Duca - Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.) · forum

Oyatsu

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-13T15:17:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 Tháng Năm 2013 at 11:28:32 SA

Artist: Duca
Title: Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.)
Source: Imouto No Katachi
Tags: duca visual novel
BPM: 117
Filesize: 8460kb
Play Time: 02:06
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1,64 stars, 105 notes)
Hard (4,57 stars, 230 notes)
Insane (4,81 stars, 275 notes)
Normal (2,87 stars, 150 notes)

Download: Duca - Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi, My seventh beatmap and first Duca beatmap and first ranked beatmap . I hope you enjoy and help me in next rank map ^^
Mp3 from Sekai-nyan's beatmap.
Mapset:
Easy: Done~
Normal: Done~
Hard: Done~
Isane: Done~
SB by Setsurei: Done~ and Thanks alot ^^
Duca Ironna Katachi~

Thanks 4 mod

P A N (2 times)
gaten
bigfrog
Sana
Verlaren
koreapenguin (IRC mod)
Guy
-Umi-
CDFA
Wreath (IRC mod)
Nichiyouki
OEvil
Banana
HabiHolic (IRC mod)
Kloyd
xChippy (IRC mod)
Nyquill (star icon -> bubbled)
Shiro (rebubbled)
Kawayi Rika (ranked)
Thanks all you guys helped me. Thanks alot again ^^

Please Dowload beatmap again after 6-2-2013, I change something in osb file and SB folder.

Last edited by Oyatsu 2013-08-20T15:00:45+00:00, edited 48 times in total.

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-05-18T03:57:42+00:00

m4m on pm

[Easy]

00:28:592 (1,2,3) - maybe tgry this pattern? better to play http://puu.sh/2VFGS.jpg
00:30:643 - u can add note here and add clap also
00:34:746 (7) - curve like this http://puu.sh/2VFNC.jpg look better
00:37:823 (3) - end at 00:38:335 look better
00:38:848 (4) - move the forth line down 2 grid and move 00:40:387 (1) to 104|224 also. for blanket
00:42:438 - u can add note here
00:48:592 (1) - u can end it at 00:51:156 end at red tick is a bit weird
01:08:079 (3,1) - make it like http://puu.sh/2VG09.jpg

Location

01:08:079 (3) - move center to 128|352. move tail to 72|324
01:09:105 (1) - 132|248

01:32:182 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/2VG6S.jpg
01:43:976 (1) - just straight slider is fine http://puu.sh/2VGbb.jpg
01:49:618 - add note here and maybe make it like http://puu.sh/2VGdI.jpg also. look good

[Normal]

00:23:976 - 00:26:797 - try this rhymth. sound better

00:38:335 - try

00:46:541 -

01:50:130 (1) - end at 01:52:182
02:06:541 (1) - start it at 02:06:284 and end it and the current time

[Hard]

00:17:182 (7) - delete note
00:25:002 (4) - copy from 00:24:489 (3). then ctrl + < , ctrl + < and move it to 144|260. dont forget to remove clap
00:30:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/2VGHI.jpg and here for the code

Code

340,168,30900,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,308,31156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,216,31412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,220,31669,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,304,31925,2,0,P|216:292|176:216,1,140

01:01:925 (6) - copy from 01:02:438 (7) then ctrl + < . ctrl + < and move to 232|108
01:05:643 (7) - add note at 01:05:771 and 01:06:028 instead
01:40:643 and 01:40:771 - u can add note both
01:46:284 (5,6,7,8,9) - move it like this http://puu.sh/2VH01.jpg

Location

01:46:284 (5) - 344|196
01:46:541 (6) - 412|156
01:46:797 (7) - 396|80
01:47:053 (8) - 320|72
01:47:310 (9) - 284|140

[Insane]

00:39:618 -

or u can make repeat slider also
00:41:669 (4) - ^
01:33:464 - ^
01:50:259 (1) - end at 01:52:182 sound better
still have a bit weird rhythm 0.0 find and fix it

GL

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-18T05:03:20+00:00

P A N wrote:
m4m on pm

[Easy]

00:28:592 (1,2,3) - maybe tgry this pattern? better to play http://puu.sh/2VFGS.jpg
00:30:643 - u can add note here and add clap also
00:34:746 (7) - curve like this http://puu.sh/2VFNC.jpg look better
00:37:823 (3) - end at 00:38:335 look better
00:38:848 (4) - move the forth line down 2 grid and move 00:40:387 (1) to 104|224 also. for blanket
00:42:438 - u can add note here
00:48:592 (1) - u can end it at 00:51:156 end at red tick is a bit weird
01:08:079 (3,1) - make it like http://puu.sh/2VG09.jpg
Location
01:08:079 (3) - move center to 128|352. move tail to 72|324
01:09:105 (1) - 132|248
01:32:182 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/2VG6S.jpg
01:43:976 (1) - just straight slider is fine http://puu.sh/2VGbb.jpg
01:49:618 - add note here and maybe make it like http://puu.sh/2VGdI.jpg also. look good

[Normal]

00:23:976 - 00:26:797 - try this rhymth. sound better
00:38:335 - try
00:46:541 -
01:50:130 (1) - end at 01:52:182
02:06:541 (1) - start it at 02:06:284 and end it and the current time
[Hard]

00:17:182 (7) - delete note
00:25:002 (4) - copy from 00:24:489 (3). then ctrl + < , ctrl + < and move it to 144|260. dont forget to remove clap
00:30:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/2VGHI.jpg and here for the code
Code
340,168,30900,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,308,31156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,216,31412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,220,31669,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,304,31925,2,0,P|216:292|176:216,1,140
01:01:925 (6) - copy from 01:02:438 (7) then ctrl + < . ctrl + < and move to 232|108
01:05:643 (7) - add note at 01:05:771 and 01:06:028 instead
01:40:643 and 01:40:771 - u can add note both
01:46:284 (5,6,7,8,9) - move it like this http://puu.sh/2VH01.jpg
Location
01:46:284 (5) - 344|196
01:46:541 (6) - 412|156
01:46:797 (7) - 396|80
01:47:053 (8) - 320|72
01:47:310 (9) - 284|140
[Insane]

00:39:618 - or u can make repeat slider also
00:41:669 (4) - ^
01:33:464 - ^
01:50:259 (1) - end at 01:52:182 sound better
still have a bit weird rhythm 0.0 find and fix it

GL

Thanks for your mod. It is really very useful for me.

gaten

130 posts

Joined January 2011

gaten 2013-05-18T10:38:28+00:00

Hi.

M4M modding

[General]
plz your map title set to "いろんな形 (TV Size)", and then write "Ironna Katachi (TV Size)" in Romanised title.

[Easy]
01:00:900 (1) - finish, not whistle
01:13:207 (1) - ^
01:19:874 (3,4) -

SPOILER

02:06:541 (1) - spinner's head move to 02:06:284

[Normal]
00:39:105 (6) -

SPOILER

00:53:720 (3) -

SPOILER

00:56:797 (1) - finish
00:59:874 (6) - add circle in head place of 01:00:130 (7) at 00:59:874
01:04:489 (1) - NC
01:05:002 (2) - Remove NC
01:33:720 (7) - NC
01:35:259 (1) - Remove NC

[Hard]
00:18:848 (1) - if change the Slider Velocity, you should put NC
00:46:541 (5) - i think maybe put NC
01:00:900 (3) - NC
01:05:002 (6) - ^
01:06:284 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:053 (5) - NC
01:22:438 (8) - ^
00:36:541 (2,3) - this beat is more appropriate, if you think to the pace

SPOILER

01:21:156 (3,4) - ^

SPOILER

[Insane]

-NC
00:18:848 (4) - NC
00:42:438 (5) - ^
01:17:310 (7) - ^
01:18:335 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:566 (5) - NC
01:31:412 (1) - Remove NC
01:31:669 (3) - NC
01:33:720 (9) - ^
01:45:771 (7) - ^?
01:59:618 (1) - ^?
02:00:643 (1) - ^?
02:04:489 (6) - ^
02:05:259 (1) - Remove NC

-Pattern
01:42:951 (7,8,9) - plz move to different place with 01:42:694 (6)
02:05:259 (1,2,3) - plz move to different place with 02:05:002 (8)

-Timing
00:20:130 (3) - slider's tail move at 00:20:387
00:24:489 (4) - ^
00:36:284 (1,2) - GOOD BEAT!!

SPOILER

01:33:335 (6,7,8,9) - ^

SPOILER

01:37:438 (7) - this circle isn't suit, remove! (over-mapping)
01:44:618 (4) - ^

your map is so good map!!, but, my modding is low-quality T_T

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-18T11:11:36+00:00

gaten wrote:
Hi.

M4M modding

[General]
plz your map title set to "いろんな形 (TV Size)", and then write "Ironna Katachi (TV Size)" in Romanised title.

[Easy]
01:00:900 (1) - finish, not whistle
01:13:207 (1) - ^
01:19:874 (3,4) -
SPOILER
02:06:541 (1) - spinner's head move to 02:06:284

[Normal]
00:39:105 (6) -
SPOILER
00:53:720 (3) -
SPOILER
00:56:797 (1) - finish
00:59:874 (6) - add circle in head place of 01:00:130 (7) at 00:59:874
01:04:489 (1) - NC
01:05:002 (2) - Remove NC
01:33:720 (7) - NC
01:35:259 (1) - Remove NC

[Hard]
00:18:848 (1) - if change the Slider Velocity, you should put NC
00:46:541 (5) - i think maybe put NC
01:00:900 (3) - NC
01:05:002 (6) - ^
01:06:284 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:053 (5) - NC
01:22:438 (8) - ^
00:36:541 (2,3) - this beat is more appropriate, if you think to the pace
SPOILER
01:21:156 (3,4) - ^
SPOILER

[Insane]

-NC
00:18:848 (4) - NC
00:42:438 (5) - ^
01:17:310 (7) - ^
01:18:335 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:566 (5) - NC
01:31:412 (1) - Remove NC
01:31:669 (3) - NC
01:33:720 (9) - ^
01:45:771 (7) - ^?
01:59:618 (1) - ^?
02:00:643 (1) - ^?
02:04:489 (6) - ^
02:05:259 (1) - Remove NC

-Pattern
01:42:951 (7,8,9) - plz move to different place with 01:42:694 (6)
02:05:259 (1,2,3) - plz move to different place with 02:05:002 (8)

-Timing
00:20:130 (3) - slider's tail move at 00:20:387
00:24:489 (4) - ^
00:36:284 (1,2) - GOOD BEAT!!
SPOILER
01:33:335 (6,7,8,9) - ^
SPOILER
01:37:438 (7) - this circle isn't suit, remove! (over-mapping)
01:44:618 (4) - ^

your map is so good map!!, but, my modding is low-quality T_T

Ok. Fixed something in your mod. Thanks!!

