This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月6日 at 23:35:43

Artist: Soy-SOUTH
Title: Nenneko
Source: Touhou
Tags: aerogel kaihounotoki inaba tewi cinderella cage シンデレラケージ
BPM: 130
Filesize: 7211kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.6 stars, 266 notes)
2. Lunatic (5 stars, 397 notes)
3. Normal (2.45 stars, 130 notes)

Download: Soy-SOUTH - Nenneko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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GY
4:3 StoryBoarding and skinning

[Timing]

One part that I felt that it was a bit off:

1. Timing Point: • 01:08:761 BPM: 149.500
   Try using • 01:08:796 BPM: 150.000
   New offset is 68796
   
   After that re-snap everything from that section and there's parts where I think it's necessary or suggestions?
2. 01:17:895 (2) - place it at 01:17:996 (2) -
3. 01:13:196 (4,5,6) - try having it like this? or something like that kind of style:
   
   Result

   
   

   128,280,78196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   128,280,78396,2,0,P|265:328|403:262,1,280,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   292,140,79596,6,0,L|222:140,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:21:396 (5) - add circle note here?
5. 01:21:596 (1) - Spinner moved here and shortened to end at 01:22:796
   

Triple check the snapping of that section. Save, leave, go back in and check, and then repeat the process till it's fine. If I got the BPM and the offset wrong then I'm sorry (pretty sure it's that or at least close to it...) If it's correct then call me back to check the rest of the offset and i'll give you the full timing.

AllStar12 wrote:

[Timing]

One part that I felt that it was a bit off:

1. Timing Point: • 01:08:761 BPM: 149.500
   Try using • 01:08:796 BPM: 150.000
   New offset is 68796
   Fine! change it
   
   After that re-snap everything from that section and there's parts where I think it's necessary or suggestions?
2. 01:17:895 (2) - place it at 01:17:996 (2) - KEEP
3. 01:13:196 (4,5,6) - try having it like this? or something like that kind of style:
   KEEP
   I intend to suit tovocal
   
   Result

   
   

   128,280,78196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   128,280,78396,2,0,P|265:328|403:262,1,280,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   292,140,79596,6,0,L|222:140,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:21:396 (5) - add circle note here? Yeah, fix~
5. 01:21:596 (1) - Spinner moved here and shortened to end at 01:22:796
   Adjust!
   since changing timing as your suggestion, I changed it on its own
   

Triple check the snapping of that section. Save, leave, go back in and check, and then repeat the process till it's fine. If I got the BPM and the offset wrong then I'm sorry (pretty sure it's that or at least close to it...) If it's correct then call me back to check the rest of the offset and i'll give you the full timing.

Thanks a lot for timing-check!
red is my reply
if you plefer, I would like to ask you to check the rest of timing and offset

Hi Timing req

3984,461.538461538462,4,2,2,40,1,0
18759,508.474576271186,4,2,2,40,1,0
21352,600,4,2,2,40,1,0
23732,389.61038961039,4,2,1,60,1,0
32673,379.746835443038,4,2,1,70,1,0
57396,408.163265306122,4,2,2,60,1,0
68829,400,4,2,1,60,1,0
83297,397.350993377483,4,2,1,70,1,1
119863,408.163265306122,4,2,2,60,1,0
122680,394.736842105263,4,2,1,60,1,0

try this.

Satellite wrote:

Hi Timing req

3984,461.538461538462,4,2,2,40,1,0 3950 ,461.538461538462,4,2,2,40,1,0
18759,508.474576271186,4,2,2,40,1,0 fix
21352,600,4,2,2,40,1,0 fix
23732,389.61038961039,4,2,1,60,1,0 23718,389.61038961039,4,2,1,60,1,0
32673,379.746835443038,4,2,1,70,1,0 fix
57396,408.163265306122,4,2,2,60,1,0 57368,408.163265306122,4,2,2,60,1,0
68829,400,4,2,1,60,1,0 KEEP
83297,397.350993377483,4,2,1,70,1,1 fix
119863,408.163265306122,4,2,2,60,1,0 fix
122680,394.736842105263,4,2,1,60,1,0 fix

try this.

