1. Easy (2.15 stars, 97 notes)
2. Hard (4.89 stars, 266 notes)
3. Insane (4.84 stars, 337 notes)
4. Normal (4.02 stars, 150 notes)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Here's some suggestions:

Normal mode:
Try shrinking the slider at
00:07:219 to end at 00:07:219 instead of 00:07:560- I agree if I modify it, it's better to hear. But IMO, current rhythm seems easier to play. I'll consider about this one
00:09:265 - 00:09:435 instead of 00:09:606- ^
Same with slider at 00:12:674. Make the slider end at 00:12:844. Definitely will make it sound more in beat! - ^

And that's pretty much it! Awesome map you're making, keep it up! Thanks!

Hope this helps~!

Thanks for your attention!! and your praise makes me happy

[ Zzz ] wrote:

는 모딩하러왔어요 'ㅇㅁㅇ'..

M4M 요청을 하고싶지만.. 무시당할꺼같으니 그냥 모딩만해드리고 가죠 ㅠㅠ...(물론 제가 나쁜놈이니 ㅠㅠ..)

Easy

00:06:197 (1) - 슬라이더의 머리에 있는 피니시 제거

00:29:037 (5) - 슬라이더의 머리쪽에 피니시 추가해보시는건 ..?

00:11:651 (1) - 머리쪽에 피니시추가

00:14:037 (4) - 슬라이더의 꼬리쪽에 피니시추가

00:14:890 (1) - 피니시 추가

00:15:572 (1) - 피니시추가

00:15:912 (1) - 스피너에 피니시추가

00:22:560 (2) - 꼬리에 피니시제거

00:24:606 (1) - 피니시 있을탠데 그것도 제거

00:28:015 (4) - 이것도 제거

00:37:560 (1) - 머리에 피니시추가

00:47:106 (3) - 피니시 제거

00:50:174 (2) - 피니시 추가

01:08:924 (5) - 피니시 제거

01:25:969 (3) - 머리에 있는 피니시만 제거

01:27:844 (1) - 머리에 피니시 추가

01:28:526 (2) - 머리에 피니시 추가
이지 기준 히트사운드 ㅇㅅㅇ..
대충 다른난이도도 저리보고 잘들으면 피니시같은게있음 중간에 하나하나씩 그런거 보시고 넣어주시면 좋을듯
- 힛사쪽은 다 한번씩 들어보고 맘에드는것들 고쳤어요. 이지 말고 다른 난이도들은 차후 천천히 들으면서 고쳐볼게요. 상당히 많이고친듯!

그리고 노트 잡을깨 없어서 .. ㅁㄴㅇㄹ.. 하드만잡을깨요 ㅇㅁㅇ..

Hard

00:08:583 (4,1) - 하드에 저런 2.58 점프는 무리데스요 ..2.0정도로 수정.....

00:23:412 (4) - 인세인만 만들다오셔서 그런지는 모르겟는데 하드는 2.00 이상은 비추.. 1.7~1.8정도만 써도 .. ㄷㄷ한뎅.. 제가 생각하기엔 1.4~1.5가 가장 좋은거같아요 하드점프는 ㅇㅁㅇ.. 제생각으로요 ..- 일단 2.0까지는 유지해볼게요...[/color]

00:29:208 (4,5) - 이런거보다는

SPOILER

이런 슬라이더로 해주시면어떨까요..먼가 ㅇㅁㅇ.. 이것도 어울리는..모양을 정하는건 님이니 따라하지마세요..대충찍은거니 ㅇㅁㅇ..- 제 귀에는 단타 두개가 더 나아보이는... 패스

00:34:322 (3) - 점프 약간 줄여주셧으면 하지만 ㅇㅁㅇ..- 여기도 일단 보류...

00:34:748 (2) - 서클 추가해보시는건 어떨까요 .. -3연타는 결국 안쓰기로 했네요 ㅜㅜ 제안 더 들어오면 고칠게요

00:51:197 (6) - 2.00 .. 간격좀 ㅇㅁㅇ..- 일단은 2.0까지.... 너무 무리같으면 싹 고쳐야겠네요

00:59:123 (5) - 서클추가 - ^

01:04:322 (4) - 이런거 헷갈리지 않을까요? 하드치는사람들은요..... - 다른 하드들 봤을때 겹노트 좀 활용하는거같길래 넣어봤는데.... 문제될것 같으면 고쳐볼게요

01:12:674 (5,6) - 이것보다는

SPOILER

이런건 ..?물론 저런 슬라로하라는거지 저렇게 하라는건 아니에요 ㅇㅇ./.

