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HAMO - it's a wonderful world.

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Topic Starter
Niva
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, July 17, 2013 at 10:43:16 PM

Artist: HAMO
Title: it's a wonderful world.
Source: Cytus
Tags: nivalis project hamoloid rayark vocaloid hatsune miku append yanlu
BPM: 152
Filesize: 4742kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.63 stars, 366 notes)
  2. Insane (4.97 stars, 525 notes)
  3. Normal (2.9 stars, 241 notes)
Download: HAMO - it's a wonderful world.
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~♥~

song contains depressive and sadistic (?) lyrics - you can get the old Wonderful diff (which I don't really like anymore) here | check also this wonderful vocal version

enjoy a (hopefully) wonderful mapset with a wonderful song from a wonderful game composed by a genius, wonderful composer.

thanks to yanlu for her awesome lyric sb | it's a wonderful world.

~♥~
WVS
~[]~
Foreverends
Wonderful
Otoha_old_1
The song is... frightening. I will never listen to it again
Xinely
ohai Niva :3
first mod *runs*

feel free to ignore, bakal lgsg q bubble klo aku BAT =w=

[General]
add epilepsy warning? pas kiai cukup bikin pusing imo hinsvar jg bilang perlu

remove green point nya? sama kea yg d atas nya sih (normal, hard, insane semua ada)

[Normal]
01:11:061 (1) - pindahin entah kemana deh (gk ada ide), kena antara durasi waktu bar nya sama akurasi bar
01:13:430 (5) - 466,207 (minimal stack deh biar rapi) , kalo iya 01:14:219 (1) - 400,140
01:34:745 (4) - 168,72? hindari spacing 1,06x jg
02:29:219 (1,2) - swap NC?

[Hard]
00:23:693 (1,5) - nazi, bahkan mgkn gk perlu.. koordinat y nya beda 1 :P
00:53:693 (1,1) - ^
01:30:798 (2,6) - sama deh kea d atas tp beda 1 d koordinat x sama y
02:06:719 (2) - ctrl+G?
03:00:403 (2) - 1 grid left? klo 03:01:193 (5) - d ctrl+G, bakal sama koordinat 300 nya
03:16:193 (2) - ctrl+G? biar jadi pattern khas niva *runs
03:38:693 (3) - ctrl+G? flow nya lbh enak sih imo

uguu nice map <3
star for miku's song you and Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
Niva

Xinely wrote:

ohai Niva :3
first mod *runs*

feel free to ignore, bakal lgsg q bubble klo aku BAT =w=

[General]
add epilepsy warning? pas kiai cukup bikin pusing imo hinsvar jg bilang perlu Okay~

remove green point nya? sama kea yg d atas nya sih (normal, hard, insane semua ada) ...Lagi malas ngefix-nya orz, biarkan sajalah, toh nggak mempengaruhi suara yang keluar :3

[Normal]
01:11:061 (1) - pindahin entah kemana deh (gk ada ide), kena antara durasi waktu bar nya sama akurasi bar Kena dikit gpp lah, gw juga nggak ada ide soalnya xD
01:13:430 (5) - 466,207 (minimal stack deh biar rapi) , kalo iya 01:14:219 (1) - 400,140 Hmm, I'm aiming for ~y:192 (symmetry) here personally
01:34:745 (4) - 168,72? hindari spacing 1,06x jg Err, it's somewhat intentional here, with normal spacing the overlap is not really pleasing orz...
02:29:219 (1,2) - swap NC? Oh, yep, forgot this one, fixed!

[Hard]
00:23:693 (1,5) - nazi, bahkan mgkn gk perlu.. koordinat y nya beda 1 :P ...biarkan sajalah~
00:53:693 (1,1) - ^ Fixed for this one
01:30:798 (2,6) - sama deh kea d atas tp beda 1 d koordinat x sama y Err, I designed this manually without grid snap on and without CTRL-H'ing orz, I'd let it be as is...
02:06:719 (2) - ctrl+G? Err, it's intentional o.o
03:00:403 (2) - 1 grid left? klo 03:01:193 (5) - d ctrl+G, bakal sama koordinat 300 nya Made the (5) further instead
03:16:193 (2) - ctrl+G? biar jadi pattern khas niva *runs Intentional as well (:
03:38:693 (3) - ctrl+G? flow nya lbh enak sih imo Done

uguu nice map <3
star for miku's song you and Good Luck ~
Sorry for late reply, updated (:
Saturnalize
Insane dulu eaph