Thank you for Timing-check
全体的に早めにtiming-pointをつけてたみたいです
ちょっと遅すぎると思ったところは調整しました。

Timing Check Requested~

Alright, so this one was pretty tricky. I rebuilt the timing, so it doesn't include your green points, sorry


Good luck!

captin1 wrote:

Timing Check Requested~

Alright, so this one was pretty tricky. I rebuilt the timing, so it doesn't include your green points, sorry

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
3966,461.538461538462,4,2,2,40,1,0
18735,491.803278688525,4,2,2,40,1,0
19226,517.241379310345,4,2,2,40,1,0
19743,545.454545454546,4,2,2,40,1,0
21379,612.244897959184,4,2,2,40,1,0
23215,512.820512820513,4,2,2,40,1,0
23727,389.61038961039,4,2,2,40,1,0
31519,375,4,2,2,40,1,0
32644,387.096774193548,4,2,2,40,1,0
33031,379.746835443038,4,2,2,40,1,0
56575,406.779661016949,4,2,2,40,1,0
57388,408.163265306122,4,2,2,40,1,0
68816,400,4,2,2,40,1,0
81616,416.666666666667,4,2,2,40,1,0
83282,397.350993377483,4,2,2,40,1,0
119838,402.684563758389,4,2,2,40,1,0
123059,394.736842105263,4,2,2,40,1,0
148322,400,4,2,2,40,1,0

Good luck!

It's a great help to me!!!
This map will be able to become pending.
thanks a lot

Hey RandomEffect, from your queue~

Please reply to what you fix or not~
Yosh let's do this




Okay that's all, Really nice mapset overall~
I really hope that helps and sorry if it doesn't u.u

Anyway, here's a star for you and good luck with this~
戦う！

AnreFM wrote:

Hey RandomEffect, from your queue~

Please reply to what you fix or not~
Yosh let's do this

• [General]

1. Cute skin as always, I like it owob thank, I'm so happy~
2. 02:03:059 - Having the third kiai to start here will make a really nice and better feel to the song as it is emphasized with the silencing of the song and your storyboard really add up the effect. So, either start the kiai here, or just adding only an extra starburst is really nice
   Remarkable suggetion
   I intended to avoid Kiaitime since 02:03:059~02:15:690 part is less enthusiastic in this song. but your starburst suggetion is fine! adding it~

• [Normal]

1. 00:07:658 (1) - lol this one has a small overlap with 00:03:966 (1) -, but I think the blanket can also be fixed. move the 2nd white dot to 236/340 and then the tail to 244/228, the result is like in the pic https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039168. Don't forget to mirror the next slider too since you change this one
   looks good, fine!
2. 00:16:889 (2) - to fix that small overlap(again lol), why don't you use ctrl J on this one like you did on the previous slider? looked neater too imo
   wow, I mistaked...
3. 00:18:735 - to create a better effect, following with your SB fade effect and the following vocal, drag the break to start from this point. It doesn't do much, but having the break start earlier damp the effect a bit imo OK, it's so good~
4. 00:45:182 (1,2) - straight slider pattern like this is kinda boring and doesn't look too good, try this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039185 fix
5. 00:48:220 (1) - Didn't really get why the head is shaped like the current one, look a bit weird imo. Try this shape osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039197 fix
6. 00:55:815 (3) - is fine really, but the turn makes a bit weird flow, try rhis shape instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039202 (sorry for this mass shapes, but I really think it is much neater u.u) fine!
7. 01:17:616 (1) - why don't blanket 01:18:416 (2) - currently looked not really neat imo You're right!
8. 01:20:016 (3) - to keep consistency on how you keep short combos(changed almost every 1 stanzas), will make more sense if you NC here, since the vocal and rhythm is also changed fix
9. 01:26:459 (1) - I'd like to not give you suggestion on every slider shaped like this, sorry orz but I the shape really contradicts with 01:24:870 (2) - since it doesn't blanket it or anything close to it, suggest to change the shape to this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039209, that way, it will at least connected to the previous slider, and also neater imo
   I agree
   change for simpler curve slider
10. 01:31:228 (3,4) - In accordance to your next slider pattern (01:32:818 (1,2,3) - ) will make a better match with the pattern if you change these to this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039218 nice idea~
11. 01:35:599 (4,5) - Though I don't have a big problem with this, but ending a slider in stanza isn't very good and will play not too nicely, I suggest to change the rhythm onto this one(and a possible pattern too) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039225
    KEEP
    I intend to suit to vocal
12. 01:36:791 (2) - raise the tail a bit more for better blanket with 01:35:997 (1) - no: since no change the above sugettion
13. 01:38:381 (4) - will be read better if you NC here since it's following a different rhythm which is the vocal fix
14. 01:46:328 (3) - why not mirror the 01:45:136 (1) - ?
    KEEP
    I want to place 01:47:123 (1,2) - at the center with keeping DS 1.0x
15. 01:59:440 (4) - Isn't a perfect stack, intentional? oops, thanks
16. 02:07:796 (3) - you may also have noticed this, but the curve on the tail can be made neater imo. Sorry for not be bale to help you further since I can't really do much except this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039266 u.u
    

    68,164,123059,6,0,P|124:172|168:148,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    OK
    different slider's code? but I could fix by use of the pcuture you displayed
17. 02:20:229 (3) - stack at the end of slider is a bit hard for normal imo, try to stack at the head of 02:20:427 (4) - instead fix
18. 02:24:769 (1) - the spin here starts isn't too nicely, try to add a note here and then start the spin at 02:25:164 - instead, which is a downbeat and it fit better
    thinking deeply, but change
    I feel spinner becomes too shor for Normal, but it is not difficult from playing your suggetion
19. Nice map overall, not filled with lazy 1/2 and 1/1 sliders, I like it

