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Yuuki Aoi - Platinum (Short Ver.)

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alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat

Chewin wrote:

ya Chewin :3
~alacat's Normal~

  1. 00:36:952 (3) - soft default whistle on the slider head? okey. added ~
  2. 00:40:610 (1) - ^ (I would add some of them on this calmer part, but I don't have headphones now so I can't help you with it ç.ç catch me in game if you need some help), like 00:41:525 (3)'s tail for example and so on okey. I put some whistles
Thanks Chewin ~ :P

http://puu.sh/1GLIe
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
updated :3
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Looking for this song on Youtube, found out that it comes from "The World God Only Knows" character album. You already have the character's name in the tags, but it might be a good idea to add "The World God Only Knows" to the tags.

Don't kudosu this btw.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya

CDFA wrote:

Looking for this song on Youtube, found out that it comes from "The World God Only Knows" character album. You already have the character's name in the tags, but it might be a good idea to add "The World God Only Knows" to the tags.

Don't kudosu this btw.
Thanks for checking my map again >< and added it on the tags~
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Inconsistency in uninherited red timing sections, check it carefully with AIBat and call me back.
Moreover, don't forget to resnap the unsnapped green lines.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
ok Fixed everything now~ :3
Chewin
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Chewin
ok
DakeDekaane
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DakeDekaane
The final part is still messy (and unsnapped) imo, an uninherited point with 150 bpm in 01:25:976 would look better, just saying

I'll take Hinacle's Insane as example

As you have now


If you put the suggested one


Oh, I forgot snap the spinner in the last picture, but I think is enough for understand what I mean. Don't kd this.
SapphireGhost
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Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
General < here is an .osu containing the correct timing and combo colour suggestions
- Hello! As mentioned above, the last section needs to be correctly timed and snapped on all difficulties.
- First offset should be at 4,025 (start of the song) and not 2,562 (lead-in noise thing).
- From what I've searched, the title is captialized as Platinum and not PLATINUM. Also needs to be checked for the ranked version.
- For such a cheerful song, I'd love to see more than two combo colours.

Hinacle's Insane
01:06:037 (4,5,6,1) - (4) and (1) shouldn't overlap, it looks better.

Flask's Insane
01:24:513 (5,6) - Make (6) into a circle and place it on the white tick, it plays more smoothly.

Hard
00:20:854 (8,1) - Aah, 2.78x jump, it needs to be made smaller.
01:16:647 (5,1) - I feel like something should be filling 01:17:013, because there's action in the music but not in the map.

alacat's Normal
- yay

-kevincela-'s Easy
00:09:879 (3) - I'd put a new combo on this note for the downbeat.
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - The pattern is interesting, but for an Easy difficulty it's confusing to read.

That's it! The mod looked boring, so I added some colour. Anyhow, because you need to fix the timing you'll need a different MAT/BAT to rebubble and then you can poke me again and I'll rank it. Don't let anyone else rank it in the meantime or I'm not going to mod your maps anymore!
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks SG Fixed everything on my diff :3
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-

SapphireGhost wrote:

-kevincela-'s Easy
00:09:879 (3) - I'd put a new combo on this note for the downbeat. You're right,done
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - The pattern is interesting, but for an Easy difficulty it's confusing to read.I really don't want to change it,it could be confusing but imho this plays really well.
Thanks for the mod!

SPOILER
osu file format v11

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Title:Platinum (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:プラチナ (Short Ver.)
Artist:Yuuki Aoi
ArtistUnicode:悠木 碧
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:Card Captor Madoka
Tags:alacat Flask -kevincela- kevincela Hinacle Opening MAD Parody Puella Magi Magica Kaname Sakura Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Aoyama Mio Sakamoto Maaya The World God Only Knows
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Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
@SG

01:24:513 (5,6) - Make (6) into a circle and place it on the white tick, it plays more smoothly. nope I think 01:24:787 - has a music sound so just place something, not only white tick

