1. 00:07:918 - 这边空着实在很违和...
2. 00:18:676(4) - 漏了个clap吧
3. 00:31:090(2) - ^
4. 00:36:056(3) - ^
5. 00:37:711(2) - ^
6. 01:36:056(5,6) - 这地方最好还是用2个1/3往返滑条吧
7. 01:41:849(3) - 这样的stack好奇怪
8. 01:43:918(4) - 漏clap

a3272509123 wrote:

随便mod一下...
[General]
貌似现在不让用Short Ver.做标题了 删了吧 Fixed
[Normal]

1. 00:07:918 - 这边空着实在很违和... Fixed
2. 00:18:676(4) - 漏了个clap吧 Fixed
3. 00:31:090(2) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:36:056(3) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:37:711(2) - ^ Fixed
6. 01:36:056(5,6) - 这地方最好还是用2个1/3往返滑条吧 Fixed
7. 01:41:849(3) - 这样的stack好奇怪 not fixed ,ii think it's a good slider
8. 01:43:918(4) - 漏clap Fixed

大概也就这么多吧...这个Normal做的还是很不错的~继续加油吧

L_P wrote:

a32
00:06:676 (1) - 觉得重叠并不是很好看改了点形状~
00:08:124 (4) - NC for 变速fixed
00:09:159 (5) - 然后换回去。。这个也改了
00:45:987 (5,6) - 换whistle ..? fixed~
00:50:538 (1) - 别重叠吧？玩hidden的话要多背一个多累啊 lol 感觉还好
01:08:745 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这。。怎么说啊，又不像弯的又不像折着的 （左边3个是直的后面又有弯的..?这我在玩的时候都察觉到了///稍微改了些(stream好苦手
kiai的new combo建议每一节换一个，现在感觉有点乱略作修改~
但也不必每节都换，比如01:14:538 (5) - 这感觉就不用换

01:27:780 (5,6,7,8) - 前三个看起来都是一样间距一样pattern的 最后一个突然这样子了 orzfixed~

01:45:780 (4) - 同问题这个和开始那段的那个是一样的 所以不改了
01:55:711 (1) - 建议做怪怪的形状？ 好玩嘛好233

L_P wrote:

Hard
这难度个人会认为跳得感觉抓的不好，感觉上是为了跳而跳...
00:06:676 (8) - NC fixed
00:56:331 - 这里删过一个inherit point还没换回去 整个地方的slider都跑了 居然没检查 这像话吗 fixed
01:17:435 (9) - 这里要不就加多个repeat要不把尾巴的方向调去其他位置，现在看起来就像2repeat slider fixed
01:43:504 (10) - NC吧 fixed

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[Easy]
00:31:504 (3) - Remove clap at head slider, it mess up the hitsound pattern Fixed
00:46:400 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern Fixed
00:51:366 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern Fixed
01:12:056 (3) - New combo Fixed
01:16:607 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the hitsound at start and end) , it's useless Fixed
01:22:814 (3) - ^ Fixed


[Normal]
00:30:676 (2) - Add clap at tail slider for your hitsound pattern Fixed
00:31:504 (3) - Remove clap at head slider, it mess up the hitsound pattern Fixed
01:11:021 (3) - New combo here. Also, use normal samplesoft for head slider Fixed
01:48:262 (3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it can be hidden for beginners for some cases (sometimes, beginners are slow to read object) Fixed


[Hard]
* Add "a3272509123" in tags, for consistency on each diff Fixed

00:06:676 (8) - New combo for preventing of long combos Fixed
00:49:711 (1) - Add clap at repeating slider for your hitsound pattern Fixed
00:50:952 (2) - Add clap for your hitsound pattern Fixed
00:56:745 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
01:12:469 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's useless Fixed
01:31:918 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
01:47:642 (1) - New combo, since this note is after spinner Fixed
01:55:711 (5) - New combo for slowdown slider Fixed


[Insane]
* Add "a3272509123" in tags, for consistency on each diff Fixed

00:35:228 (9) - Add clap for your hitsound pattern Fixed


Good luck

raririn wrote:

[General]
*combo color好像有不同……不知道有没有问题 谢谢提醒~
*lead-in3000好像有点多……试试2000？ 换了

[Easy]
*setting好像太高了x.x CS-1 AR-1 ？ 了解
00:01:711 (3) - 头+whistle 改了
00:18:262 (3) - 把这个whistle去掉吧/ \不太好听 改了
00:22:814 (4) - 去掉clap？改了
00:24:883 (3) - (nazi)第二个tick(168,296) 改了
00:43:090 - 这里其实可以把音量稍微放下来点o.o 改了
01:08:756 - 红线开头的note在Easy里不容易抓…… 改了
01:19:504 (3,4) - 这梗有点难;_;把4拉到后面的白线吧 改了
01:55:711 (3) - 我觉得前后都finish会比较好听;_; 改了

[Normal]
00:09:987 (1) - 离转盘太近了'A' 考虑去掉吧 改了
00:26:124 (4) - 没stack好 0.01x 改了
00:24:883 (3) - (nazi)第三个tick(352,128) 改了
00:30:676 (2) - clap听起来奇怪了 换个或者去掉吧 改了
01:09:366 (1) - 不好抓;_; 改了
01:47:642 (1) - 离转盘近…… 改了

[Hard]
00:01:711 (5,6) - (nazi)形状弄成一样的吧o.o 好了
00:41:435 (4) - 跳 NC 改了
00:42:676 (1,2,3,4) - 这个连打好像出现的有点突然…… 歌曲调子本身就有的嘛
01:30:676 (10) - NC 01:31:090 (1) - 去掉NC 改了
01:42:056 - 让人感觉这里应该有个note但是没有…… 个人喜好~~

[Insane]
00:00:883 (4,5,6,7) - (nazi)可以弄成个正方形啊 ok
00:41:021 (5) - 可以放得再远一点啊 ok
唔最高难度好像我看不出啥 因为本身就是分图嘛
o.o就这样了 继续加油 给个星

lkx_shore wrote:

Easy
AR4→3
01:55:711 (3) - 末端要用finish的话，调soft30%音量 改了

Normal
00:11:228 (1) - 过场何在
01:55:711 (3) - 末端添加绿线用5%音量 改了

Insane
00:01:711 (8) - 这里叠一下会不会好点，这间距太短了 改了
00:08:538 (4) - 不适合的间距，长一点就好 改了
00:09:366 (6) - 这里跳一下会不会好点 这个没改
00:07:297 (2) - 这里的两个滑条，一般是末端加口哨 改了
00:09:573 (7) - 口哨去掉 改了
00:21:573 (7) - 末端口哨去掉 改了
00:23:642 (5) - 开端加个口哨？ 改了
00:30:056 (11) - 末端加个口哨？改了
00:33:573 (3) - 口哨 改了
00:42:676 (1,2,3,1) - 间距弄长点?(其实我觉得用滑条弄1/3比较好) 改了
00:48:883 (4,5,6,7,1) - ......过短的间距真的好短啊 改了
00:50:952 - 空拍？加一个note比较好 故意的
01:05:435 (4,5,6,7,8) - 末尾用一个finish就好(用绿线把音量调高效果更佳) 改了
01:08:849 (10) - ...?这里可是又吵又对不上节奏,如果实在抓不到节奏，可以用转圈带过 感觉挺合拍啊....
01:11:849 (4) - 间距过短 改了
01:14:331 (8,1) - 这里可以弄成3连 改了
01:27:366 (6) - 漏了clap 改了
01:50:538 (3,4) - 去掉这两个 没改，
01:50:745 (3) - 添加note 改了



enable countdown建议取消 哦
new combo建议大白线一下就加一下/一段起落添加一个/大跳添加
口哨用得还不是很好，多练练

Flask wrote:

以下內容有一定刪節

log

19:02 Flask: 那開始mod Insane囉o.o
19:03 -[NYAN]-: 星
19:03 -[NYAN]-: 行
19:05 Flask: 00:06:676 (1,2) -
19:05 Flask: whistle吧
19:05 Flask: 全部都上
19:05 -[NYAN]-: ok
19:05 Flask: 00:28:400 (1) - 沒必要nc
19:05 -[NYAN]-: 滑条不用加吧
19:06 Flask: 加兩邊
19:06 -[NYAN]-: ok
19:06 Flask: 00:44:331 (3) - 你大概知道我要吐槽什麼吧>_>?
19:06 -[NYAN]-: w
19:06 Flask: 後面就順便一起改
19:07 -[NYAN]-: en
19:07 Flask: 01:08:849 - 跪求不要變速...
19:07 Flask: 這邊會斷的
19:10 -[NYAN]-: 那怎么改呢
19:10 Flask: 就把綠線改成1.0就形
19:10 Flask: 其他就沒了orz
19:11 -[NYAN]-: 哦

