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Nanako - Ura mo Karada mo Rakkamijin [Osu|Taiko]

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Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Hi ~ :3


must fix

should fix

think about it

suggestion

[General]

* You don't have a SB, so you can delete the osb.file. I don't know if it regenerated often for you, but you can try to delete~



[Basic]

* Overall I think this diff sounds really hitsound empty :< You may want to add some whistles
* OD +1? Current is pretty low for me
* Just my opinion but AR +1 plays really better for me. It's a bit slow like this imo.
00:02:046 (2,3,2,3) - They sound a bit empty, sure you don't want to add some whistles?
00:12:109 (3,1) - The spacing of them is a bit strange. While pattern like http://puu.sh/1e7NA have some gap, it's not here in this place. This doesnt look really good imo and I think it can be fixed :3
00:17:425 (1) - Use finishes as you did in later parts?
00:37:172 (3) - Maybe NC? Is a bit strange but fits quite well imo
01:21:982 (1) - For easier diffs, it is not a good idea to place a note in the mid of the map, because the approachcircle and the note will be hidden by the Spinner's hitburst
01:22:742 (2) - NC? I think KIAI should always start with NC, but having a combo from one note isn't good aswell. Maybe, to solve this problem and the one above it could be good to delete 1.
01:33:375 (1) - You may want to Add a note here with finish and start the Spinner at 01:33:565


[Advanced]

00:03:944 - add note?
00:05:653 (1) - I think this Spinner is too short :<
00:06:792 (1) - And if you set a note right in the mid of such a short Spinner, beginners may have many problems~
00:54:451 (1,2) - This mid placing is still not good imo, but I guess it's fine here
01:31:856 (4,5) - This doesn't flow really good imo~ Something like http://puu.sh/1e8kU Would be better imo o3o


I don't have any problems with the rest currently :3

Nice beautiful map, Star and good luck o/

EDIT: How can I be stupid enough mixing source and tags nrggggr
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

Sorry for the delay. :o

[General]
●BGs' size are to big and one of them is in PNG format (use JPG to reduce its size)
Average size with good quality is around 300kb~500kb


[Basic]
●Approach Rate +1 ?
●00:01:666 - add note . like this your pattern at here .00:04:324 -
●00:08:311 - add whistle on the slider's reverse. put applause with constant rhythm.
●00:14:387 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:18:375 (2) - try to make slider ?
If you follow my suggestions, many player would prevent miss.
●01:28:818 (2) - bend slider to the opposite direction?
●01:32:615 (2,3) - switch these notes ?
●01:37:932 (4) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●01:43:628 (2) - add whistle on the slider's reverse.

you should put more hit sound ><

[Advanced]
●00:02:425 - 60% is fine.
●00:05:653 (1) - very very hard o.o I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:22:362 - volume down to 5% ? This slider tick doesn't follow the music well.
●00:29:957 (1,2,3) - gradually add volume?
●00:34:514 - same ,here 00:22:362 -
●00:56:349 - ^
●01:04:514 (3,4,1) - Make the spacing equal here . may be confusing many beginners
●01:40:970 - volume up to 40% ?


[Another]
●00:09:261 (7,8,9,10) - try this ? I think the flow is good :3
●00:13:058 (4) - add new combo? same as your pattern at here.00:06:792 (7,1) -
●00:57:109 (1) - may have the risk to touch the score
●00:59:862 (5) - try to put a note on this slider head ? 00:59:957 (1) -
●01:40:400 (3) - may have the risk to touch the HP bar.