01:23:753 (4) - 겹치지 마시고 다른모양으로 이어지게 해서 01:23:839 (5) - 여기 서클추가하시고 3연타 로 하시는건어떨까요 2연타 + 슬라 ㅇㅁㅇ- 3연타는 제외했고.... 겹노트를 쓰긴 했는데 좀더 읽기 편하게 바꿨어요


01:25:969 (1,2) - ㅁㄴㅇㄹ.. - ㅁㄴㅇㄹ...

01:28:952 (1) - 여기 있자나요.. 이리만들면 하드치는사람들 ..애먹어요 ㅇㅇ..제거하시고 01:29:037 (7) - 이렇게

SPOILER

3연타 슬라처럼 ㅇㅇ... - 굳굳

01:36:452 (2) - 할꺼면 연타로 해주시지 .. 슬라 밋밋함.. 치기도 힘들구요 ㅠㅠ.. 슬라이더 제거- ㅜ 노트로 대체

01:36:537 (2) - 여기에다가 서클추가만 해주세요!- ^

01:37:049 (5) - 제거하고 이전서클이랑 간격맟춰서 3연타 슬라로 ㅇㅇ.. 01:37:049 (5) - 여기다가

SPOILER

- 간격은 맞췄고.... 리버스는 왠지 아닌거같아서 놔뒀어요

01:37:390 (1) - 이거 이후로도 간격맟춰주시구요 이것도 간격맟춰주세요 ㅇㅅㅇ..일단 보류...

허접한 모딩 죄송.. 허접한 힛사모딩은 정말죄송... ㅠㅠ...

+Star

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:19:151 (1) - 삭제하세요. 스핀 다음이라 부담스럽기 때문.- 수정했어요
00:24:606 (1) - 리버스 1개 줄이시고, 남는 공간에 1/1 슬라 추가.- 수정했어요
01:01:424 (1,2) - 비슷한 삭제 의견- 수정했어요
01:18:469 (1,2) - (2) 치기가 초보자에게는 어려우니 그냥 슬라이더를 거기까지 연장시키세요- 수정했어요

Normal:

00:25:287 (3) - 피니시 삭제- 수정했어요
00:52:390 (3) - 시작에 피니시- 수정했어요
00:55:117 (2) - ^- 수정했어요
01:25:969 (1) - 이런 1/1 슬라이더를 리버스 까지 사용한거는 매우 어울리지 않아요- 수정했어요

Hard:

-- OD 너무 낮아요.- OD +1했어요

00:20:344 (1) - 여기서 급 뉴콤 시작은 어색해요- 수정완료
00:21:197 (1) - 뉴콤- 수정완료
00:39:947 (3) - 시작에 피니시- 수정완료
00:52:219 (3) - 리버스 피니시 - ^
00:55:117 (4) - 시작에 피니시 - ^
01:04:833 (1) - irc- 여기는 조금 더 생각해볼게요. 헷갈릴수는 있겠는데 어떻게 바꿔야될지를 모르겠네요
01:23:583 (3) - 뉴콤- 수정완료
01:30:742 (2) - 뉴콤- 수정완료

Insane:

00:07:816 (2,3) - 일반적으로 이렇게 겹치시면 스택이 발생해서 보기 안좋아요- 애매하게 펼치는거보다는 스택이 나을거라 생각해서.... 참고할게요
00:14:890 (1,1,1) - 굳이 뉴콤 하실 필요가 없는 듯 합니다. 그리고 롱놋이니 뉴콤 푸시는게 더 플레이에도 용이하구요- 유일하게 고집부리고 싶은 부분이네요 ㅜㅜ 이거 하려고 컬러 4개로 맞춘거라 일단 보류할게요
00:18:810 (1) - 끝에 피니시 지워주세요. 음악에 맞지 않아요- 수정완료
00:28:100 (2) - 삭제 부탁합니다 오버매핑. 00:28:611 오히려 넣는다면 여기에,,- 수정완료
00:35:515 (5,6) - 앞뒤 간격을 맞춰주세요- 수정완료
00:37:901 (2,3) - ^- 수정완료
00:41:140 (5) - 간격을,,- 수정완료
00:59:549 (1,1,1,1) - 앞의 뉴콤과 같은 의견- ^
01:00:742 (2) - 이전 뉴콤들 다 지우고 여기서 뉴콤 시작
01:25:969 (1,1) - 약간 안어울리는 짧은 간격 같네요- 수정완료
01:26:992 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제- 수정완료
01:30:912 (2) - 노트 삭제- 수정완료
01:29:719 (1,1,1) - 뉴콤 삭제 - ^
01:37:390 (1) - 다음 노트랑 좀 가까워서 헷갈리네요~

