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Tsukiko - EVERLASTING BLUE (Cut Ver.)

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Fia
Topic Starter
Fia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年8月30日 at 15:04:10

Artist: Tsukiko
Title: EVERLASTING BLUE (Cut Ver.)
Source: AQUA
Tags: Flower Eggache0 sorahane TINKERBELL Ts8zs Sun Rainbow
BPM: 170
Filesize: 10137kb
Play Time: 02:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. AQUA (5 stars, 550 notes)
  2. Hard (4.66 stars, 257 notes)
  3. LUKAS (5 stars, 464 notes)
  4. Rainbow's Normal (2.98 stars, 122 notes)
  5. Ts8zs' Easy (1.76 stars, 105 notes)
  6. WIND (4.98 stars, 366 notes)
Download: Tsukiko - EVERLASTING BLUE (Cut Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy - Finished! by Ts8zs
Normal - Finished! by Sun Rainbow
Hard - Finished!
WIND(light Insane) - Finished! by Eggache0
LUKAS(challenging Insane) - Finished! by Flower
AQUA(Extra) - Finished!
Storyboard - Finished!
Last edited by Fia , edited 56 times in total.
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
以后WIND更新我直接PM你 就不post了
Azer
World Cup Organiser
1,107 posts
Joined December 2012
Azer
m4m :D

AQUA
  1. Oh god lower the OD
  2. 00:02:584 - Change the pattern and add a note here.
  3. 01:11:495 (3) 01:14:319 (3) 01:16:613 (1) 01:18:025 (1) 01:27:907 (1) 01:34:084 (3) 01:36:907 (3) 01:39:201 (1) 01:42:025 (1) 01:48:201 (3) - These are all sliders that I think you should make a little shorter and snap to 1/2. I think it would improve the flow of your map but it's optional though.
  4. 01:56:495 - HR users will most likely fail here with all this gap of nothingness. I suggest fitting a spinner somewhere.

WIND
  1. 00:02:495 (4) - Same problem as AQUA diff.
  2. 01:48:731 (1) - Snap it to 1/2
  3. 01:57:554 (1,2,3) to the end - slightly offsync

There's honestly not much to mod, it's already pretty good apart from maybe a little offsync timing and over the top OD.
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio

AzerFrost wrote:

m4m :D

WIND
  1. 00:02:495 (4) - Same problem as AQUA diff. fixed
  2. 01:48:731 (1) - Snap it to 1/2 will consider
  3. 01:57:554 (1,2,3) to the end - slightly offsync ...no


There's honestly not much to mod, it's already pretty good apart from maybe a little offsync timing and over the top OD.
thanks for mod.
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Title has to be EVERLASTING BLUE (Short Ver.)
UnitedWeSin
889 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Hey!
Timing as requested on the:

Mapper Help Team



Timing

Code
138394,352.941176470588,4,2,1,30,1,0
139077,352.941176470588,4,2,1,30,1,0
139803,352.941176470588,4,2,1,30,1,0
141220,340.909090909091,4,2,1,30,1,0
142919,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
144272,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
144605,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
144980,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
145396,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
145813,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0

Try using a spinner at 02:25:813 as the music fades out. Also try decreasing volume gradually towards the end.

I hope this timing can work for you. -.-

Really nice SB. :)
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Still, erase the space between Blue and (Short Ver.)
lupcha
62 posts
Joined October 2012
lupcha
Hello! "Mod from my queue!" - is what I would like to say, but I played it a few times and there's nothing to say except that it's a LOT of fun and the SB is really nice. Oh and I thought it was a bit weird that LUKAS was the only Diff without a fully mapped ending. I think it would be better to complete it like the other maps.

Yeah, I'm really sorry, but the map is pretty much perfect to me. Everything flows really nice and the Hitsounds are well done too. /falls to the ground _(：3 」∠ )_ Take this star instead. (ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
OEvil
299 posts
Joined December 2012
OEvil
[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[General]
Background
bg1.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
bg2.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

Folder Size
This folder's size is 11.7 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video.

[Skin/SB]
Codeless SB Elements
bg1.jpg
bg2.jpg

Missing Skin Files
section-fail.png

Multiple .osb Files
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).

