Hi Katty! I'm here before as I thought 
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Tags: Maybe you can add in tags the Song's Name in English, is better to know what it means [Easy:]• 00:45:763 (5): Looking your Combo pattern on this Kiai, maybe it is a good idea to add a New Combo in this Note
• 00:46:888 (Spin): Fit with the Vocal and with the SB effect if you add a Whistle on this Spinner (Like your other Kiai Section)
• 01:03:763 (4,1): Swap this New Combo, plays better with the music since the Vocal change Start on (4).
• 01:13:138 (2): This pattern (1,2,3) sounds preety empty without any kind of Hitsounds, would be a good idea (Like BCI's did on his difficulty) if you add a Clap on this Note
• 01:27:388 (1,2): (NAZI)- Looking all of your Curve patterns, these Stright Sliders looks kinda odd in this Place, for this reason I suggest you to make something curve, like this Screenshoot (Are simple Curves to make the esthetic better, adding a New Slider Waypoint in the middle and then move on the first Slider 3 or 4 grids Right and on the second one move this 3 or 4 grids left):
• 01:31:888 (4,5): Following the Vocal, is better if you Replace the Position of these Notes on the Timeline. Because on the beginning the Note remark the Instrumental and then you make a unity with the Slider remarking the Vocal, fit much better
• 01:57:763 (5): As I said you on the Previous Kiai, you should add a New Combo on this Slider
• 02:24:388 (1): Add a New Combo on this Slider after the Spinner. Is not a bug, but this really need a New Combo, the change in the music is preety notorial.
• 02:45:388 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3 ): The Overlap between (1,1), looks bad when you play the map. I think that you can rearrange a bit this pattern to avoid this Overlap, try to do something like this Code:
SPOILER236,236,165388,6,0,B|236:32,2,200,4|8|0
168,308,167263,1,0
256,352,167638,1,8
344,308,168013,1,0
436,268,168388,6,0,B|462:221|434:169|378:169|378:169|318:169,1,200,4|8
228,124,169513,1,0
212,224,169888,2,0,B|185:270|213:322|269:322|269:322|329:322,2,200,0|8|4
• 03:03:388 (1): I expectated a Finish on this Slider beginning, since you always used in the map Finish when appear the SB
• 03:06:388 (1): (^)
• 03:09:388 (1): (^)
[BCI's Normal:]Settings:--> The HP Drain Rate is kinda low, also it is the same as Easy diff. so is better if you increase it by 1 Tick (HD+1)
• 00:31:325 (2,3): The Spacing between these Notes is inconsistent, to make it consistent with the whole of the map, is better if you move (2) to
x:256 y:184 and the problem will be fixed
• 00:34:513 (3): I tried to listen something in the middle (to justificate this Slider in 1/2 with a repetition), but I couldn't listen anything here. So, it's better if you do this Slider in 1/1 instead of 1/2, try something like that to don't have spacing problems:
SPOILER
164,104,34513,2,0,B|192:112|224:104,2,55,2|0|0
176,204,35263,5,2
• 00:40:888 (2): In this case the Rhythm is not totally correct, there is nothing on the Blue tick to have a Repetition like you did (Listen the music on 25%), is better if you reduce this Slider by 1/4 (finishing on 00:41:075) and then add a Note on 00:41:450.
• 00:44:825 (2,3): These Sliders don't make a good variety between Instrumental and Vocal. Would be better if you replaced that, adding a Note on 00:44:825 and then a 1/1 Slider since 00:45:013 to 00:45:388. The rhythm fit better in my opinion
• 00:54:950 (x): Would be nice if you add a Note here.
• 00:59:450 (2): I think that you should rearrange a bit this Slider (Following the Rhythm, not the esthetic), in my opinion it doesn't follow the music very fine and it doesn't make a good variety between Voice and Instrumental. Is better if you Remove this Slider, and after that add a Note in 00:59:450 and then add a Slider that begins on 00:59:638 and will finish on 00:59:825.