Irreversible wrote:

Hi! Now you finally receive my mod,

[General]

Check your tags please. - um I think it is correct
18810 <- delete this timing line, you have it twice. - fixed

[Insane]

Well, the insane has pretty much stuff in it. It's great to play, nevertheless i suggest some 'breaking' points: For example, making this 00:23:753 (6) - longer and delete the next circle. It would create a nice follow with the vocal, and gives the player some rest too! Try to involve stuff like this.- oh I agree. so I reduce overall difficulty(not OD lol) before KIAI. But still I need to have some time to come up with ideas on this part thanks

00:06:708 (2,3) - Try to create a better blanket here? Just move the circle like that, that it looks better with the slider.
00:07:390 (1,2,3) - hmm.. i don't really like this pattern, but i like it as well.. xDD it just might be confusing, because.. yeah. - I remapped beginig part
00:18:810 (1) - If you move this a bit to the left, and a bit to the top you can create a nice looking pattern with the next slider (3). Just for aestethics- ^
00:19:833 (1) - Move this a bit downwards, i don't like it if it's so near! :O But up to you, of course- Fixed
00:26:992 (1,2,3) - These three sliders should look the same, so you have to change slider 1. - Fixed
00:31:935 (7) - This is so near to the top >< try to get it down somehow! Maybe just move everything a bit downwards.- Fixed
00:31:765 (6,7,1) - This jump.. well. It's okay for playing, but it's a bit too stressed for a moment like this. As i suggested above, i think about some' breaking' time here. Consider changing it!- umm... maybe yes... but I don't have idea... I'll fix here when I made it
01:01:594 (2) - Blanket: x: 188 y:32 - Fixed
01:12:162 (3,3) - Please watch out for stacking like these.- is it strange? 0.o... I'll consider it
01:23:924 (1) - Fix this blanket as well please, for the same reasons as above - Fixed
01:31:935 (3,4,5,6) - Weird flow. The reason that the slider 2 is going down, and circle 3 is just upwards, well, i don't really like it. What about moving everything to a nice 'bow' ?- Fixed

[Hard]

00:08:242 (3,4,1) - Even if you're watching to the DS here, i suggest incraesing it a bit. It will look better in the gameplay if you move it a bit .. with a greater DS.http://puu.sh/3gsBg.jpg Take this for an idea.- lol. actually, I fixed this yesterday to make DS shorter... but maybe I have to restore Fixed
00:09:776 (3,1) - This has a very bad flow. It sounds nice, but the slider is going to the right, and the path of the mouse won't be very smooth. Try some direction changes please!- Fixed
00:26:992 (1,2,3) - Is it on purpose that you don't use the same DS between them?- mistake lol Fixed
00:29:208 (4,5) - Ctrl + G for better flow?- Fixed
00:30:742 (1) - For a better blanket, move the first white point a bit.- Fixed
00:54:265 (1) - I think a smaller, reversed slider would fit pretty good to the vocals!- Fixed
00:59:208 (1) - This NC is useless, isn't it? Remove it please.- Fixed
01:37:901 (1) - Just some suggestion, maybe you like it! http://puu.sh/3gsLN.jpg (for a better effect, you could increase slider velocity there.)- Fixed

[Normal]

00:32:447 (2,3) - Well, it's a normal. A player might need some rest here, because he has to click very much. Try delete 00:32:447 (2,3) - and add a single circle 00:32:787 (2) - here! - Fixed
00:34:833 (1,2,3) - Maybe it's just me, but wrong DS. Fix it please, it should be the same over the whole map.- Fixed
00:41:310 (3) - Ciould you please make a nice blanket here? I know i'm annoying, but i want it clean If it's on purpose and you have your reasons, leave it please.- no I love this kind of suggestion lol
01:02:787 (4) - Try to move this a bit to the left, it's so near to eachother >< don't forget to check everything if you did it- Fixed

Someone should check the sliders, i don't know if they are rankable.. o.o Well, maybe they are.

[Easy]

00:08:242 (1) - 1 grid to the right, and you have a nice blanket ~- Fixed
Well, there are not many issues here, mainly the blankets, go over your diff again and fix them please! I think you should be able to do that.- I'll check it again thanks

good luck

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

제가 병싄임다.
허접하지만 모딩 해보겠슴다
지극히 주관적인 모딩이라 전혀 반영하지 않으셔도 됩니다.
저퀄 모딩 죄송함돠.

Easy

00:06:197 (1) - 머리에 피니시를 추가해보시는건 어떨런지 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ

00:08:242 (1) - 마지막 꼬리 피니시 제거 하심이...

