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Topic Starter
blackabyss
^ no prob o//

well, thankies for coming here. i glad to see you to play this map, and... welcome to osu!
your cover really "ekren" xD i've heard it at your soundcloud, and i just falled in love with your Masked bitcH. lol

thanks for coming hope! see you round~
Jayel
Hi, thanks for modding my map!!

M4M here!!

[General]
Try to add hitsound from the beginning till 00:20:194

[Easy]
The SV (Slider Velocity) of this difficulty is TOO high.
SV 0.8 ~ 1.0 is recommended for Easy diff.
Use Beat Snap Divisor as 1/2.

00:20:674 (1) - Remove NC (New Combo).
00:36:514 (6) - NC.
00:46:114 (1) - This spinner looks so embarrassing for me. '^';;
01:06:754 (1,2,3) - This pattern might be hard for Easy.
01:26:434 - Why don't you add some notes from here?
01:45:154 (3) - You are not actually supposed to put slider like this. Use Beat Snap Divisor as 1/2.
01:59:074 (1) - Lengthen or remove this "SUDDEN" spinner. (or is it just me who feels this spinner so sudden?)
02:12:994 (2,3) - This pattern sounds a little odd. Try this one: http://puu.sh/1rqbM
02:22:594 (1) - Too short spinner.
02:27:394 (1,2,3) - A little hard pattern for easy.
02:30:754 (1) - Remove 02:29:794 (4) and make the spinner start from here and end at 02:31:714.
02:54:994 (5) - This slider pattern is not recommended for easy.
02:59:074 (5) - NC and...
03:00:034 (1,1) - Remove those NC's.
03:02:914 (1) - Too short spinner.
03:25:474 (1) - Make this spinner end at 03:27:394.

Overall, this diff has a little overdose of spinners. Try to reduce the number of those spinners.

[Hard]
00:40:834 (1) - Clap.
01:26:434 - Why don't you add some notes from here?
02:29:794 (5) - This slider sounds weird; try to substitute this with other pattern.
02:30:514 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that this ends at 02:31:714.
03:25:234 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that this ends at 03:27:394.

Generally, you have mapped this song pretty well.
Just put some more efforts here and it'll be a great map. :D

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
blackabyss
Jayel Mods

Jayel wrote:

Hi, thanks for modding my map!! your welcome :3//

M4M here!! \:D/

[General]
Try to add hitsound from the beginning till 00:20:194 i tried it

[Easy]
The SV (Slider Velocity) of this difficulty is TOO high.
SV 0.8 ~ 1.0 is recommended for Easy diff. but in this map, SV in Easy 1.30 :?
Use Beat Snap Divisor as 1/2. okay

00:20:674 (1) - Remove NC (New Combo). okay
00:36:514 (6) - NC. ^
00:46:114 (1) - This spinner looks so embarrassing for me. '^';; w-whyyy? ;A;
01:06:754 (1,2,3) - This pattern might be hard for Easy. so, i changed it
01:26:434 - Why don't you add some notes from here? no, i just follow the vocal. sorry :'D
01:45:154 (3) - You are not actually supposed to put slider like this. Use Beat Snap Divisor as 1/2. fix
01:59:074 (1) - Lengthen or remove this "SUDDEN" spinner. (or is it just me who feels this spinner so sudden?) no, this sake for Kiai time ;w;
02:12:994 (2,3) - This pattern sounds a little odd. Try this one: http://puu.sh/1rqbM tried xD
02:22:594 (1) - Too short spinner. Removed
02:27:394 (1,2,3) - A little hard pattern for easy. i think so, changed
02:30:754 (1) - Remove 02:29:794 (4) and make the spinner start from here and end at 02:31:714.
02:54:994 (5) - This slider pattern is not recommended for easy. Changed
02:59:074 (5) - NC and... fix
03:00:034 (1,1) - Remove those NC's. ^
03:02:914 (1) - Too short spinner. Removed
03:25:474 (1) - Make this spinner end at 03:27:394. fix

Overall, this diff has a little overdose of spinners. Try to reduce the number of those spinners.

[Hard]
00:40:834 (1) - Clap. Forgot, orz. thanks o//
01:26:434 - Why don't you add some notes from here? same reason here.
02:29:794 (5) - This slider sounds weird; try to substitute this with other pattern. okay
02:30:514 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that this ends at 02:31:714. ^
03:25:234 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that this ends at 03:27:394. ^

Generally, you have mapped this song pretty well.
Just put some more efforts here and it'll be a great map. :D

Good luck!! thanks \:'D/

Thanks for your Mod~ xD
creampuff
May I make a normal guest diff?~
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Tsusuko wrote:

May I make a normal guest diff?~
sure you can :D
creampuff
Here's the diff.
http://puu.sh/1tbzB
Hope you like it.
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Tsusuko wrote:

Here's the diff.
http://puu.sh/1tbzB
Hope you like it.
thanks a lot o//
Banana
Hi Banana here from my mod queue

General
you need to add the guest diff.'s creater's name to each diff., that is, you need to add Tsusuko into tag in Hard and Normal

Hard
CS+1? normal use CS4 and it's strange to make hard a larger circle
00:28:354 (7) - make this slider last to 00:28:834? a longer slider make it easier recognized here, should you changed it, NC the following note example
00:32:674 (1) - slider repeats twice plays bad to me .-., maybe repeat once and add a circle stacked instead? should you changed it, move the slider to keep the ds
01:02:434 (9) - note pattern is not very nice here, how about make (9) left and the follwing (1) below? i mean this, try to avoid touching notes in a short time section
01:08:914 - start the spinner here?
01:42:754 (2) - curve to the other side, i mean left or below
02:29:794 (5) - keep the distance
02:30:274 - remove the repeat on the (5) and start the spinner here?
02:56:434 - add a circle here?
03:27:154 - spinner end at here

soku's Normal
00:39:634 - add a circle?
03:06:274 (3) - use a 1/1 slider at 03:06:034 instead to go with the vocal?
03:20:914 (3) - this circle seems not needed here, and 03:24:274 is a better place for it

Easy
00:22:594 (2) - curve to the other side
00:56:194 (2) - use a 1/1 slider instead? these notes are hard in an easy
01:08:914 - start the spinner here
03:01:954 (4) - make it like this?
03:25:474 (1) - move this spinner 1/2 earlier

good luck
69653863

From our queue \( ^_^)/

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

[General]
  1. Try using muted normal-sliderslide, it'll fit the music .w.
[Easy]
  1. 00:20:674 (5) - Move a little bit to the up for better flow
  2. 00:22:594 (2) - No, sliders with more than 1 reverses is not recommended especially on Easy and Normal. Change this into 2 sliders or whatever you want, but please no 2 reverses.
  3. 00:28:834 - Add note here please
  4. 00:29:314 (1) - Add clap
  5. 00:30:754 (3) - ^ on end
  6. 00:35:074 (4) - ^
  7. 00:36:994 (2) - ^
  8. 00:40:834 (1) - ^ on start
  9. 00:46:114 (1) - Using spinner in the middle of the patterns is a totally no-no and looks uncreative. Remove this spinner and add some circles/sliders here instead
  10. 00:48:034 (1) - No.
  11. 00:51:394 (1) - Same here.
  12. 00:55:714 (1,2,3) - >< this is Easy. Change these into a slider with one reverse.
  13. 00:57:154 (4) - oh why
  14. 01:03:394 (1) - whyyy
  15. 01:06:754 (1) - Add clap on start?
  16. 01:07:714 (2) - Add clap?
  17. 01:34:114 - Add note plz
  18. 01:53:314 (1) - Change this into just one slider without any reverses
  19. 01:56:434 (5) - NC
  20. 02:08:674 (1) - why?
  21. 02:18:514 (4) - .
  22. 02:21:634 (3) - Why don't you just copy paste 02:19:714 (1) - and apply some flip or rotation on it?
  23. 02:25:954 (3,4) - Combine into one slider with one reverse
  24. 02:52:834 (2,3,4,5) - ......stream. Simplify please, this is Easy, remember
  25. 03:02:914 (5) - Add clap on start
  26. 03:17:314 (8) - .
  27. 03:19:714 (1,2) - ..
  28. 03:23:074 (1,2,3) - oh another stream. whyy
Instead of that, your map is nice, actually. :3

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:474 - add note here please, feels awkward without it
  2. 00:26:914 (4,5,6,7) - Unstack please, confusing to read
  3. 01:07:714 (3,4) - Unstack.
Well, this diff is nicer tho, good job :D

Good luck blackabyss!
Topic Starter
blackabyss
Thanks for your mods all \:D/
i've learned much from your mods!


Banana's Mods

Banana wrote:

Hi Banana here from my mod queue thanks for coming to mod this maps :3//

General
you need to add the guest diff.'s creater's name to each diff., that is, you need to add Tsusuko into tag in Hard and Normal wait, i had done it D: and Tsusuko just make the normal one.

Hard
CS+1? normal use CS4 and it's strange to make hard a larger circle okay.
00:28:354 (7) - make this slider last to 00:28:834? a longer slider make it easier recognized here, should you changed it, NC the following note example changed
00:32:674 (1) - slider repeats twice plays bad to me .-., maybe repeat once and add a circle stacked instead? should you changed it, move the slider to keep the ds sorry no.
01:02:434 (9) - note pattern is not very nice here, how about make (9) left and the follwing (1) below? i mean this, try to avoid touching notes in a short time section this very helpful, thanks~
01:08:914 - start the spinner here? okay
01:42:754 (2) - curve to the other side, i mean left or below ^
02:29:794 (5) - keep the distance ^
02:30:274 - remove the repeat on the (5) and start the spinner here? ^
02:56:434 - add a circle here? ^
03:27:154 - spinner end at here sorry, no.

soku's Normal it'll fix soon by Tsusuko
00:39:634 - add a circle?
03:06:274 (3) - use a 1/1 slider at 03:06:034 instead to go with the vocal?
03:20:914 (3) - this circle seems not needed here, and 03:24:274 is a better place for it

Easy
00:22:594 (2) - curve to the other side okay, i tried it
00:56:194 (2) - use a 1/1 slider instead? these notes are hard in an easy ^
01:08:914 - start the spinner here ^
03:01:954 (4) - make it like this? ^
03:25:474 (1) - move this spinner 1/2 earlier ^

good luck thanks o///

inverness's Mods

inverness wrote:

From our queue \( ^_^)/

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

[General]
  1. Try using muted normal-sliderslide, it'll fit the music .w. but, how to do it? :O tutor please?


