blah-blah-blah.
m4m with BCI

[General]
разные комбо цвета (сказал в IRC)

[BCI's Normal]

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didn't mod other diffs for some reasons. wll, anyway i got mod request only for Normal diff

GIMME KD

-Bakari- wrote:

m4m with BCI

lol, now which map of yours I must mod? \:D/
http://puu.sh/OyS0

Hi! My Request Mod solicited for PM

[General]

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[Easy]


[BCI's Normal]


[Hard]



Good Luck a nice Map!

Mod Request/ Mod4Mod

General
- Add a Source to every diff... (Name of this Album or something different...)

Easy
- 00:34:888 (3) - x:256 / y:152 (Made without Grid snap)
- 01:55:888 (4) - x:114 / y:262 (^^)
- 02:55:513 (2) - x:340 / y:335 (^^)

Normal
- Nothing...

Hard
- Nothing...

Hi/

[Easy]
00:45:763 (1) - remove nc
01:31:513 (3) - x:420 y:328
01:57:763 (1) - remove nc
02:12:388 (1,2) - i like this O_O


[Normal]
i think this is hard
00:31:888 (1) - end at 00:32:263
00:35:638 (2) - like http://puu.sh/PsZx
02:23:544 green line move to 02:23:638
02:34:700 (5) - remove
03:10:888 green line move to 03:12:013


[Hard]
00:28:513 (X) - add note in (4) head slider and add whistle
01:15:200 (4) - remove
01:25:888 (X) - add note
01:31:888 (X) - ^
01:40:513 (X) - add note and whistle

gl~

Easy

Really graceful mapping style. You managed to keep the slider patterns fresh and interesting. You captured the soul of the song very well in this difficulty.

01:23:638 (3) - Not really anything you have to do. This slider just looks like it isn't the most lined up with the previous notes as it could be. But it lines up very well with the next part. Probably a better position for this slider, but it's fine where it is.
02:48:388 (1,3) - Sort of odd looking sliders when they curve inward. Try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396315

BCI's Normal

There are some parts in this I would just flatout map differently. Some of the things I mentioned may be biased towards my own mapping style, so be sure to use your own judgment. Change things only if they make sense, and play/sound better.

00:26:638 (3) - Add clap to start.
00:31:888 (1,2,3) - This doesn't play very well and the whistles don't help at all. I really think 1 should end on the vocal here 00:32:263 -. That's where the hitsound needs to go. Then 00:32:638 (2,3) - really sounds like it should be one slider. If you map it that way, it focuses more on the stronger tones here.
00:35:638 - A note here is recommended. You can place next slider half forward and remove the repeat.
00:37:138 (2) - This doesn't need to start so randomly off of the previous slider. How about follow the curve of the previous slider. http://puu.sh/PMPQ
00:45:200 (3) - End sounds weird. I don't know, but it's something about 1/2th length sliders that start on red ticks that sounds weird to me. I think this sounds much better. http://puu.sh/PMT8
00:54:388 (1,2) - Pointed sliders don't fit IMO.
01:02:075 - Add note.
01:16:513 (3) - Add a slight curve to this? I think the placement could be nudged a bit to look absolutely perfect. However moving it would ruin the spacing after it. Just a slight curve would be fine.
01:33:200 (5) - I mishit this twice. Vocal is actually 1/4th earlier. Just make a slider starting 01:33:013 -. highly recommended.
01:33:388 (1) - Add clap?
01:45:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice pattern.
01:48:763 (1,2,3,4) - Is this diamond supposed to be crooked? 01:49:513 (3,4) - Spacing looks different than the other spacings in the diamond.
01:52:888 (1) - Too high in the pattern?
01:55:138 (1,2,3) - Could have more symmetry, placement looks random. How about this? http://puu.sh/PNah
02:18:388 (1) - Hitsound is hard to hear on the repeat. Try adding a whistle too.
02:20:263 (2) - Break up to map 02:20:638 -? Don't have to if you don't want to. I just think it's more accurate to break it up.
02:24:950 (2) - Make slider points even? (slight change)
02:25:513 (3) - Not the most accurate way to map this part. Sounds weird IMO. A 1/2th repeat slider starting here 02:25:700 - sounds better.
02:29:450 - Unsure I like the beat starting here after the gap.
02:29:450 - just ends abruptly. Move half forward? (Unsure how well it works with the next part)
02:52:138 (1,2) - These aren't parallel.
03:06:763 (1) - Straighten the first two move points. Red point > 284 176

Hard

You have an amazing difficulty here.