加油

wantuole wrote:

[General]
吐槽bg大小 1.8mb 都有歌的2/3大小了 因为要用到png的透明，没办法啦

[Easy]
00:31:504 (3) - 向左下弯更能对应下个note 改了
[Nor]
00:07:918 (1) - 提前点结束，这个没变 增加00:09:987 (1,2) 改了
01:02:124 (3) - 需要点声音,比如N clap 改了
01:03:780 (2) - ^ 改了
01:05:435 (4) - ^ 改了
01:47:642 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏不太对，三个短滑条 改了
01:54:262 (1,2,3) - 和easy的结尾相同，头尾最容易让人记住。来点其他的节奏 改了
[Hard]
00:05:021 (4,5) - 4的结尾更靠近5一些，对于hard来说有点太难了 改了
00:09:573 (7) - 声音减少，突出后面1的重音 改了
00:24:056 (5) - new combo,一句里只有一个三连却标到13有点不太好,当然其他地方now combo也可以改了
00:42:676 (1,2,3,4) - 看出很明显的减速slider，连打也稍微靠拢点对应这个减速梗 改了
00:54:676 (3,4,5,6) - 我讨厌的摆设，这形状像**(和谐) 笑
01:51:987 (7,8) - 应该是从下往上，不是左右 改了
01:54:056 (6) - 声音减少，突出后面重音 改了
[A32]
32姥爷神麻婆
tick-1？减速slider那么多白点好难看 像这个00:54:676 (2)
00:25:504 (7,8) - 从上向下或者横着 ，下往上完全无视了前面的slider，或者把00:25:504 (7,8,9) 这三个全部抬高点
01:17:435 (3,4,5,6) - ^，没啥主意去改,堆叠效果更差
01:55:711 (5) - 听节奏确实是降音的快速slider，但是堆叠那么多红点给人一种很慢的错觉
[Insane]
00:01:711 (8) - new combo 改了
00:14:331 (3) - deldte,新的 slider 在00:14:124 ~ 00:14:331 改了
00:38:538 (5) - 没叠好 改了
00:39:366 (2,3) - 应该出现在1，4中间 改了
00:50:952 - +1 这是啥....
00:55:918 (1) - 没叠好,而且出现在这束手束脚的感觉，ctrl+h,移到和后面2,3成个三角 改了
01:12:056 (1) - 画星星的话 应该是出现在01:11:021 (1)，没啥问题 改了
01:19:090 (7) - 束手束脚，用01:19:504 (1)的形状找对称的位子 改了

感觉insane风格很成熟了 Easy和Nor还要用心
32老爷别偷懒了 快把最炫名族风rank了，去拯救华语歌坛
就这些了 祝你好运

kajiyatta wrote:

hi M4M can?
General
Easy
Placement
00:26:952(1,2) make beautiful? ok

SPOILER

00:32:745(4) suddun jump? you shouldn't change spacing in Easy for newbie if you don't special reason. ok
01:17:849(1)^ ok
00:39;780(1,2) maybe this? ok

SPOILER

Hit Sonud ok
01:24:649(1) add finish at head? not apply

Normal
Placement
00:44:745(3,4,1) maybe this? ok

SPOILER

00:50:952(2) not overlapped better. try to replace. ok
Hit Sonud ok
01:11:021(1) add finish at head? ok
01:24:469(1)^ ok

Hard
Placement
00:33:159(1) I don't like this jump because it doesn't fit to music. ok
01:06:883(2,3,4,5) a bit weird for me. so maybe this? ok

SPOILER

01:30:676(1,2) swap NC? ok
Rythem
01:50:538(3) delete this note? I suppose it isn't much better. ok
Hit Sonud
01:05:849(7) delete whistle? ok

A32 Wait A32 modding
Placement
00:31:504(7,8) maybe this?

SPOILER

00:59:021(9,1) try this?

SPOILER

Rythem
00:50:952 add a note? I can hear vocal.