[Easy]
  1. 00:20:674 (5) - Move a little bit to the up for better flow done
  2. 00:22:594 (2) - No, sliders with more than 1 reverses is not recommended especially on Easy and Normal. Change this into 2 sliders or whatever you want, but please no 2 reverses. okay
  3. 00:28:834 - Add note here please ^
  4. 00:29:314 (1) - Add clap ^
  5. 00:30:754 (3) - ^ on end ^
  6. 00:35:074 (4) - ^ ^
  7. 00:36:994 (2) - ^ ^
  8. 00:40:834 (1) - ^ on start ^
  9. 00:46:114 (1) - Using spinner in the middle of the patterns is a totally no-no and looks uncreative. Remove this spinner and add some circles/sliders here instead yeah, i'm very poor at pattern ;w;
  10. 00:48:034 (1) - No. fix
  11. 00:51:394 (1) - Same here. ^
  12. 00:55:714 (1,2,3) - >< this is Easy. Change these into a slider with one reverse. ^
  13. 00:57:154 (4) - oh why D:
  14. 01:03:394 (1) - whyyy ^
  15. 01:06:754 (1) - Add clap on start? added
  16. 01:07:714 (2) - Add clap? ^
  17. 01:34:114 - Add note plz ^
  18. 01:53:314 (1) - Change this into just one slider without any reverses okay :"
  19. 01:56:434 (5) - NC o>
  20. 02:08:674 (1) - why? fix
  21. 02:18:514 (4) - . ^
  22. 02:21:634 (3) - Why don't you just copy paste 02:19:714 (1) - and apply some flip or rotation on it? fix
  23. 02:25:954 (3,4) - Combine into one slider with one reverse okay
  24. 02:52:834 (2,3,4,5) - ......stream. Simplify please, this is Easy, remember okaaay ;w;
  25. 03:02:914 (5) - Add clap on start added
  26. 03:17:314 (8) - . ;__;
  27. 03:19:714 (1,2) - .. ^
  28. 03:23:074 (1,2,3) - oh another stream. whyy dunno, but i've fixed that.
Instead of that, your map is nice, actually. :3 nuoo, my maps not good enough. still needed mods thanks~

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:474 - add note here please, feels awkward without it okay 'w'd
  2. 00:26:914 (4,5,6,7) - Unstack please, confusing to read ^
  3. 01:07:714 (3,4) - Unstack. ^
Well, this diff is nicer tho, good job :D thanks o//

Good luck blackabyss! thanks for your mods! :)
creampuff
Banana's mod

Banana wrote:

suko's Normal fix'd for you
00:39:634 - add a circle? Ok
03:06:274 (3) - use a 1/1 slider at 03:06:034 instead to go with the vocal? Nah.
03:20:914 (3) - this circle seems not needed here, and 03:24:274 is a better place for it Removed

Ok, here's the updated diff.
http://puu.sh/1tL6Y
cirno-_old
Normal
01:32:674 (5) - Shorten it by 4/4 and give it a 2nd reverse. It sounds better. Adjust positions as needed.

Hard
SPOILER
CS 4 - First thing I noticed was that hard had bigger circles than normal lol
AR7
OD6 at least. If not 7. This is easy for a hard.
There are 10 spinners. I think that's too many.

00:46:114 (1) - Spinner could use a clap
00:53:794 (1) - ^
Lots of the other spinners that don't have finish could use a clap or something. But you should look into deleting some spinners and mapping it instead.

02:19:714 (7) - NC
02:20:434 (1) - Remove NC


They are mapped pretty well :) GL
Topic Starter
blackabyss

cirno- wrote:

Hard
SPOILER
CS 4 - First thing I noticed was that hard had bigger circles than normal lol changed, lol xD
AR7 fixed
OD6 at least. If not 7. This is easy for a hard. ^
There are 10 spinners. I think that's too many. ^

00:46:114 (1) - Spinner could use a clap *
00:53:794 (1) - ^ *
Lots of the other spinners that don't have finish could use a clap or something. But you should look into deleting some spinners and mapping it instead. *i removed and change it with pattern, thanks o//

02:19:714 (7) - NC okay
02:20:434 (1) - Remove NC ^


They are mapped pretty well :) GL ah thanks a lot xD
cokeshawty
Mapped pretty well :3
Good luck!~
creampuff
SPOILER

cirno- wrote:

Normal 01:32:674 (5) - Shorten it by 4/4 and give it a 2nd reverse. It sounds better. Adjust positions as needed. I made a change, but it's different from what you asked

Updated
http://puu.sh/1tW5z
hophope
oh.. my god. the updated beatmaps turned out to be pretty good! *////* (still feel awkward listening to my own voice though)
thanks a lot everyone for giving out your time to mod this ;w;)/ <3 (lol somehow I kinda feel obligated to say thanks too)

ah and to abyss-san,
you don't consider adding the original pv to the beatmap? :'D
Topic Starter
blackabyss

FluKerr wrote:

Mapped pretty well :3
Good luck!~
thanks, but it should be modded further again. :>

Tsusuko wrote:

SPOILER

cirno- wrote:

Normal 01:32:674 (5) - Shorten it by 4/4 and give it a 2nd reverse. It sounds better. Adjust positions as needed. I made a change, but it's different from what you asked

Updated
http://puu.sh/1tW5z
thanks for your hardworks Tsusuko \:D/

hophope wrote:

oh.. my god. the updated beatmaps turned out to be pretty good! *////* (still feel awkward listening to my own voice though)
thanks a lot everyone for giving out your time to mod this ;w;)/ <3 (lol somehow I kinda feel obligated to say thanks too)

ah and to abyss-san,
you don't consider adding the original pv to the beatmap? :'D
wuoh, you come again! still thanks for check this thread too!
anyways, i can't edit the video cause, there's rules to seperated the video and the mp3 song. so, the file size isn't too big
:?
and... this pv song kinda ero. maybe i can't put it because osu! is for universal age. haha. sorry :(
69653863
Get the muted normal-sliderslide here and copy it to your beatmap folder. Then, set your hitsound sampleset settings from default to Custom 1. (N:C1)

No kudosu for this please ^^
Topic Starter
blackabyss

inverness wrote:

Get the muted normal-sliderslide here and copy it to your beatmap folder. Then, set your hitsound sampleset settings from default to Custom 1. (N:C1)

No kudosu for this please ^^
thanks again o//
creampuff
So, I was playing through my diff and realized the changes weren't made

ehuehuehue I'm silly

http://puu.sh/1u9in
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Tsusuko wrote:

So, I was playing through my diff and realized the changes weren't made

ehuehuehue I'm silly

http://puu.sh/1u9in
lol, thanks again tsusuko~
yurunneram
Easy
Decrease Slider V!!!! Your normal guest diff's V is 1.2!!! and also if ur free maybe lower the distance spacing to 0.6?
Erm... no problem

Normal
02:09:154 (3) - Don't hide it

Hard
np
Louis Cyphre
[General]

- I guess original artist is 'hope' instead of 'Hope'. according to this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shlLMT4x8n8
- Add in tags 'megpoid'. Megpoid, 2nd name of Gumi, should be in tags.
- I suggest to use such colour set: http://puu.sh/1vctO , imo looks better, anyway, it's up to you.
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 121,191,79
Combo3 : 0,155,230
Combo4 : 196,108,210
- Kiai must start and end perfectly snapped on ticks. Your ones have +1 ms delay, please fix them all.
- 03:12:034 useless green line.


[Easy]

OD -1.

Very, very cool for 1st map. Hm, but i've noticed, that there are no 'pauses' between notes. Map goes simply just 1|1|1|1|1|1|1. The only 2 pauses that i've found, despite breaks and spinners are: 01:02:914 - , 03:19:234 - . I'd recomend to place such pauses a bit more, to avoid robo 1|1 constant rhythm. yea.

00:40:834 (1) - too soon after spinner, take a note: this is an easiest difficulty, and it should be easy not only for you, but for newbie players too.
01:59:074 (1,1) - ^
03:10:114 (1,1) - ^
02:08:674 (1,2) - hard to read. According to song, logically, there should be one more repeat, because of song rhythm and because of your placement of notes. To fix this, just place it like this http://puu.sh/1vcAX , it looks and plays much better.

[Suko's Normal]
HP-2, OD -1

02:29:794 (1) - add finish, as it is on rest difficulties.
02:47:074 (1) - ^ etc.
03:20:674 (2) - http://puu.sh/1ve7e , let's avoid 1/1 useless stacks.
03:27:394 (6) - remove whistle, add finish.

[Hard]

hur dur. Why you didn't use sexy 1/4 patterns?
00:10:954 - as you see vocal and main music beats arive on blue tick, ignore claps do like this:
http://puu.sh/1veby , if you like the pattern that used, use this code:
280,276,10594,5,0,0:0:0
156,296,10954,1,0,0:0:0
204,184,11314,1,0,0:0:0
284,196,11554,5,0,0:0:0
381,275,11914,1,0,0:0:0
395,154,12274,1,0,0:0:0
384,76,12514,5,0,0:0:0
309,106,12754,1,0,0:0:0
00:14:434 - ^ and so on. I'd even say, such parts are the main theme of this sexy song ;)
00:27:634 (5,6) - hidden slider start/end, move '5' somewhere else.
00:28:354 (7) - no, 2 x no, 4 x no, ..., 2^n x no and NO. Instead, use something like this: http://puu.sh/1veeM
00:32:674 (1) - alone double repeat slider, appears everytime, when your fantasy says to you: "dude, i have no idea". Here i made for you something:
http://puu.sh/1vehA
288,312,32674,5,0,0:0:0
358,274,32914,1,0,0:0:0
320,204,33154,1,0,0:0:0
250,242,33394,2,0,P|216:184|196:92,1,160
i'm not gonna link every pattern that i dislike, just go throw whole map and decide what to needs to be adjusted. Use your own fantasy more wider ~

Starred, for 1st map, it's really good. Good luck ~
Topic Starter
blackabyss
yurunneram mods

yurunneram wrote:

Easy
Decrease Slider V!!!! Your normal guest diff's V is 1.2!!! and also if ur free maybe lower the distance spacing to 0.6? sorry, no ;w;
Erm... no problem

Normal
02:09:154 (3) - Don't hide it

Hard
np thanks o//

thanks for the stars~ 8DD


Louis Cyphre Mods

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]

- I guess original artist is 'hope' instead of 'Hope'. according to this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shlLMT4x8n8 fix
- Add in tags 'megpoid'. Megpoid, 2nd name of Gumi, should be in tags. ^
- I suggest to use such colour set: http://puu.sh/1vctO , imo looks better, anyway, it's up to you. i'll take it. :D
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 121,191,79
Combo3 : 0,155,230
Combo4 : 196,108,210
- Kiai must start and end perfectly snapped on ticks. Your ones have +1 ms delay, please fix them all. how to do it? orz, sorry... still newbie here ;u;
- 03:12:034 useless green line. removed


[Easy]

OD -1. okay

Very, very cool for 1st map. Hm, but i've noticed, that there are no 'pauses' between notes. Map goes simply just 1|1|1|1|1|1|1. The only 2 pauses that i've found, despite breaks and spinners are: 01:02:914 - , 03:19:234 - . I'd recomend to place such pauses a bit more, to avoid robo 1|1 constant rhythm. yea. change it a bit, not much :(

00:40:834 (1) - too soon after spinner, take a note: this is an easiest difficulty, and it should be easy not only for you, but for newbie players too. fix
01:59:074 (1,1) - ^ ^
03:10:114 (1,1) - ^ ^
02:08:674 (1,2) - hard to read. According to song, logically, there should be one more repeat, because of song rhythm and because of your placement of notes. To fix this, just place it like this http://puu.sh/1vcAX , it looks and plays much better. yes, it much better, thanks :3//

[Suko's Normal]
HP-2, OD -1

02:29:794 (1) - add finish, as it is on rest difficulties.
02:47:074 (1) - ^ etc.
03:20:674 (2) - http://puu.sh/1ve7e , let's avoid 1/1 useless stacks.
03:27:394 (6) - remove whistle, add finish.