• [Hard]

1. 00:31:519 (1,2,3,4) - In accordance to your distances in the previous notes, these ones have a rather big distances. The song is fit, but I think 1.6 DS is a bit too big, ne? try 1.3 or 1.4 instead for this OK: reduce to 1.4x
2. 00:37:967 (6) - NC here to avoid long combos and to match with the stanza fix
3. 00:41:575 (3,4) - make it like this one? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039322 doesn't do much, but will make the flow better since the straight to the left slider doesn't play well since the previous slider is also straight
   change a little
   make only 00:41:765 (4) - curved
4. 00:42:904 (1,2,3) - stumbled on this one since you put jumps for this kind of pattern, and this one is spaced normally, I though this one is a jump lol. Try to move these farther, to be read better?
   no
   00:42:144 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - are uniformed DS to 1.6x
5. 00:44:423 (2,3,4) - since the previous note follows the electric guitar, and these one doesn't. Making a NC here will be better since the rhythm changed rather quickly, and read better see,
   KEEP
   imo, too many DS
6. 00:53:727 (3,4) - try to avoid using the straight 1/4 slider and then continue it using an also straight 3/4 slider since it doesn't flow really well imo(btw this apply to all slider like these) try this kind of pattern, where either one of them is curved; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039346 OK
7. 01:44:341 (3,4) - having two circles after a bit of silence is a bit hard to read, how about changing this to a slider that mirrors 01:43:745 (2) - ?
   KEEP
8. 02:23:585 (5,6,7) - these three.. is fine really, but you can try this pattern instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1039359 flows better imo fix
9. Not many problem here either. Just need to fix a few shape and also fix a few bad flow OuO

• [Lunatic]

1. 00:46:986 (2,3) - melody wise, having the 00:46:986 (2) - stacked with 00:46:701 (1) - isn't really match since the connected one is 00:46:986 (2) - and 00:47:081 (3) - . So, try stacking these two instead of the current one fix
2. 00:48:600 (2) - ctrl g this will make a bit better oval pattern than the current one imo
   KEEP
   unless uniforming DS, this part comes to so confusing, imo
3. 00:52:207 (4,5,6) - since these three is the only triplet that you distanced this big, it seems a bit weird. I don't have any trouble with it, but try to distance it like the rest for consistency fix
4. 00:53:726 (3,4) - why stack these two? since you also didn't use this stack for other pattern, it makes the flow quite bad. Try to space this like the other one that uses this pattern fix
5. 01:50:997 (9,10,11) - rhythm a bit weird imo, move 01:51:195 (11) - 1/4 earlier? no
6. 02:18:058 (6,8,9,1) - same as 00:53:726 (3,4) -. So, either Distance this normally or stack these three altogether. flows better imo
   no
   I intend to use the same pattern as after parts
7. Lunatic is pretty much your style and I don't want to change that~ it flows nicely and good overall I can say ouob

Okay that's all, Really nice mapset overall~
I really hope that helps and sorry if it doesn't u.u

Anyway, here's a star for you and good luck with this~
戦う！

Thank you for modding!
many, many useful suggetion for me
red: change
blue: no change

[ infL ] wrote:

1. 01:17:416 (1) - Maybe shorten the spinner and add another slider like this: fix
   
2. 01:20:416 (3) - add another repeat to this slider?
   no
   I intend to suit to vocal
3. 01:21:416 (5) - move this to 01:21:616 (5) and add finish? and just move spinner across and shorten slightly no
4. 02:06:019 (1) - これを　02:06:216 (1) <- ここに動かす KEEP: I intend to suit to vocal
   
5. 02:07:007 (3) - 少し変える？ KEEP: I intend to suit to vocal
   From:
   
   To:
   
6. 02:14:900 (5) - add finish
   KEEP
   I want to keep only whistle at this star-pattern: 02:14:111 (1,2,3,4,5) -

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

M4M
[Normal]
00:56:981 (4) - add fin
01:13:616 (1) - I don't think spinner is good for here 01:15:216~01:16:416 I think it's good
01:23:282 (1) - add fin
01:48:712 (1) - ^
[Hard]
AR+1
00:33:031 (2) - NC?
00:43:663 (1) - change it to 2 1/2 sliders
00:55:815 (3,4,5) - all add fin on the head
01:23:282 (1) - add fin
01:35:202 (5) - move to 146,131?
01:58:248 (2) - ctrl+g?
02:27:730 (6) - add fin on the end
[Lunatic]
00:30:739 (1,2) - 2 1/4 sliders seems better
00:56:778 (7) - add fin on the end
01:30:632 (4) - move 320.204?
01:50:103 add note
01:50:301 (7) - NC
01:50:699 (8,9,10) - try this http://puu.sh/55rzz.jpg

nice SB
star~

sjoy wrote:

M4M
[Normal]
00:56:981 (4) - add fin OK
01:13:616 (1) - I don't think spinner is good for here 01:15:216~01:16:416 I think it's good
KEEP
it's too short spinner for normal
01:23:282 (1) - add fin KEEP
01:48:712 (1) - ^ fix
[Hard]
AR+1 OK
00:33:031 (2) - NC? OK: instead, remove NC at 00:32:644 (5) -
00:43:663 (1) - change it to 2 1/2 sliders fix
00:55:815 (3,4,5) - all add fin on the head no
01:23:282 (1) - add fin KEEP
01:35:202 (5) - move to 146,131?
Remap
your suggetion is good for smoother cursor moving. I change but adjust for uniforming DS
01:58:248 (2) - ctrl+g? Fine!
02:27:730 (6) - add fin on the end fix
[Lunatic]
00:30:739 (1,2) - 2 1/4 sliders seems better
KEEP
I intend the same patttern as 00:29:960 (1,2) -
00:56:778 (7) - add fin on the end OK
01:30:632 (4) - move 320.204?
OK
I intended to unifrom DS, but your suggetion looks better
01:50:103 add note fix
01:50:301 (7) - NC fix
01:50:699 (8,9,10) - try this http://puu.sh/55rzz.jpg
??
I couldn't understand the rhythm from the picture...

nice SB
star~

Thank you for modding and star!!
red: change
blue: no change

Oh god, this is great! I've never heard this song, but I like it owo Osu! needs more Cindrella Cage arranges.
By the way, what does "Nenneko" mean? I googled it and it gave me some clothes. But then it seems like there's lots of nyaas heard, which would indicate something about cat.

nenneko = "ねんねこ"

the mean is nursery word of sleep
In Japan, it is often used for lullaby~

(it's nothing to do with "cat" :3 )

Since I always see you hard at work modding everyone's map with high quality, I thought I'd be generous and attempt to return the favor!

[General]
What is "star2.png?" I don't see it in your SB, and I can't find anywhere in the skin where this was used.

[Normal]

00:03:966 (1) Try disabling grid snap to get this symmetrical across the y-axis.

00:51:638 (1,2) Condense these two notes into one slider? It matches a similar consistency with 00:48:220 (1)

02:22:006 (1,2,3,4) This pattern is a little difficult for the easiest difficulty of the map to present. Since I assume you're following mainly vocals as your guide, why not delete 2 to add simplicity and follow your pattern better?

02:26:743 (1,2,3) Having these notes stacked causes three approach circles to appear over the same spot, without being equalized by an easy press-press-press rhythm that would occur if they were all circles. This pattern becomes complex for a newbie to comprehend because they have to read the press-hold-release-press-hold-release-press-hold pattern instead, which is drastically more complicated than the rest of the entire preceeding map. I suggest that you either unstack these sliders or change them into circles.

02:28:322 Maybe add a note here? It's the final downbeat of the song, and adding a beat here could help in the processs of ammending the difficulty of the previous pattern.

Really solid diff.

[Hard]

00:42:904 (1) Remove NC for readability? The spacing doesn't change. I actually got 100s on this combo the first 2 times I played it.

02:23:585 (5,6,7) I found these sliders really fun to play if their SV was gradually increased. I would probably still add a NC on 5 as it is, or if you change the SVs.

02:26:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) How about something like this?

[Lunatic]
I'm not too big a fan of the occasional crammed patterns with low DS. This is a fairly relaxing song-- a lullaby-- so there don't need to be many jumps of emphasis, and the whole map can stay cool, calm, collected, and consistent.

00:28:402 (1,2,3,4) You should really attempt to keep consistent spacing to make the pattern easier to follow. It's sort of random within each combo right now.

00:32:081 (2,3,4) How about adding some jumps into here to spice up the suspense?

01:09:616 (3,4,5,6) I like how this pattern plays when emphasis is increased as the comboing gets higher. You could decrease/increase the angles of the sliders, increase/decrease SV, increase spacing, etc. to make this pattern more fun.

01:34:805 (2,3,4,5,6,7) By not following the whistles(?) that suddenly appear in the song, the pattern sounds off beat. I'm not too fond of any part of its design so I would trash it and try to come up with something better. You could try something like 01:09:616 (3,4,5,6).

01:48:712 (1,3,4,5,6,7,8) This section is so crammed. It looks pretty bad as a result.

02:04:637 (7,8) Ka go ..? 9 and 10 don't help this pattern. The player assumes a pattern will be followed through until the relevant sound stops being played. You've started a sliderwave pattern that follows the vocals with 7 and 8, but there should be a third slider: 9.

