1. 100ccm (1,71 stars, 104 notes)
2. 150ccm (3,42 stars, 168 notes)
3. 50ccm (0,4 stars, 60 notes)
4. Mirror (4,55 stars, 376 notes)

masamune11 wrote:

For mod4mod request. I didn't do the mirror one--it's just not within my capability ;w;

As I just started beatmapping as well, all of these are basically suggestions. If you think it's not helpful, feel free to ignore.

SPOILER

150cm

1. 00:18:193 - Don't use clap over here.
2. 00:20:399 - Don't use clap over here. If you do this, I suggest to add a beat in 00:20:840 with a whistle.
3. This one gives off a building feel (if you get what I mean), so I suggest you to use:
   
   1. 00:27:678 - whistle,
   2. 00:27:899 - whistle,
   3. 00:28:119 - whistle,
   4. 00:28:340 - clap and finish.
   If you can change each volume and make it louder with each beat, I think it'd be awesome.
4. 00:47:090 - Add a beat here. If you do, you might want to add a whistle or clap in 00:47:310
5. 00:49:075 - Add a beat here, with a clap.
6. 00:58:781 - Add clap here. If you do, don't use clap in 00:59:002.
7. 01:00:546 - Um, I think this beat should be erased, because while it goes with the beat of the music, I feel it doesn't go with the current rhythm.
8. 01:26:354 - The space between this beat and the next beat is too wide. I suggest to go for a 2-beat slider. If you do, erase the next beat {01:25:913 (5)} as both will overlap if it's left as such.
9. 01:30:104 - Add clap here.
10. 01:56:796 - Erase this beat. I feel that one doesn't go with the rhythm.
11. 01:59:443 - Add a beat here.
12. 02:01:428 - Add a beat here. If you do, add a beat over 02:03:193 as well. It's either both or none at all.
13. 02:05:399 - Don't use clap.
14. 02:07:604 - Use clap.
15. 02:09:369 - Use whistle

100cm

1. 00:24:149 - Don't use clap.
2. 00:24:810 - Use clap over here.
3. 00:29:222 and 00:30:104 - Use clap over here.
4. 00:45:987 - Using clap and whistle over here gives off a strong impression... which should not be here. I feel the clap destabilize the song, so I suggest to use whistle only.
5. 00:51:281 - I think using 4 slider repeats connect better instead of 5.
6. 00:54:369 - I think this beat should be removed to give space of recovery. This map has a 1.5 stars on it, and I think it's complicated for three beats to connect at such pace.
7. 01:01:869 - Careful, overlapping sliders over here. I'm not sure if this is allowed for a ranked map.
8. 01:09:369 until 01:10:693 - ...wow, a colorful arrangement. I don't know what to say about this... having never encountered any.
9. 01:13:119 - Use clap an whistle over here. Unlike my fourth point, this one beat marks an accented impression on the song.
10. 01:27:237 - Use clap. Same reason above.
11. 01:31:649 - The following break is too short while it can be filled with more beats. You might want to change the single circle in this time into 1.5 slider with two repeats.
12. 01:35:399 - Break is also too short. Change the single beat into 1.5 slider with 2 repeats.
13. 01:41:575 - That's a vacant tune over here. I recommend to change this single beat into a 2-beat slider. Afterwards, you could erase the lonely beat in 01:42:457.

50cm

1. 00:31:869 until 00:34:516 - I get what you want to make in this time span, but with this kind of difficulty, I still think it's better to stick with normal tune. I suggest to change it into 2s-1p-b-1p-2s, where "s" is slider, "p" is pause (the vacant distance between beats), and "b" is beat. The number before it means beats, so 2s means slider with 2 beats long.
2. 00:41:354 - Combo is not a combo when it's alone. I think this should follow as the previous combo finisher. In short, turn it into purple.
3. 01:10:693 - Add clap over here?
4. 01:25:472 - Instead of making b-0.5p-5s, I suggest a single 5.5s from this point of time.

stevemin wrote:

Hello~ (m4m)
I am newb mapper so u don't have to follow all of my suggestions

General
Try to a better distance snap (further) and try making the sliders be mirrored (use the x and y axis) (it will look neater)
Also, u are using too much same sliders.