[Hard]

hur dur. Why you didn't use sexy 1/4 patterns?
00:10:954 - as you see vocal and main music beats arive on blue tick, ignore claps do like this:
http://puu.sh/1veby , if you like the pattern that used, use this code: thanks, really helpful o//
280,276,10594,5,0,0:0:0
156,296,10954,1,0,0:0:0
204,184,11314,1,0,0:0:0
284,196,11554,5,0,0:0:0
381,275,11914,1,0,0:0:0
395,154,12274,1,0,0:0:0
384,76,12514,5,0,0:0:0
309,106,12754,1,0,0:0:0
00:14:434 - ^ and so on. I'd even say, such parts are the main theme of this sexy song ;) ^
00:27:634 (5,6) - hidden slider start/end, move '5' somewhere else. moved
00:28:354 (7) - no, 2 x no, 4 x no, ..., 2^n x no and NO. Instead, use something like this: http://puu.sh/1veeM
00:32:674 (1) - alone double repeat slider, appears everytime, when your fantasy says to you: "dude, i have no idea". Here i made for you something:
http://puu.sh/1vehA accepted thanks
288,312,32674,5,0,0:0:0
358,274,32914,1,0,0:0:0
320,204,33154,1,0,0:0:0
250,242,33394,2,0,P|216:184|196:92,1,160
i'm not gonna link every pattern that i dislike, just go throw whole map and decide what to needs to be adjusted. Use your own fantasy more wider ~

Starred, for 1st map, it's really good. Good luck ~ Thanks for your stars and pattern Suggestion too o// it' really-really-really useful. thanks a lot!

thanks for your mod guys o/// :oops:
Louis Cyphre
how to do it? orz, sorry... still newbie here ;u;
Just take 1 ms from every kiai section start and and, in all difficulties. If you still don't understand, catch me in game i'll explain mure wider.
Kuroneko-sHerald
Sorry for poor mod :cry:

[Easy]
02:01:474 (1) - New combo isn't checked in this slider (spinner new combo bug).
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Louis Cyphre wrote:

how to do it? orz, sorry... still newbie here ;u;
Just take 1 ms from every kiai section start and and, in all difficulties. If you still don't understand, catch me in game i'll explain mure wider.
can i ask for re-check? but just check the Kiai section start time. cause i've changed it.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Sorry for poor mod :cry:

[Easy]
02:01:474 (1) - New combo isn't checked in this slider (spinner new combo bug).
thanks neko. ah no problem :)
creampuff
yurunneram's mod

yurunneram wrote:

Normal
02:09:154 (3) - Don't hide it Why not? No change
Louis's mod

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Suko's Normal]
HP-2, OD -1 Ok, fixed

02:29:794 (1) - add finish, as it is on rest difficulties. Ok
02:47:074 (1) - ^ etc. Ok
03:20:674 (2) - http://puu.sh/1ve7e , let's avoid 1/1 useless stacks. Fixed
03:27:394 (6) - remove whistle, add finish. Ok

Ok, updated

http://puu.sh/1worJ
Curisu
GUMI~!
[Easy]
00:28:834 (7) - NC ; 00:29:314 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
00:40:354 - +finish
02:00:994 (1) - ^
01:44:674 - slience? vol=5
01:59:794 - +NC to mark rhythm change
02:24:514 (2) - x,y = 320,292? if you do that you should also adjust the end of the slider to fit DS
02:56:674 - slience again?

[Hard]
00:15:394 - +NC
00:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - (x,y) [1]368,72 [2]472,144 [3]496,216 [4,5]326,348 maybe better
01:07:474 (2,4) - overlapping nazi
01:36:274 (6) - ^ try 215,284
Topic Starter
blackabyss
:oops:

Tsusuko wrote:

Ok, updated

http://puu.sh/1worJ
sorry Tsusuko, puu.sh is maintence/down. :(
please submit it with mediafire or etc.

Curisu Mods

Curisu wrote:

GUMI~! yay \:D/
[Easy]
00:28:834 (7) - NC ; 00:29:314 (1) - remove NC removed

[Hard]
00:15:394 - +NC fix
00:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - (x,y) [1]368,72 [2]472,144 [3]496,216 [4,5]326,348 maybe better i'd changed it but, didn't same with your suggestion
01:07:474 (2,4) - overlapping nazi changed
01:36:274 (6) - ^ try 215,284 changed. but, didn't same with your suggestion
thanks a lot curisu o//
creampuff
Oh, it wasn't down when I posted the diff.

Anyway

Curisu's mod

Curisu wrote:

[Normal]
00:40:354 - +finish Ok
02:00:994 (1) - ^ Ok
01:44:674 - slience? vol=5 Sure
01:59:794 - +NC to mark rhythm change No change
02:24:514 (2) - x,y = 320,292? if you do that you should also adjust the end of the slider to fit DS Not sure how that would change anything, so no.
02:56:674 - slience again? Ok

Updated.
http://puu.sh/1wu7o
Lally
Hi from my mod Q
sorry for delay .w. had no internet for 2 weeks ;w;

btw since you have a wip guest diff you should move your map to W.I.P.

[Easy]

00:40:354 - empty - add a circle here because the vocal starts and feels epty without same thing here 02:00:994 and here: 03:12:034
00:45:634 (4) - stak this one better with end of this slider 00:47:074 (6)
00:55:714 (5) - ugly slider try something like this: a little bit better to see a slider like this :V
00:58:114 (9) - stack with 00:59:554
01:42:274 - remove nc
01:43:234 - remove nc
01:44:674 - finish
01:48:034 - clap
03:15:394 - new combo
03:18:274 (9) - stack better this circle with 03:16:834 (7)

[Suko o3o]

01:45:154 - since volume is 5% i dunno if a whistle is nedded here
01:59:554 - what about a spinner here wich ends at 02:00:514 (because this part feels a little bit empy try to add it or to replave circles with a slider)
and btw only 1 spinner in a normal is sad for me ;_;
02:57:154 (1) - finish + clap sounds better

[Hard]

00:37:474 (5) - stack with 00:36:514
00:41:074 - add a circle
00:45:154 (4) - useless white point http://puu.sh/1x2hP
00:49:714 (5) - stack with 00:50:674 (7)
and the stack 00:51:394 (1) with 00:49:474 (4)
00:56:914 and 00:57:034 - add a circle
01:03:154 and 01:03:274 - add a circle for following the rhythm
01:32:434 - add a circle
01:37:714 and 01:37:834 - add a circle
01:45:154 - try something like this: sounds better

01:59:074 - finish
02:08:434 and 02:08:554 - add a circle
02:17:554 - dont stop the rhythm because vocal and don't stop - add a circle here and 02:17:674
02:23:794 and 02:23:914 - circle
02:59:794 and 02:59:914 - circle
03:05:554 - circle here

[HydeSama o3o]

00:10:114 (2,3) - stack they better
00:12:034 - useless white points :V
00:54:394 - finish at this 2nd spinner
01:07:234 - why empty? o.o


o3o/ good luck
-Hyde
Update 50%

Wait a little longer please, Abys >:
I leave you a star.


Edit:

Update 75%

Thanks for wait, I'm working on this map :3
Topic Starter
blackabyss
Lally's Mods

Lally wrote:

Hi from my mod Q
sorry for delay .w. had no internet for 2 weeks ;w; no prob xD uwouh, and you still a live ;u;

btw since you have a wip guest diff you should move your map to W.I.P. forgot :"

[Easy]

00:40:354 - empty - add a circle here because the vocal starts and feels epty without same thing here 02:00:994 and here: 03:12:034 added
00:45:634 (4) - stak this one better with end of this slider 00:47:074 (6)
00:55:714 (5) - ugly slider try something like this: a little bit better to see a slider like this :V lol, ic xDchanged



00:58:114 (9) - stack with 00:59:554 okay
01:42:274 - remove nc ^
01:43:234 - remove nc ^
01:44:674 - finish added
01:48:034 - clap ^
03:15:394 - new combo okay
03:18:274 (9) - stack better this circle with 03:16:834 (7) done lol

[Hard]

00:37:474 (5) - stack with 00:36:514 done
00:41:074 - add a circle ^
00:45:154 (4) - useless white point http://puu.sh/1x2hP removed
00:49:714 (5) - stack with 00:50:674 (7)
and the stack 00:51:394 (1) with 00:49:474 (4) done
00:56:914 and 00:57:034 - add a circle ^
01:03:154 and 01:03:274 - add a circle for following the rhythm done but the second note won't add
01:32:434 - add a circle done
01:37:714 and 01:37:834 - add a circle ^
01:45:154 - try something like this: sounds better okay

01:59:074 - finish sorry no
02:08:434 and 02:08:554 - add a circle done
02:17:554 - dont stop the rhythm because vocal and don't stop - add a circle here and 02:17:674 ^
02:23:794 and 02:23:914 - circle ^
02:59:794 and 02:59:914 - circle ^
03:05:554 - circle here ^

o3o/ good luck thanks o//

Thanks lally xD

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Update 50%

Wait a little longer please, Abys >:
I leave you a star.
just take your time. i'll wait :>
thanks for the stars too :)
and this is kudos for your hard work~
Lally
still alive and i didn't forget to mod your mappu :3 pm me in game when you finish Insane :3 i wanna give a look at it if you want :3 a star for you, i like this song u.u
creampuff
Here you go~

http://puu.sh/1xxBE

rank go go go

edit: Here, have a star~
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Lally wrote:

still alive and i didn't forget to mod your mappu :3 pm me in game when you finish Insane :3 i wanna give a look at it if you want :3 a star for you, i like this song u.u
yeah, you didn't forget. thanks for the mod and the star btw. xD
i'll tell yaa, ASAP. thanks again~


Tsusuko wrote:

Here you go~

http://puu.sh/1xxBE

rank go go go

edit: Here, have a star~
updated tsusuko, thanks for the stars too~
hope get rank soon too~ :oops:
-Hyde
Update 100%

Thanks for wait me, Abyss.
Topic Starter
blackabyss

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Update 100%

Thanks for wait me, Abyss.
yeay! finally you come and finished the diff. xD

ah no problem, thanks a lot for your hardwork. :3//
BeatofIke
Map looks good! STAR!
Topic Starter
blackabyss

BeatofIke wrote:

Map looks good! STAR!
thanks for check and the star~ tehe X3
mintong89
Mod from My Queue ♪

[Easy]

00:12:034 - i think you should add a clap at this.
00:19:234 (4,5,1,2) - i think you better use same circular. you can try use CTRL+ > or CTRL + < .
00:24:034 (3,4,1) - polygon nazi.
00:28:354 (6) - you can put at under 00:26:434 (4) - slider's end.
00:48:034 (1,2,3) - polygon nazi #2.
00:55:714 (6) - where NC? 0.0
01:08:194 (3) - (end of slider) you can make it until 01:08:674 -
01:30:754 (2) - (start of slider) clap.
01:32:194 (4) - (end of slider) ^
03:24:034 (2) - ^

[Normal]

good~

[Hard]

nice imo ;w;///

[Insane]

/

poor mod as you wish//
Topic Starter
blackabyss
mintong89 Mods

mintong89 wrote:

Mod from My Queue ♪

[Easy]

00:12:034 - i think you should add a clap at this. added
00:19:234 (4,5,1,2) - i think you better use same circular. you can try use CTRL+ > or CTRL + < . changed
00:24:034 (3,4,1) - polygon nazi. ^
00:28:354 (6) - you can put at under 00:26:434 (4) - slider's end. ^
00:48:034 (1,2,3) - polygon nazi #2. ^
00:55:714 (6) - where NC? 0.0 whoops, forgot :"
01:08:194 (3) - (end of slider) you can make it until 01:08:674 - changed
01:30:754 (2) - (start of slider) clap. added
01:32:194 (4) - (end of slider) ^ ^
03:24:034 (2) - ^ ^


[Hard]

nice imo ;w;/// thanks~ \:3/

poor mod as you wish//

thanks for your mod~
creampuff
I came over here expecting some mods

guess not ehue

LETS GO RANK~
Topic Starter
blackabyss
yeah, i hope this map get rank soon. lol.
but i must work hard to get MAT/BAT look at this map, so i improve this map quality too :3

thanks for daily check tsusuko o//
Xinely
hi :3
i will mod abyss's diff with indonesia
[Easy]
00:18:274 (2,4) - jgn di tumpuk/stack. agak susah buat newbie
00:21:634 (1) - geser ke x:280 y:256, untuk buat branket
00:24:034 (3,1) - hindari stack klo bisa >_<
00:49:474 (3,4) - lebih baik (3) nya di stack di kepala slider aja daripada di ekor slider >_<
01:40:834 (5,1) - gmn klo 01:40:834 - smpe 01:41:314 - itu slider dan 01:41:794 - nya circle dengan NC?
01:53:314 (1) - ksh finish di ekor slidernya?
02:22:594 (4) - gmn klo di jadiin gini?