02:12:532 (2) I'm just curious as to why you stopped the wiggle in this slider.

02:14:901 (5,6,7,8) If 5 became a slider that simply took the same shape as this stream, I feel it would play a lot better.

02:28:322 I still think a note should be added here.

Xiamul wrote:

Since I always see you hard at work modding everyone's map with high quality, I thought I'd be generous and attempt to return the favor!

[General]
What is "star2.png?" I don't see it in your SB, and I can't find anywhere in the skin where this was used.
it appears at Kiai-Time, comboburst, and break time
　　　my skin - screenshot
　　　default skin - screenshot

[Normal]

00:03:966 (1) Try disabling grid snap to get this symmetrical across the y-axis.
No problem
I'm content to just make this symmetrical across the x-axis
00:51:638 (1,2) Condense these two notes into one slider? It matches a similar consistency with 00:48:220 (1) no

02:22:006 (1,2,3,4) This pattern is a little difficult for the easiest difficulty of the map to present. Since I assume you're following mainly vocals as your guide, why not delete 2 to add simplicity and follow your pattern better? I agree~

02:26:743 (1,2,3) Having these notes stacked causes three approach circles to appear over the same spot, without being equalized by an easy press-press-press rhythm that would occur if they were all circles. This pattern becomes complex for a newbie to comprehend because they have to read the press-hold-release-press-hold-release-press-hold pattern instead, which is drastically more complicated than the rest of the entire preceeding map. I suggest that you either unstack these sliders or change them into circles. OK, remap

02:28:322 Maybe add a note here? It's the final downbeat of the song, and adding a beat here could help in the processs of ammending the difficulty of the previous pattern. fix

Really solid diff.

[Hard]

00:42:904 (1) Remove NC for readability? The spacing doesn't change. I actually got 100s on this combo the first 2 times I played it.
fix
02:23:585 (5,6,7) I found these sliders really fun to play if their SV was gradually increased. I would probably still add a NC on 5 as it is, or if you change the SVs.
That's a fantastic idea! I'll try!

02:26:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) How about something like this?
change some
6 is no change, but 7 is added

[Lunatic]
I'm not too big a fan of the occasional crammed patterns with low DS. This is a fairly relaxing song-- a lullaby-- so there don't need to be many jumps of emphasis, and the whole map can stay cool, calm, collected, and consistent.

00:28:402 (1,2,3,4) You should really attempt to keep consistent spacing to make the pattern easier to follow. It's sort of random within each combo right now.
Remap

00:32:081 (2,3,4) How about adding some jumps into here to spice up the suspense?
no: there is already comfortable jump

01:09:616 (3,4,5,6) I like how this pattern plays when emphasis is increased as the comboing gets higher. You could decrease/increase the angles of the sliders, increase/decrease SV, increase spacing, etc. to make this pattern more fun.
Good Idea!
I'll make gradual pattern about angle, SV, and spacing
01:34:805 (2,3,4,5,6,7) By not following the whistles(?) that suddenly appear in the song, the pattern sounds off beat. I'm not too fond of any part of its design so I would trash it and try to come up with something better. You could try something like 01:09:616 (3,4,5,6).
KEEP
01:48:712 (1,3,4,5,6,7,8) This section is so crammed. It looks pretty bad as a result.
Remap
02:04:637 (7,8) Ka go ..? 9 and 10 don't help this pattern. The player assumes a pattern will be followed through until the relevant sound stops being played. You've started a sliderwave pattern that follows the vocals with 7 and 8, but there should be a third slider: 9.
KEEP
if change 9 for slier, there are many 1/2 sliders at this part. it is boring ,imo
02:12:532 (2) I'm just curious as to why you stopped the wiggle in this slider.
I intend to suit to vocal's delivery
02:14:901 (5,6,7,8) If 5 became a slider that simply took the same shape as this stream, I feel it would play a lot better.
KEEP
02:28:322 I still think a note should be added here. OK

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

hi~

[Normal]
If I were you, I would begin the map a little differently.. here's my version
01:17:616 (1) - maybe smth like this?01:23:282 (1) - you can start this slider like on the screen to have better flow and change slider (2) a bit 01:48:712 (1) - maybe ctrl+g for better flow?
02:10:164 (2) - maybe do smth like this? it'll hard for beginners to understand when reverses will end.
02:26:743 (1,2,3,1) - lift thm a bit and do 02:26:743 (1,2,3,1) - more visible
[Hard]
01:12:016 (3) - maybe smth like this?
02:07:796 (5) - smth like this?