50cmm
00:00:105 (1) - slider is short. sounds strange change like this fixed but other way
00:03:634 - put sliders instead of spinners. it will sound better changed one spinner
00:36:832 (3) - the distance between the preceding note is too close the distance snap says no
01:25:472 - really ugly slider. try to change it yeah
01:42:457 - is the break after this point intentional? if not, u MUST add more, if yes, resize the mp3 file

100cmm
u should increase the ar 1 more (my opinion)
00:00:105 - its repeated from the '50cmm' diff. try to change i dont changed them but added a circle
00:11:354 ~ 00:13:119 - this part is really weird, especially the distance snapping okay
00:21:722 ~ 00:23:928 - this whistle is ruining the song, exclude it done
01:15:435 - really confusing, may be like this. sliders are easier to play done
01:26:134 - too close to the previous one done
01:38:046 - "
01:42:457 - is the break after this point intentional? if not, u MUST add more, if yes, resize the mp3 file

150cmm
increase the beat spacing to 0.7x
many weird hitsounds (especially weird whistles)
00:01:869 (4) - change combo color Done
00:01:869 (4) - "
01:06:502 - change slider like this Fixed
01:31:428 - " Changed
01:31:649 (2) - is the break after this point intentional? if not, u MUST add more, if yes, resize the mp3 file


Mirror
maybe increase ar by 1
00:14:663 - ugly slider, can't think of good way to fix it Done
00:51:281 - " Done
other than dat, better than the last diffs

thx~

1. I personally would use a distance space of 0.8x but okay
2. 00:06:281 (5) - remove circle and start spinner already from here. The spinner fits way better for that long sound which starts 00:06:281 (5) -
3. 00:11:354 (2,3) - fix spacing
4. 00:16:428 (6,1) - ^
5. 00:44:222 (3) - I don't know why i dislike this slider. In editor i see where the rythm goes but while playing it feels awkward
6. 00:51:281 (3) - ^
7. 00:54:810 (2) - start 1/2 beat earlier ... this slider sounds off because the 1/1 beat here is not so dominant and the rythm of (1) kind of calls for that ....
8. 00:57:457 (3,4) - both sound off ... idk like it lacks of full rythm
9. 01:01:869 (2) - start 1/2 earlier?
10. 01:14:002 (1) - I see no real point in this spinner
11. 01:25:472 (1) - weird slider, looks odd
12. 01:31:428 - add note/ Hitcircle

1. overall spacing of 0.6x DS is way to low D: Makes it harder to play .. a spacing of 1.0x fits way better for this normal
2. 00:03:634 (5) - New combo
3. 00:44:222 (6) - ^
4. 00:54:149 (7) - ^
5. 00:56:575 (11,1) - spacing issue
6. 01:01:869 (7) - start 1/2 beat earlier / maybe new combo
7. 01:09:369 (1,2,1,2) - meh ... new combos do not fit and overall these 4 hitcircles seem pointless ... use a 2nd spinner instead (let it start 1/4 after the first one
8. 01:17:752 (1) - start spinner earlier or use something else
9. 01:28:119 (5) - new combo
10. 01:29:884 (7) - short this slider 1/2 and start it from 01:30:104 - and use a hit circle instead for 01:29:884 -
11. 01:35:399 (2) - does not fit that much at least at 01:37:163 - should be the end or something different overall because the following part of the combo is out of rythm
12. 01:40:472 (3) - move 1/2 ealier and start (4) from 01:40:472 instead + make the slider 1/2 longer