00:32:106 (4) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:34:492 (3) - 중간 부분 피니시 제거

00:36:197 (5) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:37:560 (1) - 꼬리부분 피니시 제거

00:43:015 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:45:742 (2) - 머리부분 피니시 대신 클랩을...

00:46:765 (3) - 클랩 넣으셔도 될듯

00:51:537 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

00:55:117 (2) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

00:56:651 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

01:03:469 (2) - 클랩 추가

01:04:492 (2) - 클랩 제거

01:04:833 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거 -> 클랩 추가

01:08:242 (4) - 꼬리부분 클랩 제거

01:08:924 (5) - 머리부분 클랩 추가

01:18:469 (1) - 끝 부분 피니시 추가

01:22:560 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

01:29:378 (1,2,3) - 클랩 제거 -> 피니시 추가

01:37:390 (1) - 피니시 추가

01:37:901 (1) - 클랩 제거 -> 끝부분 피니시 추가

01:38:583 (1) - 클랩 제거 -> 끝부분 피니시 추가

Normal

00:08:924 (1) - 피니시 제거

00:10:799 (5) - 머리 피니시 제거

00:12:674 (3) - 중간 부분 피니시 추가

00:21:197 (1) - 피니시 제거

00:23:242 (6) - 꼬리부분 피니시 제거

00:26:651 (1) - 피니시 제거

00:28:015 (4) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:30:060 (1) - 클랩 추가

00:30:401 (2) - 머리부분 클랩 제거

00:32:106 (1) - 피니시 제거

00:34:833 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:36:197 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:39:947 (1) - 클랩 제거 -> 피니시 추가

00:44:378 (3) - 머리 부분 피니시 제거

00:45:742 (1) - 피니시 제거

00:49:833 (3) - 피니시 제거

00:50:856 (5) - 피니시 추가

00:53:753 (5) - 꼬리부분 피니시 추가

00:54:265 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

01:03:469 (3) - 피니시 제거

01:06:197 (3) - 피니시 제거

01:07:560 (1) - 피니시 제거

01:11:481 (3) - 피니시 추가

01:11:822 (4) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

01:12:333 (5) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

01:14:378 (5) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

01:15:060 (6) - 중간부분 피니시 추가

01:15:742 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

01:17:106 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

01:22:560 (3) - 피니시 제거

01:23:242 (5) - 피니시 제거

01:24:947 (2) - 중간 부분 피니시 추가

01:25:969 (1) - 꼬리부분 피니시 추가

01:26:992 (2) - 피니시 추가

01:27:844 (4) - 피니시 추가

01:28:185 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

01:28:526 (2) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

01:29:378 (1,2,3,4) - 피니시 추가

01:30:742 (1) - 피니시 추가

01:37:390 (1) - 피니시 추가

01:37:901 (1) - 꼬리부분 피니시 추가

01:38:583 (1) - 꼬리부분 피니시 추가

Hard

00:08:924 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:09:776 (3) - 중간부분 피니시 추가

00:12:844 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

00:21:197 (1) - 피니시 제거

00:23:924 (2) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:25:287 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:26:651 (6) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:32:106 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:34:833 (2) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:36:197 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:41:310 (4) - 중간부분 피니시 제거

00:44:378 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:45:742 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:59:549 (1) - 피니시 추가

01:00:231 (1,1) - 피니시 추가

01:07:390 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

01:08:753 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

01:18:299 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

01:21:878 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

01:27:844 (4) - 꼬리부분 피니시 추가

01:29:378 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - 피니시 추가

01:37:390 (1) - 피니시 추가

01:37:901 (1,1) - 꼬리부분 피니시 추가

Insane

00:08:924 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:10:117 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

00:12:844 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

00:21:197 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:23:753 (6) - 꼬리부분 피니시 제거

00:34:833 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:36:197 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:38:753 (1) - 피니시 추가

00:43:015 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:44:378 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:45:060 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:45:742 (3) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:49:833 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 제거

00:51:026 (8) - 꼬리부분 피니시 추가

00:51:537 (1) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

00:59:208 (3) - 꼬리부분 피니시 추가

00:59:549 (1) - 피니시 추가

01:00:231 (1) - 피니시 추가

01:18:299 (1) - 꼬리부분 피니시 제거

01:25:117 (5) - 피니시 추가

01:29:378 (1,1,1,1,1) - 피니시 추가

01:31:083 (2) - 머리부분 피니시 추가

01:31:765 (2) - 피니시 추가

01:37:390 (1) - 피니시 추가

01:38:072 (2) - 피니시 추가

01:38:753 (2) - 피니시 추가

허접한 모딩 죄송해요 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ;
GOOD LUCK!