SB Elements Not .png
Make All the pictures .png and you can use Format Factory
sb\sb11.jpg
sb\sb19.jpg
sb\sb18.jpg
sb\sb24.jpg
sb\sb12.jpg
sb\sb21.jpg
sb\sb01.jpg
sb\sb22'.jpg
sb\white2.jpg
sb\sb2o.jpg
sb\sb06.jpg
sb\sb17.jpg
sb\sb08.jpg
sb\sb1o.jpg
sb\sb23.jpg
sb\sb02.jpg
sb\sb15.jpg
bg1.jpg
sb\sb16.jpg
sb\sb04.jpg
sb\sb07.jpg
bg2.jpg
sb\sb05.jpg
sb\sb22.jpg
sb\sb09.jpg
sb\sb03.jpg
sb\sb13.jpg
sb\sb14.jpg

[AQUA]
Breaks
00:24:275 - The break here is 18965 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.

[Hard]
Breaks
00:24:275 - The break here is 18665 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.
Consider adding a break before 02:12:940.

[LUKAS]
Breaks
00:24:275 - The break here is 20377 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
02:18:428 - snap to 02:18:394

[WIND]
Breaks
00:24:275 - The break here is 18815 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.

Spinner New Combo
01:29:016 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

Stack Leniency
The stack leniency is set to 0.2, which is below the recommended leniency of 0.3
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[General]
Background
bg1.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
bg2.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

Folder Size
This folder's size is 11.7 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video.
I think it's fine

[Skin/SB]
Missing Skin Files
section-fail.png
may fix

Multiple .osb Files
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).
oops

SB Elements Not .png
Make All the pictures .png and you can use Format Factory
sb\sb11.jpg
sb\sb19.jpg
sb\sb18.jpg
sb\sb24.jpg
sb\sb12.jpg
sb\sb21.jpg
sb\sb01.jpg
sb\sb22'.jpg
sb\white2.jpg
sb\sb2o.jpg
sb\sb06.jpg
sb\sb17.jpg
sb\sb08.jpg
sb\sb1o.jpg
sb\sb23.jpg
sb\sb02.jpg
sb\sb15.jpg
bg1.jpg
sb\sb16.jpg
sb\sb04.jpg
sb\sb07.jpg
bg2.jpg
sb\sb05.jpg
sb\sb22.jpg
sb\sb09.jpg
sb\sb03.jpg
sb\sb13.jpg
sb\sb14.jpg
It's ok to use jpg imo

Breaks
no
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
大坑比也有填坑之时 头顶青天泪流满面 感觉都要怪15
mkodds from PM

[Rainbow's normal]

OD3就行 star不用强压到3了……
超长转盘实在炫酷 建议换成节奏 然后HP3CS3OD3（狂压一波星 爽

00:05:723 (1) - 卧槽前面节奏好好的怎么变成spinner了 别啊 试试
00:07:487 (1) - ……别这样
00:53:723 (1) - 去nc
00:54:958 (2) - 白线起
01:00:781 (4,5,6,7,1) - 吓哭 normal下这种梗……
01:15:252 (5) - 尾巴压好
01:24:605 (6) - 卧槽 为啥吞重音啊

kiai段我完全没看懂 感觉用了好多hard才该用的梗 没必要做这么难啊 已经有一个简单向hard了吧
啊对了 后面似乎需要红线一致 虽然没东西

[Hard]

感觉通篇偷懒 服

00:12:781 (1,2,3) - 不顺滑（啥
00:58:311 (2,3,4) - 2和4压上了 最好别这样
01:12:075 (1) -

感觉截图部分好nsfw啊
01:16:840 (5,6,7,8) - 莫名 感觉可以做更好
02:22:919 - slider声能静音么

[WIND]

简直看不下去 建议remap

[LUKAS]

先拜花花神鬼畜麻婆

01:18:605 - 01:20:017 - 前面变密了这突然又空下 感觉坑
01:24:958 (2) - ctrl+g

总的来说没有dearyou爽（砖

[AQUA]