1. Well like i said in General this diff is to easy ._. Mostly the distance is to short and the rythm is to easy. Plays like a normal at the moment
2. 00:07:163 (1) - start directly after first spinner.
3. 00:20:840 (3,4) - try avoiding these overlaps
4. 00:30:104 (10,1,2,3,4) - put the new combo 1 grid up . Looks odd at the moment
5. 00:54:149 (1) - one repeater less and do something at 00:54:810 -
6. 00:59:553 - fill this gap
7. 01:15:104 (3,4,5,6) - weird. Your distance spacing is so low that you cannot see the spacing change ._.
8. 01:31:649 (2) - beginning of this slider is weird
9. 01:34:075 (3,4,5,6) - here the same. Weird to play because overall spacing is to low
10. 01:40:252 - / 01:40:472 - add Hitcircles
11. 01:42:457 - I would recommend just ending the map here
12. 02:06:502 (5) - actaully short this 1 repeat and start (6) there already from 02:07:163 -
13. 02:09:590 - add note
14. towards the end you use more gaps in the timeline :< not good for hards

1. Use Hitsounds
2. 00:24:149 - / 00:24:369 - add hitcircles
3. 00:41:354 (2,3) - these here play very awkward and you use them again a few beats later
4. 00:45:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - something plays wrong here. Have a note on 00:45:325 - . The stacks are awkward like the rythm is wrong here. Some stacks fit others don't D:
5. 01:11:354 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - plays bad
6. 01:17:752 (1) - start spinner earlier
7. 01:20:950 (6) - delete this one ... sounds better without it
8. 01:21:281 (8) - ... boring. Do something else
9. 01:25:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - something in this stream sounds off ._.
10. You have alot of gaps in your timeline ... that is boring and bad for higher difficulties

bomber34 wrote:

German Mappack team

[General]
- Cut the mp3. Your audio file is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay longer then the part you actually map yeah i seach someone who can do it
- Use maybe following tags: Nintendo 3DS added nintendo
- Not sure if you really need the (MK7 Version) in the title ... but i am not sure though because there is another Kenta Nagata-RR but this is the MK64 one
- Why is the 150ccm way longer than the rest? I could understand it if Mirror was as long ... but personally I see no point in an extended version ... feels way to long and not necessary mapped mirror longer
- haha Mirror diff should be like 150ccm just with ctrl + h and ctrl + j mirrored and higher diff setting xD not a serious suggestion though
- Your Hard (150ccm) is way to easy in my opinion. It is a normal for me ...
- please remove your claps. This song does not call for claps. Soft whistles and finishes are good for this song claps removed
- Not sure at all but for me the purple combo color blends a little bit with bg deleted pink and purple
- and yes i noticed i wrote alot of what Kokatsu wrote already but you seem to updated it and there were not that much changes >:

[50ccm]

1. I personally would use a distance space of 0.8x but okay now on some parts
2. 00:06:281 (5) - remove circle and start spinner already from here. The spinner fits way better for that long sound which starts 00:06:281 (5) - fixed...
3. 00:11:354 (2,3) - fix spacing done
4. 00:16:428 (6,1) - ^ ^
5. 00:44:222 (3) - I don't know why i dislike this slider. In editor i see where the rythm goes but while playing it feels awkward i dont know how to changed to make it better..so i dont change it
6. 00:51:281 (3) - ^ ^
7. 00:54:810 (2) - start 1/2 beat earlier ... this slider sounds off because the 1/1 beat here is not so dominant and the rythm of (1) kind of calls for that .... i thought its too fast for easy but fixed
8. 00:57:457 (3,4) - both sound off ... idk like it lacks of full rythm fixed
9. 01:01:869 (2) - start 1/2 earlier? like the other one...fixed
10. 01:14:002 (1) - I see no real point in this spinner spinner removed
11. 01:25:472 (1) - weird slider, looks odd i´m not good in slider-forming ^^" .. but i tried another one
12. 01:31:428 - add note/ Hitcircle okay

[100ccm]

1. overall spacing of 0.6x DS is way to low D: Makes it harder to play .. a spacing of 1.0x fits way better for this normal okay
2. 00:03:634 (5) - New combo done
3. 00:44:222 (6) - ^ done
4. 00:54:149 (7) - ^ ^
5. 00:56:575 (11,1) - spacing issue fixed
6. 01:01:869 (7) - start 1/2 beat earlier / maybe new combo added a circle and nc
7. 01:09:369 (1,2,1,2) - meh ... new combos do not fit and overall these 4 hitcircles seem pointless ... use a 2nd spinner instead (let it start 1/4 after the first one fixed
8. 01:17:752 (1) - start spinner earlier or use something else removed spinner
9. 01:28:119 (5) - new combo done
10. 01:29:884 (7) - short this slider 1/2 and start it from 01:30:104 - and use a hit circle instead for 01:29:884 - fixed
11. 01:35:399 (2) - does not fit that much at least at 01:37:163 - should be the end or something different overall because the following part of the combo is out of rythm ?
12. 01:40:472 (3) - move 1/2 ealier and start (4) from 01:40:472 instead + make the slider 1/2 longer done

The Normal diff is okay if you fix the spacing overall to something higher .