Insane
Placement
00:05:021(1) it's overlapped with HP bar. replace better. ok
Rythem
01:50:538(2) delete this note? I suppose it isn't much better. ok

ok nice diff. good Luck with Rank and star!

wantuole wrote:

[A32]
32姥爷神麻婆
tick-1？减速slider那么多白点好难看 像这个00:54:676 (2)嘛...这个再看几个人意见吧
00:25:504 (7,8) - 从上向下或者横着 ，下往上完全无视了前面的slider，或者把00:25:504 (7,8,9) 这三个全部抬高点太高了点ww
01:17:435 (3,4,5,6) - ^，没啥主意去改,堆叠效果更差咱也不知道怎么改orz
01:55:711 (5) - 听节奏确实是降音的快速slider，但是堆叠那么多红点给人一种很慢的错觉 打起来还好吧...这个得再等几个人意见

32老爷别偷懒了 快把最炫名族风rank了，去拯救华语歌坛最近忙了> >

kajiyatta wrote:

A32
Placement
00:31:504(7,8) maybe this?seems nice~

SPOILER

00:59:021(9,1) try this?ok~

SPOILER

Rythem
00:50:952 add a note? I can hear vocal.fixed~

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Slider Tick Rate 1 plz. It sounds awful in the 2/3 parts now.


[Easy]
00:11:228 (1) - add a note here and start the spinner later? fixed
00:36:883 (1,2) - better to change a direction, simply looks not good. fixed
00:41:435 (2,3,1) - i suggest do not change spacing during such patterns (espically when it's not even obvious). The note here looks quite ugly due to the inconsistent spacing, i know you turn the distance snap on, try to forget it when you arrange such patterns. fixed
01:50:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - just use a spinner here? the beats you used can't really express the feeling of music (for example 01:50:124 (1,2,3) - 2/3 here) only removed note 1&2

[Normal]
00:51:366 (3,4) - using ctrl+V/ ctrl+H/J to make the symmetry better fixed
01:13:504 (4) - end 1/2 earlier. fixed
01:50:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as Easy] only removed note 1&2

[Hard]
00:00:883 (2) - use whistles as a set or don't use at all. For example add whistle at 00:01:711 (5,6) - 's beginning, or just remove this fixed
00:16:814 (2) - 1/4s like this sounds not good to me, as i could see you used some like this and some just 1/1 like 00:29:435 (7,1) - i'd prefer 1/1 fixed
01:50:124 (1) - should be 2/3 not 3/4 fixed

[A32] wait a32 fixed
01:50:124 (9) - 2/3

[Insane]
00:18:469 (8) - change the direction a bit so it doesn't overlap with 7 fixed
00:35:228 (3) - clap and what's the point of this jump? i am nc & clap in note 3
01:18:469 (6) - slider reverse arrow is kinda hidden. fixed
01:50:124 (1) - just use a 2/3 reversed slider here. honestly i think this part is not that accuate with the music itself. fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[A32]
01:50:124 (9) - 2/3 thanks fixed~ (I also changed my diff to tick1

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]


[A32]
00:51:159 (3) - remove?ok
00:53:021 (8,1) - 1 grid upfixed

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
well, i can't understand if it's an anime or a game.
If game, the Title should be "Magical Happy Show! (Game Size)" or "Magical Happy Show! (Short Ver.)" since is not the full version.
If anime, should be"Magical Happy Show! (TV Size)" or "Magical Happy Show! (Short Ver.)"
Tell me what is it and i'll tell you which is the correct one.

[Normal]
01:13:504 (4,1) - Spacing. I suggest to change like the image to fix it. fixed

SPOILER

01:54:469 (1,2,3) - I think that way sounds better (see image) fixed

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:02:952 (7,1) - Too distant to be hard to me. fixed
00:41:228 (3,1) - ^ not changed

[A32] Wait a32 modding
00:51:159 (3) - remove?
00:53:021 (8,1) - 1 grid up

[Insane]
01:09:366 (1) - That slider... please mooth it. on purpose
01:10:400 (2) - ^ on purpose
01:30:056 (6,7,8) - Maybe like this? I think it could be less confusing. i don't think so

Example

01:40:193 - New combo (it's a bug. It occurs sometime after a spinner.) ok~fixed

SPOILER

1. Please use .jpg but not .png file as background to reduce your folder size. A 800x600 image with 1.83MB is horrible
2. add Op and Opening to tags?