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2013-05-19T08:28:13+00:00

Hi
m4m

Easy
00:36:797(2) what about?

01:00:900(1) let tail and 00:59:361(4) tail distance as same as 01:00:900(1) head and 00:59:361(4) head distance?
01:26:028(2) what about?

01:31:156(3) do you like it?

01:36:284(3) change?

01:41:412(2) head and tail with same distance to 01:40:900(1)?
01:49:618(7) align
01:50:130(1) spin to 01:52:182
02:00:900(4) let this slide tail and head as same distance to 02:00:387(3)

Normal
00:24:489(3) less bend? just like 00:26:028(4)
00:30:643(4) do you like?

00:43:464(5,6) parallel
01:03:464(5,1,2) i think changing looks better

01:07:053(4,6) parallel
01:22:182(7) delete?
01:29:618(1) change?

01:36:797(4,5) i think change looks better

01:49:105(6) move to x:160 y:264
01:49:618(7) move to x:256 y:336
01:59:874(4) let this slide head and head as same distance to 01:58:848(3) tail?
01:59:874(4) and 02:02:438(1) parallel
02:05:002(5) align

Hard
00:13:464(7) stack with 00:11:925(4) tail?
00:17:310(7,1,2,1) make a square?
00:34:746(5) more bend
00:36:541(2) neat

00:42:182(5) more bend?
00:45:259(3) don't cover looks better
00:47:566(4) ^
01:03:464(3) bend the other direction?
01:09:105(1) move to x:132 y:130?
01:13:976(4) tail move up one grid distance?
01:16:797(9) stack better
01:26:797(3) don't bend?
01:42:438(5) tail move to x:180 y:264
01:45:002(4) change?

01:46:284(5) stack 01:44:489(3) tail
01:48:848(4) move to x:244 y:100,make a rhombus?
01:50:515(4) tail move to x:52 y:280?
02:00:130(5) tail move to x:168 y:204?

Insane
00:17:823(3) change?

00:23:720(5,1,2) make a triangle?
00:30:130(4) stack better
00:33:207(2) change?

00:36:541(2) tail move to x:340 y:216
00:41:669(4) tail move to x:128 y:220
00:45:515(1) move to other place >_>?
00:58:848(8) what about?

01:10:130(3) tail move to x:300 y:272
01:41:925(5) tail move to x:168 y:264
01:44:618(4) i think changing looks better

02:00:900(8) too bend? just symmetry with 01:59:874(5)
02:03:207(4) don't bend

that all

hope it's will help you,good luck!

Last edited by bigfrog 2013-05-20T09:56:00+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-05-19T10:40:41+00:00

Hi~ Sana's mod FROM M4M MODDING

[ Insane ]

00:20:002 (2) - not good overmap -> remove plz
00:20:130 (3) - 1/4 beat shorter -> http://puu.sh/2Wxb7.jpg
00:43:207 (3) - 1/4 beat longer -> http://puu.sh/2WxjG.jpg
00:43:976 (4) - 1/4 beat longer -> http://puu.sh/2Wxkk.jpg
00:48:079 (7) - 1/2 beat shorter, but if you want to keep this length, reverse like this -> http://puu.sh/2Wxmp.jpg
00:57:310 (3) - http://puu.sh/2Wxoe.jpg
01:31:541 (2,3) - place like this -> http://puu.sh/2Wxr4.jpg
01:33:464 (7) - i thinks there should be note at this time

nice pattern but some miss at the beats~

[ Hard ]

00:18:848 (1) - slider velocity *0.5
00:19:618 - hit sound 0%
00:19:746 - hit sound 40%
01:06:925 (7) - remove circle
01:48:079 (1,2,3,4) - i'm not sure but isn't it so far to Hard?

nothing more to advice

bb

[ Normal ]

00:19:874 (1) - umm...does not match with lylics..

nothing more to advice~

[ EASY ]

SORRY, MY EASY MOD'S QUARLITY IS SO POOR THT IT MUST NOT BE HELP TO YOU

And... GOOD LUCK~!

Reat

204 posts

Joined May 2011

Reat 2013-05-19T10:58:41+00:00

Hello! From M4M Queue.

[Easy]

00:12:694 (4) - Last slider point move 2 grids left. it looks better blanket with 00:11:156 (2) - slider's end
00:21:915 - How about add circle this snap?? i think this rhythm better.
00:22:438 (4) - (80,204) Second sliderpoint (96,88) Third sliderpoint (168,40) it looks better.
01:08:079 (1) - third slider point move 1 grid up. and 01:09:105 (1) - move 1 grid right.
01:19:874 (3) - last slider point move 2 grid left. it looks better blanket with 01:19:361 (2) -
01:31:156 (3) - last slider point (136,224)
01:32:182 (4) - how about this with 01:31:156 (3) - ?

IMG and txt

32,236,92182,2,0,P|20:156|40:88,2,150

01:41:412 (2) - second slider point (256,212) third slider point (344,268)
02:00:900 (4) - second slider point (176,140) third slider point (176,88) blanket with 02:00:387 (3) -
02:04:489 (4) - second slider point move 2 grids down. and third slider point move 2 grids left, and 1 grid down.

[Normal]

00:17:823 (7) - second slider point move 4 grids left. and third slider point (356,104). so, distancing 00:18:848 (1) -
00:19:874 (1) - (324,224) same position 00:17:310 (6) -
00:52:182 (1) - last slider point move 1 grid up.
01:04:489 (1) - (68,200) and 01:05:002 (2) - (172,264)
02:05:002 (5) - second (280,88) third (168,104)

[Hard]

00:11:669 (3) - (97,187)
00:39:874 (7) - (165,191)
01:09:105 (1) - second slider point move 1 grid right and down. and third slider point move 2 grids right.
01:13:976 (4) - second slider point move 1 grid left. or third slider point move 1 grid up.
01:33:207 (7) - third slider point move 1 grid down.
01:45:002 (4) - second slider point move 1 grid up. and third slider point move 2 grids right.
01:46:284 (5) - (346,190)
01:50:387 (4) - third slider point move 3 grids up.

[Insane]

00:11:412 (2) - (216,176) it looks better blanket with 00:10:643 (1) -
00:14:746 (3) - fix this slider better blanket with 00:14:489 (2,4) -
00:17:566 (2) - (184,92)
00:30:130 (4) - (98,73) stack slider's end
00:38:079 (4) - (280,86)
01:06:797 (7) - (290,310)
01:21:925 (6) - (300,75) slider's end stack with 01:20:387 (2) -
01:26:797 (4) - third slider point move 1 grid right.
01:45:771 (1) - I think need to fix this slider for smooth.

Good luck!

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-05-19T14:34:10+00:00

via PM (in game)

General:
Add to tags - sphere, miyuki sena, meta, sumeragi ayaka, chimari mima, suzunomiya mayuki

Easy:
00:21:925 - add note. Sounds is really good.
00:26:541 (4,5) - unstack this notes. In easy diff shouldn't be a stack notes.
01:36:284 (3,4) - make a symmetrical sliders
01:41:412 (2) - move on x:176 y:256 for symmetry with 01:40:900(1)
01:47:053 (4) - new combo, because easy diff should not be more than 4-5 combo on one color. And the beginners difficult to recover after misses.
02:04:489 (4) - make slider both as screenshot -

SPOILER

This shape is more beautiful

Normal:
00:36:541 (2) - move on x:248 y:260
00:39:874 (7) - add clap. Sounds is really good.
01:58:335 (1,2,3,4) - make slider both as screenshot -

SPOILER

This shape is more beautiful

Hard:
00:17:823 (1) - move NC on previous pattern 00:17:310(7)
00:44:746 (2,3) - (2) touches (3); replace 00:45:259(3) and make both as screenchot:

SPOILER

This shape is more beautiful
00:47:053 (3,4) - ^

SPOILER

00:52:694 (2,3) - stack this patterns (on slider's end). IMO is better
00:53:720 (5,6) - ^
01:16:797 (9) - stack this perfect please.
01:24746 - add note with NC
01:25:002 (1) - remove NC
01:48:079 (1,2,3,4) - make a perfect square shape.

Insane:
00:17:823 (3) - make this slider a more symmetrical for symmetry with 00:17:566(2), example:

SPOILER

00:20:130 (3) - make 1/2 slide. This variant a more better and follow rythm
00:24:489 (4) - ^
00:28:079 (1) - remove NC
00:38:079 (4) - stack this perfect pls.
00:43:207 (3) - make 1/2 slide. This variant a more better and follow rythm
01:10:643 (4) - reduce slider on one tick(1/4 snap) and add on 01:11:028 note. Sounds is really good.
01:26:797 (4) - slider must be ended on x:476 y:116
01:30:771 (4) - remove note
01:35:002 (4) - it should not overlap 01:35:771(5). This is unrankable.
01:46:797 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - make a perfect polygon circles
01:54:746 (6,7) - move on one tick back and stack with 01:54:489(5). Sounds is really good.

GL

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-22T09:32:55+00:00

Reat wrote:
Hello! From M4M Queue.

