Charles445 now, before you collect mods for your map, because as soon as you got a bubble and the timing is still slightly wrong, it will be popped :b
The timing is off in these sections:
00:01:256 to 00:08:113
05:16:710 to 05:21:853
Also, the section at 05:21:978 clearly needs more BPM. You can hear it, when you listen to the song at 25% speed. I'd take 56 BPM for now, it sounds better.
As I said, you should contact someone to check the whole timing of your map, but specifically these sections above. - Fix obvious spacing errors. Since this is for approval, spacing differences are okay in theory. But it looks much more clean and better if you fix them, especially since a clean and tidy aesthetic would fit your style very much
- Also, when I look at this map, some sections seem to be pretty outdated. I mean, you can do some things better now, especially when it comes to aesthetics. For example 00:54:403 (3,1) - You wouldn't do that anymore, would you? I'd recommend you to go through the map on your own and fix stuff like that, because then it will be less work for me when I have to mod *Desperate runs*
- Check aimod. You don't want kiais to be unsnapped, to timing points at the same time, or an incredibly low stack leniency for an Easy xD
If you fixed this stuff, it will be much, much easier for me to mod and it will save time to both me and you. So, plz
Call me back then.
EDIT: 2 stars for you