[Suko's Normal]
00:10:594 - add note?
01:00:034 (2) - crtl+H and back to normal position?
01:03:394 - add finish
01:11:074 - ^ in end of slider
02:00:994 (1,2) - make branket x:432 y:180
02:02:914 (3) - if follow ^ replace this slider to x:244 y:280
03:17:794 (5) - make symmetrical, straight better imo

[Insane]
00:18:754 (4) - crtl+j and back to position better imo
ummm sorry i can't mod insane well. >_<

about hard, i will give irc mod when u not busy with modding :P


Good Luck (:
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Xinely wrote:

hi :3
i will mod abyss's diff with indonesia
[Easy]
00:18:274 (2,4) - jgn di tumpuk/stack. agak susah buat newbie
00:21:634 (1) - geser ke x:280 y:256, untuk buat branket
00:24:034 (3,1) - hindari stack klo bisa >_<
00:49:474 (3,4) - lebih baik (3) nya di stack di kepala slider aja daripada di ekor slider >_<
01:40:834 (5,1) - gmn klo 01:40:834 - smpe 01:41:314 - itu slider dan 01:41:794 - nya circle dengan NC?
01:53:314 (1) - ksh finish di ekor slidernya?
02:22:594 (4) - gmn klo di jadiin gini?

about hard, i will give irc mod when u not busy with modding :P


Good Luck (:
Fix some, thanks for IRC mod too :oops:
creampuff
Hi abyss

*throws diff at you

*runs away
-Hyde
Little update

Come on, go to rank.
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Tsusuko wrote:

Hi abyss

*throws diff at you

*runs away
*throw cherries to you

thanks :3///


_HydeSama_ wrote:

Little update

Come on, go to rank.
thanks hyde~
gogo, lol
DaxMasterix
Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
MEH..

Easy:
  1. 00:16:354 (6,7) - Move these notes to x:368|y:280 [Grid lvl: 3]
  2. 00:18:274 (2,3) - Move these Objects to x:72|y:248 [Grid lvl: 3]
  3. 00:41:794 (4) - This slider is touching the note 00:40:354 (1) .. And looks ugly :c .. Try make This o3o
  4. 00:46:114 (5) - Move this Slider to x:176|y:272 [Grid lvl: 3]
  5. 00:55:714 (1) - Is neccesary make that figure? o3o
Suko's Normal:
  1. Circle Size -1
  2. 02:08:674 (1,2,3) - I think cotinue the wave is better..
Hard:
  1. 00:18:754 (4) - NewCombo
  2. 00:46:114 (6) - I think this Slider can looks better.. If you add a new SliderPoint between the last Sliderpoint and the penultimate Sliderpoint.. now Move the penultimate Sliderpoint to x:64|y:160 [Grid lvl: 3] and the antepenultimate to x:144|y:208 [Grid lvl: 3] for make Something like This.
  3. 00:50:674 (7) - This Slider isn't perfectly in the same place of 00:49:714 (5) :33
  4. 00:53:794 (7) - Move the penultimate Sliderpoint to x:48|y:176 [Grid lvl: 3]
  5. 01:04:834 (4) - This note isn't perfectly in the same place of 01:03:394 (1) :33
HydeSama's Insane:
  1. 00:13:354 (5) - Add a clap.
  2. 00:30:514 (6) - Ctrl+G
  3. 00:36:274 (7) - Add a clap.
  4. 00:36:994 (2) - Add a clap in the begin of the Slider.
  5. 00:52:354 (5) - Move this note 1 Grid to the right [Grid lvl: 3]
  6. 00:52:594 (6) - Move this note 1 Grid to the left [Grid lvl: 3]
  7. 00:52:834 (7) - I preffer something like This
  8. 01:04:834 (1,2) - This is too much confundible.. xDD Try change it.
  9. 01:06:994 (1) - The same..
  10. 03:05:914 (4,5) - These notes aren't perfectly in the same place of the end of the Slider on 03:05:314 (3) :33
  11. 03:10:594 (2) - This note isn't perfectly in the same place of the end of the Slider on 03:09:874 (1) :33
  12. 03:10:834 (3) - This note isn't perfectly in the same place of the Slider on 03:11:074 (4) :33
  13. 03:18:034 (2,3) - Make it more closer :c
  14. 03:18:394 (4,5) - (^) The same.. :c I know is the end.. but this increment in the Distance isn't Necessary o3o
OKAY- Good map.. =w=)b Good luck :)
Topic Starter
blackabyss

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
MEH..

Easy:
  1. 00:16:354 (6,7) - Move these notes to x:368|y:280 [Grid lvl: 3] Fix
  2. 00:18:274 (2,3) - Move these Objects to x:72|y:248 [Grid lvl: 3] ^
  3. 00:41:794 (4) - This slider is touching the note 00:40:354 (1) .. And looks ugly :c .. Try make This o3o lol, thanks and fix
  4. 00:46:114 (5) - Move this Slider to x:176|y:272 [Grid lvl: 3] ^
  5. 00:55:714 (1) - Is neccesary make that figure? o3o i'll keep it like that
Hard:
  1. 00:18:754 (4) - NewCombo Fix
  2. 00:46:114 (6) - I think this Slider can looks better.. If you add a new SliderPoint between the last Sliderpoint and the penultimate Sliderpoint.. now Move the penultimate Sliderpoint to x:64|y:160 [Grid lvl: 3] and the antepenultimate to x:144|y:208 [Grid lvl: 3] for make Something like This. Fix
  3. 00:50:674 (7) - This Slider isn't perfectly in the same place of 00:49:714 (5) :33 ^ x33
  4. 00:53:794 (7) - Move the penultimate Sliderpoint to x:48|y:176 [Grid lvl: 3] changed, but x and y position isn't same with your suggestion
  5. 01:04:834 (4) - This note isn't perfectly in the same place of 01:03:394 (1) :33 fix x33
OKAY- Good map.. =w=)b Good luck :) thanks a lot for your mods~ \:3/
-Hyde
HydeSama's Insane:
  1. 00:13:354 (5) - Add a clap.
  2. 00:30:514 (6) - Ctrl+G
  3. 00:36:274 (7) - Add a clap.
  4. 00:36:994 (2) - Add a clap in the begin of the Slider.
  5. 00:52:354 (5) - Move this note 1 Grid to the right [Grid lvl: 3]
  6. 00:52:594 (6) - Move this note 1 Grid to the left [Grid lvl: 3]
  7. 00:52:834 (7) - I preffer something like This
  8. 01:04:834 (1,2) - This is too much confundible.. xDD Try change it.
  9. 01:06:994 (1) - The same..
  10. 03:05:914 (4,5) - These notes aren't perfectly in the same place of the end of the Slider on 03:05:314 (3) :33
  11. 03:10:594 (2) - This note isn't perfectly in the same place of the end of the Slider on 03:09:874 (1) :33
  12. 03:10:834 (3) - This note isn't perfectly in the same place of the Slider on 03:11:074 (4) :33
  13. 03:18:034 (2,3) - Make it more closer :c
  14. 03:18:394 (4,5) - (^) The same.. :c I know is the end.. but this increment in the Distance isn't Necessary o3o
Update Thanks ~
creampuff
SPOILER

DaxMasterix wrote:

Suko's Normal:
  1. Circle Size -1 What? No
  2. 02:08:674 (1,2,3) - I think cotinue the wave is better.. Ok

*throws diff at you again

Changed the name to keep things consistent.

Thanks for the mod~
Topic Starter
blackabyss

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Update Thanks ~

Tsusuko wrote:

*throws diff at you again
Thanks, and updated~
phaZ
[Easy]
00:51:394 (1) - move the slider-waypoint to 80;288 and end at 72;192 to improve the curve
00:55:714 (1) - unreadable for an easy-player -> unrankable http://puu.sh/1EiZO :O lol
-> 00:56:674 (2) - move to 120;0. it alsobuilds a triangle with (3) and (4)
01:41:314 (1) - copy (2), rotate by 100° and move to 99;72 (dont forget clap)
01:43:234 (3) - copy (2), rotate by -95° and move to 384;208, add repeat to improve the curve (dont forget clap)
from 01:55:234 to 01:57:634 - too hard to play http://puu.sh/1Ejdl, http://puu.sh/1EjdX to make it easier
02:01:474 (2) - move the salier-waypoint to 472;64 and end at 384;48 to improve the curve
02:02:434 (3) - if u did 1 move to 280;104
02:47:074 (1) - move slider-wayoint to 128;312 and end at 168;240 to improve the curve
03:00:034 (2) - move slider-waypoint to 168;72
03:07:714 (6) - end at 184;288
03:15:394 (1) - remove
-> 03:15:394 (1) - new slider (370;90 - 416;160 - 400;256) to improve the curve (dont forget hitsound)
[Normal]
00:13:954 (1) - move to 56;168
00:15:394 (3) - copy ^
00:35:554 (3) - move to 120;116
00:35:794 (4) - move to 60;132
00:48:994 (2) - slider-waypoint at 232;164 and end at 184;304 to improve the curve
00:51:154 (5) - i cant hear a beat here
00:51:394 - slider (288;112 - 264;152 - 264;176, add clap on start)
01:32:194 (4) - move to 258;56
02:09:154 (3) - unreadable for a normal-player. make a repeat slider like http://puu.sh/1EjAJ
02:16:594 (1) - move to 380;296
02:16:834 (2) - move to 320;284
02:25:714 (4) - 384;160 to improve the flow
03:19:234 (8) - move the first slider-waypoint to 432;164 to improve the curve
03:27:154 (5) - 236;328
03:27:394 (6) - 256;380
00:18:634 - missing a beat here
->from 00:18:034 to 00:18:634 - http://puu.sh/1EjNI
00:37:714 (6) - move to 248;180
00:42:994 - the slider begins on the red tick -> http://puu.sh/1EjRO
00:48:754 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/1EjTi
00:52:834 (4) - move to 464;112
00:53:074 (5) - 404;60
00:53:314 (6) - slider (340;104 - 296;104 - 248;128)
01:06:034 (7) - starts on the red tick
01:06:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont think like "ahh its not perfect but still good" . do it right!
->(2)=194;276 (3)=200;196 (4)=273;162 (5)=340;208 (6)=332;288
02:01:474 (2) - move to 156;48 to improve the curve
02:02:194 (3) - remove
02:02:434 (3) - 392;252 - 348;272 - 304;280
02:02:914 (4) - i dont recommend double-repeats
02:03:634 - circle at 296;224
02:03:874 - 218;200slider144;124
02:05:074 - starts on the red tick http://puu.sh/1Ek5Q
02:20:434 (2) - red tick http://puu.sh/1Ekll
02:21:874 - red tick http://puu.sh/1EknA
02:23:314 (10) - red tick http://puu.sh/1Ekqp
02:28:594 (5) - dont use double-repeats http://puu.sh/1Ektr
02:47:794 - delete (4), move (3) on the next white tick and stack a circle on the slider http://puu.sh/1Ekx5
03:15:634 - red tick
...i didnt mentioned all sliders wich start on a red tick because some of them fits
[HydeSama's Insane]
very nice diff :)