[Extreme]
●00:09:830 (1) - remove new combo.Becouce you don't use new combo at here. 00:11:349 - 00:12:868 -
●00:15:717 (4) - try this ?
I like to bend slider to the opposite direction ><
●00:50:273 (1) - move to x:60 y:56
●01:00:717 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●01:07:077 - add note ?
●01:09:830 (1) - remove new combo.
●01:10:590 (3) - add new combo.same as your pattern at here.01:04:134 (5,1) -
●01:40:590 (3) - move to x:428 y:264
●01:42:679 (1) - try to tilt a slider? like this here .01:43:818 (1) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●01:45:717 (5) - add new combo.same as your pattern at here.01:39:451 (4,1) -

Hope you fine this helpful :3

nice map set ></

good luck ~ :oops:
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
自挖


Fixed mostly from last two mods.
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
Hi :3
M4M
因为是新人，所以哪里说错了请不要在意=P

[Basic]
  1. 00:12:109(3)这一段试试改成这样呢
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:058(1)总感觉这个slider棱角分明的好违和orz 还有01:04:514(1)这个也是
  3. 00:35:653(1)这算出界了么，窝不太确定
  4. 01:31:856(1,2,3)往左一格
[Advanced]
  1. 00:02:425(3)打的时候这clap一出来吓一跳，是不是减小点音量
  2. 00:21:982(1)感觉这连着3个clap不太好听，后面那个也是（只是我觉得orz
  3. 01:33:375(1)这个finish没必要这么大声吧
[Another]
  1. 好像没看到kiai time
  2. 00:02:046(3)slider尾往上拉一点让它和后面几个slider平行
  3. 00:12:299(7,1,2,3)感觉滑条折一次后面放4个circle比较科学
  4. 00:16:666(8,9,10)没叠好._.
  5. 00:23:881(1,2,3)3个变速是不是考虑nc一下
  6. 01:15:147(1,2)这俩贴着感觉不好看
[Extreme]
  1. 00:04:324(3)总感觉这circle的位置好微妙，往右边拉点试试?或者2,3,4,5做个间距缩近o.o
  2. 00:37:172(1,3)依旧觉得这俩slider太尖了
  3. 01:22:362(3,4)这间距为啥突然小了，放到x:28 y:65左右比较好看
  4. 01:39:641(1)这开始这几个3连不弄个音量渐大么
  5. 01:43:248(3)删掉一个锚点拉标准点
  6. 01:44:387(3)^
差不多就这么多，能力有限
Star and good luck :3
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
感谢\:D/

现在在学校，等回去了给你Mod -3-
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
湊數太鼓mod不要噴我

[Sp3's Jubiko]
  1. 00:13:248 (5) - 全是d有點單調 可以換k
  2. 00:22:172 (2) - d
  3. 00:38:881 (3) - remove
  4. 00:39:071 - 上一個k
  5. 01:05:653 (2) - k?
  6. 01:31:856 (2) - k?
我是大哥腦殘粉, 邊吃薯片邊賺2kd
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
感觉丧心病狂

总之多谢XD。Taiko啥的真真看不来
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
大哥啊
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
ヾ（*´∀`*）ﾉ゛ｷｬｯｷｬ
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Yo
[General]
* Blue combo color is blend the BG, consider to change it
* Title : うらもからだも落花微塵 (keep the current title romanzied)
* Uhh.... since Extreme is harder than Another, wasn't the harder diff should be "Another"?


[Advanced]
00:05:653 (1) - This spinner is too short for normal diff. Consider to extend it or replace with slider
00:56:919 (1) - Remove clap and use whistle
00:57:679 (3) - Remove whistle and use clap
01:11:349 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing looks messed up because there are spacing using randomly on each other. Use distance spacing 1,00x to fix this
01:27:299 (3) - More than 2 repeating slider can confusing for beginners because they don't know when the slider is going to end
01:28:818 (1) - ^
01:46:287 (1) - Why new combo?
01:49:325 (1) - ^


[Another]
* Lots of stacks that not stack correctly with previous object (e.g. 00:07:362 (2,3), 01:44:198 (2,3), etc.) Consider to restack OR change the pattern

00:27:299 (3) - Flip vertically for better flow?
00:34:704 (1) - Why new combo?
01:37:742 (1) - ^
01:43:818 (1) - ^


[Extreme]
00:20:463 (1,2) - This 1,2x slider is doesn't fit to the song. Please consider to change it
01:36:223 (8) - Spacing error, use distance spacing 0.40x to fix this


