Konei wrote:

EDIT: Sekai: 01:23:023 (1) - Missplaced, should start on downbeat ~

Lizellota wrote:

[Konei]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 fixed
First of all: Why you used Normal Custom? sounds awful. Heh..okay. And Easy this is 2\1, not 1/2 according to the song, this is fine. And changed to soft sampleset
00:20:820 - Remove finish k
00:21:660 - ^ k
01:19:562 (1,2) - hard for begginners imo some challenging part wont kill them imo
00:09:911 (2,3,4,5) -

120,272,9911,2,0,B|216:272,1,89.9999999999999
256,192,10750,2,0,B|344:192|440:264|440:360,1,270
352,376,12429,2,0,B|352:328|312:296,1,89.9999999999999
184,256,13478,1,0,0:0:0

00:14:107 (1,2,3,4) -

304,192,14107,6,0,B|288:152|288:152|296:96,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,216,14946,2,0,B|352:264|352:264|344:312,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,320,15785,2,0,B|464:248|464:248|464:136,1,180
376,128,17044,1,8,0:0:0

Changed placement changed this
00:17:464 (1) -

00:32:569 (4) - remove repeat nope, plays good imo
00:34:247 (1) - x:328 y:80
01:01:939 (3) - ctrl + j? kay
01:03:198 (1) - x:128 y:112(if changed^)
01:04:037 (2) - x:264 y:232(if changed^) changed in another way
Heh..some useless mod :> anyway, i think MATs will find more, good luck~ and sorry my poor english yeah =w=

Sekai-nyan wrote:

nich o.o you can remove my diff if you think it's really that bad.....

1. 00:42:639 -
2. 01:12:743 - (two inherited points?)

1. 01:09:492 -

168,68,60890,2,0,B|200:44|256:56|272:104|256:148,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:3:0

Kiiwa wrote:

General
Is this video allowed? It's pretty.... R18 If MAT or BAT said to remove the video because this, I will remove it.

Kiiwa wrote:

Konei's Easy
oh hi// o/
00:12:848 - Clap here is wrong, should be at 00:12:743 - It's probably best not to have one here at all because I think a blue tick slider is too hard for an Easy... right, fix :3
00:13:268 (3) - Is better at 00:13:058 - Extended Slider to red tick and removed note
00:38:443 (2) - Remove reverse please! Yeah D:
00:40:121 - 00:42:639 - I don't agree with this break. Too short for Easy. I think without this repeat it's even better :3 It kinda fits to the video and melody for me
01:19:562 (1,2) - Wrong rhythm. 01:19:562 (1) - Remove reverse and extend till next white tick. Start second slider at 01:21:030 (2) - no reverses please, and then end at 01:22:079 - >_<! You're really right, fix ~

Good luck!

merchat7 wrote:

Pm me if that happen, I'll censor the video

Also about tags, Front Wing, I didn't mean to remove frontwing, I just mean to add front wing incase people decide to search with the space so I think you should add frontwing back, keep front wing in tags of course.

Just randomly notice the beatmap, maybe I'll randomly recheck this later.

1. 00:35:191 - I think this is not allowed....
   
   

1. Many 2/1 and long slider does not have clap in slider tick. try [url=http://puu.sh/1iRlo]this wav[url]. This wav volume is adjusted.
   If you need rename this wav, do it yourself.
2. 00:08:653 (1,1) - This overlap detract from the cleanly.
   
   
   try this
3. 00:14:107 (1,2,3) - I think this note is able to clean
   
   

   240,284,14107,6,0,B|216:244|216:244|240:204,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   328,208,14946,2,0,B|350:245|350:245|326:285,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   408,324,15785,2,0,B|448:252|448:252|448:140,1,180

4. 00:42:639 - unnecessary green line.
5. 00:48:093 (2,3) - not like this flow. I think this placement makes harder to hit.
   
   
   If this placement, will be easy to hit.

1. 00:13:478 (5) - remove whistle slider start. but do not remove in entire
2. 00:38:653 (3) - put in center. this note has deviation.
3. 01:09:911 (1) - this note makes confuse for beginner. you should reset circle.

1. Stack Leniency change to 0.5
   00:09:911 (2,3,4,1) - these note is affected stack leniency. If you do not like to change it, add to deviation for note.

1. 00:36:764 (4,6) - add finish
2. 00:52:708 (3) - add finish in slider start.
3. 00:56:904 (8) - add finish? will be able to follow a more vocal.

NewRulerNA wrote:

Stack Leniency change to 0.5

Melophobia wrote:

a bit too hard, but this is still nice one.

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[General]

1. 00:35:191 - I think this is not allowed....
   
   

[Normal]

1. 00:13:478 (5) - remove whistle slider start. but do not remove in entire
2. 00:38:653 (3) - put in center. this note has deviation.
3. 01:09:911 (1) - this note makes confuse for beginner. you should reset circle.