[Easy]

00:12:694 (4) - Last slider point move 2 grids left. it looks better blanket with 00:11:156 (2) - slider's end
00:21:915 - How about add circle this snap?? i think this rhythm better.
00:22:438 (4) - (80,204) Second sliderpoint (96,88) Third sliderpoint (168,40) it looks better.
01:08:079 (1) - third slider point move 1 grid up. and 01:09:105 (1) - move 1 grid right.
01:19:874 (3) - last slider point move 2 grid left. it looks better blanket with 01:19:361 (2) -
01:31:156 (3) - last slider point (136,224)
01:32:182 (4) - how about this with 01:31:156 (3) - ?
IMG and txt

32,236,92182,2,0,P|20:156|40:88,2,150
01:41:412 (2) - second slider point (256,212) third slider point (344,268)
02:00:900 (4) - second slider point (176,140) third slider point (176,88) blanket with 02:00:387 (3) -
02:04:489 (4) - second slider point move 2 grids down. and third slider point move 2 grids left, and 1 grid down.
[Normal]

00:17:823 (7) - second slider point move 4 grids left. and third slider point (356,104). so, distancing 00:18:848 (1) -
00:19:874 (1) - (324,224) same position 00:17:310 (6) -
00:52:182 (1) - last slider point move 1 grid up.
01:04:489 (1) - (68,200) and 01:05:002 (2) - (172,264)
02:05:002 (5) - second (280,88) third (168,104)
[Hard]

00:11:669 (3) - (97,187)
00:39:874 (7) - (165,191)
01:09:105 (1) - second slider point move 1 grid right and down. and third slider point move 2 grids right.
01:13:976 (4) - second slider point move 1 grid left. or third slider point move 1 grid up.
01:33:207 (7) - third slider point move 1 grid down.
01:45:002 (4) - second slider point move 1 grid up. and third slider point move 2 grids right.
01:46:284 (5) - (346,190)
01:50:387 (4) - third slider point move 3 grids up.
[Insane]

00:11:412 (2) - (216,176) it looks better blanket with 00:10:643 (1) -
00:14:746 (3) - fix this slider better blanket with 00:14:489 (2,4) -
00:17:566 (2) - (184,92)
00:30:130 (4) - (98,73) stack slider's end
00:38:079 (4) - (280,86)
01:06:797 (7) - (290,310)
01:21:925 (6) - (300,75) slider's end stack with 01:20:387 (2) -
01:26:797 (4) - third slider point move 1 grid right.
01:45:771 (1) - I think need to fix this slider for smooth.

Good luck!

Sorry. I don't understand you M4M because what? you don't post in my modding queue and so I don't know your map to mod. I didn't fix your mod. That is my work's way.

Verlaren wrote:
via PM (in game)

General:
Add to tags - sphere, miyuki sena, meta, sumeragi ayaka, chimari mima, suzunomiya mayuki

Easy:
00:21:925 - add note. Sounds is really good.
00:26:541 (4,5) - unstack this notes. In easy diff shouldn't be a stack notes.
01:36:284 (3,4) - make a symmetrical sliders
01:41:412 (2) - move on x:176 y:256 for symmetry with 01:40:900(1)
01:47:053 (4) - new combo, because easy diff should not be more than 4-5 combo on one color. And the beginners difficult to recover after misses.
02:04:489 (4) - make slider both as screenshot -
SPOILER
This shape is more beautiful

Normal:
00:36:541 (2) - move on x:248 y:260
00:39:874 (7) - add clap. Sounds is really good.
01:58:335 (1,2,3,4) - make slider both as screenshot -
SPOILER
This shape is more beautiful

Hard:
00:17:823 (1) - move NC on previous pattern 00:17:310(7)
00:44:746 (2,3) - (2) touches (3); replace 00:45:259(3) and make both as screenchot:
SPOILER
This shape is more beautiful
00:47:053 (3,4) - ^
SPOILER
00:52:694 (2,3) - stack this patterns (on slider's end). IMO is better
00:53:720 (5,6) - ^
01:16:797 (9) - stack this perfect please.
01:24746 - add note with NC
01:25:002 (1) - remove NC
01:48:079 (1,2,3,4) - make a perfect square shape.

Insane:
00:17:823 (3) - make this slider a more symmetrical for symmetry with 00:17:566(2), example:
SPOILER
00:20:130 (3) - make 1/2 slide. This variant a more better and follow rythm
00:24:489 (4) - ^
00:28:079 (1) - remove NC
00:38:079 (4) - stack this perfect pls.
00:43:207 (3) - make 1/2 slide. This variant a more better and follow rythm
01:10:643 (4) - reduce slider on one tick(1/4 snap) and add on 01:11:028 note. Sounds is really good.
01:26:797 (4) - slider must be ended on x:476 y:116
01:30:771 (4) - remove note
01:35:002 (4) - it should not overlap 01:35:771(5). This is unrankable.
01:46:797 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - make a perfect polygon circles
01:54:746 (6,7) - move on one tick back and stack with 01:54:489(5). Sounds is really good.

GL

Ok, Thanks Verlaren. That is an useful mod. I fixed quite many. Thanks alot. Updated!!

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2013-05-23T08:03:32+00:00

lol many korean have modded yours.

I'll mod this tonight Let's go

Easy

00:52:182 (1,2,3) - I think this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771148 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771149 this might work better
01:05:002 (1) - rhythm recommendation here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771153
01:08:079 (1) - I couldn't understand why you nc'd here.

Other things were good

Normal

00:11:156 (2) - blanket. move to 216:132
01:31:156 (3,4,5) - this might be better if you use copy and paste there or rotate 01:31:669 (5) - like this 01:27:053 (3,4,5) -
01:54:233 (1,4) - stack these

Hard
00:38:335 (5) - 188:112
00:53:720 (5,6) - should be stacked and I don't think it's well-rhythmed. this might work better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771163
00:58:335 (7) - this slider might be more playable if you put this like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771166
01:06:541 (5,6) - spacing should be kept here IMO
01:28:848 (7,8,9) - this overlap is not that good IMO. recommend this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771169
01:30:130 (2) - 180' rotate and ctrl+G
02:06:284 (1) - remove NC

Insane
I won't say so much since I don't like to mod the highest diff since It can be harmful for a mapper to create his own style but I just give a advice to this

Stack your stacks completely. Some of yours are just a bit out of joint. 00:29:361 (3,4) - like this
Use blue ticks 'effeciently'. It may make awkwardness if it's used to much even though the sound doesn't matches there. 01:25:002 (1) - this one worked good but, 00:52:951 (2) - especially this one was not that good.
Short multiple hits like this 00:35:771 (5,6,1) -. try to keep spacing.

01:22:566 (1) - this might be better if you fill notes instead of a spinner.

You're being improved on aesthetics but I think your style of putting rhythm is bit awkward to play. but that's all. your maps are pretty good!

GL!

Last edited by DeletedUser_1574070 2013-05-23T09:56:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2013-05-23T09:26:13+00:00

request

lol little IRC mod

18:08 koreapenguin: Insane AR+1
18:08 Oyatsu: ok
18:09 Oyatsu: fixed
18:10 koreapenguin: 01:06:028 (6) - slider tail
18:10 koreapenguin: 01:06:797 (7) - note stack
18:10 Oyatsu: which diff?
18:11 koreapenguin: insane
18:11 Oyatsu: not overlap?
18:11 koreapenguin: 01:10:643 (4,5,6) - Distance check
18:12 koreapenguin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771139 Look is better
18:13 Oyatsu: where?
18:13 koreapenguin: 01:18:335 (3) - 324 312 , 316 216, 376 176
18:14 Oyatsu: fixed
18:15 koreapenguin: 01:20:900 (4,5) - blanket
18:16 Oyatsu: fixed
18:17 koreapenguin: *just suggestion
18:18 Oyatsu: >< Easy, Normal, Hard??
18:18 koreapenguin: I think.. 02:02:438 (1) - 268 140
18:18 koreapenguin: 02:02:951 (3) - 176 196
18:18 Oyatsu: fixed
18:19 koreapenguin: 02:02:951 (3) - 176 200 , 02:03:207 (4) - 364 200 is better.
18:20 koreapenguin: 02:03:207 (4) - 360 200
18:20 koreapenguin: end lol very short mod
18:20 koreapenguin: other diff is good

18:20 koreapenguin: GL

GL

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-23T10:33:47+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
lol many korean have modded yours.

I'll mod this tonight Let's go

Easy

00:52:182 (1,2,3) - I think this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771148 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771149 this might work better
01:05:002 (1) - rhythm recommendation here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771153
01:08:079 (1) - I couldn't understand why you nc'd here.

Other things were good

Normal

00:11:156 (2) - blanket. move to 216:132
01:31:156 (3,4,5) - this might be better if you use copy and paste there or rotate 01:31:669 (5) - like this 01:27:053 (3,4,5) -
01:54:233 (1,4) - stack these

Hard
00:38:335 (5) - 188:112
00:53:720 (5,6) - should be stacked and I don't think it's well-rhythmed. this might work better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771163
00:58:335 (7) - this slider might be more playable if you put this like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771166
01:06:541 (5,6) - spacing should be kept here IMO
01:28:848 (7,8,9) - this overlap is not that good IMO. recommend this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771169
01:30:130 (2) - 180' rotate and ctrl+G
02:06:284 (1) - remove NC

Insane
I won't say so much since I don't like to mod the highest diff since It can be harmful for a mapper to create his own style but I just give a advice to this

Stack your stacks completely. Some of yours are just a bit out of joint. 00:29:361 (3,4) - like this
Use blue ticks 'effeciently'. It may make awkwardness if it's used to much even though the sound doesn't matches there. 01:25:002 (1) - this one worked good but, 00:52:951 (2) - especially this one was not that good.
Short multiple hits like this 00:35:771 (5,6,1) -. try to keep spacing.

01:22:566 (1) - this might be better if you fill notes instead of a spinner.

You're being improved on aesthetics but I think your style of putting rhythm is bit awkward to play. but that's all. your maps are pretty good!

GL!