我终于明白凌风testplay为啥死了无数次了 HP9OD8太中二 怀疑是Heartbreak升级版

00:18:428 (1) - finish
00:59:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 卧槽什么好梗
01:22:664 (5,6) -
01:34:134 (6) - 压后面的slider头
01:37:399 (7) - 干嘛的
01:39:605 (3,4,5,6) - 形状有点扁 你自己调整一下
01:45:076 (3,4,5) -
02:06:252 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 欠考虑
02:17:017 - 这之后是HR杀？

最后送上一分 一曲忠诚的赞歌
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Eggache0 wrote:

SPOILER
大坑比也有填坑之时 头顶青天泪流满面 感觉都要怪15 其实是我懒
mNoMdB from PM

[Hard]

感觉通篇偷懒 服 ……嘛

00:12:781 (1,2,3) - 不顺滑（啥 别啊
00:58:311 (2,3,4) - 2和4压上了 最好别这样 fixed
01:12:075 (1) -
好
感觉截图部分好nsfw啊
01:16:840 (5,6,7,8) - 莫名 感觉可以做更好 莫名 来irc单挑
02:22:919 - slider声能静音么 虽然有点不爽但是我懒

[WIND]

简直看不下去 建议remap 那就请去remap 爽好吗

[AQUA]

我终于明白凌风testplay为啥死了无数次了 HP9OD8太中二 怀疑是Heartbreak升级版 其实掉血没lukas快

00:18:428 (1) - finish 糟 漏了
00:59:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 卧槽什么好梗
01:22:664 (5,6) -
好
01:34:134 (6) - 压后面的slider头 fixed
01:37:399 (7) - 干嘛的 微调
01:39:605 (3,4,5,6) - 形状有点扁 你自己调整一下 fixed
01:45:076 (3,4,5) -
fixed
02:06:252 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 欠考虑 考虑
02:17:017 - 这之后是HR杀？ 掉血根本掉不死好吗

最后送上一分 一曲忠诚的赞歌

baldrace wrote:

SPOILER
Hi~Hi~
reply to mod req

general
我还是听得见soft 的滑条噪音。后面那几个难度摸不出什么啊;w; 不要 我好懒的

Hard

break长

似乎没什么大问题，不过这个hard节奏上可能有点难了 不难啊 可以DT的

AQUA

OD9和HR9是干嘛啊;W; 嘛……HP9是我玩脱了

完全打不动。。mod不能，感觉很多人会在最后的各种跳以后掉血掉死

good luck吧？
Modding thx!
Last edited by Fia , edited 1 time in total.
CeilingPanda
148 posts
Joined June 2012
CeilingPanda
http://puu.sh/38LHj.txt
Timings, though, the main 170 bpm was fine, basicly adjusted it offset by 10 I believe, and fixed your timings at the end, you can double the bpm there. But well, it was not 170 or 85 ^^
Good luck!
Kinomi
1,224 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
Hi~Hi~
reply to mod req

general
我还是听得见soft 的滑条噪音。后面那几个难度摸不出什么啊;w;

Rainbow's Normal

OD-1

break太长了。。

01:15:252 (5) - 这个尾端和3没叠好

几个转盘太长了感觉是在偷懒而且，用转盘的地方不合曲

02:14:193 (1) - 奇械

02:14:193 这个转盘太短了

00:53:922 这边感觉跟vocal会好一点

01:23:370 (4,6) - 形状摆的不好

01:48:781 (1,2,3) - 像是偷懒，不过看了其他难度又不像

01:59:899 (6) - 删掉看看

02:10:664 (4) - 折返2次可能会坑爹

Hard

break长

似乎没什么大问题，不过这个hard节奏上可能有点难了

WIND

01:15:428 (3,2) - 感觉可以叠起来

00:55:134 (6) - 故意歪的吗

摸不出啊QAQ

AQUA

OD9和HR9是干嘛啊;W;

