1. Hard (3.33 stars, 496 notes)
2. Insane (4.6 stars, 741 notes)
3. Normal (1.75 stars, 218 notes)

1. 00:25:420 (2) - x,y(132,177)
2. 00:36:420 (3) - 强烈建议复制00:35:087 (1) 再旋转一下
3. 01:29:754 (1) - 虽然想忍着不吐槽，但是我失败了
4. 01:48:420 (3,1) - 没叠好
5. 01:53:087 (3) - 弧度再稍微大点
6. 02:23:754 (3) - 稍微往右一点点

1. break好多没用的绿线
2. 00:36:921 (3,4,5) - 右移动一点，2,3错开点距离
3. 01:08:920 (2,3) - 没叠好
4. 01:44:920 (3) - 3和1稍微放远点
5. 02:22:420 (3) - 虽然知道你想做成心型但是貌似这个没拉好
6. 02:58:920 (8) - slider尾上的clap有点多余
7. 03:53:754 (1) - 这个弧度可以做大点

1. 好多没叠好的地方=.=
2. 01:40:087 (9) - 我猜这可以nc？
3. 03:04:420 - break拉到这来？

Melt wrote:

:3

[Normal]

1. 00:25:420 (2) - x,y(132,177) 好
2. 00:36:420 (3) - 强烈建议复制00:35:087 (1) 再旋转一下 好
3. 01:29:754 (1) - 虽然想忍着不吐槽，但是我失败了 跟后面那个比起来还好呀，等别人给具体改法
4. 01:48:420 (3,1) - 没叠好 好
5. 01:53:087 (3) - 弧度再稍微大点 好
6. 02:23:754 (3) - 稍微往右一点点

好

[Hard]

1. break好多没用的绿线 已删
2. 00:36:921 (3,4,5) - 右移动一点，2,3错开点距离 好
3. 01:08:920 (2,3) - 没叠好 好
4. 01:44:920 (3) - 3和1稍微放远点 好
5. 02:22:420 (3) - 虽然知道你想做成心型但是貌似这个没拉好 好
6. 02:58:920 (8) - slider尾上的clap有点多余 音乐里有，调整了音量
7. 03:53:754 (1) - 这个弧度可以做大点 好

[Insane]

1. 好多没叠好的地方=.= 嗯
2. 01:40:087 (9) - 我猜这可以nc？试试
3. 03:04:420 - break拉到这来？ 好

没了 GL~ 谢谢妹儿特:D

• 00:39:754 (3) - Ctrl + G
  01:11:754 - add circle or 01:11:087 (1) - +1 revers
  01:57:754 (2,3) - make same slider shape
  02:26:421 (4) - opposite slider
  
  [Hard]
  
  • 01:17:087 (3) - overlapping on 01:16:087 (6) -
    01:56:087 (5) - opposite slider and fix its distance
    02:19:086 (1,2) - make same slider shape
    
    [Insane]
    
    • 00:55:920 (7,8) - I think distance is too far
      03:20:420 (1) - -1 reverse

-Srui- wrote:

Hi ~ :3


[Normal]
00:39:754 (3) - Ctrl + G this is fine enough imo and it's difficult to find better place
01:11:754 - add circle or 01:11:087 (1) - +1 revers ok
01:57:754 (2,3) - make same slider shape ok
02:26:421 (4) - opposite slider i'll consider it

[Hard]
01:17:087 (3) - overlapping on 01:16:087 (6) - ok
01:56:087 (5) - opposite slider and fix its distance fixed a little
02:19:086 (1,2) - make same slider shape ok

[Insane]
00:55:920 (7,8) - I think distance is too far reduced some
03:20:420 (1) - -1 reverse i think it may be annoying but better for fitting the music :3

baldrace wrote:

Hi~hi~from my queue
normal mod

General
好听>.</，图也做的好。song setup 里面的design,enable countdown可以勾掉，甜歌不要倒数拉
lettel box感觉可以要也可以不要 hao

Normal
01:08:420 (1) - 头finish ok
01:46:754 (2) - 这个被前面那个挡着感觉不是很好看修改了0 0

SPOILER

02:27:087 (1) - 头finish fixed
02:30:754 (3) - 没包好，丑了 fixed
02:48:420 (1) - 不太好看，可以这样？修了下