Oh, Very useful. Iread the notes in Isane but I don't know fix how. Thanks for mod, Kloyd

koreapenguin wrote:
request

lol little IRC mod
18:08 koreapenguin: Insane AR+1
18:08 Oyatsu: ok
18:09 Oyatsu: fixed
18:10 koreapenguin: 01:06:028 (6) - slider tail
18:10 koreapenguin: 01:06:797 (7) - note stack
18:10 Oyatsu: which diff?
18:11 koreapenguin: insane
18:11 Oyatsu: not overlap?
18:11 koreapenguin: 01:10:643 (4,5,6) - Distance check
18:12 koreapenguin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771139 Look is better
18:13 Oyatsu: where?
18:13 koreapenguin: 01:18:335 (3) - 324 312 , 316 216, 376 176
18:14 Oyatsu: fixed
18:15 koreapenguin: 01:20:900 (4,5) - blanket
18:16 Oyatsu: fixed
18:17 koreapenguin: *just suggestion
18:18 Oyatsu: >< Easy, Normal, Hard??
18:18 koreapenguin: I think.. 02:02:438 (1) - 268 140
18:18 koreapenguin: 02:02:951 (3) - 176 196
18:18 Oyatsu: fixed
18:19 koreapenguin: 02:02:951 (3) - 176 200 , 02:03:207 (4) - 364 200 is better.
18:20 koreapenguin: 02:03:207 (4) - 360 200
18:20 koreapenguin: end lol very short mod
18:20 koreapenguin: other diff is good
18:20 koreapenguin: GL

GL

Thanks, too

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-05-23T16:52:05+00:00

Hi! from your queue~

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Please remove check Letterbox during breaks. cuz this map have not break.
You use soundless soft-sliderslide file and S:C1 and S:C2. Should be add soft-sliderslide2.

[Insane]

00:14:618 - add note? i can hear back sound here.
00:17:823 (3) - add finish of slider start. same sound 00:17:053 - here.
00:20:002 (2) - hmm, i think not match this note. remove it?
00:36:284 (1) - distance is weird. about 3grid down.
00:43:207 (3) - use 1/2 slider. not fit 3/4 slider here.
00:48:720 (1) - spinner end is 00:51:669 - better.
00:54:746 (8) - repeat point is bad. like this rhythm?

00:54:746 - 1/2 slider and one repeat.
00:55:515 - add note
00:58:848 (8) - ^
01:02:951 (8) - ^
01:33:464 (7) - slider end is 01:33:720 - better. because, vocal end is 01:33:720 -
01:37:823 (1) - spinner end is 01:39:874 - . end is that red line I think it strange for me.

[Hard]

HP-1
00:48:720 (1) - same reason in Insane
00:52:694 (2) - Please use 1/2 slider. slider end is 00:52:951 -

[Normal]

HP,AR and OD+1
00:48:592 (1) - same reason in Insane

Rhythm is all right in general.

[Easy]

HP+1

00:38:848 (4) - try use this code. more good slider shape.

SPOILER

224,92,38848,2,0,B|176:84|136:124|136:124|80:108|36:144,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:46:028 - add note?
00:59:361 (4) - 1/1 slider is fitting here.
01:52:182 - ~01:58:335 - i think that don't need this brake. try mapping here~

That's all~
Good luck

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-05-23T16:58:27+00:00

hi hi o/ here from your queue :3

Easy

- 00:26:028 (3,4) - 336,284
- 00:34:233 (3,4) - 128, 256
- 00:48:592 (1) - end at 00:51:412 -
- 01:31:156 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771748

Normal

- 00:15:002 (2) - 252,112
- 00:20:387 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771761
- 01:19:361 (3) - 256,140
- 01:49:361 (6) - i think it's better at the middle of the last slider

Hard

- 00:18:848 (1) - silence slider ?
- 00:34:746 (5) - http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/2014/771781.jpg
- 00:41:669 (4) - remake the shape for blanket
- 00:52:694 (2) - 328,224
- 01:50:387 (4) - remake the shape for blanket
- 01:56:284 (6) - 320,172
- 02:00:130 (5) - remake the shape for blanket

Insane

- 00:20:643 (4) - delete, finished the slider here instead and
- 00:22:310 (9) - delete it's wierd. Now it's same as 00:20:130 (3) - if you did it
- 00:43:207 (3) - finished 1/4 earlier
- 01:37:438 (8) - delete, it doesn't follow the music '-'
- 00:44:489 (1) - delete, finished the slider here instead, why make different of here 00:27:053 (9,10,1) - ?
- 01:47:823 (6,7,1) - 348,236

that's all, I hope it will help you :3 Goold luck o/

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-24T01:09:30+00:00

-Umi- wrote:
hi hi o/ here from your queue :3

Easy
- 00:26:028 (3,4) - 336,284
- 00:34:233 (3,4) - 128, 256
- 00:48:592 (1) - end at 00:51:412 -
- 01:31:156 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771748

Normal
- 00:15:002 (2) - 252,112
- 00:20:387 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771761
- 01:19:361 (3) - 256,140
- 01:49:361 (6) - i think it's better at the middle of the last slider

Hard
- 00:18:848 (1) - silence slider ?
- 00:34:746 (5) - http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/2014/771781.jpg
- 00:41:669 (4) - remake the shape for blanket
- 00:52:694 (2) - 328,224
- 01:50:387 (4) - remake the shape for blanket
- 01:56:284 (6) - 320,172
- 02:00:130 (5) - remake the shape for blanket

Insane
- 00:20:643 (4) - delete, finished the slider here instead and
- 00:22:310 (9) - delete it's wierd. Now it's same as 00:20:130 (3) - if you did it
- 00:43:207 (3) - finished 1/4 earlier
- 01:37:438 (8) - delete, it doesn't follow the music '-'
- 00:44:489 (1) - delete, finished the slider here instead, why make different of here 00:27:053 (9,10,1) - ?
- 01:47:823 (6,7,1) - 348,236

that's all, I hope it will help you :3 Goold luck o/

Guy wrote:
Hi! from your queue~

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Please remove check Letterbox during breaks. cuz this map have not break.
You use soundless soft-sliderslide file and S:C1 and S:C2. Should be add soft-sliderslide2.

[Insane]
00:14:618 - add note? i can hear back sound here.
00:17:823 (3) - add finish of slider start. same sound 00:17:053 - here.
00:20:002 (2) - hmm, i think not match this note. remove it?
00:36:284 (1) - distance is weird. about 3grid down.
00:43:207 (3) - use 1/2 slider. not fit 3/4 slider here.
00:48:720 (1) - spinner end is 00:51:669 - better.
00:54:746 (8) - repeat point is bad. like this rhythm?

00:54:746 - 1/2 slider and one repeat.
00:55:515 - add note
00:58:848 (8) - ^
01:02:951 (8) - ^
01:33:464 (7) - slider end is 01:33:720 - better. because, vocal end is 01:33:720 -
01:37:823 (1) - spinner end is 01:39:874 - . end is that red line I think it strange for me.

[Hard]
HP-1
00:48:720 (1) - same reason in Insane
00:52:694 (2) - Please use 1/2 slider. slider end is 00:52:951 -

[Normal]
HP,AR and OD+1
00:48:592 (1) - same reason in Insane

Rhythm is all right in general.

[Easy]
HP+1
00:38:848 (4) - try use this code. more good slider shape.
SPOILER
224,92,38848,2,0,B|176:84|136:124|136:124|80:108|36:144,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:46:028 - add note?
00:59:361 (4) - 1/1 slider is fitting here.
01:52:182 - ~01:58:335 - i think that don't need this brake. try mapping here~
That's all~
Good luck

OH, Thanks guys. Fixed almost. Updated!!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-05-25T04:09:03+00:00

Modding this first since I'm a bit pressed for time today and this round has a lot of long maps.

Overall:
Man your bg tells a story it's like they start by him choking her and then they get closer and all and then he puts his wee wee inside of her like this is deep

SB:
01:07:053 - Other than the effect looking a bit cheesy, why does it only happen on the 2nd and 3rd hit? It'd fit if it was here too. I'd give suggestions on how to make it look better, but I'm no SBer. Maybe flash different pictures on it or something with a white light flash transition? Idunno.
01:09:105 - Put the new picture in here, not where it is currently. It shows up too early currently. Also, maybe add a flash so it doesn't just randomly appear.

Insane:
Major issue I have is that the map has this weird thing where it likes to add 1/4 triplets a lot but when it comes to following the lyrics, it's very normal-mode (aka instead of following word for word, it puts sliders over multiple words.), which just feels awkward to me. It's as if the map is meant for a different song at times.
00:11:412 (2) - Why is this up like this? When the player plays this, his intuition is to go down, but instead he goes up, and then for the next note where the intuition is to go up, you have to go down.
00:12:182 (4) - It'll look nicer if this was parallel to (3)
00:13:464 (8) - It'd be nice if the curve on this was larger
00:20:130 (2) - Since it's insane, you could have this follow the lyrics directly
00:30:900 (2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent jumps, and I can't tell what pattern is trying to be made here (if there is one)
00:43:976 (5,6,1) - Why the anti-jumps?
00:58:848 (8) - Unfitting with the lyrics (The lyrics are a quarter note and two eighth notes. You're interpreting it as a quarter note triplet.)
01:02:951 (8) - ^
01:10:643 (4) - Make this parallel with (3)
02:03:720 (5) - Make this not go downward. The previous pattern you have (which is a tad bit too jumpy for my taste) is very structured, so this slider just looks wrong.

Hard:
01:21:156 (3) - Strays from the lyrics. I know the pattern looks nice and omg look at the sliders but it's better to follow the song then to make patterns
01:48:079 (1,2,3,4) - Put some finishes on these or something. The jumps work just fine but it feels empty without hitsounds.
01:56:284 (6) - Move this to avoid overlap

Normal:
00:29:105 (2) - Have this go more downward, it looks weird right now.
00:31:412 (5) - This would look better ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/774256 )

Easy:
Pretty ok.

Whee.

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2013-05-25T08:15:54+00:00

CDFA wrote:
SB:
01:07:053 - Other than the effect looking a bit cheesy, why does it only happen on the 2nd and 3rd hit? It'd fit if it was here too. I'd give suggestions on how to make it look better, but I'm no SBer. Maybe flash different pictures on it or something with a white light flash transition? Idunno.
01:09:105 - Put the new picture in here, not where it is currently. It shows up too early currently. Also, maybe add a flash so it doesn't just randomly appear.