完全打不动。。mod不能，感觉很多人会在最后的各种跳以后掉血掉死

LUKAS

00:03:252 (4,5,6,7,8) - 没画好

好嘛还是摸不出什么来

orz。。。我太弱了

good luck吧？
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[General]
  1. I recommend to add "月子" for Artist name
[Rainbow's Normal]
  1. Why is Beat Snap Divisor 1/12 ?
  2. For normal-diff, Slider Velocity is too high.
  3. 00:18:605 (1) - this spinner is too long
  4. 00:54:958 (2) - change the slider start to 00:55:134 -, holding length
  5. 01:24:781 (6) - change the slider start to 01:24:252
  6. 01:33:252 (1) - remove NC
  7. 01:33:781 (2) - delete
  8. 01:33:958 (3) - NC
  9. 01:35:193 (1) - change the slider end to 01:35:723
  10. 01:35:193 (1) - remove NC
  11. 01:51:252 (3) - start at 01:50:899
  12. 01:51:605- add note
  13. 01:54:428 (1) - not reverse
  14. 01:55:311 (2) - change the slider start to 01:55:134
  15. 02:00:075 (1) - this spinner is too long
  16. 02:14:193 (1) - it is better to make more symmetrically like this
    SPOILER
    304,84,134193,6,4,B|142:166|93:152|109:9|255:-8|267:43|183:205,1,450.000017166138
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:546 (5,6) - invert, and DS become reasonable
  2. 01:15:605- add clap
  3. 01:18:428 (3) - ^
  4. 01:38:017 (2) - invert
  5. 02:24:252 (2,3,4) - it is better to ignore DS and uniform real destance. For example, like this
    SPOILER
    68,184,144252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    136,296,144980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    204,184,145813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
[WIND]
  1. 00:46:664 (1) - the hitsound is not suit, I think
  2. 01:07:664 (5) - move to x:256 y:320
[AQUA]
  1. 00:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest symmetric placement like this
    SPOILER
    280,264,14370,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    280,145,14546,1,10,0:0:0:0:
    356,53,14723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    355,172,14899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    280,264,15075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  2. 02:03:428 (3,4) - it is better to stack at the slider end
  3. 02:14:193 (1) - move to x:256 y:192
[LUKAS]
  1. 01:29:723 (2) - it is better to change curve slider to streight in order to uniform with 01:29:370 (1,3) -
  2. 01:37:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - How about this?
    SPOILER
    420,204,97487,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    446,66,97664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    243,140,97840,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    352,228,98017,1,6,0:0:0:0:
    433,135,98193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    298,184,98370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    407,273,98546,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    365,160,98723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
SB looks like PV. That's cool!
~Good Luck~
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue~

[SB]
00:57:958 - sb04.jpg is slowing down after. It should do that?

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:53:723 (1) - No New Combo
01:33:958 (3) - Move it somewhere else I don't know
01:50:899 - Add circle?
02:14:193 (1) - Try to remake the loop

[WIND]
01:07:664 (5,1) - Stack with 01:07:487 (4)
01:39:428 (2) - Distance

[AQUA]
01:24:781 (1,2,3) - Space them 0.50x
01:25:046 (4,5,6) - Space them 0.75x
01:25:311 (7,8,9) - Space them 1.00x
01:25:576 (10,11,12) - Space them 1.15x

[LUKAS]
02:18:394 (6) - New combo?

Good Luck! and star!
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia
SPOILER

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[SB]
00:57:958 - sb04.jpg is slowing down after. It should do that? oops, my mistake.

[AQUA]
01:24:781 (1,2,3) - Space them 0.50x
01:25:046 (4,5,6) - Space them 0.75x
01:25:311 (7,8,9) - Space them 1.00x
01:25:576 (10,11,12) - Space them 1.15x Emm, no.

Good Luck! and star!
Thanks for star~
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Normal:
~01:03:605 (2) - NC for velocity change.
~01:25:840 (1) - Remove NC,we need to see the trail to that circle.
~02:14:193 (1) - Try to change the shape like this? Looks better :D http://puu.sh/3qhtw.jpg

Hard:
~Very nice hard I have to say :D

Wind:
~01:42:781 (3) - Put it above triplets for smoother game play.
~Nothing more.

Aqua:
~00:00:076~00:08:017 - - Too much for an intro and game play doesn't really flow here.
~00:02:017 (3) - NC for velocity change.
~^Same goes for all your sliders which contain a velocity change.
~00:19:840 - A bit hard to read those during game play.
~01:25:840 - Please group the stream closer for easier reading.
~01:30:252 (6) - NC.It's a whole stream and group 6 & 7 together with the stream.
~01:39:517 - Hard to read the notes here.
~A bit messy,try to arrange some new patterns for some parts.