• 01:04:325 (1,2): May I ask you for this change in the Spacing? Is not correct in my opinion, so is better if you keep the distance as before
• 01:18:388 (1,2): (NAZI) - For esthetic, looks better if you try to do something like that:
• 01:23:825 (5): You forced the Rhythm unnecessarily, this Slider doesn't fit here. Just with a Note in 01:24:013 is more than enough to the Rhythm
• 01:29:450 (2): The Clap should go on 01:29:638 and not where is it (on the Slider end , in 01:29:825), to be sincere sounds off-Rhythm. Remove it from here please
• 01:37:700 (3): Let me listen this.... yes, sounds totally unnecesary in all aspect, there is nothing in this position (doesn't act anything in the song, also listen it on 25% of speed and you will be agree with me) to have a Note. Is better if you Remove it
• 01:56:075 (2): (^)
• 02:37:325 (2,3,4): Kinda an ugly overlap between (2,4), it looks bad to play. Try to do another thing to avoid this overlap, The best option is rearranging the shape of (4)
• 02:41:075 (4): Move this Slider to 02:41:263, you don't need anything on the Red Tick because it doesn't appear anything on the music. Then delete the next Note (5).
• 02:43:888 (x): Add a Note, is preety necesary also this 2/1 space between the Notes don't play fine with the whole of the map
• 03:06:763 (1): The double finish don't fit in this section of the song, the music doesn't need that here. Delete the finish from this Slider beginning
• 03:07:513 (2): Another ugly overlap between this Slider and previous Slider (4), it is the end of the map, so is better if it's looks better and also for this reason you will not have to rearrange a lot this things.
• 03:09:388 (Spin): To play with the SB effect and for consistency with the other difficulties, is better if this Spinner ends on 03:12:388
- You need to work a bit more in the Rhythm and avoid some ugly overlaps to make the map better as I said you in the mod. Still needs more work to fix these Stuff, but is not a big deal 
. With some more mods you can make the diff better.[Hard:] • 00:26:825 (1,2): This Stack doesn't fit here, on the beginning a Stop doesn't make a lot of sense so is better if you unstack (2)
• 00:38:263 (3): I think that this Note is here just for symetry because it doesn't following anything in the song
. Since you are following the Vocal, Move this Note to 00:38:450.
• 00:47:263 (Spin): Sounds good if you map this Spinner, you have a Nice music to do it, I can understand a Spinner on Easy/Normal, but in Hard you can risk a bit more with the Rhythm
• 00:59:075 (x): Add a Note
• 01:25:888 (4,5,6): I think this, since (4) belongs to the Instrumental section you can unstack this Note to the others, then keep the rest as it is
• 01:31:888 (4,5,6): (^)
• 01:44:638 (4): Move this Note a bit down (to be concrete to
x:256 y:344), this kind of things it gives a better flow
• 01:50:263 (3): Again, this Note is here just for symetry
. Move 1/2 forward (to 01:50:450).
• 01:59:075 (Spin): Same as 00:47:263
• 02:44:450 (x): You come from a lot of 1/2 patterns (and then you follow with that), so this part sounds preety empty, so sounds better if you add a Note here.
• 02:44:638 (7,8): Works much better with the Vocal if you add a Slider instead of these Notes
• 02:53:263 (5): This Note is kinda too much overlapped by hitbursts, etc. also in my opinion flow better if you move it some grids down to
x:256 y:336 • 03:07:700 (4,1): The pause in the song is not too big, like you remarked with this Stack. I recommend unstack these Notes.
- Symetry Everywhere!!!!!! . Just a little suggest to your next projects, sometimes try to avoid the Symetry, the rhythm is the most important on a map, sometimes you prefer to keep symetry instead of follow the Rhythm but in this case the rhythm is preety fine Mod Finished!
Your diff. looks fine enough in my opinion, just work a bit more in the Normal!
Good Luck, Katty 