Godtier map yes

1. 00:26:851 (1) - finish di sini nabrak, pake normal-hitnormal aja
2. 00:37:903 (1,2,3,4) - Bagian sini ngagetin, tapi terserah mau diperbaiki atau engga.
3. 00:39:482 (1) - yang ini juga apus aja finishnya
4. 01:01:587 (1) - Elbow slidernya keliatan bagian tajemnya . . . tapi bagus kok. <read= compliment>
5. Di bagian kiai sih sarannya pake finishnya 1/2 sebelum garis putih panjang, tapi terserah. (gue ga tau garis putih panjang bilangnya apa n _ n)
6. 01:15:798 (1,2) - sebenernya mau demo karena flownya kurang enak, tapi karena blanket tentu saja gapapa <3
7. 01:30:009 (1) - finishnya normal kayaknya lebih wah deh kalo di sini . . .
8. 01:36:324 (1) - ^
9. 02:28:430 (4) - Dat shape :<< creativity overabused (sirik)

As expected from BAT Indonesia, tapi entah kenapa gue lebih demen Wonderful, jujur D:
Also ini udah kayak speedmodding
By the way does the font effect.png on 03:42:640 was made on purpose? Because I don't think it should there.

Good luck.

EDIT : 01:59:219 (3) - bagian sini kalo di editor whistle soft, tapi waktu dimainin whistle normal . . . :|
Topic Starter
Niva

Loli Cjj wrote:

Insane dulu eaph

Godtier map yes

1. 00:26:851 (1) - finish di sini nabrak, pake normal-hitnormal aja Intentional, you can find it in other diffs~
2. 00:37:903 (1,2,3,4) - Bagian sini ngagetin, tapi terserah mau diperbaiki atau engga. Made it a bit tidier instead (:
3. 00:39:482 (1) - yang ini juga apus aja finishnya Intentional as well (:
4. 01:01:587 (1) - Elbow slidernya keliatan bagian tajemnya . . . tapi bagus kok. <read= compliment> Err, iya itu sengaja supaya bisa encircle (4) :3
5. Di bagian kiai sih sarannya pake finishnya 1/2 sebelum garis putih panjang, tapi terserah. (gue ga tau garis putih panjang bilangnya apa n _ n) Iya, gw udah coba tapi rasanya kurang pas imo (btw garis putih panjang -> Downbeat)
6. 01:15:798 (1,2) - sebenernya mau demo karena flownya kurang enak, tapi karena blanket tentu saja gapapa <3 xD
7. 01:30:009 (1) - finishnya normal kayaknya lebih wah deh kalo di sini . . .
8. 01:36:324 (1) - ^ Nice suggestion for these two, fixed in all diffs~
9. 02:28:430 (4) - Dat shape :<< creativity overabused (sirik) ...justru itu kurang puas gw sebenarnya personally orz

As expected from BAT Indonesia, tapi entah kenapa gue lebih demen Wonderful, jujur D:
Also ini udah kayak speedmodding
By the way does the font effect.png on 03:42:640 was made on purpose? Because I don't think it should there.

Good luck.

EDIT : 01:59:219 (3) - bagian sini kalo di editor whistle soft, tapi waktu dimainin whistle normal . . . :| Fixed through Addition : Soft
Thanks! Will upload soon Fixed the unsnapped kiai issue in Insane, uploaded now (:
Giampaolo
[Normal]
Sometimes the volume is really really low, you should check it out!

01:01:587 (1,2,3,4) - The gap between the two entities feels kinda weird.

[Hard]
The beginning of the map doesn't seem hard at all, it seems more like of a normal.

02:20:140 (1,2) - I think they are too close for that timing.

[Insane]
The only thing I can say is that I don't really feel it's an insane because it didn't really challenge me (and my skills are also pretty low), but the map is nice.
Topic Starter
Niva

Giampaolo wrote:

[Normal]
Sometimes the volume is really really low, you should check it out!