1. 00:03:366 (4) - add a NC here?
2. 00:04:193 (5) - add a clap at end to make your beat consistent?
3. 00:12:469 (4) - ^, add at repeat?
4. 00:23:228 (1) - i suppose it could be removed since you choose to leave a blank at 00:19:918 - .
5. 00:23:642 (2) - add a clap. And also add a NC here if you accept my suggestion above.
6. 00:30:262 (1) - clap?
7. 00:33:573 (1) - ^
8. 00:36:883 (2) - ^
9. 00:36:469 (1,2) - same as 00:23:228
10. 00:39:780 (6) - NC here, your combo is too long. Avoid to make your combo longer than 6 in E/N diffs.
11. 00:42:676 (9) - remove clap here or add a clap at the end of 00:40:193 (7) - , up to u ... hmm. i may choose to remove :>
12. 00:45:987 - i'd like to add a note here for vocal
13. 00:48:883 (2) - remove clap? maybe not very suitable imo
14. 00:52:607 - ^
15. 00:58:814 (3,4) - move clap to (3)'s end
16. 01:10:400 (2) - describe here with chinese because it's not unrankable and technically it is fine, and also easier for mapper to understand:
    从技术上来说这里的节奏和排列没有任何问题。但是：Kiai的开头是整个乐曲的高潮进入点，当你把这里放在Slider中间的时候就，本来应该在进入高潮瞬间的一个爆发感一下子被严重的削弱了，换句话说，本来应该充满张力的地方变成了软绵绵的了。虽然这只是个Easy diff，但我依然建议把节奏做成这样：
    
17. 01:16:607 (3) - missing clap
18. 01:19:090 (2) - ^
19. 01:20:745 - add a note with clap for consistent beat & hitsounds
20. 01:24:056 - ^
21. 01:25:711 (2) - missing clap
22. 01:27:780 (4) - recommend a NC here
23. 01:29:849 (7) - missing clap at end
24. 01:35:228 (2) - ^
25. 01:37:918 - i think it's a good place to add a spinner.
    
26. 01:43:918 (5) - add a clap?
27. 01:48:883 (1) - note very sure if the NC here is designed or not.
28. 01:52:193 (2) - add a clap

1. 00:24:883 (3,4) - (nazi) blanket them well?
2. 00:28:193 (3) - missing clap at end
3. 00:48:883 (4) - move clap to head for consistent hidsounds. Actually, i suppose the volumn in this section (between 00:43:090 - and 00:54:676 -) should be reduced by approx 15% . Another choice is use normal-hitnormal as soft claps - add some inherited timing points or note specific sample ( placed top-left in editor)
4. 01:05:435 (4) - add a clap for you have a clap at 01:03:780 (2) -
5. 01:13:504 (4) - missing clap at end
6. 01:37:814 - also recommend a spinner, same as easy
7. 01:42:676 (4) - missing clap at end
8. 01:47:228 - i suppose the spinner could be stopped at here~
9. 01:55:504 (3) - a weird clap... remove it?

1. 00:07:918 (3) - the clap here is not heard well, suggest a whistle :>
2. 00:29:435 (7) - missing claps at both head & end
3. 00:31:090 (2) - missing clap at head
4. 00:37:090 - i'd like to add a note here for transition
5. 00:43:090 - same as Normal, soft clap maybe not a good choice for this part, or at least reduce volumn here by approx 15%
6. 01:02:331 (6,7) - ctrl+g for better flow?
7. 01:06:056 - recommend to add a note here
8. 01:11:021 (3) - move next NC to here for entering kiai
9. 01:31:711 - i may choose to add note here
10. 01:32:538 - ^ if you accept above one
11. 01:42:056 - also suggest to add a note :>
12. 01:48:883 (5,6,7,8) - i suppose the claps here is not fit

1. 00:09:987 (3,4,5) - here, the beat is technically correct but the sense is not so good as 00:06:676 (1,2) -
2. 00:19:711 (8) - adjust the shape?
   