00:46:325 (3,4) - you should make exactly 1.0. doing so will shift the slider into the proper place and will look cleaner. The slider's position should be x274 y 186
00:47:263 (1) - Maybe a whistle at the end. It sounded nice in the Normal.
00:57:200 - I highly recommend filling this gap. Add a transitional note rather than stacking it. I recommend you alter your pattern after somewhat to fit the transition better. This should be a slider 00:57:388 (1) - and this 00:57:763 - is a note instead. Try it before ignoring this please.
01:18:388 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Really nice.
01:36:388 - Omg I love the symmetry in this kiai.
01:59:263 (1) - Connection with previous slider end doesn't feel right to me. Try starting this 1/2th earlier?
02:14:075 (4) - Whistle here is better than nothing on this stack.
02:38:450 (5) - Try stacking on 6 instead and stack, 02:38:825 (7) -. It fits closer to the vocals.
02:41:638 (6,1,2,3,4) - Your spacing is uneven through here. You should make it the same.
02:45:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wow, just wow

Conclusion

Nothing seriously wrong with any of the difficulties. Everything looks nice and playable. There's good pattern consistency and hitsounds. Good effort!

привет-привет

Генерал
splash.png должен быть не больше 640х480 размером. Ресайзни
я думаю можно добавить кастом на слайдерборд, чтоб он тихий был
ну и еще один кастом напрашивается, как звук битов в песне (по желанию)

Изи
01:12:763 -01:13:888 - секцию, чтоб потише было
01:57:763 (5) - клетку влево
02:31:888 (4) - передвинь вниз чтоб не пересекалось с серклом
03:00:388 (1) - слайдер кривоват
03:01:888 - сюда вистл
03:02:263 (2,4) - а отсюда его убрать
03:05:638 (3) - ^
03:08:638 (3) - ^

Бисиай
00:26:638 (3) - клап в начале пропущен
00:33:388 (1,2) - звучит не ок, убери второй слайдер и поставь серкл на белый тик
00:35:638 - как-то, здесь клап должен быть, а такой пробел звучит да и играться будет плохо, поставь туда что-нибудь
01:12:388 - опять же секцию, чтоб потише было
01:21:950 (2) - клап в начале убрать
01:23:450 - сюда добавить (на реверс)
01:29:450 (2) - перемести клап на конец
02:14:638 (4,1,2) - напрашивается симметрия относительно центра же
02:42:388 (5,1,2,3) - сделай линию ровню
02:57:013 (4) - лучше не стакуй, вниз перемести просто
03:08:450 (4) - вот в ритм не попадает, тут либо серклы, либо..да, лучше серклы на белых тиках

Хард
00:47:075 - сюда желательно серкл
01:25:888 - сюда тоже ( иначе будут мазать)
01:27:950 - ^
01:31:912 - кружоок

все, удачи~

Hi~ m4m ^^

[General]

fine !
[Easy]

01:28:138 (2) - Move it to x:364 y:92 to make it symmetry with 01:27:388 (1,3) .
01:33:013 (5) - 1 grip up

[Normal]

HP+1 is good to me
01:44:638 (3) - move to x:120 y:184 ; 01:45:013 (4) - move to x:180 y:104 to make a square
02:29:263 - add a note here
02:43:888 - ^

[Hard]

00:32:263 (3,4,5) - I think these jump kinda far for me > <
02:56:638 (2) - 1 grip right
good diff

-
That is all I can find > <

Nice Map~ Good luck :3

from #modreqs, m4m ^^

[General]
03:14:638 - final spinner on each diff should end here.
Turn off epilepsy, because the map itself didn't use heavy strobing, only simple pulses that doesn't let people get distracted.
MP3 file name: "Da$ter .mp3" <-- lol having unused space here..