[150ccm]

1. Well like i said in General this diff is to easy ._. Mostly the distance is to short and the rythm is to easy. Plays like a normal at the moment
2. 00:07:163 (1) - start directly after first spinner. looks strange...made the first one longer
3. 00:20:840 (3,4) - try avoiding these overlaps done
4. 00:30:104 (10,1,2,3,4) - put the new combo 1 grid up . Looks odd at the moment completedly changed
5. 00:54:149 (1) - one repeater less and do something at 00:54:810 - done
6. 00:59:553 - fill this gap done
7. 01:15:104 (3,4,5,6) - weird. Your distance spacing is so low that you cannot see the spacing change ._. done
8. 01:31:649 (2) - beginning of this slider is weird tried to fix
9. 01:34:075 (3,4,5,6) - here the same. Weird to play because overall spacing is to low tried to fix
10. 01:40:252 - / 01:40:472 - add Hitcircles okay ^^
11. 01:42:457 - I would recommend just ending the map here okay
12. 02:06:502 (5) - actaully short this 1 repeat and start (6) there already from 02:07:163 - deleted because ^
13. 02:09:590 - add note ^
14. towards the end you use more gaps in the timeline :< not good for hards

Increase spacing please >.<

[Mirror]

1. Use Hitsounds sure
2. 00:24:149 - / 00:24:369 - add hitcircles okay
3. 00:41:354 (2,3) - these here play very awkward and you use them again a few beats later tried another ones
4. 00:45:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - something plays wrong here. Have a note on 00:45:325 - . The stacks are awkward like the rythm is wrong here. Some stacks fit others don't D: delete the stackings
5. 01:11:354 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - plays bad fixed it
6. 01:17:752 (1) - start spinner earlier ähem...okay
7. 01:20:950 (6) - delete this one ... sounds better without it deleted?
8. 01:21:281 (8) - ... boring. Do something else done
9. 01:25:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - something in this stream sounds off ._. remade stream
10. You have alot of gaps in your timeline ... that is boring and bad for higher difficulties

The rythm is not hit partially in this diff
But I would rather accept this one as a hard ...

1. Inconsistency in combo colours
   You use different colors to all difficulties.
2. Inconsistency in Tags
   - [100ccm] : nintendo
   - [150ccm] : nintendo
   - [50ccm] : Nintendo
   - [Mirror] : nintendo

1. 00:03:634 (4) - Fix that slider curve.
2. 00:14:884 (5) - This could be a better beat blanket.
3. 00:31:869 (3,5) - Not symmetrical.
4. 00:51:281 (3,1,2) - That looks like Inconsistent spacing but it's not due to beat distance. Consider a different spacing there to avoid confusions of that
5. part to the player.
6. 01:14:002 (3,4) - Not symmetrical.
7. 01:25:472 (1) - Work out a bit more this Slider.
8. 01:28:340 (2,3) - Make a more beautiful beat blanket.
9. 01:31:869 (1,3) - Not symmetrical.
10. How about mapping the rest?

1. 00:03:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix the grid spacing of those.
2. 00:15:546 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^

1. 00:23:928 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fix spacing.
2. 00:24:810 (6) - Fix that slider. >.<; It looks bad and totally not creative~
3. 01:07:163 (3) - Make this curve nicer.
4. 01:31:649 (2) - Work this slider a bit more.

1. 00:01:428 (4,5,6,7,8) - Random spacing ftw. Fix it :3
2. 00:11:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - NO. This song doesn't call for such streams D:<
3. Your need much work for this~