[Insane]

1. 00:36:764 (4,6) - add finish
2. 00:52:708 (3) - add finish in slider start.
3. 00:56:904 (8) - add finish? will be able to follow a more vocal.

gl

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Source should be "pure girl" Fixed to lowercase.
http://puu.sh/1iTLK
Cant approve this video because of the scene at 00:34:247 - . remove it or do something else to solve this Okay, I will ask merchat7 to fix something in the video.
Change "Creator" to your new name and add the previous one in tags Fixed

[Insane]
00:07:394 - Better to increase volume by 20% or so because the previous notes are really loud. hmm, I reduced volume volume the previous by 10%, and I increased volume by 10% instead. Likewise, I will increase volume 01:27:935, too.
00:19:771 (3,4) - Considering that 00:19:142 - is blank, (4) should be removed. or at least change (3) to 1/2 slider Fixed
00:25:226 (1,3,4) - not stacked well ^
00:37:604 (9) - Speed down? Ok, reduced speed.
00:42:639 (1,2,3) - 3/4 rhythm needs to be spaced at higher DS Fixed spacing.
00:44:317 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:53:128 - Accent is not here but at 00:53:023 - I think it's fine, and I heard something in 00:53:128. So I don't change.
01:09:282 (4,5,1) - Awkward flow imo Fixed them to stack.
01:32:988 (1) - Clap at the beginning Added

[Normal]
00:38:653 (3) - Move this note downward by 1 gird Oops, I don't intend to miss. Fixed.
01:01:939 (6) - Weird rhythm imo Okay, fixed and changed hitsound.
01:34:562 (1) - Considering the level of this difficulty, This spinner appears too suddenly. you should make (3) end at 01:34:142 - and spinner start at 01:34:667 - Fixed

Find more mods for Easy first; rhythm can be much better imo. And call me back for a recheck afterward

Melophobia wrote:

Forgot to mention this; Offset 696 (+15) Okay, moved offset to 696.

merchat7 wrote:

[Hard]

01:10:136 (4,5) - Something like this looks nicer to me http://puu.sh/1jy3T and the jump fits as well.

If you need to simplify some stuff, you can always remove the stream and change these pattern 00:23:353 (1,2,3) - to a simple repeating slider. Be sure to check what I mention for all diffs above.

1. nothing~!

1. 00:17:479 (1) - Make it more curved~?
2. 00:27:968 - Add a note?
3. 00:39:507 - Strange short break.
4. 00:43:702 (3) - Maybe move the end point to x340y101?
5. 00:54:821 (4) - No need to newcombo,remove it.
6. 01:32:584 (1,2,3) -A bit strange rhythm for the music.Maybe change like this http://puu.sh/1oujr
   Some finish sounds is confused,changetgem would be better:
   
   SPOILER

   00:15:800 (3) - remove
   00:17:479 (1) - add at the end,you can also use whistle instead
   00:18:947 (3) - ^
   00:20:835 (1) - remove at the start;add at the end
   00:25:870 (3) - add at the start
   00:43:702 (3) - ^
   00:44:751 (2) - add at the end
   00:46:430 (2) - add at the end
   00:52:723 (1) - remove at the start;add at the end
   00:53:563 (2) - remove

1. 00:20:206 (6) - Add clap at the start and the reverse?
2. 01:21:465 (4) -Newcombo maybe
   nice normal~

1. 00:10:975 (2) - Move to the blue tick.
2. 00:12:654 (2) - Same.
   00:29:437 (2) - Same.I dont want to point out all,check it yourself
   00:41:290 - Place some thing here please orz..

1. 00:12:758 (2) - maybe add clap as normal diff!~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[BeatofIke's Hard]

1. 00:19:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a symmetry to here. This was intentional.
2. 00:22:409 - Add a circle to here,follow with lyrics. Fixed
3. 00:23:668 - Remove finish,sound better to me. Fixed
4. 00:33:633 (4) - Make more symmetry slider. I wanted to do this originally, but it would mess up the blanklet.
5. 00:35:101 (4) - Add new combo,looks more readable. Fixed
6. 00:36:779 (4) - ^ Fixed
7. 00:38:668 (1,2,1) - Try change like this(00:39:297 - Add finish),sound much better. Fixed
   
8. 00:59:856 (2) - Try Ctrl+G,flow much better.

Fixed

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Nichiyouki ~

Random mod for #modreqs ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add (Short Ver.) in tittle,this song already have Full Ver. Added

[Insane]

1. 00:13:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try make more curved stream parttern. Fixed
2. 00:45:381 (4,5) - This sound a bit stiff,change a 3/4 slider on 00:45:381 is better. I will change them is 1/1 slider instead.
3. 00:48:528 (4) - Add new combo,looks more readable. This may be appropriate to use it for me. So added it.
4. 00:51:884 (4) - ^ I think that it's fine.
5. 01:20:416 (6) - ^ ^
6. 01:12:549 - Add a circle to here,sound better with stream. Added
7. 01:34:472 - Add clap really fitting with music. ^

[Normal]

1. HP-1,OD+1 is better IMO. Okay, fixed
2. 00:22:094 (2) - Move 1 grid right,symmetry with 00:21:675 (1). Moved

That's all ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~