Get 4 mods, and then call me back
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
lukaaaaaaaaaaa
pachimono
12 posts
Joined April 2012
pachimono
hi:3
from queue
[General]
advanced简单了点感觉和another的差距有点大 another的短滑条好可怕;w;
[Advanced]
  1. 00:19:514 - 加个circle?
  2. 00:20:273 - ^
  3. 00:21:033 - ^
  4. 00:21:792 - ^
  5. 01:05:463 - 感觉这样会好点 http://puu.sh/2VIEF.jpg
  6. 01:06:603 - 加个circle
  7. 01:23:691 (2)- http://puu.sh/2VIFX.png 换成这样的或者折返滑条?
[Another]
  1. 00:17:330 - 加个circle?
  2. 00:12:679 (1,2)- 换成一个slider?
  3. 01:05:938 (2)- 去掉2会不会好点
[Extreme]
  1. 01:31:476 (2)- 感觉有点没对齐 移到x:392 y:96
没了;w; 烂mod请见谅 orz 图太好根本找不出什么地方mod啊;w;
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Kiiwa wrote:

lukaaaaaaaaaaa
Nice ava kiiwa!
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
puush已死,有事燒紙
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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: luohuaweichen.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 82362
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32

[Metadata]
Title:Ura mo Karada mo Rakkamijin
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Nanako
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:Megurine Luka
Version:Sp3's Jubiko
Source:jubeat knit APPEND
Tags:BEMANI KONAMI Philosophy2 spboxer3 Mura_77
BeatmapID:157300
BeatmapSetID:50772

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
717,379.746835443038,4,2,0,100,1,0
82742,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
93375,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,192

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256,192,95653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95938,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96413,21,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96603,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96793,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97173,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97743,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97932,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98122,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98312,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98691,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99072,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99262,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99831,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100021,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100116,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100496,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100591,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100781,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100876,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100971,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101160,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101255,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101350,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101635,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101920,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102015,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102110,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102204,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102490,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102679,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102869,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103058,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103249,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103819,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104008,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104198,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104388,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104768,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105148,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105337,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105907,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106097,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106287,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106477,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106667,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106951,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107047,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108565,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108755,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108850,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108945,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109230,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109325,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109610,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109705,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109895,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110085,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111223,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111603,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111792,1,12,0:0:0:0:
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
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Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Leorda wrote:

Yo
[General]
* Blue combo color is blend the BG, consider to change it Fixed
* Title : うらもからだも落花微塵 (keep the current title romanzied) Fixed
* Uhh.... since Extreme is harder than Another, wasn't the harder diff should be "Another"? Actually exe is the hardest in Jubeat. Jubeat doesn't have Another and this difficulty spread follows tsuka's nightbird.


[Advanced]
00:05:653 (1) - This spinner is too short for normal diff. Consider to extend it or replace with sliderfixed
00:56:919 (1) - Remove clap and use whistle k
00:57:679 (3) - Remove whistle and use clap k
01:11:349 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing looks messed up because there are spacing using randomly on each other. Use distance spacing 1,00x to fix this k
01:27:299 (3) - More than 2 repeating slider can confusing for beginners because they don't know when the slider is going to end k
01:28:818 (1) - ^
01:46:287 (1) - Why new combo? k
01:49:325 (1) - ^ k


[Another]
* Lots of stacks that not stack correctly with previous object (e.g. 00:07:362 (2,3), 01:44:198 (2,3), etc.) Consider to restack OR change the pattern fixed

00:27:299 (3) - Flip vertically for better flow? k
00:34:704 (1) - Why new combo?
01:37:742 (1) - ^
01:43:818 (1) - ^


[Extreme]
00:20:463 (1,2) - This 1,2x slider is doesn't fit to the song. Please consider to change it k
01:36:223 (8) - Spacing error, use distance spacing 0.40x to fix this K