Lukas:
~A bit messy in the beginning again,try to arrange them for us to read easily.
~02:18:394 (6) - NC to recover from those insane triangle jumps.
~Watch out for jumps being too hard to read!

That's all from me ^^ Good luck!
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
From Eggache0's mod queue request:3
[baka✿]
00:13:487 (3) - 跳远一点，比如 0，200 或者 252，236
00:57:958 (1) - Ctrl+G
> 00:58:311 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:30:958 (1) - NC
01:39:605 (3,4) - exchange position
02:22:924 - Add a spinner?
[Extra]
00:06:957 (2,3) - ni tmd zai douwo?
00:53:723 (6) - 包好
> 00:54:428 (7) - 把6翻过来包1
00:55:664 (3) - 包好
01:21:605 (8) - 你是很不喜欢blanket的那种人么:3 那以下不提了（其实就是我懒）
01:30:252 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 做个转折吧……
01:35:546 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/870838
[Eggpain0（哪里不太对）]
00:05:370 (3) - 角度有点大……缩小点
01:04:311 (5) - blanket
很多blanket（不能这么懒吧）
[Hard]
00:58:311 (2) - clap?
01:02:546 (6) - clap? 等一下……你clap是啥……
01:12:075 (1) - 第二个点下移
[Rainbow]
00:18:605 (1) - start at 00:18:958 -
01:15:252 (5) - stick
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
试着做出来了……不好的话可以不收:3
Ts8zs' Easy
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: OP.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 90428
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 132428
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:EVERLASTING BLUE (Cut Ver.)
TitleUnicode:EVERLASTING BLUE (Cut Ver.)
Artist:Tsukiko
ArtistUnicode:Tsukiko
Creator:PinkHeart
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:AQUA
Tags:Flower Eggache0 sorahane TINKERBELL
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:87713

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,24275,43692
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
76,352.941176470588,4,2,1,60,1,0
91840,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
137105,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
138394,352.941176470588,4,2,1,50,1,0
139077,352.941176470588,4,2,1,30,1,0
139803,352.941176470588,4,2,1,40,1,0
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Combo3 : 0,155,255

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Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

ts8zs wrote:

From Eggache0's mod queue request:3
[Extra]
00:06:957 (2,3) - ni tmd zai douwo? 这能打啊
00:53:723 (6) - 包好 no
> 00:54:428 (7) - 把6翻过来包1 no
00:55:664 (3) - 包好 no
01:21:605 (8) - 你是很不喜欢blanket的那种人么:3 那以下不提了（其实就是我懒） 我只是觉得加blanket的话flow不太好
01:30:252 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 做个转折吧…… 好
01:35:546 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/870838

[Hard]
all fixed
Thanks for mod.
Krah
osu! Alumni
1,023 posts
Joined March 2012
Krah
Hi =)
From my modding queue


[General]

- Mapset file size without video shouldn't exceed 10Mb (actually 11,7Mb).
- There is some issue with your storyboard.
1°) All your images are 1067*600 and it's not actually rankable. (it could arrange your file size problem).
Ranking Criteria
Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.
2°) You need to activate the epilepsy warning (song setup=>designed) because the end of your song 02:14:193 - 02:17:105 - have flashing bg :s
- :!: The stack leniency of Hard, Rainbow's Normal, Ts8zs' Easy and Wind are unrankable. The stack leniency need to be between 0,3 and 0,9.
- Add Sun Rainbow in the tags.


[Ts8zs' Easy]

- Rename this to Ts8zs's Easy ?
- 00:07:134 (2,1) - I think you can try something like this http://puu.sh/4eoRL.jpg this make a better blanket and have a better look
- 00:18:958 (1,1) - I don't think a double spinner really fit in a easy.
- 00:56:546 (1,2) - Same as 00:07:134 (2,1) make a curve with (2) for a better blanket.
- 01:23:723 (3) - It would be better if your slider curves right instead of curving left. If you make this you can avoid the little overlap (yeah little) with 01:24:781 (1) -
- 01:36:075 (1) - Move the final point one grid right for a better blanket.
- 01:38:899 (4) - Can you change this a little for avoid the ovelap with 01:37:487 (2) -
- 01:57:605 (4) - Instead of make your slider curves right make it curving left ?
- 02:18:394 (1) - This spinner is probably a little short for a beginner. Change it to a slider ?


