[General]
- Remove audio in your video to save some space
- Seems [Coward Haku] suppose to be harder than [Hard] but it's only 4.82 star and [Hard] is 4.83...
- 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better
- 00:58:375 (1) - ^
- 00:50:375 (x) - You can raise you volume since here until kiai end
- 01:14:375 (1) - Finish instead
- 01:22:375 (1) - ^
- 01:30:375 (1) - ^
- 01:46:375 (x) - Drag break to here
- 01:54:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end
- 02:10:375 - 02:42:375 - This break is way too long, try map 02:10:375 - 02:26:375 part
- 02:47:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - They are not in a line, well maybe you put them like this on purpose
- 02:49:500 (x) - Insert break here
- 02:53:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end
- 03:01:375 (1) - Yup, finish
- 03:25:375 (1) - End with finish
- 03:46:375 (1) - ^
- 03:41:875 (1,1,1,1) - These 4 spinners are boring :/, why not try put some notes or slider instead?
- 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of clap sounds better
- 01:14:375 (2) - ^
- 01:22:375 (2) - ^
- 02:27:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh, no, this kind of jumps in normal is not a good idea, it could only appear in the hard of insane diff. :<
- 03:09:375 (1) - ^
- 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish
- 00:33:375 (4) - No slow donw here to fit your partten?
- 00:36:375 (6) - New combo to distinguish slow down slider? Slow down thought was nice and could be fun, but I strongly recommended you do a new combo for all your slow down sliders, or it would be hard to tell when they slow down
- 00:59:875 (4) - It's not perfectly stack with the slider end of 00:59:125 (3), on purpose?
- 02:41:875 (5) - This jump seems too far, try exchange 12 and 34?
- 02:46:000 (2) - This one sounds odd, maybe start from 02:46:125 red tick and ends 02:46:375?
- 02:48:875 (3) - I feel this speed up is meanless
- 03:18:875 (4) - 1/3 part of slider path is hidden by previous slider, not so good
- 03:28:375 (1,1) - Use one spinner instead seems better, the short 03:28:375 (1) one looked awkward
- 00:57:125 (5) - Spacing
- 01:06:125 (1) - Why slow donw here?
- 01:06:625 (1) - I don't get why here a spinner, and ends 01:10:125...and why there's no break after it?
- 02:15:875 (1) - This slider sounds weird, end at 02:16:875 then add a note at 02:17:125 would be better
- 03:00:125 (5) - Spacing
- 03:17:125 (x) - Add a note here, feel lack of a sound
- 03:16:625 (1) - Meanless new combo
- 03:25:125 (1) - This spinner should start at 03:25:375, end at 03:27:125 is fine, so you need to add another note at 03:25:125
- 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish
The finish sound you used in this diff is nice, but full of 1/2 beat notes and slider is just boring, try more other rhythm would be nice