00:12:994 - add clap
00:13:114 (3) - remove clap
00:13:354 (5) - remove clap
00:14:794 - make the hitsound to normal and volume to 50%, add clap
00:17:554 (1) - why he starts on the red tick? doesnt fit http://puu.sh/1EkFb
00:21:394 - dont make such breaks
00:24:634 (7) - unrankable
00:53:554 (1,1) - one spinner ofc lol :o
01:31:714 (7) - unstack
01:36:394 (2) - add a circle or slider
01:51:754 (3) - http://puu.sh/1EkLR, remove clap ..plz
02:24:994 (5) - make two 1/2 sliders
02:26:674 - move to the next white tick to 128;52
02:26:674 - add circle
02:48:034 (4) - unrankable
-Hyde

phaZ wrote:

[HydeSama's Insane]
very nice diff :) Thanks :3

00:12:994 - add clap
00:13:114 (3) - remove clap
00:13:354 (5) - remove clap
00:14:794 - make the hitsound to normal and volume to 50%, add clap
00:17:554 (1) - why he starts on the red tick? doesnt fit http://puu.sh/1EkFb Because yes
00:21:394 - dont make such breaks
00:24:634 (7) - unrankable
00:53:554 (1,1) - one spinner ofc lol :o
01:31:714 (7) - unstack
01:36:394 (2) - add a circle or slider
01:51:754 (3) - http://puu.sh/1EkLR, remove clap ..plz
02:24:994 (5) - make two 1/2 sliders
02:26:674 - move to the next white tick to 128;52
02:26:674 - add circle
02:48:034 (4) - unrankable


Update
creampuff
SPOILER

phaZ wrote:

[Normal]
00:13:954 (1) - move to 56;168 Ok
00:15:394 (3) - copy ^ Ok
00:35:554 (3) - move to 120;116 No
00:35:794 (4) - move to 60;132 No
00:48:994 (2) - slider-waypoint at 232;164 and end at 184;304 to improve the curve No
00:51:154 (5) - i cant hear a beat here Why not?
00:51:394 - slider (288;112 - 264;152 - 264;176, add clap on start) No
01:32:194 (4) - move to 258;56 No
02:09:154 (3) - unreadable for a normal-player. make a repeat slider like http://puu.sh/1EjAJ Changed, in a different way
02:16:594 (1) - move to 380;296 No
02:16:834 (2) - move to 320;284 No
02:25:714 (4) - 384;160 to improve the flow No
03:19:234 (8) - move the first slider-waypoint to 432;164 to improve the curve No
03:27:154 (5) - 236;328 No
03:27:394 (6) - 256;380 No

Here's the diff.

http://puu.sh/1Ey2b


phaZ wrote:

00:18:634 - missing a beat here
->from 00:18:034 to 00:18:634 - http://puu.sh/1EjNI
00:37:714 (6) - move to 248;180
00:42:994 - the slider begins on the red tick -> http://puu.sh/1EjRO
00:48:754 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/1EjTi
00:52:834 (4) - move to 464;112
00:53:074 (5) - 404;60
00:53:314 (6) - slider (340;104 - 296;104 - 248;128)
01:06:034 (7) - starts on the red tick
01:06:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont think like "ahh its not perfect but still good" . do it right!
->(2)=194;276 (3)=200;196 (4)=273;162 (5)=340;208 (6)=332;288
02:01:474 (2) - move to 156;48 to improve the curve
02:02:194 (3) - remove
02:02:434 (3) - 392;252 - 348;272 - 304;280
02:02:914 (4) - i dont recommend double-repeats
02:03:634 - circle at 296;224
02:03:874 - 218;200slider144;124
02:05:074 - starts on the red tick http://puu.sh/1Ek5Q
02:20:434 (2) - red tick http://puu.sh/1Ekll
02:21:874 - red tick http://puu.sh/1EknA
02:23:314 (10) - red tick http://puu.sh/1Ekqp
02:28:594 (5) - dont use double-repeats http://puu.sh/1Ektr
02:47:794 - delete (4), move (3) on the next white tick and stack a circle on the slider http://puu.sh/1Ekx5
03:15:634 - red tick
...i didnt mentioned all sliders wich start on a red tick because some of them fits
I believe this part was supposed to be for the hard and not for the normal.
Topic Starter
blackabyss
phaZ Mods

phaZ wrote:

[Easy]
00:51:394 (1) - move the slider-waypoint to 80;288 and end at 72;192 to improve the curve okay
00:55:714 (1) - unreadable for an easy-player -> unrankable http://puu.sh/1EiZO :O lol why it's unrankable or unreadable? changed
-> 00:56:674 (2) - move to 120;0. it alsobuilds a triangle with (3) and (4) changed
01:41:314 (1) - copy (2), rotate by 100° and move to 99;72 (dont forget clap) ^
01:43:234 (3) - copy (2), rotate by -95° and move to 384;208, add repeat to improve the curve (dont forget clap) ^
from 01:55:234 to 01:57:634 - too hard to play http://puu.sh/1Ejdl, http://puu.sh/1EjdX to make it easier ^
02:01:474 (2) - move the salier-waypoint to 472;64 and end at 384;48 to improve the curve changed, but different
02:02:434 (3) - if u did 1 move to 280;104 ^
02:47:074 (1) - move slider-wayoint to 128;312 and end at 168;240 to improve the curve ^
03:00:034 (2) - move slider-waypoint to 168;72 ^
03:07:714 (6) - end at 184;288 changed
03:15:394 (1) - remove no v
-> 03:15:394 (1) - new slider (370;90 - 416;160 - 400;256) to improve the curve (dont forget hitsound) no change, sorry. i think this slider is no problem.

okay Hard Edit lol

00:18:634 - missing a beat here what? imo nope :x
->from 00:18:034 to 00:18:634 - http://puu.sh/1EjNI sorry no change
00:37:714 (6) - move to 248;180 okay
00:42:994 - the slider begins on the red tick -> http://puu.sh/1EjRO change, but different
00:48:754 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/1EjTi ^
00:52:834 (4) - move to 464;112 moved
00:53:074 (5) - 404;60 ^
00:53:314 (6) - slider (340;104 - 296;104 - 248;128) change, but different
01:06:034 (7) - starts on the red tick yes, and why??
01:06:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont think like "ahh its not perfect but still good" . do it right! whhy?
->(2)=194;276 (3)=200;196 (4)=273;162 (5)=340;208 (6)=332;288 okay, changed :/
02:01:474 (2) - move to 156;48 to improve the curve change, but different
02:02:194 (3) - remove no, i'll keep that
02:02:434 (3) - 392;252 - 348;272 - 304;280 since i didn't follow above suggestion, so no
02:02:914 (4) - i dont recommend double-repeats remove reapeat
02:03:634 - circle at 296;224 okay, but different
02:03:874 - 218;200 slider 144;124 ^
02:05:074 - starts on the red tick http://puu.sh/1Ek5Q changed
02:20:434 (2) - red tick http://puu.sh/1Ekll ^
02:21:874 - red tick http://puu.sh/1EknA change, but different
02:23:314 (10) - red tick http://puu.sh/1Ekqp ^
02:28:594 (5) - dont use double-repeats http://puu.sh/1Ektr okay
02:47:794 - delete (4), move (3) on the next white tick and stack a circle on the slider http://puu.sh/1Ekx5 sorry no, i felt better this way
03:15:634 - red tick changed
...i didnt mentioned all sliders wich start on a red tick because some of them fits
thanks for nazi mod~ :3
Lucyii
From my queue ~
[Easy]
- Set spacing 0,70, 0,90 is too much for an easy diff.
- In some places there are too many beats, like 00:12:994 (7,1,2,3,4) , replace someone with a slider
01:53:314 (1) - Fix it
02:22:594 (4) - Fix it, the red point must coincide with the slidertick
03:02:914 (5) - Fix it, ^

[Suko's Normal]
Od-1
00:22:594 (3) - Straight
00:50:434 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539653
01:56:674 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539655
01:58:594 (2) - ^
03:26:914 (4) - Uh, a reverse slider instead of 3 beats?

[Hard]
Od-1 Drain-1
00:42:514 (5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539665
00:46:114 (6) - Fix it, the red point must coincide with the slidertick
00:53:794 (7) - ^
01:31:234 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539675
01:38:914 (3) - I hate sliders with two reverse, it's hard to read. Try to change it
01:40:834 (7) - ^
01:54:514 (4) - ^
02:50:674 (5) - ^
02:53:554 (4) - ^
03:09:874 (6) - ^
02:30:274 (1) - The spinner should starts at 02:30:034

[HydeSama's Insane]
Ar+1
00:13:474 (6) - Add nc
00:13:714 (1) - Remove nc
00:36:514 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539685
00:37:474 (3) - ^
00:45:634 (1) - The slider should ends on the white tick
01:06:274 (5) - ^
01:08:674 (7) - ^
01:14:434 (9) - Add nc
01:14:674 (1) - Remove nc
01:23:554 (3) - Fix it
01:36:994 (3) - The slider should ends on the white tick
01:44:194 (5) - Add nc
01:49:114 (1,2,3) - More nearer
01:51:754 (3) - Straight
01:52:354 (5) - The slider should ends on the white tick
01:55:714 (1) - ^
02:14:194 (1) - The slider should ends on the red tick
02:15:394 (4) - The slider should ends on the white tick
02:18:274 (6) - ^
03:04:354 (1) - ^
03:05:314 (3) - ^
03:09:874 (1) - The slider should ends on the red tick
03:11:074 (4) - The slider should ends on the white tick
Anyway, nice map, especially the insane, good luck for rank.
Topic Starter
blackabyss
Kiyro Mods

Kiyro wrote:

From my queue ~
[notice][Easy]
- Set spacing 0,70, 0,90 is too much for an easy diff. sorry, no. but if i use 0,70 the space between note will be to near and make the flow missing :?
- In some places there are too many beats, like 00:12:994 (7,1,2,3,4) , replace someone with a slider fix
01:53:314 (1) - Fix it ^
02:22:594 (4) - Fix it, the red point must coincide with the slidertick ^
03:02:914 (5) - Fix it, ^ ^