01:01:587 (1,2,3,4) - The gap between the two entities feels kinda weird. Oh, I didn't even noticed that (4,1)'s spacing is quite different here - made (3) somehow encircles (2) instead, thanks for noticing~

[Hard]
The beginning of the map doesn't seem hard at all, it seems more like of a normal.

02:20:140 (1,2) - I think they are too close for that timing. Err, it's manual stacking orz... Made them a bit further though (:

[Insane]
The only thing I can say is that I don't really feel it's an insane because it didn't really challenge me (and my skills are also pretty low), but the map is nice.
Thanks for noticing these two things, fixed :3
RandF
Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Lyrics]
  1. a4.png - "zui hiki chigiri"
  2. c-2.png- "houke ga yarakasu"
  3. e-2.png- "shotto gan ni bomu mo te ni totte" (change space)
[Normal]
  1. 01:04:745 (1,1) - it is better to avoid ovdrlapping currently
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:811 (3) - delete, I like
  2. 03:59:811 (3) - NC and 04:00:009 (1) - is not NC
[Insane]

  • nice map!
sorry for a few modding :?
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Niva

RandomEffect wrote:

Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Lyrics]
  1. a4.png - "zui hiki chigiri"
  2. c-2.png- "houke ga yarakasu"
  3. e-2.png- "shotto gan ni bomu mo te ni totte" (change space) I'll contact yanlu on this one~
[Normal]
  1. 01:04:745 (1,1) - it is better to avoid ovdrlapping currently Ah, it wasn't like that before orz... This was not intentional ofc, fixed~
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:811 (3) - delete, I like Umm, it's there for consistency, many parts (02:36:127 (3) for example) has that also o.o
  2. 03:59:811 (3) - NC and 04:00:009 (1) - is not NC Fixed (:
[Insane]

  • nice map!
sorry for a few modding :?
~Good Luck~
Thank you for mod :3
Betsuto
Thanks for M4M ^^ .. this is all I can find

[Normal]
01:00:798 (4)- place this note like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/829116
01:04:745 (1,2,3)- move these to x:188 y:224 like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/829123
02:33:166 (1)- make some perfect this slider .. move last slider point to x:304 y:20
02:45:798 (1)- make some awesome curve .. move 2nd point of slider to x:136 y:304 and last point to x:236 y:316
03:07:114 (4)- flip it like 01:00:798 (4)- ?
03:32:377 (4)- like this ^ ^ ^

[Hard]
00:26:851 (1)- move it to x:44 y:252 ? (it's look confuse)
00:33:166 (1)- like this ^ ^ ^ move it to x:348 y:44
01:11:851 (3)- make it awesome slider .. like 02:33:166 (1)- in Normal
01:30:798 (2,6)- place overlap these note
02:20:140 (1)- move to x:40 y:52
02:33:166 (1)- move it to x:88 y:248 (it's look confuse)

[Insane]
00:13:824 (1)- move it to x:40 y:316
02:20:140 (1)- move it to x:424 y:60

sorry .. your map is perfect orz
Topic Starter
Niva

Betsuto wrote:

Thanks for M4M ^^ .. this is all I can find

[Normal]
01:00:798 (4)- place this note like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/829116 Umm, I don't want cluster with (4) here >_<
01:04:745 (1,2,3)- move these to x:188 y:224 like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/829123 Oh, really nice, fixed!
02:33:166 (1)- make some perfect this slider .. move last slider point to x:304 y:20
02:45:798 (1)- make some awesome curve .. move 2nd point of slider to x:136 y:304 and last point to x:236 y:316 Done both~
03:07:114 (4)- flip it like 01:00:798 (4)- ?
03:32:377 (4)- like this ^ ^ ^ Oh, these two is also intentional xD

[Hard]
00:26:851 (1)- move it to x:44 y:252 ? (it's look confuse)
00:33:166 (1)- like this ^ ^ ^ move it to x:348 y:44 These two is intentional (:
01:11:851 (3)- make it awesome slider .. like 02:33:166 (1)- in Normal Done (hopefully) :3
01:30:798 (2,6)- place overlap these note Nice sight, fixed (:
02:20:140 (1)- move to x:40 y:52
02:33:166 (1)- move it to x:88 y:248 (it's look confuse) These two is also intentional xD