SPOILER

02:59:587转盘这里开始 ok
03:37:754 (1) - finish fixed
03:48:420 (1) - ^ fixed

Hard
00:57:754 (1) - finish
01:08:420 (1) - ^
02:16:420 (1) - ^
02:27:086 (1) -^ 怎么这里都没加。。
于是听了听finish
01:13:754 (1) - 听了一下这里应该也有finish，别的难度也看看吧，finish全难度加的一样
02:09:754 (1) - 这儿也有
02:32:420 (1) - 这儿，BGM有的最好都加上，其他难度也是。。其他就不说了检查一下吧
all fixed, 可能是我耳朵不太好orz
Insane
01:27:087 (1) - 这不行，直接一个hitbrust盖住折返箭头 不知道放哪。。先看看别人怎么说0.0
02:52:587 (2) - 太上了。。 fixed

实在摸不出什么
其实normal段除了clap可以跟着音乐加点whistle，默认的不好找个自定义的或者用soft的默认 象征性地加了一些=v=
good luck

1. Source: "Ore wa Shoujo Mangaka R"
2. Tags suggetion
   "OP"
   "Slow Step -First Love Comes Again-"

1. 00:39:754 (3) - Ctrl+G is better
2. 00:53:754 (1,1) - delete the slider. and the spinner starts at 00:53:754
3. 01:13:087- add a note
4. 01:14:420 (2) - finish is necessary?
5. 01:36:420 (1) - remove NC
6. 02:37:754 (1) - end at 02:40:420
7. 03:15:087 (1,2,3) - avoid overlap
8. 03:54:754 (3,1) - ^
9. 03:59:087 (1) - end at 04:01:754

1. 00:43:087 (1,2) - this overlap is not good
2. 00:53:087- add a note
3. 01:02:587- ^
4. 01:03:754 (3,4) - this overlap is not good
5. 01:45:754 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:56:421 (1,2) - ^
7. 02:08:253 (2,3) - ^
8. 02:11:754- add a note
9. 02:30:753 (5,7) - avoid overlap
10. 02:37:920 (1) - end at 02:40:420- And, add note at 02:40:754
11. 03:14:754 (1,2) - avoid overlap
12. 03:56:087 (6,1) - ^
13. 03:59:087 (1) - end at 04:01:754
14. 03:59:087 (1) - add normal-hitfinish2.wav ?

1. 00:24:587 (1) - delete
2. 00:37:754 (1,2) - avoid overlap
3. 00:46:920 (1) - awkward. How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   262,203,46920,6,0,B|127:246|207:322|298:246|135:197,1,225.000008583069,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:40:420 (1) - it is better not to cover with before notes
5. 02:33:586 (1,2) - avoid overlap
6. 03:32:087 (2,1) - how about this?
   
7. 03:37:587 (2) - move to 03:37:420

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]

1. Source: "Ore wa Shoujo Mangaka R"
2. Tags suggetion
   "OP"
   "Slow Step -First Love Comes Again-" oh, all added, thank you~

[Normal]

1. 00:39:754 (3) - Ctrl+G is better fixed
2. 00:53:754 (1,1) - delete the slider. and the spinner starts at 00:53:754 just keep consistency with 00:51:087 (1) -
3. 01:13:087- add a note no vocal here
4. 01:14:420 (2) - finish is necessary? fixed
5. 01:36:420 (1) - remove NC fixed
6. 02:37:754 (1) - end at 02:40:420 vocal finished here
7. 03:15:087 (1,2,3) - avoid overlap maybe it doesnt matter
8. 03:54:754 (3,1) - ^ ^
9. 03:59:087 (1) - end at 04:01:754

vocal finished here
[Hard]

1. 00:43:087 (1,2) - this overlap is not good it's intentional, it flows well imo
2. 00:53:087- add a note it's intentional
3. 01:02:587- ^ ^
4. 01:03:754 (3,4) - this overlap is not good intentional
5. 01:45:754 (1,2) - ^ ^
6. 01:56:421 (1,2) - ^ ^
7. 02:08:253 (2,3) - ^ ^
8. 02:11:754- add a note ^
9. 02:30:753 (5,7) - avoid overlap it's for better flow
10. 02:37:920 (1) - end at 02:40:420- And, add note at 02:40:754 hmmm, same as normal
11. 03:14:754 (1,2) - avoid overlap fixed some
12. 03:56:087 (6,1) - ^ it's for better flow
13. 03:59:087 (1) - end at 04:01:754 same as normal
14. 03:59:087 (1) - add normal-hitfinish2.wav ? fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:24:587 (1) - delete the vocal starts here, and it's near the center of the screen so I think it won't be hard
2. 00:37:754 (1,2) - avoid overlap it flows well
3. 00:46:920 (1) - awkward. How about this? lol I prefer the old one. anyway, fixed a little
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   262,203,46920,6,0,B|127:246|207:322|298:246|135:197,1,225.000008583069,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:40:420 (1) - it is better not to cover with before notes fixed some
5. 02:33:586 (1,2) - avoid overlap intentional
6. 03:32:087 (2,1) - how about this? It follows the vocal
   