[SB]

1. this splash, is wasting .osb by keep tweening overtime. try this code

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"splash.png",320,240
    L,24388,8
     F,0,0,750,1,0
     S,0,0,749,0.8,1
     S,0,750,,0.8
     F,0,3000,,0
    F,0,48388,49513,1,0
    S,0,48388,49513,0.8,1
    L,96388,8
     F,0,0,750,1,0
     S,0,0,749,0.8,1
     S,0,750,,0.8
     F,0,3000,,0
    F,0,120388,121513,1,0
    S,0,120388,121513,0.8,1
    S,0,144388,,0.8
    L,144388,12
     F,0,0,750,1,0
     F,0,3000,,0
    L,180388,4
     F,0,0,1125,1,0
     S,0,0,1124,0.8,1
     S,0,1125,,0.8
     F,0,3000,,0

   i don't know if you've some bug or not on the osb, from 144388ms ~ 180388ms, is the splash not scaling? if yes then use

    L,144388,12
     F,0,0,750,1,0
     S,0,0,749,0.8,1
     S,0,750,,0.8
     F,0,3000,,0

   instead

    L,144388,12
     F,0,0,750,1,0
     F,0,3000,,0

[Easy]00:26:638 (3,3) - turn them into a circle at the start of the slider, it could be a bit thick for this easy.
00:38:638 (4) - ^
00:59:638 (5) - ^
01:38:638 (3) - ^
01:42:013 (3) - ^
00:30:013 (3) - remove this?
01:07:513 (3) - ^
01:18:013 (4) - ^
01:21:013 (3) - ^
01:49:513 (3) - ^
02:27:013 (4) - ^
03:02:263 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2) - ^ ? because this is part is slow and is a bit awkward if thick section in here..
00:36:763 (1) - remove this? (if yes then NC at 00:37:138 (2))
00:34:513 (2) - add whistle? i feel better with that..
03:02:638 (3,3,3) - ^
00:34:888 (3) - add whistle at slider start and slider body
01:06:313 (4) - turn this slider into a circle at the end of the slider? also NC,
02:12:388 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i wonder if this section is circle only lol, due to the slow section feeling in here. (only 6 circles)

[Normal]
Non-Circle Size +1
00:43:325 (2) - this slider start is offbeat, how about turning it into a circle at the end of the slider
00:55:888 (3,4,5) - this pattern is very heavy for a normal, try to use 4 circles here.
01:27:950 (2) - remove this?
01:38:638 (5) - this is could be better if turned into a circle at the start of the slider
01:40:138 (1,2,3,4) - a bit awkward slider here
02:37:325 (2,4) - this overlap is bad
02:38:638 (4) - shorten it by 1/2
03:06:763 (1) - remove the finish at the start of the slider
for me, just by looking it.. it could be a Normal+ diff.. lol

[Hard]
those patterns are better than the remaining diffs. i think you're a symmetry mapper
this map seems having a section with lack of hitsounds D:

i'm sorry if my mod is suck~ GL

Hi Katty! I'm here before as I thought

[General:]

- Tags: Maybe you can add in tags the Song's Name in English, is better to know what it means

[Easy:]

• 00:45:763 (5): Looking your Combo pattern on this Kiai, maybe it is a good idea to add a New Combo in this Note
• 00:46:888 (Spin): Fit with the Vocal and with the SB effect if you add a Whistle on this Spinner (Like your other Kiai Section)
• 01:03:763 (4,1): Swap this New Combo, plays better with the music since the Vocal change Start on (4).
• 01:13:138 (2): This pattern (1,2,3) sounds preety empty without any kind of Hitsounds, would be a good idea (Like BCI's did on his difficulty) if you add a Clap on this Note
• 01:27:388 (1,2): (NAZI)- Looking all of your Curve patterns, these Stright Sliders looks kinda odd in this Place, for this reason I suggest you to make something curve, like this Screenshoot (Are simple Curves to make the esthetic better, adding a New Slider Waypoint in the middle and then move on the first Slider 3 or 4 grids Right and on the second one move this 3 or 4 grids left):
• 01:31:888 (4,5): Following the Vocal, is better if you Replace the Position of these Notes on the Timeline. Because on the beginning the Note remark the Instrumental and then you make a unity with the Slider remarking the Vocal, fit much better
• 01:57:763 (5): As I said you on the Previous Kiai, you should add a New Combo on this Slider
• 02:24:388 (1): Add a New Combo on this Slider after the Spinner. Is not a bug, but this really need a New Combo, the change in the music is preety notorial.
• 02:45:388 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3 ): The Overlap between (1,1), looks bad when you play the map. I think that you can rearrange a bit this pattern to avoid this Overlap, try to do something like this Code:
• 03:03:388 (1): I expectated a Finish on this Slider beginning, since you always used in the map Finish when appear the SB
• 03:06:388 (1): (^)
• 03:09:388 (1): (^)