[Insane]
00:13:824 (1)- move it to x:40 y:316
02:20:140 (1)- move it to x:424 y:60 Umm, these two are intentional o.o - I made them further though~

sorry .. your map is perfect orz
Thank you Betsuto :3
10nya
i'm hungry
almost miss-read as HOMO btw homo everwhereeeeeeeeeeee
messy english

[General]
  1. add 初音ミク to the tags? cause almost 80% of the community is japanese
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:219 (2)- : I personally will increase volume here, i cant hear anything
  2. 00:28:824 (4)- : whistle here? for consistency
  3. 00:48:561 (5)- : how about put this circle to 448 224 ? it'll make 'down' flow so it'll a bit easier to fl imooooooooooooooooo
  4. 01:15:403 (3)- : umm try this rhythm? it'll a bit similar to 01:08:693 (2,3) part
  5. 02:01:587 (1)- : 2grid up to make same height as previous slider (of course re-arrange next slider)
  6. 02:54:877 (5)- : i'm sure adding normal sampleset here will fit
  7. 04:00:798 (1,1)- : how about re-arrange like this? making last note at center x axis (is it y or x idk) will make player easy to fl imoooooooooooooooo

    [Hard]
    1. 00:41:653 (x)- : add circle here? too bad you ignored this beat while you added circle 00:40:074 (2) with the same beat, imo just strange to me
    2. 00:47:969 (x)- : ^
    3. 01:17:377 (1)- : bring this to 256 216 would not be too bad imo
    4. 02:02:377 (3)- : ctrl+j ?
    5. 02:25:666 (2)- : ctrl+g this would make better imo, just like you did at 00:31:982
    6. 02:47:772 (2)- : um too bad you ignored 02:47:969 beat here but did not ignored 02:51:127 this beat
    7. 02:49:548 (x)- : ^
    8. 02:54:285 (x)- : ^ also piano sound /? is still continue at here
    9. 03:06:324 (1)- : 1grid to left would make better line shape with 2 previous circles
    10. 03:56:259 (2)- : remove whistle, not fit and too loud imo (the music is quiet here)
    11. 03:59:416 (2)- : ^
    [Insane]
    1. 00:39:285 (x)- : add note here and 00:39:384 ? it'll fit to the music imo also because you followed same rhythm here 00:46:390 (2,3,4)
    2. 01:42:245 (4)- : at least nc here for anti-jump warning
    3. 02:45:601 (6)- : music is quiet here =w=how about rearrange like this?
good luck =w=)/
Topic Starter
Niva

- t e n n y a - wrote:

i'm hungry saya juga~
almost miss-read as HOMO btw homo everwhereeeeeeeeeeee
messy english

[General]
  1. add 初音ミク to the tags? cause almost 80% of the community is japanese Umm... There's a lot of Miku maps here but only 2 search results were returned when I was searching with the tags '初音ミク'... Perhaps I'll add it later orz
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:219 (2)- : I personally will increase volume here, i cant hear anything I wanna keep it the same as other diff here o.o
  2. 00:28:824 (4)- : whistle here? for consistency Nice catch~
  3. 00:48:561 (5)- : how about put this circle to 448 224 ? it'll make 'down' flow so it'll a bit easier to fl imooooooooooooooooo Umm, I loved that symmetry personally o.o
  4. 01:15:403 (3)- : umm try this rhythm? it'll a bit similar to 01:08:693 (2,3) part Umm, the next kiai(s) used this rhythm though... I fixed the (4) a bit here btw :3
  5. 02:01:587 (1)- : 2grid up to make same height as previous slider (of course re-arrange next slider) Done~
  6. 02:54:877 (5)- : i'm sure adding normal sampleset here will fit Oh, I forgot this one here, added
  7. 04:00:798 (1,1)- : how about re-arrange like this? making last note at center x axis (is it y or x idk) will make player easy to fl imoooooooooooooooo Changed into something great here xD