Get 4 mods, and then call me back
Megurine Luka
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Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

pachimono wrote:

hi:3
from queue
[General]
advanced简单了点感觉和another的差距有点大 another的短滑条好可怕;w;
[Advanced]
  1. 00:19:514 - 加个circle?
  2. 00:20:273 - ^
  3. 00:21:033 - ^
  4. 00:21:792 - ^
  5. 01:05:463 - 感觉这样会好点 http://puu.sh/2VIEF.jpg
  6. 01:06:603 - 加个circle
  7. 01:23:691 (2)- http://puu.sh/2VIFX.png 换成这样的或者折返滑条?
[Another]
  1. 00:17:330 - 加个circle?
  2. 00:12:679 (1,2)- 换成一个slider?
  3. 01:05:938 (2)- 去掉2会不会好点
[Extreme]
  1. 01:31:476 (2)- 感觉有点没对齐 移到x:392 y:96
没了;w; 烂mod请见谅 orz 图太好根本找不出什么地方mod啊;w;

Another 和Exe 改了0.0 Adv不太好动我就没改了-3-

谢谢
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
hi~

骗KDS 骗M4M : )


[General]
  1. 神mapper是没有啥问题的...
[Easy]

  • fine.
[Normal]

  • fine.
[Another]
  1. 00:16:951 (9) - prev:0.03x 没堆好 same as 00:24:925 (2) -
  2. 00:17:425 (1) - 矮油 好变态 >.<
  3. 00:23:881 (1,1) - 我觉得1.6和1.3比较能接受
  4. 00:37:173 (1,2) - 我觉得先滑条再单点比较好
  5. 00:59:862 (5) - 和下面那个滑条重叠会比较好？
  6. 01:16:571 (2) - 删了
[Extreme]
  1. 00:11:919 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这.... 是不是456不要堆 然后123堆起来4567不堆比较合适?
  2. 00:24:641 (7,8,1) - CTRL G 然后00:24:831 (8,1) - CTRL G?
  3. 00:33:470 (4) - add
  4. 01:29:387 (3,4) - ctrl g
没了.
Megurine Luka
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Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
大部分都改掉了OUO 感谢。
CSY the corrupt
431 posts
Joined March 2010
CSY the corrupt
随便mod一下

[Basic]

01:32:995 (3) - remove finish
01:43:628 (2) - 中间那个whistle去了吧

[Advanced]
我真心觉得从00:18:944 - 到01:16:666 - 的这个clap和那个slidertick有点吵

00:03:565 (6,1) - 改成一个到00:03:944 - 的倒回1次slider?
01:36:413 (1) - 感觉延长到01:36:982 - 不太必要

[Another]

00:23:881 (1) - 吓尿我
00:31:856 (2) - 可以拉个圆点的
01:05:938 - 考虑加个note?
01:13:628 (5) - 感觉改成倒回1次+个note好点
01:46:951 - 加个note?
01:49:989 - ^

[Extreme]

00:10:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这堆三连的间距是不是递增一下好点(如果是的话全部三连都NC吧)结尾有段雷同的也一样
00:40:970 (1) - NC
00:41:349 (2) - remove NC
00:52:742 (1,2,3) - 后面俩note相对于slider有点向右歪,看着十分不舒服(可能只有我?
01:04:704 (2,3) - ctrl+g
01:05:653 (7,8) - ^ (这俩顺着跳太平淡,反向跳起来可能相对带感一点,78对掉的话接01:06:033 (1) - 这个slider的位置也顺一点,否则这个slider应该向另一边弯为佳)
01:47:235 (4) - 这个要不要开一点啊,这么有气势的一下不让人爽一发吗
01:50:273 (7) - ^

以上纯粹胡扯望大哥手下留人至少让我活过30
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
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Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
大部分都改了屎爷万岁屎爷洪福齐天屎爷真可怕
Hanabi
Hanabi
Sana's modding from M4M MODDING


[ Extreme ]

00:17:425 (9) - this might be better -> http://puu.sh/2Y1h6.jpg
00:33:944 (6) - stack here 00:34:134 (1)
00:36:792 (7) - NC
00:37:172 (1) - remove NC
00:47:235 (2,3) - change place
00:59:577 (7) - NC
01:21:223 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it's not beautiful because they are overlapped
01:51:603 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2Y1wD.jpg

nice diff.

