1. Hard (4.5 stars, 369 notes)
2. Normal (2.88 stars, 236 notes)

Tidek wrote:

Hey, M4M.

Hard

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  I really suggest to make atleast OD6, there is a lot of sliders, hitting 100 on OD5 will be almost impossible
  
  OVERALL (u have to fix it if u want correct rhythm), you have to use more 1/6 tick rate, in places where u accenting vocal, there is 1/6, not 1/4, examples:
  00:10:304 (1,2,3) - wrong rhythm, this is correct (listen on 25% playback rate)
  You have to use 1/6 snap divisor
  00:01:427 (3,4) -
  00:06:325 (2,3) -
  and the same through whole map, remember to listen on 25% playback rate if u want correct rhythm. Vocal here is overall very variety, sometimes its on 1/4, sometimes on 1/6
  
  For this I will gradually going to fix it. Thank you! Learning something new everyday
  But I will keep a lot of 1/4's here because I don't intend to focus on the vocal only here.

1. 00:22:855 (1) - remove nc and add nc one note later, the same here 00:25:304 (1) and rest the same places I am keeping this nc pattern D:
2. 00:54:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really prefer this rhythm
   
3. 01:03:876 (4) - repeat 1/4 slider, instead of that 1/2?
4. 02:31:886 (4,5) - i suggest that rhythm
   
5. 02:55:304 (2,3,4,1) - Just a suggestion, but i think this will be more interesting: < I want to keep this part little bit more easy since I don't map hard too hard like maps nowadays
   
6. 03:55:917 - lower slider multiplier wouldnt be better here?

Normal

1. 00:42:141 (1,2,1,2) - I think its better if u stay with single sliders here like u did before
2. 01:04:182 - add circle?
3. 01:09:080 - ^
4. 01:51:631 (2,3) - music changes here, so i prefer this:
   
5. 02:10:917 (2,3) - i dont think that 1/2 spam is necessary on calm part
6. 03:55:917 - look hard diff

Good luck, remember about to fix rhythm, vocal here is very variety.

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi

스토리보드를 사용하지 않으신다면 osb 파일을 지워주시길 바랍니다 < okay
브레이크타임이 있으니 레더박스를 체크해주시길 바랍니다 < no. Because there's a video in this map.

[Hard]

00:02:651 (5) - 00:01:937 (4) - 얘랑 감싸는건 어떤지요 < 직선슬라이더와 곡선슬라이더를 번갈아가면서 사용하고 싶어서 블랭킷 하지 않았어용 ;ㅅ;
00:37:243 (4) - 스페이싱 < jump to emphasize the accent.
01:41:835 (2,3,4) - 보컬을 따라가는게 좋을듯 < 반주가 좀 너무 강해서 이건 잠시 보류
02:03:570 (2) - 흐름이 어색하므로 ctrl + g
02:14:590 (6) - 흔히 볼수있는 느린곡의 인센패턴입니다 스페이싱 해주세요 < 잠시 보류
02:38:161 (2) - 모양 잘 맞추세요 많이 어긋났습니다 < will fix soon!
02:40:610 (6) - ^
02:43:059 (2) - 02:44:284 (4) - 얘랑 평행히 두는게 좋을듯 < 흐름이 너무 딱딱 끊겨서 일부러 평행하지 않은거라 ;ㅅ; 이부분은 no fix
02:52:243 (1) - 거리 줄여주세요 너무 멀어요 < x2.00 정도 밖에 안되는데다가 BPM도 느린 곡이라 이정도 점프는 괜찮을거라 봅니다
03:17:345 (2) - 위에서도 했지만 모양 잘 맞춰주세요 < ok
03:19:794 (6) - ^
03:21:631 (1,2) - 03:23:468 (4) - 얘랑 평행하게 < same as above
03:40:916 (2) - 스페이싱하면서 거리를 약간만 멀게하세요 그게 자연스럽네요 갑자기 멀어지면 플레이어들에게 혼동을 줄 수 있습니다 < fixed
03:50:713 (4) - ^ < fixed!

노멀은 잡을건 없어보여서..ㅋㅋ <끄아아앙..

GL~