Can't say anything about Lunatic, sorry.
Sad, that you accept mod requests only for japanese songs T.T
GL~

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~

[Normal]
If I were you, I would begin the map a little differently.. here's my version
KEEP
I intend to make symmetric about the x-axis

example

01:17:616 (1) - maybe smth like this?
no: I want to blanket

example

01:23:282 (1) - you can start this slider like on the screen to have better flow and change slider (2) a bit
I like it, fix~

example

01:48:712 (1) - maybe ctrl+g for better flow? KEEP
02:10:164 (2) - maybe do smth like this? it'll hard for beginners to understand when reverses will end.
umm... KEEP
it is comfortable to beat. but if your rhythm, too closely-spaced and hard to see since 1/2 rhythm position

example

02:26:743 (1,2,3,1) - lift thm a bit and do 02:26:743 (1,2,3,1) - more visible
no
After spinner, it is better to place the note near the center as much as possible for beginner ,imo

example

[Hard]
01:12:016 (3) - maybe smth like this? fine!

example

02:07:796 (5) - smth like this? OK, I'll try~

example

Can't say anything about Lunatic, sorry.
Sad, that you accept mod requests only for japanese songs T.T
GL~

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change
If you make the map of Japanese song, I'm pleased to mod

Hi from your modding queue, M4M check my post in your modding queue topic


[Lunatic]

00:11:350 (1,2,3,4) - Make more simmetry:

1: 64 || 40
2: 200 || 120
3: 64 || 192
4: 200 || 264

00:13:196 (5) - Move to 256 || 192
00:18:735 (1,2,3,4) - Try this: http://d.pr/i/VDJO+/
00:25:577 (5,6) - Stack like this: http://d.pr/i/Jky8+/
00:49:739 (6) - Ctrl+G
00:52:018 (3) - Move to: 292 || 176
01:07:183 - Finish pause?



01:41:758 (7) - I think this flow better: http://d.pr/i/e08t+/
01:50:301 (8) - NC?
02:04:637 (7) - ^
02:20:428 (7) - ^

[Hard]

00:18:735 - Try to fill this space
00:38:726 (3,3) - Stack better
00:44:802 (5,2) - ^
01:07:183 - Same for insane
01:12:016 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:23:282 (1) - Clap at end
01:43:745 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:47:917 (5,6) - Fix this blanket
02:20:428 (6,1) - Stack?
02:24:374 (3,4) - Too spaced

[Normal]

00:15:042 (1,2) - Try to copy 1 and make a specular 2
01:08:816 - Same as hard and insane
01:17:616 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:42:752 - Unused inherit point

Pizza Kun wrote:

Hi from your modding queue, M4M check my post in your modding queue topic


[Lunatic]

00:11:350 (1,2,3,4) - Make more simmetry: adjust some

1: 64 || 40
2: 200 || 120
3: 64 || 192
4: 200 || 264

00:13:196 (5) - Move to 256 || 192 why?
00:18:735 (1,2,3,4) - Try this: no, sorry: I want to keep 1/1rhythm at this part
http://d.pr/i/VDJO+/
00:25:577 (5,6) - Stack like this: OK
http://d.pr/i/Jky8+/
00:49:739 (6) - Ctrl+G fix
00:52:018 (3) - Move to: 292 || 176 fix
01:07:183 - Finish pause?OK


01:41:758 (7) - I think this flow better: KEEP
http://d.pr/i/e08t+/
01:50:301 (8) - NC? fix all the following
02:04:637 (7) - ^
02:20:428 (7) - ^

[Hard]

00:18:735 - Try to fill this space no, sorry
00:38:726 (3,3) - Stack better fix
00:44:802 (5,2) - ^ fix
01:07:183 - Same for insane fix
01:12:016 (3) - Ctrl+G no
01:23:282 (1) - Clap at end wow, I mistaked...
01:43:745 (2) - Ctrl+G no
01:47:917 (5,6) - Fix this blanket fix
02:20:428 (6,1) - Stack? no: I prioritize to conform DS
02:24:374 (3,4) - Too spaced on purpose

[Normal]

00:15:042 (1,2) - Try to copy 1 and make a specular 2 they are symmetrical, isn't they?
01:08:816 - Same as hard and insane fix
01:17:616 (1) - Ctrl+G fix
01:42:752 - Unused inherit point delete

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

hi~mod for M4M~
I mod your Lunatic frist and give some suggestion. I found you have same in lower diff. If you think my suggestion is good you can check same problem in lower diff. If you think you dont need fix them you can ignore this
[hard]
00:09:504 (3) - make a blanket ?
[lunatic]
your rythm is right but can make better~
If you have something cant understand you can PM me. forgive my suck english
hope this mod can help you
and here is my map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/130092
only one diff now~hope you can lke it

kamisamaaa wrote:

hi~mod for M4M~
I mod your Lunatic frist and give some suggestion. I found you have same in lower diff. If you think my suggestion is good you can check same problem in lower diff. If you think you dont need fix them you can ignore this
[hard]
00:09:504 (3) - make a blanket ? which with?
[lunatic]