[ Another ]

00:03:944 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/2Y1xv.jpg
00:06:982 (1,2,3) - stack
00:08:122 (4,5,6) - stack
00:59:577 (4) - NC
00:59:862 (5) - Remove NC
01:21:982 (1,2,3) - Spin or scale by 01:21:223 (1,2,3,4)

nice diff.

[ Advanced(?) ]

ADVANCED>=hard

i think this diff's name would be STANDARD

01:32:615 (5) - make not to overlap 01:31:856 (4)

nice

[ Basic ]

lol i can't find to change;;




i hope it's helpful to you!!

nice map Nice song~~ GOOD LUCK~!! ;)
Megurine Luka
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Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

[ Sana ] wrote:

Sana's modding from M4M MODDING


[ Extreme ]

00:17:425 (9) - this might be better -> http://puu.sh/2Y1h6.jpg
00:33:944 (6) - stack here 00:34:134 (1)
00:36:792 (7) - NC
00:37:172 (1) - remove NC
00:47:235 (2,3) - change place
00:59:577 (7) - NC
01:21:223 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it's not beautiful because they are overlapped
01:51:603 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2Y1wD.jpg ok

nice diff.

[ Another ]

00:03:944 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/2Y1xv.jpg fixed
00:06:982 (1,2,3) - stack
00:08:122 (4,5,6) - stack
00:59:577 (4) - NC fixed
00:59:862 (5) - Remove NC fixed
01:21:982 (1,2,3) - Spin or scale by 01:21:223 (1,2,3,4)

nice diff.

[ Advanced(?) ]

ADVANCED>=hard

i think this diff's name would be STANDARD nope it follows Jubeat's naming patterns

01:32:615 (5) - make not to overlap 01:31:856 (4) fixed

nice

[ Basic ]

lol i can't find to change;;




i hope it's helpful to you!!

nice map Nice song~~ GOOD LUCK~!! ;)

Thanks =3=
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
[General]
BG换成jpg格式呗

[Basic]
00:34:134 (4,1) - 平行比较美观
01:16:666 (1,1) - 离得太近啦 直接把circle去掉还行

[Advanced]
00:11:349 (1) - 这NC有啥意义么
00:16:666 (1) - ^
01:10:210 (3) - 弄折返短slider比较合歌词
01:37:173 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:40:970 (1) - NC去掉

[Another]
00:57:109 (1) - 往下点 你看都被分数的数字遮住了...
跟前一个难度的差距也太大了 分数是Advanced的8倍以上 强烈建议加难度

[Extreme]
00:22:742 (1,1,1) - 我不是很理解为什么要NC 后面不再提了 不过我觉得这算是nc spamming
01:24:261 (4,5) - 这个停顿怪怪的
比前一个难度还简单点...但是分数又高 感觉真是怪异
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
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Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
BG换成jpg格式呗

[Basic]
00:34:134 (4,1) - 平行比较美观 fixed
01:16:666 (1,1) - 离得太近啦 直接把circle去掉还行 还好啦

[Advanced]
00:11:349 (1) - 这NC有啥意义么 fixed
00:16:666 (1) - ^ fixed
01:10:210 (3) - 弄折返短slider比较合歌词 现在这样也行就不改了
01:37:173 (2,3,4) - spacing 没问题啊0.0
01:40:970 (1) - NC去掉 fixed

[Another]
00:57:109 (1) - 往下点 你看都被分数的数字遮住了... 还好0.0
跟前一个难度的差距也太大了 分数是Advanced的8倍以上 强烈建议加难度

[Extreme]
00:22:742 (1,1,1) - 我不是很理解为什么要NC 后面不再提了 不过我觉得这算是nc spamming spacing change所以NC了，而且Vocal的停顿也很明显
01:24:261 (4,5) - 这个停顿怪怪的 没有停顿啊0.0 :|
比前一个难度还简单点...但是分数又高 感觉真是怪异
打一下就知道了，Exe比较难啦，Adv只是看上去难而已。exe的stream是很可怕的0.0
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari




Hallowww ~
You requested via forum-pm ~


[Basic]
00:21:982 (4) - Make it like this? owo
01:21:982 (1) - Remove this note maybe?