   SPOILER

   

   272,284,19711,2,0,B|264:340|212:364|157:336,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:33:366 (1) - i recommend to move it to prev white tick.
4. 00:43:090 - same as other diffs, use normal-hitnormal as soft-clap is better than default soft imo, till 00:54:676 - , or you can also reduce the volumn by approx 15%
5. 00:49:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - heard weird a bit, i may choose to remove (1,2) then start stream at 00:49:297 -
6. 00:51:159 - add a note here?
7. 01:50:124 (9) - bad shape, try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:55:711 (5) - suggest a NC here to warning the SV change

1. 00:02:745 (4,5) - i think place the slider first and then note could make better beat:
   
2. 00:07:918 (3) - hmm .. a whistle here is better than clap imo
3. 00:11:228 (1) - ^
4. 00:17:435 (5,6) - this kinda stack is not recommended because it will break your flow. i'd rather to apply a ctrl+g for (4,5) than select current style. like this:
   
   1. move (4) to 256:80
   2. ctrl+g to (5)
   3. SPOILER

      
5. 00:20:745 (6,7) - ctrl+g separately for better flow?
6. 00:30:469 - add a note for consistent beat~
7. 00:33:780 - ^
8. 01:03:366 (2) - i don't know why but it's heard weird~ so suggest to remove clap
9. 01:24:056 (1) - i'm worry about this jmp a bit.. 212:216 may be better? tell the truth i can't agree with a triplet followed by huge note jump immediately except some special cases..
10. 01:36:883 (2) - how about move it to 336:180?
11. 01:45:159 (4,1) - suggest to remove claps

OrangeNeKo wrote:

Hi~ ><
我来打酱油了;_;

Insane

00:05:228 (2) - 1,2,3弄成圆弧怎样 这个故意的

00:09:987 (1,2) - 感觉分开好点 难度不想在增了....

00:10:607 (3,4) - ^ 难度不想在增了....

00:07:918 (3) - 这里方向反一反好像好点 先扔着看看吧...

00:20:745 (6) - 方向反一反好像好点 先扔着看看吧...

00:21:159 (7) - 好像对齐前面的好看点 先扔着....

00:24:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样? 好的~

SPOILER

00:28:400 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个也是小跳啦

SPOILER

(其实1放到左边就比较好改了orz

01:26:538 (2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉这样不大好看呢? Orz.....小跳..

01:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 感觉这样的节奏好点?(1,23,45,67这样3组.. 那样有点坑...

SPOILER

x847606653 wrote:

A32
00:19:711 (8) - 丑changed as sco suggested~
00:33:366 (1) - 这个note放到前面的长白线，这里完全就没音ok~
01:30:469 - 这里音效全消么，来个渐变还是有点音吧..至于渐变歌本身不明显于是不弄了

Scorpiour wrote:

[A32]

1. 00:09:987 (3,4,5) - here, the beat is technically correct but the sense is not so good as 00:06:676 (1,2) - changed a bit~
2. 00:19:711 (8) - adjust the shape?ok~
   
   SPOILER

   

   272,284,19711,2,0,B|264:340|212:364|157:336,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:33:366 (1) - i recommend to move it to prev white tick.fixed
4. 00:43:090 - same as other diffs, use normal-hitnormal as soft-clap is better than default soft imo, till 00:54:676 - , or you can also reduce the volumn by approx 15%ok~
5. 00:49:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - heard weird a bit, i may choose to remove (1,2) then start stream at 00:49:297 - 音乐里有这个音吧...而且打起来也不是很难打来着
6. 00:51:159 - add a note here?ok~
7. 01:50:124 (9) - bad shape, try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
8. 01:55:711 (5) - suggest a NC here to warning the SV changeok~added

x847606653 wrote:

Hi,there

General
没SB的话osb删掉 我文件夹里没osb.....

Insane
00:43:090 (2) - NC 感觉还是我自己的符合音乐
00:42:573 - 绿线放到00:43:090 - 感觉还是我自己的符合音乐
01:02:538 (9) - 换成slider,后面空一拍不舒服 好，换了
01:17:435 - 01:19:504 - 怎么没whistle了 忘了..估计
01:40:711 (5) - remove note 完全换了

A32
00:19:711 (8) - 丑
00:33:366 (1) - 这个note放到前面的长白线，这里完全就没音
01:30:469 - 这里音效全消么，来个渐变

Hard
00:22:193 (5) - 第三点向上微调一下 哦
00:54:676 (3,4,5,6) - 这种排列难度明显跟其它部分相差太大 改了

Normal
00:26:124 (4) - 移动到236.188 为了重叠...没变

Easy
fine

就这么多，再加油吧。star

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~ mod from queue~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - just suggestions

[Genera]

1. Please use .jpg but not .png file as background to reduce your folder size. A 800x600 image with 1.83MB is horrible okey
2. add Op and Opening to tags? ok

[Easy]