[Rainbow's Normal]

- This is a minor issue but you have a default beatsnap divisor of 1/12 and you don't seem to have 1/4 and 1/3 notes :s

Nc suggestion for follow the voice.
01:33:252 (1) - Remove nc
01:33:781 (2) - Add Nc
01:35:193 (1) - Remove nc
01:37:487 (1) - Remove nc
01:38:899 (2) - Add nc
01:45:958 (1) - Remove nc
01:46:664 (2) - Add nc
01:58:311 (3) - Add nc

I think that the end of the map deserves to be mapped at least the piano.
Seriously it's a pro diff *o*


[Hard]

- 00:17:017 (4,5) - This part don't deserves a jump like that :s
- 00:23:723 (6) - I don't think this note deserves a finish
- 00:48:075 (3) - It would be better if your slider curves up instead of curving down.
- 00:58:311 (2,3,4) - I don't think this pattern is really fine. Try instead to stack (2,3) and make a blanket with (4) ?
- 01:18:781 (4) - Ctrl+g for the logic of the pattern but you need to rework the slider for the distance spacing


[Wind]

- :!: 01:11:369 (3) - Slider end isn't snapped
- :!: 01:32:369 (3) - Slider end isn't snapped
- :!: 01:47:369 (1) - Slider end isn't snapped

- 00:02:546 (3) - Ctrl+g
- 00:04:311 (1) - ^ for the pattern logic but you probably need to rework the slider because of the distance spacing with (2) :s
- 00:49:840 (6,7) - Unstack this ? I'm not really a fan of 1/1stack but it's probably just personnal.
- 01:07:664 (5) - I really don't understand this note position :s
- 01:21:605 (4) - Ctrl+g , there is no need for a jump here
- 02:19:803 (3) - Remove this one and make instead a slider of 2beats ?


Sorry but I can't mod diff like AQUA and LUKAS. :s

That's all for me, good luck for rank =)
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Krah wrote:

Hi =)
From my modding queue


[General]

- Mapset file size without video shouldn't exceed 10Mb (actually 11,7Mb).
- There is some issue with your storyboard.
1°) All your images are 1067*600 and it's not actually rankable. (it could arrange your file size problem).
Ranking Criteria
Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.
2°) You need to activate the epilepsy warning (song setup=>designed) because the end of your song 02:14:193 - 02:17:105 - have flashing bg :s
- :!: The stack leniency of Hard, Rainbow's Normal, Ts8zs' Easy and Wind are unrankable. The stack leniency need to be between 0,3 and 0,9.
- Add Sun Rainbow in the tags.


[Ts8zs' Easy]

- Rename this to Ts8zs's Easy ?
- 00:07:134 (2,1) - I think you can try something like this http://puu.sh/4eoRL.jpg this make a better blanket and have a better look
- 00:18:958 (1,1) - I don't think a double spinner really fit in a easy.
- 00:56:546 (1,2) - Same as 00:07:134 (2,1) make a curve with (2) for a better blanket.
- 01:23:723 (3) - It would be better if your slider curves right instead of curving left. If you make this you can avoid the little overlap (yeah little) with 01:24:781 (1) -
- 01:36:075 (1) - Move the final point one grid right for a better blanket.
- 01:38:899 (4) - Can you change this a little for avoid the ovelap with 01:37:487 (2) -
- 01:57:605 (4) - Instead of make your slider curves right make it curving left ?
- 02:18:394 (1) - This spinner is probably a little short for a beginner. Change it to a slider ?