[Hard]
Od-1 Drain-1 No, it's hard
00:42:514 (5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539665 fix
00:46:114 (6) - Fix it, the red point must coincide with the slidertick ^
00:53:794 (7) - ^ ^
01:31:234 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539675
01:38:914 (3) - I hate sliders with two reverse, it's hard to read. Try to change it No, this is hard diff. make a bit harder is no problem, isnt it?
01:40:834 (7) - ^ ^
01:54:514 (4) - ^ ^
02:50:674 (5) - ^ ^
02:53:554 (4) - ^ ^
03:09:874 (6) - ^ ^
02:30:274 (1) - The spinner should starts at 02:30:034 fix
ty for mod kiyro~ xD
creampuff
Kiyro's mod

Kiyro wrote:

[Suko's Normal]
Od-1 No
00:22:594 (3) - Straight No
00:50:434 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539653 No
01:56:674 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539655 Ok. It does look better.
01:58:594 (2) - ^ ^
03:26:914 (4) - Uh, a reverse slider instead of 3 beats? No.

updated~

http://puu.sh/1ENvO
-Hyde

Kiyro wrote:

[HydeSama's Insane]
Ar+1 Okay, I like.
00:13:474 (6) - Add nc
00:13:714 (1) - Remove nc
00:36:514 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539685
00:37:474 (3) - ^
00:45:634 (1) - The slider should ends on the white tick
01:06:274 (5) - ^
01:08:674 (7) - ^
01:14:434 (9) - Add nc
01:14:674 (1) - Remove nc
01:23:554 (3) - Fix it Hmm?
01:36:994 (3) - The slider should ends on the white tick
01:44:194 (5) - Add nc
01:49:114 (1,2,3) - More nearer
01:51:754 (3) - Straight Eh? D; I'm not gay (?)
01:52:354 (5) - The slider should ends on the white tick
01:55:714 (1) - ^
02:14:194 (1) - The slider should ends on the red tick
02:15:394 (4) - The slider should ends on the white tick
02:18:274 (6) - ^
03:04:354 (1) - ^
03:05:314 (3) - ^
03:09:874 (1) - The slider should ends on the red tick
03:11:074 (4) - The slider should ends on the white tick
Anyway, nice map, especially the insane, good luck for rank. Thanks >:
Update
Nichiyouki


Hi, blackabyss

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for mod delay.)

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Disable letterbox during breaks in storyboarding, because it isn't storyboard.

Easy

  1. 00:10:114 (2) - I'm not sure putting clap sound here, but you should consider this note, slider begin of 00:12:304 (6), slider end 00:13:474 (1), etc.
  2. 00:11:074 (5,6) - Maybe move circles to able to easier to play better. By this.
    312,104,11074,1,8,0:0:0
    400,196,11554,1,0,0:0:0
  3. 00:18:754 (3) - Move (3) to x:184 y:160, then move (4) to right 1 grid be more beautiful?
  4. 01:26:914 (2) - Don't reverse the slider. I don't hear any rhythm in 01:27:394 (slider end of (2))
  5. 01:31:714 (2,3) - Make to this be more beautiful.
  6. 01:43:234 (3) - Add clap here.
  7. 01:45:154 (4) - Change whistle in slider end is finish.
  8. 01:46:114 (1) - Remove finish in slider begin, since I told to add finish in 01:45:154 (4).
  9. 02:26:434 (4,5) - Same as 00:11:074 (5,6). I suggest that move (4) to x:72 y:232, and move (5) to x:52 y:108. They will be beautiful.
  10. 02:54:274 (4,5,6) - Make to this notes be suitable for rhythms.
  11. 02:57:154 (2) - Add finish in slider begin, too.

suko's Normal

  1. CS -1 (3)
  2. 00:28:354 (5) - Try don't stack with slider end of (4), because it's hard for who is play this diff.
  3. 00:13:0274 (1,2) - Make to this be more beautiful and easier.
  4. 02:12:514 (1) - Move to down 1 grid.
  5. 02:56:673 - Disable kiai time? because it's different with other diff.

Hard

  1. 01:04:834 (4) - Add clap here.
  2. 01:27:394 (3) - Move at 01:27:634 be better.

HydeSama's Insane

  1. 00:16:354 (9) - Add finish in slider end.
  2. 00:19:954 (2) - I suggest that remove finish.
  3. 00:53:554 (1,1) - Use them is 1 spinner.
  4. 01:44:194 (1) - Add NC here?

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Overall, nice map. Give a star ;)

Good luck & Merry Christmas~
-Hyde

Nichiyouki wrote:



Hi, blackabyss

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for mod delay.)

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

HydeSama's Insane

[*]00:16:354 (9) - Add finish in slider end.
[*]00:19:954 (2) - I suggest that remove finish.
[*]00:53:554 (1,1) - Use them is 1 spinner.
[*]01:44:194 (1) - Add NC here?

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Overall, nice map. Give a star ;)

Good luck & Merry Christmas~
Update
creampuff
Nichiyouki's mod

Nichiyouki wrote:

suko's Normal

  1. CS -1 (3) No
  2. 00:28:354 (5) - Try don't stack with slider end of (4), because it's hard for who is play this diff.Ok, unstacked
  3. 00:13:0274 (1,2) - Make to this be more beautiful and easier. W-where is this again? o^o;
  4. 02:12:514 (1) - Move to down 1 grid. Oh, ok. Moved
  5. 02:56:673 - Disable kiai time? because it's different with other diff Eh? o3o.

Updated~
Topic Starter
blackabyss
Nichiyouki Mods

Nichiyouki wrote:



Hi, blackabyss hi o/

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for mod delay.) eh, did i reqs for mod to you? owo *forgot* thanks btw

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Disable letterbox during breaks in storyboarding, because it isn't storyboard.

Easy

  1. 00:10:114 (2) - I'm not sure putting clap sound here, but you should consider this note, slider begin of 00:12:304 (6), slider end 00:13:474 (1), etc.
  2. 00:11:074 (5,6) - Maybe move circles to able to easier to play better. By this. changed, but different :>
    312,104,11074,1,8,0:0:0
    400,196,11554,1,0,0:0:0
  3. 00:18:754 (3) - Move (3) to x:184 y:160, then move (4) to right 1 grid be more beautiful?
  4. 01:26:914 (2) - Don't reverse the slider. I don't hear any rhythm in 01:27:394 (slider end of (2))
  5. 01:31:714 (2,3) - Make to this be more beautiful. changed, but different :>
  6. 01:43:234 (3) - Add clap here.
  7. 01:45:154 (4) - Change whistle in slider end is finish.
  8. 01:46:114 (1) - Remove finish in slider begin, since I told to add finish in 01:45:154 (4).
  9. 02:26:434 (4,5) - Same as 00:11:074 (5,6). I suggest that move (4) to x:72 y:232, and move (5) to x:52 y:108. They will be beautiful.
  10. 02:54:274 (4,5,6) - Make to this notes be suitable for rhythms.
  11. 02:57:154 (2) - Add finish in slider begin, too.

Hard

  1. 01:04:834 (4) - Add clap here.
  2. 01:27:394 (3) - Move at 01:27:634 be better.

and the rest are fix :)

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you. thanks a lot o//
Overall, nice map. Give a star ;) eh a star? owo why i can't find it

Good luck & Merry Christmas~ thanks~

btw tsusuko, badly i can't open your link ;w;
i don't know why.
Nichiyouki

blackabyss wrote:

Overall, nice map. Give a star ;) eh a star? owo why i can't find it
ah I forget, give a star :p
creampuff

blackabyss wrote:

btw tsusuko, badly i can't open your link ;w;
i don't know why.
oh

try this

see if it works
HelloSCV
From my queue

SPOILER
Easy
00:12:994 (7) - add clap on start
01:03:394 (1) - add finish on start
01:28:354 (1) - reduce slider's length by 01:29:794 - here and 01:30:754 (1) - add note? ( also 01:31:234 (1) - delete NC here )
01:56:674 (1) - NC maybe?
02:24:034 (1) - add finish on start
02:59:074 (1) - delete NC
03:00:034 (2) - add NC
03:07:714 (6) - ^

suko's Normal
03:01:954 (4) - add clap
03:27:154 (5) - add soft finish?

Hard
01:56:674 (8) - add clap on start
01:58:354 (3) - ^ on end
02:24:034 (1) - 1 grid up ( last slider point )

Hydesama's Insane
00:20:914 (4) - make this slider like 00:19:954 (2) - this?
02:32:914 - why you delay breaktime by here? how about fix this?
02:52:354 (5) - slider is hidden? fix this plz
02:57:154 (2) - NC? slider's speed changed
03:20:434 (4) - move to x:120 y:296 ( to make like 03:19:714 (1,2) - these)

good mapped! good luck for rank :D
Topic Starter
blackabyss

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue \m/

Easy
00:12:994 (7) - add clap on start forgot :"
01:03:394 (1) - add finish on start done
01:28:354 (1) - reduce slider's length by 01:29:794 - here and 01:30:754 (1) - add note? ( also 01:31:234 (1) - delete NC here ) Sorry no, cause the next Kiai start is same pattern with this Kiai
01:56:674 (1) - NC maybe? fix
02:24:034 (1) - add finish on start done
02:59:074 (1) - delete NC ^
03:00:034 (2) - add NC ^
03:07:714 (6) - ^ ^

Hard
01:56:674 (8) - add clap on start
01:58:354 (3) - ^ on end
02:24:034 (1) - 1 grid up ( last slider point )
*fix all

good mapped! good luck for rank :D thanks xD
thanks for mod o//
Lally
sorry for delay o3o

[Insane]
  1. AR 8 is better
  1. 00:32:194 (2) - try something like this:
  2. 00:38:434 - so short spinner ;_;
  3. 00:59:074 (1,2,3,4) - it flows so bad :/ why dont you try to ctrl+g and to do in other way this 2 sliders like:
  4. 01:21:634 (5,6,8,9) - from here remove whistles it sounds like a spamm oly whistle at 01:22:354 (10) - beginning of the slider
  5. 01:39:874 (5,6) - make they more simmetrical or stack try under the prev slider
  6. 01:51:754 (3) - this slider is ugly à.à
  7. 01:59:314 - try a finish here
  8. 02:18:994 (7,1) - remove here all whistles they sond not good
  9. 02:31:714 - unsnapped break time
  10. 02:48:034 (4) - personally i don't like this slider it do a little slowdown where is not nedded
Sushi
Hello there

[Easy]
Nothing really bad in that map, I'll just put a suggestion
00:32:674 (1) - Make this slider a little nicer? it really looks odd and there's no real reason for it...
02:06:274 (4) - ^ ;)
One thing you could do to make the map even nicer is to work on symetry of some sliders, like 00:53:794 (4) - or these two sliders 00:46:114 (5,6) - .
It is not top priority, but it could make the map even nicer. For exemple, for sliders that you want to make the same in different positions, remember that you can copy/paste then play with Ctrl + G / H / J to flip horizontally, vertically or reverse the slider.
02:47:074 (1) - From here, the Drum sampleset makes the notes barely audible. If you want to use some of the drum hitsounds, think about using the per-note hitsounds.