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Hello

Easy
AR-1? - Fixed
00:59:378 (1) - spinner too short for an easy diff.. - Fixed
01:34:662 (1) - ^ - Fixed
Normal
00:09:265 (2) - remove 1 repeat - Fixed
00:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - make the angle between the objects 90 degree https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817109 - Fixed
Hard
00:43:356 (1,2) - maybe make it like this? - Fixed
00:46:253 (2,3) - ^ - Fixed
00:50:003 (1,2,3) - maybe make it like this?- umm I wanna leave here
01:15:572 (6) - move to (264,268) - Fixed
01:23:924 (3,1) - swap NC - Fixed
Insane
HPDrain +1, OD +1 - Fixed
01:06:537 (2) - put this one further away, the anti-jump doesn't really fit in this part

- Fixed
good luck with the map!

Heanday wrote:

Hi, from My Modding Queue

[Easy]

General : You must delete all timing session useless

First Play ( i did 100 here 01:03:469 (1) - ) This circle is a bit high, well it's funny to play, just something suprised me, just WHYY, you're clap is same than hitnormal ? Change it ! ?_? does my hitcalp is same as hitnormal?

00:39:606 (2) - I don't understand the rythm here ? I think you can found better, rework it please- Fixed
01:25:117 (2) - here you must change try this rythm http://puu.sh/3pA5A.jpg, then add clap at the end- Fixed

Hitsound :

00:12:674 (2) - end slider need a clap
00:14:890 (1,2,3) - revoke these clap, they are whistle.
00:20:174 (2) - revers need a whistle
00:21:537 (3) - need clap
00:28:015 (4) - Whistle
00:34:492 (3) - remove clap early slider, add clap end slider
00:45:742 (2) - remove clap early slider
00:56:651 (1) - Well, remove clap end slider, add clap at revers
00:58:015 (2) - Same !
00:59:378 (1) - Spinner need a finish
01:03:469 (1) - Whistle this one
01:20:174 (2) - clap
01:20:856 (4) - clap
01:23:924 (1) - hmm, it's not a finish here, change it by whistle
01:25:117 (2) - missing finish early slider
01:28:526 (2) - remove clap early slider, add clap at the end
01:29:378 (1,2,3) - add clap
01:31:424 (4) - whistle
01:31:935 (1) - spinner clap
01:34:662 (1) - remove clap this is a whistle
01:37:901 (1) - remove clap end slider, add whistle

What i like :

Cool patern, easy to read, you follow voice sometimes without ruin the beat.-Thanks

What i dislike :

Nothing :3

Tips for improve :

I think you can add clap at tickrate, for creates a better rythm, and creates more funny curve at sliders ( btw they are just suggestion ) - T.T actually, I'm just super NOOOOOB on hitsounding... I'll consider about this one, but maybe it is too hard for me now

It's a cool map, good job on this one.

Well go for the next :3

[Normal]

First Play Hmm, i don't know what i'm suposed to think about this one, well i think it's almost perfect.

General : Same, delete useless timing session - I'll fix it tomorrow

00:32:787 (3,4) - need a circle between, sonds strange here- umm...

Sorry like easy, i can't mod patern, rythm + hitsound, and as you can see, this mapset got many problem about hitsound, this problem waste a lit you're map in my opinion, well, gonna help you a lot, then it's ok. I won't let one mistake about hitsound ! :Osorry T....T my hitsounding is just lowest level

Hitsound :

Well
00:07:219 (3) - early slider clap, end slider whistle
00:08:242 (5) - early slider whisle
00:09:265 (2) - same, early slider clap, end slider whistle
00:10:799 (5) - whistle
00:14:890 (1,2,3) - revoke them clap they are whistle ~~
00:20:174 (3) - Clap
00:23:242 (6) - Hmm, at revers why you added finish ? i can't hear this
00:28:015 (4) - same, i can't hear finish here. ( You need to use whistle if you want to follow voice, not finish, well i think you know it, it's just a mistake
00:34:833 (1) - same it's a whistle, not a finish
00:36:197 (3) - same ! Finish are for stuff like this one => 00:37:560 (1) -
00:37:901 (2) - early slider clap
00:48:469 (1) - revoke finish
00:52:390 (3,4) - remove clap here, add whistle at early slid
00:55:117 (2) - remove clap
00:55:799 (3) - remove clap early slid, add clap at the end
00:57:844 (3) - remove clap add whistle ~~
00:59:378 (1) - add finish at spinner
01:10:287 (1) - remove clap
01:11:822 (4) - add clap end slider
01:14:378 (5) - Whistle early slider
01:25:969 (1) - finish end slider
01:26:992 (2) - clap
01:27:333 (3) - clap end slider
01:28:185 (1) - remove clap early sldier, add clap end slider
01:28:526 (2) - remove clap early slider
01:29:378 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - no no no no no, and no it's => 1 2 3 4 whistle, 2 & 4 clap, slider green n°1 early slider finish, end slider clap & circle 2 whistle.
01:31:935 (1) - clap
01:34:662 (1) - remove clap, add finish
01:37:901 (1) - end slider finish
01:38:583 (1) - end slider remove clap