Fixed, this is the new .osb

osb

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

thanks for SB mod

@ Oyatsu :

add this

to the folder >> SB/other/...
and rename it with "White.jpg"

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-25T10:47:06+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Modding this first since I'm a bit pressed for time today and this round has a lot of long maps.

Overall:
Man your bg tells a story it's like they start by him choking her and then they get closer and all and then he puts his wee wee inside of her like this is deep

SB:
01:07:053 - Other than the effect looking a bit cheesy, why does it only happen on the 2nd and 3rd hit? It'd fit if it was here too. I'd give suggestions on how to make it look better, but I'm no SBer. Maybe flash different pictures on it or something with a white light flash transition? Idunno.
01:09:105 - Put the new picture in here, not where it is currently. It shows up too early currently. Also, maybe add a flash so it doesn't just randomly appear.

Insane:
Major issue I have is that the map has this weird thing where it likes to add 1/4 triplets a lot but when it comes to following the lyrics, it's very normal-mode (aka instead of following word for word, it puts sliders over multiple words.), which just feels awkward to me. It's as if the map is meant for a different song at times.
00:11:412 (2) - Why is this up like this? When the player plays this, his intuition is to go down, but instead he goes up, and then for the next note where the intuition is to go up, you have to go down.
00:12:182 (4) - It'll look nicer if this was parallel to (3)
00:13:464 (8) - It'd be nice if the curve on this was larger
00:20:130 (2) - Since it's insane, you could have this follow the lyrics directly
00:30:900 (2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent jumps, and I can't tell what pattern is trying to be made here (if there is one)
00:43:976 (5,6,1) - Why the anti-jumps?
00:58:848 (8) - Unfitting with the lyrics (The lyrics are a quarter note and two eighth notes. You're interpreting it as a quarter note triplet.)
01:02:951 (8) - ^
01:10:643 (4) - Make this parallel with (3)
02:03:720 (5) - Make this not go downward. The previous pattern you have (which is a tad bit too jumpy for my taste) is very structured, so this slider just looks wrong.

Hard:
01:21:156 (3) - Strays from the lyrics. I know the pattern looks nice and omg look at the sliders but it's better to follow the song then to make patterns
01:48:079 (1,2,3,4) - Put some finishes on these or something. The jumps work just fine but it feels empty without hitsounds.
01:56:284 (6) - Move this to avoid overlap

Normal:
00:29:105 (2) - Have this go more downward, it looks weird right now.
00:31:412 (5) - This would look better ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/774256 )

Easy:
Pretty ok.

Whee.

Ok, Thanks for useful mod. Some mod in Isane , I don't understand but almost fixed. And thanks you again for mod SB (first mod SB ><)

Setsurei wrote:

CDFA wrote:
SB:
01:07:053 - Other than the effect looking a bit cheesy, why does it only happen on the 2nd and 3rd hit? It'd fit if it was here too. I'd give suggestions on how to make it look better, but I'm no SBer. Maybe flash different pictures on it or something with a white light flash transition? Idunno.
01:09:105 - Put the new picture in here, not where it is currently. It shows up too early currently. Also, maybe add a flash so it doesn't just randomly appear.

Fixed, this is the new .osb

osb

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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 F,0,106028,107566,1,0
 C,0,106028,107566,255,255,255,0,0,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\18.png",320,240
 F,0,107566,108079,0,1
 C,0,107566,108079,0,0,0,255,255,255
 M,0,107566,112182,400,395,420,395
 F,0,108079,110643,1
 C,0,108079,110643,255,255,255
 F,0,110643,112182,1,0
 C,0,110643,112182,255,255,255,0,0,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\other\2.png",320,240
 F,0,1925,2438,0,1
 M,0,1925,10643,420,240,320,240
 F,0,2438,10130,1
 F,0,10130,10643,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\other\3.png",320,240
 F,0,1925,2438,0,1
 M,0,1925,10643,450,270,350,270
 S,0,1925,10643,0.6
 F,0,2438,10130,1
 F,0,10130,10643,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\other\1.png",320,240
 F,0,1925,2438,0,1
 M,0,1925,10643,220,340,320,340
 F,0,2438,10130,1
 F,0,10130,10643,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\other\White.jpg",320,240
 F,0,68592,,0
 F,0,68592,68848,0,1
 F,0,68848,69105,1
 F,0,69105,85002,0
 F,0,85002,85259,0,1
 F,0,85259,85515,1
//Storyboard Sound Samples

thanks for SB mod

@ Oyatsu :

add this

to the folder >> SB/other/...
and rename it with "White.jpg"

Thanks. Updated!

Wreath

435 posts

Joined February 2012

Wreath 2013-05-26T11:05:44+00:00

Oyatsu requested me and I modded by IRC

It need more mod, but its not bad map in my opinion

please do your best, anyway good luck for ranked

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-26T11:10:49+00:00

Wreath wrote:
Oyatsu requested me and I modded by IRC

It need more mod, but its not bad map in my opinion

please do your best, anyway good luck for ranked

Thanks you, Wreath very much. ^^

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-05-27T15:41:40+00:00

Hi, Oyatsu

Mod request from PM in-game

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

Ehh? This song from eroge game opening You must change "(TV Size)" into "(Short Ver.)"
You have used the title unicode is "いろんな形". Please change it into "いろんなカタチ", which you can observe in this video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jbo36K2ebU
Offset is fine, but please change into 10643, since the rhythm start here, or if possible, you should change offset is 2438 will be the best for me.
Combo colour in Insane diff is different. Please change 4th combo by this code.
```
Combo4 : 0,255,255
```
If possible, you should add "opening" in tags because this song from opening of eroge game, and you can add "Sphere", which that is production of this game, and "eroge", too.
[color=#0000FF]In 00:10:643 ~ 00:18:848, Volume of this part is lower than other part, which it don't fit to use volume 35%. So please increase volume, which I suggest that increase it about 45% all diffs.[/color]

Standard diffs

Easy

HP, AR, and OD -1. It will be easier to playing in easy diff.
00:14:746 - I don't like to make it was empty. So I suggest that remove 00:15:259 (1), but add a slider by start at 00:14:746 until 00:15:259 instead. It will be better to read. Then you can make it's more beautiful than this, you can copy this code, but since these notes is very long to copy these note in the picture. I'm sorry to don't put it.
```
288,112,14746,6,0,P|240:96|192:104,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,15771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,264,16284,2,0,P|240:268|288:252,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,272,17823,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,176,18335,2,0,P|44:112|68:64,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:22:438 (5,1,2) - I felt awkward when play these note. If possible, please move 00:23:976 (1,2) by this code, which you can see example picture here.
SPOILER
```
216,152,23976,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,104,24489,2,0,P|360:96|400:112,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:27:053 (4,1) - Spacing between these are too close, which you have use DS about 0.9x please increase this spacing into 1.0x by move 00:36:028 (3) to up 4 grids, and move (4) to x:344 y:292.
00:34:746 (4) - Please add clap on slider begin and end to follow the rhythm.
00:59:361 (5,1) - This, too, but these are too far. So please reduce spacing, since on easy diff, you shouldn't increase or reduce jumping.
01:03:464 (4) - I prefer to add whistle on slider end.
01:04:233 (5) - This, too. I want to add whistle on slider begin.
01:17:310 (5,1,2) - It isn't beautiful. If you want to more beautiful than this, you can make by this picture will be look better.
SPOILER
01:21:412 (4) - It will be better, if you use straight slider or little curve slider.
01:26:028 (2) - Please add whistle on slider repeat, and add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm and melody.
01:31:156 (3,4) - Spacing between these are too far which you have use DS about 1.1x. Please reduce spacing by move (4) to up 3 grids. Similarly, it will look better, too.
01:32:182 (4) - This, too. Please add whistle on slider end.
01:35:259 (1) - Move to left and down 1 grid to reduce spacing between (6,1).
01:36:284 (3,4) - I felt awkward here as well. I want to make by this picture will flow naturally.
SPOILER

Normal

It will be better if you "reduce HP & OD 1".
00:17:053 (5) - Add whistle here will be better for the melody?
00:43:976 (6) - I prefer to move last point of this slider to down 1 grid.
01:01:412 (2) - I think that move 2nd point of this slider to x:344 y:148 will be better to flowing.
01:37:951 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:38:079 will be better in normal diff?

Hard

00:10:643 ~ 00:17:310 - I want to add or remove some hitsound to follow the rhythm or melody by these.
SPOILER
1. 00:11:412 (2) - Add whistle
2. 00:11:669 (3) - Remove whistle
3. 00:11:925 (4) - Add clap on slider end
4. 00:12:438 (5) - Switch whistle between slider begin and repeat & add whistle on slider end, too
5. 00:13:464 (7) - Add whistle on slider begin
6. 00:16:541 (6) - ^
00:15:259 (3) - These notes don't fit for the melody and rhythm. So please use Ctrl+G will be more fit than. Then don't forget to fix the hitsound, too. By use clap on circle (3), and use whistle on slider begin and end of (4).
00:35:515 (6) - Please add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm.
00:38:335 (5) - ^
00:42:951 (6) - This, too. Please add clap on slider begin.
00:43:464 (7) - Same with 00:35:515 (6).
01:21:156 (3,4) - It cause me felt confuse when I read. So please move (3) to stack with slider begin of (4) will be better?
01:47:310 (9,1,2,3,4) - Since (1,2,3,4) are jump, so I want to change the pattern of (9) by make by this picture will be flow naturally imo.
SPOILER
02:05:259 (6,7,8,9) - It cause me felt confuse, too. Please try to avoid overlapping between (6,9)
02:06:284 (9) - Add NC here will be better for the rhythm imo.