[suko's Normal]
00:50:434 (4,5,6) - Curve the slider (4) ? it would be really better imo :), something like that : 00:52:594 (2,3,4) - Hmm, this could be a better pattern, imo. this is just a suggestion, but I would have done something like this :
01:44:194 (5,6,1) - Please limit the 5% volume section to the only end of the slider (5). take the next timing section to 104914

[Hard]
00:09:874 (2,3,4) - The first triple just sounds awkward. it is isolated, and the next ones are far away. When you put it there, it feels like there will be lots of triples in this map, etc.
01:02:434 (9) - Very very minor thing, this slider could be slightly improved, and look nicer :
01:45:154 (6) - Put a finish on this note
01:46:114 (1) - Why this whistle ? (applies to the same following whistles) you could switch them to a soft-whistle or a soft-finish (you can quickly switch to the soft hitsounds per note with the boxes on the top left :3 )
02:47:074 (1) - From here, the Drum sampleset makes the notes barely audible. If you want to use some of the drum hitsounds, think about using the per-note hitsounds.

[HydeSama's Insane]
00:23:794 (4,5,6) - I understand the fact that you want to make a cool pattern, but at least space these 3 an even way ;)
00:33:394 (2,3,4) - I'd suggest something like that :
SPOILER
[img]00:33:394%20(2,3,4)%20-[/img]
00:46:954 (x) - The normal-whistle just sounds horrible here ;~;
00:50:194 (1) - removing this new combo would be better imo
01:00:874 (1,2) - That's odd, unstack these two circles, it will be better.
01:00:994 (2,3,4,5) - This spacing has no sense at all. I'm not against jumps, but here it is just meh.
Another point, the normal-whistle here just rapes your ears...
01:04:234 (3,4) - Same stacking problem
01:06:994 (1,2,3,4) - The specing here, again. at least make something consistent, the patern itself doesn't look good, imo
01:08:674 (7) - The slider here feels like it starts on nothing, and the fact that the voice actually starts 1/2 later makes this feeling stronger. You should either make the slider start 1/2 later, or change the pattern so there's a note on 01:08:914.
01:30:994 (4,5,6,7) - Stacking these notes like that makes it huh, not cool
01:35:554 (5,6) - That jump alone feels a little random...
01:51:634 (2,3) - Huuuuuh that's huh, not cool. You should really change it.
02:48:034 (4) - Nooo that zigzag is poorly done, you should improve it :(

I'm not particularly fan of the later diff, there are lots of jumps that feel really random, or too much isolated, and sliders/patterns that doesn't look cool, or could really be improved. I showed some of them, try to think about having a look on your map considering the same things I showed up.

Good luck for rank anyway :3
Topic Starter
blackabyss
Sushi Mods

Sushi wrote:

Hello there hi o//

[Easy]
Nothing really bad in that map, I'll just put a suggestion
00:32:674 (1) - Make this slider a little nicer? it really looks odd and there's no real reason for it...
02:06:274 (4) - ^ ;)
One thing you could do to make the map even nicer is to work on symetry of some sliders, like 00:53:794 (4) - or these two sliders 00:46:114 (5,6) - .
It is not top priority, but it could make the map even nicer. For exemple, for sliders that you want to make the same in different positions, remember that you can copy/paste then play with Ctrl + G / H / J to flip horizontally, vertically or reverse the slider.
02:47:074 (1) - From here, the Drum sampleset makes the notes barely audible. If you want to use some of the drum hitsounds, think about using the per-note hitsounds.
*fix all, and thanks for suggestion too. really help a lot ;u;//


[Hard]
00:09:874 (2,3,4) - The first triple just sounds awkward. it is isolated, and the next ones are far away. When you put it there, it feels like there will be lots of triples in this map, etc. many mods, suggest about the triplet, so i apply it to my maps ;w; fix btw
01:02:434 (9) - Very very minor thing, this slider could be slightly improved, and look nicer :
01:45:154 (6) - Put a finish on this note
01:46:114 (1) - Why this whistle ? (applies to the same following whistles) you could switch them to a soft-whistle or a soft-finish (you can quickly switch to the soft hitsounds per note with the boxes on the top left :3 )
02:47:074 (1) - From here, the Drum sampleset makes the notes barely audible. If you want to use some of the drum hitsounds, think about using the per-note hitsounds.
*fix all too

I'm not particularly fan of the later diff, there are lots of jumps that feel really random, or too much isolated, and sliders/patterns that doesn't look cool, or could really be improved. I showed some of them, try to think about having a look on your map considering the same things I showed up.
because my weakness in pattern and art of the sliders. so sorry :(
but i try to improve it. thanks for mod. i really appreciate it :3/

Good luck for rank anyway :3 thanks for your mod o//

thanks for your mod o//
-Hyde
2/3 mods ~ Update
Sorry for the delay
creampuff
HelloSCV's mod

HelloSCV wrote:

suko's Normal
03:01:954 (4) - add clap Ok
03:27:154 (5) - add soft finish? No

Sushi's mod

Sushi wrote:

[suko's Normal]
00:50:434 (4,5,6) - Curve the slider (4) ? it would be really better imo :), something like that : Sure 00:52:594 (2,3,4) - Hmm, this could be a better pattern, imo. this is just a suggestion, but I would have done something like this : Nah, I'm fine with mine.
01:44:194 (5,6,1) - Please limit the 5% volume section to the only end of the slider (5). take the next timing section to 104914 Done

Thanks for the mods~

Update
Tari
Que mod. I am late


[Easy]

00:32:674 (1) - Consider adding finish.
00:48:994 (2) - Put in center? looks nicer imo
01:45:154 (4) - Make separate combo, better imo
02:56:674 (1) - ^
02:14:194 (1,2) - Maybe change rhythm, It seem hard to follow in the first try.
02:28:834 (3) - Maybe remove reverse, Seems better to me, vocal wise.
03:09:154 (2) - Rhythm here seem odd to me, You should do the same as your other parts and turn this note into 1/4th reverse slider.

[SukoBaka]

00:09:634 (1) - Finish missing in beginning, consider adding it.
00:20:914 - I think there will be better flow if you add a circle here, It does follow vocals you know.
00:27:154 - ^
00:30:994 - ^
00:43:954 - ^
01:07:474 - ^
01:33:394 - ^
01:53:074 - ^
02:05:074 - ^
02:13:234 - ^
02:29:074 - ^
03:10:834 - ^
03:25:714 - ^
01:30:274 (1) - Don't forget to add finish here as well.
01:45:154 (6) - Like in easy diff, you should make this separate combo.

There are some places you are missing notes. Should really fix ><

[Hard]

00:34:114 (5) - Consider adding new combo here.
00:53:794 (7) - o.o I think this slider start late, Should start to the previous red tick. Make sure you change the previous slider note.
01:44:674 - Maybe add a note here?
02:21:874 (6) - New combo here?
02:26:194 (6) - Better flow if you separate it into two sliders.
02:53:554 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/1K7Eq
02:59:314 (7) - Move up and put it the same spot as 02:57:634 (2) -

[Insane]

Told me not to mod this, but I have 1 thing to say.

OD+1

Solid Map really. Some more mods and should be ready.
Topic Starter
blackabyss
Taris Mod

Taris wrote:

Que mod. I am late lol :lol:


[Easy]

00:32:674 (1) - Consider adding finish. i don't think it's fit. so, no.
00:48:994 (2) - Put in center? looks nicer imo eh, just screen shot it or give it with notepad code. i can't imagine it sorry :?
01:45:154 (4) - Make separate combo, better imo no, because unnecessary i think
02:56:674 (1) - ^ no, it's no problem
02:14:194 (1,2) - Maybe change rhythm, It seem hard to follow in the first try. changed
02:28:834 (3) - Maybe remove reverse, Seems better to me, vocal wise. sorry no, i think it fits. really..
03:09:154 (2) - Rhythm here seem odd to me, You should do the same as your other parts and turn this note into 1/4th reverse slider. changed, but different

[Hard]

00:34:114 (5) - Consider adding new combo here. okay
00:53:794 (7) - o.o I think this slider start late, Should start to the previous red tick. Make sure you change the previous slider note. sorry, no.
01:44:674 - Maybe add a note here? no, hyde was mention this for me to delete the note. because there's no beat here.
02:21:874 (6) - New combo here? done
02:26:194 (6) - Better flow if you separate it into two sliders. ^
02:53:554 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/1K7Eq ^ but i'm not sure with the rhythm though :?
02:59:314 (7) - Move up and put it the same spot as 02:57:634 (2) - ^

[Insane]

Told me not to mod this, but I have 1 thing to say. cause it's WIP before, but it's ready now. you can just re-check this diff. if you want. :oops:

Solid Map really. Some more mods and should be ready.

thanks for mod o//
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my queue.

[Easy]
00:53:794 (4) - There's a problem with the shape, but I can't do it better, sorry :? It's not symetrical.

Nothing to report in Normal and Hard

Good luck for rank ^^
creampuff
BakaTaris's mod

BakaTaris wrote:

[SukoBaka]

00:09:634 (1) - Finish missing in beginning, consider adding it. Ok
00:20:914 - I think there will be better flow if you add a circle here, It does follow vocals you know. Ok
00:27:154 - ^ Ok
00:30:994 - ^ No
00:43:954 - ^ Ok
01:07:474 - ^ Ok
01:33:394 - ^ No
01:53:074 - ^ No
02:05:074 - ^ Ok
02:13:234 - ^ No
02:29:074 - ^ Yes
03:10:834 - ^ Ok
03:25:714 - ^ Ok
01:30:274 (1) - Don't forget to add finish here as well. Ok
01:45:154 (6) - Like in easy diff, you should make this separate combo. Ok

There are some places you are missing notes. Should really fix >< The thing is, I don't exactly feel that it's really necessary to add all of these notes. Sure, they follow vocals and such, but I wouldn't want to add too many circles in places where they're not exactly needed just to make the difficulty level higher or anything and I like to follow the background a bit more than the vocals. Thanks for the suggestions, though, they were appreciated.

bakataris :P thanks for the mod

Update~
Topic Starter
blackabyss
^ thanks tsusuko o//

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my queue. /o/

[Easy]
00:53:794 (4) - There's a problem with the shape, but I can't do it better, sorry :? It's not symetrical. i fixed it a little

Nothing to report in Normal and Hard

Good luck for rank ^^ thanks for your mod too o//
BounceBabe
Hi, from the Queue!

Right timing
1. Offset: 9.648ms BPM: 125,00
Resnap sounds after and move the timing points


General

I would replace the combo colour purple with orange since you can see a little bit orange and no purple in the BG
Also the 2nd combo colour is too bright imo, maybe you keep purple and replace this blue with orange?


Easy

03:25:248 (1) - Let the spinner end at 03:27:648 - and the kiai time too

Only thing i can find

Normal

00:13:474 (6) - NC remove next
03:18:754 (6) - Move this circle to 03:18:514 - will fit good imo

Hard

00:10:594 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:514 (1) - ^
01:37:714 (9) - NC remove nxt
01:45:874 (8) - ^
02:08:434 (5) - ^
02:23:794 (5) - ^
02:53:554 (1,2,3,4) - This plays odd, and imo even though there is this bg music you should find somethin else
-> delete this whole part 02:52:834 (3,1,2,3,4) - maybe and make a slider which goes from 02:52:834 - to 02:53:194 - and reserve, and this twice, the second one start it at 02:53:794 - Then just add one more circle at 02:54:754 - and done
02:55:234 - Add a spinner at this part maybe and then let it end at 02:56:434 -
03:11:314 (8) - Just make a tripple slider fits better


Insane

00:21:634 (1) - Spacing mistake
00:39:394 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these and make the preview spinner longer its too short!
02:58:114 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing


Fix this and i will tell jericho2442 to give a recheck!
BounceBabe
If you want a recheck, then change the red stuff please, send me a message if you dont want one
MoodyRPG
Hi there.