What i like :

Finaly good rythm, good flow, well i think this one is okay- thanks

What i dislike :

Nothing

Tips for Improve :

Same, like easy, clap tickrate, and hmm, curve souds good on this one, it's better

[Hard]

First play Oh, you are good at mapping hard, realy, funny one ( missed here 01:15:572 (6) - ) But it's my fault i was a lit bad ><

00:23:753 (1) - well, this jump don't fits with the music, no reason, just snap this one- Fixed
00:27:333 (2) - ctrl g ? better flow- Fixed
01:04:833 (1) - care about this ! Hidden revers unrankable - Fixed

Well, i skip hitsound for this one -.- i passed to much time with easy and normal, but, sounds good i think.

;--; my ears

[Insane]

sonds good for me too xD sorry too tired, but realy this one is awesome good job on it thanks :0

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, From my queue

Your map is really perfect for newbies, but i just got one general:-

General: Why the Hard diff is harder than Insane? o_o
---------------
You deserve a star ~ Good Luck =) >NO KUDO PLS<

Heanday wrote:

Star~

1. Good!

1. I think the following rhythm is better
   　●00:51:537 (2) - end at 00:52:219
   　●00:52:390 (3) - end at 00:52:901
   　●00:54:265 (1) - end at 00:54:947
   　●00:55:117 (2) - end at 00:55:628

1. the following looks better
   　●00:27:333 (2) - move to x:316 y:288
   　●00:27:674 (3) - move to x:280 y:368
2. 00:44:378 (1,3) - stack both sliders end
3. 00:59:037 (4,5) - At 00:59:378-, adding a note is better. How about transposing 00:59:037 (4) - and 00:59:208 (5) - ?

1. The star difficullty of Insane is smaller than Hard-diff's. I recommend to make Insane-diff more difficult
2. 00:33:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about this symmetric layout?
   
   SPOILER

   

   340,92,33810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   269,175,33981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   238,70,34151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   370,196,34322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   167,153,34492,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:11:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do you intend to make regular hexagonal shape at this part? If yes, I suggest to use Ctrl+Shift+D

RandomEffect wrote:

Hi~
From my queue!

[Easy]

1. Good!

[Normal]

1. I think the following rhythm is better
   　●00:51:537 (2) - end at 00:52:219
   　●00:52:390 (3) - end at 00:52:901
   　●00:54:265 (1) - end at 00:54:947
   　●00:55:117 (2) - end at 00:55:628-Sorry... wanna keep here. I'll think more

[Hard]

1. the following looks better
   　●00:27:333 (2) - move to x:316 y:288-Fixed
   　●00:27:674 (3) - move to x:280 y:368-Fixed
2. 00:44:378 (1,3) - stack both sliders end-Fixed
3. 00:59:037 (4,5) - At 00:59:378-, adding a note is better. How about transposing 00:59:037 (4) - and 00:59:208 (5) - ?-Fixed

[Insane]

1. The star difficullty of Insane is smaller than Hard-diff's. I recommend to make Insane-diff more difficult- umm.. I think it doesn't matter
2. 00:33:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about this symmetric layout?-Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

   340,92,33810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   269,175,33981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   238,70,34151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   370,196,34322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   167,153,34492,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:11:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do you intend to make regular hexagonal shape at this part? If yes, I suggest to use Ctrl+Shift+D- does it seem strange? O.o I usually map with 10 inch laptop.. so maybe I missed a lot of nazi things....

~Good luck~

EmingK wrote:

Hi, from queue

red=unrankable
purple=should fix
black=i think is better
gray=ignore this

[General]
Tags: aplique -> applique - Fixed
Consider add video- okay.. I'll consider this

[Easy]
00:31:765 (3,4) - make perfect blanket - Fixed
00:39:606 (4,1) - ^ - Fixed
00:37:560 (1) - whistle on slider- umm .. I 'll think this more

[Normal]
00:23:242 (6,1) - make perfect blanket - Fixed
00:38:412 (3,4) - ^ - Fixed
00:40:287 (2,3) - ^ - Fixed
01:25:969 (1,2) - ^ - Fixed
00:51:537 (2) - move to x:492 y:144 - Fixed
01:02:787 (2) - move to x:344 y:288 - Fixed