1. this Lunatic is a little easy and miss many rythm. here are some my owm opinion, you can fix them or not.
2. 00:24:116 (1,2,3) - maybe change these there to a 1/2 slider? and00:25:577 (5,6,7) - these sliders are not good. because the sound at the end of slider is stronger than begining, change them to this maybe better
   
   SPOILER

   
   and with all these change rythm will change to this
   
   SPOILER

   
   I think this is more suitble for the rythm and will have better click feel when player playing.
   If you change this , you can make 00:25:285 (4,5) - stack to make here smoothly~
   hmm... KEEP
3. 00:27:233 (5,5) - these two slider make you miss so many rythm. Lunatic is your highest diff. many place is same with this, you can dicide by yourself
   no change
4. 00:29:960 (1,2) - these four rythm is a group but you take them a part fix
5. 00:30:739 (1,2) - ^ fix
6. 00:43:948 add a note fix
7. 00:44:802 (5) - why use this? really not good here. a new sound begining on the 00:45:182 but you make it to a slider end this lead to 00:45:562 (1) - also end sound is stronger than beging, maybe change rythm to this fix
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:48:220 (1) - also not good at rythm fix
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:54:296 (1) - end at 00:54:486 and add a note at 00:54:581 fix
10. 00:55:056 (4) - ^ fix
    
11. 01:08:816 (1,2,3,4,6) - same distance make hard to read. and why dont use a higher SV on 01:09:616 (3,4) - and much higher on 01:10:016 (5,6) - these will be cool~
    no change
    at this part, I intend to increase DS gradually
12. 01:30:831 miss a rythm maybe change 01:30:632 (4) - to a reserve slider? Fine! that's nice~
13. 01:58:248 (2) - end at 01:58:546 and add another slider begin at 01:58:646 end at 01:58:944 maybe better fix
14. 02:05:428 (3,4) - change these to a slider and 02:05:822 (5) - to note KEEP
15. 02:22:007 (1,2) - change like this fix
    
    SPOILER

    
    as for placing...I can help nothing for you because I dont know how to placing note either

your rythm is right but can make better~
If you have something cant understand you can PM me. forgive my suck english
hope this mod can help you
and here is my map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/130092
only one diff now~hope you can lke it

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change
I'll mod your map soon

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with black is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[General]
using too much red lines is meaningless,use green lines plz

[Timing check]

strongly suggest

[Hard]
00:37:207 (5) - cut a half

02:21:217 (7,8) - combine into one slider

02:26:743 (1) - using a star like Sanae's cause there are only five characters

[Insane]
00:27:233 (5) - using short reverse slider?

00:47:461 (4) - change into one note and a slider with reverse



00:48:790 (2) - divide it into two notes?

00:54:296 (1) - using reverse slider

01:16:816 (1) - combine 1 and 2 into one slider or change them into


01:19:216 (6) - make the slider shorter and insert one note after it

01:55:666 (4,5) - meaningless

02:23:979 (2) - add a reverse

that's all!I hate her cause I would always lost 2 or more left lives in Lunatic, TH07

こんにちは～♪　M4M希望です。

[General]

特に問題ないと思います。

[Normal]

General
特に問題ないと思います。

Placement

1. 02:26:743 (1,2,3,1) - この方がより良いと思います。
   
   Placement

   

Rhythm

1. 02:09:966 (2) - Normalはこのmapsetで最もやさしい難易度になっています。それを考慮するとこの２回リターンするスライダーは難しいので避けるべきだと思います。このようなリズムにしてはどうでしょうか？
   
   Rhythm

   
   
   ちなみに・・・
   
   
   
   とすると、(1),(2),(3)が重なってしまい、それもまたプレイしづらい要因となるので避けたほうがよいと思います。

Hitsound

1. 01:39:573 この箇所にカスタム3のsoft-slidertickのサウンドを入れるべきだと思います。

[Hard]
指摘できるところがないです。申し訳ない。。。完璧だと思います。

[Lunatic]

General
00:18:735 (1,2,3,4) - ここはBPMが変わってリズムがわかりづらい個所なのですべてのサークルのコンボカラーを変えてはどうでしょうか？
01:08:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここも同様です。

Placement
00:36:448 (1,2) - Stackしない方がよいと思います。
00:46:701 (1,2) - 同様です
00:54:296 (1,2,3,4) - 難しすぎる気がします。
02:15:690 (1) - ここは少しdistanceを広くとってみてはどうでしょう？