[Advanced]
00:02:425 (3) - Place at x:332 y:144 to avoid overlap with (1) ? owo
00:21:223 (4) - Perhaps curve this a bit more and move 00:21:982 (1,2) to blanket it.
00:26:919 (1) - Curve a bit more and bring the next slider down to blanket it like 00:21:223 (4)
01:31:856 (4,5) - Move to x:348 y:240


[Another]
00:34:894 (9) - Middle point at x:216 y:64 and last point at x:96 y:60 to the make end of the slider stack with (4)
00:38:691 (1) - Place at x:304 y:204 to make the end of the slider stack with 00:36:887 (4,5) ?
01:18:185 (1) - Stack this properly.


Nice map ~
Sorry for my poor mod ;A;
Good luck!
mingmichael
1,720 posts
Joined May 2012
mingmichael
heyy megurine luka :) here the mod which you requested to me
sorry for the late mod! Q_Q school was really busy in a month @o@
okay, here the mod :)

[Sp'3 Jubiko]
  1. 00:00:906 (2) - how about K? because the sound is high too. better use katsu
  2. 00:14:198 (1,2,3) - kkd? better sound than ddd
  3. 00:17:236 (2,1,1) - ddk? kdk are not fit
  4. how about move 00:26:254 (1) - to 00:26:444 (1) - ? it's better triplets there.
  5. 00:26:919 (4) - add some note. that's a vocal sound there, but you don't put any note :/ players will be confused
  6. 00:36:698 (1) - k?
  7. 00:55:021 (4) - k?
  8. 01:25:400 (3) - ^ for the vocal sound
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Well, I guess fine here....

Bubbled
Megurine Luka
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Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Thanks =3=
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
popped due to unsnapped object in Extreme at 01:09:830 (3) -

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. Reset stack leniency in Another to 0.7
  2. Change the BG to jpg format but not png
  3. Uncheck letterbox during breaks in Taiko
[Extreme]
  1. 00:40:020 - Make a triplet here for the drum
[Advance]
  1. 00:03:565 - NC here?
  2. 00:55:970 (5) - remove the slidertick here...heard odd
  3. 00:58:058 (4) - ^
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka
all fixed
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
rebubbled~~
Flower
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Flower
大哥这回要rank了，但是你给我记住，你这会做了个神图不代表我就输了。有朝一日我成了神麻婆一定要撞你这首歌然后爆掉你。咦我右腿怎么又没了
ts8zs
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Joined May 2011
ts8zs
话说taiko难度怎么设定的...怎样才能一个oni :3
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka

Flower wrote:

大哥这回要rank了，但是你给我记住，你这会做了个神图不代表我就输了。有朝一日我成了神麻婆一定要撞你这首歌然后爆掉你。咦我右腿怎么又没了
=-=
花花又在卖萌感觉一脸血

ts8zs wrote:

话说taiko难度怎么设定的...怎样才能一个oni :3
因为这图具有萌力（pia
其实是因为在太鼓需要2 diff这个规则出来之前上传的所以可以只有一个难度
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

Megurine Luka wrote:

Flower wrote:

大哥这回要rank了，但是你给我记住，你这会做了个神图不代表我就输了。有朝一日我成了神麻婆一定要撞你这首歌然后爆掉你。咦我右腿怎么又没了
=-=
花花又在卖萌感觉一脸血

ts8zs wrote:

话说taiko难度怎么设定的...怎样才能一个oni :3
因为这图具有萌力（pia
其实是因为在太鼓需要2 diff这个规则出来之前上传的所以可以只有一个难度
原来如此:3
反正做个muzu也不需要太长时间:3 (找mod很麻烦就是了:3)
表示我替换mp3可以么:3
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka

ts8zs wrote:

原来如此:3
反正做个muzu也不需要太长时间:3 (找mod很麻烦就是了:3)
表示我替换mp3可以么:3
/w\你怎么替换
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Checked and all looked good.
Ranked!
Midasmens
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Midasmens
好！
Megurine Luka
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Thanks! kpy 么么哒=3=
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