1. 00:03:366 (4) - add a NC here? fixed~
2. 00:04:193 (5) - add a clap at end to make your beat consistent? fixed~
3. 00:12:469 (4) - ^, add at repeat? fixed~
4. 00:23:228 (1) - i suppose it could be removed since you choose to leave a blank at 00:19:918 - . fixed~
5. 00:23:642 (2) - add a clap. And also add a NC here if you accept my suggestion above. fixed~
6. 00:30:262 (1) - clap? fixed~
7. 00:33:573 (1) - ^ fixed~
8. 00:36:883 (2) - ^ fixed~
9. 00:36:469 (1,2) - same as 00:23:228 fixed~
10. 00:39:780 (6) - NC here, your combo is too long. Avoid to make your combo longer than 6 in E/N diffs. fixed~
11. 00:42:676 (9) - remove clap here or add a clap at the end of 00:40:193 (7) - , up to u ... hmm. i may choose to remove :> fixed~
12. 00:45:987 - i'd like to add a note here for vocal fixed~
13. 00:48:883 (2) - remove clap? maybe not very suitable imo fixed~
14. 00:52:607 - ^ Orz it's no note...maybe i deleted it according x847's mod
15. 00:58:814 (3,4) - move clap to (3)'s end fixed~
16. 01:10:400 (2) - describe here with chinese because it's not unrankable and technically it is fine, and also easier for mapper to understand:
    从技术上来说这里的节奏和排列没有任何问题。但是：Kiai的开头是整个乐曲的高潮进入点，当你把这里放在Slider中间的时候就，本来应该在进入高潮瞬间的一个爆发感一下子被严重的削弱了，换句话说，本来应该充满张力的地方变成了软绵绵的了。虽然这只是个Easy diff，但我依然建议把节奏做成这样： fixed~
    
17. 01:16:607 (3) - missing clap i think it not fit this music
18. 01:19:090 (2) - ^ fixed~
19. 01:20:745 - add a note with clap for consistent beat & hitsounds fixed~
20. 01:24:056 - ^ i think it not fit this music
21. 01:25:711 (2) - missing clap fixed~
22. 01:27:780 (4) - recommend a NC here fixed~
23. 01:29:849 (7) - missing clap at end
24. 01:35:228 (2) - ^ i think it not fit this music
25. 01:37:918 - i think it's a good place to add a spinner. because i want to #1
    
26. 01:43:918 (5) - add a clap? fixed~
27. 01:48:883 (1) - note very sure if the NC here is designed or not. fixed~
28. 01:52:193 (2) - add a clap fixed~

[Normal]

1. 00:24:883 (3,4) - (nazi) blanket them well? fixed~
2. 00:28:193 (3) - missing clap at end i want to use sound for this music
3. 00:48:883 (4) - move clap to head for consistent hidsounds. Actually, i suppose the volumn in this section (between 00:43:090 - and 00:54:676 -) should be reduced by approx 15% . Another choice is use normal-hitnormal as soft claps - add some inherited timing points or note specific sample ( placed top-left in editor) fixed~ & select the first
4. 01:05:435 (4) - add a clap for you have a clap at 01:03:780 (2) - fixed~
5. 01:13:504 (4) - missing clap at end fixed~
6. 01:37:814 - also recommend a spinner, same as easy fixed~
7. 01:42:676 (4) - missing clap at end fixed~
8. 01:47:228 - i suppose the spinner could be stopped at here~ fixed~
9. 01:55:504 (3) - a weird clap... remove it? fixed~

[Hard]

1. 00:07:918 (3) - the clap here is not heard well, suggest a whistle :> fixed~
2. 00:29:435 (7) - missing claps at both head & end fixed~
3. 00:31:090 (2) - missing clap at head fixed~
4. 00:37:090 - i'd like to add a note here for transition fixed~
5. 00:43:090 - same as Normal, soft clap maybe not a good choice for this part, or at least reduce volumn here by approx 15% fixed~
6. 01:02:331 (6,7) - ctrl+g for better flow? fixed~
7. 01:06:056 - recommend to add a note here fixed~
8. 01:11:021 (3) - move next NC to here for entering kiai fixed~
9. 01:31:711 - i may choose to add note here fixed~
10. 01:32:538 - ^ if you accept above one fixed~
11. 01:42:056 - also suggest to add a note :> i use a new rhyme
12. 01:48:883 (5,6,7,8) - i suppose the claps here is not fit fixed~

[A32]

1. 00:09:987 (3,4,5) - here, the beat is technically correct but the sense is not so good as 00:06:676 (1,2) -
2. 00:19:711 (8) - adjust the shape?
   
