[General]
- I guess original artist is '
hope' instead of '
Hope'. according to this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shlLMT4x8n8- Add in tags 'megpoid'. Megpoid, 2nd name of Gumi, should be in tags.
- I suggest to use such colour set:
http://puu.sh/1vctO , imo looks better, anyway, it's up to you.
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 121,191,79
Combo3 : 0,155,230
Combo4 : 196,108,210
- Kiai must start and end
perfectly snapped on ticks. Your ones have
+1 ms delay, please fix them all.
- 03:12:034 useless green line.
[Easy]
OD -1.
Very, very cool for 1st map. Hm, but i've noticed, that there are no 'pauses' between notes. Map goes simply just 1|1|1|1|1|1|1. The only 2 pauses that i've found, despite breaks and spinners are: 01:02:914 - , 03:19:234 - . I'd recomend to place such pauses a bit more, to avoid robo 1|1 constant rhythm. yea.
00:40:834 (1) - too soon after spinner, take a note: this is an easiest difficulty, and it should be easy not only for you, but for newbie players too.
01:59:074 (1,1) - ^
03:10:114 (1,1) - ^
02:08:674 (1,2) - hard to read. According to song, logically, there should be one more repeat, because of song rhythm and because of your placement of notes. To fix this, just place it like this
http://puu.sh/1vcAX , it looks and plays much better.
[Suko's Normal]
HP-2,
OD -102:29:794 (1) - add finish, as it is on rest difficulties.
02:47:074 (1) - ^ etc.
03:20:674 (2) -
http://puu.sh/1ve7e , let's avoid 1/1 useless stacks.
03:27:394 (6) - remove whistle, add finish.
[Hard]
hur dur. Why you didn't use sexy 1/4 patterns?
00:10:954 - as you see vocal and main music beats arive on blue tick, ignore claps do like this:
http://puu.sh/1veby , if you like the pattern that used, use this code:
280,276,10594,5,0,0:0:0
156,296,10954,1,0,0:0:0
204,184,11314,1,0,0:0:0
284,196,11554,5,0,0:0:0
381,275,11914,1,0,0:0:0
395,154,12274,1,0,0:0:0
384,76,12514,5,0,0:0:0
309,106,12754,1,0,0:0:0
00:14:434 - ^ and so on. I'd even say, such parts are the main theme of this sexy song
00:27:634 (5,6) - hidden slider start/end, move '5' somewhere else.
00:28:354 (7) - no, 2 x no, 4 x no, ..., 2^n x no and NO. Instead, use something like this:
http://puu.sh/1veeM00:32:674 (1) - alone double repeat slider, appears everytime, when your fantasy says to you: "dude, i have no idea". Here i made for you something:
http://puu.sh/1vehA 288,312,32674,5,0,0:0:0
358,274,32914,1,0,0:0:0
320,204,33154,1,0,0:0:0
250,242,33394,2,0,P|216:184|196:92,1,160
i'm not gonna link every pattern that i dislike, just go throw whole map and decide what to needs to be adjusted. Use your own fantasy more wider ~
Starred, for 1st map, it's really good. Good luck ~