[Hard]
00:22:049 (1,2) - make perfect blanket - Fixed
00:57:674 (3,1) - ^ - Fixed
00:23:924 (2) - coincide with 00:22:560 (2) 's tail - Fixed
00:46:765 (5) - clap- there is already clap D:

[Insane]
4.84 star not scientific - lol
00:12:674 (5,1) - make perfect blanket - Fixed
00:38:753 (1,2) - ^ - Fixed
00:56:651 (3) - NC should start here so exchange with 00:56:481 (1) - Fixed
01:23:242 (4,1) - exchange NC

- sorry. I cut NC on 4 / 4 jumps

Good luck!

DELiS wrote:

from #modreq~

[General]

• 
  nothing

[Insane]

00:26:310 - sound suggestion- I wanna keep here break

SPOILER

00:41:481 (7) - placement suggestion,move to x:256 y:104- T.T sorry I like current one
00:51:197 (6,1) - move to 2glid left ~ - Fixed~
00:56:481 (4) - NC ~ and 00:56:651 (1) - Remove NC - current one seems better cuz to emphasize square IMO lol
01:05:685 (4) - awkward slider.. please consider change>< - Fixed~
01:31:935 (3) - NC? - Fixed~

00:14:038 (4) - finish on the head? - umm... I'll think about this
00:29:378 (6) - finish - Fixed~
00:37:560 (1) - finish on the head - Fixed~
00:38:753 (1) - ^ - Fixed
00:39:947 (4) - ^ - Fixed
01:26:651 (3) - ^ - Fixed
01:27:844 (4) - ^ - Fixed
01:28:526 (6) - ^ - Fixed

[Hard]

00:21:026 (1) -NC and 00:21:197 (1) - Remove NC~ - sorry. I'll keep it
00:50:685 (4,5) - sound suggestion - Fixed

SPOILER

01:06:197 - hmm.. sound suggest for better flow - hmm.... I'll consider this one when other moders mention about this

SPOILER

[Normal]

00:58:867 (4) - add this slider?- sorry I think it needs some break

SPOILER

01:31:424 (2) - change to this slider?- ^

SPOILER

01:37:390 (1) - delete and add slider start at 01:37:049 - Fixed

SPOILER

[Easy]

00:58:015 (2) - delete clap and add finish on the slider head - Fixed

nice map~
sorry poor english ww
good luckヾ(*'∀`*)ﾉ

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Majority Good >.o /
Nicely mapped

[Easy]
01:20:174 (2) - DS - Fixed

[Normal]
01:20:174 (2) - May confuse a littleum? O.o I think you were just confused when you post lol

[Hard]
00:51:197 (6) - A little closer from last note, looks like it suddenly jumps - Fixed

[Insane]
>.o)b

Feels like it can be ranked, good luck!

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Alarido wrote:

Please don't kd this post.

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No General issues to point.

* And no complaints for [Easy], [Normal], [Hard] and [Insane]. ♥ In truth, your map is the most perfect one I found this week (: ♥

I feel you may call a BAT to take a look here, a testplay etc...

Deserves a Star!

Att.

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~ from #modreqs~

[General]

1. Combo colours could be better. Try matching the background colours more?T.T maybe my eyes are not good at judging good colors ... Can u recommend some of them?
2. 01:31:935 - Suggest you end your Kiai time here.- Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:08:242 (3,4) - Adding whistle to the beginning of these sliders sounds really nice.- Fixed
2. 00:30:231 (1) - New combo is useless~- Fixed
3. 01:04:833 (1,4) - Stack ends properly. Also, the same of 01:05:685 (4) - makes the flow pretty bad, maybe recreate this slider with a different design.- Fixed
4. 01:12:844 (7,8,1) - Stack it better.- Fixed
5. 01:28:952 (7) - Bad to start this on a 1/4. Shorten 01:28:526 (6) - by 1/4 so it ends at 01:28:782 - and your repeat slider starts at 01:28:867 - - Fixed
6. 01:37:390 (1) - Remove clap.

- Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:26:992 - No whistles here like the Insane? Maybe add them in.
2. 00:29:208 (4) - Remove finish, 00:29:378 (5) - Add finish, then it will be consistent with the Insane.- Fixed

[Normal]

1. I suggest you follow this difficulties use of whistles and do the same for your other difficulties. - applied! But I cannot sure my whistles are in right place lol

rest is fine :3
Good luck~

DarknessAngel wrote:

A ticket for a full mod.


[General]

Where is your video !!!!!????? maybe it is crying somewhere because you missed it, call it back please OAQ - added


[Easy]

AR+1, AR2 is quite slow since you make many 1/1 beats to connect the object, 3 is better for me.