Insane

00:14:489 (1,2,3) - It's too hard to read these note, since (1) stack with slider begin of 00:13:464 (8), and I felt that these note don't natural flow, too. So I suggest that make these note to flow naturally than by make by this picture will be easier to read imo.
SPOILER
00:21:669 (6,7,8) - Spacing between (6,7) is 0.05x, which these can lead to confusion about reading. So please try to move it to x:378 y:127 to cause these are stack.
00:30:130 (4) - Please try to move to stack or avoid overlaping with slider end of (3) will be better to read.
00:38:592 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - I want to make by both pictures, which I think that it will be better for me. (In 1st picture, move (10) to stack with 00:38:335 (6), and move (11) to stack with 00:38:079 (5).)
SPOILER
00:41:669 (4) - Please add clap on slider repeat to follow the rhythm.
00:43:976 (5) - This, too. Please add clap on slider begin.
00:48:079 (7,1,2,3,4) - I felt that these note are weird when play or read it. So It will be better if you move some point of (7) and (2), and use Ctrl+G on (3,4) by this picture (00:48:079 (7) is overlaping with 00:50:130 (4).)
SPOILER
01:07:310 (2,3) - It doesn't fit for the melody. So I think that fix abour these note by this picture will fit with the melody and rhythm.
SPOILER
01:10:673 (4,5,6) - This, too. You can fix these by remove (5). Then change slider (6) into circles triplet instead. It will be more fit with rhythm than this.
01:24:746 (8,1) - Try to stack between these will be better imo.
01:34:233 (1,2,3,4) - It's too hard to read as well. Please move (2) to x:84 y:156, and move (3) to x:136 y:264 (stack with slider begin of 01:33:464 (7).)
01:52:694 (1,2) - These don't natural flow when I read and play. So I suggest that use Ctrl+H. Then move (1) to x:292 y:296, and move (2) to x:216 y:196. It will be able to flow naturally.

Comment : Umm... I think that you should want to more mods from some modders, since I see about flow that it doesn't fit to play, and I heard about the hitsound, which I'm not sure that you forget to add some hitsound or not. So I want to suggest that improve some notes and some hitsound to be better than this. However, I really like your normal diff

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-28T01:48:21+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Oyatsu

Mod request from PM in-game

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion
General
Ehh? This song from eroge game opening You must change "(TV Size)" into "(Short Ver.)"
You have used the title unicode is "いろんな形". Please change it into "いろんなカタチ", which you can observe in this video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jbo36K2ebU
Offset is fine, but please change into 10643, since the rhythm start here, or if possible, you should change offset is 2438 will be the best for me.
Combo colour in Insane diff is different. Please change 4th combo by this code.
Combo4 : 0,255,255
If possible, you should add "opening" in tags because this song from opening of eroge game, and you can add "Sphere", which that is production of this game, and "eroge", too.
[color=#0000FF]In 00:10:643 ~ 00:18:848, Volume of this part is lower than other part, which it don't fit to use volume 35%. So please increase volume, which I suggest that increase it about 45% all diffs.[/color]
Standard diffs
Easy
HP, AR, and OD -1. It will be easier to playing in easy diff.
00:14:746 - I don't like to make it was empty. So I suggest that remove 00:15:259 (1), but add a slider by start at 00:14:746 until 00:15:259 instead. It will be better to read. Then you can make it's more beautiful than this, you can copy this code, but since these notes is very long to copy these note in the picture. I'm sorry to don't put it.
288,112,14746,6,0,P|240:96|192:104,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,15771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,264,16284,2,0,P|240:268|288:252,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,272,17823,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,176,18335,2,0,P|44:112|68:64,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:22:438 (5,1,2) - I felt awkward when play these note. If possible, please move 00:23:976 (1,2) by this code, which you can see example picture here.
SPOILER
216,152,23976,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,104,24489,2,0,P|360:96|400:112,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:27:053 (4,1) - Spacing between these are too close, which you have use DS about 0.9x please increase this spacing into 1.0x by move 00:36:028 (3) to up 4 grids, and move (4) to x:344 y:292.
00:34:746 (4) - Please add clap on slider begin and end to follow the rhythm.
00:59:361 (5,1) - This, too, but these are too far. So please reduce spacing, since on easy diff, you shouldn't increase or reduce jumping.
01:03:464 (4) - I prefer to add whistle on slider end.
01:04:233 (5) - This, too. I want to add whistle on slider begin.
01:17:310 (5,1,2) - It isn't beautiful. If you want to more beautiful than this, you can make by this picture will be look better.
SPOILER
01:21:412 (4) - It will be better, if you use straight slider or little curve slider.
01:26:028 (2) - Please add whistle on slider repeat, and add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm and melody.
01:31:156 (3,4) - Spacing between these are too far which you have use DS about 1.1x. Please reduce spacing by move (4) to up 3 grids. Similarly, it will look better, too.
01:32:182 (4) - This, too. Please add whistle on slider end.
01:35:259 (1) - Move to left and down 1 grid to reduce spacing between (6,1).
01:36:284 (3,4) - I felt awkward here as well. I want to make by this picture will flow naturally.
SPOILER
Normal
It will be better if you "reduce HP & OD 1".
00:17:053 (5) - Add whistle here will be better for the melody?
00:43:976 (6) - I prefer to move last point of this slider to down 1 grid.
01:01:412 (2) - I think that move 2nd point of this slider to x:344 y:148 will be better to flowing.
01:37:951 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:38:079 will be better in normal diff?

Hard
00:10:643 ~ 00:17:310 - I want to add or remove some hitsound to follow the rhythm or melody by these.
SPOILER
00:11:412 (2) - Add whistle
00:11:669 (3) - Remove whistle
00:11:925 (4) - Add clap on slider end
00:12:438 (5) - Switch whistle between slider begin and repeat & add whistle on slider end, too
00:13:464 (7) - Add whistle on slider begin
00:16:541 (6) - ^
00:15:259 (3) - These notes don't fit for the melody and rhythm. So please use Ctrl+G will be more fit than. Then don't forget to fix the hitsound, too. By use clap on circle (3), and use whistle on slider begin and end of (4).
00:35:515 (6) - Please add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm.
00:38:335 (5) - ^
00:42:951 (6) - This, too. Please add clap on slider begin.
00:43:464 (7) - Same with 00:35:515 (6).
01:21:156 (3,4) - It cause me felt confuse when I read. So please move (3) to stack with slider begin of (4) will be better?
01:47:310 (9,1,2,3,4) - Since (1,2,3,4) are jump, so I want to change the pattern of (9) by make by this picture will be flow naturally imo.
SPOILER
02:05:259 (6,7,8,9) - It cause me felt confuse, too. Please try to avoid overlapping between (6,9)
02:06:284 (9) - Add NC here will be better for the rhythm imo.

Insane
00:14:489 (1,2,3) - It's too hard to read these note, since (1) stack with slider begin of 00:13:464 (8), and I felt that these note don't natural flow, too. So I suggest that make these note to flow naturally than by make by this picture will be easier to read imo.
SPOILER
00:21:669 (6,7,8) - Spacing between (6,7) is 0.05x, which these can lead to confusion about reading. So please try to move it to x:378 y:127 to cause these are stack.
00:30:130 (4) - Please try to move to stack or avoid overlaping with slider end of (3) will be better to read.
00:38:592 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - I want to make by both pictures, which I think that it will be better for me. (In 1st picture, move (10) to stack with 00:38:335 (6), and move (11) to stack with 00:38:079 (5).)
SPOILER

00:41:669 (4) - Please add clap on slider repeat to follow the rhythm.
00:43:976 (5) - This, too. Please add clap on slider begin.
00:48:079 (7,1,2,3,4) - I felt that these note are weird when play or read it. So It will be better if you move some point of (7) and (2), and use Ctrl+G on (3,4) by this picture (00:48:079 (7) is overlaping with 00:50:130 (4).)
SPOILER
01:07:310 (2,3) - It doesn't fit for the melody. So I think that fix abour these note by this picture will fit with the melody and rhythm.
SPOILER
01:10:673 (4,5,6) - This, too. You can fix these by remove (5). Then change slider (6) into circles triplet instead. It will be more fit with rhythm than this.
01:24:746 (8,1) - Try to stack between these will be better imo.
01:34:233 (1,2,3,4) - It's too hard to read as well. Please move (2) to x:84 y:156, and move (3) to x:136 y:264 (stack with slider begin of 01:33:464 (7).)
01:52:694 (1,2) - These don't natural flow when I read and play. So I suggest that use Ctrl+H. Then move (1) to x:292 y:296, and move (2) to x:216 y:196. It will be able to flow naturally.

Comment : Umm... I think that you should want to more mods from some modders, since I see about flow that it doesn't fit to play, and I heard about the hitsound, which I'm not sure that you forget to add some hitsound or not. So I want to suggest that improve some notes and some hitsound to be better than this. However, I really like your normal diff

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Oh, Thanks for mod, Nich-nee. Almost fixed ~

OEvil

299 posts

Joined December 2012

OEvil 2013-05-28T16:48:43+00:00

Hi Mod Request from Queue

1. [Easy]
2. Edits:
  - 00:47:566 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
  - 00:47:694 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
  - 00:55:771 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
  - 00:55:900 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
  - 01:06:028 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
  - 01:06:156 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
  - 01:13:207 (1) - Remove this circle.
  - 01:13:207 - Add a slider from here until 01:13:719, with a NC.
  - 01:58:335 (1) - From Here To Here 02:06:284 (1) - You can remove all the circles and sliders because this is Easy
[Normal]
Edits:
- 00:27:566 (7) - Remove this circle.
- 00:28:079 (8) - Remove this circle.
- Replace them with a slider since this is Normal ↓ ↓
- 00:27:566 - Add a slider from here until 00:28:078.
- Add A Break in this Diff

[Hard]Edits:
- 00:34:746 (5) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:35:002).
- 00:35:515 (6) - Add a whistle on the start.
- 00:36:156 (8) - Add a clap.
- 00:36:284 (1) - Add a clap and remove the finish.
- 00:51:925 (7) - Add a whistle.
- 00:52:694 (2) - Add a clap on the end.
- 00:53:464 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:53:720 (5) - Add a clap and remove the whistle on the start, add a clap on the end.
- 00:54:489 (7) - Add a clap.
- 00:54:746 (1) - Add a clap and remove the whistle.
- 00:55:002 (2) - Move to {x:304 y:276}, add a clap.
- 00:55:259 - Add a slider from here until 00:55:515, with a clap on the start, with a clap on the end.
- 00:55:259 (3) - Remove this slider.
- 00:55:771 - Add a circle at {x:462 y:182}, with a clap.
- 00:56:028 - Add a slider from here until 00:56:284, with a clap on the start, with a clap on the end.
- 00:56:541 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:053 (2) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:566 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:823 (5) - Add a clap and remove the whistle.
- 00:58:079 (6) - Add a clap.
- 00:58:335 (7) - Add a clap on the end.
- 01:01:412 (3) - Add a clap on the end.
- 01:01:925 (4) - Add a clap and remove the whistle on the start, add a clap on the end.
- 01:02:438 (5) - Add a clap on the end.
- Add A Break For This Diff

[Insane]Edits:
- 00:52:951 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 00:52:951 - Add a circle
- 00:57:053 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 00:57:053 - Add a circle
- 01:01:156 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 01:01:156 - Add a circle
- Add A Break For This Diff

Nice Song, Nice Map.
I Hope You Like My Mod And I Hope Your Map Get Ranked

Please If You Didn't Do Anything Of My Mod PM Me In-game, Okay?

