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Tom Boxer & Morena feat J Warner - Deep In Love

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Erylex
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Erylex
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 мая 2013 г. at 1:04:07

Artist: Tom Boxer & Morena feat J Warner
Title: Deep In Love
Tags: club mix
BPM: 128
Filesize: 9860kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,62 stars, 170 notes)
  2. Hard (4,79 stars, 311 notes)
  3. Insane (4,9 stars, 414 notes)
Download: Tom Boxer & Morena feat J Warner - Deep In Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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It`s my first map. Help me please, so I made ​​my first beatmap is good :3
Last edited by Erylex , edited 59 times in total.
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
hi~ request via in game chat
insane only mod

[Insane]
00:23:446 (2) - Slow slider is Newcombo plz
00:25:790 - add note~
00:28:133 (2) - this slider is wrong 00:27:665 (1) - this slider Ctrl+H+J plz
00:36:336 (1) - remove nc
00:37:977 (1) - ^
00:48:290 (1) - NewCombo plz
00:55:789 (5) - ^
00:58:836 (1) - finish place 01:01:649 - here
02:18:289 (5) - Newcombo~
02:29:070 (1) - this slider finish place 02:31:648 - here
03:15:007 (1,2,3) - use Distance snap~
03:25:320 (6) - this note 03:25:437 - here plz

Good Luck~
Erylex
Topic Starter
Erylex

Satellite wrote:

hi~ request via in game chat
insane only mod

[Insane]
00:23:446 (2) - Slow slider is Newcombo plz
00:25:790 - add note~
00:28:133 (2) - this slider is wrong 00:27:665 (1) - this slider Ctrl+H+J plz
00:36:336 (1) - remove nc
00:37:977 (1) - ^
00:48:290 (1) - NewCombo plz
00:55:789 (5) - ^
00:58:836 (1) - finish place 01:01:649 - here
02:18:289 (5) - Newcombo~
02:29:070 (1) - this slider finish place 02:31:648 - here
03:15:007 (1,2,3) - use Distance snap~
03:25:320 (6) - this note 03:25:437 - here plz

Good Luck~

Big Thanks ^^
aonkub555
133 posts
Joined June 2012
aonkub555
Hi request via in game chat
Well. My english is very bad sory if me write wrong.


Normol mod only

[Nomal]
in nomal diff you should'nt place note at blue but exempt case you should blue tick line
Use beat snap divisor 1/4
Combo note should 14-15 for normol
slider velocity 2.00 i think it so fast for nomal
I can not say all point of Problem but i 'll example :o
00:01:749 (1) - remove kiai time you should'nt use kiai time since Begin
00:15:009 (1) - change combo merge with combo before and slider should Place at 00:15:243 and End at 00:16:181
00:16:884 (1) - Move circle go to 00:16:649
00:17:118 - slider end at

blar blar blar point of note must move There are quite a lot.

00:31:884 - remove kiai time
00:46:415 - start kiai time until at 01:01:415

I mod noob i wish it useful for you :)
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Hi from #modreqs
My noob mod :D

[General]
Your mp3 file has 320kbits/s
the mp3 must have between 128 - 192Kbits/s
Too many unsnapped object, check aimod => Snapping


[Easy]

00:12:196 (4,1,2,3) - Are you sure that follows the rhythm ? A Beginner wont be able to read this.
00:39:618 (1,2,1,2) - In my opinion, it's hard to read these for a beginner.
01:22:626 (1) - Move this spinner on the red tick
01:28:134 (1) - I think this type of slider is forbidden >.>

[Hard]

00:18:524 - Add a note
00:20:399 - ^
00:26:727 - ^
00:27:196 (4) - Delete this note
00:27:313 (1) - Move this slider on the red tick and end it to 00:28:602
00:36:336 (2) - Remove 1 reverse arrow and add a note here : 00:37:040
00:43:133 (4,5,1) - Spacing too high, it surprises the player.
01:46:648 (1) - Move 2 grid up.
01:47:117 (2) - Move 1 grid on the left.
01:56:961 (2) - Move 1 Grid left
02:29:304 (3) - Same as "Easy"
02:48:757 (5,6) - don't space.