    [Hard]
    1. 00:41:653 (x)- : add circle here? too bad you ignored this beat while you added circle 00:40:074 (2) with the same beat, imo just strange to me
    2. 00:47:969 (x)- : ^ Err, these two is intentional (it's consistent already with 2nd part of the song though xD)
    3. 01:17:377 (1)- : bring this to 256 216 would not be too bad imo Nice idea, done~
    4. 02:02:377 (3)- : ctrl+j ? Umm it's intentional as well... I moved this away from (1) though o.o
    5. 02:25:666 (2)- : ctrl+g this would make better imo, just like you did at 00:31:982 I did this for variation :3
    6. 02:47:772 (2)- : um too bad you ignored 02:47:969 beat here but did not ignored 02:51:127 this beat Umm, 1st part is also like that though (00:41:653) and it's made like that xD
    7. 02:49:548 (x)- : ^ Same here...
    8. 02:54:285 (x)- : ^ also piano sound /? is still continue at here Umm, yep I forgot this one here o.o
    9. 03:06:324 (1)- : 1grid to left would make better line shape with 2 previous circles Nice catch, done~
    10. 03:56:259 (2)- : remove whistle, not fit and too loud imo (the music is quiet here) Oh, there's a toy-box instrument around there btw xD - anyway thanks to this I just found out that (4)'s symmetry is quite broken, fixed it :3
    11. 03:59:416 (2)- : ^ Same here
    [Insane]
    1. 00:39:285 (x)- : add note here and 00:39:384 ? it'll fit to the music imo also because you followed same rhythm here 00:46:390 (2,3,4) Nice one, added~
    2. 01:42:245 (4)- : at least nc here for anti-jump warning I made (3) further, should be much more readable now...
    3. 02:45:601 (6)- : music is quiet here =w=how about rearrange like this? Ah, I still prefer a diamond here personally, however thanks to your screenshot I've changed this to something better :3
good luck =w=)/
Err lanjutannya menyusul deh orz, (somewhat) lagi stres gw + mau pergi juga... Thanks for mod and star (:
wantuole
\=w=/
hi niva~
mod for M4M
[General]
from aimod
insane 02:58:430 (1,2) - slider ending is unsnaped
[Normal]
01:33:956 (3,4) - move 4 to x:176 y:72, and move 3 slider ending 1 grid down~(slider will end at (4) tick
02:04:745 (1,4,5) - move together make 5 falls in the middle of grid looks good~,other thing is easy for you:3
[Hard]
00:37:706 (4) - 1 grid down~
01:02:180 (2) - a little arc looks more fine. try x:40 y:80
01:12:640 (1) - why not ctrl+h with 01:11:061 (1) ending? , also move 01:13:430 (2) x:0 y:300.I feel it is more clean~
01:31:587 (4,5,6,1) - See you use two different distance blanket, :D make this two blanket same distance is better improve
(Rotating (5) about 5°, let (6) overlap 01:30:798 (2), other is easy for you :3)
03:05:337 (2) - ^ same as 01:02:180 (2),a little arc looks more fine
04:00:403 (3) - ctrl+g?a little lage spacing looks good of ending~
[insane]
00:39:976 (2) - Delete this note may better flow the music,music is not very strong now, power up time :P
01:35:930 (4) - must a bit far of this two, like you do about 01:30:798 (3,4) 01:32:377 (3,4) and more
02:30:798 (2,3) - - use .75sv at (2)/ use .50 sv at (3) at this 2 slider ~. music call us do this way slowly~ :3
(02:31:587 (3) - also slider end at 02:32:180 is better improve)
good luck and star

sorry for my poor English, can not describe more better.
Topic Starter
Niva

wantuole wrote:

\=w=/
hi niva~
mod for M4M
[General]
from aimod
insane 02:58:430 (1,2) - slider ending is unsnaped Oh... Fixed~
[Normal]
01:33:956 (3,4) - move 4 to x:176 y:72, and move 3 slider ending 1 grid down~(slider will end at (4) tick Umm, it's intentional to be like that (not ending perfectly on (4)'s tick) here, made this part closer though (:
02:04:745 (1,4,5) - move together make 5 falls in the middle of grid looks good~,other thing is easy for you:3 Err, not that easy actually orz... Changed into something better here though :3
[Hard]
00:37:706 (4) - 1 grid down~ Nice catch, done o.o
01:02:180 (2) - a little arc looks more fine. try x:40 y:80 Err, it's intentional (it's parallel with (4,5) actually) but moved this more to the left~
01:12:640 (1) - why not ctrl+h with 01:11:061 (1) ending? , also move 01:13:430 (2) x:0 y:300.I feel it is more clean~ Done (:
01:31:587 (4,5,6,1) - See you use two different distance blanket, :D make this two blanket same distance is better improve
(Rotating (5) about 5°, let (6) overlap 01:30:798 (2), other is easy for you :3) Umm, it's equal in distance already? o.o
03:05:337 (2) - ^ same as 01:02:180 (2),a little arc looks more fine Same parallel formation also here...
04:00:403 (3) - ctrl+g?a little lage spacing looks good of ending~ Nice one, done!
[insane]
00:39:976 (2) - Delete this note may better flow the music,music is not very strong now, power up time :P Oh, it's following the synth o.o
01:35:930 (4) - must a bit far of this two, like you do about 01:30:798 (3,4) 01:32:377 (3,4) and more Not as far as 01:30:798 here but done (:
02:30:798 (2,3) - - use .75sv at (2)/ use .50 sv at (3) at this 2 slider ~. music call us do this way slowly~ :3
(02:31:587 (3) - also slider end at 02:32:180 is better improve) Umm, I don't really think .5x totally fits here (because the synth is a hectic one actually) but I added a note on 02:32:180 instead, as you suggested xD
good luck and star

sorry for my poor English, can not describe more better.
Thanks wantuole~
Teru21
o here my not-so wonderful mod XD PM in-game request lalalalaa
mah language is so messy nowadays so bare with it

[General]
- nipah you are a sadist >w>
- I hardly hear the hitsound, you got good hitsounding there, it seems that you are hiding the hitsound malumalugan, well, 35% is just too low and its a "soft" hitsound. too low.. suggest you 50% , feel and sound much better imo

[Normal]
00:14:219 - idk why, but I feel it'll be much better if you use drum-hitwhistle o3o louder it a bit
00:18:956 (3) - 1/1? uh, I think it seems blank here 00:20:140 - , so extend the slider to 00:19:548 - maybe? owo ; or add circle 00:20:140 -
00:20:535 - add whistle , you add it on the previous notes too o3o
00:45:798 (1) - this slider doesn't seem right, try to curve the end too https://www.dropbox.com/s/2rj59hgmoact2 ... hot228.jpg
00:56:653 (3,4) - you follow vocal at 00:56:061 (2,3) - , then follow the vocal too at 00:56:653 (3,4) - :o which mean, 00:56:653 (3) - turn into 1/1 slider with a reverse , 00:57:640 (4) - delete this and add a 1/1 slider again from 00:57:837 - <--- well the reverse thing is just my suggestion tho o3o
00:59:614 (2,3) - swap this, there is a vocal 00:59:811 - so I think it would be good if you just swap them o3o
01:08:693 (2,3) - sounds weird awkward strange not logic lalalala, waddya follow on 01:09:285 - ? @A@;; I don't hear any beat or any vocal, it doesn't make any sense somehow I hear a "ting" well, it sound so small , not very audible for playing/adding notes, imo just follow audible/loud sound on normal, its the easiest diff here tho, so (3) move to 01:09:482 - , delete (4) and add reverse to (3)
01:17:377 - kyaaaaaaaaaa heart rate 999999x first time hear, cool, second time hear, its.. scary.. I hear miku laugh so so and so sadistly ;A; *hides*
01:41:061 (3) - nazi o3o 1 grid to the left, symmetric polygonal lalallala
I think its important for you to move the break 01:42:640 -
02:06:324 (4) - was hoping for curvy wiggly slider
same as above about break 02:07:903 - drag it here >w<)/
02:47:377 (3) - like this maybe? https://www.dropbox.com/s/qg1mn4jm1za18 ... 282%29.jpg huehue didn't see any difference? wwww the (3) is more bent , ya bent it more, nazi tho, I think it'll look better if 02:45:798 (1,2,3) - (1)'s end , (2) perpendicular with (3) XDD
03:02:969 (3,4) - same as above
03:07:903 (1) - 3/2 slider please ; do so with 03:09:482 (2,3,4) - so it doesn't sound too blank
~others same as above
03:27:640 (3,4,5) - well, above one has vocal but this one don't have vocal in it o3o it sounds more audible too here , well adding a note 03:29:614 - won't hurt o3o it just feel so blank