[BCI's Normal:]

Settings:
--> The HP Drain Rate is kinda low, also it is the same as Easy diff. so is better if you increase it by 1 Tick (HD+1)

• 00:31:325 (2,3): The Spacing between these Notes is inconsistent, to make it consistent with the whole of the map, is better if you move (2) to x:256 y:184 and the problem will be fixed
• 00:34:513 (3): I tried to listen something in the middle (to justificate this Slider in 1/2 with a repetition), but I couldn't listen anything here. So, it's better if you do this Slider in 1/1 instead of 1/2, try something like that to don't have spacing problems:
• 00:40:888 (2): In this case the Rhythm is not totally correct, there is nothing on the Blue tick to have a Repetition like you did (Listen the music on 25%), is better if you reduce this Slider by 1/4 (finishing on 00:41:075) and then add a Note on 00:41:450.
• 00:44:825 (2,3): These Sliders don't make a good variety between Instrumental and Vocal. Would be better if you replaced that, adding a Note on 00:44:825 and then a 1/1 Slider since 00:45:013 to 00:45:388. The rhythm fit better in my opinion

• 00:54:950 (x): Would be nice if you add a Note here.
• 00:59:450 (2): I think that you should rearrange a bit this Slider (Following the Rhythm, not the esthetic), in my opinion it doesn't follow the music very fine and it doesn't make a good variety between Voice and Instrumental. Is better if you Remove this Slider, and after that add a Note in 00:59:450 and then add a Slider that begins on 00:59:638 and will finish on 00:59:825.
• 01:04:325 (1,2): May I ask you for this change in the Spacing? Is not correct in my opinion, so is better if you keep the distance as before
• 01:18:388 (1,2): (NAZI) - For esthetic, looks better if you try to do something like that:
• 01:23:825 (5): You forced the Rhythm unnecessarily, this Slider doesn't fit here. Just with a Note in 01:24:013 is more than enough to the Rhythm
• 01:29:450 (2): The Clap should go on 01:29:638 and not where is it (on the Slider end , in 01:29:825), to be sincere sounds off-Rhythm. Remove it from here please
• 01:37:700 (3): Let me listen this.... yes, sounds totally unnecesary in all aspect, there is nothing in this position (doesn't act anything in the song, also listen it on 25% of speed and you will be agree with me) to have a Note. Is better if you Remove it
• 01:56:075 (2): (^)
• 02:37:325 (2,3,4): Kinda an ugly overlap between (2,4), it looks bad to play. Try to do another thing to avoid this overlap, The best option is rearranging the shape of (4)
• 02:41:075 (4): Move this Slider to 02:41:263, you don't need anything on the Red Tick because it doesn't appear anything on the music. Then delete the next Note (5).
• 02:43:888 (x): Add a Note, is preety necesary also this 2/1 space between the Notes don't play fine with the whole of the map
• 03:06:763 (1): The double finish don't fit in this section of the song, the music doesn't need that here. Delete the finish from this Slider beginning
• 03:07:513 (2): Another ugly overlap between this Slider and previous Slider (4), it is the end of the map, so is better if it's looks better and also for this reason you will not have to rearrange a lot this things.
• 03:09:388 (Spin): To play with the SB effect and for consistency with the other difficulties, is better if this Spinner ends on 03:12:388

- You need to work a bit more in the Rhythm and avoid some ugly overlaps to make the map better as I said you in the mod. Still needs more work to fix these Stuff, but is not a big deal . With some more mods you can make the diff better.