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-29T00:42:03+00:00

OEvil wrote:
Hi Mod Request from Queue

[Easy]
Edits:
- 00:47:566 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
- 00:47:694 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
- 00:55:771 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
- 00:55:900 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
- 01:06:028 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
- 01:06:156 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
- 01:13:207 (1) - Remove this circle.
- 01:13:207 - Add a slider from here until 01:13:719, with a NC.
- 01:58:335 (1) - From Here To Here 02:06:284 (1) - You can remove all the circles and sliders because this is Easy

[Normal]
Edits:
- 00:27:566 (7) - Remove this circle.
- 00:28:079 (8) - Remove this circle.
- Replace them with a slider since this is Normal ↓ ↓
- 00:27:566 - Add a slider from here until 00:28:078.
- Add A Break in this Diff
[Hard]Edits:
- 00:34:746 (5) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:35:002).
- 00:35:515 (6) - Add a whistle on the start.
- 00:36:156 (8) - Add a clap.
- 00:36:284 (1) - Add a clap and remove the finish.
- 00:51:925 (7) - Add a whistle.
- 00:52:694 (2) - Add a clap on the end.
- 00:53:464 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:53:720 (5) - Add a clap and remove the whistle on the start, add a clap on the end.
- 00:54:489 (7) - Add a clap.
- 00:54:746 (1) - Add a clap and remove the whistle.
- 00:55:002 (2) - Move to {x:304 y:276}, add a clap.
- 00:55:259 - Add a slider from here until 00:55:515, with a clap on the start, with a clap on the end.
- 00:55:259 (3) - Remove this slider.
- 00:55:771 - Add a circle at {x:462 y:182}, with a clap.
- 00:56:028 - Add a slider from here until 00:56:284, with a clap on the start, with a clap on the end.
- 00:56:541 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:053 (2) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:566 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:823 (5) - Add a clap and remove the whistle.
- 00:58:079 (6) - Add a clap.
- 00:58:335 (7) - Add a clap on the end.
- 01:01:412 (3) - Add a clap on the end.
- 01:01:925 (4) - Add a clap and remove the whistle on the start, add a clap on the end.
- 01:02:438 (5) - Add a clap on the end.
- Add A Break For This Diff

[Insane]Edits:
- 00:52:951 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 00:52:951 - Add a circle
- 00:57:053 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 00:57:053 - Add a circle
- 01:01:156 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 01:01:156 - Add a circle
- Add A Break For This Diff
Nice Song, Nice Map.
I Hope You Like My Mod And I Hope Your Map Get Ranked
Please If You Didn't Do Anything Of My Mod PM Me In-game, Okay?

Sorry, Unchange. THanks for mod

Banana

794 posts

Joined October 2010

Banana 2013-05-29T05:43:00+00:00

sorry for being lazy and let you waiting .-.

[General]
miao
[Storyboard]
generally it is good enough to me, here are some suggestions that can be discussed
01:07:053 - the scales here are early by 1/2. to follow the drum, the point start drum is at low volume, and the scale should be go with it IMO
01:08:079 - fade the foreground here? and origin background or white will do as background here
[Insane]
00:39:618 (11) - the previous notes 00:36:541 (2,3,4) are go round and round, and it become the different direction here, ctrl+g will keep this flow to me, and it goes well with the next repeat slider at 00:41:669 (4), (the stack repeat arrow is readable to me
00:49:105 (2) - suggestion is like this , and (4) is moved a little
01:07:310 - i suggest here to go with the storyboard, and go with the drum (or piano), a straight repeat slider will do
01:10:130 (3) - (2) in the next combo is going upwards, and I suggest here to go the opposite like this, and (1) in this combo is also suggested to change after
01:14:746 (7) - it curved too much to me, and it is also suggested to be straight to go with the following 01:16:028 (5)
01:17:310 (1) - its tail, the previous (5)'s tail and (6) to form a triangle? this jump wouldn't be too large and the pattern will be more decent
01:19:618 (6) - curved too much again, straight slider not always means lazy mapping, you know._.
01:21:925 (6) - slightly overlap with (4), not a problem, but I just think it can be easily avoid
01:24:233 (6) - actually i assume here to have some jump after the normal spacing at 01:22:694 (1,2,3)
01:33:335 (6) - distance snap
01:37:823 (1) - i think this note can be moved to the right below of the playfield, for it is empty here, just a suggestion
01:37:823 (1) - x:336 y:76?
01:46:797 (2) - this pattern need more work IMO... spacing between (3,5) is small

[Hard]
00:31:669 (4) - i don't like nazi mod.. but.. two grids down
00:36:028 (7,8,1) - straight three notes would be better IMO
00:41:669 (4) - nazi again like this, to avoid overlap
01:01:412 (3) - a fan pattern would be better, rotate 01:02:438 (5) -33° and the pattern can be made to this, for better patter, (3) needs one more rotate
01:07:053 (1) - same suggestion as Insane, go with storyboard
01:21:412 (4) - i suggest to disable grid snap and polish up this two sliders, to make them same spacing each other everywhere
01:22:438 (7) - this long~ repeat slider is not my way, try add a circle at 01:24:233 (go with piano) if anyone ever suggested not repeat it
01:30:130 (2) - curved too much IMO, 01:54:489 (2) - is the same issue

nazi a lot lol

[Normal]
01:01:412 (2) - curved too much
this diff is no big issue to me, I just want to say 1/2 is too much for a Normal. circle like 01:31:412 (4) is ok, no matter it is here or not.
another thing i think is worth to pointed out is the note after spinner
00:36:284 (1) - i suggest it be a way more readable for newbies, (2) is on the way move the cursor from the center of spinner to (1)
00:52:182 (1) - this note is a bit far consider it is after a spinner, ctrl+g or something will make it more friendly

[Easy]
00:52:182 (1) - same issue as Normal
01:03:464 (4) - overlap with (3), move (4,5) separately to avoid

that's it, good luck then

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-29T08:46:04+00:00

Banana wrote:
sorry for being lazy and let you waiting .-.

[General]
miao
[Storyboard]
generally it is good enough to me, here are some suggestions that can be discussed
01:07:053 - the scales here are early by 1/2. to follow the drum, the point start drum is at low volume, and the scale should be go with it IMO
01:08:079 - fade the foreground here? and origin background or white will do as background here
[Insane]
00:39:618 (11) - the previous notes 00:36:541 (2,3,4) are go round and round, and it become the different direction here, ctrl+g will keep this flow to me, and it goes well with the next repeat slider at 00:41:669 (4), (the stack repeat arrow is readable to me
00:49:105 (2) - suggestion is like this , and (4) is moved a little
01:07:310 - i suggest here to go with the storyboard, and go with the drum (or piano), a straight repeat slider will do
01:10:130 (3) - (2) in the next combo is going upwards, and I suggest here to go the opposite like this, and (1) in this combo is also suggested to change after
01:14:746 (7) - it curved too much to me, and it is also suggested to be straight to go with the following 01:16:028 (5)
01:17:310 (1) - its tail, the previous (5)'s tail and (6) to form a triangle? this jump wouldn't be too large and the pattern will be more decent
01:19:618 (6) - curved too much again, straight slider not always means lazy mapping, you know._.
01:21:925 (6) - slightly overlap with (4), not a problem, but I just think it can be easily avoid
01:24:233 (6) - actually i assume here to have some jump after the normal spacing at 01:22:694 (1,2,3)
01:33:335 (6) - distance snap
01:37:823 (1) - i think this note can be moved to the right below of the playfield, for it is empty here, just a suggestion
01:37:823 (1) - x:336 y:76?
01:46:797 (2) - this pattern need more work IMO... spacing between (3,5) is small

[Hard]
00:31:669 (4) - i don't like nazi mod.. but.. two grids down
00:36:028 (7,8,1) - straight three notes would be better IMO
00:41:669 (4) - nazi again like this, to avoid overlap
01:01:412 (3) - a fan pattern would be better, rotate 01:02:438 (5) -33° and the pattern can be made to this, for better patter, (3) needs one more rotate
01:07:053 (1) - same suggestion as Insane, go with storyboard
01:21:412 (4) - i suggest to disable grid snap and polish up this two sliders, to make them same spacing each other everywhere
01:22:438 (7) - this long~ repeat slider is not my way, try add a circle at 01:24:233 (go with piano) if anyone ever suggested not repeat it
01:30:130 (2) - curved too much IMO, 01:54:489 (2) - is the same issue

nazi a lot lol

[Normal]
01:01:412 (2) - curved too much
this diff is no big issue to me, I just want to say 1/2 is too much for a Normal. circle like 01:31:412 (4) is ok, no matter it is here or not.
another thing i think is worth to pointed out is the note after spinner
00:36:284 (1) - i suggest it be a way more readable for newbies, (2) is on the way move the cursor from the center of spinner to (1)
00:52:182 (1) - this note is a bit far consider it is after a spinner, ctrl+g or something will make it more friendly