[Hard]
00:14:219 (2) - x460 y348 maybe, I think its too near to (1) it almost stacked :o
00:37:114 (3,4,1) - same as normal about perpendicular
can't say much here, its pretty-- ohwait.. its a wonderful hard already wwwww just how you hitsound those whistle seems a bit weird, out of place somehow lalallaa

about Insane, I just found nazi things so its not important wwww well, maybe something like 02:02:377 (3,4) - you can make anti jump here, zannen(um.. unfortunately?) (3) is a 1/1 slider, maybe change it into circles, was hoping for more killing pattern starting 01:55:272 -
and others maybe something like the break part that I mention on normal o3o

that epic laugh www

also nice song nice diffs as expected from Niva I love the flow so much ww GoodLuckie nownivamod4modpleasewwwww#slapped

Niva if I got nightmare then its your fault (/*A*)/ wwwwwwwwwww jkjkwwww
Topic Starter
Niva

Teru21 wrote:

o here my not-so wonderful mod XD PM in-game request lalalalaa
mah language is so messy nowadays so bare with it

[General]
- nipah you are a sadist >w> o.o
- I hardly hear the hitsound, you got good hitsounding there, it seems that you are hiding the hitsound malumalugan, well, 35% is just too low and its a "soft" hitsound. too low.. suggest you 50% , feel and sound much better imo Umm, 40% will do I think, 35 -> 50 is just too radical orz ._.

[Normal]
00:14:219 - idk why, but I feel it'll be much better if you use drum-hitwhistle o3o louder it a bit Nice one, done
00:18:956 (3) - 1/1? uh, I think it seems blank here 00:20:140 - , so extend the slider to 00:19:548 - maybe? owo ; or add circle 00:20:140 - Umm? It's intentional o.o
00:20:535 - add whistle , you add it on the previous notes too o3o Err, it is supposed to be not hitsounded (check 02:26:851 (1) for reference)... I added whistle on (3)'s end instead though~
00:45:798 (1) - this slider doesn't seem right, try to curve the end too https://www.dropbox.com/s/2rj59hgmoact2 ... hot228.jpg Made this encircle (4)'s end better (yep, that's the concept here)
00:56:653 (3,4) - you follow vocal at 00:56:061 (2,3) - , then follow the vocal too at 00:56:653 (3,4) - :o which mean, 00:56:653 (3) - turn into 1/1 slider with a reverse , 00:57:640 (4) - delete this and add a 1/1 slider again from 00:57:837 - <--- well the reverse thing is just my suggestion tho o3o
00:59:614 (2,3) - swap this, there is a vocal 00:59:811 - so I think it would be good if you just swap them o3o ...err, if you hear the whistles here I think it's obvious enuogh that I'm following the synth, so I made the rhythm like that :3
01:08:693 (2,3) - sounds weird awkward strange not logic lalalala, waddya follow on 01:09:285 - ? @A@;; I don't hear any beat or any vocal, it doesn't make any sense somehow I hear a "ting" well, it sound so small , not very audible for playing/adding notes, imo just follow audible/loud sound on normal, its the easiest diff here tho, so (3) move to 01:09:482 - , delete (4) and add reverse to (3) Umm, same as above here (also rhythm consistency)
01:17:377 - kyaaaaaaaaaa heart rate 999999x first time hear, cool, second time hear, its.. scary.. I hear miku laugh so so and so sadistly ;A; *hides* Yep~
01:41:061 (3) - nazi o3o 1 grid to the left, symmetric polygonal lalallala Done
I think its important for you to move the break 01:42:640 - Nice suggestion, done! (next break is also moved)
02:06:324 (4) - was hoping for curvy wiggly slider o.o
same as above about break 02:07:903 - drag it here >w<)/
02:47:377 (3) - like this maybe? https://www.dropbox.com/s/qg1mn4jm1za18 ... 282%29.jpg huehue didn't see any difference? wwww the (3) is more bent , ya bent it more, nazi tho, I think it'll look better if 02:45:798 (1,2,3) - (1)'s end , (2) perpendicular with (3) XDD Err, why the (3) is there ._. - Anyway moved (2) a bit here though
03:02:969 (3,4) - same as above Umm, this is already made to encircle each other... I don't see the need to change pattern though o.o
03:07:903 (1) - 3/2 slider please ; do so with 03:09:482 (2,3,4) - so it doesn't sound too blank
~others same as above
03:27:640 (3,4,5) - well, above one has vocal but this one don't have vocal in it o3o it sounds more audible too here , well adding a note 03:29:614 - won't hurt o3o it just feel so blank Err, decided to leave these two as well (I fixed (5)'s symmetry though :3)