@sekai use my code to update again >: change something

osu file format v11

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Title:Platinum (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:プラチナ (Short Ver.)
Artist:Yuuki Aoi
ArtistUnicode:悠木 碧
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Flask's Insane
Source:Card Captor Madoka
Tags:alacat Flask -kevincela- kevincela Hinacle Opening MAD Parody Puella Magi Magica Kaname Sakura Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Aoyama Mio Sakamoto Maaya The World God Only Knows
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252,104,83964,2,0,P|280:64|320:56,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,120,84512,2,0,P|116:76,2,40,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,160,84787,2,0,P|220:208,1,40,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,188,85061,1,0,0:0:0
280,248,85153,1,0,0:0:0
280,248,85244,2,0,P|348:244|408:172,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,20,85976,6,0,P|228:24|168:96,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,184,86576,2,0,P|152:232|164:276,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,87176,1,2,0:0:0
256,192,87376,12,0,91776,0:0:0
Suimya
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Suimya
updated :3
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hey ~! Sekai-nyan ~ ;)

As per you request ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 01:04:391 - Unsnapped kiai end point.
  2. 01:17:561 - I guess #2 kiai time end to here is better.

[Flask's Insane]


  1. 01:27:176 - Remove whistle and Add finish,sound much better.

[Hard]


  1. 01:26:361 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
  2. 01:26:569 (3) - ^
  3. 01:26:751 (4) - Unsnapped slider.
  4. 01:27:576 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end point).
  5. 00:23:415 (3,5) - Try perfect stack these slider.
  6. 00:50:122 (3) - I guess the slider should end to 00:50:488.
  7. 01:26:176 - Add a circle,pls don't ignore this vocal.

[alacat's Normal]


  1. 01:26:776 (2) - I guess the slider should end to 01:27:176 (don't forgot add finish to end point).

OK ~ Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ ;)
Suimya
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Thanks Rika Fixed everything :3
alacat
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alacat
Thanks Rika chan :3

fixed :)

http://puu.sh/1I0lP
Suimya
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updated alacat's diff :3
Zero__wind
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Go Go Go! Rank this!
Kawayi Rika
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Recheck ~ No kds pls ~

[General]


  1. 01:04:391 - Still no fixed unsnapped kiai end point.
  2. About last spinner all diff should change end point to 01:31:976 - .

[Hard]


  1. 00:49:391 (1,3) - Make symmetry stuff to here.
  2. 01:25:976 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Suimya
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ok Fixed and done :3
Kawayi Rika
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OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Here you go :3

Suimya
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Thank you moe Rika-chan >w<//
MMzz
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Hi i like this song

[General]
Shouldn't the title be PLATINUM, all caps? DJPop's ranked version is like that.

[Flask]
01:25:061 (7) - Did this get unstacked? I think it's supposed to be on top of 01:25:153 (8) - lol

[Hard]
00:21:586 (2) - Use a new combo here instead of 00:21:403 (1) - . You should stick to the downbeat since there is no vocal phrase I could see a combo would work on.
00:27:257 (6) - Combo here instead of 00:27:988 (1) - , again to stick on the downbeat. Or you can put the combo on 00:27:440 (8) - to stay more accurate on the downbeat if you don't mind multicolor stacks.

Call me back when this is looked over.
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika

MMzz wrote:

Hi i like this song

[General]
Shouldn't the title be PLATINUM, all caps? DJPop's ranked version is like that.
Tittle is fine,i have check this too.

Also SG want rank this map,pls read his mod :3
Hatori-kun
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Well according to this: http://vgmdb.net/album/29155, and this: http://kaminomi.jp/cd/index.html#coveralbum (See track 4)
Current title is fine, Artist isn't wrong, but you can put this in romanized artist 青山美生 starring 悠木 碧 (Aoyama Mio starring Yuuki Aoi)...
Hope I've been helpful ^^
Suimya
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Thanks MMzz Fixed everything :3
MMzz
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Well ok.
SapphireGhost
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Hard
01:21:952 (4,5,1) : Spacing is messed up here.
01:23:415 (1) - I think this is meant to be a 1/1 slider.

So close. Please double-check everything and then let me know after fixes.
Suimya
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Thanks SG :3 Fixed them~
SapphireGhost
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Alright, everything looks great now. (My first rank of 2013!)
I tried to think of an amazing Sakura-themed ranking post but I didn't come up with anything, so I'll just go back to re-watching the series now.
Suimya
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Thank you once again SG :3
BeatofIke
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Congrats moe sekai! :3
Chewin
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nice sekai
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gz to ranked~
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congrats baka :>!
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YAAAAY more Madoka!!
congratz on the rank sekai
Suimya
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wow Thank you everyone >w</
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moe~
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gratz~
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Gratz Sekai :3!
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