00:34:492 (3) - move it two grid left to make 00:33:810 (1,2,3) a consistent spacing. Don't forget to adjust 00:35:856 (4) a bit bcause of spacing changing.

00:37:560 (1) - obviously, there is a symbal. seens you miss a finish on the slider's head.

01:31:424 (4) - why you let the volume down ? the beat itself is as heavy as 01:29:378 (1,2,3). A sudden volume change feels wired.

01:34:662 (1) - end the spinner at 01:37:390 -, because the beat at 01:37:390 is much heavier than 01:37:049 one. when you can just follow one of two beats, you should follow the heavier one, it fits the music better.


[Normal]

00:31:424 (4) - put it to (76,256) and move third point of slider to (108,152) for making a perfect blanket with 00:32:106 (1).

00:32:787 (3) - move it two grid left for spacing consistency.

00:51:197 (1) - let me tell you my feeling about the finish sound. you may notice that the beat at 00:51:537 is MUCH STRONGER than 00:51:197 (1). So obviously, I would change the finish to 00:51:537 (2)'s head if I were you, but not at 00:51:197 (1). hey look, this change makes the song more different, it's about "the effect for emphasis". I would like to see how you use finish for this part for every diff.

00:51:197 (1) - move it to (480,48) for consistent spacing.

00:53:753 (5,1) - and so are their finish sounds, you know what I mean, right ?

01:05:515 (2) - move slider's second point to (128,316), third point to (180,320) for a blanket with 01:05:174 (1).

01:18:128 (4) - nazi but, move it to (248,128) is much better for me because 01:17:106 (3,4,1) spacings would be consistent after you changed it.

01:28:526 (2) - move third point of slider to (76,256) for a blanket with 01:29:719 (2). you may worry about the spacing change between 01:28:526 (2,1) since you NCed 01:29:378 (1) then it can warn a jump.

01:37:901 (1,1) - since you have emphasized those heavy beat by using NC. Why not use jump a bit for emphasizing more ? :p let's get some fun.


[Insane]

00:22:049 (4,5) - according to your normal spacing 1.0x, I don't think it is a time that you reduce the spacing here. move 00:22:049 (4) to (472,616) ; 00:22:219 (5) to (428,136) for a best solution.

00:32:958 (5) - move it to (264,284) in order to stack on 00:31:594 (6)'s head perfectly.

00:42:503 (3) - ctrl + j, h, g (3 steps) and then move it to (244,344) for a better flow.

01:05:685 (4) - move it to (385,267) for a perfect stacking with 01:04:833 (1)'s tail. And then move 01:05:685 (4)'s third point to (260,144) for consistency with your normal spacing (I know you can not replace 01:06:197 (1) because you want to stack it with 01:07:731 (4), 01:08:753 (1),01:09:265 (5)). Unreasonable reducing spacing is awkward to play, and doesn't fit the song at all.

01:14:037 (4) - ctrl + h, j and then put it to (76,48). It's much better for me, how does it feel ?

01:17:447 (2) - I would appreciate if you remake the slider like this. It would reduce some stress from right hand during moving though.


[Hard]

00:13:356 (2) - let me nazi a bit :p, move third point of the slider to (336,176) to make a better blanket with 00:12:844 (1)'s tail, like this.

00:21:197 (1) - this short NC doesn't make sense cuz I don't see any thing need to emphasize. If you still need to keep the NC exisit, move 00:21:537 (2,3) to (136,72) to make a jump, then the NC has a reason "emphasize the jump" to keep it. Or you should remove it.

00:28:697 (3) - notice this, move it to (344,156) to make 00:28:015 (1,2,3) a pritteir shape. It would be like this after you did it. Also don't forget to replace 00:29:208 (4,5) as well (:

00:57:162 (2) - move the last point of slider to (256,124) to make a better blanket with 00:56:651 (1)'s tail. you just need to select 00:57:674 (3,1,2) then adjust them a bit for wrong spacing after you change it.

00:59:549 (1) - you don't need to NC here cuz the beats for 00:59:378 (1,1) is togerther, I feel more make sense when the NC is removed.

01:22:902 (1,1) - Both NCs are unecessary, if you need a NC for helping reading, 01:23:583 (1) is enough.

01:29:037 (1) - there is unreasonable to add NC here since there is no strong beat, jump or something related. the heavy beats you want to emphasize start at 01:29:378 (1), not 01:29:037 (1).



About your hitsound : Check your all diffs to have your finish sounds consistent and look for some modders checking for whistles (A major problem about the hitsounds) seens enough.