Rhythm
完璧なリズムだと思います

Hitsound
01:47:520 (3) - ここはClapの方がよいと思います。

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with black is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[General]
using too much red lines is meaningless,use green lines plz
As the result of many previous validtions, they must be necessary
[Timing check]

strongly suggest
no change
[Hard]
00:37:207 (5) - cut a half KEEP

02:21:217 (7,8) - combine into one slider KEEP

02:26:743 (1) - using a star like Sanae's cause there are only five characters
umm...KEEP
I've already used star-pattern at the same rhythm position: 02:14:111 (1,2,3,4,5) - so, I intend to make other pattern at this part
[Insane]
00:27:233 (5) - using short reverse slider? no sorry
00:47:461 (4) - change into one note and a slider with reverse KEEP



00:48:790 (2) - divide it into two notes?
no, sorry
I intend to make the same shape as 00:48:220 (1) -
00:54:296 (1) - using reverse slider ??
01:16:816 (1) - combine 1 and 2 into one slider or change them into no


01:19:216 (6) - make the slider shorter and insert one note after it fix

01:55:666 (4,5) - meaningless

02:23:979 (2) - add a reverse fix

that's all!I hate her cause I would always lost 2 or more left lives in Lunatic, TH07

Thank you for modding!
red: change
purple: no change

EnixYuki wrote:

こんにちは～♪　M4M希望です。

[General]

特に問題ないと思います。

[Normal]

General
特に問題ないと思います。

Placement

1. 02:26:743 (1,2,3,1) - この方がより良いと思います。
   no change
   spinnerと１の時間が短いので、なるべく１はcenterに近い方が初心者にやさしいと思います
   
   Placement

   

Rhythm

1. 02:09:966 (2) - Normalはこのmapsetで最もやさしい難易度になっています。それを考慮するとこの２回リターンするスライダーは難しいので避けるべきだと思います。このようなリズムにしてはどうでしょうか？
   change
   ご提案の配置ではないですが、reverseはやめました
   
   Rhythm

   
   
   ちなみに・・・
   
   
   
   とすると、(1),(2),(3)が重なってしまい、それもまたプレイしづらい要因となるので避けたほうがよいと思います。

Hitsound

1. 01:39:573 この箇所にカスタム3のsoft-slidertickのサウンドを入れるべきだと思います。 no

[Hard]
指摘できるところがないです。申し訳ない。。。完璧だと思います。

[Lunatic]

General
00:18:735 (1,2,3,4) - ここはBPMが変わってリズムがわかりづらい個所なのですべてのサークルのコンボカラーを変えてはどうでしょうか？ nice idea~
01:08:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここも同様です。
change a little
全部NCはくどいので01:09:616だけにしました
Placement
00:36:448 (1,2) - Stackしない方がよいと思います。 OK
00:46:701 (1,2) - 同様です OK
00:54:296 (1,2,3,4) - 難しすぎる気がします。
no change
Insaneなのでこのくらは勘弁を・・・
02:15:690 (1) - ここは少しdistanceを広くとってみてはどうでしょう？
KEEP
ちょっといいな～と思ったのですが、前後のスペースがないので大幅なremapするよりはこのままにします
Rhythm
完璧なリズムだと思います

Hitsound
01:47:520 (3) - ここはClapの方がよいと思います。 no change

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

こちらは人にアドバイスできるようなレベルではありませんので、何卒、お聞き流しくださいませ。
Hard
01:38:580 6番がどうにも叩きにくいです（01：41：560が同じ並びです、こちらの方は叩きやすいので）
5番と6番の間、01:38:381に一つ置いたら少し叩きやすいかなと思いました。
私が下手で叩けないという可能性も大きいです　笑
02：03：059　すこし位置がずれていないでしょうか

ayaka2000 wrote:

こちらは人にアドバイスできるようなレベルではありませんので、何卒、お聞き流しくださいませ。
osu好きなだけで十分資格ありますよ～

Hard
01:38:580 6番がどうにも叩きにくいです（01：41：560が同じ並びです、こちらの方は叩きやすいので）
5番と6番の間、01:38:381に一つ置いたら少し叩きやすいかなと思いました。
私が下手で叩けないという可能性も大きいです　笑
Remap: このrhythmは維持したいのでadd noteはなしで。配置を変えました
02：03：059　すこし位置がずれていないでしょうか
fix:　水平位置がってことかな？　02:03:453 (2) - と同じy座標にしました

Thank you for modding!
red: change
blue: no change

hello! from your queue~


That's it
Good luck!

hello there, i'll try to mod your map
sorry if make some mistakes, new modder
ok then, let's start

Normal
00:51:638 (2) - move to 96, 88 or somewhere around there for better flow
01:47:123 (1) - 304, 52
01:59:440 (4) - 360, 84

Hard
01:44:937 (5,1) - 256, 252
02:18:651 (1) - move the end of slider 1 grid below (grid level 4)

Lunatic
01:16:816 (1) - 284, 269

ok, that's all from me. can't really find anything wrong with your map though
the intro sounds really familiar, i often listen this intro from anime, what is this?
really like the song, and map. hope will be ranked soon
good luck~