7. 03:37:587 (2) - move to 03:37:420 I'll reserve this suggestion, need test to find which is better

"normal-hitfinish2.wav" is fine!
nice hit-sound
~Good Luck~

• 指摘できるところがありません・・・完璧だと思います！

• 指摘できるところがありません・・・完璧だとおもいます！

1. 00:30:087 (2,3) - 突然距離が近くなりすぎて叩きづらく感じました。

1. 02:03:753 (3,4,5,6) - ここの連打の形に少し違和感を感じました。

1. 02:11:753 (3,4) - この二つのサークルを重ねるのはやめた方がいいと思います。

1. 02:24:086 (5,6) - 5と6の配置を逆にした方が僕は好きです。

1. 03:36:254 (9) - すこし距離が離れ過ぎな気がします

EnixYuki wrote:

はじめまして～♪
さっそくmoddingを初めて行きたいと思います。

[Normal]

• 指摘できるところがありません・・・完璧だと思います！

[Hard]

• 指摘できるところがありません・・・完璧だとおもいます！

[Insane]

1. 00:30:087 (2,3) - 突然距離が近くなりすぎて叩きづらく感じました。 (2)と(3)交換しました、いま流れが少しよくなるかも

1. 02:03:753 (3,4,5,6) - ここの連打の形に少し違和感を感じました。　このままでいいと思います

1. 02:11:753 (3,4) - この二つのサークルを重ねるのはやめた方がいいと思います。　ほかの配置を試して見たら、やはりこれでいいっとｗ

1. 02:24:086 (5,6) - 5と6の配置を逆にした方が僕は好きです。　nice idea!

配置

• 

1. 03:36:254 (9) - すこし距離が離れ過ぎな気がします　少し調整しました

すみません。あまり指摘できるところはありませんでした。
特にNormal,Hardは完璧だと感じました。
InsaneもDistance,配置ともにきれいでとても良いmapだと思います。個人的にも好きなmapなのでkudosuを投げておきます。
Rankedするよう応援しています

HelloSCV wrote:

M4M

General

1. consider increasing volumes little, too low that i can't here hitsounds :/

ok

Normal

nothing

Hard

00:53:733 - why don't you add note here? (if you fix this, 02:12:399 - add a note here too) it's intentional
01:30:400 (1) - finish ok
01:31:566 (3,4) - reverse rhythm follow the drum
01:54:066 (5,1) - same opnion with insane maybe too tight？ there is already two finish in this bar
02:49:066 (1,2,3) - same as insane I think its ok with the guitar, and to curve a such long slider is difficult for me orz._.
03:38:400 (1) - finish on start fixed

Insane

01:27:733 (1) - this slider's repeat arrow is hidden by previous hitburst (and you may know this is unrankable) fixed
01:54:065 (5) - add finish? fits nice (or at least add finish 01:54:399 (1) - here) ^hard
02:04:398 (3) - NC for consistence fixed
02:49:065 (1) - i think http://puu.sh/4uSVP.jpg this rhythm fits much better with guitar sound ^hard
03:05:066 - i recommend you to add a note with finish here,since rhythm is really strong that you
03:19:399 (4,1) - suddenly too big distance imo, it will be better if you decrease DS little ok
03:38:232 (2) - i'd rather move this note to 03:38:066 - here ok

good luck~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ epocsodielaK ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Try add some finish on downbeat,sound much better. added some according to the bgm
2. 03:38:400 - Unsnapped kiai time point by 1ms(Hard,Normal). fixed

[Insane]

1. 02:53:732 (2,3,4) - This is 1/3, not 1/4. fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:02:400 (5) - Offscreen,please move up. fixed
2. 02:08:899 (2) - Change a circle to 02:09:066 - sound much better,followed downbeat. replaced by a reverse slider, thus follow the vocal and downbeat at the same time
3. 02:50:066 (3) - Shorten to 1/1 and add a circle to 02:50:566 - .followed music. may be a little strange in testplay orz
4. 02:53:733 (5,6,7) - This is 1/3, not 1/4. fixed

Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~