[Rainbow's Normal]

- This is a minor issue but you have a default beatsnap divisor of 1/12 and you don't seem to have 1/4 and 1/3 notes :s

Nc suggestion for follow the voice.
01:33:252 (1) - Remove nc
01:33:781 (2) - Add Nc
01:35:193 (1) - Remove nc
01:37:487 (1) - Remove nc
01:38:899 (2) - Add nc
01:45:958 (1) - Remove nc
01:46:664 (2) - Add nc
01:58:311 (3) - Add nc

I think that the end of the map deserves to be mapped at least the piano.
Seriously it's a pro diff *o*


[Hard]

- 00:17:017 (4,5) - This part don't deserves a jump like that :s
- 00:23:723 (6) - I don't think this note deserves a finish
- 00:48:075 (3) - It would be better if your slider curves up instead of curving down.
- 00:58:311 (2,3,4) - I don't think this pattern is really fine. Try instead to stack (2,3) and make a blanket with (4) ?
- 01:18:781 (4) - Ctrl+g for the logic of the pattern but you need to rework the slider for the distance spacing


[Wind]

- :!: 01:11:369 (3) - Slider end isn't snapped
- :!: 01:32:369 (3) - Slider end isn't snapped
- :!: 01:47:369 (1) - Slider end isn't snapped

- 00:02:546 (3) - Ctrl+g
- 00:04:311 (1) - ^ for the pattern logic but you probably need to rework the slider because of the distance spacing with (2) :s
- 00:49:840 (6,7) - Unstack this ? I'm not really a fan of 1/1stack but it's probably just personnal.
- 01:07:664 (5) - I really don't understand this note position :s
- 01:21:605 (4) - Ctrl+g , there is no need for a jump here
- 02:19:803 (3) - Remove this one and make instead a slider of 2beats ?


Sorry but I can't mod diff like AQUA and LUKAS. :s

That's all for me, good luck for rank =)
Thanks for mod, especially the SB.
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Hi modding queue lelz :

[General]

Imo, whe don't know what the hardest diff names are, is it Guest diff? Is it characters name? We don't know... maybe more precision.

[Easy]

- 00:14:899 : NC?
- 00:18:958 : I dislike this double spinner if other people say it, try to change on of it.
- 00:24:075 : 20 seconds of braking time, it's tooo much, reduce it by starting earlier or finish later (which doesn't mean enlarge the spinner).
- 01:03:252 : NC?
- 01:13:487 : Curve more this slider to follow more the next one.

[Rainbow's (dash) Normal]

- 00:02:899 : Try to have the same Y position between this slider and the previous one.
- 00:05:729 : Twice spinners... i'm not fan of this.
- 00:24:075 : Same thing about this break than easy.
- 00:52:664 : I think it's not a good choice to have a 1 note / 1 combo here. :x
- 01:11:729 : Same position as the previous circle stacked before.
- 01:15:252 : End position should be the same as the circle stacked before.
- 01:25:840 : Same thing about the 1 note / 1 combo.
- 01:35:193 : ^
- 01:37:487 : What are those slider? Try to make them better like more curve?
- 02:14:193 : Re-make it and help you of the vertical middle line to make it symetrical, then rotate it.

[Hard]

- 00:24:075 : u no what i mean.
- 01:29:723 : Move it to 236;304, i won't repeat about the next pattern because it's the same.
- 01:47:899 : I dislike this stack circle. Maybe move it? :<
- 02:02:017 : Xposition = 256?
- 02:02:193 : Same Y position as the previou's end slider?
- 02:18:394 : I don't like this part too, you have many offset changes, and you cannot follow a rythm, just get lucky on hidden, more over when it's circle.

[WINDS]

Breaks breaks breaks, same thing.

00:26:664 : This void part here looks ugly to see, and to play.

Same thing about the end part.

[AQUA]

The break.

- 01:10:311 : Finish the slider as the same position as the slider n°1.
- 01:30:252 : These jumps are ugly before the next stream which is normal.
- 01:40:840 : Finish this stream as the same position as the slider n°6 before.

Same thing about the end.

[LUKAS (arts)]

- 00:08:546 : Make more visible this tornado combo?
- 00:21:252 : ^

The break.

- 00:50:899 : Theses multiple combo... no.
- 01:00:075 : Start as the same position as the violer circle before?

The end


That's all for me, nice music but a storyboard a little too "shonen for me" ;)
Gl for ranking. :D
BanchoBot
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