Good Luck :D
[Luanny]
8,248 posts
Joined April 2011
[Luanny]
m4m.

[Insane]
00:02:587 (5,6) - this jump is weird and unnecessary, fix the spacing
00:39:383 (1,1,1) - this NC spam, make it a blue combo
00:41:024 (1,1,1,1) - same, make it a red combo
00:54:383 (1) - remove nc
01:16:649 (1) - ^
01:16:883 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this rhythm is weird, you better stack the 1/4 notes
01:18:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:21:805 (3) - ctrl g
01:30:477 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix this spacing lol
01:50:750 (1) - start this spinner here 01:50:634 -
01:52:625 (1) - start here 01:52:743 -
01:59:656 (1) - here 01:59:774 -
02:12:898 (1) - finish this spinner here 02:14:306 -
02:24:148 (1,2,3,4,5) - the jump for the whole combo is too extreme imo
02:29:070 (1) - I LOL'd
02:49:695 (3) - what. make it at least an 1/4 repeater slider. why 1/8?
02:58:015 (1,1) - start both 1/4 before
03:15:007 (1,2,3) - this spacing is REALLY weird
03:25:085 (5,6,7) - same

[Hard]
00:10:321 (1,2,1,1,1) - nc spam
00:55:672 (1) - start 1/4 after
00:57:664 (3) - this one is unsnapped e.e
01:30:477 (1) - remove NC
01:56:492 (1) - remove nc
01:58:953 (1) - start 1/4 later
03:03:523 (1) - remove nc

[Normal]

Same stuff with spinners and nc spam
00:24:383 (1,2,1,2,1) - unsnapped
00:29:071 (1,2,3) - ^
00:48:290 (5) - unsnapped
00:49:930 (2) - holy shit unsnapped

well, you have a lot of unsnapped stuff here, I guess you can find them by your own

[Easy]
same stuff as the other diffs

Good luck~
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
d(>∇<；)
20:11 DELiS: 01:17:470 (5,6,7,8) -
20:11 DELiS: there hard orz
20:11 Erylex: but
20:11 Erylex: no DT
20:11 Erylex: no hard
20:11 Erylex: :D
20:12 DELiS: hmm......
20:13 Erylex: Today,grumd mod my insane & hard
20:13 DELiS: there are hate spacing ;w;
20:13 Erylex: :DD
20:14 DELiS: 01:50:164 (4,5) - why not stack to 01:48:055 (4,5) -???
20:15 Erylex: oh sorrt :D
20:15 Erylex: ctrl+c -> ctrl+v
20:15 DELiS: :D
20:16 DELiS: 00:07:274 (1) - this stack to 00:05:634 (2) - 'w'??
20:18 DELiS: 00:42:665 (1) - stack to 00:41:024 (1) - ?
20:18 Erylex: curves eyes
20:18 Erylex: XD
20:19 Erylex: i change it
20:19 DELiS: 00:45:243 (2,3) - differ the y:
20:20 Erylex: ok,i change it
20:20 DELiS: 00:50:165 (5,6) - i like it http://puu.sh/2nEUB
20:21 Erylex: ok
20:21 DELiS: 00:57:196 (1,2) - why not symmetry?
20:22 DELiS: 00:58:133 (3,5) - differ y:
20:22 Erylex: i change this
20:22 Erylex: cirkle
20:22 Erylex: lol
20:22 Erylex: corcle*
20:22 Erylex: F*CK
20:22 Erylex: Circle*
20:23 Erylex: D:
20:23 DELiS: 01:17:470 (5,6,7,8,4,5,6,7) - I want to narrow ;__; Hope
20:24 Erylex: maybe
20:24 Erylex: 00:57:196 (1) -
20:24 Erylex: delete this note?
20:24 DELiS: no
20:26 Erylex: But the way,i change hitsounds. I hope you like it
20:26 DELiS: 00:57:664 (2) - CTRL+G -> 00:57:196 (1) - same this y: -> CTRL+G
20:26 Erylex: lol
20:26 Erylex: i change it
20:26 Erylex: i think
20:27 Erylex: upload?
20:27 DELiS: wait ><
20:27 DELiS: 01:25:320 (4) - same y: to 01:25:086 (3) -
20:29 DELiS: 02:21:102 (3) - stack to 02:19:929 (2) - end 'w'
20:29 DELiS: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/671607 maybe this
20:30 DELiS: 02:29:071 (1) - i think bad slider T_T
20:30 Erylex: Nice heart
20:30 Erylex: T_T
20:30 DELiS: ;w;
20:30 Erylex: ^C
20:30 Erylex: :С
20:31 DELiS: 02:47:351 (2) - move to x:350 y:202
20:32 DELiS: 02:48:289 (4,5,6) - move to x:228 y:274
20:32 DELiS: 02:48:757 (1) - move to x:370 y:274
20:33 Erylex: ok
20:34 DELiS: 02:50:632 (1,2,3,4) - same not beauty ;w;
20:34 DELiS: 02:57:663 (6) - move to x:257 y:291 ??
20:35 DELiS: 03:07:976 (1) - move to x:356 y:253
20:36 DELiS: 03:15:710 (3) - 1glid down~
20:37 DELiS: 03:29:538 (1,2,3) - stack to 03:27:898 (1,2,3,4,5) -
20:37 Erylex: all stacked
20:37 Erylex: lol
20:38 DELiS: :O
20:38 Erylex: ok
Erylex
Topic Starter
Erylex
NEED MODS :lol:
Tenshi
366 posts
Joined March 2011
Tenshi
[General]
-Did you ask permission to use those skin elements? If you did, make sure you give them credit in the description.
-Why does Insane have a slightly darker background? Just use one for consistency, or add a storyboard.
-All the difficulties except for Insane ask for a skin called 'map_skin.' If the skin elements are included in the map, then you don't need to set a preferred skin, so change it to "User's preference" in the Storyboarding setup.
-Use Distance Snap.