[Hard:]

• 00:26:825 (1,2): This Stack doesn't fit here, on the beginning a Stop doesn't make a lot of sense so is better if you unstack (2)
• 00:38:263 (3): I think that this Note is here just for symetry because it doesn't following anything in the song . Since you are following the Vocal, Move this Note to 00:38:450.
• 00:47:263 (Spin): Sounds good if you map this Spinner, you have a Nice music to do it, I can understand a Spinner on Easy/Normal, but in Hard you can risk a bit more with the Rhythm
• 00:59:075 (x): Add a Note
• 01:25:888 (4,5,6): I think this, since (4) belongs to the Instrumental section you can unstack this Note to the others, then keep the rest as it is
• 01:31:888 (4,5,6): (^)
• 01:44:638 (4): Move this Note a bit down (to be concrete to x:256 y:344), this kind of things it gives a better flow
• 01:50:263 (3): Again, this Note is here just for symetry . Move 1/2 forward (to 01:50:450).
• 01:59:075 (Spin): Same as 00:47:263
• 02:44:450 (x): You come from a lot of 1/2 patterns (and then you follow with that), so this part sounds preety empty, so sounds better if you add a Note here.
• 02:44:638 (7,8): Works much better with the Vocal if you add a Slider instead of these Notes
• 02:53:263 (5): This Note is kinda too much overlapped by hitbursts, etc. also in my opinion flow better if you move it some grids down to x:256 y:336
• 03:07:700 (4,1): The pause in the song is not too big, like you remarked with this Stack. I recommend unstack these Notes.

- Symetry Everywhere!!!!!! . Just a little suggest to your next projects, sometimes try to avoid the Symetry, the rhythm is the most important on a map, sometimes you prefer to keep symetry instead of follow the Rhythm but in this case the rhythm is preety fine

Mod Finished!
Your diff. looks fine enough in my opinion, just work a bit more in the Normal!
Good Luck, Katty

Hii ^-^
Sorry for bad english.. NC = New Color RC = Remove Color
Easy
There is not much to be defects, plays well but,
02:54:763 RC
02:56:263 NC

Normal
00:24:950 the hitcircles are a bit too fast for the beginning to get into rhytums
00:55:888 NC
02:40:429 a bit to left

Hard
00:28:513 too colse
00:34:888 a bit too close
00:41:638 NC
00:43:888 ^^
00:58:513 ^^
01:02:825 ^^
01:08:450 ^^
01:11:450 ^^
01:12:388 (1,2) RC
01:25:888 a bit too far
01:37:138 NC
01:46:888 a bit too colse

All these are only suggestions! Your map is actually very very good! good luck

Hi, Katty Pie.
Mod this beatmap by your request.

this beatmap looks good for me.
so i wrote just some suggestion

[General]
- How about use this hitcircleoverlay.png? (http://puu.sh/11VIm)

[Easy]
01:09:763 (4) - New Combo

[Hard]
01:08:075 (3) - New Combo
01:28:138 (3) - In my opinion, That it is applied reverse section(Ctrl + R) is better
02:32:263 (2) - ^

I don't know this song means but this song is sounds good for me!
Good luck

Shoot a star! =☆

hello~

[BCI's Normal]
00:45:763 (1) - start on 00:45:481 is better
01:35:263 - this is needless green line, imo.
02:13:888 (3) - sloped slider. should make directly horizontal.
02:24:388 - may be kiai flash is not recommended now...
　　　　　　　　please ask to MAT or BAT.

That's all. nice song! So Star~☆
good luck

good luck ;w;

Slave thank you :3

Bubbled.

Note for the next modder: The artist is a KattyPie's friend, title and artist are not traceable through google and other stuff like this.

You forgot something.

[Easy]
01:36:388 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an easy. Give around 3-4 beats for recovery please.
02:24:388 (1) - ^
03:00:388 (1) - ^

[Normal]
The new combo use is rather erratic. Make up your mind on whether you want to change every measure or every two measures (tall white ticks) and stick with it.

[Hard]
This kind of has the same thing going on. Keep your new combo use consistent throughout the difficulty. The music doesn't really change at all, so everything should line up.

[Easy]
01:33:388 (1) - Snap the end of this to 1/3 at 01:35:138 -
02:21:388 (1) - Snap the end of this to 1/6 at 02:23:325 -

Boom.

Congratz Katty!!

Again, sorry for my laziness. ;w;
Congrats

Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ♥♥♥~