General
  1. Hmm check the timing from BounceBabe
  2. Combo colour 3 and 4 are so similar, you can change another color like a white or something
  3. Lacks the letterbox during breaks in HydeSama and Hard diffs
Easy
  • - 00:17:314 (1) - Add a note here to keep the rhythm
    - 01:36:514 (3) - You forgot to add a clap here?
    - 03:24:514 (1) - Considered to extend this slider to the white tick (1/1 to be more specific)
suko's Normal
  • - 01:45:154 (1) - I don't think the new combo as needed here, perhaps remove it?
Hard
  • -- Looks nice.
HydeSama's Insane
  • - 01:31:714 (7) - Unstack this note? To avoid the confuse when you play
    - 02:52:354 (5) - Ugly pattern, I suggest to move this slider to another place
Good job :)
Topic Starter
blackabyss

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue! hi o//

Right timing
1. Offset: 9.648ms BPM: 125,00
Resnap sounds after and move the timing points
fix thanks

General

I would replace the combo colour purple with orange since you can see a little bit orange and no purple in the BG
Also the 2nd combo colour is too bright imo, maybe you keep purple and replace this blue with orange?
PM reply

Easy

03:25:248 (1) - Let the spinner end at 03:27:648 - and the kiai time too fix

Only thing i can find

Hard

00:10:594 (1) - Remove NC done
00:12:514 (1) - ^ ^
01:37:714 (9) - NC remove nxt ^
01:45:874 (8) - ^ ^
02:08:434 (5) - ^ ^
02:23:794 (5) - ^ ^
02:53:554 (1,2,3,4) - This plays odd, and imo even though there is this bg music you should find somethin else
-> delete this whole part 02:52:834 (3,1,2,3,4) - maybe and make a slider which goes from 02:52:834 - to 02:53:194 - and reserve, and this twice, the second one start it at 02:53:794 - Then just add one more circle at 02:54:754 - and done
02:55:234 - Add a spinner at this part maybe and then let it end at 02:56:434 -
PM reply
03:11:314 (8) - Just make a tripple slider fits better fix

Fix this and i will tell jericho2442 to give a recheck! thanks for mod, i hope this will be re-check soon o//

BounceBabe wrote:

If you want a recheck, then change the red stuff please, send me a message if you dont want one
^ since you tell that, well.. i sent you a PM. thanks for your mod btw :3//

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi there. hi owo//

General
  1. Hmm check the timing from BounceBabe done
  2. Combo colour 3 and 4 are so similar, you can change another color like a white or something
    how about i change it with this one?
    Combo1 : 255,128,0
    Combo2 : 98,196,0
    Combo3 : 255,128,128
    Combo4 : 196,108,210
  3. Lacks the letterbox during breaks in HydeSama and Hard diffs
    No, no. At my diff and HydeSama diff are uncheck the letterbox. Maybe Tsusuko forgot to uncheck the letter box, i fix this for her.
Easy
  • - 00:17:314 (1) - Add a note here to keep the rhythm did you means here 00:17:328 ? okay fix
    - 01:36:514 (3) - You forgot to add a clap here? no, i just forgot to remove the clap here 01:32:688
    sorry for inconssitant hitsounds pattern :(
    - 03:24:514 (1) - Considered to extend this slider to the white tick (1/1 to be more specific) okay, so i move this spinner atart to 03:25:488
Hard
  • -- Looks nice. thanks :>//
Good job :) thanks for your mod btw o///
BounceBabe
Should be fine now, i tell him to check it soon
Topic Starter
blackabyss

BounceBabe wrote:

Should be fine now, i tell him to check it soon
okay, thanks o//
creampuff
Kawayi Rika
Hi blackabyss ~ :)

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~ sorry for delay,because i'm sick T.T



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. #3 kiai time should change to 02:57:168 ~ 03:28:368.

[HydeSama's Insane]


  1. 00:11:808 (7) - Move 1 grid right,symmetry with 00:11:328 (5).
  2. 01:56:448 (2) - ^,symmetry with 01:57:648 (3).
  3. 01:17:568 - Add a circle,follow with music.
  4. 01:28:128 (1) - The spinner should start on 01:28:368.
  5. 01:53:808 (2,4) - Make these slider no touch stuff,looks more beautiful.
  6. 01:55:728 (1) - This slider isn't symmetry.
  7. 02:14:208 (1) - ^
  8. 03:09:888 (1) - ^
  9. 02:19:008 (7) - Add new combo and Remove 02:19:488,looks better.
  10. 02:29:568 (8) - Try make this slider overlapping on 02:28:368 (5),like this.
  11. 02:51:888 (4,5) - Pls don't overlapping these slider,hitburst hidden by 02:52:368 (5)'s arrow,it's unrankable.
  12. 03:09:408 (5) - Make symmetry with 03:08:688 (3) - end point.
  13. 03:23:568 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 03:23:088 (1).

[Hard]


  1. 00:53:328 (6) - Flip this slider,flow much better,like this.
  2. 01:42:528 - Add a circle,follow with drum.
  3. 03:25:248 (1) - End to 03:28:368,sound much better.

[suko's Normal]


  1. 00:10:848 (2) - Try Move to 00:10:608,sound much better.
  2. 00:22:368 (2) - Same as above.
  3. 00:24:288 - Remove clap,sound better to me.
  4. 00:28:368 - Missing add clap to here.
  5. 00:55:728 - Add finish,sound much better.
  6. 01:11:088 - ^
  7. 03:12:048 - ^
  8. 01:45:168 (1) - Remove short new combo,no need to here.
  9. 01:53:328 (1,2,3) - Try make a symmetry to here.
  10. 02:13:488 (3) - Move 1 grid up,symmetry with 02:12:528 (1).
  11. 02:56:688 - Please don't mute to here,sound really weird.
  12. 03:27:168 (3) - Remove this circle and Add a spinner end to 03:28:368.

[Easy]


  1. 00:41:328 (1) - Add new combo to here.
  2. 03:13:008 (1) - ^
  3. 01:09:168 (1) - The spinner should start on 01:08:928.
  4. 03:10:128 (1) - The spinner should start on 03:09:888.
  5. 03:25:488 (1) - Start on 03:25:248 - End to 03:28:368.

That's all ~ Not bad for beginner mapper ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
-Hyde
Updated

Thanks for wait me, Abyss :3
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi blackabyss ~ :) hi moe rika xD

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~ sorry for delay,because i'm sick T.T sick? get well soon please owo)//



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. #3 kiai time should change to 02:57:168 ~ 03:28:368. fix

[Hard]


  1. 00:53:328 (6) - Flip this slider,flow much better,like this. fix
  2. 01:42:528 - Add a circle,follow with drum. added
  3. 03:25:248 (1) - End to 03:28:368,sound much better. yeah, it's much better. fix


[Easy]


  1. 00:41:328 (1) - Add new combo to here. added
  2. 03:13:008 (1) - ^ ^
  3. 01:09:168 (1) - The spinner should start on 01:08:928. um, is it no problem if the spinner satart earlier for newbie? owo) i just want to know. that's all~
    okay changed btw xD
  4. 03:10:128 (1) - The spinner should start on 03:09:888. changed
  5. 03:25:488 (1) - Start on 03:25:248 - End to 03:28:368. ^

That's all ~ Not bad for beginner mapper ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;) thanks rikacchi. okay after Tsusuko give me the update diff. :3//
thanks for your mod and starred :oops:

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Updated

Thanks for wait me, Abyss :3
lol, it's no prob. thanks for the update btw x3//
creampuff
Kawayi Rika's Mod

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[suko's Normal]

  1. 00:10:848 (2) - Try Move to 00:10:608,sound much better. Ok
  2. 00:22:368 (2) - Same as above. ^
  3. 00:24:288 - Remove clap,sound better to me. Ok
  4. 00:28:368 - Missing add clap to here. Oh, I forgot. Added
  5. 00:55:728 - Add finish,sound much better. Added
  6. 01:11:088 - ^ ^
  7. 03:12:048 - ^ ^
  8. 01:45:168 (1) - Remove short new combo,no need to here. Ok
  9. 01:53:328 (1,2,3) - Try make a symmetry to here. Fixed
  10. 02:13:488 (3) - Move 1 grid up,symmetry with 02:12:528 (1). ^
  11. 02:56:688 - Please don't mute to here,sound really weird. Removed
  12. 03:27:168 (3) - Remove this circle and Add a spinner end to 03:28:368. Added

moe rika's mod~
lets go rank
update~
Kawayi Rika
Recheck ~ No kds pls ~

@_HydeSama_ : Pls reply with my mod ~ i dislike likes only say : 'update' ~

[General]


  1. Inconsistency in Timing,pls make sure and fix they

[suko's Normal]


  1. 01:53:808 (2) - Move to X:196 Y:100,looks much better.
  2. 02:13:488 (3) - Still no fixed,pls move 1 grid right.
  3. 02:56:688 - Change soft hitsound to here.
  4. 03:28:368 - Change to Normal finish to here,sound much better.

OK ~ Call me back again ~
-Hyde

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[HydeSama's Insane]


  1. 00:11:808 (7) - Move 1 grid right,symmetry with 00:11:328 (5).
  2. 01:56:448 (2) - ^,symmetry with 01:57:648 (3).
  3. 01:17:568 - Add a circle,follow with music.
  4. 01:28:128 (1) - The spinner should start on 01:28:368.
  5. 01:53:808 (2,4) - Make these slider no touch stuff,looks more beautiful. Eh? I don't understand.
  6. 01:55:728 (1) - This slider isn't symmetry. Any recommendations?
  7. 02:14:208 (1) - ^ The same
  8. 03:09:888 (1) - ^ The same
  9. 02:19:008 (7) - Add new combo and Remove 02:19:488,looks better.
  10. 02:29:568 (8) - Try make this slider overlapping on 02:28:368 (5),like this. How is?
  11. 02:51:888 (4,5) - Pls don't overlapping these slider,hitburst hidden by 02:52:368 (5)'s arrow,it's unrankable.
  12. 03:09:408 (5) - Make symmetry with 03:08:688 (3) - end point.
  13. 03:23:568 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 03:23:088(1).

Sorry xD
creampuff
recheck

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[suko's Normal]


  1. 01:53:808 (2) - Move to X:196 Y:100,looks much better. Fixed
  2. 02:13:488 (3) - Still no fixed,pls move 1 grid right. ^
  3. 02:56:688 - Change soft hitsound to here. Changed
  4. 03:28:368 - Change to Normal finish to here,sound much better. Changed

All fixed~
updated
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ No kds pls ~

[General]


  1. Inconsistency in Timing,pls make sure and fix they fix all~ hope this one could satisfied

OK ~ Call me back again ~ okay~
Kawayi Rika
Recheck in IRC ~ Looks fine now ~

Here you go :3


10nya
ooow goo rank ~
Topic Starter
blackabyss
uwoo *A*
thanks a bunch!
moe rikacchi~~

- t e n n y a - wrote:

ooow goo rank ~
thanks tennya owo)//
69653863
Cool.

Good luck on the rankage.
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