[Easy & Normal]
-Way too confusing spacings and patterns for these difficulties. Make the spacings closer and the patterns simpler.

[Hard]
-Inconsistent spacings.

[Insane]
-Could use bigger spacings to make it harder and clearer to read.
02:46:649 - Starting from here to the end, you should add more notes. The ending seems lacking otherwise.
Frobe
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
743 posts
Joined January 2011
Frobe
General
  1. all difficulty kiai time equally.
  2. kiai time start the white line.
  3. i think it is not good for soft-whistle1.
  4. In the following location please off the button.
    (song setup - Storyboarding - "Letterbox during breaks,Enable countdown")


- Easy -
  1. AR -1?
  2. frequent slider to change the speed is not good.


- Normal -
  1. OD +1~2
  2. frequent slider to change the speed is not good.
  3. reverse arrow hide by 00:07:274 (2) the of this note hitburst
  4. 00:25:556 (1) - remove nc
  5. 00:26:024 (1) - ^
  6. many unsnapped note,In the following location please check.
    (File - Open AiMod - Compose(45))


- Hard -
  1. AR -1, OD -1
  2. many unsnapped note,In the following location please check.
    (File - Open AiMod - Compose(45))


- Insane -
  1. many unsnapped note,In the following location please check.
    (File - Open AiMod - Compose(54))



I have a poor english skills. so i use Google translator.
please understanding when it gets hard to understand.

Good luck :)
watashino_old
162 posts
Joined March 2013
watashino_old
mod
Gerenal:

please check all thing in AiMod mod and fix it~
For example, bit rate of the song should be 128kbps-192kbps


easy
should have same spacing. This is unrankable issue. you must fix it. otherwise, your map will not be ranked.

