yoooo m4m from your queue ~
just a fast check on your map
hmm i like the song tho but not the animu, meeeh
[General]
ukuran lagunya saya liat 192kbps, imo it's too high. aturan nya kudu 128kbps. so here's better mp3 for you
source harus pake romaji, i mean "Highschool DxD New" not "ハイスクール D×D NEW". cmiiw ~
tags maybe just "op opening" for now
ini hitsound kepake nda?
soft-hitfinish3
soft-sliferslide4
soft-slidertick4
kalo ga dipake delete dari folder nya
how about try this combo colours?
[Hard]
AR,OD+1 HP-1
00:04:357 (1) remove NC
00:05:240 (3,4) ga cocok ama vocal nya. how about try this rhythm, start from 00:04:357
00:16:710 (1) remove NC
00:18:651 (2,3,4,5) flow nya agak jelek, coba tambah spacing + atur lagi penempatan nya biar lebih menarik secara diff ini hard
00:22:887 (6) slider's curve nya apa ga kebalik itu?
00:33:475 (4) move the circle to the right by 3 grid
00:35:769 feels empty here. coba kasi note disini, kalo engga mungkin bisa mundurin slider 00:35:945 (1) ke tick merah belakang trus panjangin lagi. kalo bingung contohnya kaya ini
00:41:945 (3,4) kenapa ga dibikin slider aja drpd 2 circle?
00:44:416 (1,2,3,4) spacing? terlalu dempet + berantakan arah slider nya
00:47:592 ini knp SV naik mendadak? ga fit sama vocal nya duh, player dah pasti kaget tar. mending ini SV nya tetep 0.5 deh
00:49:710 add clap here
00:54:828 (6) ga ngepas ama vocal nya. coba pindah ke 00:55:004
00:58:357 kenapa kiai berhenti disini? toh ini kan masi chorus.
00:58:887 dan SV tiba2 turun jadi 0,5
01:09:298 (3,4,1) nda pas ama vocal nya, jadiin slider aja?
[Insane]
AR-1 HP-1/tetep mungkin gpp
00:07:357 (1,2,3) coba pattern yang kaya gini
00:23:769 (5,6,7,8) somehow flow nya kurang enak
00:47:592 sama kaya normal
00:58:357 ^
00:58:887 ^
01:01:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) random positioning circle, kurang enak dilihat.
uh ohh untuk penempatan 1/2 slider nya kok kaya random2 gitu ya.
flow nya juga banyak yang kurang bagus.
well, it's just my opinion though ~
ok then ~ good luck ლ(╹◡╹ლ)
EDIT : kalo normal nya udah selese PM ato ingame chat ya.
just a fast check on your map
hmm i like the song tho but not the animu, meeeh
[General]
ukuran lagunya saya liat 192kbps, imo it's too high. aturan nya kudu 128kbps. so here's better mp3 for you
source harus pake romaji, i mean "Highschool DxD New" not "ハイスクール D×D NEW". cmiiw ~
tags maybe just "op opening" for now
ini hitsound kepake nda?
soft-hitfinish3
soft-sliferslide4
soft-slidertick4
kalo ga dipake delete dari folder nya
how about try this combo colours?
SPOILER
overall volume is too looouuuudddd orz, turunin jadi 70% atau 75% biar hitsoundnya ga terlalu keras kalo dibanding ama lagu nya Combo1 : 128,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,210,55
Combo4 : 0,128,192
[Hard]
AR,OD+1 HP-1
00:04:357 (1) remove NC
00:05:240 (3,4) ga cocok ama vocal nya. how about try this rhythm, start from 00:04:357
00:16:710 (1) remove NC
00:18:651 (2,3,4,5) flow nya agak jelek, coba tambah spacing + atur lagi penempatan nya biar lebih menarik secara diff ini hard
00:22:887 (6) slider's curve nya apa ga kebalik itu?
00:33:475 (4) move the circle to the right by 3 grid
00:35:769 feels empty here. coba kasi note disini, kalo engga mungkin bisa mundurin slider 00:35:945 (1) ke tick merah belakang trus panjangin lagi. kalo bingung contohnya kaya ini
00:41:945 (3,4) kenapa ga dibikin slider aja drpd 2 circle?
00:44:416 (1,2,3,4) spacing? terlalu dempet + berantakan arah slider nya
00:47:592 ini knp SV naik mendadak? ga fit sama vocal nya duh, player dah pasti kaget tar. mending ini SV nya tetep 0.5 deh
00:49:710 add clap here
00:54:828 (6) ga ngepas ama vocal nya. coba pindah ke 00:55:004
00:58:357 kenapa kiai berhenti disini? toh ini kan masi chorus.
00:58:887 dan SV tiba2 turun jadi 0,5
01:09:298 (3,4,1) nda pas ama vocal nya, jadiin slider aja?
[Insane]
AR-1 HP-1/tetep mungkin gpp
00:07:357 (1,2,3) coba pattern yang kaya gini
SPOILER
00:13:004 - 00:15:122 kalo saya, bakal kasi spinner disitu124,176,7357,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,7534,2,0,P|160:252|204:196,1,161.999995056153
192,124,8063,2,0,P|248:136|272:176,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:23:769 (5,6,7,8) somehow flow nya kurang enak
00:47:592 sama kaya normal
00:58:357 ^
00:58:887 ^
01:01:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) random positioning circle, kurang enak dilihat.
uh ohh untuk penempatan 1/2 slider nya kok kaya random2 gitu ya.
flow nya juga banyak yang kurang bagus.
well, it's just my opinion though ~
ok then ~ good luck ლ(╹◡╹ლ)
EDIT : kalo normal nya udah selese PM ato ingame chat ya.