[Hard]
00:14:219 (2) - x460 y348 maybe, I think its too near to (1) it almost stacked :o Decided to do something else with (1) here
00:37:114 (3,4,1) - same as normal about perpendicular Umm, I don't really get what's wrong here but thanks to this I fixed a problem in 00:37:706 (4,1) :3
can't say much here, its pretty-- ohwait.. its a wonderful hard already wwwww just how you hitsound those whistle seems a bit weird, out of place somehow lalallaa Background synth~ (it's obvious I think o.o)

about Insane, I just found nazi things so its not important wwww well, maybe something like 02:02:377 (3,4) - you can make anti jump here, zannen(um.. unfortunately?) (3) is a 1/1 slider, maybe change it into circles, was hoping for more killing pattern starting 01:55:272 -
and others maybe something like the break part that I mention on normal o3o

that epic laugh www

also nice song nice diffs as expected from Niva I love the flow so much ww GoodLuckie nownivamod4modpleasewwwww#slapped

Niva if I got nightmare then its your fault (/*A*)/ wwwwwwwwwww jkjkwwww
Thanks for mod xD
Aurele
Hai :>
Topic Starter
Niva

Gabe wrote:

Hai :>
Hi Gabe :3
Saturnalize
Soon, insta-bubble
Aurele

Loli Cjj wrote:

Soon, insta-bubble
okay.

we live in a beautiful world anyways.
Saturnalize
Wait what where's the bubble logo :\
yanlu
update~!! _(┐「ε:)_
Thanks for telling and waiting~ Niva-san ~

> .< http://puu.sh/3Cyxr.rar
Topic Starter
Niva
Finally, thanks yanlu~ (yes I've been waiting for the new (and revised the error that RandomEffect mentioned in page 1) SB lyric all this time actually :3)

Loli Cjj : I'll try my best to get this map bubbled and then ranked xD *hides*

PS : I kudosu'ed the post above because she had helped me much (remade the SB two times orz) however feel free to deny it as she said it's fine for her to have no kudosu from that post, also for now I added her name to tags by her request (tags can be easily removed later if needed though~)
Saturnalize
Oh my god yes new fonts

By the way, that warudo on 02:51:719 , is that intentional?

Also please put another pulse at 01:36:324 for the background~

One more thing, the fonteffect.png looks better with this code (the one at 03:07:903 )

 M,0,187903,189087,296,419

Rank it, on a serious note.

EDIT : omg this is going to be a sb mod not so though hehe

b4.png and b5.png has lower y coordintes.

Oh okay just that.

. . . anyway this sb mod reminds me to do my friend's sb = =
Topic Starter
Niva

Loli Cjj wrote:

Oh my god yes new fonts

By the way, that warudo on 02:51:719 , is that intentional? Yes, it's like that from the song (:

Also please put another pulse at 01:36:324 for the background~ Done

One more thing, the fonteffect.png looks better with this code (the one at 03:07:903 )

 M,0,187903,189087,296,419
Err, do you mean 266? Done though

Rank it, on a serious note.

EDIT : omg this is going to be a sb mod not so though hehe

b4.png and b5.png has lower y coordintes. Fixed this inconsistency

Oh okay just that.

. . . anyway this sb mod reminds me to do my friend's sb = =
Thanks for checking (:

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EDIT : Err, yep I decided to abandon this map due to something (PM me in-game if you're interested in more details, just in case) and thread locked by Gabe afterwards (:

Thanks to everyone for their support so far~
Aurele
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