00:06:337 (1) - spacing is about 1.7, which is different to other object.
00:10:556 (3) - ^
00:12:899 (2,3) - easy map should avoid overlapping~
00:16:650 (1,2) - ^
00:17:822 (3) - move to 00:18:056 - to follow the song
00:20:166 (3) - suggest to remove it.
00:20:634 (4) - move to 00:20:399 - and add a note in 00:21:806 - ?
00:24:384 - you have reduce the slider speed here but i cannot get the message from the song. maybe you should not make the change of the slider speed.
00:29:774 (1,2,3) - i will add slider instead add note here. first slider start at 00:29:306 - and end at 00:29:774 - , second from 00:30:243 - to 00:30:712 - , third 00:31:181 - to 00:31:649 - .
00:40:556 (2) - too different for easy map. you should have a clear understand in the propose of easy map. It is mainly provided to newbie.
00:57:899 (2) - add whishtle in slider starting and remove the whishtle at the end.


normal
same problem with easy map. normal map should have same spacing~

00:05:399 (1) - unnecessary nc. can remove it~
00:10:321 - here can add something to fit the song.
00:25:556 (1) - remove nc
00:26:962 - can add something?
00:49:931 (1) - this slider should end at 00:50:399 - too confuse...

hard
AR-1 OD-1...AR8 is too difficult for hard map with 128bpm

00:05:399 (1,2) - i will remove the nc~
00:20:633 (2,3,4) - this three slider can make it more funny~just suggest.
00:43:134 (1) - remove nc

you song is very good. hope you got rank :)
If you think my mod is useful and have spare time, can you mod my map plz?
thanks :)
map link:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/89370
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Hello
[General]
  1. Is storyboard really necessary?
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:941 (2) - Fix spacing
  2. 00:51:815 (2) - Move down a bit
  3. 01:22:519 (1) - Spinner should end here -> 01:24:042
  4. 02:29:081 (1) - For a cooler heart slider watch here
  5. 02:57:909 (1,1) - They are short... don't know if rankable or not.
  6. 03:22:753 (1) - Make spinner end on 03:24:159 -
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:019 (1) - Not really sure about that
  2. 00:33:534 (4) - x:328 y:128
  3. 00:57:206 (1,2) - CTRL+G
  4. 01:18:534 (5) - Make a 1/2 slider instead
  5. 01:22:519 (1) - Spinner should end here -> 01:24:042
  6. 01:25:567 (1,2) - Stack them?
  7. 03:17:831 - Add beat
  8. 03:09:159 - ~ 03:14:081 - Why don't you map this part?
  9. 03:19:472 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing and add beat on 03:19:706 and 03:20:175
[Normal]
No slowdown in Normal diff, please D:
  1. 00:15:019 (1) - Spinner too short for a Normal imo
  2. 00:51:581 - Add beat
  3. 02:50:644 (1,2) - CTRL+G
  4. 03:18:066 (1) - Remove NC
[Easy]

No slowdown in Easy too
  1. 00:19:003 (1,2) - Fix spacing
  2. 00:22:753 (1) - Spinner too short for Easy diff
  3. 00:35:409 (2,1) - Stacks on Easy diff are NOT recommended, fix please.
  4. 00:55:097 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:57:441 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:19:003 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:53:222 (2,3) - ^ (also spacing is incorrect)
  8. 02:50:644 (2,3,1,2) - ^
  9. 02:59:081 (1,2) - ^
  10. 03:26:503 (2,3) - ^
  11. 03:01:894 - ~ 03:15:487 - Break is too long imo
Also use distance snap, beginners don't really like those spacing changes.
Erylex
Topic Starter
Erylex
Thanks,updated
_Erra_
140 posts
Joined April 2011
_Erra_
мод4мод с Erylex
Easy
рекомендации - синий
00:55:566 (4) - добавить ноту
00:55:800 (5) - 00:56:972 (6) - передвинуть
http://puu.sh/2Lt3m.jpg
01:21:347 (2) - добавить
http://puu.sh/2Lt3m.jpg
02:28:847 (3) - подвинуть,где был 02:27:441 (1)
Normal
00:29:081 (2) - добавить ноту
http://puu.sh/2Lto0.jpg
00:29:081 (2) - добавить ноту
http://puu.sh/2Ltqt.jpg

Isnane

00:44:901 (6) - 00:45:722 (8) - добавить слайдер и ноты
http://puu.sh/2LtTn.jpg
01:59:549 (11) - 02:01:191 (3) - Можно сделать также \\^

Хитсаунды норм,но скин спиннера ужасен,мне не понравился D:
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