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Syrufit ft. Mei Ayakura - Story of the End
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Topic Starter
changed stuff about the easier diffs, kept Arrival unchanged for now
Pretty neat map.
But on some parts I got the feeling i have to play 2 hold sliders at the same time :<
You should leave at least 1 or 2 more ticks between those sliders.
But on some parts I got the feeling i have to play 2 hold sliders at the same time :<
You should leave at least 1 or 2 more ticks between those sliders.
I wish I had a computer and I could play Jenny's maps.=(
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Topic Starter
Waiting for happy30...
my arrival is here
this story will end soon
ok
[General]
- The audiolead-in is a bit short I think, also it's at a weird number. Can you make it 1500?
- use this bg: http://i.imgur.com/tKi8b0p.jpg it's a bit wider, also yours is like 600kb
[Start]
- It's just my opinion, but I think you used new combos too frequently (during non-chorus parts). How about 1 new combo every 2 stanzas instead?
00:15:367 (1,1,1,1) - Can you space these evenly? they are spaced around 0.60x to 0.80x
01:52:640 (2,3) - These are spaced a bit closer than the rest of your map. can you make the spacing 0.80x here too?
02:24:458 (1) - remove new combo
02:48:094 (1,1) - Can you make the spacing here consistent? (0.80x prev and next for both)
03:29:003 (2) - remove this note and extend the previous slider instead? (this feels overmapped)
04:22:640 (1) - remove new combo
remove the unused green lines at the end of the diff, or even better, try to map till the end so that all diffs have the same length.
[Way]
03:32:185 - clap out of nowhere?
remove the unused green lines at the end of the diff, or even better, try to map till the end so that all diffs have the same length.
[Arrival]
03:32:185 - clap out of nowhere?
awesome chorus
this story will end soon
ok
[General]
- The audiolead-in is a bit short I think, also it's at a weird number. Can you make it 1500?
- use this bg: http://i.imgur.com/tKi8b0p.jpg it's a bit wider, also yours is like 600kb
[Start]
- It's just my opinion, but I think you used new combos too frequently (during non-chorus parts). How about 1 new combo every 2 stanzas instead?
00:15:367 (1,1,1,1) - Can you space these evenly? they are spaced around 0.60x to 0.80x
01:52:640 (2,3) - These are spaced a bit closer than the rest of your map. can you make the spacing 0.80x here too?
02:24:458 (1) - remove new combo
02:48:094 (1,1) - Can you make the spacing here consistent? (0.80x prev and next for both)
03:29:003 (2) - remove this note and extend the previous slider instead? (this feels overmapped)
04:22:640 (1) - remove new combo
remove the unused green lines at the end of the diff, or even better, try to map till the end so that all diffs have the same length.
[Way]
03:32:185 - clap out of nowhere?
remove the unused green lines at the end of the diff, or even better, try to map till the end so that all diffs have the same length.
[Arrival]
03:32:185 - clap out of nowhere?
awesome chorus
Topic Starter
applied everything but the leadin and map end, stated reasoning irc
also, happy30 you punster
also, happy30 you punster
time to get nazi
[Start]
00:24:458 (2) - too close to (1)
00:43:549 (2) - too far from (1)
02:40:822 (1) - too far from (4)
02:42:640 (1) - too far from (1)
02:51:731 (1) - too far from (1)
[Start]
00:24:458 (2) - too close to (1)
00:43:549 (2) - too far from (1)
02:40:822 (1) - too far from (4)
02:42:640 (1) - too far from (1)
02:51:731 (1) - too far from (1)
Topic Starter
fixed, kinda hard to apply mods on touchpad x.x
this story ends of me now 
Topic Starter
^that's Elly
Grats~
萌萌0,0
wow nice map~!
gratz Jenny~ ^^
gratz Jenny~ ^^
Topic Starter
happy30 delayed the precious rank
~yaaay~ congratz !!!
Finally 
Congratz <3
Congratz <3
Jenny cogratz 
>Z.U.N.
Hi Jenny!
cool story!
cool story!
pasted and mirrored. not sure how it's supposed to flow
good map and song tho
good map and song tho
i'm not a mexican cirno omgJenny wrote:
^that's Elly
o3o