   SPOILER

   

   272,284,19711,2,0,B|264:340|212:364|157:336,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:33:366 (1) - i recommend to move it to prev white tick.
4. 00:43:090 - same as other diffs, use normal-hitnormal as soft-clap is better than default soft imo, till 00:54:676 - , or you can also reduce the volumn by approx 15%
5. 00:49:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - heard weird a bit, i may choose to remove (1,2) then start stream at 00:49:297 -
6. 00:51:159 - add a note here?
7. 01:50:124 (9) - bad shape, try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:55:711 (5) - suggest a NC here to warning the SV change

[Insane]

1. 00:02:745 (4,5) - i think place the slider first and then note could make better beat:
   
2. 00:07:918 (3) - hmm .. a whistle here is better than clap imo fixed~
3. 00:11:228 (1) - ^ fixed~
4. 00:17:435 (5,6) - this kinda stack is not recommended because it will break your flow. i'd rather to apply a ctrl+g for (4,5) than select current style. like this: fixed~and i used a new queue:3
   
   1. move (4) to 256:80
   2. ctrl+g to (5)
   3. SPOILER

      
5. 00:20:745 (6,7) - ctrl+g separately for better flow? fixed~
6. 00:30:469 - add a note for consistent beat~ fixed~
7. 00:33:780 - ^ fixed~
8. 01:03:366 (2) - i don't know why but it's heard weird~ so suggest to remove clap fixed~
9. 01:24:056 (1) - i'm worry about this jmp a bit.. 212:216 may be better? tell the truth i can't agree with a triplet followed by huge note jump immediately except some special cases.. this is system bug.....Orz
10. 01:36:883 (2) - how about move it to 336:180? fixed~
11. 01:45:159 (4,1) - suggest to remove claps fixed~

that's all~~ generally a good work for a new mapper :>

try to find more mods and stars ( you still need 8 stars provided by different modders~ ) then call me back to recheck

Nymph wrote:

Easy：
00:39:780 (6) - newcombo 略长了 好了
01:04:193 (2) - easy别用这种jump梗 好了
01:16:607 (3,4) - 这个感觉也不像easy 建议直接变成一个长slider 好了
01:33:159 (4,5) - 同上 好了
01:50:124 (2,3) - 3的位置不好 你仔细听一下的话 这有个压蓝线的节奏 所以3这位置本来没有音的 想个别的梗吧 好了
01:55:504 (2,3) - 同之前说的 好了
顺带一提 这个难度hitsound不是很整齐 建议你要用24clap的地方 就一直下 最好不要加一段然后突然少2个clap 然后又突然clap 我个人是不太喜欢这种下法 但是其实不仔细听 也没有特别大的区别 所以还是看你自己想法了
比方说：00:05:021 (3) - 最开头用的24clap 之后没有clap 但是3的结尾3白线出了clap 听起来就有点奇怪 我觉得正确的思路是：一直用24clap 然后3的结尾也用whistle 你试试看怎么样 换了一些，有些地方加了clap不好听啊
00:12:469 (4) - 这开头也推荐whistle 好了
00:59:642 (4) - 这个clap位置也很奇怪 好了
后面不举例了 你看看需要不需要整理一下这些hitsound（其他难度也是类似的hitsound问题 主要希望你能理解我给的这个思路）



Normal：
目测没大问题

Hard：
00:09:573 (7) - 这个减音量我没太懂用意是什么 Orz
01:55:711 (1) - 虽然是减速slider 但是我建议间距保持跟前面一样 这样感觉稍微有点不太好看 好了

A32：
00:04:607 (2) - 这个其实很像jump梗啊 作为正常spacing的话 我建议挪更远一点
01:30:573 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这真的不建议减音量啊 很没打击感
01:55:711 (5) - 起码加个newcombo提示一下

Insane：
00:55:918 (1) - 这里hitsound跟前面比声音有点太大了………… 稍微减少一点？ 好了
01:55:711 (4) - slider结尾可以考虑用soft音量5 这样MP3的吉他音就能更好的表现 好了


节奏和排列基本都没啥 hitsound目测还有不小空间 大概这样吧

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

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