[Easy]
00:52:182 (1) - same issue as Normal
01:03:464 (4) - overlap with (3), move (4,5) separately to avoid

that's it, good luck then

Thanks, banana. I only can fix things I understand. Thanks or mod. Wait Setsurei for SB

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-05-30T09:50:02+00:00

IRC Mod

Mod

17:39 Oyatsu: hi ^^
17:39 HabiHolic: Hello~
17:39 HabiHolic: Ah Ha~
17:39 HabiHolic: Modding~
17:40 Oyatsu: ><
17:48 HabiHolic: Hey
17:49 HabiHolic: You Know nano?
17:49 Oyatsu: ??
17:49 Oyatsu: yes
17:49 HabiHolic: ><
17:49 Oyatsu: is that a singer?
17:49 HabiHolic: Me?
17:49 Oyatsu: nano
17:49 HabiHolic: Ah Ha
17:49 HabiHolic: Yes~
17:50 Oyatsu: Why do you ask me so?
17:50 Oyatsu: How can I help you?
17:51 HabiHolic: Now you will be modding the map> <
17:51 Oyatsu: ok
17:51 Oyatsu: your map?
17:51 HabiHolic: My MAP?
17:52 Oyatsu: I don't understand your mean ><
17:53 HabiHolic: You map
17:53 *HabiHolic is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/251770 Duca - Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.)]
17:53 HabiHolic: Here?
17:53 HabiHolic: K~
17:53 Oyatsu: yes
17:54 HabiHolic: Oh
17:54 HabiHolic: Your MAP Good~
17:54 HabiHolic: For Ranked Here
17:54 Oyatsu: Not complete
17:54 Oyatsu: wxc doesn't like my ma[
17:54 Oyatsu: my map*
17:56 Oyatsu: ><
18:17 HabiHolic: Hey
18:18 Oyatsu: I'm here
18:18 HabiHolic: Your Map Hitsound Fix Plz
18:18 Oyatsu: What's up?
18:18 Oyatsu: WHich diff.?
18:18 HabiHolic: This is because the sound is messed up because the heat
18:18 HabiHolic: Easy Dff
18:19 HabiHolic: Why then clap whistle, i do not understand this sequence is loaded
18:19 Oyatsu: ??
18:19 Oyatsu: example
18:19 HabiHolic: 00:26:028 (3) -
18:19 HabiHolic: Here
18:20 HabiHolic: ]00:27:053 (4) -
18:20 HabiHolic: Here
18:20 HabiHolic: 00:28:592 (1,2,3,4) -
18:20 Oyatsu: ??
18:20 Oyatsu: it is correct
18:20 HabiHolic: Why not contact the Hitnormal do?
18:21 Oyatsu: ??
18:21 Oyatsu: clap->whistle
18:21 Oyatsu: where hitnormal?
18:21 HabiHolic: Yes
18:22 HabiHolic: Clap and whistles, but if you get
18:23 HabiHolic: There is a problem when playing Taiko
18:23 HabiHolic: ]01:49:618 (3) - here is Hitnormal
18:24 HabiHolic: Now it only sounds like HitNormal
18:24 Oyatsu: oh
18:24 Oyatsu: ok
18:24 Oyatsu: fixed clap
18:24 Oyatsu: I'm add false
18:24 HabiHolic: ]Let's hit the other parts do not sound
18:24 HabiHolic: IRC Mod Ok?
18:24 Oyatsu: which one?
18:25 Oyatsu: ok
18:25 HabiHolic: K
18:25 HabiHolic: Easy
18:25 HabiHolic: 00:46:028 -
18:26 HabiHolic: Add Note?
18:26 Oyatsu: as vocal
18:26 Oyatsu: can't add note
18:26 HabiHolic: OOps..
18:26 HabiHolic: Ok
18:27 HabiHolic: 01:13:207 (1) - Remove Whistle
18:27 HabiHolic: And Add Finish
18:27 Oyatsu: fixed
18:27 Oyatsu: ^^
18:28 HabiHolic: ]01:34:233 (5) - New Combo
18:28 HabiHolic: 01:35:259 (1) - Remove Nc
18:28 Oyatsu: fixed
18:28 HabiHolic: Ok~
18:29 HabiHolic: K~
18:29 HabiHolic: Good!
18:29 HabiHolic: Normal Dff Open Plz~
18:29 Oyatsu: ok
18:30 Oyatsu: ok
18:30 HabiHolic: 00:57:053 (2) -
18:31 HabiHolic: http://puu.sh/34kq3.jpg Try This?
18:32 Oyatsu: fixed
18:32 HabiHolic: k~
18:33 HabiHolic: 01:00:900 (1) - Remove Nc
18:33 HabiHolic: New Combo Here 01:01:412 (2) -
18:33 Oyatsu: fixed
18:33 HabiHolic: ]Ok
18:34 HabiHolic: No Pick up~
18:34 HabiHolic: Good Dff~!
18:34 HabiHolic: Hard
18:34 Oyatsu: ok
18:35 HabiHolic: 00:36:541 (2) -
18:37 HabiHolic: How About This Rhythm? http://puu.sh/34kwd.jpg
18:38 Oyatsu: fixed
18:38 HabiHolic: 00:42:182 (5) - Spacing
18:39 Oyatsu: fixed
18:40 HabiHolic: 01:25:002 (1) - Remove Nc
18:40 HabiHolic: No No
18:40 HabiHolic: 01:25:515 (1) - Remove Nc
18:40 HabiHolic: ]01:27:566 (5) - Nc
18:41 Oyatsu: I think it is correct when NC there
18:41 HabiHolic: ]Oh..
18:41 HabiHolic: Ok~
18:41 Oyatsu: that is start vocal and also start kiai time
18:41 HabiHolic: Ok~
18:41 HabiHolic: No Pick~!
18:41 HabiHolic: Insane
18:42 Oyatsu: ok
18:42 HabiHolic: 00:11:669 (3) - Ctrl + g
18:42 HabiHolic: 00:12:182 (4) - ^
18:43 Oyatsu: fixed
18:44 HabiHolic: ]00:58:848 (8) -
18:44 HabiHolic: Hmm
18:44 HabiHolic: 00:58:848 (8) -
18:45 HabiHolic: http://puu.sh/34kH2.jpg This
18:45 HabiHolic: 00:59:874 (1) - Removed
18:45 HabiHolic: ]01:02:951 (8) -
18:46 Oyatsu: wait
18:46 HabiHolic: http://puu.sh/34kIn.jpg
18:46 HabiHolic: I think the rhythm does not fit ..
18:46 Oyatsu: ??
18:46 HabiHolic: 00:58:848 (8) -
18:46 HabiHolic: Here
18:47 HabiHolic: http://puu.sh/34kH2.jpg Try This?
18:47 Oyatsu: too faste
18:48 HabiHolic: Oh..
18:48 HabiHolic: Ok
18:48 HabiHolic: No pick
18:49 HabiHolic: Good Map Star +1
18:49 Oyatsu: thanks alot
18:49 Oyatsu: I hope it will rank
18:49 Oyatsu: ^^

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-05-30T09:51:07+00:00

Thanks you, Habi-san ^^

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2013-06-01T05:47:03+00:00

Banana wrote:
[Storyboard]
generally it is good enough to me, here are some suggestions that can be discussed
01:07:053 - the scales here are early by 1/2. to follow the drum, the point start drum is at low volume, and the scale should be go with it IMO
01:08:079 - fade the foreground here? and origin background or white will do as background here

01:07:053 - not changing
01:08:079 - fixed

thanks for SB mod

new osb

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//Storyboard Sound Samples

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-06-01T05:58:43+00:00

Setsurei wrote:

Banana wrote:
[Storyboard]
generally it is good enough to me, here are some suggestions that can be discussed
01:07:053 - the scales here are early by 1/2. to follow the drum, the point start drum is at low volume, and the scale should be go with it IMO
01:08:079 - fade the foreground here? and origin background or white will do as background here

01:07:053 - not changing
01:08:079 - fixed

thanks for SB mod

new osb

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

Ok, Thanks. Update new osb!!

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-06-01T08:54:44+00:00

IRC modded :3

Nyquill

osu! Alumni

1,781 posts

Joined February 2011

Nyquill 2013-06-01T18:06:20+00:00

I guess its time to start clearing my requests.
[General]
Theres two .osb files in your folder. Delete the one labled (TV Size).
Offset -10

[Storyboard]
00:51:669 - This transition is VERYYYY weird. Maybe you could fade in the bg from here to 00:52:182.

[Hard]
01:16:797 (10,1) - I think ctrl-G with this would be better... the distance between these two notes won't make much sense if you have 01:17:310 (2) so close to 01:17:053 (1).

[Insane]
00:38:079 (5) - You should turn off grid snap to stack it properly.

00:45:515 (2) - This really doesn't work well for this BPM and AR, as things are more subject to clutter, and now just seems like a very random jump. I really suggest reconsidering this jump. If you want to keep it, at least stack on top of 00:46:028 (1) correctly.

Actually, are you purposely not stacking anything over sliders? Can you explain please, since you really shouldn't worry about it being absolutely stacked that much.

01:04:996 (4) - The correct length of this slider is a full 1/1.

01:26:028 (3) - I'd personally suggest removing a repeat so you can have 01:26:541 (4) 1/2 sooner, seeing the player can relate a lot more to the vocals than the very muted percussion. Then you can have two notes at 01:27:310 and 01:27:438. I'd also suggest brining this slider to the left instead of right like http://puu.sh/360gg.jpg . The way you bring it to the right right now is pretty weird since you're changing the angle back downwards.

01:48:079 (1) - This long slider doesn't empathize anything in the music, as the instrumental, the percussion, AND the vocals are on 1/2. I would really suggest using a mix of a 1/2 slider and a note to cover it up.

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